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Dragon Ball AZ
Topic Started: Apr 21 2014, 11:30 PM (4,333 Views)
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Apr 25 2014, 01:02 AM
Nice, i'm curious to see what exactly this philosopher stone is and why it wants to break the boundaries between the living world and the afterlife.

It looks like Goku and Uub are really powerful now. My estimate is that their beyond their BoGT selves. Is that what you had in mind for them?
I wanted to be as vague as possible about what the stone is actually.

Yep, that what I really had in mind. You'll see how powerful they're now by the next chapter.

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Apr 25 2014, 01:02 AM
Tbh I breezed through chapter one and I'm gonna have to go back to read that one, but two was exciting too, and who what is the Philospher's Rock exactly?

Not FMA is it?
You'll see very soon.

What? I've just searched about the Philosopher's stone in FMA and it turns that it's actually there too. Didn't know :p

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Apr 25 2014, 01:11 AM
First few chapters are great. I'll be keeping track of this story.
Thanks :D

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Welp, when I said not to waste quality you sure took that to heart lol. Good job, like it so far.
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Apr 26 2014, 03:15 AM
Welp, when I said not to waste quality you sure took that to heart lol. Good job, like it so far.
How could I throw your advice out of the window? Thanks mate! Really appreciate that all of you guys are here with me :D
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Just released Chapter 4!

I've updated the whole system, and it's now the same as the one used in Dragon Ball AY. I hope you like it. I've yet to use my battle system.

I don't think I will release new chapters for the rest of the week sorry. Expect one in Thursday, and I'm sure you're going to like it. It's going to be larger than all of the chapters I've made.

Hope you like the new chapter :D
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Just read it.

I see Trunks hasn't been slacking off from his training. Reminds me of DBAY Goten and Trunks seeing as they lived up to their promise to Goku before he left with Uub.
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Just released chapter 5. I thought about it very well. I will release this chapter today, so I can concentrate on chapter 6, which will be released on Thursday, because you know what will happen on Chapter 6 when you read Chapter 5.

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Chapter five was pretty good. Great bits of backstory on the Philosopher's Stone.

I want to know more about this army...
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Nice back story saqer, so the Goten and Trunks gap is still there afterall, good lol.
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Just released Chapter 6! I hope you guys like it!
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Read ch.6, very interesting, but I only hate the fact the fight wasn't as detailed to the max of your ability but it was still a god read saqer.

So are the two of them equals while Goku is in base?
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Read ch.6, very interesting, but I only hate the fact the fight wasn't as detailed to the max of your ability but it was still a god read saqer.

So are the two of them equals while Goku is in base?
I was busy at that time, so I wasn't capable of delivering what you want >_<

That could be possibly right, but if I was the reader, I'd say the Dark Philosopher edges him.
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ah i understand saqer but i feel confused - the philosopher can restrict transformations?
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May 4 2014, 06:39 PM
ah i understand saqer but i feel confused - the philosopher can restrict transformations?
Well, I don't like to spoil. You'll know why he can restrict transformation.
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Okay I'll be waiting on it to come.
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Just released chapter 7 guys :D I hope all of you like it.

Stay tuned for an another chapter tomorrow :D
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