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May 8 2015, 10:34 PM
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You're Vegeta continues to amaze me. Though Goku being so overconfident deserves to be tone down, and this eerie Vegeta is just the person to do it. Nice fighting as well, gonna try and get a few ideas from that particular fight if you don't mind?
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May 8 2015, 10:46 PM
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You're Vegeta continues to amaze me. Though Goku being so overconfident deserves to be tone down, and this eerie Vegeta is just the person to do it. Nice fighting as well, gonna try and get a few ideas from that particular fight if you don't mind? Go ahead, I don't think I can copyright the way someone fights anyway lol.
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May 8 2015, 11:27 PM
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That chapter was badass, dude! I can't wait for the next because it's intense right now.
Kudos for bringing out Dance Ritual Gohkan. What made you do that?
This upcoming fight is going to be really good. Keep throwing these chapters at us if you can man. You're inspiring me to get things in gear.
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May 9 2015, 12:15 AM
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Kudos for bringing out Dance Ritual Gohkan. What made you do that?
Well, he could've fused with Oob but it wouldn't bring about as much power since Goku would have to suppress himself to Oob's level. Think back to Gohan and Goku saying once Oob was unconscious that the real fight was going to begin.
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This upcoming fight is going to be really good. Keep throwing these chapters at us if you can man. You're inspiring me to get things in gear.
I'll try man. I've been having a sudden surge of writer's bliss recently.
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May 9 2015, 01:28 AM
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Right on. You sound free with your story. It's working in my opinion. Keep doing what you're doing.
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May 27 2015, 01:57 AM
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Chapter 6. Ahead of Schedule; A New Challenger Appears Stasis chambers are active, subjects are currently at 90% functionality.
A robotic sounding a.i. spoke as the sound of buttons being pressed filtered a large metallic room. In the center were five tanks in a circular formation, in the center were wires and sparks of electricity firing off here and there. In the tanks themselves were five humanoid figures floating with life support systems attached. Next to each chamber was a small rectangular box that was labelled DNA STABILIZER. The subjects were suspended in what seemed to be some kind of liquid, the more it seeped into them, the more poured in to replace it.
The sound of a few beeps ring about, then the sound of a sealed door opening. In walked a small looking green skinned man dressed in black robes, his walk spoke of one of confidence, one of joy as well. As though he had accomplished the seemingly impossible. For the most part he had, a certain magical aura erupted around his hand and the image of Vegeta without a tail showed within it. The small man walked towards a young looking one of his currently hammering away calculations and algorithms on the alien looking keyboard in the shape of a DNA symbol. The young one looked to his Father as he continue typing.
"Have you managed to grab any DNA for the Saiya-jin? Even if it's only a small withered hair? Maybe even an artifact..." The young one looked down at his Father's hand and realized what he had accomplished. A look of amazement and awe on his face.
"Even better... I've managed to replicate a full-blooded Saiya-jin's DNA. Not only any full-blooded Saiya-jin, but the Prince himself. He has made considerable progress in his growth, much moreso than I could've ever fathomed. I happened to run into him near the Veygtble sector, he had made a stop at a nearby planet that I happened to be on at the time. I may have come off as creepily excited to meet him, and I was met with a stern look and a mouthful. However, as soon as I saw that he was without a tail, I offered him a chance to regrow it. He told me that they were unnecessary, that was when he talked of Super Saiya-jin transformations. I realized at that point that the experimental form we had created was a mix between Oozaru and Super Saiya-jin, long locked away in the genes of the Saiya-jin themselves. As soon as I told him that the tail was the key to the next level, he couldn't resist. I happened to replicate his DNA with my magic, quick, grab the converter! We need to get this translated and implemented into the bodies as fast as possible. With this fresh DNA from such a powerful member of the Saiyan race, we should have no problem in rebuilding the Saiya-jins to help us take over this rock. Then, we can go further and purify this damned system, no, this universe in the corruption in bathes in."
The young family member raced off to find the designated device. The robed man formed a smile on his face as he realized the fruits of his labour coming true. It would only be a matter of time before he could release the Saiyans he had kept in stasis for so long.
