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| Megasaiyan | Jan 3 2013, 08:07 PM Post #16 |
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Sorry, but it needs some little modifications. As I mentioned, I need to turn Gohan back into Mystic, making him losing it and becoming SSJ3, something weaker, didn't make sense, so I must get to that episode. Plus, didn't you ever wonder how come Friezell is so strong, stronger than SSJ3? A normal Fusion Dance between Cell and Frieza couldn't even be possible cause Cell would have to lower his power level to do the dance with Frieza, which would make him weaker, rather than stronger, so I made Cell to actually absorb Frieza. I really need to do this for it to become a worthy fanfic, so one day, it could be turned into something more. So I need to fix every possible error before that, if not, it will be filled with plotholes like GT. I really plan to make the battles longer on New Namek and more interesting, and even on Earth. Please be patient, as I am honored that someone is actually demanding for me to post more new episodes of my fanfic. Thank you! |
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Jan 3 2013, 11:02 PM Post #17 |
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I thought Freeza and Cell were equal in Freezel Saga.It was stated in one of your episodes. |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 3 2013, 11:45 PM Post #18 |
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Indeed, but it was stated wrong. Unless, Frieza discovered a fifth form, which he didn't. So Cell will absorb Frieza instead, thus becoming the all powerfull Friezell. |
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| sephcel24 | Jan 4 2013, 11:30 AM Post #19 |
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Art prevails!
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lol just finished the first post so long bro but nice |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 4 2013, 12:28 PM Post #20 |
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Thanks. Next time try to keep up so you wouldn't get left behind:D |
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| sephcel24 | Jan 4 2013, 12:31 PM Post #21 |
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Art prevails!
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ok :))) |
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Jan 4 2013, 11:48 PM Post #22 |
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I agree with the idea of Gohan returning to mystic form.But,i liked seeing Freeza and Cell as equals.I advice you not to change it. |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 14 2013, 09:06 PM Post #23 |
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Episode 18: Bad News On the last episodes of Dragon Ball F, Goku finally returned after all those years to his loved ones only to find out that he missed two important funerals and that his granddaughter hates him for not visiting anymore. Meanwhile, Pan and Bra started going to high school and made new friends, like Xevo, Pan's newest best friend. However, old enemies seek revenge. They all have been resurrected, and now they plan to destroy Goku and his friends. Will they succeed? Find out on this all-new saga called "Friezell Saga" of Dragon Ball Finale! Somewhere on New Namek, Friezell was in midair, being very happy: -We're alive…-he said out loud-At last, after all these years, I'm alive again, and this time, I WILL destroy those Saiyans once and for all.-then he teleported himself around New Namek using Instant Transmission and gathered his top 40 henchmen, including Xaras' four henchmen who were guarding the space pods, for the special mission on Earth; once he gathered them all, he started-Troops, are you ready?! -Yes sir, Lord Friezell, sir!-all the henchmen shouted in unison. -Good. Your mission is to find all seven Dragon Balls on Earth and protect them at all cost, not allowing anyone to make a single wish, until my arrival. Got that?-of course, the henchmen were confused, cause their initial order was to destroy the balls, and not to keep them safe.-Did I make myself clear? -Yes, sir!-the troops yelled. -Good. Don't fail me!-then he prepared himself to teleport everyone to planet Earth. Goku and the others quickly put on their outfits and were preparing to go to New Namek when, suddenly, Kibitoshin appeared out of nowhere: -Goku!!!-he started-We have a big problem! And I mean REALLY BIG. It's New Namek. -Yes, we heard.-Goku responded. -I'm sorry I couldn't foresee all this and announced you guys earlier. I never should have let my guard down. -Kibitoshin...