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DB:DSoT Ver.2
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~~Professor Gohan~~	May 3 2015, 03:20 AM Post #31
Posts: 0 Group: GTFO Member #6,938 Joined: November 2, 2011 Gender Not Specified Country Chile	Exactly. ^ Plus, it appears Toriyama was kinda heading in that direction during the Boo arc, back when he was strong in the manga. Edited by Professor Gohan, May 3 2015, 03:22 AM.



+ Solid Snake	May 3 2015, 03:53 AM Post #32
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	Yeah, I have to be honest though, I wouldn't really mind if Gotenks (or Gohan) defeated Buu. Jbr...
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~~Professor Gohan~~	May 3 2015, 03:59 AM Post #33
Posts: 0 Group: GTFO Member #6,938 Joined: November 2, 2011 Gender Not Specified Country Chile	The way the story ended, it would have been fine if Gotenks killed whatever Boo (during and post-Super Boo). Edited by Professor Gohan, May 3 2015, 03:59 AM.



+ Solid Snake	May 3 2015, 04:06 AM Post #34
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	Yeah, while it was cool for Goku to make a final grand entrance, as a Super Saiyan 3 no less, Gotenks really should've been the one to kill Buu. His fusees had reasons and motivation: Trunks: Vegeta died by Buu and his mother later died, Goku also entrusted him. Goten: Gohan (believed dead) and his mother died, and his father entrusted him. Gotenks: was pissed, at least in the anime, that Buu killed his family and friends. Edit: I'm sorry Squally for littering your topic man. Edited by Solid Snake, May 3 2015, 04:07 AM.
	Shinnozou tomete kureru! ~ Evil Ryu SSJG and SSJ4 Goku Sig SUPER THANKS CELL Dragon Ball: Ultimate Road Story http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8434874/1/#new Naruto and Goku's Adventure Story http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8435708/1/#new


Goddess Ultimecia	May 3 2015, 04:08 AM Post #35
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	I would've been fine if Gotenks had done it, or Gohan. I felt that the way AT suddenly did a 180 because he felt Goku was a better suited main character to have been a worse option than Gotenks or Gohan. With Gohan we had build up and everything that he was going to be the one to take out Boo if Gotenks failed, his dormant power being released to the level it was going to be and even further beyond was supposed to be the moment where the viewers are like "awwww yeh" Nah it's fine man, if the topic ever gets too cluttered I'll just create a new topic for the chapters and have this one changed to the discussion topic. Edited by Goddess Ultimecia, May 3 2015, 04:09 AM.
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+ Solid Snake	May 3 2015, 04:11 AM Post #36
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	I agree man, it was like "what was the point for all that hype if you were going to bring back Goku to finish things?"
	Shinnozou tomete kureru! ~ Evil Ryu SSJG and SSJ4 Goku Sig SUPER THANKS CELL Dragon Ball: Ultimate Road Story http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8434874/1/#new Naruto and Goku's Adventure Story http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8435708/1/#new


Goddess Ultimecia	May 7 2015, 12:23 AM Post #37
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Chapter 4. Goku's Cockiness; Vegeta's Answer Welcome back to planet Earth, Vegeta. I have contacted Bulma to let her know of your arrival. Is there anything else I can do for you? "No, that'll be all..." Vegeta said, disinterested in talking anymore to the on-board a.i. Having had enough of its grating robotic voice. Waiting for the hatch on the Capsule Corp ship to open completely before taking a step off. Letting the sun and the environment itself soak in, admiring the way the sun seemed to be in the exact ideal spot, the wind blowing in just the right direction at just the right speed, the trees letting off just enough oxygen. Everything was perfectly aligned for this day, there was no doubt in Vegeta's mind. He was going to cement his foothold as the strongest in the universe with the defeat of his rival in fair combat. Unless Goku had somehow picked up a magic trick or two, there was no way he could pull off a victory. Vegeta grabbed his tail and gave it a hard squeeze, making sure it was not a weakness nor a hindrance to him. After doing this a couple times, smile formed on his face as he tucked his tail around his waistline inside his gi. He would leave the tail to be a surprise for Goku. All the better for Vegeta's trump card to be something of an unseen marvel. Long ago everyone had deemed the Saiyan tail to be more of something that would hold back a Saiyan. A sort of Evolutionary hiccup, as Super Saiyan was far superior. Of course, no one had thought of bringing magic into the mix... As well as finding a way to mix both qualities of Oozaru and SSJ into a melding of perfection to reach the pinnacle of Saiyan power. No one except that small magician that had convinced Vegeta