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Dec 18 2012, 10:02 PM Post #1 |
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PART 1 Sky Palace... After a lot of exciting battles,Buu has finally been defeated and peace has been restored.Dende is standing on the edge of the platform,overseeing the planet.However,his face indicates no happiness.Mr.Popo goes near him. Mr.Popo:Why are you worried,my lord? Dende:I guess you already know.You can sense it too,can't you? Mr.Popo:Yes,Mr.Popo does.An unidentified evil presence is somewhere on Earth... Dende:...but we can't figure out what and where it is. Mr.Popo:There is a way.The ancient ritual Kamis perform to reveal the identity of unknown evil spirits. Dende:You know that can be dangerous. Mr.Popo:Won't it be more dangerous to let our uncertainty drag on? Dende:You're right.Let's do it. Mr.Popo brings some necessary objects(cups,stone tablets etc).Dende starts chanting in an unknown language.Soon,smoke comes from many directions and gathers above the two surprised persons.The smoke finally is materialized and takes the form of a person,who is now floating above them.It's Vegeta! Mr.Popo:Lord gracious.He's... Dende:Is that you...Vegeta? Vegeta:Yes and no.But it doesn't matter,for i'm killing you right now! Dende and Popo sweatdrop by terror. Dende:What do you mean by "yes and no"?Please,explain. Vegeta:Fine,since you're going to die anyway... And he starts telling his story... Vegeta:When Vegeta died recently,because of his heroic sacrifice,his soul was sent to a place where he was cleansed of all the evil in him.When he came back to life,that evil came back too,but,since it no longer had a body to live in,it started wandering on Earth,as a spirit.But,because you were stupid enough to perform that ancient and dangerous ritual,you gave that evil a body. Dende:You're... Vegeta:SHUT UP,SMARTMOUTH.Yes,i am that evil.I am the original,pure evil Vegeta.I am what my counterpart used to be,years ago,when he first came at Earth,long before turning into a sensitive,pathetic earthling.THE TRUE,RUTHLESS PRINCE OF SAIYANS IS BACK. Dende:What are your intentions?Surpassing Goku. Vegeta:Har,har.Of course not.My counterpart's obsession with Kakarrot was born by his pride as a warrior.Myself,i have no such values.I'm going to take up the old plan.The plan to become the next emperor of the galaxy,after Freeza.NOW SUCK IT UP AND DIE. With a plain ki blast,Vegeta kills both Dende and Mr.Popo.And so,Vegeta's evil was manifested with a new body of its own.From now on,we'll be calling him Prince,so that he's not confused with the regular Vegeta.Prince puts his two fingers on his forehead.Vegeta's pride always prevented him from asking Goku to teach him Instant Transmission.But,Prince doesn't have such issues.And,since he's a genius(even greater genius than Vegeta), tapping into his counterpart's visual memories of Goku using the technique is enough for him to learn it.It looks like,for some reason,even though Prince has the same power level as Vegeta,he's superior in terms of brains. Kai's planet... Old Kai is sitting on the grass "reading" a porno magazine and drooling,when a ki blast burns it into ashes.He looks and sees Prince standing in front of him. Old Kai:What do you think you're doing you *$#,@*... A small energy dome surrounds both of them. Prince:This is a technique of my creation.My counterpart doesn't know it.This dome isolates us from the rest of the world,as if it's a totally different universe.Until i deactivate it,no one can enter it and you can't escape it nor contact anyone with telepathy. Old Kai:Wait...you're not Vegeta... Prince:BINGO. Prince grabs Kai's neck and lifts him. Prince:Now listen to me old coot.Perform on me the ritual you did with Kakarrot's son,or i'm going to torture you for hours.Long hours of unbelievable suffering. Old Kai(whispering):I'll do it. Prince lets him fall down.They both sit on the ground.Ashamed of himself for showing such weakness and selfishness,Old Kai starts. 24 hours later... Old Kai:Ok,i'm done. Prince stands up and looks at his hands. Prince:Yes,i can feel it.The power is welling from inside me. Old Kai:Now,deactivate this thing and leave me alone. Prince smiles. Prince:First,i have to make sure you won't use this trick of yours to strengthen my enemies. He fires a blast at the terrified Old Kai.When the smoke clears,Old Kai is still there,now with a halo above him. Prince:Ok,one more to go. Old Kai:NOOO... Another ki blast and Old Kai is obliterated.Prince deactivates the dome.He stands still for a while,looking troubled. Prince(thinking):Now i can easily beat the rest,but Kakarrot's son is a different matter.He may be a problem... Finally,he smiles. Prince(thinking):Well,time for the second part of my plan. Using instant transmission,he disappears.What is the second part of his plan?Will Z forces be able to stop him? |