-Dende started-Do you know what's happening with my people? -I'm afraid I have some REALLY bad news. -Just cut to the chase, damn it!-Vegeta yelled. -Porunga has been summoned, apparently by Frieza's henchmen... -What?!-Vegeta asked in wonder-But I whipped out all of Frieza's henchmen more than 20 years ago. -Well, I guess you missed a few. Anyway, they resurrected everyone from Hell, everyone who you once killed is now alive on New Namek. -What do you mean, everyone?-Gohan asked. -Everyone who has been killed by the hands of the Saiyans...-everyone was shocked by the news. -Why would Frieza resurrect everyone who my race killed so many decades ago?-Vegeta asked-It doesn't make any sense. -I think that's the only way he could revive Cell and the others too with one wish. I mean, they really must be eager to take you guys down. -Kibitoshin, this is serious!-Goku added. -I know, I know…But I'm afraid I have some more bad news. -Of course you do…Piccolo started-I'm sure they had two more wishes for Porunga to grant. What were they? -Well, one of them was to teleport everyone who has been resurrected on New Namek. The other one, however, was to make Friezell immortal. -Who the hell is Friezell?-Goten asked, then suddenly everyone figured it out instantly. -CELL AND FRIEZA!-eveyone shouted. -Are you kidding me?-Goku asked-Did they actually use the Fusion technique? How is that possible? -I'm not sure, and nor which fusion they performed.-Kibitoshin replied. -I really need to have a talk with King Yemma. How the heck did he design Hell, anyway? What, they have a TV or something and saw us doing it? Oh well, guess today we'll be having quite a busy day, now won't we guys? -Just like old times.-Yamcha added-Only this time, me and some of the others will join you on Namek too. -Hey, Yajirobe!-Miran started-Won't you join them too and help your friends? -Thanks, but no thanks.-Yajirobe answered-If only you knew what these guys are up against, you'd be begging me to stay. -Coward! -May I remind you guys that there's a crisis on New Namek?-King Kai's voice said and everyone stopped talking. -Oh, come on, King Kai, how bad could it be?-Goku asked-We fought those guys years ago, we all gotten so much stronger since then. Surely, even fused, they couldn't take us down. -Oh, I'm afraid you're wrong, Goku. Cell, Frieza and the others have become a lot stronger since you, and Pikkon last fought them in Hell. Surely, you beat them up easily, but they have taken training even more seriously, and they learned new tricks. Plus, Cell and Frieza are now fused AND immortal. And I also found out from King Yemma that they somehow fused using some Potara Earrings...-meanwhile, Pan and Xevo entered the room. -Papa, who's that voice we hear in our head?-Pan asked. -But that's impossible!-Kibitoshin shouted-Such earrings can be found only on the Sacred World of the Kais. -Well, however they did it, we'll find out soon enough, even if it means beating the information out of them.-Goku said smiling. -Oh, Goku…-King Kai continued-I'm afraid the situation is far more serious than you guys think. -Yeah, right.-Vegeta cut in-C'mon Kakarot, let's teach those morons a lesson! -Right.-Goku said, but just then, they all felt an enormous ki somewhere on Earth, along with many other small ones-It looks like they decided to move the battle here on Earth. Gather around everybody, it's show time!-but just then, the massive ki suddenly disappeared, leaving the small ones behind-Or not...It seems, the fight WILL take place on New Namek after all. Friezell must have teleported his henchmen here to go get the Earth Dragon Balls, while we're busy fighting him. Pretty sneeky...So, any volunteers to fight these guys off? They're not much, but who knows? Maybe they will surprise you!-Goku said in a cheerful tone. -Well, if I'm not going to New Namek, might as well have fun with these guys.-Khitan sighed. -I'll go along as well.-Number 18 volunteered. -Count me in too.-Pan added. -Well, no one is going anywhere without me; I'm going along as well.-Bra said ready for some action. -Actually, it is you who's not going anywhere.-Vegeta responded with a serious face. -Why not? -Because someone needs to protect your mother and the others while we're gone. -But why me?! Khitan is stronger than me, he could do a better job protecting them! -That's exactly why he's going with Pan and not you, cause he's stronger than you. Because of your lack in training, you don't deserve a mission of such importance.-Bra was boiling with anger, but she knew that her dad had a point and it was futile to argue with him, so she decided to just stay behind; either way, protecting others was also pretty important, so she was more or less proud of herself. -It's decided, then.