=Back on Earth=
The going for Gokhan was currently not going well, throughout every clash they had. Gokhan would be on the losing end, eating more blows than he could throw out in return. Although Gokhan's expression had not changed from when they had started off, that same confident smile he had always had. If Vegeta were trying to break him, it wasn't working. Vegeta was however, content with the current situation. He was in control of the match as he had planned to be. Very few could stand against his might, the fact that Gokhan was struggling to keep up was testament to this. As the both of them took a brief hiatus, they both took to conversation.
"You're struggling." Vegeta said in a way to get on someone's nerves."
"You're right, perhaps I should bring it up a notch. I've been playing around a bit too much." Gokhan said as his aura turned golden as did his hair. Vegeta was a little off-put by the transformation since Gohan was a part of the fusion. He wrote it off as simply the fusion ignoring the ritual Gohan had done.
"Surprise surprise, transformations galore." Vegeta teased as he dropped into his stance once more, but as he did so he was interrupted. A large explosion in the distance took his attention off of Gokhan, and Gokhan's off of Vegeta's. Suddenly in both Vegeta's and Gokhan's head King Kai was hurriedly trying to send a message to them to warn them of what had just landed.
Vegeta! Gok- Goh- Gokhan! Zueva's just landed! Hurry! Before she starts destroying anything!
Vegeta crossed his arms, making an audible "hmmph" as he looked towards the landing sight. Gokhan looked over in that direction as well. Clenching his fist as he readied himself.
"This is far too early! You said we would have atleast another year!" Gokhan said in response.
"She cloaked and somehow warped herself near Earth far ahead of schedule, I couldn't even track her."
Damnit...
"I guess it's time to see if your fusion and my powerup are more than enough to handle her. Take the honors, I'm sure I won't be needed..." Vegeta said with a smile on his face as he flew to the sky and then far away from where they were. Leaving Gokhan to take Zueva on himself.
"Vegeta!" The fusion said in shocked horror as now he was the only one that could fight the being. Coming in now were Oob and Squall. Oob was far less useful at this point since he was not a fusion, and Squall was so far behind everyone else he may as well not even be there.
I have not been played a good hand...
=Out there, somewhere near Venus=
Operator, Ordus wonders if the operator would like to take a vacation on the beach.
A humorous a.i. asked its ship controller.
Ordus understands, Ordus will attempt to rectify this error.
A strange transmission came from a humanoid in an exoskeleton.
The operator would like to go to Earth, would you like to bring popcorn? Ordus hopes you appreciate this humour.
The ship uncloaked and began rocketing towards Earth, its operator hoping to get himself a piece of the action that he had sensed.
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May 27 2015, 02:42 PM
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滅Are you frightened?
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Can't wait for this Kai version of this fight man. So the guy that helped Vegeta also had an alternative objective in Vegeta's ascension?
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This chapter was great; I dig it. I feel like you and I were greatly thinking around the same time. haha. I'm ready for this mysterious exoskeleton opponent.
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May 27 2015, 08:47 PM
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So the guy that helped Vegeta also had an alternative objective in Vegeta's ascension?
Yep, the five subjects he has in the stasis chambers are vessels for Saiyan DNA. He would've likely of managed to get them fully functionable in a decade or two, but Vegeta showing up was more or less a godsend that he just couldn't pass up. Like a delicious fruit that you can reach out and grab and nothing is stopping you.
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This chapter was great; I dig it. I feel like you and I were greatly thinking around the same time. haha. I'm ready for this mysterious exoskeleton opponent.
So am I, but they may have their hands full with Zueva. It'll be interesting to see how this plays out since there are potentially two foes they'll have to face.
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Jul 26 2015, 06:10 AM
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Chapter 7. Zueva Fights, Three Down, Two to Go Gokhan, Oob, and Squall were standing next to one another looking on in horror as they left to confront a threat they were warned about years prior by King Kai. A threat supposedly far beyond their reach in power, of course, this was without the knowledge that Vegeta would of stumbled upon such a miraculous power-up, even so... there was a feeling of uneasiness.
Did Vegeta leave because he knew we would win? Did he leave because he wanted to watch afar as we were brutalized before he would swoop in like some hero?
Squall thought as he began moving forward towards the crash site behind the others. Squall looked to Oob, whom seemed rather uneasy, and rightfully so. Gokhan, despite showing some reluctance at first, seemed to have a confident look to him. Perhaps the fusion technique was useful in that seemed to pick mostly the positive aspects of both fighters. Perhaps that was why Gokhan seemed to be beyond the fear Oob was feeling, that, or Gokhan was simply posturing. Which given the circumstances was likely what was needed to keep morale high.