that the tail was necessary to reaching the next level. If it had not been for that man, Vegeta would not be anywhere near as confident in his upcoming battle with Goku as he was right now. He had spoken of being able to further strengthen him given he had rest. Vegeta pondered on paying him a visit once more. That could wait for the next few months, by then he should be back at full strength. "I hope you're ready Kakarrot..." Vegeta said as he suddenly appeared in the air, now flying with a trailblaze behind him of blue energy. Quickly traversing the planet itself, everything a blur underneath him. The cities, the rural areas, the oceans themselves. If he had time to freeze time he would, although he would likely get dizzy from the odd perspective. In no time at all Vegeta had landed where he wanted to. Right where Goku, Gohan, Oob, and a newcomer it seemed to be. Dressed in a mix of biker gear and city wear. Although he was much too thin to be a biker, and he had a sheathe that concealed a weapon that looked impossible to wield. Did they acquire an extra combatant or was he a friend of one of Goku's sons? "Kakarrot!" Vegeta shouted, although Goku was already paying attention. "Fight me. We will see who is the strongest in the universe right here, right now." Goku gave Vegeta an incredulous glare, confused on why Vegeta was so eager to fight despite him barely having made an improvement whatsoever in power. He had been left in the dust years ago, a result of his lone-wolfing. Did he want to use some new attack or something? "Alright then Vegeta, but I think you're biting off more than you can chew..." Goku said as he shrugged, dropping down to a battle stance. A little caught off guard by Vegeta's sudden battle-spirit. Vegeta too dropped into a battle stance. Gohan looked on as a skeptic, assured that Vegeta had to have a reason for suddenly being so confident in slugging for the big leagues. Oob flew over to a tree and sat down to watch. Squall walked over towards an overhanging cliff and stood with his back against the wall of Earth underneath its shade. Gohan deciding to observe from afar as he went to the sky and flew over to the top of the cliff Squall was resting under. Gohan sat down with his legs crossed as he began to watch. "Relish your past days of superiority Kakarrot, I can assure you that your time as strongest of the Saiyans is over." Goku, not paying much mind to the comment started off the battle. Disappearing and reappearing behind Vegeta before he could even react, forcing Vegeta's face into the ground with an elbow to the middle of the back between the shoulder blades. The sound of Vegeta spitting out dirt in his mouth made itself known as Vegeta rose slowly from the ground. Smiling all the while. "Is that all you've got...?" Vegeta grunted as he immediately transformed into a super saiyan. Lashing out with a turn around punch that hit Goku in the gut and forced him backwards a bit. Goku shook his head a little bit and powered up slightly, his aura slightly visible while Vegeta's was raging about like a storm. Vegeta now took his turn to attack, rushing forward with a flurry of punches and kicks that Goku seemed to dodge with barely any effort whatsoever. On and on and on Vegeta continued trying to land a shot on Goku but to no avail. Goku was simply so much more powerful in just his Base form than Vegeta was as a SSJ. In less than a second, Vegeta transformed to the next level, super saiyan 2 and with the surprise on his side fired off a ki blast in the middle of his attack. Then he fired another, and another, and another, and another, a volley of ki blasts thrown at Goku with surprising accuracy. The explosions causing dust and smoke to rise and cloud where Goku had last been seen bracing himself for the combined impact of dozens upon dozens of ki blasts being fired on him. After almost a full minute of firing, Vegeta stopped. Waiting to see if Goku had dealt with the onslaught. And just as he expected, he did. Although this time he seemed to be at the max power his Base state could give out. A smile on Goku's face as he stepped into the clearing. "Maybe I need to tone it back down a bit." A cocky Goku said as he teleported above Vegeta and slammed down with a punch to the top of the head. However, to Goku's surprise. Vegeta stood unharmed, even more, Vegeta looked different entirely. What was once a golden warrior was know an oozaru-saiyan hybrid. Brown fur on most of his body save for his pectorals, obliques, face, and hair. Two thick lockets of hair draped over each of his shoulders. The rest of his hair seeming fuller and browner than ever before. His eyes were outlined heavily, with the colour of them being a wolf-like primal shade of yellow with the pupil being black. Somehow, his clothes remained except where the fur didn't cover as if it were a requirement to show off the unfurry areas of his body. Then Goku was surprised to see a new appendage he had long since forgot about... a tail. "Perhaps you should instead tone it up Kakarrot...alot."
