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Piccolo's incredible now saqer.
So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
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Piccolo's incredible now saqer.
So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work? Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher.
His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control.
To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have.
Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series?
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Piccolo's incredible now saqer.
So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher. His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control. To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have. Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series? I predict but I get the feeling that Picclo will tell that he merged with some Namekians to get as poweful as he is lol.
As for the series, it's very good and well written, the fight scene in ch. 7 was better too, so that a plus
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Piccolo's incredible now saqer.
So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher. His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control. To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have. Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series?
I predict but I get the feeling that Picclo will tell that he merged with some Namekians to get as poweful as he is lol. As for the series, it's very good and well written, the fight scene in ch. 7 was better too, so that a plus  Well, we will see tomorrow.
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Chapter 8:
Spoiler: click to toggle Narrator: Last time on Dragon Ball AZ! Goku fought the Philosopher, and Piccolo came to help!
August 27, Age 789 15:40PM
Dark Philosopher: Huh? I.. I.. I..
Dark Philosopher: Kkkkukkkukku
Piccolo: Huh?
Dark Philosopher: *Laughs maniacally".
Goku: What's up with him?
Dark Philosopher: I understand now. This failed project was originally meant as complementary for the real stone. The real stone is in an incomplete state. It requires magic in order to work in it's full potential. All I need is to look in Goku's mind. He must know some kind of magic.
The dark philosopher passed by Piccolo, and reached Goku. No one moved, as if the time stopped, but it didn't. The philosopher was too fast for both Piccolo and Goku to do anything. He tapped Goku's head.
Piccolo (confused): Huh? What happened? I didn't see a thing!
Goku: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Piccolo: HUH?
Piccolo charged towards the Dark Philosopher, but he disappeared again.
Goku: Where did he go?
Piccolo looks behind, and finds him in the same place he was standing before.
Piccolo: *talking to himself* Damn it... He's extremely fast now. There's nothing to do except for releasing that technique, otherwise we'll die.
Dark Philosopher: Hmm... Dragon Balls? That would be a nice addition to the stone.
Goku: What? How did he know about the Dragon Balls? Oh! He probably read my mind! In that brief time where he tapped my head!
Piccolo: You're not going anywhere!
Dark Philosopher: I won't. I will stand here, and let her do the work. She's now at full power, thanks to the artificial stone's power. All what she needs now is the Dragon Balls. As you see, I don't need a thing. And as you have seen before, you are nothing compared to me, and the same applies to me compared to her.
Piccolo: What?
Goku: ...
Piccolo: Then I should have used it when I came to here...
Dark Philosopher: Did you forget that a single touch from me is capable of making me control you?
Piccolo: I don't need to even touch you.
Dark Philosopher: Huh? Then let us see it!
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August 27, Age 789 15:40PM
Ming: Understood.
Ming immediately appeared in the lookout. Looking for the Dragon Balls.
Dende: Huh? What is that huge power?
Popo: That must be it. She's here.
Ming noticed Dende and Popo. She immediately appeared behind them.
Ming: Where are the Dragon Balls?
Dende: Huh? *Jumps forward." We'll never tell you. Popo, the seal technique!
Popo: Understood.
Dende formed a triangle shape with his hands, as well as Popo. They spoke in an unknown language, and a Dragon appeared in the sky.
Dende: Yeah! Take that!
The Dragon flew at speed, with his mouth open, in order to swallow Ming, and seal her.
Popo: Dragon Seal. One of the most formidable Zodiac Dragon seals known in the universe. Once he catches someone with his mouth, and closes it, it gets sealed in an unbreakable dimension.
Ming: ...
The Dragon caught Ming with his mouth, and closed it.
Dende: YEAH!!
Ming: Open your mouth.
The Dragon opened its mouth, and Ming got out. The Dragon apparently got controlled by her.
Dende: WHAT?
Popo: Impressive. A feat that no one ever did. She's probably the strongest creature in the whole universe by now. We are doomed.
Ming appeared behind Dende, and was about to punch him.
--- August 27, Age 789 14:00 PM
Back in time, Uub back to his village, and immediately rushed to the sacred lady. The oldest lady in the whole village.
Uub: Mom!
Uub's Mom: Long time no see! *hugs him* Everyone was awaiting your arrival! Your dad and the whole village are waiting for you. Come on!
Uub: No time! Can you take me to see my grandma?
Uub's Mom: Huh? Your grandma? You mean my mother?
Uub: No, our big grandma!
Uub's Mom: You don't mean...
Uub: Yes!
Uub's Mom took Uub to the sacred lady. They said her knowledge surpassed all!
... : Ahh! It's been a while since I've seen the sun, and it has been a long time since I had visitors!
Mom: Madam Chiyo! Please pardon us for our sudden visit!