As they stepped in front of the pod as it opened. Gokhan couldn't help but tap into the memories of Goku, specifically of King Kai warning Goku of the incoming threat.
=King Kai's Planet=
"Goku! This is no joke, Zueva will do much more than just kill you, she aims to destroy the planet itself!"
"King Kai, no offense... but I've dealt with much worse."
"No Goku! She's different in that she's much like Boo in that she doesn't care for fighting respectfully, she'll destroy the planet while you're fighting! She can survive in space, you can't!"
=Earth=
Gokhan shook his head as Zueva stepped out of her pod. She had green skin, a much lighter tone than Piccolo's. Her hair was of a darker green, so much so that it looked more black than green. Of course, that was only what they could see from her head, for her body was covered in a black armour. Surrounding her was an aura of... control. Not that she imposed herself, but as if she were not herself. Her eyes spoke volumes of this, as they were blank. She held up a hand towards Gokhan, Squall, and Oob and from it emerged a force invisible yet powerful enough to send them hurling back into seperate pillars of rock. Embedding Squall and Oob, Gokhan quickly removing himself.
"What the..." Gokhan said as he planted himself into the ground.
"Do you speak?" No response, she seemed to be a void, unfeeling, if there were any shred of humanity in her, it had to of been removed long ago. She lowered her hand and raised another, this time a small circle of fire formed in her palm. Just from that small amount Gokhan was beginning to sweat, as soon as Zueva fired the blast. Gokhan teleported out of the way...
The Earth's atmosphere burned, the planet literally melting down to its core before becoming nothing more than a hot liquidy substance with heat to challenge the flames of the sun itself.
...atleast that is what Squall saw before he came to, seeing Gokhan readying to teleport at any moment as soon as Zueva fired her blast. Squall, having seen the result of said blast, moves his arm from its embeded tomb of rock and holds it up at Zueva.
Just need to nullify that spell...
Zueva's spell began to fizz out, getting a somewhat surprised reaction as Zueva checked her hand to see why her spell gave out. Gokhan, seizing the opportunity, leaps out with a right. Landing smack dab on the occupied Zueva... but to his horror Zueva had not moved one inch. In fact, her head hadn't moved whatsoever. She was still focused on her hand, when she did look back at Gokhan. She responded with a simple slap across the face the downed Gokhan. While in this downed state Zueva formed another spell in her hand. Then quickly thrusted for Gokhan's back, passing through like a ghost as she grabbed what looked to be two unconscious forms of spirits. Goku and Gohan. The more they were pulled out, the more Gokhan's body simply disappeared. Once they were completely out, Gokhan was no more and Goku and Gohan were physical once more.
Goku and Gohan suddenly came to life as they began to squirm around in a panic.
"Hey- owww oww oww!" Goku yelled as did Gohan. They were soon silenced, albeit in a gory manner as Zueva smashed the both of them together at a speed so fast that Goku and Gohan simply melded into one another, more or less vaporizing their upper halves. Zueva let the half-bodies drop to the ground, still apathetic to the deaths. Oob, still unconscious, had no reaction. But Squall, the only other one still conscious, felt dread as Zueva set her sights on him. Walking towards him like a feminine juggernaut. She was more of a machine than anything resembling humanity, like a Terminator from those old movies.
You think it's about time I boogy?
The voice in Squall's head said, the one coming from that odd being he had met some time ago.
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Jul 27 2015, 05:34 AM
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Damn. Zu ain't no joke. That was a brutal scuffle. Did I read right about the duo dying? What the hell? Props for the fusion and souls concept. It's about time we got our questions answered for that case.
9/10 chapter. That was really good.
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I definitely agree with PG 100% tbh I'm glad it wasn't super duper duper long though now I definitely see a superb reason to stay toned! Ate my hot fries and honeybun reading this and when I saw what my "bae from another papa" did to the fusion I was terrified at such an ability in good way. I loved that like hell lol. That's so...so scary XD
Uub and Vegeta need to come in the action now things might not go well for Squally, if Griever don't make that appearance soon, but I'm confident in his prowess too. I'm sad Goku died though tbh but I like the direction this is going man.
