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Dragon Ball Z: The Quest for Divinity
Topic Started: Aug 9 2013, 02:02 PM (286 Views)
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"Corona veniat electis."

This is going to be my stop motion script in fanfic form. Making chapters soon.
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"Corona veniat electis."

Dragon Ball Z: Quest for Divinity

In the hot depths of hell, there holds a tournament for forgiveness, to return to Earth. The fiercest fighters of hell compete to return and spark revenge to their enemies. The finals began. The top 3 competitors deserve the prize.

“Broly, you are a formidable opponent, but no match for my intellect!” a familiar voice said, it was Cell.

Broly laughs. “No match? I’m a devil, devils eat scum”

Cell is angry. He charges towards Broly, attempting to punch him. Broly felt nothing. He breaks Cells arm and throws him above, laughing. He proceeds to throw Cell back down, and crush him. “Die!”

Cell laughs in disbelief.

Broly released several chi blasts, ending Cell’s life.

“What a pity, short-lived freak.”

The crowd was awestruck, such a quick finish was almost impossible. They cheer for Broly, who laughs through it all.

~~~~~~

“Alright Vegeta, I want you to bring out all your anger!” stated Goku.

“What happened against Bills was like a one time thing, I can’t bring it out, Kakorat”

“Ah well, lets go!”

A Super Saiyan 3 against a Super Saiyan 2, somehow equally matched. There was critical hits here and there, but the whole fight had nobody in an advantage, or disadvantage. After they broke through a lockdown, Vegeta prepares a Final Flash. Goku answers by cupping his hands, preparing a Kamehameha. The blasts collide. But there was no legitimate outcome. Vegeta jabs Goku in the face, kneeing his stomach and kicking him away. Goku flashes behind Vegeta, kicking him downwards charging several blasts. And releasing them all.

Vegeta kicked them off, but it was clear they were both battle damaged. Suddenly, a meteorite-like being crashed next to them. Freeza rose above it, laughing.

“Freeza!” Goku muttered.

“Hello monkeys, I’m back.”
The saiyans realized he has a much higher power output than normal. Vegeta rose up towards him, “Kakorat this is my fight.”

“Wait! Don’t you want to know how he came back!”

“I don’t need anything! All I want to do is fight him, now stand back you insolent fool”

“You see, this power boost took away all the potential inside my 100% form and amplified my regular power by a huge fold, making me stronger than normal. I dare you help me test this divine power, Vegeta!”

Vegeta powered up. They clashed fists.

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Outward beyond their battle lies Cell, “Freeza’s power is nothing compared to the power I have achieved. Those Saiyans will be dead by my feet.”

Deep down though, Cell knew Broly can come any minute now, stronger than ever. Broly reminded Cell that fear was very, very real. His strength is unimaginably higher than his, and he has the capability to destroy a galaxy in a blast with it, since his boost was the biggest.
Edited by Stallin', Aug 9 2013, 03:04 PM.
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滅Are you frightened?

Good starting point but most of the story seemed rush, just take your time and think out what you neef to keep story longer and keep the reader hook. And also try to be just a little more specific with your details so the reader can picture what you say. Overall, nice work for a newbie.

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