Chiyo: Ah! No problem! Take a seat!
Uub: Umm.. Hello! Can I ask you a question?
Chiyo: Oh yes, my little boy.
Uub gives out a negative aura, indicating the old lady about the seriousness of the question.
Chiyo: Oh yes... Pardon me... Little Katrina, can you give me a moment with the boy?
Katrina: Yes!
Uub: Do you know anything about the Philosopher's stone? Like anything to combat it? Anything to help against it?
Chiyo widens her eyes, and is greatly shocked.
Chiyo: Where did you hear about it?
Uub: It's a long story. It took interest in someone, and the philosopher himself returned, but his dark self.
Chiyo: It seems that it's dangerous now.
Chiyo begins her long talk about it, and how to combat it.
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August 27, Age 789 15:40PM
As Ming was about to punch Dende, several shurikens intercepted her punch.
Ming: Huh?
Uub: Just in time!
Ming: Futile...
The Shurikens turns into gold, and then it became dust.
Uub: I knew.. Just as lady Chiyo said. Any metal she touches becomes gold, and then she takes control of it.
Ming: *talking to herself* Why can't I control him? This was powered by his Ki, so what couldn't I control him? Doesn't matter.
Ming: Here I return them to you.
Ming made the gold into needles, powered it up by her ki, and launched them to Uub.
Uub: That's dangerous, I should dodge it.
Uub managed to dodge, albeit with difficulty.
Uub: I should really fight her with that. I don't have much time. The potion doesn't have much time.
Uub revealed some strings out of his pocket. Strings that was given to him by lady Chiyo. Not even the stone is capable of changing it.
Uub: Here I go!
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August 27, Age 789 15:45PM
As Pan and the rest of the Z Fighters were talking, they felt Ming and Uub's ki.
Pan: What! Ming appeared! Uub is fighting her apparently!
Trunks: What?
Vegeta: This is a great opportunity to try my power! EVERYONE STAY HERE!
Pan: No, we should all go!
Pan was the first to leave. She charged as fast as she could, towards the lookout, which was at the other side of the planet, but it was no problem for the Z Fighters.
As the Dark Philosopher initiated his plan, the fight between Ming and Uub begun! Pan and co are charging towards the battlefield, while Piccolo and Goku are in the otherworld with the dark Philosopher.
All to be continued!
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Nice swiftness between parts. Also is Chiyo referencing Naruto's Chiyo?
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Nice swiftness between parts. Also is Chiyo referencing Naruto's Chiyo? Yeah, I liked her a lot, and since she has a lot of knowledge, I named the character here after her.
So what do you think of the story now?
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It's DBZ like, so that's a good thing.
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Chapter 9:
Spoiler: click to toggle Narrator: Last time on Dragon Ball AZ! Piccolo and Goku vs Philosopher continues, Ming appeared on Earth, and the fight between her and Uub started!
August 27, Age 789 15:50PM
Piccolo: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Piccolo powered up, his aura envoloped the whole place, and his ki was felt throughout the Other World!
King Kai: !!!
King Yemma: What kind of power is this? Why are there so many people showing off their enormous aura today?
Dark Philosopher: So you were holding back all this time? It's not a problem. You still can't beat me!
Goku: Whoa! He's now as strong as the Philosopher! Where did you get all of that power from?
Piccolo envoloped himself in a dark purple sphere. A few moments, and it exploded.
Dark Philosopher: So you liked to change your outfit before you met your demise. A colorful and a bright shape right there. Amusing tastes you have.
Goku: !!!
Piccolo: ...
Goku (to himself): Piccolo's appearance changed. He wears a bee outfit, genie shoes, bear claws, goat hat, and a blue wing! He also has some kind of a living fireball above his shoulder! Is this his new powers? Is he using powers off animal origins?
Dark Philosopher: Shall we start, Mister Piccolo? Or you're buying time for a miracle to happen?
Goku: You're wrong. You're going to be beaten down once and for all!
Piccolo (to himself): Alchemy form! This outfit has a meaning with each part. Bee means physical strength and durability, genie shoes mean speed, bear claws mean amplified cutting ability, goat hat as a defensive part, and the wing for extra flight control and speed!
Dark Philosopher: If you use Ki, you'll end up being controlled! I'm not going to mention this again.
Goku (to himself): Piccolo isn't stupid. He must have manifested all of that Ki into something else, that won't let him be controlled.
Piccolo: I'M COMING!
Piccolo struck his leg into the ground, and dashed.
Dark Philosopher: WHERE IS HE?
Piccolo disappeared from the Dark Philosopher's sight.
Dark Philosopher (to himself): That's impossible! He should be fairy close to my speed after he powered up, but how did he end up that fast?!
Piccolo: Hmm...
Dark Philosopher turned to his back, only to see Piccolo. He immediately thought of punching him, but...
