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Dragon Ball AZ
Topic Started: Apr 21 2014, 11:30 PM (4,330 Views)
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So here is where I will begin my first Dragon Ball fanfic. Dragon Ball AZ.

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Philosopher's Stone Saga:

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I stated that I will release Chapter 2 yesterday, but I couldn't because I didn't have enough time. Sorry for that guys.

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Chapter 3:

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What kind of war is going on in the story? Wouldn't Gohan and Videl know of it or something if Pan knows? Ahh, i'm not going to nitpick too much.

Looks pretty good for your first chapter. The format of it looks similar to mine which I think is great! Looking forward to seeing the events of the story unfold.
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Apr 21 2014, 11:44 PM
What kind of war is going on in the story? Wouldn't Gohan and Videl know of it or something if Pan knows? Ahh, i'm not going to nitpick too much.

Looks pretty good for your first chapter. The format of it looks similar to mine which I think is great! Looking forward to seeing the events of the story unfold.
You'll see very soon.

Thanks :) . Yeah, I've been looking through the others work, and yours suits me very well.
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Haha thanks! I like using that format because it avoids confusion as to who is speaking and is much easier to read. Though I will admit, the episodes are fairly short because I want to keep the story in line with Toriyama's short and sweet manga chapter length.

I think Dragon Ball AZ might have been used before by someone else in the Fanfic Zone. He hasn't updated his story in a long time so I don't think you should worry about it too much. And on that note, does the AZ stand for anything in particular? For me, the AY in DBAY stands for "After Years" seeing that it's set out much farther in the future than most of the official DB stories including GT (albeit Episode 64, A Hero's Legacy, and Dragon Ball Online).
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Apr 22 2014, 12:58 AM
Haha thanks! I like using that format because it avoids confusion as to who is speaking and is much easier to read. Though I will admit, the episodes are fairly short because I want to keep the story in line with Toriyama's short and sweet manga chapter length.

I think Dragon Ball AZ might have been used before by someone else in the Fanfic Zone. He hasn't updated his story in a long time so I don't think you should worry about it too much. And on that note, does the AZ stand for anything in particular? For me, the AY in DBAY stands for "After Years" seeing that it's set out much farther in the future than most of the official DB stories including GT (albeit Episode 64, A Hero's Legacy, and Dragon Ball Online).
I think my chapter is longer than what I've been thinking about. Probably because of introduction.

Really? I didn't know. I was thinking about naming it. Many names popped out like Absolute Zero (lul), the name of the final villain of the story (oops, spoilers), and it means too A as for the first letter, and Z as the last letter. I didn't think this one through :p

Chapter 2 will be coming today.
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Released Chapter 2. Sorry for the delay guys >_<
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Impressive stuff saqer.
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Just released Chapter 3. Have fun guys :)
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Dang saqer to say this is very good will be an understatement lol maybe you can teach me a little about writing no joke. Keep at it :)

And Goku's crazy strong lol, as well as Uub, I'm so happy about that.
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Dang saqer to say this is very good will be an understatement lol maybe you can teach me a little about writing no joke. Keep at it :)

And Goku's crazy strong lol, as well as Uub, I'm so happy about that.
Well, how many pages that you think would Chapter 3 take if it was in manga?
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Including fight scenes? I'd say about 10-13.
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Including fight scenes? I'd say about 10-13.
Well, I'd like to mix up a little bit. I wanted this chapter to be focused on Goku and Uub. Anyway, what do you think about Chapter 1 and 2 then?
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Nice, i'm curious to see what exactly this philosopher stone is and why it wants to break the boundaries between the living world and the afterlife.

It looks like Goku and Uub are really powerful now. My estimate is that their beyond their BoGT selves. Is that what you had in mind for them?
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Tbh I breezed through chapter one and I'm gonna have to go back to read that one, but two was exciting too, and who what is the Philospher's Rock exactly?

Not FMA is it?
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First few chapters are great. I'll be keeping track of this story.
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