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The Vicious Gods Wrath
Topic Started: Oct 6 2015, 02:53 PM (2,529 Views)
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General Information

- This is a remake of the recent Resurrection F film created for the purpose of providing more insight to certain aspects of the film such as Freeza's training, how the PTO discover the Earth's Dragon Balls, why the Pilaf Gang appear as children when we meet them in BoG.
- Other aspects are changed entirely such as Tagoma & Jaco's roles in the story, the way Freeza goes about his plan, and the inclusion of characters not originally present in the story.
- The story begins in age 776, roughly a month after the events of Yo Son Goku.
- English is not my primary language so I apologize in advance for any serious grammatical or spelling mistakes, I'll try to iron those out as best I can.

Chapter 1: Desperate Measures

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Chapter 2: The Worst Wish In History

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Chapter 3: It Lives

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Chapter 4: Out of Time

"Find anything?" Asks Gohan as he lands next to Piccolo, both stand at the exact spot from whence they sensed a faint, yet malevolent energy appear out of nowhere. The Namekian is slow to answer his pupil, opting to continue searching for the signature both on and off the planet. Though he can sense his fellow Z-warriors and their other allies, he cannot find the energy responsible for bringing them to the middle of this desolate wasteland. "Piccolo?" Gohan asks again.

With a sigh, Piccolo folds his arms and opens his eyes. "No, unfortunately. Whatever that power was, it's long gone from this planet." He answers with a somber tone to his voice, his head rising upward towards the sky. "I don't like this one bit Gohan, that energy we felt... I know I've felt it before."

"Yeah, me too," Replies Gohan, worried though not to the same extent as his master. "Maybe Dende could help us figure out what Shenron did?"

"Possibly, but if the people responsible for summoning him used all three of his wishes, then even Dende won't be able to bring him out for an entire year. Even then, I don't know if Shenron would divulge such information, even to his master. No, I think we'll have to ask King Kai for help. With his abilities, he should be able to find what we're looking for."

"Uhh, could you... maybe... do that alone?" States Gohan hesitantly. "I sort of have a romantic speech to prepare for my proposal dinner tomorrow..."

Piccolo's gaze turns to nervous, chuckling Gohan. "You humans and your mushy stuff, I'll never understand it." He takes off into the sky, leaving his pupil behind to find the one man capable of helping him get in contact with King Kai. Luckily for him, Goku and Vegeta spar back at Capsule Corp, giving away their location.
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Jaco's jaw clenches as the enemy fire explodes all around him, ringing in his ears as he flies his ship through it all long enough to reach his target: the main pirate vessel. Not an easy target to miss given its massive size, yet its many fighter ships and gun turrets makes it a troublesome one none the less. The colony ships responsible for bringing him into this situation flee the battle as the pirate forces opt to focus on Jaco.

The Patrolman doesn't hold this against them, however, as their continued presence here would only complicate the situation further. For any other opponent of this caliber, Jaco's first instinct is to fire off the Extinction Bomb so that the poisonous gas within deals with his enemy for him. However, this is out of the question as pirate vessels typically hold captured innocents inside, either as manual labor or potential sentient trafficking.

"It seems I'll have to use a more hands-on approach in order to win this battle," Concludes Jaco before pressing the auto- pilot on the command console before him. "Take command of the ship Tights, I'll be handling this matter personally."

"I will do my best not to destroy it, sir," States the A.I. sarcastically, earning a chuckle from its master as he leaves the pilots seat and reaches for the side hatch of the ship. "We will be in range momentarily sir, do your best not to be vaporized on the way down sir."

"Can't afford to Tights," He briefly reminds himself of the situation on Earth concerning Freeza, going silent for a moment before returning to the here and now. He takes hold of the hatches opening with his entire body stiffening up as he readies himself for the plunge. The sounds of explosions continue to ring in his ears as Tights moves in closer towards the outside turrets, dozens upon dozens of blaster bolts whizzing past.

Despite some minor cosmetic damage to the exterior, Tights closes the distance leaving a 100-foot jump to the ship below. "Go sir!"

Nodding in understanding, Jaco opens the hatch and jumps downward with his jet propulsion propelling quickly towards the outer hull of the capital ship. Dodging more turret fire on his way down as the vacuum of space deafens him to all sounds around him. Upon reaching the ship, the Patrolman rams his fist right through the hull and rips a chunk of it off, giving himself an entry point inside.

"Tights, I've made it in," He whispers to the A.I. upon landing inside a long, metallic and empty hallway near the center of the vessel. "How goes it outside?"

"Reasonably well, still, I recommend that you take control of the ship quickly, the odds of me keeping this up for very long are not in our favor."

"Understood-"

"Halt Patrolman!" Shouts a loud, deep voice from behind Jaco, prompting the Patrolman to turn 180 degrees to face its owner. Before him stands a squad of six, 10 feet tall swine creatures armed with both archaic bladed weapons and wrist blasters. "Move an inch, and we'll rip ya to pieces!"

"Ordinarily I would properly introduce myself, but seeing as I'm running short on both time and patience, I'm afraid you'll just have to be content with meeting my fist."

"What're ya-" Before any of them can react, Jaco jumps forward like a speeding bullet and punches the squad's leader right in the snout, sending him flying backward several in the air. The Patrolman does the same to his allies, dispatching them quickly before running forward to the command center. Encountering many more squads along with mechanized sentry bots, all of whom fall before his vastly superior battle power.

In no time, he reaches the elevator shaft allowing him quick and easy access to the command bridge from where he'll be able to take control over all ship systems. "Have you reached your destination yet sir?" Asks Tight as Jaco stands patiently in the elevator with his arms folded and his foot tapping to the music.

"One minute," Is all he states before a pinging noise from inside the elevator lets him know he's reached the bridge. The instant the doors of it open, Jaco finds himself bombarded by both blaster and rocket fire from the pirates inside the room. It proves to be a fruitless effort as Jaco emerges from the smoke without a scratch on him, earning gasps of fear from the present pirates.

"I will only offer this once," He speaks up formally. "Surrender now, and I will ensure that your prisoners won't kill you all the instant I leave this vessel."

"Ha!" Laughs one of the nearby pig pirates. "Jokes on you shrimp! We don't got any onboard!" He proclaims confidently with a smirk with Jaco giving him a deadpan look, his co-workers, however, glare at him angrily at letting such information slip.

"You have absolutely no slaves or innocents held captive on your ship?" Asks Jaco wanting to be sure of the validity of this statement.

The pig pirate laughs at him again. "That's right! Lost all the other lot in a bet not two days ago! Why'd ya think we was goin after those cowards just now-" Before he can continue, one of his crew mates puts his hand around his neck and smacks him over the head. "Shut yer damn mouth, idiot! Do ya want us all to die?!" He asks the blabber mouth pirate angrily.

"Splendid!" States a pleased Jaco loudly. "If there were any prisoners onboard, then it would've been a very long process seeing them back to their natural worlds. Something I simply do not have time for, thank you, vicious fiend," he bows to the blabbermouth, "This will make things much easier for me."

Without warning, Jaco charges forward at the frightened pigs, slamming his elbow into the belly of the captain before snatching his keys to the ship and putting them into the console. Despite the remaining pirates firing blaster bolts at him, Jaco merely sits down on the chair, not feeling any of their blows as he goes through the computer menus, quickly finding the option he seeks. "As my Earth friends would say, bingo!"

With a mighty slam of his open palm onto the console, the ships self-destruct protocol activates. Instantly, the entire ship starts buzzing with the sounds of red alerts going off all over it with a voice stating, "30 seconds until detonation" over and over. The pigs present at the bridge squeal in terror before attempting to make a break for the console, only for Jaco to rip it out off the ground and swing it around like a hammer, knocking them all on their backs.

"I must thank you again for this vital information, you may have very well helped me save the universe," He states politely to the blabbermouth pirate before throwing the console right through the windshield. With his escape route formed, Jaco fearlessly welcomes the vacuum of space with a mighty leap out of the broken window. "Tights, I require your assistance."

"On my way sir," Doing as requested, the vessel quickly makes its way to Jaco with the fighter ships scattering to escape the capital ships blast radius. Jaco leaps inside the main hatch located on top of his vessel and promptly jumps into the captain's seat, buckling himself in as it rushes to get away. Behind them, the pirate ship explodes with a mighty blaze of fire erasing it from existing, taking most of the pirates along with it. "We were lucky that they didn't have any civilians present on that vessel."

"Indeed, however, we don't have the luxury of time to enjoy this victory," States Jaco sternly before putting his seat belt on and taking manual control of the ship. "Sorbets revival of Freeza is still a threat, one we must deal with immediately-"

The sudden ringing of his communication device interrupts his speech, his bravado immediately replaced with a terrible sense of dread in his stomach. He hesitantly answers the call, hoping it's not bearing the news he thinks it is, "Hello?"

