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DB:DSoT Ver.2
Topic Started: Feb 8 2015, 04:03 AM (6,133 Views)
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Aug 14 2015, 01:31 AM
Dope a*** chapter man! I swear that's all I can say man, the talking and visualizations were excellent man. Uub a*** a beast, literally lol, I loving how you introducing this power of Kid Buu within him. Griever, my favorite Ancient God btw ;) , that guy has issues and that's good on my book given his behavior. And Vegeta always think he's the strongest (top 4 though as I see) but he better watch out, I don't think the others are currently working together. Griever didn't give a f***, Uub being powered by evil via Kid Buu definitely don't give a f***, Vegeta's smug XD , and Zueva's all ease with the current situation.

I definitely gotta see the next one now lol.

10/10 man. Good s***.
Thanks man, I figured if I took my time with this one instead of writing it all out in one go like I usually do, then it was bound to have a better impact on my readers. And it seems I wasn't wrong! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, it's amazing how all four are there to fight too. We got... an Ancient God, a being of evil that has existed since the dawn of time, the strongest and most smug Saiyan warrior to have ever existed, and a psychopath magic user whom is under the control of another psychopath magic user. I think seeing who the victor of this match will be intense, and I don't expect any one of these guys to give in easily. Boo-Oob is more or less primal in nature which I imagine prevents him from feeling pain, Griever is an Ancient God that was tasked to go against Ultimecia, Vegeta is stubborn and prideful to a fault, and Zueva seems to take mortal wounds with a grain of salt.
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Bet Goku's broken in other world lol
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Aug 14 2015, 03:08 AM
Bet Goku's broken in other world lol
I imagine the people of otherworld would be a little off-put by two pairs of legs walking about asking questions and for directions lol.
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Aug 14 2015, 03:19 AM
Solid Snake
Aug 14 2015, 03:08 AM
Bet Goku's broken in other world lol
I imagine the people of otherworld would be a little off-put by two pairs of legs walking about asking questions and for directions lol.
XD nah I meant mentally that his confident self is worthless compared to the currently top 4 strongest beings in the universe.
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Bet Goku's broken in other world lol
I imagine the people of otherworld would be a little off-put by two pairs of legs walking about asking questions and for directions lol.
XD nah I meant mentally that his confident self is worthless compared to the currently top 4 strongest beings in the universe.
Oooooh, yeah I guess that would make more sense lol.

I would imagine instead of feeling worthless he's instead trying to figure out how Vegeta got that transformation so that he himself could achieve it...perhaps by normal means rather than magic...
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Dope chapter indeed, man. 10/10. I was definitely able to visualize all the action perfectly, and I had the feeling of not wanting the chapter to end. This chapter felt really TV show-like, which is good.

I dug all the back and forth action, along with the awesome art of Griever and the Lionheart visual.

Griever surfacing was awesome, but I'm truly enjoying the Boo-Oob animal you have going on. Now that was my s***. I can't wait to see him in action, especially alongside Griever.

10/10.
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Aug 14 2015, 06:02 AM
Dope chapter indeed, man. 10/10. I was definitely able to visualize all the action perfectly, and I had the feeling of not wanting the chapter to end. This chapter felt really TV show-like, which is good.

I dug all the back and forth action, along with the awesome art of Griever and the Lionheart visual.

Griever surfacing was awesome, but I'm truly enjoying the Boo-Oob animal you have going on. Now that was my s***. I can't wait to see him in action, especially alongside Griever.

10/10.
Glad you liked it man, also sorry for not responding until now. Had school yesterday and spent a long time writing the next chapter for a good chunk of time at school. I then came home and just relaxed.

I too am digging the Boo-Oob beast, I have a few ideas in mind for him combat wise. I'm going to try to make this next chapter bonkers with what goes on fight-wise.
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Chapter 9. Destructive Balance Delayed by a Mysterious Newcomer; As You Command Operator
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That was a dark episode. "Enlighten One," huh? I like that, and casted a smile the first time I read it. I'm ready to see more of him already.

Beerus showing up around this time felt natural to me. This whole case of gods in the mix will be exciting.

I think I see where you're going. It appears the Illuminati managed to get a hold of DSoT as well. Lmao.
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I think this sums up my thoughts pretty well about the mind f***ery going on here....





Genuinely not the kind of stuff I expect out of a Z fic but damn was it well done. I do think that it could've been spaced out more, the big wall of text was kind of intimidating for me at first to read lol.
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That was a dark episode. "Enlighten One," huh? I like that, and casted a smile the first time I read it. I'm ready to see more of him already.

Beerus showing up around this time felt natural to me. This whole case of gods in the mix will be exciting.

I think I see where you're going. It appears the Illuminati managed to get a hold of DSoT as well. Lmao.


Once I get Rain's fic over here you'll be able to see a lot more of him. But he'll have a lot more appearances in DSoT too. You probably saw on the other forum, but Rain's appearance in DSoT is pretty far along in his own story.

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I think this sums up my thoughts pretty well about the mind f***ery going on here....





Genuinely not the kind of stuff I expect out of a Z fic but damn was it well done. I do think that it could've been spaced out more, the big wall of text was kind of intimidating for me at first to read lol.


That got a good laugh out of me xD. Fair enough on the wall of text, was somewhat rushed and I wanted to get something out to everyone here since I haven't updated since August.
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Chapter 10. Griever vs Vegeta: Round One
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That meme though lmao. Vegeta got his a*** whooped no lie XD feel bad for him. Btw, just for clarification, he's a Super Saiyan 4 or something else?
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Dec 24 2015, 04:21 AM
That meme though lmao. Vegeta got his a*** whooped no lie XD feel bad for him. Btw, just for clarification, he's a Super Saiyan 4 or something else?
He is the first variant of Super Saiyan 4, the one that is coloured brown. He still has his more powerful golden version.
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Hell yeah. Vegeta got embarrassed in this one, but it was a nice scuffle, with a lot of "smack talk" haha.

I like the first grade of SSj4--ready for the "golden grade," if you will.
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