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CHAPTER 1 On a deserted planet,a platform has appeared,with a throne on it.And,on the throne,Grand Kai is sitting,waiting for something.Later,Goku appears, using instant transmission,having taken all Z team with him. Vegeta-What a worthless planet. Goku-Oh,come on Vegeta,don't be so mean.It's beautiful. Piccolo-My home planet is much better. Grand Kai-SHUT UP,ALL OF YOU. Goku-Ok,old man.What did you call us here for? Grand Kai-Soon,a tournament will take place here.And all of you will participate. Goku-And,why did you decide to hold a tournament between us? Grand Kai-Because that's the purpose of this fanfic.No great plot,not any worries to save the world,nothing like that.Just fights between you,Z fighters I want you to offer to me a great spectacle.I want the fights to be close and tough.Fight with all you have.Try to literally destroy your foe.Don't worry, when the tournament ends,i will cure all your wounds and revive anyone who has died. Piccolo-You can revive dead people? Grand Kai-Of course,fool.If Kami,who is nothing compared to me,could create dragonballs,giving one's life back is an easy task for me.Normally,it's against the rules to use that power of mine,but,i'll make an exception for the tournament's sake.Now go.I'm giving you one year to become as strong as you can.Don't disappoint me.In exactly one year from now,return here. And so they left.Now,let's see how each fighter prepared himself within the following year. Saiyans Goku and Vegeta trained hard for several months.Then,they realized they had reached their limit,meaning they couldn't become any stronger,just like Gohan,who was in his Ultimate form. Piccolo He went to his home planet and fused with all Nameks.They were all glad to accept that,since they wanted him to win the tournament and make their nation proud. Eighteen She asked Bulma and her father to use their scientific genius on her.Finally,they managed to turn her into the ultimate android. Yamcha Yamcha belongs to a race of humans who can turn into wolves under a full moon.However,for some reason,Yamcha never had that ability.His father saw him as a disgrace,Yamcha got psychological problems,abandoned his family and became a bandit in the desert.Anyway,under those special circumstances,Yamcha decided to go back to his family.His parents were glad to see him after all those years.His father had regret his past mistakes and apologized.Then,he was surprised to see how strong his son had got.So,he decided to reveal a family secret to him. Yamcha's father-Son,there has been a legend for many generations now.Our clan has hidden reserves of power that none of us has ever managed to access.But you have gone further than anyone else.Maybe you're the chosen one.Would you like to undergo the ancient,secret,special training of our race? Yamcha-Of course. Yamcha's father-I'm warning you,it won't be easy.Even if you manage to unlock that power,you might never be able to control it. Yamcha-I SAID I'LL DO IT. Later,Yamcha and his father are sitting on the ground,with their eyes closed. Yamcha-Dad,when are we going to have a break?I'm starving. Yamcha's father-I TOLD YOU NOT TO TALK. Yamcha-Ok,ok... Tienshinhan On Kai's Planet... Old Kai-HEY,do you want me to have a heart attack?You can't scare me like that,showing up in front of me,all of sudden.By the way,how did you come here? Tien-Well,after seeing Goku using instant transmission so many times,i finally figured out how to do it. Old Kai-Anyway,what do you want? Tien-Bring here King Kai.I want to talk to him. Old Kai-I'm sorry,but he's dead and it's against the rules to... Tien throws a bunch of porn magazines to the ground.Old Kai starts browsing through them in excitement. Old Kai-Wow.These are very old volumes.They have collector's value.Ok,i'll do it. Tien asks King Kai to teach him kaioken.Then,he goes to train for two years in rosat,where he masters the technique at an unbelievable extent. Ubb Ubb-Buu,i think it's time for us to become one again. Buu-But,i thought we disliked GT stuff and haxes. Ubb-I know.But,there is no other way