"It's me," Answers Tagoma with worry piercing right through his usual even tone. "I hope to all the gods that may or may not exist that you had a good reason for not making it on time..."

Jaco remains silent, the answer already becoming clear as day to him yet he doesn't want to hear the words, still clinging to some idealistic hope.

"Nothing to say? Amazing how bravado falls apart when you've failed so horribly." States Tagoma with worry replaced with anger at Jaco's failure to reach Earth on time.

"Is," Jaco begins before gulping. "Is he really back?"
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PTO Command Ship

Freeza stands atop a wounded, bloody and utterly defeated pair of Goku and the mysterious Super Saiyan responsible for carving him into pieces. His knuckles are bloody from the hundreds of punches he's given them, smiling as he watches and listens to them moan defenselessly on the ground at his feet. "Not so mighty now, are you Super Saiyan?!" He yells proudly to his defeated enemies before kicking them both right across their faces, sending them flying helplessly into a mountain.

With a raised hand and a sadistic smile, he telekinetically lifts them both off a ground and lets them float a few feet away from him. "Let's see how many bones and organs I can ruin before killing you both, shall we!" With his remaining free hand, he unleashes a barrage of Crazy Finger Beams at the two, shredding their bodies with hundreds of Ki blasts emerging from his index finger. He gleefully listens to them cry out in pain, the sight being a treat to his eyes.

This is the imaginary scenario the tyrant lays on the operating table of the ship, using it as both a way to pass the time and a way to relieve the horrid pain engulfing his body. Dozens of surgeons and other medical personnel operate on him, ripping apart the metallic parts of his body while using lasers to connect the natural tissue together. He can feel everything despite being carved into pieces, every part cut off, every limb slowly being re-attached. Though he'll never admit it to anyone, this pain is great enough to trouble him immensely, not helped by the lack of painkillers to ease it somewhat.

As relief, he plays dozens of different scenarios where he exacts revenge upon all who've wronged him out in his mind. Ranging from crushing Gohan's skull with his foot to leaving Goku crippled for life, unable to ever fight again. "Just a little longer," He thinks to himself. "Once this useless flesh is made whole again, all this will be made real..."

Outside the operating room observes Sorbet with a stern expression on his face as he observes everything. "I didn't think they'd have to do this to him, if they don't put him in the healing tank soon, he won't survive this and we'll be back to square one. Best to keep this a secret until we're 100% sure Lord Freeza is back to us." He ponders, not even bothering to question the absence of Tagoma.

His lieutenant stands in an empty hallway as before, having left after witnessing enough of Freeza's carving process. "Is... Is he really back?" Questions Jaco hesitantly over this communication device. With a sigh, a replies with, "I'm afraid so, Freeza has returned..."
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Chapter 5: Extinction Gambit

King Kai's Planet


"Aaahhh," Sighs a smiling King Kai while leaning back in the chair of his 1957 Red Chevrolet Bel Air Hardtop with the top down, enjoying the ride around his small, recently restored world. Sitting next to and behind him are Bubbles and Gregory respectively, equally happy to be back on their homeworld after so many years away. "Feels like it's been a lifetime since we've been here."

"We can thank Goku for that," Comments a somewhat annoyed Gregory while lying in the back seat, remembering the exact moment when Cell detonated and killed them all. "Still, he did save the universe from Buu, so I'll cut him some slack."

King Kai can't help but giggle. "You should've seen West Kai's face when we were all watching it happen too, my greatest pupil defeating the infamous Majin Buu." He states in a mix of pride and joy, genuinely amazed at how far Goku has come from the relatively low-level fighter seeking to save his world all those years ago. With the smile still present on his face, he continues driving around and around the small planet, enjoying the breeze until suddenly, Piccolo and Goku both appear in front of the car.

"Hey, King Kai-" Yells Goku with a wave of his hand and a friendly smile on his face before a loud crashing noise goes off behind him along with the yelps of a soaring Bubbles. Both he and Piccolo turn around and see the ruined car crushed at the front half after crashing into Saiyan, with King Kai himself having his head covered by an impact pillow. "Uh, King Kai?" He asks hesitantly while his old master angrily removes the pillow and leaps out of the ruined car, landing his feet on Goku's shoulder before grabbing his hair with one hand and punching him over the head with another.

"Ow! Ow! Ow! Stop it King Kai!" Yelps Goku as the old deity continues pulling at his hair and punching him in the face, completely ignoring his pleas.

"You moron!" Proclaims a furious King Kai angrily before shoving his foot into Goku's face. "To think a minute ago I was proud of everything you've accomplished! Then you go and do this!"

Nearby, the equally annoyed yells of Bubbles can be heard as the monkey runs back the site where Goku crashed the vehicle, sending him flying into the air and promptly bites him in the butt. A thunderous scream of pain escapes the Saiyan's lips as he tries to get the two of them off to no avail, not helped by Gregory joining the fray and repeatedly smacking into him.

Piccolo merely looks on in a mix of annoyance and disbelief with his arms folded, not knowing whether to pull them off Goku and risk angering King Kai or to let this run its course. Luckily for him, Goku acts first and transforms into a Super Saiyan, blasting the three off him without a sudden surge of Ki before turning back to his regular form. Gregory is sent flying away from the planet, Bubbles lands in the nearby tree while King Kai just falls off, landing face first onto the ground.

With an annoyed grunt, the old deity gets himself back on his feet and brushes off the accumulated dirt on his clothing all the while glaring at Goku. "You better have a good reason for ruining my day."

"Sorry about that King Kai, but I swear I had no idea you were driving your car," He pleads to his master honestly though King Kai only scowls at him.

"Just..." Sighs the deity, exasperated by this situation. "Try not to destroy anything else, alright?"

The Saiyan smiles widely, placing both his arms to his sides and respectfully bows to him. "I promise!"

But at least a bit at ease by this, King Kai looks away from Goku and finally takes notice of Piccolo. "Well," He says with a smile. "Been a while since I've seen you around this place, eh Piccolo?"

"Indeed it has, sir," States the Namekian with a tone of formality in his voice before bowing respectfully to Kai standing before him. "I apologize for coming here uninvited and stirring up this trouble."

"My, my, you're manners have certainly improved a great deal since I last saw you."

"Reuniting with Kami has given me some greater insight into the importance of the deity hierarchy, something I sorely lacked in my younger days." He says somewhat nervous about his previous treatment of the Kai. "In any hand, I've come seeking your assistance with something only you can help me with."

"Must be serious if you felt like coming here yourself to ask me." Comments King Kai finally calmed down from Goku's latest rampage. "Is it anything I should worry about?"

"It could be nothing, but, recently the Dragon Balls were used on Earth by someone other than us. At first it didn't seem any more bizarre than when we summon Shenron, however, this time I felt a strong presence on the planet. It was something scattered, but powerful and very malevolent."

"Now that you mention it," Interrupts Goku while rubbing the back of his chin. "I did notice something for a split second too, but it vanished just as fast as it came around."

"And you think malevolent power could potentially be a threat?" Questions King Kai with Piccolo nodding in agreement. "Very well then, seeing as your planet has been a constant magnet for trouble over the past few years, its best not to take any chances." He turns around to let Piccolo place his hand on his back. "I should warn you, despite my sensing abilities being sharper than any others in this quadrant of the galaxy if this power source is too weak for me to find or hidden, even I won't be able to help you."

"For my conscience sake, I hope you're wrong about that last part." He replies evenly before placing his hand on King Kai's back and closing his eyes, focusing entirely on his Ki sensing ability. With it now greatly increased, Piccolo looks throughout the cosmos, reaching out to billions upon billions of living beings in their quadrant of the galaxy. The vast majority have very low, barely noticeable levels of power, some are stronger with a tiny handful being in the upper levels, some benign, others malevolent yet none the one he seeks. He tries again, putting even more effort into detecting the Ki signature to no avail.

With a sigh, he remove his hand and takes a step back, letting King Kai turn around to face them. "Didn't find it huh?"

"No, unfortunately," Says Piccolo, disappointed at the fruitless results of this trip. "I expected to catch at least a glimmer of it, but it appears the user is hiding it."

"Or maybe we just imagined it," Comments Goku with a chuckle. "Not everything's part of some evil scheme to get us y'know?"

Piccolo gives him a disapproving look. "After all these years, you're still far too relaxed when it comes to our world's safety."

"Well, not to toot my own horn, but we have beaten Freeza, Cell, and Majin Buu. I'm pretty sure this power, whatever it is, is something you, me, Vegeta and the boys can handle." He boasts confidently with his hands going to the knot of his belt though Piccolo continues glaring at him, not buying his sentiment.

"Goku does have a point you know," Interjects King Kai matter of factly. "The warriors of Earth have repeatably shown themselves to be perfectly capable of fending off even the most powerful of adversaries." Piccolo directs his glare now towards King Kai with Goku's smirk changing into a big, pleased smile. "However, you're all idiots when it comes to stopping these adversaries before the trouble can even begin."

