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Fanfic Help!; With fanart inside~
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Sejisama	Jul 25 2016, 06:42 AM Post #1
Posts: 13 Group: New Member Member #13,401 Joined: July 25, 2016 Gender Female Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Google Chrome	Spoiler: click to toggle Please see image above for the fan art I made. (evil laugh) Sorry, I'm just not a Videl fan. (sad face) I'm still thinking on how I could start my fan fiction about them. Will you help me? I already thought of a name for my OC. I think 'Seji' would fit her or 'Sage' in its english counterpart. To make her character a bit significant and related to the story, I though that maybe I could make her one of the gods/goddesses of destruction in different universe (so I've based her outfit on beerus/champa). After watching episode 52 in DBSuper, I was honestly a bit disappointed on how Gohan's character had turned out. But as his fan, I would like to continue his legacy in my imagination land. I know he can still become one of the strongest because he still has the potential as shown in episode 23. I want him to continue his training and Seji would be able to help him, as said in the prophecy for her. She would bring him to train hard in another universe while not realizing she's starting to become head over heels for him (evil laugh x 3). Please comment your thoughts about this. Thank you! Edited by Sejisama, Jul 25 2016, 06:43 AM.



Darker	Jul 25 2016, 11:57 AM Post #2
The Lord of the Dark Posts: 15,358 Group: Member Member #11,968 Joined: January 7, 2015 Gender Male Country Spain	So you want us to give you ideas or straight up write you a fanfic about this?
	Piccolo: Just how many people have you sacrificed?! Cell: Sacrifice? Hmph, rubbish! On the contrary, it is an honor to become a fraction of my power.


+ Solid Snake	Jul 25 2016, 04:34 PM Post #3
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	Like the artwork, legit stuff. But if you wanna do him justice. The episode he's seen training in with Piccolo is the last time we seen him train so you could capitalize off that episode or during the U6 saga, you can have a powerful threat come to earth in search of Gohan though I thing Seji should be that "threat". Hope this was helpful.
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+ Son-Goku	Jul 25 2016, 09:36 PM Post #4
孫悟空 Posts: 13,359 Group: Elite Member Member #12,886 Joined: January 24, 2016 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime DB/DBZ/DBS, Code Geass, Gintama, YYH, Death Note, and SAO. What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Fairy Tail, and Naruto.	Her clothes kind of look like Beerus's a little bit. Since she's bringing him to another universe perhaps she could be a god of destruction. Or is that what you were already going for?
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Darker	Jul 25 2016, 09:58 PM Post #5
The Lord of the Dark Posts: 15,358 Group: Member Member #11,968 Joined: January 7, 2015 Gender Male Country Spain	SSbardock84 Jul 25 2016, 09:36 PM Her clothes kind of look like Beerus's a little bit. Since she's bringing him to another universe perhaps she could be a god of destruction. Or is that what you were already going for? You didn't read the OP, did you?
	Piccolo: Just how many people have you sacrificed?! Cell: Sacrifice? Hmph, rubbish! On the contrary, it is an honor to become a fraction of my power.


+ Son-Goku	Jul 26 2016, 01:46 AM Post #6
孫悟空 Posts: 13,359 Group: Elite Member Member #12,886 Joined: January 24, 2016 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime DB/DBZ/DBS, Code Geass, Gintama, YYH, Death Note, and SAO. What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Fairy Tail, and Naruto.	Darker Jul 25 2016, 09:58 PM SSbardock84 Jul 25 2016, 09:36 PM Her clothes kind of look like Beerus's a little bit. Since she's bringing him to another universe perhaps she could be a god of destruction. Or is that what you were already going for? You didn't read the OP, did you? I did, but I just reread it and ig I missed that part.
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Sejisama	Jul 26 2016, 04:47 AM Post #7
Posts: 13 Group: New Member Member #13,401 Joined: July 25, 2016 Gender Female Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Google Chrome	Darker Jul 25 2016, 11:57 AM So you want us to give you ideas or straight up write you a fanfic about this? Ohh I would love it if somebody's gonna write a fan fic based on this idea. HAHA. I'm actually more of an artist than a writer but I would also love to translate my ideas into words. But then for now, I'd love to hear comments from you guys and give me feedback from this idea. Solid Snake Jul 25 2016, 04:34 PM Like the artwork, legit stuff. But if you wanna do him justice. The episode he's seen training in with Piccolo is the last time we seen him train so you could capitalize off that episode or during the U6 saga, you can have a powerful threat come to earth in search of Gohan though I thing Seji should be that "threat". Hope this was helpful. Yay! Thank you~ I'd take that into consideration. SSbardock84 Jul 25 2016, 09:36 PM Her clothes kind of look like Beerus's a little bit. Since she's bringing him to another universe perhaps she could be a god of destruction. Or is that what you were already going for? Yup, that exactly.