to compete with our foes. And the day of the tournament arrives. Grand Kai-Remember folks,i want you to give your all,without worrying about anything.I sealed this planet with my mage,so that it can't be destroyed by any attack(as if that was necessary,lol). After the trial of the punching machine(a magic model that could endure supernatural power),when Kuririn,Chaotzu,Trunks and Goten were disqualified,the final part of the tournament is about to take place.For simplicity sake,the pair ups were decided by alphabetic order. Quarter Final 1-Eighteen vs Gohan Quarter Final 2-Goku vs Majubb Quarter Final 3-Piccolo vs Tienshinhan Quarter Final 4-Vegeta vs Yamcha Semi Final 1-Winner 1 vs Winner 2 Semi Final 2-Winner 3 vs Winner 4 So,who will the champion be? |
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Jan 9 2013, 08:38 PM Post #2 |
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Yamcha will be. |
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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 9 2013, 08:53 PM Post #3 |
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Yamcha has great potential , and his wolf attacks are unlocked , he might be stomp them all as easiest to say. |
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Jan 10 2013, 04:04 PM Post #4 |
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CHAPTER 2 Eighteen vs Gohan Referee-BEGIN. Eighteen launches herself to Gohan.The Saiyan blocks by catching her head with his one arm.To his surprise,the head disconnects from her body and she kicks him away.She picks up her head and launches from her neck a blast to the still launching Gohan.The blast connects,causing an explosion.Eighteen reconnects the head to the body and launches herself towards the smoke.A blast comes out of the smoke,forcing her to jump high to dodge.The female android floats above the smoke,waiting for visibility to be restored.Gohan appears behind her and kicks.Eighteen ducks. Gohan fades,proving to be only an illusion image.Meanwhile,the smoke has cleared and Gohan can be seen standing on the ground.He fires a blast, which Eighteen doesn't have time to dodge.So,she takes it,falling on the ground.She stands up.The two foes launch themselves to each other and start hand struggling.For several moments,none of them budges an inch. Eighteen(thinking)-Heh.Even if we have equal forces,my engine is infinite. Gohan(thinking)-I can't let this struggle go on,or i'll be the first one to fold up. Gohan headbutts Eighteen's head.However,she smiles.She fires two laser beams from her eyes.The laser beams connect,forcing Gohan's back to the ground.Eighteen somersaults in the air and lands with her knees on Gohan's genitalia.The half Saiyan leaves a girlie scream and jumps high by pain.Blinded by rage,he attacks Eighteen and punches her hard on stomach.He continues with a flurry of punches and,finally,he elbows her,sending her on a big rock which is shattered.Eighteen emerges from the fragments.Despite the beating she just received,she's smiling. Gohan-NOW,BEACH.I'll blow you to bits. He puts his hands forward for a massenko. Eighteen(thinking)-Heh.Rage and fatigue have made him slow and careless.I'll finish it now. She throws a destructo disc,before the opponent can fire his attack.Gohan jumps to dodge,but the disc cuts off both his legs.Gohan falls with his back on the ground and yells in pain. Eighteen-Don't tell me you want to continue. Gohan floats. Gohan-I will... Eighteen smiles. Eighteen-Fine.It's your funeral. Suddenly Eighteen's stomach hurts.She starts vomitting.After several minutes of vomitting,she declares quit.Grand Kai goes and heals Gohan, restoring his legs too.According to the rules,after every fight,Grand Kai heals the winner,so that he'll be fresh in the next match.This way,all matches will be as exciting as possible. Kuririn-What's wrong,honey?You almost had him... Eighteen-Kuririn,i think i'm... Kuririn-You mean,Marron will get a sibling?WOW,THAT'S WONDERFUL.Forget about that stupid tournament.Let's go home. The couple walks away,hugging each other. Edited by no name, Jan 10 2013, 04:07 PM.