The expressions of the two Earth warriors switch with Piccolo now smirking and Goku giving King Kai a somewhat disapproving look. "We're not that bad, are we?"

"This coming from the guy who could've stopped Doctor Gero long before the Androids and Cell started their rampage and got himself and me killed." Criticizes the deity, with other instances of their hunger for battle getting in the way of common sense. He puts those statements away, opting to reassure Piccolo instead. "If it's any consolation for you, I'll keep an eye and ear out for that power you were looking for, the second I get an idea of where it is I'll be sure to notify you at once."

Knowing that this is his only remaining option for the time being, just short of scouring the very cosmos of space personally, the Namekian nods in agreement and bows to the deity once more. "Thank you, sir, any help you can offer is greatly appreciated."

"Not a problem at all," Assures King Kai with a friendly smile. "I'm just glad to have someone who can show me some proper respect."

"Wow King Kai, you're really mad about the car aren't you," Comments Goku, instantly making his last masters temper explode with his usual blue face going completely red.

"YES, I'M STILL REALLY MAD ABOUT THE CAR!" Bursts the small deity before jumping back on Goku's head and continuously punching him in the head, with Piccolo looking on, secretly enjoying the whole thing as the sole silver lining of his trip here.
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Hours Later, PTO Command Ship

"He's healing very quickly," Comments Sorbet on the recovery process of his master as he stands before his healing tank with a pair of guards, the chief medical doctor at the console and Tagoma with him. Inside the chamber sleeps the infamous Freeza, in a deep sleep as the fluids inside the tank quickly regrow his either mauled or missing limbs.

When he arrive, he was a mangled torso with extensive cybernetics replacing his missing lower body, arm and half of his skull. Now, his head and arm are fully healed with his lower body almost fully grown back with even the scars of the lasers responsible for reattaching certain parts fading away entirely. "Its hard to believe we only brought him in a mere 7 hours ago."

"Hard to believe indeed," Affirms the chief medical officer without moving away from the panel. "When you brought him back to us, I wasn't sure we'd be able to peel way the robotics without destroying his real body. But Lord Freeza has proven himself to be quite resilient indeed, anyone else surely would've perished from such a condition."

"Any predictions concerning his full recovery?" Asks Tagoma worried at the rate of his healing.

"I cannot say for sure while his body may recover, the trauma of being... sliced into pieces then put back together may result in him slumbering longer."

"Not too long I hope," Interjects Sorbet harshly."If it's all the same to you doctor, I and Tagoma here will remain here until he awakens." He commands coldly, but his constantly tapping left leg betrays him, revealing his nervousness at Freeza staying in this comatose state. His intense paranoia so great he feels like things will spin out of control further if he takes his eyes off the tank for even a split second.

This nervousness causes his heart to skip a beat the instant their ship begins to shake along with the blaring of the alarms going off all around it, nearly knocking him to the ground. "What is the meaning of this?!" He barks into his hand-held communication device.

"It's an enemy ship, sir! Somehow a Galactic Patrolman has discovered our location!" The ship shakes once more with explosions occurring outside the ship, their noises almost drowning out the alarms. "Sir! There's a javelin heading for the medical bay take cover-"

The projectile in question breaks through the outer shielding of the ship, piercing right through its hull and smashes into the ground of the medical bay, nearly slicing Sorbet in half. He jumps back with a shocked gasp, landing on his back before clenching his teeth and kicking at the projectile mere inches away. "Despicable piece of trash!"

A small lid on the top of the long javelin missile opens up, with four small, orb-shaped drones flying out of it and immediately opening fire on anyone nearby. The chief medical officer is the first to fall with a laser blast piercing him right through the torso, with the other guards following suite. A volley of similar attacks are unleashed on Sorbet luckily for him, Tagoma leaps into action, destroying three of the drones outright with simple hand chops while taking hold of the remaining one. His master rises back to his feet, wiping the dirt off his skirt and gives him a friendly smile. "Thank you."

"My pleasure," Tagoma coldly replies though it goes unnoticed by Sorbet who immediately and frantically checks every square inch of the healing chamber with his hands and eyes for any damage. "Is he alright?"

"Apparently so," He confirms distantly when their ship shakes once again. "Damn Patrolman, he'll tear this ship apart if more of those javelins break through."

"Then you should take command of it, sir, with you at the helm of this ship I'm sure we'll be able to drive him away for the time being," Tagoma suggests softly and politely, not letting his master see him take the a small capsule-like device out of the remaining drone before tossing it away. He places the capsule into his pocket then puts his hand on Sorbet's shoulder. "I will remain here, and protect Lord Freeza with my life. With my power level, even the Patrolman himself won't be able to get to him."

The Trade commander looks at his right-hand man, surprised by this gesture of confidence from a man who usually kept his emotions check, mostly. However, the battle raging outside quickly grabs his attention again. "This is the most important mission I've ever given you Tagoma," He looks back to his lieutenant. "Don't screw it up."

Faking understanding, Tagoma nods and watches his master scurry off towards the bridge, leaving him alone with the most feared tyrant in the universe, now as helpless as an infant child. Taking the capsule out of his pocket, he looks at it with Jaco's words echoing in his mind.

"The Extinction Bomb is the most powerful weapon ever designed by our finest scientists. It is capable of destroying entire species in a matter of minutes through airborne infection. Place it into the healing chamber and let Freeza have a taste of its true potency."

With this in mind, Tagoma wastes no more time and runs to the nearby canisters responsible for pumping the healing liquid into the tank. He opens a lid located above one, let a fair bit of the chemical escape before chucking the capsule inside. The small device quickly reaches the slumbering Freeza, floating around his torso mere inches away. "I do this for the good of us all."

Placing the palm of his hand onto the glass of the chamber, Tagoma narrows his eyes at the device, telekinetically pressing the button on top of it and unleashes the deadliest virus in the universe inside. The green chemical responsible for healing Freeza soon turns purple with the tyrant quickly beginning to writhe in pain, even asleep his body struggles to escape with his arms and tail flailing wildly. Desperately trying to get away from the danger killing it.

Tagoma watches the continue him squirm and twist, like a man grasping for air as a pillow suffocates him to death, and like many unfortunate enough to end in such a position, he does not last long. In a matter of moments, his body stops struggling and slowly but surely goes limp with even the bubbles from his breathing vanishing entirely. With a relieved sigh, the double agent smirks and for the first time in the last few days feels like a huge burden has fallen off his back. "At last, the monster is dead."
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A/N: I apologize for taking so long with this chapter, but recent exams in college have made it hard for me to do much of anything concerning the series. That and me not really knowing how to conclude this made it quite troublesome to write.

If anyone's wondering how Piccolo didn't detect Freeza's power in space, it is due to the fact that 1) he's in a drug-induced borderline coma and 2) extensive injuries are shown to drastically cut down a person's power, and since Freeza was sliced and diced before getting mauled some more just to get back together, I imagine his strength was quite weak even after healing as much as he did.

Anyway, get ready for some nasty things to go down next chapter.
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Chapter 6: Ants and Boots

"Hmm, it seems I went a tad overboard," Admits a somewhat disappointed Freeza while hovering over the bloodied and beaten corpses of the two Super Saiyan's lying in the crater beneath him, both having succumbed to their various, grievous injuries at his hands. All around him, smoke rises from similar situations all around the planet, coming from the smoldering ruins of the once beautiful Planet Earth and its many citizens, now being slowly purged by the renewed PTO forces. "Well it doesn't matter, they'll be back soon enough."

Right on cue, both Dodoria and Zarbon return to their master long with the entire Ginyu Force, all smirking confidently with the Dragon Balls in toe. Freeza smiles at the sight and extends his arms in greeting with a smile. "My finest warriors, your timing is truly impeccable, its good to know that reviving you during my little escapade to Namek has paid off well."

"We wouldn't dare to let you down once again my lord," Says Zarbon politely with a bow. "And I see you've destroyed the so-called Legendary Super Saiyan's as well."

"Yes, however," He replies with the previous disappointment returning to his voice. "I'm still not content with it, so many horrors I've yet to unleash on them but even a Saiyan body can take so much. Thankfully, you've all recovered exactly the things I need to remedy the issue."

"Aw yeah!" Exclaims Recoome with his hand clenching. "I can't wait to see what's his face get clobbered by Lord Freeza."

"Oh, believe me, that's the least of what I have in store for him and his mysterious friend. But first, we need to bring them back." With a snap of his fingers, he commands his gathered soldiers to place the Dragon Balls near the crater. They quickly form a horizontal line several feet away from the gathered orbs, patiently waiting in-formation while their lands in front of the wish granting devices. "Let's see what this one can do," He wonders to himself before extending his hands outward towards the orbs. "Mighty Dragon of Earth! Hear my summons and come to this mortal plain! Rise in the name of Lord Freeza!"