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Dec 21 2012, 12:20 AM Post #2 |
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Part 2 On Namek,life goes peacefully,until,in the middle of a village,Prince appears,shocking the residents.He starts destroying and killing and,soon,he has one dragonball.On Kai's Planet,Kibitoshin is watching from the crystal ball.He's further worried by the fact that Old Kai has mysteriously vanished.He sends a telepathetic message to the Saiyans. Kibitoshin(message):Quit whatever you're doing and hurry.Namek is in terrible trouble. On a desert of Namek,Prince,who has already collected all dragonballs,is discussing with Porunga.He learned perfectly the Namek code in an instant,by just touching a Namek's head.He remembered that Goku had done the same thing,long ago,when he had just arrived on Namek,to draw information from Kuririn's mind.So,he thought he could do it too.And,unfortunately,he was right!Anyway,the 5 Saiyans appear a few metres behind Prince's back and realize they're too late. Porunga:Now,state your third wish. Prince:No third wish.You can go. Porunga:Fine.Farwell. Porunga goes and the spheres scatter.Prince turns to the other Saiyans. Prince:Well,here comes the circus.Har,har. Trunks runs near him.His eyes are a little wet. Vegeta:TRUNKS,DON'T... Trunks looks at Prince. Trunks:Father,i'm asking you to stop... Prince:I HAVE NO SON. He finger flicks Trunks.Then,he turns to Vegeta. Prince:You disgust me.All those years,while you were supressing me more and more,i was watching you from deep in your soul turning into a pathetic earthling.I was mad for being unable to prevent you.I was mad for the chances you had to conquer the universe,which you simply wasted. Vegeta:Huh?What chances? Prince:Hah.You've become so pitiful that you never even noticed your opportunities.The year during which Kakarrot was on Yardrat,you could have gathered the Earth dragonballs and wish for immortality.When you first came out of the spirit room,you could have killed Kakarrot right away and then destroy Cell before he could perfect his body.I even heard from your adult son,who had come from the future,about the great chance you wasted at that other timeline.6 months before Androids appeared,when Kakarrot died,you could have destroyed Earth and go to take over Planet Trade Organization.I can't believe you missed all of them!You're a disgrace for the Saiyans. Vegeta:I'VE HAD ENOUGH. Vegeta launches himself,but Prince repels him with a punch. Goku:Vegeta,you know you can do nothing by yourself.We have to fuse. Prince:Har,har.Do you think you can beat me?I think you can easily understand that my first wish to Porunga was immortality. Goku:And what was your second one? Prince:Oh,you'll soon find out.For the time being,farewell. Prince touches his head's sides with his hands. Goku:Don't tell me that is... Prince:SOLAR FLARE. The gang are blinded.Later... Gohan:Why did he go?I thought he wanted to fight us. Vegeta:Don't be a fool.He knew he couldn't win head on against all of us.The only sure thing is he's plotting something. Goku:Ok,let's scatter and start looking for him. What's Prince's plan?And what was his second wish to the dragon? |
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 21 2012, 10:01 AM Post #3 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Trunks is always such a cry baby around his father whenever he does something wrong:D |
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Dec 22 2012, 01:52 PM Post #4 |
