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Dreams of World Conquest
Topic Started: Oct 31 2012, 09:25 PM (480 Views)
Nimbo-Bimbo lord of all noobs
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The adult half-breed was reading a book as his father and the reincarnated human sparred atop the ancient, levitating platform they were all on.

"Goddamnit," the older Namekian called. "Why the hell can't this narrator call us by our names?"

The half-breed gently closed his book. "Piccolo. What was that thing you wanted to show me?"

"Stand up, Gohan. This is something really important..."

The older Namekian led the half-breed to a secluded area of the Lookout, showing him 7 round orange balls speckled with various amounts of black stars, hidden inside of one of the many decaying pillars in the Lookout, and partially obscured by rotten corpses.

"Piccolo! What are these?! I can feel power... emanating from these."

"That's what I wanted to ask you. Gohan... have you ever heard of anything like these in the literature you've read?"

"No... Piccolo, these are Dragon Balls. They're different, they're darker, but they're Dragon Balls. You're the one who should know about these."

"..."

"Piccolo, something's weirdly tempting about it. I can't help but..." Before he could notice what he was doing, the half-breed laid his hand upon the spherical, dark relics. His glasses flared ominously from the light of these sinister Dragon Balls suddenly glowing, obscuring his eyes.

"Gohan, what are you-!"

"Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn."

"What the-"

An impossibly huge serpentine being materialized, floating above the Lookout. Merely its head was the side of three Lookouts. At an initial glance, all that registered was red scales, ominously glowing yellow eyes, and sheer terror.

"ʜᴇʟʟᴏ ᴘᴇᴀsᴀɴᴛs ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏʀᴛᴀʟs. ɪ sʜᴀʟʟ ɢʀᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴʏ ᴏɴᴇ ᴡɪsʜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴏɴᴇ ᴡɪsʜ ᴏɴʟʏ ᴏғ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴄʜᴏᴏsɪɴɢ."

Gohan's voice had seemed to drop several octaves lower, and he spoke with a newfound sinisterness. He chuckled softly. "Now, Dragon, I can tell there are some catches to this." His glasses still had an ominous glare on them, still obscuring his eyes. "Tell me."
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And? And? Then what happened? This ended so abruptly...
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Nimbo-Bimbo lord of all noobs
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Forgot to add "To Be Continued..." at the end.

Will be continuing it.
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Not if you've left for an extended period of time again. :/
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Alternate beginning to GT perhap?

Did Gohan become possessed by the dark star dragonballs?
Piccolo has an insistent tone here, he's real worried by this new discovery.

No idea what to expect but the abrupt ending and interesting beginning has me intrigued to read more. Good descriptions, painted the scene and characters well.

Lol at Piccolo's little remark to the Narrator.
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Thanks Writer-Fighter; Part 2:


The dragon chuckled. "sᴍᴀʀᴛ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ʜᴀʟғ-ʙʀᴇᴇᴅ ɴᴏᴡ, ᴀʀᴇ ᴡᴇ? ᴛʜᴇʀᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴛᴡᴏ ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜᴇs: ᴏɴᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴀᴛ ɪ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ sᴏᴜʟ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ɪᴍᴍᴇᴅɪᴀᴛᴇʟʏ ɢᴏ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟʟ ᴡʜᴇɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴅɪᴇ. sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ɪs ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴀғᴛᴇʀ ʏᴏᴜ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡɪsʜ, ᴛʜᴇsᴇ ᴅʀᴀɢᴏɴʙᴀʟʟs ᴡɪʟʟ ғʟʏ ᴀᴘᴀʀᴛ ɪɴ 7 ᴅɪғғᴇʀᴇɴᴛ ᴅɪʀᴇᴄᴛɪᴏɴs ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇ ʜɪᴅᴅᴇɴ ᴀɴʏᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ɢᴀʟᴀxʏ; ɪғ ʏᴏᴜ ᴅᴏ ɴᴏᴛ ғɪɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʟᴀᴄᴇ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ᴏɴ ᴛʜɪs ᴘʟᴀɴᴇᴛ ʙʏ ᴏɴᴇ ʏᴇᴀʀ ʟᴀᴛᴇʀ, ᴛʜᴇ ɴᴇɢᴀᴛɪᴠᴇ ᴇɴᴇʀɢʏ ᴀᴄᴄᴜᴍᴜʟᴀᴛᴇᴅ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ɪᴍᴍᴇᴅɪᴀᴛᴇ ᴅᴇsᴛʀᴜᴄᴛɪᴏɴ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴘʟᴀɴᴇᴛ."

Gohan's glasses seemed to be glaring ominously perpetually. He pushed them up, chuckling gently, sinisterly as he did. The dragon chuckled as well in response. Piccolo stared on in terror.

"G-- G-- Gohan. You-- you wouldn't--"

"Silence, Namekian. Now, dragon... now for my wish." Gohan stared at the dragon in the eye, still managing to see through his ominously glaring glasses. "Merge with me!"

"ᴡʜᴀᴛ!" said the Dragon and Piccolo simultaneously.

"It's all so simple and ingenious. Merging with you will give me access to my soul, will increase my power tenfold, allow me to control the Dragon Balls and therefore let them remain here, and it will give me some of your abilities as well."

"ᴅᴀᴍɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴘᴇᴀsᴀɴᴛ, ғ***ᴇʀ, ᴍᴏᴛʜᴇʀ-- ʏᴏᴜ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ... ɢᴏᴅᴅᴀᴍɴ ʜᴀʟғ-ʙʀᴇᴇᴅ!"

"My wish is your command, is it not?" Gohan chuckled. The Dragon did not.

The Almighty Dragon let out an everlasting roar, twisting eternally, spasming, beginning to glow of energy until it was a being made purely out of energy, a white apparation in the shape of its being, and it rammed its head into the half-breed's chest, flying into it, and it spiralled around the half-breed and entered his mouth, all whilst the half-breed Saiyan was phantasmagorically levitating in the air, head turned upwards, mouth wide open, arms going out downwards at a 45 degree angle, and the dragon and the half-breed became one.
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Woah, didn't see that coming. Really short chapter, but easy to read.

What the heck has got into Gohan?

Dragon cursing and swearing at the wish request was funny.

Turned the Dragons rules right on its head lol.
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Big thumbs up to member, -Zero- for the means to the sig. ;)
Nicholas D. Wildwood gets the credit for creating and designing the sig.

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Ha-Ha!!!:)) Now that's just ingenios. And funny story too. The way they use BAD words reminds me of South Park:)
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