Doing as commanded, the Dragon Balls of Earth release a pillar of blinding, twisting energy, darkening the skies throughout the entire planet. Freeza watches the display with a chuckle, eager to revive the Super Saiyan's to continue their hopefully endless torment for as long as the Dragon Balls of both Earth and Namek will allow. For what good is immortality if you spend all of it in ceaseless pain? Yet, just as the being starts to take form, a sharp pain envelops Freeza's body, sending him crashing face first into the ground.

"W-what is this?!" He yells while writhing in agony, rolling all over the dirty ground of the ruined Earth city and gasping for air. He can feel his heart clench as if a powerful fist is crushing it, his ears ring so loudly he can't even hear his own yells of pain and blood exits through his mouth, nose and eyes. "This... can't be... I wished for... immortality from the Namekian Dragon..." He thinks to himself as his previously invincible body gives way to whatever it is plaguing it now.

Despite his quickly deteriorating vision, the tyrant reaches out to his loyal soldiers but they do nothing but stand there, as if completely oblivious to what's happening in front of them. Soon, the darkness envelops them as well, robbing Freeza of sight, sound, and smell. The sensation of touch is the only one left, like a frightened child he desperately grabs the dirt under his fingers and holds it tightly, afraid as if he'll be lost in oblivion if he lets go of it.

Then his hands go numb, sending shivers down his spine as his entire body slowly but surely goes limp, leaving him with nothing but his own internal screaming echoing inside his head. A stiff coldness envelops him, one far greater than any of the numerous, mighty blizzard storms that litter his planet. He would be lying if he said he didn't feel this before. The first time he felt the clenches of death grasp him was on Namek, after he foolishly flew into the trajectory of his own attack, vivisecting him.

Despite his many instances of stomping on ants and enjoying in their torment, it never crossed his mind as to what it felt like to be in their position. How was it to feel such pure terror for your own life that'd you'd beg your own destroyer to save you. But on that day on Namek, he finally did and loathes it to this day. How anyone, even one as powerful as him begged his killer for salvation, just as hundreds had done to Freeza himself before. The true mark of a spineless coward he concluded during his many moments of self-examination during his stay in Hell.

"No..." He says to himself with venom and anger in his voice. "I won't... let anyone or anything ever do that to me again..." Despite his senses being shot he fights through the numbness in his body and clenches both his jaw and fist, his power rising as a result. "The days of my defeats... and failures are done... I refuse to be a worthless laughing stock anymore...!"

With his renewed willpower, the tyrant takes all his remaining strength and forces his body back into submission, fighting back the substance poisoning it. With a spiraling, purple aura surrounding him, he unleashes a defiant, mighty roar and burns through the powerful virus of the extinction bomb. Just as quickly as they abandoned him, his sense return with a bright, burning light forming above the shroud of darkness. Taking flight towards this, Freeza reaches out to the light, the anomaly blinding him the more he approaches it, but also welcoming its warm embrace.

"I refuse to die in this chamber like some worthless ant!" He yells defiantly with the veins in his head popping out. "DO YOU HEAR ME?! THE MIGHTY FREEZA REFUSES TO FALL LIKE THIS!"
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Outside the PTO Command Ship

"Jaco? Jaco, can you hear me?" Asks Tagoma over their secure communication line while the Galactic Patrolman steers his ship in and out of a nearby asteroid belt, using the floating rocks as cover from the PTO blaster and missile fire. With his vastly smaller size, he easily zigs and zags around, in-between and even through the stones while the larger enemy ship remains on the edge of the belt, as it would be shredded in minutes. Taking his hand off the steering wheel for a moment, he taps the comm line to respond. "I can hear you old friend-"

The explosion of a nearby asteroid, thrice the size of Jaco's ship takes his attention from the call and back to steering the ship. With dozens of smaller rocks flinging towards him, the Patrolman opens fire on them, clearing a path with which to dodge them easier. "Sorry about that, had to deal with a tiny problem courtesy of your employers."

"At least we don't have to worry about the large problem anymore," States Tagoma confidently with a hint of satisfaction in his voice as he glances over to the dead Freeza in the healing tank a few feet away. "The bastard is dead once more."

Jaco's heart skips a beat upon hearing this though his rational side quickly takes over. "Are you sure? Tagoma, you must be sure that the virus succeeded, even with its potency we cannot leave anything to chance."

"Don't worry, I'm checking his vitals as we speak and he is most assuredly dead." He confirms by checking the monitor responsible for checking the tyrants vitals. "No heart or brain activity to speak of."

With a relieved sigh, the Galactic Patrolman relaxes for a moment despite the battle still raging all around him and is thankful to have prevented a potentially horrible catastrophe from happening. With this heavy burden off his back, he focuses back onto the matter at hand. "I assume you're tampering with things as we planned?"

"Indeed, my program has already altered the footage from today to show one of the seemingly destroyed drones launch the capsule right through the window of the healing tank and killing our beloved Lord Freeza." Walking back to the tank, he places his palm back onto the glass of the tank and telekinetically moves the capsule back towards the hatch to make his story work. "Just a little farther AAAGGHHH!"

"Tagoma?" Asks Jaco after hearing a yell from his inside man's end along with glass breaking, back on the ship, the double agent desperately gasps for air as a white hand bursting through the window of the healing tank holds him by the throat. He grabs it back, putting all his strength into breaking free, but it has no effect. His gasps become louder and louder with the tightening grip, his eyes bulge out along with the crushing of his windpipe. The last sight the agent sees is a pair of red eyes staring back at him followed by an amused chuckle before his neck is snapped, killing him instantly.

"Tagoma? Tagoma?! Report! What is happening over there?!" Urges Jaco from the communication device now lying on the ground next to its dead master. The Patrolman hears more noises on the other end, first of more glass breaking as well as the tearing of metal and a small explosion. He can hear a pair of footsteps accompanied by irregular, loud thudding. "T-tagoma?"

"My apologies, for interrupting your conversation but I seem to have broken him." Says a mocking, cold yet polite voice which immediately sends shivers down Jaco's spine, his mouth goes dry and he stares out the bridge with his heart rate exploding, ringing in his ears. "I wouldn't be too heartbroken over it if I were you, you'll be seeing him momentarily."

Freeza flies upward through the very ship, tearing it apart like tin foil against his skin before stopping mere inches above the ship. With a smirk on his face and the casual flailing of his tail, he looks around the nearby asteroid belt and easily finds Jaco's ship flying nearby. The Patrolman to spots Freeza, looking at him with utter terror smeared across his face, then his instincts kick back in prompting him to take command of his ship back and plan a hyperspace jump away. "Tights! Get us out of here now-"

Without a moment's hesitation, the tyrants smirk forms a grin as he points his right hands index finger towards the ship, and with a single death beam blows it, and an entire quarter of the asteroid belt into pieces, sealing the fate of the Galactic Patrolman and securing the secrecy of his revival. He looks at his latest handy work with contained glee, getting fond memories of the fireworks display that was Planet Vegeta's destruction. With a content sigh, Freeza puts both his hands behind his back and spends a moment taking it all back in. The warmth of the nearby sun, the relaxing silence of space and the hundreds of bright stars off the distance, giving life to many worlds ripe for conquest.

"It's truly wonderful to be alive again."
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Chapter 7: Eye Spy

"W-what was that just now?!" Demands Sorbet after seeing a large, purple colored explosion of Ki suddenly appear out of nowhere, obliterating much of the asteroid belt and seemingly the Galactic Patrolman. The tiny blue alien clenches his fist and smashes it against the handles of his chair. "I said, what was that?!"

His equally surprised officers snap out of their trance, and hastily check the various security and monitoring systems to give him an answer. Luckily for them all, an answer is quickly provided by the one responsible. "That was me." States a voice none of them but Sorbet had ever heard before, everyone in the bridge turns around and with their jaws hanging open, spot Lord Freeza himself, fully healed at the door.

The tyrant stands there with the deceased Tagoma in toe being held in the air by Freeza's tail around his neck. "What's wrong? You're all staring at me as if you've seen a ghost?" He asks mockingly with a chuckle though this only makes his men, even more, nervous by his presence.

"If you're all quite finished gawking at me, I'd like to know who's in charge of this vessel."

All eyes minus Freeza's immediately turn to Sorbet, who stares at the dead Tagoma held by his newly revived master in a mix of shock and confusion. Something which doesn't go unnoticed by Freeza. "Judging by the look on your face, am I correct in assuming this one here was your friend?"

"Y-yes, Lord Freeza." Sorbet reluctantly stammers, not knowing what the consequence of his answer will be.

"I see, then perhaps you can explain why this traitor was allowed to remain alone with me while I healed?" Asks Freeza with his tone becoming somewhat sharper, causing many of the lower ranking soldiers to gulp in fear.