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Part 3 Gohan is flying in a slow pace. Gohan(thinking):Darn.All those years,we've been practicing so much tracking chi,yet we've forgotten to practice our eyes! When he's flying past a mountain,suddenly,Prince appears from behind the mountain.He's wearing an earring.Catching Gohan off guard,he quickly attaches another earring to the half Saiyan's ear. Gohan:What the...NOOO. The two warriors fuse into Veguhan.He's wearing Gohan's gi and Vegeta's boots.He has Vegeta's hair.His face is something between the two of them.The others quickly go there,having felt the new chi,which makes Goku's and Vegeta's potara fusion look like a small fry. Vegeta:Who's that?Don't tell me... Veguhan:Har,har.You must have got it by now.My second wish was a pair of potara earrings.Thus,i fused with the only person that could beat me. However,in a potara fusion,the more intense the personality of a participant,the greater that person's control over the fused being.And since i'm such a fierce person,as opposed to the mild mannered Gohan,i fused without losing my own free will! Goku:Well,come to think of it,when we fused via potara,Vegeta was the dominant personality... Veguhan:Har,har.With that trick,i practically absorbed Gohan.GET DOWN. All fighters land.Veguhan powers up with a white aura. Vegeta:Wake me up...He has such power,without even being a super saiyan... Veguhan:Fool.We can't go super saiyan,since we both underwent the ritual of that old man.Whom i wiped out of existence. Goku's eyes become wet. Goku:You mean Old Kai is...NOW YOU'RE IN FOR IT. A huge dome appears,covering a vast area. Veguhan:This is a technique of mine.Just to make sure you won't escape and no one will come to help you.Even instant transmission can't take you out of it.Your only way to escape is defeating me.Or dying. Goku&Vegeta:FUUSION. Goten&Trunks:FUUSION. SSJ3 Gogeta and SSJ3 Gotenks appear.They both launch themselves to the foe,who dodges them by hovering.They jump high,towards him once more.Veguhan hits both of them,one with each of his arms,sending them back to the ground.Then,he lands again.Gotenks and Gogeta have already bruises and blood on them.Veguhan smiles. Veguhan:Come on guys.To make it more interesting,i won't attack for 30 seconds.Use any tricks you like. Gogeta fires a final flash and Gotenks a kamehameha.Veguhan slaps both blasts,one with each of his arms,sending them to hit on the dome,with absolutely no effect at all. Veguhan:Better do something quickly.Your 30 seconds are almost up. Gogeta launches himself to the foe and attacks with a flurry of hits.Veguhan blocks every single one of them.He counterattacks with a swipe kick, which Gogeta dodges by jumping high.He stays floating and extends his arms forward. Veguhan:Hmf.Parlor tricks. Gogeta launches a kamehameha from his one arm and a final flash from the other.The two blasts fuse.Sensing the attack's force,the evil fighter wide opens his eyes.He puts his arms in front of his face,forming a cross shape with them,and blocks the attack. Veguhan:Whoa.This one made me break a sweat! Gotenks:Hey,honey.Look. Veguhan turns and sees an army of ghosts flying towards him.All ghosts manage to make contact,causing a massive explosion.When the smokes go away,Gogeta and Gotenks are shocked to see that their foe isn't even wounded.He only has some black marks on his skin and clothes. Veguhan:I honestly can't see what you hope to achieve with those tricks.You only hurt your prides as warriors. The fusion heroes get desperate expressions.They seem to have lost their will to fight. Veguhan:Ok,thanks for the fun,but i have a universe to conquer,so... Veguhan jumps and punches Gogeta,sending him to the ground.Then,he launches himself to Gotenks and kicks him.Both fusion heroes fall unconscious and defuse.Veguhan floats and charges a blast to finish them off.However,the blast is never fired.The evil fusion character is forced to land. Veguhan(thinking):Huh?Is something wrong with me? The potara break and Veguhan defuses!Gohan looks angry. Prince:I can't believe it.You managed to break out of my control.You even negated the potara's supposedly irreversible mage! Gohan:I guess,after all,it's true what they say."There is no way to tell what happens when Gohan gets MAAAD" Prince smiles. Prince:Fine.Then,i guess it all comes down to this.You against me. They both power up to their max.The final battle for the fate of the galaxy is about to begin.Stay tuned. Edited by no name, Dec 22 2012, 01:57 PM.