Piccolo: That's super slow!
Piccolo sliced through air with his claws, making powerful airwaves, that sliced through the Philosopher's armor!
Dark Philosopher: DAMN IT!!!!!!!
Goku: Whoa!
The Dark Philosopher conjured his staff from before, but this time it's different.
Dark Philosopher: *Panting* You'll not get away with this! Due to the artificial stone, I'm now capable of using the nature's power! Elemental staff! Lightning! ATTACK!
The staff generated a huge blast of electricity that covered half of the palace, blasting the part of the palace away!
Dark Philosopher: DIE LIKE A FOOL!
Piccolo: That didn't even faze me. Are you trying to beat me with that kind of power?
Dark Philosopher: Kukukukukuku... That wasn't even a comparable to a fraction of my staff's power! ELEMENTAL STAFF! LIGHTNING, FIRE, WIND, ICE! ULTIMATE HOST!
The Dark Philosopher became a living nature! Parts of his body were burning and burning some of the place, some were blazing wind and blasting the place, some were showing off a lightning play striking anything nearby, and some were freezing the place!
Goku: It's getting cold and hot here! That's not something you see everyday!
Dark Philosopher: THIS IS THE TRUE POWER OF SCIENCE! NOT EVEN YOU CAN STOP ME!
Piccolo: Pyro, it looks like I need your powers now.
Pyro: It has been a long time since you summoned me. Have you perfected your part of the technique yet?
Piccolo: I did a long time ago. We need it for this battle, but it's going to have an incredible amount of drawbacks on both of us. Are you up for it?
Pyro: What are you thinking then?
Dark Philosopher: What a nice chit-chat you have there, Piccolo. This is going to be your last time talking to your own.. pet, is that right?
Pyro: Pet? Are you screwing around with me?
Dark Philosopher: What kind of attitude there, little boy. I'm not going to hold back anymore. You're going all to die here.
Piccolo: Goku, are you capable of moving?
Goku: I dunno... Oh! I can move? How is that? Did he undo his ability or something?
Dark Philosopher (to himself): So that's what the elemental staff are doing. They're destroying my body inside out, and so the artificial philosopher stone. My powers are considerably getting lower. I should end this fight quickly.
Piccolo: Then get out of here.
Goku: I got you.
Goku immediately moved out of the palace. He used Instant Transmission to go to King Kai's place. The Dark Philosopher joined both of his hands, and released a small orb.
Dark Philosopher: This orb has potential power to surpass all black holes in the universe. You're definately going to die!
Piccolo: Pyro, we're doing it right now! ...
Dark Philosopher: ULTIMATE ORB OF ELEMENTAL STAFF! ACTIVATE!
Some kind of new cloth formed on Piccolo's body. It was a white outfit covering almost his entire body, covered with red lines, and a big yellow L on his chest.
Piccolo: DID YOU EVER TASTE FEAR BEFORE IN YOUR LIFE? TAKE ON THIS!!! RISING!!!
Pyro: SUN!!!!
Dark Philosopher: NATURE ELEMENTS BOMB RELEASE!
A miniature star formed, that surpassed the power of all stars in the universe formed before Piccolo and the Dark Philosopher! It's heat and power were so extreme, it could vaporize anything! The orb expanded and exploded forming a huge explosions of lightning, fire, ice, and wind covering a huge area. An incredible amount of light generated from the place of the palace. The raw power was so extreme, everyone in the whole universe felt it and fell down to his knees!
Goku: WHAT IS THAT POWER? WHAT HAPPENED? WAS THAT PICCOLO OR THE PHILOSOPHER?
King Kai: This is the first time I ever felt this kind of power in my entire life!
The fight between Piccolo and the Dark Philosopher came to an apparent end! Goku teleported to the King Kai, and the combination of Piccolo and the Dark Philosopher generated a humongous amount of power! Who won the fight? Is the Dark Philosopher finally put down?
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Okay now that was intense. Can you explain Piccolo's change? And who's Pyro?
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Okay now that was intense. Can you explain Piccolo's change? And who's Pyro? Well, that power was hinted back in the beginning of the fight actually. He basically powered up, and then used his costume. The outfit was the body of a Bee, which represented physical strength and durability. The shoes were genie shoes, which represented mobility, agility, and speed. The Bear's claws represented cutting and ripping, the goat's head represented the horns of the goats and it's ability to use it as a defense, and basically the wings represented the ability to control flying better and such.
Pyro is the little living fireball which was a little above Piccolo's shoulders as Goku noted. You can call it Piccolo's summon.
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Sort of like Sage mode?
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Sort of like Sage mode? Dark Philosopher is more like Sage Mode as you can see :P
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About a 7/10. Your chapter was on track with the following passages.
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