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DB:DSoT Ver.2
Topic Started: Feb 8 2015, 04:03 AM (6,136 Views)
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Eh, not exactly but as long as you're drawing something from it.
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You asking if Uub's ki was emanating differently as Kid Buu's, but in a different manner? Or are you talking about personality wise?

In any event, nice update to DSoT man.
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Mar 2 2015, 02:22 AM
You asking if Uub's ki was emanating differently as Kid Buu's, but in a different manner? Or are you talking about personality wise?

In any event, nice update to DSoT man.
More like the qualities Boo had due to his magical nature and how it contrasts to an issue Oob has that is voiced by him during the sparring session.
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Stamina. Boo had great stamina while Oob doesn't.
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What PG said, apparently Uub's stamina is lower than Goku theirs despite Kid Buu having s nearly unlimited amount.
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Yeah... Oob must have some kind of flaw within him.
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Chapter 2. Introduction to Wrath and Sadism; Vegeta's Boast, Squall Agrees
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First off, I'd like to say I dig how dark this story is. When you're talking about the demons I vision the whole deal at a darker level. I just think this story is really meant for that. I also like the fact that it's a story about Pan being older, too.

I noticed from your original that there's an add-in on the unknown planet. I still got pretty excited when Vegeta mentioned he and Goku weren't going to be around forever.

Other than that, the characters' dialogue is flowing smoothly. Just hearing Pan and Squall go back and forth had a nice feel of softness to it.
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Strong a*** folks there man, destroying entire dimensions just because they're tainted, and so casually too lol. Good stuff, I can't really point out any mistakes though man, it was a vivid read beginning to end.

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Yeah, people like them are out of this world.
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Chapter 3. Vegeta's Run-in
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SSJ4 and FPSSJ4 :) Good s*** man. I wanna see how things play out for Vegeta in the battle against my second favorite femme fatale lol.
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Smooth chapter. I bet their fight is going to be epic because you're setting it up that way. I'm really curious to see what Vegeta has in store for Goku because he's extremely confident as ever.

I'm ready for anything to happen since this is the remix version.
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So quick to throw Goku in the bucket... you guys have no faith in him?
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So quick to throw Goku in the bucket... you guys have no faith in him?
Don't get me wrong, I LOVE me some Goku action, but I'm not above of putting him on the sideline to further develop the story's plot. Just make sure he isn't completely outshine.
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