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Nov 22 2012, 01:51 AM Post #1 |
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Part 1 On Kai's Planet... We're at the first few weeks after Kid Buu was defeated and life goes wonderful.Right now,Kibitoshin is fishing,while Old Kai is sitting under a tree and staring. Kibitoshin:Hey,Old Kai,look what a big one i caught.We're gonna eat as kings. Old Kai:We're more than kings,fool youngster.We're gods! Kibitoshin:Oh,yeah,that's right...ha,ha...didn't think of it... Kibitoshin instantly cooks it with a fire blast.A few minutes later,they're both sitting around a fire,having served themselves. Kibitoshin:I don't understand why we had to put the fish above a fire,since a blast was enough to cook it. Old Kai:Cause this is the traditional way of eating what you fish.Do i have to explain everything? Kibitoshin sweatdrops.Not knowing what to answer,he decides to change the subject. Kibitoshin:I'm so relieved now that Buu is gone.I haven't felt so relaxed for five million years.That is how long i had been living with the fear of that monster. Old Kai:Yeah,that fusion technique the Saiyan warriors used did the trick.It is a trully amazing technique,for Buu was helpless against it,and we never even got to see that technique's true potential. Kibitoshin(surprised):What do you mean? Old Kai:Ignorant youngster.The fusions those Saiyan guys performed were nowhere near the true power a fusion can produce... (long silence) Kibitoshin:Ok,i got it,you won't tell till i ask.So,i ask,WHAT DO YOU MEAN? Old Kai:If two warriors that resemble very much each other,in appearance...that are almost like identical twins...fuse.Then,the fusion will be almost infinitely more powerful than regular fusion. Kibitoshin(munching):Well,that's all theory(swallowing).How probable is it that there can be two persons who will be like twins,and also who will both be warriors? Afterlife,Hell... At an isolated spot,two persons look like they're waiting something.The persons are Garlic Jr. and Pilaf.You wonder how those two ended up at Hell right?Well,Pilaf's gang went there when Buu destroyed Earth,and they did not have the required "qualifications" to be resurrected by Vegeta's wish. As for Garlic Jr.,he was grumpling all the time at Dead Zone,so,finally,King Yenma decided to show mercy and move him to Hell. Garlic:Are you sure all six of them took the message to come here? Pilaf:HOW CAN I KNOW?Was i the one who sent the message?All that was that magician's idea.And he's not even here,yet... At last,six persons can be seen coming from six different directions.They all arrive almost at the same moment.They're Kwi,Dodoria,Recoome, Tambourine,Drum and Bandage.At this point,i remind that Tambourine and Drum are two of King Piccolo's henchmen,and Bandage is one of Baba's warriors.You wonder how Bandage ended up at Hell,right?Well...do you expect me to know everything? Tambourine and Kwi look at each other,in amazement.So do Drum and Dodoria.So do Bandage and Recoome. All six of them(at once):Hey,i have a twin brother! Garlic:Er-hem...gentlemen... They all turn and look at Garlic and Pilaf. Recoome:Did you two send me the message to come here? Pilaf:No.The message was actually sent to all of you.The one who called you and us here hasn't arrived yet. That moment,Babidi appears out of nowhere,using teleport. Babidi:Excellent.Now that all of you are here,we can start. Garlic:Start what?I hope you have a very good reason for making me wait for so long. Babidi:Indeed,i do.There is a way for you guys to escape Hell. The rest eight:YOU'RE KIDDING. Babidi:There is a limit of power above which one can overcome the boundaries of Afterlife and return to the Living World.Each one of you won't reach that power level in an eternity. Recoome:Then,why are you wasting our time,smart mouth?Talk,before i start pummeling you. Babidi gulps.He shows them four pairs of earrings. Babidi:I managed to make these with my mage.They will allow you to fuse with no time limit. Garlic:Interesting.But,why did you choose us to use them?There are a lot stronger guys down here. Babidi:This is the most interesting part. Babidi explains what he discovered about fusion's true potential. Kwi:So,are you giving them to us,just like that? Babidi:If you promise to resurrect me with the dragonballs,after you've returned to Earth and beat the good guys. Pilaf:Ha,ha,do you really trust us that much?You're so naive. Drum:Look who's talking...