-Goku said, then he looked towards his granddaughter-Pan, I know you're mad at me right now, and I would like to apologize to you in case something happens to me, anyway. I'm sure you'll be ok against those henchmen. The Dragon Balls are all at Uub's village. Do you remember where it is?-at which Pan nodded confused of how to respond-Fine, then. Take care, Pan.-she still didn't know whether to say something back or not, so she just turned around, took off and flew out through the opened window along with Khitan and 18. -Ok, everyone.-Kibitoshin started afterwards-Gather around so I could take us to New Namek. -Right.-everyone said. -This is going to be interesting.-Goku thought. -Finally, some action.-Vegeta thought. -I sure hope we'll make it out alive.-Krillin thought. -My first real battle...-Uub thought. -I have a bad feeling about this.-Piccolo thought. -I hope I won't die TOO fast.-Yamcha thought. -I hope you'll be alright, Tien.-Chiaotzu thought. -Don't worry, Chiaotzu. Everything's going to be fine. I hope…-Tien thought. -I can hardly wait to try out Gotenks' new tricks.-Goten thought. -This is going to be awesome.-Trunks thought. -I hope King Kai's wrong.-Gohan thought. -Buu turn everyone into chocolate and eat them up.-Buu thought. -Why do I have to take them to that cursed planet? Goku could easily do this too. Elder Supreme Kai, this is all your fault!-Kibitoshin thought. Kibithosin teleported everyone to New Namek, while Pan, Number 18 and Khitan left Bulma's house and went to get the gathered Dragon Balls at Uub's village. Who will remain alive and who will die during this epic war? Find out ONLY by reading this new saga of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 14 2013, 09:20 PM Post #24 |
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VERY IMPORTANT re-revision at episode 14. I also re-revised episodes 15-17. THANK YOU! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 14 2013, 09:20 PM Post #25 |
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Episode 19: Friezell's Super Speed Kibitoshin and the others were floating in midair on New Namek. They all began searching for ki energies on the planet. -This place is crawling with all sort of different ki energies.-Goten said. -And they're strong too.-Gohan added. -There is one that surpasses them all.-Goku cut in-That must be Friezell. Initially, I thought I would be relieved to fight on this planet instead on Earth, because there would be less casualties, but now I don't know anymore; it's overfilled with so many different races and species. We'll have to be even more extra careful. -Goku…-Piccolo started-I can sense him…He’s alive…my father’s alive too… -What?-Goku and Gohan asked altogether. -He’s here...he’s alive! -Well, he did die because of me…-Goku added-I was the one who killed him. What are you going to do? -I’m not sure. I need to talk to him.-then he flew away without saying anything else. -Poor Piccolo.-Gohan added. -Yeah…-Goku also said, then he turned towards Vegeta-So, Vegeta, I think I will be really going to need your help against that Friezell guy. -But of course, but first I need to take care of an old friend.-Vegeta responded. -You mean, Nappa? -I can’t sense him, nor your brother Raditz. Can you? -No, I can’t. Maybe because they’re fused, and that's why we can’t exactly locate them. So I’ll check on Friezell, and I’ll be waiting for you shortly. Ok? -Just don’t have too much fun!-Vegeta replied smirking, then he took off. -Hey, Krillin!-Yamcha started-Wana come with me? I also have a score to settle. -Sure.-Krillin responded and they both flew away. -Hey, Kibitoshin!-Tien started-Wana join me and Chiaotzu? -Why not?-Kibitoshin responded and they also took off. -Well, I guess it’s you and me, Trunks.-Goten said with a smirk. -As always.-Trunks responded, and they headed south-west. -Dad, do you need any help?-Gohan asked. -I’m sure me and Vegeta will be able to handle it.-Goku answered. -Ok.-so Gohan went after Goten and Trunks. -So, will you two be ok?-Goku asked Uub and Buu. -Sure.-Uub responded-C’mon Buu! Let’s have some fun! -Buu likes fun.-Buu replied, and both headed south-east. Finally, Goku prepared himself to use the Instant Transmission. Elsewhere, Friezell appeared near King Cold, his sudden appearance startling the king. -Huh, you’re here.-King Cold said a bit shy, hoping that Friezell dind't notice his startle. -You need to find a spaceship and get off this planet.