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Topic Started: Jul 18 2013, 05:54 PM (364 Views)
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Episode 1: The Training Begins

flying threw the sky to Uub's village

Goku: so how far do you live Uub?
Uub: not 2 far now, we're almost there
Goku: that's good, so let me ask you this, have you every trained?
Uub: I do a little training here and there but nothing to serious, I still don't know how to control my power
Goku: well i'll teach you how to control you ki, how to fly and more just wait
Uub: I can't wait!!!!

back at the tournament

Announcer: and the winner is MR. SATAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fans: YEAH!!!!!! SATAN!!! SATAN!!!! SATAN!!!!
Mr. Satan: To all my fans, your true champion has won yet again

the z-fighters begin to leave

Pan: Daddy with grandpa gone who will train me?
Gohan: well baby girl, I haven't done a lot of training since you were born, but now that you're 5 and grandpa has taught you so much I guess I can help wit your training
Pan: really pa? you will help me?
Gohan: yeah!!! of course I will
Gohan (to himself): father has gotten a lot stronger than me and I was once the strongest on this planet, I must train myself and make my ultimate form my base form and learn how to use my super saiyan powers once more then I will be the strongest for sure)

Vegeta (to himself): Kakarot is always training, always a step ahead and im alright with that but I will not be surpassed by so much, if he is leaving to train that uub boy then I will train with my offspring just incase
Vegeta: Trunks!! Bra!! lets go home we have training to 2
Trunks: training? I just graduated from school day, I don't wanna do no training
Vegeta: if you don't do no training then you wont get no allowance
Trunks: awww man
Bra: daddy I don't wanna train, im too little
Vegeta: nonsense bra, Pan is only 5 and can fly around the world, you are 7 years old you should be twice as strong

back at uub's village
People of Uub's village: UUB!!!!! you're back!!!
Uub: hey everyone, this is Goku, he's going to help provide food to our village and train me to be a better fight
People of Uub's village: WOW!!! thanks Son Goku we really appreciate
Goku: awww it's nothing.......................now Uub you ready?
Uub: ready? now?
Goku: yea y not?
Uub: umm, ok
Goku: first things first, you need to learn how to harnest your power
Uub: ok, how do I do that
Goku: meditate, if you knew Piccolo, he could help you with this.........................just sit still and focus, focus on your power, you wanna control your ki don't you and protect your people right?
Uub: of course I do
Goku: then meditate and stay focused

Uub focuses on his power and soon creates an energy sphere

Goku: Uub!!!! open your eyes
Uub: WOW!!! I did it
Goku: you did it Uub, when you focus you can do anything
Goku (to himself): wow it's only been 20 minutes and hes gaining control over his power, if he continues like this then in no time he will be able to access his full power)

Back at Son Gohan's
Gohan: ok Pan, come at me with all you got
Pan: ok daddy)

Pan flies towards Gohan then uses after image and reappears behind Gohan swinging a kick but Gohan blocks it with his right arm

Gohan: not bad, but you gotta be faster

@Capsule Corps
Vegeta: Trunks, Bra, I want you both to attack me with all you got
Trunks (w/a smile): ok (turns super saiyan and attacks)

Bra sits back and watches as Ssj Trunks & her father fight

Vegeta: if you weren't to lazy and continued to train, you could be a great warrior
Ssj Trunks: whatever dad, I see your dodging all my attacks must be scared
Vegeta: scared boy? who do you think your talking too?

vegeta uppercuts Trunks in the gut then elbows him in the back. Trunks falls 2 the ground and turns back to normal
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Just one problem, I know this is your story but if this takes place right after DBZ then Gohan's statment is off, Gohan was still the strongest then not Goku.
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Jul 18 2013, 10:21 PM
Just one problem, I know this is your story but if this takes place right after DBZ then Gohan's statment is off, Gohan was still the strongest then not Goku.
wheres your proof? I don't see nowhere in the manga or anime where it states Gohan is still the strongest? in fact im looking at the new movie and previous movies and it seems Gohan's Ultimate form is a power up like Ssj and ssj2 and I believe Goku was the strongest at the end of z until im proven wrong with facts
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Jul 18 2013, 11:54 PM
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Jul 18 2013, 10:21 PM
Just one problem, I know this is your story but if this takes place right after DBZ then Gohan's statment is off, Gohan was still the strongest then not Goku.
wheres your proof? I don't see nowhere in the manga or anime where it states Gohan is still the strongest? in fact im looking at the new movie and previous movies and it seems Gohan's Ultimate form is a power up like Ssj and ssj2 and I believe Goku was the strongest at the end of z until im proven wrong with facts
My proof?

Goku was given a tough fight by Uub who, according to Goku, was one of the potential(s) of who could win the tournament and Uub had about the same amount of power as Kid Buu and Goku's base level, going off the fight should be close to at least to Good Buu.

Buu saga
Kid Buu </< SSJ3 Goku (Buu saga) < SSJ Gotenks (pre) < SSJ3 Gotenks (post) < Ultimate Gohan

(Note: the gap between SSJ Gotenks (pre) and SSJ3 Gotenks (post) is huger than how it looks.)

EoZ
Good Buu < Goku (EoZ) ~/< Uub (enraged) ~ Kid Buu ~/< SSJ3 Goku (Buu saga)

And going by this Goku would just barely surpass SSJ2 Gotenks and he would have to be at SSJ3 at that.

And all the movies except Battle of Gods, are not canon. And in that film SSJ3 Goku is weaker still than Ultimate Gohan.
Edited by Solid Snake, Jul 19 2013, 05:34 PM.
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right but in the movie which would be cannon? gohan powers up to ultimate form which means Gohan (base) would be weaker?

so in my story I would have him not train since battle of gods which would make him weaker but by gt he would be as stronger as buutenks or buuhan in his ultimate form
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If you think that'll work, go for it :) hope your story turns out fantastic.
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