"T-traitor?" Repeats Sorbet. "That can't be true, Tagoma was my most trusted lieutenant..."

"The worst backstabbers usually are," States Freeza as he remembers Vegeta's rebellion and its many, many disastrous results. "He attempted to kill me with one of those infamous Extinction Bombs, had he used it on me earlier in my healing process, I doubt I'd be standing here before you. I even have the device he used to speak with his partner in the Galactic Patrol." Freeza's takes out Tagoma's communication device and lets their last conversation play out for all to hear.

"Sorry about that, I had to deal with a tiny problem courtesy of you employers." Says a voice none of them recognize, undoubtedly belonging to the Patrolman.

"At least, we don't have to worry about the large one anymore." Says Tagoma proudly. "The bastard is dead once more."

A brief pause follows until the Patrolman responds. "Are you sure? Tagoma, you must be sure that the virus has succeeded, even with its potency, we cannot leave anything to chance."

"Don't worry, I'm checking his vital signs as we speak," Confirms Tagoma. "No heart or brain activity to speak of."

Before the recording can continue, Freeza's pauses it knowing that he's more than made his point. "If you need more convincing, listen to the rest of it for yourself." He tosses the device to Sorbet with the tiny alien only narrowly catches it. He stares at it with his head lowered and a solemn look on his face while Freeza decides to move onto more pressing matters. "Seeing as Tagoma here has no need of his personnel quarters any longer, I'll be taking them for myself."

"O-of course Lord Freeza," Says one of the pilots politely though sweating heavily. "Is there- anything else we can do for you?"

"You are to tell no one of my revival, I have many enemies out there, dangerous enemies who would stop me before I could exact my revenge. If I find out that any of so much as told anyone a peep, and I assure you I will find out." He states with malice in his voice and a scowl to back it up. "Should you fail to follow my order, for any reason whatsoever, I will hunt down the home-world of whichever species you lot belong to, annihilate it until you are the only ones left. Allowing the severity of your absolute, horrid failure drive you to either madness or death, preferably both. Have I made myself clear?"

Minus the still shocked Sorbet, the other present soldiers take a step back with their jaws hanging open, all of them trembling in terror of their masters order. Unanimously they all nod in understanding and proclaim, "Your wish is our command Lord Freeza! We won't fail you!"

Freeza smirks and folds his arms, pleased with their answer. "Good to hear," He tosses Tagoma's corpse casually to the ground and turns around before remembering something else. "Oh, and could you give my computer access to all the spy bots currently stationed on Earth? I wish to see what my murderers have been up to while I've been away for... for how long have I been gone?"

"Tw-twelve years my Lord."

"Twelve years?" Repeats Freeza, slightly surprised by this. "It seems I've much to catch up on then."

One of the soldiers glances over to Tagoma's corpse, gulping before reluctantly asking. "What should we- what should we do about the traitor?"

"I'll allow the fool responsible for bringing him decide on that," Scoffs Freeza with the door closing behind him, for he is eager to find out how powerful Goku and his allies have become. And has no more patience for any distractions to keep him from the answer. Everyone in the room relaxes, save for the pondering Sorbet.

For years, Tagoma served him well and executed his orders without hesitation or regret. Where other soldiers fled battles or surrender, he helped hold the line for over a dozen PTO posts and aided in the organizations troubled survival. Now, all of it was nothing but a lie to slowly and surely destroying it from the inside, who knows how many battles they lost because of ?"

"Sir?" Asks one of the pilots, snapping Sorbet out of his trance. "What do you want us to do with the body?"

Without a word, Sorbet turns his head in the direction of the corpse, looking at its horrified expression for a good long while before spitting on it in disgust from atop his chair. "Throw him into the incinerator with the rest of the trash, the rest of you either get Lord Freeza the footage from the drones or inform the others of his secrecy order," He commands them coldly before turning his chair forward, not even bothering to look at one of the guards as he hauls Tagoma's corpse out of the room.
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7 Days Later

"I suppose congratulations are in order Kakarot," Yells Vegeta fiercely as he and Goku trade blows in their Super Saiyan 2 states out in one of the Earths many, many rocky wastelands. Goku quickly darts his head left and right to avoid them though a sudden overhead kick from Vegeta sends him crashing back onto the ground.

"Congratulations?" Repeats Goku as he rubs the pain in his head. "Oh! You mean for Gohan's engagement!"

Vegeta stares at him in disbelief, still amazed by how oblivious he can be to the most simple of things. "Yes, Kakarot! For your son's engagement!" He yells at him with the vein in his head popping. "Good grief, why do I even bother talking to you."

"Because I'm the only who still trains besides you?" States Goku innocently while levitating back to Vegeta's level, forgetting that Piccolo trains as well though he prefers to do it alone.

The Prince of Saiyan gives him a deadpan expression, annoyed by the accuracy of his statement and upon being reminded of Trunks' growing dislike for the activity as well. "Just," He sighs, "Shut up and fight."

Unbeknownst to the two sparring Super Saiyans along with their families and allies across the Earth, dozens of spy bots have actively been spying on them for days now. With all of their footage readily available to Freeza, who has spent the entirety of said days continuously observing it all. A dozen monitors flash before his bloodshot, strained eyes.

With the exception of the faint, blue light emanating from the monitors, most of the room lies shrouded in darkness and silence. Even the air is stale from no one entering or exiting the room ever since Freeza issued his commands to the crew. Though this bothers him little, in fact, the seclusion helps him greatly, for he wishes to focus all his attention on the footage.

He closely examines every spoken word, every punch thrown, every transformation either achieved or mentioned. Much to his chagrin, Goku, and the others have advanced far beyond what he ever thought possible. Not only did he, Vegeta, and all their children achieve Super Saiyan, but some of them even higher levels of it, with power near incalculable by the spy drones. Not only them, but even the Namekian and even the lowly humans have achieved powers surpassing his own in the case of the Namek or rivaling it in his in the case of the latter.

Yet, for every scrap of information he finds infuriating, he also finds something potentially useful. Vegeta's gravity machine which allows him to train in gravity levels far beyond any natural particularly intrigues him, along with the apparent mastery of the Saiyan's super form. Something which will no doubt aid him greatly for mastering his own bodies power instead of relying on inferior and wasteful transformations to keep it in check.

Other facts he finds potentially useful are their so-called Senzu Beans, small fruits seemingly capable of not only reinvigorating a fighter completely but also healing all their injuries. The apparent presence of advanced, strength enhancing cyber augmentation as present in the wife of Krillin, a human Freeza could've worn he killed on Namek. Finally, there is the children's fusion dance, a technique with the choreography that could only please the likes of Ginyu, but one also capable of drastically increasing the power of those who do it for a short time.

"You have been a busy one Goku, I'll give you that," Thinks Freeza while observing his sparring match with Vegeta. "Unfortunately for you, now that I know all you tricks for attaining more power, you're finished once I get to Earth," He tells himself with a smirk before closing the monitors, seeing enough for now and growing tired of sitting here.

He walks out of the room, cracking his knuckles and neck to ease the stiffness in the before walking to the bridge, ignoring some passing by and nervous saluting crew members. Upon entering the bridge, he is met with equally nervous and "respectful" greeting though Sorbet seems the most in ease out of all of them.

"My Lord," he says with a bow. "It is good to see you once again."

"I assume you're the one who told them not to disturb me?"

Sorbet nods. "Given the circumstances behind your return, I thought it best to give you some time to process everything alone and in peace."

"A wise decision," Replies Freeza, still unsure what to do with the blue alien before him. Despite his incompetence with the one called Tagoma, given the other information available, he's also been the only one actively trying to keep his families organization from crumbling into nothing. Usually, he'd execute ones responsible for bringing in traitors or spies, whether knowingly or unknowingly, but for his plan to work, he needs a capable one to lead in his stead.

"You may rise," He commands with Sorbet following it. "Walk with me." Freeza turns back towards the door with his hands behind his back with his current second in command close behind. "I assume you're aware of the powerful fighters on Earth?"

Sorbet nods. "Then I won't waste time dodging the truth, they were responsible for my untimely demise a decade ago, though admittedly it was my own foolishness that greatly contributed to that as well. Regardless, now that I have returned, I cannot take full control of the Organization openly while my enemies still live."

"Forgive me for saying this, my lord, but their powers are quite high, much higher than any listed from you."

"They've grown significantly stronger in my absence, even Majin Buu who I thought was nothing more but a childish myth has not only been defeated by them but is also their ally." States Freeza with his temper slightly rising while Sorbet cannot believe such a fact. "To defeat them, I must, for the first time in a long time, train myself to surpass them. Once they're defeated and I reign supreme as the most powerful being in the universe, the Organization will flourish once more."

Sorbet rubs his chin, pondering his master's options for training. "Ordinary practice will do no good, it will take training of the most extreme level to truly help you make any significant gains my lord. However, I don't know of any such exercise, if I did, I'd have made it a permanent part of our army long ago."