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Jan 11 2013, 02:34 PM Post #5 |
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CHAPTER 3 Goku vs Majuub The foes are standing opposed to each other. Goku(thinking)-I think i'll go all out from the beginning. Goku goes SSJ3 and the match starts.They launch themselves to each other.Their elbows collide.The contact continues for a few seconds.While their respective elbows are trying to push back each other,Majuub raises his other hand,trying to punch Goku's face.However,Goku does the same and manages to hit him first,forcing fusion Buu's back on the ground.Then,he floats and showers him with a barrage of ki balls.To his surprise,Majubb flies out of the smoke and punches Goku.While the Saiyan is still fazed,Majuub somersault kicks him sending him to open a hole in the ground.The pink human lands and Goku gets out of the hole,with blood and bruises. Goku(thinking)-Wow,i really felt that. Majubb-I think i'll start getting serious now. Goku-Wait,you mean you're not... Majuub-You must be kidding.But,since you're a worthy opponent,i may honor you with showing something more than half my power. Goku-WHAT? Majuub fires a blast and Goku dodges by leaping.He fires more and Goku runs away with leaps.Majuub flies to chase him and continues firing blasts. While they're running between two mountains,the Buu fighter has an idea.Instead of aiming Goku,he fires at the mountain,causing a large chunk of it to fall on the Saiyan.Goku is immobilized.Majuub lands and starts firing a barrage of blasts.Goku jumps out of the smoke and floats.He's messed up whereas Majuub is good as new. Goku-KAME... Majuub(thinking)-So,he's gonna use instant transmission kamehameha combo. Goku-...HAME... Majuub(thinking)-I'll let him do it and drain his energy.I think i can take it.Even if it damages me,i have regeneration. Majuub braces himself.Goku teleports in front of him and fires.But,to everyone's surprise,the blast goes through the foe as if it wasn't real.Majuub realizes that Goku firing the kamehameha was an illusion image.Before he can realize anything else,the real Goku appears behind him,launching himself,with an aura around his hand.He hits Majuub with Dragon Fist.Actually,that was a desperate attempt,but,to even Goku's surprise,the attack totally disintegrates the pink one. Referee-AND THE WINNER IS GOKU.SO,THE FIRST SEMI FINAL WILL BE A FATHER VS SON MATCH.HOW SWEET. |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 11 2013, 07:27 PM Post #6 |
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The story is overall great and funny, but what kind of android did 18 became if she can both disconnect her head and be pregnant at the same time? |
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Jan 11 2013, 08:13 PM Post #7 |
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The same Android that doesn't age,need food,feel pain,get fatigued and gets pregnant at the same time. |
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Jan 11 2013, 10:11 PM Post #8 |
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Feel like a sir
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It's a good fanfic. I liked the idea of yamcha's wolves race. |
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Jan 12 2013, 03:09 PM Post #9 |
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CHAPTER 4 Piccolo vs Tien The fight has started.The foes have been exchanging invisibly fast blows for a while,when Piccolo manages to deliver a punch on Tien's face,sending him to shatter a mountain.Tien emerges from the ruins.Piccolo smiles and starts walking slowly to him. Piccolo-Heh.You're good.I think i'll show you a fraction of my true power. Suddenly,with invisible speed,Piccolo appears in front of Tien,catching him by surprise.He grabs him from the neck with his one arm and lifts him. Tien can't breath.Suddenly,his body becomes red. Tien-KAIOKEN. Tien breaks free and leaps far from his foe.Piccolo smiles again. Piccolo-I didn't expect you to know such a technique.But,trust me,doubling your power is not enough.You only escaped my grab because you caught me by surprise. Tien smiles. Tien-Who told you twice kaioken is my limit?KAIOKEN TIMES 1000 Piccolo gets terrified. Piccolo-TIMES WHAT... Tien launches himself to the Namek and punches him,opening a large hole in his guts.Piccolo steps back and bends his knees. Piccolo-Darn,this is a hard amount to regenerate. Piccolo slowly heals himself.When he recovers from pain,he remembers the battle is still on.But,Tien is no longer there.Piccolo turns around,but it's too late.Tien is floating,with his body still red. Tien-NEO TRI BEAM. Piccolo is obliterated. Referee-IT'S AMAZING.A HUMAN BEAT A NAMEK.THE FIRST BIG SURPRISE OF THIS TOURNAMENT,PEOPLE. CHAPTER 5 Vegeta vs Yamcha Yamcha(thinking)-At last,Vegeta.I'll have my revenge for you stealing my girlfriend. Yamcha glares at his foe and the Saiyan has a weird feeling. Vegeta(thinking)-What is that?His chi is steadily increasing. They launch themselves to each other.Yamcha outspeeds the prince and punches him first,forcing him to roll over the ground.Vegeta stands up in fury.Yamcha has still the same haughty look in his eyes. Vegeta(thinking)-Perhaps,i must transform... Mad by rage,for having to transform just to beat Yamcha,Vegeta goes SSJ2.However,as soon as he has transformed,he's surprised to see that Yamcha's looks have also started to change.His eyes become red,his teeth become