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| Saiyan Recreation (Co-Written fanfic); One young saiyan, one altered timeline. | |
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| Seattleite | Jul 1 2016, 04:35 PM Post #1 |
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My girlfriend and I are currently writing a fanfic, based on her DBXV character (in a timeline where she doesn't get picked up for the Time Patrol, of course). Her name is Fennira, she's a 4-year old saiyan girl, born after the destruction of planet Vegeta to two lower-class warriors that had been sent out as infants to conquer a nearby world several years before Vegeta's destruction. Her parents ultimately failed to do their job, and she was born on that world. Fennira was always weak by saiyan standards, in fact she was only barely stronger than the inhabitants of the world she was born on. When Frieza's soldiers came, there was nothing the then two-year old Fennira could do to stop them, and while she was spared her parents were not. She was forced into Frieza's service, and assigned to Vegeta like the rest of the surviving saiyans. In the eyes of the other saiyans, she was a disgrace. She was pathetically weak, even for such a small child, and they saw little use for her. She was smart, and picked up techniques of all sorts quickly, but her lack of raw power made her almost a liability in a fight. Jealous of others' power, she naturally leapt on it when her team encountered a race of aliens with the ability to massively lower the power of those around them, including themselves. During that campaign, which she completed alongside Raditz, she managed to learn how to use this technique. Using it, she is able to minimize her disadvantage when combating opponents stronger than her (which is not a high standard). This ability, battle suppression, is unfortunately permanent. She is unable to turn it off, and the area it hits is very, very wide. For this reason, she does not work with the other saiyans in the field. However, Vegeta is not stupid enough to actually get rid of her, so this just means she is made to work alone. And this is where the story begins, with her having been sent off on her own one year before to do an assignment alone that otherwise Raditz would have done: Retrieve Kakarot from Earth. She arrives in age 760 with a pre-recorded message on her ship's computer while her compatriots head off to conquer a planet far, far away from her. Unfortunately, she lands in a river so both the message and her instructions are lost, but on the bright side the tiny saiyan boy coming to investigate can only be Kakarot's son, so at least she's where she needs to be to do... Whatever it is she's supposed to be doing. Our first actual writing session should be Saturday, hopefully we'll be able to put up the first chapter this weekend. |
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