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Dec 23 2012, 08:58 PM Post #5 |
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Part 4 Gohan and Prince launch themselves and start exchanging hits invisibly fast.This goes on for a while,until Gohan manages to punch the Prince's stomach so hard that he penetrates his body.He pulls back his hand,which is full of bloods.Prince steps back in pain,with a hole in the guts.Then... he smiles.The hole is healed.Gohan is shocked. Prince:Heh.Under normal conditions,that would have killed me.But,as i have already told,i'm immortal.The only way to kill me is by blowing me to bits. And that,you'll never do. Gohan gets angry.Once more,they rush to each other and,this time,start hand struggling.Gohan manages to lift the whole Prince's body and throws him high.Then,he shoots him with a blast.Prince tries to block,but gets injured nevertheless.Before he can fall,Gohan appears above him and hits him hard,sending him to crash on the ground.Then,he shoots him with another blast,before he can stand up.When the explosion is over,Prince gets up, full of bloods.Gohan appears right in front of him and kicks him hard on the neck,making him step back with his head turned by an angle of over 180 decrees.Using his hands,Prince puts his head back in the correct position and smiles. Prince:That would have killed me too,was i not immortal.Har,har. More angry than ever,Gohan fires a full power kamehameha.Prince counters with a full power final flash.Gohan wins the beam struggle and Prince's back is forced on the ground.When he gets up,he's severely injured.Gohan is panting.In front of the half Saiyan's surprised eyes,Prince's wounds are instantly healed. Prince:You're finally out of breath.But,since i'm immortal,i have unlimited stamina. Gohan:SHUT UP. Gohan attacks and the fight begins again.Prince seems to start gaining the upper hand,since more and more of his hits are connecting.On the contrary,more and more of Gohan's hits are evaded by Prince. Meanwhile,out of the dome prison,Kibitoshin has arrived. Kibitoshin(thinking):I must go and heal Gohan.At this rate,he'll lose. The fused Kai tries to break the dome with energy attacks,but he can't even scratch it. Back in battle,Gohan is thrown on the dome wall and falls on the ground,having several injuries.Slowly and painfully,he stands up. Prince:Mhahahaha.Don't tell me you still have any hopes of winning. Gohan(thinking):He's right.I have no hope at all.I don't believe i can win.I DON'T BELIEVE IN MYSELF ANYMORE. Gohan falls on his knees. Prince:So,you finally realized it and decided to surrender.Fine,let's get it done.Don't worry.You won't suffer a lot.I'll finish you off quickly,for i can't wait to become the king of the universe.HAAA... Prince charges to Gohan.Instinctively,Goku's son jumps high,dodging the attack,and steps on the dome's ceiling.And,then...something miraculous happens.The dome starts shrinking,until it vanishes under Gohan's feet.The half Saiyan has somehow absorbed the energy dome.He feels a new power overflowing him. Prince:NO WAY. Gohan attacks Prince by charging to him from the sky.His eyes are red and his teeth look bigger and sharper than usual.If someone could watch that, he would swear that,for one moment,the picture of an ape appeared next to Gohan. Gohan(monstrous voice):DRAGON FIST. With a blue aura surrounding his hand,Gohan punches Prince.As soon as the hand makes contact,the villain starts disintergrating.Finally,nothing is left of him. On Kai's planet,Kibitoshin and the gang are all standing silent,grieving for Old Kai's total loss.A voice breaks the silence. Voice:Are you celebrating something? They're all shocked to turn and see Old Kai approaching,with a halo over his head. Goku:OLD MAN. With his eyes full of tears,Goku runs to him and lifts him by hugging. Old Kai:Hey,hey,easy son. Goku:Don't say anything.I don't care how that happened.All that matters is that you exist! When the rest can finally speak again,having recovered from the shock... Kibitoshin:My lord,Goku didn't ask,but i will do.So,tell me,how is this possible? Old Kai(winking):Well,let's just say i know some tricks of my own. THE END Edited by no name, Dec 23 2012, 09:14 PM.
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