(reference to Pilaf trusting King Piccolo) Babidi:Actually,i don't trust you at all.I know that,most likely,you won't keep your promise.But,i want to have revenge against the fatso Buu and also that Goku guy,because he made Buu start thinking,thus,rebelling against me.Even if you don't keep your promise,you'll at least make them suffer. Planet Earth... Goku and his friends are all present to a great ceremony,at West City,where Hercule is honored for having saved the humanity once more.Buu isn't at Earth.He's moved to another planet until they can use dragonballs to erase him from people's memory. Hercule is standing on a stage,thanking them for the prize.Goku and the others are among the crowd.Suddenly,an explosion is heard from somewhere far.After the initial panic,everyone starts yelling at Hercule to save them from the new menace.The world champion is terrified.Finally,the five Saiyans jump on the stage.Goku makes a comfortation signal to Hercule. Hercule(microphone):Err,don't be afraid people.I decided to send those five...err,disclipines of mine to face the enemy. Hercule regains his posing. Hercule:Har,har.I can already tell that those bad guys are too weak for me to bother.So,i'll let my students do it. Goku:Thanks,master.It's an honor. Hercule:Oh,don't be modest.You've all made an amazing progress lately.Of course,you're nowhere near my strength,but,i'm sure you'll be fine. To the crowd's amazement,the Saiyans fly away.The people run trying to follow the flying heroes.Soon,Hercule has been left totally alone.He sweatdrops.He throws the microphone,in anger. Hercule:DARN.Those Saiyan freaks are stealing my show. Voice:I can help you take back your fame,Hercule.This time,maybe you're the one who'll trully save the day. Hercule looks back and gets amazed to see a man jumping on the stage with a spectacular leap.The man resembles him a lot. Hercule:A-another freak?And he looks like me?Who are you? Man:Call me King Chappa. Edited by no name, Nov 22 2012, 02:02 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 22 2012, 03:33 PM Post #2 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Another interesting idea...Where do you come up with these?:) Your stories are truly entertaining... |
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Nov 22 2012, 10:54 PM Post #3 |
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How do i come up with my ideas?I don't know,they just come at me,at random moments. Part 2 The five Saiyans stay floating for a while,trying to sense the chis. Goku:There are four insanely enormous chis coming from different directions.Vegeta,you can understand that you or me alone cannot beat them.We have to fuse. Vegeta:Sigh... Suddenly,Kibitoshin sends a telepathetic message to everyone,explaining what has happened. Trunks:Wow.So,we have to face zombies? Goten:But,then,how can we kill what's already dead? Kibitoshin:Don't worry about that.If you beat them,they will defuse and return to Hell,where they belong. Goku:So,me and Vegeta will go to the strongest of them.Gohan,you'll go to the second strongest. Gohan nods. Goku:The kids will go to the third strongest one. Goten and Trunks nod. Goku:But,we have a problem.Who will we send to the fourth one? A female voice is heard.Everyone turns in surprise. Eighteen:Don't worry.Leave that one to me. Gohan:Eighteen,are you crazy?That enemy will blink you out of existence. Eighteen:But,i won't go alone,you gooses. Seventeen appears from behind a mountain. Seventeen:Me and my sister will fuse.And,since we are literally twins,we'll get the most from the fusion. Goku:Perfect.Now,let's scatter.We have no time to lose. Goku and Vegeta land opposed to a blue,short creature. Fighter:I've been waiting this moment for so long.I had insisted on taking Goku,since we both hate him,each one for his own reasons.So,my hatred is double. Goku:You said "both of you"?So,you're a fused fighter. Fighter:That's right.I'm Garlac,the fusion of Garlic Jr. and Pilaf. Vegeta:I've never heard of those names,but this shrimp is a good example of why we shouldn't judge by looks. Goku:Vegeta,if you can sense his chi,you understand that not only do we have to fuse,but also we have to be serious from the very beginning. Vegeta nods. Goku&Vegeta:FUUUSION. Gogeta appears and he immediately turns SSJ3. Garlaf:Har,har.It's pointless.My fusion has no time limit,and also has a huge power bonus that yours hasn't. Gogeta:I'm aware.Let's fight. At