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+ Solid Snake	May 7 2015, 12:48 AM Post #38
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	Now that was boss! Lol, Vegeta's confidence was really REALLY believable man, Goku's cockiness funny tbh. I know it's unintended, but it's true
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~~Professor Gohan~~	May 7 2015, 03:17 AM Post #39
Posts: 0 Group: GTFO Member #6,938 Joined: November 2, 2011 Gender Not Specified Country Chile	Great post, Savior.^ And great chapter, Connor. I couldn't help but smile as I was reading. It was boss how that entire scenario played out. Goku has an a*** whoopin' comin' that's for sure.



Goddess Ultimecia	May 7 2015, 10:16 AM Post #40
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	I wouldn't say Goku's cockiness is unintentional, I've been staying up to date with the recent material that's been brought about in recent months such as Whis saying that Goku is too overconfident and Goku's trash-talk against Beerus when they first meet.
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+ Solid Snake	May 7 2015, 12:20 PM Post #41
滅Are you frightened? Posts: 8,961 Group: Elite Member Member #6,739 Joined: September 11, 2011 Gender Not Specified Favourite Anime Dragon ball, z, gt, Naruto & Shippuden, Bleach, Rosario + Vampire What Browser do you use? Kept you waiting huh? Favourite Manga Dragon Ball, Naruto, and Bleach	Oh I gotcha, I thought you were solely abiding by the manga only lol. But it's good to know that Goku bit off more than he can chew.
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~~Professor Gohan~~	May 7 2015, 05:37 PM Post #42
Posts: 0 Group: GTFO Member #6,938 Joined: November 2, 2011 Gender Not Specified Country Chile	That isn't the point, Savior. But since it's been brought to the table, what exactly does DSOT follow--manga, anime, movies, etc wise?



Goddess Ultimecia	May 7 2015, 08:16 PM Post #43
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Professor Gohan May 7 2015, 05:37 PM That isn't the point, Savior. But since it's been brought to the table, what exactly does DSOT follow--manga, anime, movies, etc wise? Heavily manga with some of the recent movie material thrown in there along with some things from GT, although SSJG won't make an appearance atleast for now (unless I can come up with a reason for it to be around and be relevant what with Ancient Gods being around.) Edited by Goddess Ultimecia, May 7 2015, 09:57 PM.
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Goddess Ultimecia	May 8 2015, 04:41 AM Post #44
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	I got the next chapter almost completely written. Expect it to be out by tomorrow night at the latest.
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Goddess Ultimecia	May 8 2015, 10:02 PM Post #45
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Chapter 5. Vegeta Remains Uncontested Recap: After landing on Earth from his few year long trip to train, Vegeta challenges Goku to a battle. Knowing full-well that he had a trump card, Goku, Gohan, and Oob were confused by the sudden challenge as they could sense barely any difference in power from when he had last left. Accepting the challenge, Goku goes easy on Vegeta but still ends up overwhelming him. Goku, after making a comment about how he may have to lower his effort in order to have a fair fight with Vegeta, is confronted with Vegeta's new transformation Goku stayed still, in disbelief that Vegeta had brought out not just a new transformation, but had done so in seemingly no time at all without having to power up as a pre-requisite. Vegeta was in the same stance he was in before, soaking in his glory as well as Goku's shock. "Amazing, isn't it? I've done the impossible, I've broken the third wall. While you've been here trying to increase the power of the forms you already had, I realized halfway that the forms I was trying to train were not the way to the pinnacle of Saiyan power, they hold too many restrictions. They held a bias against me, it was unfair. How is someone's rival supposed to be a rival whe they're held back ine very way imaginable? Unfathomable isn't it?" Vegeta let his words linger a bit before speaking again. "I seized the first opportunity I saw, and I happened to have hit the jackpot." Goku's hand resigned its attack, a look of unbelief spreading slowly across his entire face. This only further fed Vegeta's massive ego. "Fight me Kakarrot, with all that you have. If you don't I will unleash the full power of this form and I won't think twice about striking you down." A look of panic now quickly took residence in Goku's eyes as he changed into a Super Saiyan 3, but even while at full power he knew he didn't have a chance in hell. Everyone who could sense energy knew that as well. It was an entirely different dimension of power Vegeta had achieved. Even the strongest of the four that had