-Friezell said-They’re here. -Well, that was fast. But where should I go? -Xaras and his men landed somewhere in north-west. Take a pod and leave this planet immediately! Head to Earth! We’ll meet there. And stay low so no one could sense your energy. -I just wish I have learned to sense ki energies. That would have been helpful. -It’s not my fault that you’re so arrogant. Now leave before Goku shows up! -Fine.-so King Cold jumped on a cliff and disappeared. Just then, Goku appeared above Friezell on the sky. He saw King Cold getting away, but he thought he wasn’t worth of trouble, so he landed. -So, you finally made it.-Friezell started-It’s so nice to see you again. -You just couldn’t leave things as they were and just had to come back into our lives. -I thought you would be glad to see us again. -Well, I guess I am. Seeing you guys together as one is pretty awesome but odd too. It’s like facing a new villain or something but in the end, it’s the same-old Cell and Frieza, who we once defeated and will do it again. -I don’t think so. This time we will win. -Yea, right.-but just after Goku finished his sentence, something punched him so hard in the face, that he flew far away and crashed to the ground.-What the hell was that?!-Goku thought-It couldn’t have been Friezell. He was floating right there while something, like an invisible person, punched me. Could he be that fast that he punched me without using the Instant Transmission? It's impossible! That means, he's faster than Instant Transmission itself. Goku is shocked of how fast Friezell is. Is Friezell really that fast or was it someone else who punched Goku in the face? Find out on the next episode of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 28 2013, 10:32 PM Post #26 |
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Episode 20: Friezell's Irony The Namekians built many spaceships which they scattered and hidden all around the planet, so that in crisis, they could escape. Right now, a bunch of Namekians, sensing that they and the planet itself were all in danger, located a few ships and left New Namek. The giant insects from Arlia banished King Moai from their kind, who headed south-east. The new king, Atla, ordered his best soldiers to go and explore the planet on which they were on. Garlic's henchmen and Number 19, however, decided not to involve in the fight against Goku and his friends, so they headed south-west to find a way off the planet. The Kanassans also wanted to leave the planet as soon as possible knowing that they were all in danger, so they headed east, avoiding ki energies. Goku was still wondering if Friezell was the one who punched him so fast in the face, so he decided to attack him to find out. He flew directly at Friezell, and landed a direct punch in his face, but his hand went right through him as if Friezell was a ghost, even though, Goku could clearly see him standing there and not move a muscle. -That's impossible!-Goku thought-How did he do that? I punched him but in the end, I punched nothing. Man he's fast, and he isn't even using Instant Transmission; he's SUPER fast. -What's the matter, Goku?-Friezell started-Don't tell me I'm too fast for you? Want me to slow down a bit so you could see how easily I'm dodging you? -No way. I can be much faster than this.-Goku responded, and then he transformed into a Super Saiyan 3-Now let's see how fast you really are!-then he attacked Friezell again trying to punch him, but this time, he could actually see Friezell easily dodging his punch. -Are you sure you don't want me to slow down?-Friezell asked once more. "So he didn't slow down at all, which means I can't even touch him in this form. Crap, without Vegeta's help, I'm a gonner. King Kai was right after all, this guy is a lot stronger that we anticipated. Who knows how much stronger his friends from Hell have also gotten? Gohan and the others might be quite in a pickle."-Goku thought-This is so exciting.-he said out loud-Finally, we can all have an awesome fight after all these years. Yes! -Well, I'm glad you're happy because you're about to die!-Friezell said and in that second, he hit Goku so hard that Goku spilled his guts out. Elsewhere on New Namek, Vegeta met Qui in midair, who got frightened... -Vegeta...-Qui started-I'm glad you're here, there's something I need to tell you! Frieza did that Fusion thing with an android, and they've become super strong. They're planning to kill you and the other Saiyans as well and just that you should know, I'm on your side; I'm here to help you to destroy him. You know, I've been training really hard in the Other World to become a strong warrior, and I could be a great help. -Really?-Vegeta asked sceptically-Then I guess we should get going to meet him then. -Lead the way, Prince Vegeta!