another part of the desert,Gohan stands in haughtyness. Gohan:Come out.I know you're there. A fighter appears from behind a rock.He looks very much like Recoome,he wears Freeza's army clothes,but he's bold. Fighter:Greetings lad.I'm Rendage,the fusion of Recoome and Bandage.And i suppose you're that kid whose neck i broke on Namek. Gohan becomes angry by the last comment.He powers up to his ultimate form,getting momentarily surrounded by a white aura.He launches himself to Rendage.The fused warrior blocks Gohan's punch with his arm and counterattacks with his own punch,but Gohan also blocks it with his arm,then, with a front somersault kick,he forces Rendage's belly on the ground.Right after that,he yells and fires a huge blast from both of his arms,creating a botomless hole.Gohan stands panting.Suddenly,Rendage emerges from the ground,behind Gohan,and kicks him on the neck.The Saiyan takes several steps back,while his neck turns by an angle of almost 360 degrees.Rendage smiles. Rendage:Same old,huh? To his surprise,Gohan's head returns to its place.The lad smiles. Rendage:Where did you find such power? Gohan:I guess standing still for 24 hours was worth it,after al... Before he can finish his sentence,Rendage fires some energy pieces from his hands that have the shape of bandages. Rendage:BANDAGE BOND ATTACK. The bandages wrap around Gohan,totally immobilizing him.Rendage walks to him,presses Gohan's foot(to prevent him from falling down) and starts punching him. Rendage(while punching):Dum-de-dum... Gohan coughs blood.Finally,with a Broly style attack,the fused warrior presses Gohan against a mountain,forming a swallow,horizontal crater.Then, he leaps back and prepares to finish him off. Rendage:ERASER GUN. At the last moment,Gohan breaks out of the bandages,vanishes behind Rendage and hits his head with his hand,making him shut his mouth,when the blast was about to come out.As a result,the full power of the attack explodes in his mouth,causing his head to explode.Then,the headless body falls down and disappears,a sign that he has returned to Hell.Gohan falls on the ground panting,having lost all his energy by escaping the bandages. He smiles. Gohan:Huff,huff...one down...three to go... Edited by no name, Nov 22 2012, 11:03 PM.
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| Auld-Dog | Nov 24 2012, 04:54 PM Post #4 |
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Writing style-wise, its ok, needs a lot of work, but you have gone for a script way of doing things, so take it as it is. Curious, but why do the lines break up like this: Wondered if this is meant or if there is a reason for it? Idea-wise, i think its fairly interesting, you know your Dragonball mytho's, interesting take on the fusions, and the warriors you have selected. Not your usual run of the mill crew of fighters, so that was refreshing. Like the, Gohan versus Rendage fight, the ending was pratcical and brutal. Pushed Ultimate Gohan to his limits. As the final line goes, one down, three to go. But will the villians manage to gather the Dragonballs and be able to ressurect Babbidi (if they even want to) and will they be able to find and destroy Fat Buu?? |
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Nov 26 2012, 08:54 PM Post #5 |
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Part 3 Goten and Trunks fly as fast as they can,but they can't help arriving too late.The attacked city is in ruins.A fat fighter is waiting for them.He has green skin and wears the clothes of Freeza's army.The angry kids land opposed to him. Goten:Are you the one responsible for this? Fighter:I am indeed.Har,har. Goten:Grrr...you...you... Fighter:Call me Drumria.I am the result of the fusion between Drum and Dodoria.I saw you approaching from far away and decided to wait for you.I predict we'll have plenty of fun. Goten:Bastard.Now,you're in it.You're... Trunks:...going down! Trunks&Goten:FUUUSION. SSJ3 Gotenks appears.He poses as usual. Gotenks:The superhero of justice shall... Drumria shoots a mouth blast that hits home,making Gotenks cry(with tears!)in pain. Drumria(thinking):What a moron.It's the first time i see a foe leaving himself wide open like that. Gotenks is bruised and angry. Gotenks:You call that a beam?Eat this. Gotenks fires his own mouth blast.Drumria tries to dodge,but is not fast enough to totally evade the hit,so the left side of his shield-uniform is broken. As soon as he recovers from the pain,he