Freeza smirks. "Don't waste too much time thinking about it, for I already have the perfect method, all I need know is a competent group of scientists and money to make it happen."

"Our forces are stretched thin," Admits Sorbet, somewhat disappointed with Freeza's choice not to openly return to the galactic stage, still, no one said short-term investments couldn't also yield long-term ones as well. "I will find the best scientists and engineers we have to offer sire."

"I'm glad to hear it Sorbet," Replies Freeza, pleased with his answer. "Who knows, you just might prove yourself useful to me after all."
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Good chapter, I like that Freeza is getting some explanation as to how he got anywhere near the amount of power he did in RoF. I like the observations he does and how he probably looks like he's brooding.
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Dec 29 2015, 06:25 PM
Good chapter, I like that Freeza is getting some explanation as to how he got anywhere near the amount of power he did in RoF. I like the observations he does and how he probably looks like he's brooding.
Thanks! I really wanted to showcase how and why Freeza and later Shisami get this strong although I won't have him attain the same level as RoF just by copying everyone else's training methods. I've got something else in mind for that later.
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Good chapter, I like that Freeza is getting some explanation as to how he got anywhere near the amount of power he did in RoF. I like the observations he does and how he probably looks like he's brooding.
Thanks! I really wanted to showcase how and why Freeza and later Shisami get this strong although I won't have him attain the same level as RoF just by copying everyone else's training methods. I've got something else in mind for that later.
Colour me interested.
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Chapter 8: Mastering Thy Self

Two Weeks Post-Resurrection, PTO Command Ship

"Given the specifications I've given you Professor, how quickly can you replicate this machine?" Asks Sorbet over his personal quarters computer to the scientist on the other end of one of their more secure worlds, Professor Kafka. The blue-skinned lizard clad in the Organizations trademark battle armor with a white coat over it remains silent, opting to put her attention into quickly examining the schematics.

"The design is quite simple and efficient indeed," She speaks up, not bothering to look at her commander. "Though the technology is somewhat more primitive than our own, it's gravity altering capabilities should allow for some very intense but useful training."

"I'm well aware of that Professor," He tells her unimpressed, as he already knows the broad strokes of the machines capabilities via the information the spy bots have gleaned fro it and certain other inventions from the Briefs home. "What I need to know is how quickly you can make a replica of it?"

"Creating a replica will be child's play, no more than a 36 at most. I'll notify you the moment we're finished."

Smirking at her answer, Sorbet is pleased to hear this and rubs both his hands together. "Excellent, I want you to make this our labs to priority Professor. I'm sure you're aware of out deteriorating situation and a machine like this to raise our troops power levels could tip the scales back into our favor."

She nods. "Understood sir, although, I was looking forward to tampering with the capsule and cybernetics technology you also sent me first..." She admits with a blush and chuckle, interested in the capabilities of these other inventions far more than simply copying another's.

"All in good time Professor, if you prove yourself capable in this task, then you'll be spearheading those other projects with all our resources at your disposal." Somewhat amused by the childish look of wonder in her eyes, Sorbet ends communication with her and jumps out of his seat to inform Lord Freeza immediately. He's well aware of the bad first impression he left on Freeza despite helping to revive him, and must prove himself irreplaceable or suffer being tossed aside.

Making his way through the hallways of the ship and saluting some soldiers he meets on his way, Sorbet reaches Freeza's quarters in no time and goes to knock on the door when the masters voice tells him "Enter,". He stands there, surprised and hesitant as he wonders how Freeza knew anyone was going to knock, let alone that it was specifically Sorbet. Regardless, he does as told, entering the room to find Freeza performing clapping push-ups over and over with a puddle of sweat underneath him.

Not wanting to conclude his training just yet, Freeza's eyes look up to Sorbet and his lips curl into a smirk. "Since you're here, that must mean the gravity machine data has arrived at our scientists, hasn't it?"

Sorbet clears his throat before answering. "Yes, sir, our top scientist Professor Kafka is working on it as we speak and it will be complete in less than 36 hours."

"Excellent, more than enough time for me to get back into shape." Admits Freeza before speeding up his push-ups.

"I'm surprised you're already doing your workouts, sire," Admits Sorbet. "I had thought you'd spend more time learning this Ki sensing power."

"I've already mastered it," Confirms Freeza with Sorbet raising an eyebrow. "How else do you think I knew it was you? Which reminds me, I'll have to make sure the rest of our forces start learning how to suppress their powers as well."

"Suppressing our powers?" He asks again, earning a sigh from his master.

"Take a look with that horrid device on your head," Suggests Freeza, not feeling like getting into the minutia of it right now.

Pressing the scouter mounted on his left ear, Sorbet aims it towards his exercising master and gasps in shock upon seeing its reading of 5. "That- that's impossible," He blurts out with his jaw hanging open, much to Freeza's amusement. "How have you done this, my lord? After all those failed attempts I thought-"

"That I had quit?" Interjects the tyrant after finishing his 10 000th push-up. "Truth be told I nearly did, however, a few days ago after a particularly annoying try, I found another way..."
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2 Days Prior


"Again," Commands Freeza with a low, threatening tone to his voice to the four-man squad of soldiers standing next to one another before him while he sits in a meditative crouch. After giving his new second in command, Sorbet, the specifications of the training tools he requires he has spent the past few days since his return to grasp the intricacies of Ki. As proven by his enemies, one's power can be controlled by the users own will become exponentially stronger by focusing it into a single point or weaker to mask their presence.

This knowledge evaded Freeza for most of his life, forcing him to depend on copious transformations to either lower or raise his power just to keep it in check. Never mind the need for a scouter to track down enemies or to have the faintest idea of their strength level. The blame for this comes from both his father and his own arrogance, for most of his life, bar Beerus, and Cold, Freeza was the most powerful being in the universe. Even in his weakest form, none could even remotely challenge him. He never saw a need to ponder these questions or even train as his power was absolute, so why bother?

Now he sees the folly of this approach, cursing himself and the pampering of his annoying father from holding him back. If he were smarter, he could've been more than ready enough to defeat the Super Saiyan and prevent the chain of events which lead to his creation. With his gravity machine still being under construction and no other forms of relevant training at his disposal, Freeza continues trying to achieve this "Ki sense" before moving onto anything else. If only it were so simple.

"I said again!" He yells at them, causing them to snivel in fear before quickly returning back into formation. Doing as commanded, they clench their fists and begin rising the awareness of their power levels up with their master closing his eyes, putting his full attention into trying to sense this rise. Yet, as with every other attempt, he simply cannot feel it. Like a blind child trying to see once more, he merely reaches out into a nothingness hoping to catch some vague thing that will help him, somehow. He clenches his fists, getting more annoyed by this hurdle once again with the vein in his head popping out.

He wants to simply let his power lash out at the soldiers, to kill them as if it would somehow solve his problem. Yet he can't, not because he doesn't want to, but because of the limited amount of soldiers present on the ship and the prospect of bringing in replacement could allow another spy into their midst. Instead, the tyrant bites his lip and exhales before raising his hand. "You may leave, I've no more use for you today," He tells them calmly, not even bothering to open his eyes and waits for them to quietly leave his room.

With them gone, he slowly rises back to his feet and with a furious yell, punches right through a nearby wall. "Damn it all! Why can't I do it?!" He pulls his hand back out and looks at it as it shakes in his barely contained rage. At first, he considered that the problem lied with the first soldiers he asked to help him learn it, however, as he switched from the various crew members ranging from Sorbet to even the janitor, he could not sense their powers either.

"What am I missing?" He asks himself out loud, his frustration somewhat giving way to desperation. "Vegeta wasn't able to do it, at least, I assume so yet he knows it now. The other Saiyans and their spawn know it, the Namekian knows it, even the lowly humans who conspire with them know it. It cannot be a biological limitation..." His voice falters with the possibility of this being true as if a sudden, painful stab pierced his insides. "Can it?"

Placing his hand on his chin, Freeza stands as still as a statue as he ponders the possibility of this. While his biology is factually more powerful in its durability and adaptiveness than any known in the universe given his many instances of surviving injuries or illnesses capable of killing lesser beings. It could come as a cost to his energy, a sort of evolutionary deficiency created for the purpose of balance.

Still angered by the hurdle, he fires off a small Death Beam at a nearby, empty bottle of wine, just strong enough to break it without causing any more serious damage to the ship. As he stares at the small smoke coming out of his finger, an idea forms in his head. "Maybe..." He says quietly before extending his hand out with the palm open, forming a small, purple ball of Ki hovering above it. Kneeling back into his meditative pose, he closes his eyes and focuses on the energy forming the ball, for how can you sense others power when you barely understand how your own truly function?

