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New fan story, the return of a... Old Enemy; Read the beginning and tell me what you think
Topic Started: Jul 24 2013, 10:34 AM (513 Views)
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Chapter 1.

Sleeping in the dark, time no longer seemed to pass. He had been in that watery chamber for as long as could remember. At first there was a violent pain as the majority of his body had been destroyed and disintegrated by the sun, but through the course of time the pain had slowly been vanishing, furthermore parts of his body which he was sure were destroyed, were slowly regaining their feeling.
He did not know where he was, every time he tried to open his eyes, asides from the pain he saw nothing but pure darkness.

Being robbed of his sight and hearing had acquired him a sixth sense. He could faintly feel powerful live forms in the great distance. Of the auras he felt, there was one that felt familiar to him which kept waking him up every time his sixth sense would feel it, and every few years he would feel it again and for some unknown reason it disturbed him. Every time that familiar aura appeared it clashed with others unknown powerful auras, and every time the recognizable aura would be the one remaining. What further distressed him was that the first time he felt that aura, it felt strong, but as years passed it had grown to the point where it’s very pressure scared him.
His sixth sense grew stronger to the point where he began to feel a single faint weak aura close to him, try as he might, he could never feel anything besides that single aura. And it was always close to him, watching him and never leaving for long. This weak aura did not feel hostile; instead it felt warm and caring, though every time he felt the familiar strong aura, aside from feeling distressed he also felt changes in the weak aura, it acted as though it was scared.

What this man did not know, or remember was that the familiar aura he felt was that of Goku. The first time he felt this aura clash was when goku went up against Kid buu in his super saiyan third form.
Other times he felt this aura was when goku went up against baby in his fourth super saiyan form, and again against the shadow dragons. The last time he felt the aura was when goku and vegeta went up against Omega Shenron.



An unbelievably long time had now passed since he for the last time felt the familiar aura, but in all this time the weak aura outside of his chamber had not disappeared. But there were some changes happening which he did not understand. At the beginning there were no sounds, there was nothing but complete darkness and emptiness. But now he could faintly hear sounds, he could hear small bubbles rising towards an unknown surface, which made him fall asleep. Every time he would open his eyes, it would feel as though months and years had passed.

The reality of the matter was the intuition was correct.


Every time he opened his eyes he was healthier than before. He now felt a weird sensation on his back; it felt as though a familiar third arm which he lost a long time ago had returned which he slowly wrapped around his waist, the very effort tired him… He closed his eyes again…

He opened his eyes again to see darkness once more, but the familiar darkness seemed slightly different, it felt as though the complete darkness he remembered was lighter than before. He also felt another feeling, there seemed to be small miniscule needles injected in him on the majority of his body, but he did not care, for there was one sensation be felt which was greater than any other he had ever felt. He could wiggle 2 of his fingers on his right hand, and a single finger on his left hand… and he closed his eyes once again…
He opened his eyes…

He found himself in a grand chamber, he tried to look but some parts of his body were paralyzed including his neck and legs with the exception of some toes. So the best he could manage was to look from side to side using his eyes, but everything was too blurry to make out. What he noticed was that he now could move all of his fingers, though his arms were still a different story.
He also heard a faint voice, asking ‘’Are you Awake?’’ But he was too tired; all the effort he had used to trying to move had used all of his energy…

And so his eyes closed for the last time, for when he woke up he would finally be completely healed.


Edited by Darkmoon3778, Jul 25 2013, 11:05 PM.
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This sounds like Broly story, if so I wonder how that's gonna play out since Goku and co. are in a completely different league now compared to before. So as it stands now, thumbs up for the intro. Post soon ok?
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Chapter 2:

It made its round once every 631 year on an elongated orbit around the sun. It was her home; in years past she had traveled the galaxy on her own. But now that she had reached a more mature age, she traveled back to the place where she was born, a comet where her family for generations had lived.
She was not human, but she was not much different from human’s appearance wise. Her race was very special, in millennia’s past there might have been hundreds of them, but now as far as she knew she was the only one left. Her race did not reproduce; in fact when their natural lifespan come close to its end they would begin to form an egg within them. The day she died would be the day her child would be born along with portions of her memories.

As the comet roared towards the sun, she said her goodbyes from the surface of the comet as that would be the last time she would ever come close to such beauty. As she prepared to enter a chamber buried at the core of her comet, to prepare for her final hours she saw a great energy beam shooting towards the sun. She did not think much of it at the time, but that sight kept her at the surface for a while longer. The energy beam hit the sun, and disappeared.

She began to descend down a small passageway followed by stairs downward towards the core. Just before she reached the bottom, she heard a crash on the surface. Although her life-force was quickly depleting nonetheless she strained herself to go up once again and take a look. It was easy to notice the source of the crash, as dust was arising from the crash site, and a small crater had formed there. Gasping for air she approached only to notice the most horrific sight she had ever seen.

At the middle of the crater there was something which no longer was recognizable. At first glance she thought it was nothing more than a small piece of rock that had gotten too close to the sun. She could feel a faint energy coming from it, so at first she assumed it might be a small craft carrying somebody inside. As she touched it to find an opening she finally realized that this misshapen figure was not a vessel, but a creature that despite its horrific burns and injuries yet remained alive, knowing this she finally began to see what it resembled.