can see Gotenks launching himself towards him.He tries to punch the launching foe,but hits only air,realizing it was a shadow illusion.The real Gotenks appears right above the shadow and kicks hard the villain's face.Then,he lands and starts rapidly punching the foe's stomach. Gotenks:Ta-da-dah-ta-da-dah... Finally,Gotenks stops to take a breath.He's surprised to see that Drumria has a totally relaxed expression. Drumria:Are you done? Gotenks flies away in terror.Drumria chases him,trying to hit him by firing repeated blasts,but Gotenks is fast enough to dodge all of them.In the heat of the explosions,Drumria loses sight of enemy.He flies around madly,trying to spot him.Meanwhile,Gotenks is hidden in a half demolished building. He's desperately panting. Gotenks(whispering):Huff,huff...so strong...what am i supposed to do? After searching for a while,Drumria has lost his patience. Drumria:SHOW UP OR I'LL START DESTROYING EVERYTHING. Gotenks decides to get out of the building.The two fusion characters now float opposed to each other. Drumria:Har,har.So,you realized you stand no chance. Gotenks:Ookay.You're a really strong guy.Only one thing is left to do.Headbutt you with all my strength. Drumria extends his arms. Drumria:Okay,do it.It won't hurt a bit. Gotenks gets red and launches himself to the opponent,delivering a strong headbutt to his stomach.Drumria is surprised by the hit's strength and is thrown far away,ending up with his back on the ground.As soon as he stands up,he sees Gotenks in front of him,with his arms extended forward. Gotenks:GALACTIC DONUT. Drumria completely vanishes into the energy rings,which form a spherical prison.Gotenks pulls back his hands. Gotenks(thinking):I have to hurry and deliver the final blow before he escapes... That moment,SSJ3 Gotenks is lost and the two base kids reappear in his place.Even worse,the very next moment,Drumria breaks free.Goten and Trunks are so fatigued that they can't even stand anymore.They lie on the ground.Drumria floats,ready to deliver the final blow. Drumria:Ho,ho,ho.How pitifully easy. Trunks smiles. Trunks:Jokes on you! Me and my friend have been taught from our past mistakes.We knew that there was a probability the fusion would wear off. GUYS,TIME TO COME OUT. An army of ghosts comes out of the building Gotenks was hiding before.They all fly at top speed towards Drumria. Ghosts:Weee... Drumria:What are those freaks?Well,they don't scare me. Drumria braces himself. Drumria:Come on freaks,come at me with all you'v...BAM,BOOM,BAM,BOOM Drumria is annihilated.The kids smile. Trunks:How about taking a nap,now? Goten:You bet. Dende is standing on the edge of the platform,petrified.He feels an outrageously strong chi approaching.Seconds later,Tambwi,the fusion of Kwi and Tambourine shows up. Tambwi:Ok,i'll ask only once.Where are the dragonballs? Dende:I'll...i'll never tell... Tambwi:Ok,i can find them myself. Tambwi kicks Dende sending him many metres away.Dende is now severely injured practically dead. Tambwi:Har,har.And that was only a love stroke.Now die. The fused fighter is ready to fire a blast,when the two androids appear. Eighteen:Stop right where you are. Tambwi:Or else what? Seventeen&Eighteen:FUUUSION. A fusion android appears.It wears Eighteen's clothes and has Seventeen's black hair.Nobody can tell for sure whether it's male or female. Android:I'm the fusion of the two androids.I'm Eightse...Sevet...darn,never mind.Just call me Superoid. Tambwi:Call yourself however you like.You'll never stand a ch... With extreme speed,Superoid kicks Tambwi,sending him kilometres higher.Right after that,he appears in front of the still launching foe and finishes him off with a plain chi blast.He lands again.Mr.Popo runs out of the palace. Mr.Popo:What's wrong,Mr.Popo felt an evil chi approaching and... Superoid:How slow you are.It's a lucky thing i exist as well. Later,Dende is lying on his bed.Mr.Popo and the Androids,who have defused by now,are there waiting for the Namek to be healed.Suddenly,all three of them get a worried expression. Eighteen:Oh,no.Gogeta's energy is falling. Mr.Popo:But,the rest fighters are all exhausted from their fights.They don't have any chi left to go and help. Seventeen:Dende has to go and heal them.When will he be ok again? Mr.Popo:Not soon.The herbs Mr.Popo gave him need one more hour to take full effect. Seventeen:Ok,i got it.Only we can help now.Let's go sis. Edited by no name, Nov 26 2012, 08:54 PM.