surprised of his yet to reveal shivered at the reading of Vegeta's power. It was as if Vegeta's power had surpassed the realm of simple fusion. Goku, realizing just by the look Vegeta gave him, knew he wasn't bluffing. Goku went for a right straight, but being repelled backwards by a simple pulse of Vegeta's aura. Everyone nearby covering their faces as the winds brought about by the pulse were dangerous if not guarded against. Goku's feet bit into the ground deep as he attempted to stop himself, only succeeding when he crashed hard against a cliff some few hundreds of feet away. Now indented into the Earth, Goku mustered the strength he needed to rip himself off just in time to dodge a casual kiai wave thrown by Vegeta. Just having been near it had almost sucked the breath out of him, a loud bang went off behind Goku as he turned around, seeing the cliff he was once stuck in, now in a pile of rubble. Feeling a tap on his shoulder he turned around, only to get sucker punched square in the jaw. Now flying in the air with what looked to be blood coming from his mouth. I can't manage anything, the difference between me and Vegeta is much larger than the gap between Evil Boo and when we were Vegetto..." Goku thought to himself as he stopped mid-air. Looking around to find Vegeta, but being unable to do so. "He's too fast!" Goku audibly shouted as he felt his gut and its organs being pushed against his spine, letting spit and blood fly from his mouth as his eyes went wide. The pain nearly unbearable, once he recovered control of his vision he looked down to see Vegeta with that same smile on his face. "What's wrong Kakarrot? What happened to that confidence you had? Is it gone already?" Vegeta now removed his fist from Goku's belly and replaced it with his other fist. "What a shame, and here I thought this would've been worth my time..." Vegeta said with that condescending tone he carried when he was in control of a situation without opposition. What could anyone do outside of a fusion that likely wasn't going to be effective or even work? Vegeta raised Goku off his feet by grabbing him by the arm and lifted Goku who had barely any fight left in him. Goku raised his eyes lazily to look at Vegeta. POP Vegeta slapped Goku across the face with the back of his hand. POP Vegeta then slapped Goku across the face again with the front of his hand, leaving his hand's mark red across his cheek. "Stay with me Kakarrot, you wouldn't want to miss out on all the fun would you?" Vegeta said as he pointed towards Gohan and Oob. "I plan on showing to each and every one of you that there is no way for you to dream of obtaining anything close to the power of mine..." There seemed to be something of a sinister intent, as if the transformation brought about a nasty streak in the user. Awakening what seemed to be primal desires. Vegeta's in this case being to prove his superiority. "Choose one of them to fuse with, if you don't, I guarantee that there will be three less fighters to fight Zueva... if you try to run away I will make sure Gohan and Oob do not see another day, now off to it, trash!" Goku now had an evermore perplexed look on his face. This was not the Vegeta that had grown to do nothing but protect and love the Earth, this was a mix of all his negative qualities from before mixed with his desire to be the strongest... As Goku looked frantically towards Oob and Gohan, Squall watched silently. Assessing the situation and dealing with a voice in his head attempting to make sense of what was going on, the voice oddly familiar as it belonged to the being Squall had met inside of himself some time ago. Something doesn't seem right with that man, feels..., like an ulterior presence. I don't like it, really rustles my jimmies ya know? The voice in his head spoke as Squall tried his best to focus on the upcoming battle at hand. "Fu" Goku and Gohan said as they did the first part of the fusion dance. "Sion" The both of them sidestepped away from one another to the point that only their finger tips could touch, one knee raised, and their fists clenched and to their subjective lefts and rights. "Ha!" The both of them dropped their raised knee, torqued their upper halves to one another, and touched each other's fingertips. A fantastic white flash glowed as the two fusees were overtaken by the results of their ritual. The first parts of the new being showed, a mostly turquoise gi that was cut in half that left the midsection and chest open for the most part. The pants they wore were khaki coloured, they also wore black boots. Its hair a mix of the styles Gohan and Goku have. Vegeta smiled, seeming to only be mildy impressed by the fusion. "So, what do I call you?" "You can call me Gokhan!" The two reverberating voices said in unison. "Hmm, I'm a little disappointed... I would've thought the most powerful fusion would've been much more powerful."
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