Its Torso was completely burn to the point where it no longer looked human. Its head was in a similar condition. There was no blood, the body had been burnt so badly that any blood which escaped the body had burned creating a back crust around the body. The left arm was completely gone, its right arm was intact up to the elbow joint and the legs were completely missing.
Her time was quickly approaching; she no longer had the strength to lift up the body to her chamber within the comet. She lifted up her left arm and pushed something, moments later a small bed came floating from within the comet, she did what she could and pushed the remains on top of it, lifted herself up from the ground and went inside.

The openings to the chambers within the comet were narrow, and unless you knew where they were you would not find them. Furthermore there were also modifications made within the outer crust of the comet. Even though it looked like a normal comet, it was coated in a protective layer of an unknown material which did not allow the outside world to feel the energies from within. This was done many years ago, at the time when scouters were still new, and many of her kin were being found by the so called scouters which mercenaries used.

As she descended down the stair she came to a small hall with 2 doors. The left door led to her final resting place and the right door led to a medical room where there was a special rejuvenating tank.
She felt dizzy now, her heart beating rate had increased, sweat poured down her face and her sight began to fail.

She entered the right room, pressed on another button on her left arm and the bed quickly dumped the body into the tank.
She walked towards a computer to analyze the body, in order to setup an optimal recovery route. Seconds later the computer began blinking the words SAIYAN. Her Heart leaped, it was saiyans that were responsible for the annihilation of her kin, and as she moved to press the ‘’destroy’’ button her heart finally gave out, and as her hand fell the automatic recovery mode was engaged.

Minutes later after her death, her body began to burn in a cold and soft blue light. As her body burned away, the shape of an egg began to form within the flames. Her Final moment had greatly disturbed her; memories which should have been passed on were lost.
Within the egg, new live was forming, with its only memory being to protect.

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Chapter 3.

About 6 months had since a very special egg came into the world.

Cracks began to form around walls she had been looking at since the first day she opened her eyes, these cracks meant that it was time. She took her two small hands and pushed against the walls who gave in, to reveal the outside world. The world was not as she thought it would be, during her time within her egg she had gotten many images of her predecessor s live. She was expecting lush green worlds as far as her eyes could see, but what she saw was a small room, with a great tank which filled half of the room. There were no decorations, just plain empty walls and a small table with a machine besides the tank.

Already at birth she was able to think rationally, already at birth could she walk and already at birth did she know her mission.

She walked towards the tank and stared at it as her eyes grew accustomed to the world. The images she had seen of her mission all showed a burnt and destroyed man, but this was not entirely the case anymore. Within the tank, the majority of the burn wounds had vanished. Small stumps underneath the torso had begun to form, which she assumed were legs. The left side of the torso had another stump which she assumed was its left arm and on the right side of the torso, the right arm had formed entirely.

As she grew up this person within the tank became her only companion, and only friend. She would spend days on end simply looking at it, hoping it would soon recover so she no longer had to be alone. She only left the room to eat. Her race unlike humans did not eat the same things, when she was hungry she simply went to the outer area of the comet took a deep breath and took a bite of the dark and crispy outer crust of the comet.

Years passed, and she never wavered. She would only leave the room when hungry and always return to keep watch on her companion.

Slowly over the course of time, the stumps grew into legs and arms. She was also there the day that she for the first time saw movements on the left fingertips. From that day she would daily talk to the person within the tank, always asking if he was awake, and always loosing heart when she did not receive an answer.

Several years passed since then. She having inherited many memories of her predecessor began the muscle recovery process which meant sticking a series of millions of needles to every part of his body. She seemed to have a vague memory of this process taking days. But since the day she begun this process 9 years had passed and yet the process was barely halfway.
Time passed and she grew from a little girl to a teenager and from a teenager to a young adult. And never did she stop calling out for the person within the tank. Over the years there were several energies which she felt from the outside world, at first it was barely detectable but over time the energies grew to the point where it nearly suffocated her every time she would feel them.

Then came the day when the two would meet.

Alarms went off within the room and the machine began blinking in a sequence of yellow and green lights, the computer screen finally read ‘’Recovery Complete’’.

As the recovery finalized the tank began to empty itself of the blackish liquid which had contained her companions for the last 47 years.

As the tank liquid disappeared a young man came into view. He was tall and fairly muscular. He was completely naked except for a single necklace at his that resembled an upside down pyramid with a blue jewel at its middle.
The man had long black hair which went down to his lower back, a tail wrapped around his waist. As the tank completely emptied itself the man fell to the ground. She took the bed, which many years ago had been used to carry him into that very same chamber, put him there and carried him to the other room. The room which was originally meant to be her mother’s resting place.

Within that second room there was a large bed, a small table and another computer. As far as she could remember she had only been in this room twice, once as a child and once as a young adult. But she never found anything worth her interest in there.

She used her powers of telekinesis once more to lift the man, hold him in midair and give him clothing, before gently putting him on the bed.
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