Very good chapter man. Zueva does seem far more merciless too now I noticed a bit. Am I right in that regard or nah?
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Damn. Zu ain't no joke. That was a brutal scuffle. Did I read right about the duo dying? What the hell? Props for the fusion and souls concept. It's about time we got our questions answered for that case.
9/10 chapter. That was really good.
Thank you, and yes, I've always kind of felt that the fusion simply had both souls inside the body. Also yes, they both died in a Mortal Kombat fashion.
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I definitely agree with PG 100% tbh I'm glad it wasn't super duper duper long though now I definitely see a superb reason to stay toned! Ate my hot fries and honeybun reading this and when I saw what my "bae from another papa" did to the fusion I was terrified at such an ability in good way. I loved that like hell lol. That's so...so scary XD
Thank you, I felt that Zueva had a fairly limited selection of abilities. So, rectified that.
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Uub and Vegeta need to come in the action now things might not go well for Squally, if Griever don't make that appearance soon, but I'm confident in his prowess too. I'm sad Goku died though tbh but I like the direction this is going man.
Indeed, Squall seems quite a bit outmatched here.
Yeah, since Trunks isn't there (yet) I had to have someone be the lamb to slaughter. Just wouldn't be Zueva if she didn't kill someone right off the bat, why not three? lol
I'm still going through ideas as to how I want Griever to make his appearance here, granted he already kind of has... but I mean in a more physical way. Since this is technically a reboot I need to use some fresh ideas here.
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Very good chapter man. Zueva does seem far more merciless too now I noticed a bit. Am I right in that regard or nah?
Yep, whereas before she was somewhat in control of herself, she's more akin to how Irvine and Quistis were controlled. Not exhibiting much of a personality and instead being silent but effective killing machines.
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Chapter 8. Squall vs Zueva; SeeD Elite vs Terminator Femme; Vegeta's arrival; Oob's Power From Within Squall's vision escapes from the realm of the outside and instead turns to that of inside the confines of his mind. Leaving him, and the vague being in his mind that has taken residence, guarding the gateway to something important. Not yet. I still have to try. What you're suggesting sounds like a last ditch, and I don't think this has gotten anywhere near that point yet.You really are stubborn, I'm offering an easy solution. You give control to me, this woman goes down in a minute flat. That I can guarantee, all you gotta do is give me control of your body for a few moments.I think I can handle her by myself, she's extremely powerful, but it shouldn't be too difficult. SeeD prepares us for situation such as these, things like T-Rexaurs I can slay in a few hacks. She shouldn't be anymore powerful than that of a monster, not unless she's a sorceress.Hate to break it to you kid, but she's far beyond that of those giant chickens. Your use of the Guardian Force may make you stronger than peak humans, but that by no means puts you above the likes of these ki users.Chi? The kind that Seifer uses?Similar, although instead of turning the ki into things like flame, these fighters instead opt to use the ki in its raw state that flows through their bodies. In this way they enhance themselves in much the same way you do with Guardian Force, except for them, they don't run the risk of losing memories, as the ki does not take space in the brain like your reliance on the GF do. For them, their ki is their junction, their enhancer. To fight at their level, you would need a much more powerful Guardian Force that is on their level to do anything to the degree physically that they can. They are masters of their art, a form that is mostly lost aside from the dude you mentioned... Seifer was it?Tell you what, I'm going to hold off for now. I'll come in when you actually need me, thing is though. From here I can only give you pointers, here's one. Don't get physical with her, that's a battle you wouldn't win in a thousand years. What you need to do is keep your distance, a few minor time manipulation spells should get the job done to keep the distance. From there, you need to barrage her with a variety of elemental spells, I need to get a read of what exactly she can do. Try to keep away from using fire, she seems to have a much more powerful repertoire of fire spells than you. No need in attempting an action into futility, got me?I guess, not much point in arguing with you.That's damn right, now. You're going to want to start moving quickly since she's beginning to close in on you, break your way out of there with a quake spell, it should crumble the rocks enough to allow not only yourself an escape, but to stop her momentarily and perhaps give you some much needed space. That is... if she is not capable of sensing energy signatures, if she is... you're tough s*** out of luck. But if that's what it comes to, I'll