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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 13 2013, 10:52 PM Post #16 |
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Tien wins? Un-Be-liev-able
Edited by Alex D. Boss, Jan 14 2013, 01:33 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 14 2013, 01:09 AM Post #17 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Talk about overpowering Tien. Entertaining nonetheless |
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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 14 2013, 01:34 AM Post #18 |
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Tien is not overpowered , he is powerful. Jajajaja |
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Jan 14 2013, 08:38 PM Post #19 |
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Feel like a sir
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Yeah,this fanfic makes sense. He was one of the best fighters in DB,but was ignored from now on. |
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Jan 16 2013, 11:37 PM Post #20 |
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CHAPTER 8 Goku vs Tien Referee-THE FINAL IS ABOUT TO BEGIN.AND WHO COULD'VE IMAGINED IT WOULD BE BETWEEN THOSE TWO... Tien-Goku,i want us to fight with everything we have.If you don't,i'll hate you forever. Goku-Well,in that case... Goku turns SSJ4.Tien powers up to kaioken 10.000x Referee-BEGIN They start hand struggling.After a while,Tien powers down,losing his red aura.Goku takes advantage of this,headbutting him and then kneeing him on stomach.Tien steps back,bends and holds his belly in pain.Goku goes for a kick,but Tien disappears,despite his flinching.Goku stands still,trying to locate the foe.Tien appears behind him. Tien-KAIOKEN TIMES 10.000x He tries to karate chop Goku's neck.However,the attack that beat Vegeta doesn't work this time,for Goku ducks and kicks the foe behind him, sending him in the air.Tien brakes in the air,regaining his balance,and raises his finger. Tien-SUPER DODONPA. Goku disappears and the blast hits the ground,causing an explosion followed by a smoke ''penis''.Tien's three eyes search through the area,trying to find Goku.Tien vanishes.Sounds are heard,indicating the two invisible warriors are fighting.Finally,they appear in the air,with Goku hitting Tien's stomach,with both his hands,and sending him to crash on a cliff. Goku-And now to finish you off.Any last words Tien?(it looks like my version of SSJ4 made him ruder as well) Tien-Well,i have two words. Goku-Ok,say them quick. Tien-SOLAR FLARE. Goku-Darn,i got careless... Tien launches himself to Goku,but the Saiyan blocks the attack and throws him back on the ground. Tien-But...how?You weren't wearing glasses this time. Goku-Heh.I spent the last year training my eyes too. Tien-Training your eyes?But,how? Goku-If you can train a tail,you can also train two eyes,i guess,he,he(holding his head,looks like the old Goku's back). Tien(thinking)-Kaioken 10.000x is my limit.Shall i risk my life,or... Goku-Surrender Tien. Tien-KAIOKEN TIMES 20.000x He flies up to the surprised Goku,punching him really hard,sending him higher above. Tien-NEO TRI BEAM. Goku-DRAGON KAMEHAMEHA. To everyone's surprise,Goku introduces his new attack.A super kamehameha with a dragon illusion.The unbelievably strong beams collide.After an explosion that can't be described,Goku is seen falling unconscious on the ground.Tien is standing.Referee starts counting. Grand Kai(thinking)-He won't get up.I can feel he's unconscious. Referee-...NINE,TEN.TIEN IS THE CHAMPION. Tien-YEAH,I WON.I BEAT GOKU(his voice at this point is so loud that it can probably be heard on Earth too). Tien is ready to jump with joy,when he drops dead! It looks like the combination of kaioken 20.000x and neo tri beam finally killed him.And before he could receive his trophy too!What a shame... THE END Edited by no name, Jan 16 2013, 11:41 PM.
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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 17 2013, 12:57 AM Post #21 |
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Nice one. Tien is the winner. Gotta love it. You're story was great , good job no name. |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 17 2013, 03:06 PM Post #22 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Way too much overpowering Tien, but I guess you can't defeat a SSJ4 without it:) I really liked the ironic ending. Overall>9/10 |
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