Darker	Jul 27 2016, 12:27 AM Post #8
The Lord of the Dark Posts: 15,358 Group: Member Member #11,968 Joined: January 7, 2015 Gender Male Country Spain	She could be related to Beerus or Whis (add cat ears to her if necessary) so you could also change her skin color, don't make her look to human, unless that's what you're going for, with her being very human-esque.
	Piccolo: Just how many people have you sacrificed?! Cell: Sacrifice? Hmph, rubbish! On the contrary, it is an honor to become a fraction of my power.


+ Son-Goku	Jul 27 2016, 12:29 AM Post #9
孫悟空 Posts: 13,359 Group: Elite Member Member #12,886 Joined: January 24, 2016 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime DB/DBZ/DBS, Code Geass, Gintama, YYH, Death Note, and SAO. What Browser do you use? Google Chrome Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Fairy Tail, and Naruto.	Darker Jul 27 2016, 12:27 AM She could be related to Beerus or Whis (add cat ears to her if necessary) so you could also change her skin color, don't make her look to human, unless that's what you're going for, with her being very human-esque. Who knows if all gods of destructions are even cats though. It could be just Beerus and Champa.
	RP Character Bios Dragon Ball Super: The Super Human Dragon Ball Super: Preparation for the Tournament of Power


Darker	Jul 27 2016, 12:31 AM Post #10
The Lord of the Dark Posts: 15,358 Group: Member Member #11,968 Joined: January 7, 2015 Gender Male Country Spain	That's what I say she could. It's not necessary to turn her a neko girl. You could always make her look more like an alien. Like Gure.
	Piccolo: Just how many people have you sacrificed?! Cell: Sacrifice? Hmph, rubbish! On the contrary, it is an honor to become a fraction of my power.


Daemon Keido	Jul 27 2016, 09:08 AM Post #11
Warmaster of Chaos Posts: 3,915 Group: RP Moderator Member #6,491 Joined: July 16, 2011 Gender Male Country Canada Favourite Anime Dragonball Z, of course Favourite Manga Currently Toriko	Love the character design on Seiji. What kind of personality would she have? Grounded like Gohan himself? From the image she doesn't seem incredibly blood knighty like a god of destruction is implied to be but that could just as easily be a calm "off the clock" moment so I can't really guage her well lol
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Sejisama	Jul 29 2016, 05:03 AM Post #12
Posts: 13 Group: New Member Member #13,401 Joined: July 25, 2016 Gender Female Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Google Chrome	Daemon Keido Jul 27 2016, 09:08 AM Love the character design on Seiji. What kind of personality would she have? Grounded like Gohan himself? From the image she doesn't seem incredibly blood knighty like a god of destruction is implied to be but that could just as easily be a calm "off the clock" moment so I can't really guage her well lol Thank you! She's more of 'she gets what she wants' and a bit sarcastic type of person. I'm planning to make her into a yandere too. I'm still unsure because I'm in the process of building her whole character. What I'm sure of is that she gradually fell head over heels for Gohan and wouldn't ever leave him.



Daemon Keido	Jul 29 2016, 07:26 AM Post #13
Warmaster of Chaos Posts: 3,915 Group: RP Moderator Member #6,491 Joined: July 16, 2011 Gender Male Country Canada Favourite Anime Dragonball Z, of course Favourite Manga Currently Toriko	Deadpan Snarking Yandere? That is an awesome combo!
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