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Battle of the Fusions
Topic Started: Mar 26 2014, 04:28 AM (1,607 Views)
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Hi guys About every other day I will release a chapter

Prologue
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Chapter one
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Evil Vegito saga is over
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This should get interesting.
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Added part of chapter 1
Edited by Canis Latrans, Mar 26 2014, 04:54 AM.

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Done with chapter 1 will add two later today or tomorrow

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I really do like the concept. An evil Vegetto? IN.

But holy run-on sentences. There could be a lot more periods added in there to split them.

Keep going, young ward.
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Lol You have that right I was not really focused on the grammar Also The part about vegito is just the beginning IT goes all the way to GT
Edited by Canis Latrans, Mar 26 2014, 02:12 PM.

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I'm curious, weren't the seven figures objective were to infect Goku and Vegeta yo control Vegito to combat against Birusu? So why was he mindlessly destroying parts of the Kaioshin planet?

I enjoyed the fight though :) keep at it.
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In chaapter three you will get the backstory and in chapter 4 bills and whis will appear

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Okay, I just didnt want yo get lost on what you gonna prepare :)
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Chapter three added

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This concept seems nigh similar to Resident Evil 4's Las Plagas it's good though your reasoning for introducing it as well is creative to combat Birisu.

A tip:
Try and separate your dialog from your paragraphs if you can help it.

Ex:
Dende ran forward and asked "What happened?", Kibitokai explained and they healed Goten Trunks and Gohan, Kibitokai looked at them.

"We are in danger here but I know of a place where Vegito Cannot reach us. We will gather the rest your loved ones but for the moment we will teleport you there.", Kibito teleported them to a white plane with a huge castle.

Sort of like that. When I first started like that on Fanfiction I got a lot of flames for the chapters not being easy to follow and some people had to highlight where they are lol.

Just some friendly advice. Keep at it.
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Added Chapter 4 be warned is LONG

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So Trunks helped Gotenks reach SSJ4? Without a tail? Ineresting.
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part 1 of chapter 5 added shouled I post a pic of gotenks SSj4?

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Bumb wirting the end of the vegito saga as we speak

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