Before moving on to anything else, Freeza simply lets the orb hover there while he tries to get a feel for it, and by extension the energy flowing through his body. Like a foreign language, it escapes him entirely at first but hours upon hours pass and slowly but surely, he starts to feel it. Wanting to test it further, Freeza mentally commands the orb to levitate around the room to test his abilities range.

Though he finds some difficulty in sensing it, at first, he adjusts quickly as his familiarity with the minutia grows. He commands it to speed up, causing it to quickly dart all over the room and around its maker and he can sense it perfectly, snatching it just as it flies towards his face. "Let's try something else."

Placing it back into its original position, Freeza stiffens up as he puts more of his energy into the ball and begins increasing its size and power. He had done such a technique many times before, but always entirely on instinct as a sort of sixth sense he could never entirely grasp. Yet now, he feels the flow of energy from his body into the orb, sensing it and himself with vivid clarity.

Then, he does the reverse, taking energy out of it as a way to get the feel for energy masking. Sensing the way the energy decreases, he decides to test it on himself, dissipating the orb with a casual flick of his wrist. He takes a deep breath and applies the same method of decreasing power for his own energy. Using some of his concentration to lift a nearby scouter, with his telekinetic abilities, he activates the device and listens to its beeping as it calculates his power level.

"Power Level: 53," States the computer voice built into the newer models, Freeza smirks at this before doing the opposite, using the same feeling he had for the orb, he increases his power just enough to make it noticeable but not enough to give his location away. "Power Level: 5000"

Opening his eyes, Freeza lets out an amused chuckle and gets back on his feet, flexing his muscles to loosen them up after spending hours in the meditative stance. He telekinetically pulls the scouter towards himself and uses it to contact the commander of the squad he earlier dismissed. "Commander Ziber, I require the assistance of you and your men, return to my quarters at once."

In a matter of minutes, the squad reassembles with the same nervous, sweating, fearful faces Freeza has become quite accustomed to in his many decades of ruling and is entirely indifferent too. With his hands behind his back and a smirk on his face, Freeza commands them, "Raise the awareness of your power levels for me."

Ziber and his men nod in understanding before yelling as their white auras flare up, Freeza's smirk vanishes with his narrowing eyes. "The moment of Truth," He tells himself as he begins applying the lessons learned about himself onto others, though at first it seems to be another failure, slowly their powers become aware to him. Mere seconds later he starts to gauge their strengths, sensing who among them is stronger than the other.

Ignoring them, he decides to test this power on the others inside the ship and finds similar results there as well. His smile returns followed by a loud, pleased laugh sending shivers down the nearby soldiers back as the step back in fear of him. "Step one is complete."
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Present Day

"Incredible Lord Freeza!" Sorbet blurts out in amazement while Freeza wipes the sweat off with a nearby towel. "To think there's an ability such as that out there and we were totally unaware of it!"

"You can thank my families horrid dependence on those scouter's for that," Freeza says with disdain. "Once our army learns of this skill, they will no longer have use for such devices to scale an enemies power."

"You want us all to have it Lord Freeza?" Inquires Sorbet surprised that his master would share this ability with anyone, much less make it mandatory for his entire army.

"I no longer have the luxury of an endless horde of soldiers as I once did, if we are to become better than we once were, we must learn new abilities and make our soldiers truly formidable. The days of worthless grunts barely any stronger than a loathsome Earthling are done as far as I'm concerned." States Freeza matter of factly while looking out the nearby window of his quarters. "Besides, I need worthwhile soldiers to take on the mighty defenders of Earth while I claim my true prize."

Staring out into the stars, Freeza, while pleased at his first hurdle being overcome, knows that a long and difficult path lies ahead of him, for the Saiyan's have become mighty indeed and it will take everything he has left to defeat them.
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Frieza's ki relating abilities was truly detailed to the T lol. Nice stuff man. Feels like I truly understand Frieza's RoF self much better. 👍
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Chapter 7 was a really good chapter. Freeza threatening survivor's guilt was awesome. Haha. I like the way this is all written, especially Freeza and his sneaky awareness. He seems to be thinking out his plans to "exact revenge" way smarter than we've ever seen him do.

Yeah, I'll read chapter 8 later, and I should be all caught up. I hope you keep this story flowing.
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Chapter 9: Revenge At Last!

11 Months Post-Resurrection, Earth


"Oh man, what's taking so long? She didn't change her mind did she? Nah, she wouldn't do that, right? I mean we've been dating for years now, and she seemed pretty excited about it when I popped the question." Frantically wonders a terribly nervous Gohan to himself as he stands at the end of the wedding aisle with sweating pouring down his face. All around him, he looks at the anticipation smeared across the faces of his many friends and family, along with the rumblings of the insane paparazzi fighting outside to get in.

At the front sits his family, both Ox-King and Chi-Chi wipe away their barely contained tears of joy, Goku smiles proudly at his son though he winces occasionally from the tight tie around his neck. His little brother Goten's eyes keep opening and closing as he barely manages to stay awake. Behind them are an equally tie infuriated, suit wearing Vegeta, smiling Bulma and also barely conscious Trunks.

He tries to find some comfort and relief in their optimism yet it only makes him more nervous. "Uh oh, what if Videl does call it quits? Goten's won't talk to me anymore for dragging him to this 'snooze fest'. Dad and Vegeta won't be able to eat anything which means Vegeta will kill me. That is if mom leaves anything of me to kill-"

"Will you calm down already?!" Yells an annoyed Piccolo after having spent the last few minutes telepathically listening in on his pupils mental rambling. "I swear, you were less afraid when I left you alone in the middle of nowhere for six months."

Gohan looks over to his best man, finally adjusting to seeing him in a regular humans black tuxedo outfit though one tailor made to accommodate for his larger size of course. "But Piccolo, what if you're wrong? What if I completely messed it up?!" He asks frantically over their psychic link.

"Videl adores you kid," States Piccolo with a smirk. "I'm not expert when it comes to this mushy crap, but trust me, I've seen that look on your mom's face when she looks at Goku. If she didn't want to go through with this, she would've said no a year ago when you proposed."

"Do- do you really think so Piccolo?" Asks a still nervous Gohan, noticing Piccolo's head turn towards the entrance of the room.

"Why don't you see for yourself." Is all his master tells him before turning his gaze in the same direction, nearly causing his jaw to fall through the floor! He looks on in awe along with most of the others present in the room minus Goku, Vegeta, Tien, and Piccolo, as Mr. Satan leads his smiling, white gown wearing daughter down the isle. All his doubts are instantly swept away as he looks at his soon to be wife with a blush on his face, with it growing even redder when she winks at him. With the atmosphere only being enhanced by the procession music.

Even Mr. Satan sniffs and tears up as he reaches the altar though unlike in other high profile events such as this he'd try to keep this side of himself a secret. Not this time, this day belongs to his daughter and he's in no mood to put up an act on it, tabloid journalism be damned. He stays there for a minute, still holding his daughter's hand, remembering all of the times she made him the proudest he's ever felt, like when she broke her first plank of wood. Or when she made a rousing speech about how much she loved him at her first-grade career day.

With a heavy sigh, he looks her right in the eye and smiles. "Go get em, kid." He proudly tells her with a kiss to her cheek, before taking his seat next to Chi-Chi while she takes her place by Gohan's side.

"I was worried you bailed on me," Admits Gohan with a whisper, earning a chuckle from Videl. "What's so funny?"

"I was worried you were gonna bail on me, like fly through the roof while I was coming down the aisle or something."

They both let out quiet chuckles, embarrassed by their silly paranoia before shutting up upon hearing the minister clear his throat. With the music over, the minister opens his book and addresses everyone present.

"Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to witness the union of Son Gohan and Videl Satan in holy matrimony, which is an honorable estate, that is not to be entered into unadvisedly or lightly, but reverently and soberly," He states with a soft yet loud voice of formality. "Into this estate these two persons present come now to be joined. If anyone can show just cause why they may not be lawfully joined together, let them speak now or forever hold their peace-"

Without warning, the roof of the church breaks apart in a large fiery explosion, sending chunks of rubble plummeting towards the attending guests. Jumping into action, the gathered warriors of Earth respond to the situation with the quicker, alien fighters snatching the helpless civilians out of harms way while the others destroy the chunks with basic Ki blasts. "Where the hell did that come from?" Asks Piccolo in-between the coughs from the smoke engulfing the entire building.

"From me of course," Says a familiar mocking voice from above, one which the fighters from Namek remember all to well. A second later, the smoke is brushed aside, revealing a figure they've not seen for a very long time in the company of two dozen soldiers. "The man did say I could object, after all, I was merely exercising my right to it."

"Freeza!" Yell Goku, Vegeta, Piccolo, Krillin and Gohan in unison at the sight of the long to be thought dead galactic tyrant, now hovering above them with a pleased smirk on his face and his eyes trained squarely on Goku.

