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Topic Started: Apr 21 2014, 11:30 PM (4,332 Views)
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Piccolo's incredible now saqer.

So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
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May 8 2014, 04:43 PM
Piccolo's incredible now saqer.

So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher.

His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control.

To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have.

Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series?
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May 8 2014, 06:33 PM
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May 8 2014, 04:43 PM
Piccolo's incredible now saqer.

So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher.

His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control.

To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have.

Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series?
I predict but I get the feeling that Picclo will tell that he merged with some Namekians to get as poweful as he is lol.

As for the series, it's very good and well written, the fight scene in ch. 7 was better too, so that a plus :)
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May 8 2014, 06:39 PM
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May 8 2014, 04:43 PM
Piccolo's incredible now saqer.

So how exactly does the Dark Philosipher's power work?
Yeah, he's super now! With a few punches he was capable of smashing the Philosopher's arm, where Goku was nearly as strong as the Philosopher.

His own powers are a secret up to this point. The thing he used was an artificial Philosopher's Stone, which he pulverized and inhaled. That stone mimics the true stone's powers, but isn't as good as the real one. Didn't King Kai say that the Philosopher control the stone? Wasn't it unstable due to the Philosopher's dark side fighting against the good side? Now he inhaled it, so the properties of the stone is now in him, which one of it is control.

To be exact, his current powers are but a fraction from what he used to have.

Anyways, can you predict what will happen in the following chapters? And what do you think of the series?
I predict but I get the feeling that Picclo will tell that he merged with some Namekians to get as poweful as he is lol.

As for the series, it's very good and well written, the fight scene in ch. 7 was better too, so that a plus :)
Well, we will see tomorrow.

Thanks :D
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No prob ;)

Be sure to give my story a read too saqer, and maybe we could do a crossover.
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Chapter 8:

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Nice swiftness between parts. Also is Chiyo referencing Naruto's Chiyo?
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Nice swiftness between parts. Also is Chiyo referencing Naruto's Chiyo?
Yeah, I liked her a lot, and since she has a lot of knowledge, I named the character here after her.

So what do you think of the story now?
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It's DBZ like, so that's a good thing.
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Okay now that was intense. Can you explain Piccolo's change? And who's Pyro?
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Okay now that was intense. Can you explain Piccolo's change? And who's Pyro?
Well, that power was hinted back in the beginning of the fight actually. He basically powered up, and then used his costume. The outfit was the body of a Bee, which represented physical strength and durability. The shoes were genie shoes, which represented mobility, agility, and speed. The Bear's claws represented cutting and ripping, the goat's head represented the horns of the goats and it's ability to use it as a defense, and basically the wings represented the ability to control flying better and such.

Pyro is the little living fireball which was a little above Piccolo's shoulders as Goku noted. You can call it Piccolo's summon.
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Sort of like Sage mode?
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Sort of like Sage mode?
Dark Philosopher is more like Sage Mode as you can see :P

What do you think of the chapter? What do you give it out of 10?
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About a 7/10. Your chapter was on track with the following passages.
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