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The Story of the Low-Class: Chapter 1: The Undead Threat; Fanfic about two saiyans who were betrayed
Topic Started: Apr 13 2013, 04:13 AM (955 Views)
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Chapter 1: The Undetectable Mystery

(Turles appears on a green and brown planet, with many buildings rising from the ground. Frieza (in his first form) is meditating when he rapidly opens his eyes.)

Turles- Lord Frieza, our reconnaissance team has reported back to us from Frug. They've failed to find the mystical dragon balls there.
Frieza- (slightly twitches but then smiles) Find then. I've been hearing reports about somewhere else anyway. A strange scientist has been creating artificial beings and using them as weapons. I need your squad to head out there and investigate the problem.
Turles- Yes sir! (He flies away)
Frieza turns to see him fly away and snickers.

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(Turtles arrives in a ruined city with smoke rising from every building.)
Turles- Let's see, my Scouter isn't picking up any readings nearby. Could Lord Frieza have been lying?

He scans the area for a while more and spots nothing.
Turles: Nothing here, then.


A tremendously tall man with long black hair was standing on the far side of the city.

Turles: Strange, how wasn't I able to pick up his readings. (He flew a little and hid behind a building. He checks his Scouter to see if it's malfunctioning.) Still nothing, it was working perfectly find yesterday.

A blue beam of energy hit the building where Turles was hiding. The man was glaring at Turles as he watched in shock.

Man: Why so afraid? You've never seen an android before?
Turles: Have you've heard of a saigan before, nothing scares us.
Man: I beg to differ.

He extends his hand and shoots a blue energy wave. Turles dodges it and watches as the beam obliterates a nearby building.

Man: My apologies. Before I kill you, I should probably introduce myself. My name is Super 17 and I am an android created by Dr. Gero. My partners and I were expecting you so we set up this trap, so that we could interrogate you but you're just another disgusting saiyan.

A girl and a boy with blonde and black hair, respectively landed from the air behind Super 17.

Super 17: This is Android #18 and #17.

A tall green android with a Mohawk stepped out of a building.

Super 17: Also, that's #16.

The ground shook as another android with blue skin and red hair stomped on the ground behind Turles.

Super 17: He's a recent creation. Say hello to Android #13.

Turtles was now surrounded by all these androids. He looked worried but then he remembered something. His team! He clicked a button on his crimson Scouter and chuckled.

Turles: You think you can beat me with a couple of robots? You're dreaming.

The saiyan extended his index and middle finger behind him to blast Android 13 with a small purple finger beam. The androids charged toward Turles who easily vanished. The search around them but they can't spot him. Suddenly four energies appeared rapidly one with a different aura. Turles appeared with the four new people and announced to Super 17, his people.

Turles: The one with the long hair is the arrogant Raditz, the bald one is the impatient Nappa, the spiky haired one is Prince Vegeta, and the one who resembles me is the mighty Bardock. We are saiyans and and we're not going to let robots best us. Prepare to die!

They all charged forward and collided with the androids.
Edited by Kjf0012, Apr 13 2013, 02:03 PM.
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Hmm, different view point.

You've down-graded the power of the androids and placed them on a new world, and the Saiyans are all working in the same troupe together. Like how you have still fit in the Dragonballs as a plot point, as often they are forgotten in fics.

Basic descriptions, but works good.
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