-so Vegeta headed south-east with Qui right behind him, but shortly after, Qui made a large purple ki blast and threw it at the prince; it connected and made a big explosion-You were always so naive, Vegeta! No wonder Lord Frieza destroyed your race so easily; they were all naive, just like you.-the smoke hasn't cleared yet but Qui suddenly heard Vegeta's voice, which made him tremble in fear. -Actually, you're the naive one, Qui! Did you actually think that this trick, which didn't work the last time, would work the second time? I think Frieza should think twice before choosing his henchmen! -No wait, I can explain! It's not what you think! Frieza made me do this, I had no choice! Please spare my life, I'm not a threat to you guys. Why waste your energy? -I hardly doubt it's necessary for me to use a big amount of energy to destroy the likes of you.-and before Qui even realized it, Vegeta sent him back to the Other World; afterwards he felt Friezell's huge ki-I think Kakarot really needs my help this time...good.-he said out loud with a smirk, and he continued flying south-east. Goku was still in his SSJ3 form, but his was filled with bruises and blood. Friezell, of course, was enjoying himself to the fullest. -So, what do you think of my awesome power? Pretty amazing, huh?-Friezell asked in a mocking manner. -You know darn well that if you'd allow Vegeta and me to fuse, you wouldn't stand a chance. -You'd like that now wouldn't you?-and using only his kiai, Friezell blew Goku miles away; the Saiyan had to knee down and grab hold to the ground to stand still-You know, I had so many ideas of how to torture you before finishing you off, but I learned from experience that the more I prolong your death, you either somehow become stronger or something else happens that saves your life in the very last-minute, so get ready to die!-then he raised his right hand and made a large purple ki disk-Remember this? Remember how you sliced me, I mean Frieza, with this homing disk? -Don't blame me for that! He sliced himself up, I had nothing to do with it. -Either way, I assure you that this disk will be so fast, you won't even see, nor feel it while it cuts you in two. You will only apprehend what has happened to you a few moments later, just before dying. Good riddance, Son Goku!-and just then, Friezell threw the disk at our hero. Goku knew that even with the Instant Transmission he wouldn't be able to teleport out of the disk's way in time, so he randomly jumped in the air, doing a front flip. Anticipating that Friezell would say a finishing speech before throwing the disk, Goku made the jump as soon as he heard his name. The disk indeed failed to cut the Saiyan in two, but it did, however, cut his long golden hair in half. Being upside-down in the air, while watching as the disk cut through his hair, Goku immediately put two fingers on his forehead and used the Instant Transmission to teleport behind Friezell. Friezell, however, sensed Goku appearing behind him and in that split second, he turned around and punched Goku's nose so hard, that it broke. The purple disk was already coming back towards his maker, who smashed it in his bare hands. By now, Goku's mouth and chin was filled with blood, while Friezell was laughing like a maniac: "HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!Did you really think you could fool me again like that? Really now, how pathetic can you get? Get it into your head already, I could kill each and every one of you within only a minute if I want to and I don't mean by blowing up the planet, but by combining the Instant Transmission with my super speed. Observe!"-then Friezell put two fingers on his forehead and started focusing on sensing ki signatures-"Ah, yes. Vegeta is heading this way even as we speak. Let's give a little surprise to the prince, shall we?"-then he instantly vanished. Vegeta was flying at his top speed when suddenly, everything turned black for a second, then he began seeing stars around his head. After a few short moments, he felt a sudden pain around his nose, while he started coughing blood out. He put his hands on his face to stop the bleeding and noticed that his nose was broken. The prince furiously looked around but he could see no one. Of course, he knew who did that to him, and began cursing Friezell out loud. Moments later, Friezell appeared next to Goku again laughing hard: -BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA! You should have been there, Goku! Vegeta's shocked face was priceless! HA-HA-HA-HA! Goku? What the?...-when Friezell opened his eyes and stopped laughing, he too became shocked at the sight; Goku was completely healed, while his golden hair has also regrew-But how? Don't tell me...you had a Senzu Bean with you? -You bet I had.