long and sharp and his hair also becomes somewhat longer. Vegeta,and even Goku among the spectators,are stunned at how much his power has increased with the transformation. Yamcha(beast voice)-Allow me to introduce you my Wolf Mode. Before Vegeta can recover from the shock,Yamcha appears in front of him.He catches the foe's head,with both his arms,and headbutts him.Vegeta's forehead becomes bloody and he yells in pain.Unfortunately for him,more pain is yet to come.Yamcha bites the Saiyan's shoulder.Vegeta jumps high in pain.He furiously launches himself to the foe,from the air.Yamcha fires a red beam from his mouth,which connects to the launching Saiyan. Right after that,Yamcha flies below the half conscious Vegeta,before the latter can fall down,and knees his stomach,sending him further above.Then, he appears above him and hits him on the back,with both his hands,sending him to crash on the ground.Yamcha lands.Vegeta manages to stand up. Referee-HAS THE MATCH BEEN DECIDED? Vegeta-SHUT UP. The mushroom referee trembles by those words. Yamcha(beast voice)-It's over,weakling. Vegeta-YOU CALLED ME A WEAKLING?HAAA... Vegeta goes SSJ3.Yamcha is surprised by that and,as a result,he loses his wolf form. Vegeta-THIS IS IT. Vegeta punches Yamcha in the guts,knocking him unconscious. Referee-VEGETA WINS. Vegeta is ready to kill Yamcha,when Goku appears in front of him. Goku-Wait,Vegeta.You'll be disqualified. Vegeta-I thought killing is allowed. Goku-Yeah,but during battles only. Vegeta-Darn you Kakarrot.If i didn't want so badly to fight you in the final,i'd kill him right now. Yamcha(thinking)-Darn me.Even in the craziest fanfic,i can't win a single match. Author's note-From here on,i don't know how often i'll be able to update,since i'll be busy with Debate Tournament for a while. Edited by no name, Jan 12 2013, 03:11 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 12 2013, 06:09 PM Post #10 |
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Oh, man, I was so hoping Yamcha would win:( Darn you, Vegeta! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jan 12 2013, 06:10 PM.
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Jan 12 2013, 09:27 PM Post #11 |
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CHAPTER 6 Gohan vs Goku Goku launches himself to Gohan.The half Saiyan takes a fighting posture.When Goku has almost reached his target,Gohan performs a sweep kick. To dodge it,Goku brakes and floats a little above Gohan.Then,he bends his head forward.As a result,his long SSJ3 hair messes with Gohan's face tickling him.Goku exploits Gohan's momentary distraction and kicks him on the chin,sending him high in the air.Then,he appears above him and elbows him,sending him to crash on the ground.Immediately,he launches himself to the fallen Gohan,intending to knee him on the neck. Goku(thinking while launching)-I'm sorry for the lethal hit,son.Grand Kai will revive you later. Goku's fatal attack connects.The full Saiyan stands on his feet.The referee starts counting. Goku(thinking)-He's probably dead... To his surprise,Gohan stands up.He smiles. Gohan-Good strategy,dad.Too bad your power level just isn't enough. Goku-Heh.Are you sure?I have other ideas. Gohan-Listen.I know i won the quarter final by dumb luck.But,that doesn't discourage me.I'm gonna win this tournament. Goku(releasing yellow aura)-Then,bring it on. Gohan-KAMEHAMEHA. Goku jumps to dodge.To his surprise,he sees the blast following him.He's about to fly higher,but Gohan appears above him and hits him,sending him to collide with the blast.A massive explosion is caused.When the smoke is cleared,Gohan is standing and Goku is fallen opposed to him. Referee-1,2... Gohan-Hold your water,he'll get up.If he was unconscious,he'd have reverted to base. Goku gets up. Goku(thinking)-I guess all i've got left to do is this... Goku and Gohan launch themselves to each other.Each of them has an aura around his fist.An illusion image of an ape can be seen above each of them.Their fists collide.They remain still,with the collision going on,for a few moments.The ape illusions above them are struggling,trying to bite each other.Finally,Gohan's ape bites Goku's one in the neck.The illusions vanish.Gohan's fist overpowers Goku's,forcing the full Saiyan's back on the ground.Goku gets up with difficulty. Gohan-Why are you so persistent,dad?Even if i know you'll be revived,i don't want to kill you. Goku(thinking)-So,are these my limits?Does this mean i will never become stronger than i am now? Gohan-Just give up. Goku-NO,I WILL NOT ACCEPT IT.I HAVE NO LIMITS. To Gohan's,and everyone else's,surprise.Goku undergoes a transformation.His hair become black and raised,like in base form,but,now,it's longer. Despite the increase in length,the hair remain raised.A red aura surrounds him for a few moments. Gohan-Dad,is that you? Goku-Once more,i surpassed my limits.I guess this is the Super Saiyan 4. Gohan-Let's see what you can do now... Gohan launches himself and repeatedly tries to punch Goku.His father repeatedly dodges by disappearing and reappearing,either in the exact same spot,or inches away.Gohan leaps back. Gohan(thinking)-My only hope is to fire a big one... Goku appears in front of him and punches him on stomach,knocking him unconscious. Referee-WE HAVE A WINNER. Author's note-The SSJ4 of this story is different from that of GT.It doesn't have as high a multiplier.I see it as something like 2,5x SSJ3 Edited by no name, Jan 12 2013, 09:34 PM.
