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Topic Started: Feb 8 2015, 04:03 AM (6,134 Views)
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You're Vegeta continues to amaze me. Though Goku being so overconfident deserves to be tone down, and this eerie Vegeta is just the person to do it. Nice fighting as well, gonna try and get a few ideas from that particular fight if you don't mind?
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You're Vegeta continues to amaze me. Though Goku being so overconfident deserves to be tone down, and this eerie Vegeta is just the person to do it. Nice fighting as well, gonna try and get a few ideas from that particular fight if you don't mind?
Go ahead, I don't think I can copyright the way someone fights anyway lol.
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That chapter was badass, dude! I can't wait for the next because it's intense right now.

Kudos for bringing out Dance Ritual Gohkan. What made you do that?

This upcoming fight is going to be really good. Keep throwing these chapters at us if you can man. You're inspiring me to get things in gear.
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Kudos for bringing out Dance Ritual Gohkan. What made you do that?


Well, he could've fused with Oob but it wouldn't bring about as much power since Goku would have to suppress himself to Oob's level. Think back to Gohan and Goku saying once Oob was unconscious that the real fight was going to begin.

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This upcoming fight is going to be really good. Keep throwing these chapters at us if you can man. You're inspiring me to get things in gear.


I'll try man. I've been having a sudden surge of writer's bliss recently.
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Right on. You sound free with your story. It's working in my opinion. Keep doing what you're doing.
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Chapter 6. Ahead of Schedule; A New Challenger Appears




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Can't wait for this Kai version of this fight man. So the guy that helped Vegeta also had an alternative objective in Vegeta's ascension?
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This chapter was great; I dig it. I feel like you and I were greatly thinking around the same time. haha. I'm ready for this mysterious exoskeleton opponent.
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So the guy that helped Vegeta also had an alternative objective in Vegeta's ascension?


Yep, the five subjects he has in the stasis chambers are vessels for Saiyan DNA. He would've likely of managed to get them fully functionable in a decade or two, but Vegeta showing up was more or less a godsend that he just couldn't pass up. Like a delicious fruit that you can reach out and grab and nothing is stopping you.

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This chapter was great; I dig it. I feel like you and I were greatly thinking around the same time. haha. I'm ready for this mysterious exoskeleton opponent.


So am I, but they may have their hands full with Zueva. It'll be interesting to see how this plays out since there are potentially two foes they'll have to face.
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Chapter 7. Zueva Fights, Three Down, Two to Go
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Damn. Zu ain't no joke. That was a brutal scuffle. Did I read right about the duo dying? What the hell? Props for the fusion and souls concept. It's about time we got our questions answered for that case.

9/10 chapter. That was really good.
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I definitely agree with PG 100% tbh I'm glad it wasn't super duper duper long though now I definitely see a superb reason to stay toned! Ate my hot fries and honeybun reading this and when I saw what my "bae from another papa" did to the fusion I was terrified at such an ability in good way. I loved that like hell lol. That's so...so scary XD

Uub and Vegeta need to come in the action now things might not go well for Squally, if Griever don't make that appearance soon, but I'm confident in his prowess too. I'm sad Goku died though tbh but I like the direction this is going man.

Very good chapter man. Zueva does seem far more merciless too now I noticed a bit. Am I right in that regard or nah?
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Damn. Zu ain't no joke. That was a brutal scuffle. Did I read right about the duo dying? What the hell? Props for the fusion and souls concept. It's about time we got our questions answered for that case.

9/10 chapter. That was really good.


Thank you, and yes, I've always kind of felt that the fusion simply had both souls inside the body. Also yes, they both died in a Mortal Kombat fashion.

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I definitely agree with PG 100% tbh I'm glad it wasn't super duper duper long though now I definitely see a superb reason to stay toned! Ate my hot fries and honeybun reading this and when I saw what my "bae from another papa" did to the fusion I was terrified at such an ability in good way. I loved that like hell lol. That's so...so scary XD


Thank you, I felt that Zueva had a fairly limited selection of abilities. So, rectified that.

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Uub and Vegeta need to come in the action now things might not go well for Squally, if Griever don't make that appearance soon, but I'm confident in his prowess too. I'm sad Goku died though tbh but I like the direction this is going man.


Indeed, Squall seems quite a bit outmatched here.

Yeah, since Trunks isn't there (yet) I had to have someone be the lamb to slaughter. Just wouldn't be Zueva if she didn't kill someone right off the bat, why not three? lol

I'm still going through ideas as to how I want Griever to make his appearance here, granted he already kind of has... but I mean in a more physical way. Since this is technically a reboot I need to use some fresh ideas here.

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Very good chapter man. Zueva does seem far more merciless too now I noticed a bit. Am I right in that regard or nah?


Yep, whereas before she was somewhat in control of herself, she's more akin to how Irvine and Quistis were controlled. Not exhibiting much of a personality and instead being silent but effective killing machines.
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Chapter 8. Squall vs Zueva; SeeD Elite vs Terminator Femme; Vegeta's arrival; Oob's Power From Within


Key for inner dialogue: Boo Inside=Deep Pink Griever=White, Oob=Pink, Squall=Orange, Ultimecia=Purple

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Dope a*** chapter man! I swear that's all I can say man, the talking and visualizations were excellent man. Uub a*** a beast, literally lol, I loving how you introducing this power of Kid Buu within him. Griever, my favorite Ancient God btw ;) , that guy has issues and that's good on my book given his behavior. And Vegeta always think he's the strongest (top 4 though as I see) but he better watch out, I don't think the others are currently working together. Griever didn't give a f***, Uub being powered by evil via Kid Buu definitely don't give a f***, Vegeta's smug XD , and Zieva's all ease with the current situation.

I definitely gotta see the next one now lol.

10/10 man. Good s***.
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