be here.Squall mentally nodded to the figure in his head, his vision returning to the world outside his head as he saw Zueva getting closer to him. For some reason she had decided to not simply melt him and the Earth, it were as if she were slightly amused by his ability to fizz out her spell. Somehow, she knew it was him and not just a malfunction on her end. As if the hand that guided her zombie-like existence knew who and when and how it happened and who did it. Squall, realizing he was to doom himself by pondering. Took to the being's words and began his strategy. Raising his hand, orbs circling them as he placed said hand to the ground. Small cracks forming along the ground, slowly spreading to the rest of the hill. The Earth beneath both Squall and Zueva's feet began to shake with ferocious intensity, forcing Zueva to land on her butt. She shook her head slightly before simply taking to the skies at an incredible pace, watching the hill crumbling from above. Waiting for Squall like a child waits for ants to come from the ant-hill. A merely observatory action in mind. It would seem she herself wanted to feel Squall out before blindly attacking. The presence that guided her seemingly aware of what Squall is capable of doing. The hill began to collapse, and from within Squall had casted a small bubble in the colour of sky blue around himself. Shielding him from the incoming debris that would likely harm him in some fashion, instead, the debris bounced off the sphere. Squall trying his best to focus while the loud sound from the collapse was deafening him and rattling his vision. Making all but the most basic of actions difficult to do. Run forward, the path is clear for now.Squall, not distrusting of the higher presence, heeded his advice and ran forward blindly, barely avoiding falling chunks of Earth that could have crushed him. In what the presence had said, Squall was squishy in comparison to the rest of the fighters present or that had been present. For large rocks of the size Squall was dealing with were of no worry, hell, even mountains collapsing on them were of no problem. Soon, Squall emerged from underneath the rubble. Around him twas' covered in smoke and dust of the desert, choking the ability to see and strangling the ability to breath correctly. Squall, however, now with most of his senses back intact took to the advice he had been given. Running away from the asphyxiating cloud his actions had caused, into the clear, where he could then formulate a way to get Zueva to move on the defensive. Looking around, he found it difficult to even just find her. Had she simply just decided the fight wasn't worth it? Had Vegeta stepped in at some point and ended her existence? It was hard to tell, it were only smart that he use a scan spell on her. To find her within this area. Holding his hand to the sky, a clear orb found its destination of circling Squall's hand, to dispersing in the sky and creating a dome like effect around the area. Squall, looking at his hand, immediately found her position. Dead above. Looking to the sky, he saw that same, unfeeling, cold and dead glare she gave off. It was off-putting to say the least. Realizing he should take advantage of this opportunity, he took a few leaps backwards and when he stopped, he held his hands out towards her. Multiple orbs forming around each one. Both of them began to fire a seemingly endless stream of spheres, each one a different element. Some of ice, others of electricity, some of water, others of wind energy. Each one finding their mark smack dab in the breastplate of Zueva's armour. Each one dissipating with an explosion of said element upon Zueva. The water in its compressed state releasing much more a punch than one could think, as well as dousing her in the fluid which would conveniently make her an excellent lightning rod for the incoming electrical spheres. Zueva soon looked like the equivalent of a fleshy tesla rod, bolts of electric energy began to course about her being in spectacular fashion. The light given off a bright radiance of white and light blue. Not too long after were the barrage of concentrated winds that broke free from the orbs encasing them, seeking to strike the armour and the exposed head of Zueva. Once more, Zueva stood still as she was barraged by the variety pack of spells. Wind currents striking across the length of her entire body. Squall looked on, waiting for the barrage to end in order to assess the damage that was done. Zueva, still upright and in the air slowly begun to float towards Squall. It would seem that everything Squall threw at her did virtually nothing aside from lightning scars on her face that soon disappeared. Not what I was expecting...Zueva soon floated her way in front of Squall, landing with a small bit of Earth kicking around her legs as well as some strong winds. The wind nearly knocking Squall off his feet, making him take a knee in order to stabilize himself. A small smile forming on Zueva's face as she reached down, grabbed him by the neck, and lifted him to eye level. Leaving him squirming about, trying to free himself from her grip. Zueva nonchalantly brings one of her fingers underneath Squall's chin and lifts his head to where she could get a look