"Is it really so surprising?" Asks the tyrant. "I mean, my men did infiltrate your planet and revive me just under a year ago after all."

Piccolo's jaw clenches in anger upon hearing this, the powerful yet scattered energy signature he felt that day when Shenron was summoned belonged to Freeza! "The bastard must've figured out I was going to call Shenron back to find out what exactly he used for last, that must be why he's chosen to attack us now before his cover got blown!"

"Very perceptive Namek, unfortunately, it will do little to save any of you today. For you see," He places his hands to his sides with one foot before the either. "I've made extensive cybernetic upgrades to my body, my power is tenfold what it once was! And with this power, I will, at last, have my revenge and lay waste to your worthless planet!"

"Oh please!" Scoffs Vegeta in his usual confident demeanor. "If you think making yourself an android will be enough to beat us then you're just as sad and deluded as I always knew you were! Even my son here could take you down without Super Saiyan, isn't that right Trunks?" Vegeta turns to his son only to find him sleeping soundly despite the ruckus going on around him. With his eye twitching in anger, the Prince of Saiyan's clenches his fist and brings it down on his son's head. "Wake up boy and prove my point!"

Trunks yelps in pain. rubbing his poor head as a gargantuan bump grows out of it with tears forming in his eyes. "Why'd you do that dad?! You don't wanna be here either-" He stops for a moment to find the church somewhat in ruins with some alien looking people floating above, immediately he forgets about his splitting headache and cracks his knuckles. "Sweet! Alien bad guys to fight! If I knew this was part of the wedding I would've brought my gi!"

"It's not part of the wedding Trunks," States Gohan sternly while walking towards the center of the aisle, not moving his eyes off of Freeza even for an instant with his fists tightly clenched. "Listen up Freeza, if you want to fight us fine, we'll gladly oblige. But after the ceremony's finished, so I suggest you let us get that done at least before-"

Ignoring his please, Freeza launches an energy ball at the young Saiyan hybrid, catching him in another explosion. "I've neither the time nor the patience for such foolishness, you'll fight me now or die-" Without warning, Gohan appears before the tyrant with most of the upper portion of his tuxedo tattered, yet without any real injuries. With a mighty yell, he drives his fist into Freeza's gut, causing him to cough up blood before kicking him into the street below.

"D-damn it! Kill him!" Yells one of the present PTO soldiers to his comrades, all of whom aim both their hands towards Gohan and fire off several large blasts of Ki at him. Ultimately wasted effort as Gohan, with a simple explosion of Ki destroys their attacks and vaporizes them out of existence. Out of the nearby, smoldering crater, he hears a Death Beam coming at him and swats it away with ease before dodging an oncoming barrage of punches and kicks courtesy of Freeza.

"Don't think you've won yet boy!" Proclaims the tyrant angrily, throwing any and all strategy to the wind, oblivious to the fact Gohan has absolutely no need to even evade his attacks. "I've still got a few tricks up my sleeve-" A swift smack to the face shuts him up, nearly knocking him right back down again.

"I already told you Freeza," Proclaims Gohan angrily. "If you want to fight, wait until we're done, not that it'll change the outcome."

"What?!" Yells the infuriated galactic overlord at his statement.

"Your android-like body might have let you get the jump on us, but you're sorely outclassed. I suggest you scurry off into space and spare yourself the embarrassment of dying again."

Despite his seething anger, the android does let a faint voice of reason break through this, warning him of the high possibility of Gohan's statement being true. Though he wanted to avoid resorting to it, Freeza sees that he may have no other choice but to die once more, not by himself, however. With a cackling laugh, Freeza smiles at the warrior who he first met as a small child all those years ago. "Perhaps you're right, I will die once again. But I'll gladly do it if it means taking you all with me!"

Ripping the synthetic flesh off his chest, Freeza reveals a series of highly advanced bombs placed where his heart should be much to the horror of most present. "With these little beauties, I've enough firepower to destroy your planet 5 times over! Even if you Super Monkey's survive the blast, I doubt the coldness of space will be as merciful!"

He initiates the countdown on the bombs, with the others bar Gohan look on in shock and horror, reminded of the time Cell nearly destroyed the Earth in a similar fashion and claiming Goku's life in the process. Gohan, however, remains calm and uppercuts Freeza before grabbing him by the tail. With all his might and speed, the most powerful fighter on Earth starts spinning himself and the helpless overlord in the air. Immediately becoming nothing but a white blur of motion to everyone except Goku and Vegeta.

"You asked for this, FFRRREEEEZZZZAAAAA!" Yells Gohan before tossing Freeza not just out of the planet, but out of their very solar system, only faintly hearing his screams of abject horror before blowing up in the cold, void of space where he can't hurt anyone anymore.

"Nice going Gohan!" States Goku proudly with a pat on his sons back. "For a minute there I was worried I was gonna have to blow up another Kai planet to save the Earth!"

Gohan's stern expression softens up with a chuckle. "Thanks, dad, I wasn't sure it would work but hey, its better than re-enacting the Cell Games."

The two laugh it off up in the sky before coming down, relaxing completely after this short scuffle, well the ones who're used to this sort of thing. Everyone else bar Mister Satan already fled the scene, even the hungry paparazzi. "Man, what a mess. I was freaking out over a lot of stuff, but this was definitely not one of them."

"You think we should postpone the wedding?" Asks Videl, not really in the mood for going through with the whole ceremony after an incident like this.

"Nah, I got a better idea." Without warning, he takes her in his hands bridal style and catches her lips in a deep kiss. "Let's just get to the honeymoon and sort out the rest later."

"Sounds like a plan." She gives him a mischievous smile before taking off in the arms of her kind of, sort of husband, completely ignoring the yells of Chi-Chi and Mister Satan cursing them for pulling a stunt like this on the happiest day of their lives. The others merely look on in laughter, happy for the two lovers and at the antics of their horrified parents.

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PTO Command Ship

"Well, well, that honestly couldn't have gone better than actually did." Admits Sorbet with a mischievous smirk on his face as he sits atop his throne in the ship's bridge, enjoying a cup of coffee while monitoring the events of the wedding before dialing a number exclusively given to him. A second holo-computer screen appears before him, revealing his master training beneath the Ki suppressing, gravity enhancing energy field in the middle of a hot, lava infested planet.

"This had better be good Sorbet, I'm finally on the verge of mastering my full power and I'm no mood for interruptions." States Freeza while launching a series of quick, successive punches and kicks in the air, with sweat covering his entire body thanks to the strain of both the planets atmosphere and the 400 times gravity he's training in.

"Your plan has worked Lord Freeza," States a pleased Sorbet, prompting Freeza to take a break for a moment to bask in the success. "The fake Freeza and squadron we sent attacked the wedding just as intended and told them of your revival. With him dead now, the Namekian will not dig deeper into the circumstances of your resurrection."

Freeza lets out an amused chuckle at this, smiling at this news despite the strain throughout his body. "Excellent news indeed Sorbet, truly you've proven yourself far more capable and resourceful than any second-in-command I've had in the past. I could not have done any of this without you."

"Think nothing of it Lord Freeza, it is my duty, of course, to serve you," He replies politely with a bow. "I've also news of our latest conquests, it seems the first batch of soldiers you commanded to train under our more primitive gravity machines have conquered over 8 worlds in the span of a week, with 12 the week prior. Our funds have skyrocketed in ways I've not seen in many years."

"Very good, see to it that our gravity machine training continues expanding, the more capable soldier we have, the sooner we'll not only return to our original strength but surpass it as well."

"It shall be done my lord." Sorbet bows once more, ending communication with his master, leaving him to joyfully continue his training, content that his plan is going smoothly and his victory growing ever closer to becoming a reality.

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A/N: No, Freeza won't have an army of Androids. This was nothing but a drone reworked to appear like Freeza with certain audio clips and mannerisms taken from the man himself. Part of a ploy to throw of Piccolo and anyone else who may still be suspicious with the truth.

And yes, Gohan is 100% Mystic/Ultimate/Potential Unlocked in this chapter and for the remainder of the story. No randomly going Super Saiyan here folks.
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I was wondering why "Frieza's" a android lol. Gohan whooped his way too easily and the fact he has knowledge on them and going in only 10 fold what he last was, was suicidal XD I was like "wtf...?" 😂

That ending had me scared though, Frieza still working out 😢

Good release man.
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All caught up.

Freeza crashing the wedding was pretty cool. I loved that entire scene. It was even more wacky when it was just an android. So, we know this fight will surface again in the future, and hopefully Gohan and Videl can finish their wedding.
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All caught up.

Freeza crashing the wedding was pretty cool. I loved that entire scene. It was even more wacky when it was just an android. So, we know this fight will surface again in the future, and hopefully Gohan and Videl can finish their wedding.
They'll have a proper ceremony re-do off screen. This is going to be the last we see of the Earth gang until a certain someone comes at a little party of theirs ;)
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