-Goku responded smirking, afterwards he placed his hands close to the center of his face with the fingers spread toward his eyes and shouted-BLINDING SOLAR KI!( TAIYO-GENWAKI ) while he projected a bright white light, blinding Friezell "totally." -You piece of Saiyan *****!-Friezell yelled while rubbing his eyes-And pray tell me, what good does this technique do if I can still sense you and kill you even with my eyes closed? -That's just it, you can't sense me. Haven't you heard? I shouted "Blinding Solar Ki" and not "Solar Flare"; I developed this technique against the likes of you who know how to use the Instant Transmission. It not only blinds your eyes, but your ki senses too, so no matter how much I power up, you won't be able to locate me temporarily. -Then what are you waiting for? Go on, do your best, strike me down! -Oh, don't worry, I will do just that. Seeya in a minute!-then using the Instant Transmission, Goku disappeared. -So, he's really planning to fuse with Vegeta...not if I can help it.-then he made two large purple ki disks and threw them at guess towards north. The two homing ki disks were swooping by with an incredible speed to say the least, while cutting many living beings in their way which emanated even the smallest of ki energy, since they were drawn to it. They cut through mountains and cliffs until they reached their victims, cutting through them like butter; the beings indeed died instantly without feeling a thing. Many thousands of kilometers away, Goku suddenly appeared in front of Vegeta, who collided right into him, which really infuriated the prince. -What the *****, Kakarot?!-the pissed off prince shouted-And where the hell is that son of a ***** Friezell? -Vegeta, King Kai was right: Friezell is way stronger than we imagined.-Goku said in a hurry. -I figured that much, just look at my nose, damn it! -We have no other choice than to do the Fusion Dance, it's our only hope. Do you remember the pose? I know it has been years since I showed it to you... -Don't be ridiculous! I may be old, but I don't forget. -Great then, but I need to know how strong you've become over the years.-but Vegeta didn't respond; instead, he started powering up until he transformed into a Super Saiyan 3-Awesome, Vegeta! I guess that outfit Bulma made you did the work. Now quick, we need to fuse immediately. -I never said I will do it. Do you actually expect me of all people to do that stupid dance? I'd rather die! -C'mon, we've been through all this already back when we fought Buu. As you said, it's just a "stupid" dance, but which will make us way stronger than we were joined as Vegito. And Friezell will recover soon from my surprise attack and I guarantee you he will see fit to grant your wish. Now come on already, before it's too late!-just then, both Goku and Vegeta felt the two ki disks heading their way-Damn it! Can you feel them? Quick, Vegeta, help me make a disk to counter-attack them! -Curse that day I first met you! So, Goku stretched out his left palm, while Vegeta his right one and placed them facing near each other, then they both concentrated hard and combining their power, they made a very large yellow energy disk with a white razor-sharp edge which they threw towards Friezell's disks. It didn't take long until the three disks clashed into each other as the big yellow one disintegrated the two purple ones into very small pieces which fell down into an ocean. The pieces sank under water killing any curious or just unfortunate fish which touched them, eventually completely decomposing. The white disk, however, still continued its path towards Friezell, whose eyes and ki senses started to slowly recover. Just then, he barely saw a glimpse of the disk heading right into him, with him no way avoiding it, even with his great speed. "The irony..."-he thought, while the disk cut him in two, however, Friezell immediately regenerated himself. After that, he flew after the disk, caught it with his hands and madly destroyed it. Goku and Vegeta, of course, both sensed what happened. -You see, Vegeta?-Goku asked excitedly-We barely combined our power and we have already managed to outmatch one of Friezell's own technnique. Now imagine how strong we would become if we actually fused. Heck, we'd be toying with him until Pan, and the others, wish him mortal again. -And what makes you think I would allow such a thing?-a familiar voice said above the two Saiyans, who, of course, was Friezell himself. I still have five more minutes of Fusion left, it will be more than enough time to finish you both, along with the planet. All of you perish!-then Friezell made a huge black ki blast and prepared himself to shoot it. -Damn it, Vegeta! Why do you always have to be so stubborn?-Goku asked the prince. -It's in my nature...-Vegeta replied with a smirk. Do the two Saiyans stand any chance against Friezell without the Fusion? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Feb 21 2013, 09:51 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Feb 24 2013, 11:29 AM Post #27 |