into his light-blue eyes, Squall more or less forced to look into her rose red eyes. Oh how wonderful it would be to end your existence with just my first attempt, there's nothing standing in the way of me doing so. I could do this in a variety of ways... rip your limbs off and let you bleed out, chop your head off and watch you look around frantically for thirty seconds before your brain shuts off, methodically pierce you with shard upon shard until I feel like putting one through your head or cast a gravity so far beyond Earth's that you're grinded to dust...I don't think it's going to be quite that simple Ultimecia.That voice sounds familiar... speak, you sound like one I've run across before.How can you forget about me? I was your first time... in terms of someone that decided you weren't going any further. Griever, cupcake, how can you forget? It saddens me deeply...I see. Fine. I'm content in destroying two annoying pests in one body. The body I have control of should be more than proper for this task...Oh please attempt to do that, I've been dying to feel anything but solitude for the past seventeen years. Scrooge over here isn't very social except when it benefits him....WhateverHow you ended up in this boy's mind I will never understand, nevertheless, you two shall perish and become a victim of time just like the rest that dare try to stand in my way.But that time was yet to come, as Zueva's grip on Squall loosened completely as well as Zueva being flung to the distance at a speed that was impossible for Squall to see. In front of Squall stood Oob, whom had recently awoken. And whom's power was now spiking tremendously above where his former level was at. Not on the level of the former Gokhan, but impressive enough to warrant merit. "It's not over yet!!!" Hmm... her grip on your mind seems to have vanished, good. Even better is the fighter in front of you, you can support him with a few spells here and there... it won't do much speaking from a relativity stand point, he is after all nowhere near her league. Let's see just how far we can bug her.Playing with Ultimecia's emotions aren't going to get us anywhere...I know, it's just fun to do. She easily angersYou're going to get us all killed..Not sure about that happening to you, but the others might.You're f***ed up...And you're an anti-social with enough edge to cut anything...Whatever Oob picks off from the ground with a force tremendous enough to leave a small crater where he stood, now in pursuit of the distant Zueva who was now just recovering from the unforeseen sucker punch from the now conscious warrior. Squall now rose to his feet, trying his best to focus on where Oob was, but to no avail. Since you're here, I may as well ask for some assistance. Can you help me pinpoint and keep track of that fighter?Jeez, what do I look like? Your mother?You're seriously going to do this?Well... it requires giving me a part of your body, if you're not willing to give me your entire body, why the hell would you only give me your eyes?I will, if I knew how. You're being very abstract.Are... did... did you just make fun of the fact I don't have physical form? Was that some sort of play on circumstance?...I have to share my mind's residence with a moron.Sheesh, fine then. Now I'm not going to share anything with you... d***.Cut it out! He's getting slaughtered out there! She's standing still while all I hear is him yelling out in pain.As Squall said this, Oob in the distance was getting the equivalent of a pinball being smacked by a master of pinball machines. Being slapped around the sky in a fashion that can only be described as a ragdoll being hit by an entire team of legendary baseball sluggers. I should care...why?Because I'm f***ing telling you to do it, if you're not going to then so help me god I'm going to try to the best of my ability to get us both killed.Ok, ok, ok, ok. Point made. Basically, free your mind like a monk does. As soon as you let go, I can bring about a physical aspect of myself to your physical body. Think of it like an augmentation to what you already have. Easy enough, right?...I don't know how to meditate.Oh boy...Meanwhile, Oob had just escaped Zueva's onslaught. However, he only just barely accomplished this. In doing so he crashed to the ground back first with no control, tumbling about on the ground. Only stopping when he smacked into a large cliffside, causing the overhanging to collapse on him. Groaning as he pulled from his reserves to stand and to clear the rubble around him. This difference is ridiculous, how can someone get that much power... it's unfair. First it's Vegeta with that ridiculous powerup, and now it's Zueva with barely any effort... I, just need to hold out and hope that Vegeta gets here soon. Although I think he doesn't care for us at this point...Oob looked up and saw Zueva up in the sky looking directly at him, waiting for him to attack next. She is dumb, she leaves herself open. Attack, with all you have. I have lot of power for you to use.Oob nodded, tapping into his own innermost energy he could pull from. The pools of which were not entirely of his own and that were that of which belonged to a being of formerly pure evil and nothing but it. Oob's power began to skyrocket