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Nov 28 2012, 03:30 PM Post #6 |
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Part 4 Gogeta and Garlaf are fighting in the air with rapid movements.Finally,Garlaf manages,with a hit,to send Gogeta back to the ground.Then,he launches himself there.Gogeta immediately gets up and,with an impressive high kick,repels the foe.The two fusion fighters are now standing on the ground panting.They decide to charge to each other.A golden aura appears around Gogeta's hand.A black aura appears around Garlaf's hand. Gogeta:DRAGON FIST. Garlaf:DEAD ZONE PUNCH. A blinding flash follows and,when visibility is restored,the two fighters stand,with their knees bent,looking at opposite directions.Both attacks have found target.The foes fully stand and turn to each other.Then,Gogeta reverts to base and falls on his knees again. Garlaf:Har,har.As an undead person,i have unlimited stamina.But,that doesn't apply to you as well. Gogeta defuses and the two Saiyans lie on the ground exhausted.To make matters worse,Garlaf goes back to full power. Garlaf:As you can see,when you're undead,your wounds heal extremely fast. The fusion villain floats above the Saiyans,to deliver the final blow. Garlaf:FAREW... A kick throws him on a mountain,which is shattered.Garlaf flies out of the rocks to see Superoid floating in front of him. Superoid:Game over. Garlaf:Arrgh.How many of you are there? The furious villain launches himself to the android and starts hitting with rapid punches and kicks.Superoid doesn't even budge.With a single slap,he repels the foe,sending him many metres away in the air.More angry than ever,Garlaf forms a large black ball and throws it on the opponent,causing a massive explosion.To his surprise,after the explosion,Superoid is still there,as if nothing happened. Superoid:Don't you understand?The androids were much more powerful than Garlic and Pilaf to begin with.And,since they're twins,their fusion gets the same boost as yours.IT'S OVER. Superoid flies rapidly to Garlaf and,by kneeing him on stomach,makes him spit blood.Then,by hitting him with both his hands,he sends him to form a hole on the ground.Garlaf gets out of the hole to see Superoid standing in front of him. Goku:Wow.Our Gogeta is nothing compared to this android guy. Vegeta:He's even stronger than our Vegerot. Goku:Huh?Why is Garlaf smiling?He knows it's over.Doesn't he...? Garlaf:Sorry to disappoint you,but i'm prepared for this too. He takes out of his coat a remote control. Garlaf:Babidi made it with his mage. Superoid:Huh?This device looks familiar. Vegeta:ANDROIDS,DON'T STAND CLOSE TO HIM.THAT IS... Too late.Superoid immediately defuses and the two Androids fall down unconscious.Garlaf breaks the control. Garlaf:Har,har.This time,you're trully done for. Voice:I wouldn't be so sure. A fighter stands on a rock posing. Vegeta:Hercule?What is this clown doing here? Goku:No,it's not him.He,kinda...looks like another one...someone i fought years ago,in Tenkaichi. Fighter:I'm Chacule.The fusion of Hercules and Chappa.At first,i thought of making it Herpa.But,then,i realized that it would sound like herpes and everyone would answer ''hey,too much information''. Garlaf:I DON'T CAAAARE... Garlaf rushes to him,but,with a kick,Chacule sends him high in the air.Then,he flies to meet him and,with a chi blast,sends him to the ground again. Chacule:You see,since Goku beat me at that tournament,i have trained hard and become one million times stronger.I even learned how to fly and fire chi blasts. Garlaf:EAT THIS... Garlaf fires the same black sphere as before.Chacule braces himself.He catches it with both his hands.At first,he's pushed back a little.After some struggling,he manages to throw it back to the shooter.Garlaf widely opens his eyes in terror.The black ball hits him and annihilates him,forming a large crater. The crowd yells in excitement,while a giant screen is showing Chacule stomping Garlaf.From his balcony,Hercule waves at his fans. Hercule(thinking):It's a good think i had set my camera behind a rock. Hercule had told the reporters that he was looking a little different in the video,because he had transformed into his super form.Now,everyone believed that Hercule could fly and fire blasts.As for Chappa,he just left,having no problem to let Hercule enjoy all the credits. |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 28 2012, 05:58 PM Post #7 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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I don't think Chappa could ever become so strong, without a good reason, or boost or something. |
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Nov 29 2012, 02:24 PM Post #8 |
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Since human Z fighters did,why not Chappa too |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 29 2012, 05:06 PM Post #9 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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But stronger than Goku, soooooooooooooooooooooooooo stronger than Goku?! I don't believe so. |
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Nov 29 2012, 11:26 PM Post #10 |
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He wasn't stronger than Goku.The ''twin'' boost made the fusion stronger than that of Goku/Vegeta. |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 30 2012, 09:16 PM Post #11 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Still a non believer:D |
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| Auld-Dog | Dec 1 2012, 11:05 AM Post #12 |
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Different take on the outcome of a Z tale. Different heroes come out on top and some unexpected twists. Theres a lack of description and yet for some reason it was clear as day as to what was going on, you gave a basic set-up and i imagined the rest, seen enough Z battles to know the forumula. lol, some reason i liked the ending, seeing a completely unexpected character take the limelight, lol someone too that most wouldn't even put in the Dragonball bracket, never mind EndofZ bracket. I didn't question it too mucn and just went with it, was a quirky end. |
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Dec 1 2012, 12:36 PM Post #13 |
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I had no idea i'm so good. |
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 1 2012, 05:45 PM Post #14 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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I understand you wanted a twist, it would have been really stupid to make Goku the hero again, but this is too much |
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