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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 12 2013, 09:32 PM Post #12 |
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YESSSS Tien wins! Thanks no name |
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Jan 13 2013, 06:44 PM Post #13 |
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Feel like a sir
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Lol,Tien is crazy about Tien winning. |
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| Alex D. Boss | Jan 13 2013, 07:11 PM Post #14 |
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Jan 13 2013, 10:40 PM Post #15 |
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CHAPTER 7 Tien vs Vegeta Vegeta(thinking)-Darn you Kakarrot.Once more,you slipped ahead of me.Anyways,now i have to concentrate on the semi final.Not that i'll have any problem against this weakling. Tien-KAIOKEN TIMES 1000 The red aura surround Tien.Nevertheless,the human is standing calm. Goku-Unbelievable.He can keep it on for longer periods of time than just moments,without much strain. Vegeta goes SSJ3.The two fighters vanish.Only their collisions can be heard,while everything around collapses by their power.The spectators are watching in amazement.Despite they can't see what's going on,they're sure that neither of the two competitors is giving an inch. Referee-IT LOOKS LIKE THEY'RE PERFECTLY EVEN. They reappear.Tien is fallen down,in bloods and bruises,whereas Vegeta is standing smiling. Vegeta-Even?Yeah,sure... The audience faints.Tien gets up. Vegeta-Still alive,trash? Goku-Tien,quit.I don't want to be rude,but you'll be killed.It's an impressive feat that you can raise kaioken to 1000x,but... Tien-Sorry to disappoint you,but i can raise it more. Goku and Vegeta-WHAT? Tien-KAIOKEN TIMES 5000 Tien launches himself to Vegeta and delivers a punch that connects.The Saiyan leaps back and steps on a mountain.From there,he launches himself to Tien,intending to punch.Tien floats and Vegeta punches the ground instead,forming a small crater.He immediately flies to meet Tien and goes for a punch on the human's stomach.This time,his aim is true.Tien winces and Vegeta exploits that to go behind him and punch his back as well.Then, he goes above and hits Tien's head,sending him to crash on the ground.Tien has some difficulty to get up.Vegeta launches himself to him from the air Vegeta-AND THE FINAL BLOW... Tien gets up and points his finger to Vegeta. Tien-SUPER DODONPA. The blast hits Vegeta,who falls on the ground,still standing though. Vegeta-YOU SCUM. The two foes charge their blasts. Vegeta-FINAL FLASH. Tien-TRI BEAM. The beams collide,with Vegeta's one winning.Tien can be seen thrown out of the smokes and hitting on a mountain.He stays down,seemingly unconscious.His body's a wreck and his chi is gone.Vegeta smiles. Vegeta-He's dead. Referee-It looks like he's dead,but the rules say i must count...ONE,TWO,THREE,FOUR,FIVE... Among the audience,Chaotzu is crying. Chaotzu-Poor Tien.You were so close. Referee-...SIX,SEVEN,EIGHT... Goku(thinking)-So,this is it Vegeta.Only you and i are left in this tournament.This is our fated match. Referee-...NINE,TE... Tien stands up. Tien-SOLAR FLARE. Tien appears behind the blinded Vegeta. Tien-KAIOKEN TIMES 10.000 Tien hits Vegeta's neck with a karate chop,knocking him unconscious.The referee counts to ten and Vegeta doesn't wake up.Tien wins.The audience goes wild. Edited by no name, Jan 13 2013, 10:47 PM.
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