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Doujinshi; OC and Gohan <3
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Sejisama	Jul 31 2016, 03:15 PM Post #1
Posts: 13 Group: New Member Member #13,401 Joined: July 25, 2016 Gender Female Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Google Chrome	Please tell me your thoughts about this! Spoiler: click to toggle Seji/Sejisama is my OC here, as well as her attendant at the back, Xion. Same with Beerus/Whys relationship. Seji, being one of goddesses used her power to erase Gohan's memories and decided to start their intensive training from scratch. Pretending she's Gohan's wife, simply because she fell head over heels for him.



+ Sandy Shore	Jul 31 2016, 04:21 PM Post #2
Posts: 1,860 Group: Elite Member Member #12,337 Joined: May 18, 2015	It's actually not at all bad. The inking, expressions, Seji's hand-gesture/overall body language, and the composition are all good, but Xion does stand out a little as the worst drawn character. Understandably, since I imagine it's the character you're least interest in. Perhaps a slightly sleeker design would help; they look a bit frumpy. Also, what's the meaning of Xion's name? Is it a rather broken pun of onion, as in, sage & onion? Anyway, good stuff - keep it up.



Venom 2009	Aug 2 2016, 08:52 PM Post #3
Posts: 359 Group: Member Member #11,603 Joined: August 12, 2014 Gender Male Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z, RWBY (Hey, it’s close to an anime)	She is better then DBS Videl.



Goddess Ultimecia	Aug 5 2016, 08:25 AM Post #4
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	I love it, as Lazuli has said, the only bad I can see really is Xion due to the design of the body being kinda meh on details.
	NinjaSushi Colouring Credit to NinjaSushi for the colouring


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