as his body propelled itself in pursuit of Zueva, whom suddenly for once had an expression that changed from uncaring to suddenly afraid. However, to her own horror and to the annoyance of Ultimecia. Oob's speed had briefly far surpassed hers as he closed in. His fist out, his mouth open yelling to the top of his ability, and the slight image of him as the being of evil. Pure Boo. *SPLAT* Zueva looked down, Oob's fist had gone straight through her armour, through her abdomen, and through her back. Oob looked absolutely drained and began to doze off. Eventually falling unconscious and slipping his now bloody fist out of her backside, out of the hole, and then drifting to the ground unconscious. Zueva began to frantically feel around her new body modification. Seemingly unbelieving that someone had managed to wound her, bringing a finger to her face, she examined her red blood. A sign of her mortality. Then, as if she had suddenly forgotten the fear of death... began to laugh. "It's been so long since I've been harmed, I almost forgot how it was to be afraid for once..." She paused, licking the blood off her finger. "I also forgot that such small wounds aren't enough to kill me." She now looked down at Oob, pointing the open palm of her right hand at him. "Thank you, for making me feel alive once more." Zueva began to formulate a lightning spell in her hand, sparks flying left and right about her hand... until she heard something reminiscent of Squall's voice, except in a deeper tone and a tad more raspy. "Finally! Got this working right!" The new, Squall-like being said. Upon his head were now five horns, three connected at the base, two off to the side. His eyes were now of an orange colour, around them with a pronounced outline to them. His hair had grown longer to a massive degree, similar to Goku's third transformation, but much thicker and wider, he also had two thick locklets of hair resting upon his shoulders. The hair itself was coloured silver, alongside everything, Squall had grown in muscle mass quite a bit. So much so that his clothes were straining, his Gunblade also seemed to be glowing blue. Something that was visible even though it was sheathed.  "About time that brat let me out, been far too long since I've smelled natural fresh air. Stupid though, did he really think I'd only change out his eyes?" Griever said as he shook his head. "Naive I suppose." Griever then looked over to Zueva, giving a two finger wave to her. Then looking behind her as Oob rose... although he seemed to change as well. Taking on more characteristics of Pure Boo, with mostly black eyes and only small red dots at the center. "OoooOOOo!!!" Oob said as he began to beat his chest like some sort of primal ape. "That looks familiar, like... Boo. Haven't seen him in... gosh... eons at the very least..." Griever said as he rubbed the back of his head. Just then between the three fighters landed Vegeta, in his unique ascended form. Looking at all three of the other combatants whom's power seemed to be on a similar plane of his own. "Well, it seems massive power is a bargain sale nowadays. No matter... it doesn't worry me how far you've gotten, I'm still the most powerful out of all of you..." "I wouldn't be too stuck on yourself like that..." Griever said as he unsheathed his Gunblade, which was enhanced by his godly power. Giving it its blue colour and transformation from the regular Revolver gunblade model Squall had. This blade... an old friend of mine, Lionheart.  Zueva stopped her hand, instead bringing it to her side as she landed lightly on the ground, with a smirk on her face. Amused by Vegeta's smug confidence. "Oh how wrong you are..." "OooOOOooOOO, BOO! OOB!" The four stood looking at one another, waiting for the other to launch the first strike. Somewhat similar to a Mexican Standoff in the old west, except here the powers at work could do much more damage to the Earth than just a mere bullet. Each one capable of destroying the planet nonchalantly with nothing more than an accidental missed punch. Griever stood with his Lionheart Gunblade rested over his shoulders, Oob beating his chest, Vegeta in his combat stance, and Zueva with a few different spells in her hand.
Key for inner dialogue: Boo Inside=Deep Pink Griever=White, Oob=Pink, Squall=Orange, Ultimecia=Purple
A special thank you to Haise Sasaki for her drawing of Griever.
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Aug 14 2015, 01:31 AM
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Dope a*** chapter man! I swear that's all I can say man, the talking and visualizations were excellent man. Uub a*** a beast, literally lol, I loving how you introducing this power of Kid Buu within him. Griever, my favorite Ancient God btw , that guy has issues and that's good on my book given his behavior. And Vegeta always think he's the strongest (top 4 though as I see) but he better watch out, I don't think the others are currently working together. Griever didn't give a f***, Uub being powered by evil via Kid Buu definitely don't give a f***, Vegeta's smug XD , and Zieva's all ease with the current situation.
I definitely gotta see the next one now lol.
10/10 man. Good s***.
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