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Episode 21: The Birth of Gogeta Friezell's black energy ball grew bigger and bigger rapidly, until it reached the size of the planet itself. One would say he was overdoing it, and indeed, Friezell was showing off not only to impress everyone on the planet, but to show them whose the true Lord. Then he remembered that King Cold, Xaras and his other henchmen were still on the planet, but he did not care, if anything else, he would revive them later using the Earth Dragon Balls, so he shoot the gigantic blast towards New Namek. But Goku and Vegeta wouldn't let themselves be defeated that easily; they each launched a Super Kamehameha wave and a Final Flash beam against Friezell's huge black energy ball. They connected, and to Friezell's amaze the power struggle between the three energy waves were almost evenly matched. The entire planet began shaking while making a loud crumbling sound; it was shaking so wildly, that many beings got sick and vomited. But that was the least of their problems; the earthquakes were to intense, they caused massive ground ruptures, sucking every living thing under it. Only those who could levitate survived the process, but even among them many perished as many mountain and cliff on the planet collapsed from the massive power struggle, burying thousands of souls alive. King Cold was astonished that his son was desperate enough to kill his own father just to get rid of the Saiyans. After a few short moments of struggle, Friezell recovered from the amazement trance and powered up to his max, gaining the upper hand again. The enormous energy clash was closing in on the Saiyans very fast and when all hoped seemed lost, Vegeta suddenly shouted his wife name out loud, which surprised Goku next to him, to say the least. But Vegeta knew very well why he did that, cause, all of a sudden, his outfit became light as a feather, allowing the prince of Saiyans to unleash his full power and help Goku push back the energy clash towards Friezell. Friezell became overwhelmed by the two Saiyan's combined power, and could no longer hold his ground anymore, as the three energy waves were pushing him further into space. If he would have continued to struggle against them, he would have disintegrated for sure, not that it mattered, cause he was immortal. But to avoid any unnecessary great sudden pain, he used the Instant Transmission and teleported himself behind Vegeta and him in the back so hard that his hands went right through it and came out from the Saiyan's stomach. Meanwhile, the three tremendous energy waves drifted in space with an amazing speed, until they collided with another planet filled with small lifeforms, obliterating it within seconds. Vegeta was on his knees with his arms wrapped around his stomach to ease the pain somehow, while Goku just stared at him helplessly, waiting for Friezell to strike him down next. Friezell, however, was floating above them again, being both amazed of the two Saiyan's combined power and thrilled that his half arm was covered with Vegeta's blood who he almost killed. But then, a third feeling emerged all of a sudden, and it was...fright. All he knew that he could not allow the two Saiyans to fuse at any cost, because even if he was immortal, it would not matter anymore against such a power. Just as he prepared himself to attack, this time, Goku, Friezell was suddenly shot with a small white ki blast from behind him; when Friezell looked behind, he saw a skinny pink skinned creature, with two pointy ears, big eyes, two toes, three fingers wearing a white blouse, white sandal and red pants. -And who might you be?-Friezell asked the creature. -He's a Yardrat...-Goku thought-But what is he doing all the way here? The Saiyans couldn't have destroyed Planet Yardrat cause I went there way after the Saiyan race was destroyed. I guess he must have left his home planet many years ago to start a new life somewhere else, but to his misfortune, he and his family were killed by the hands of a Saiyan. In a weird way, he was destined to come back to life to save the lives of two descendants of the very race he was killed by. -You monster!-the Yardrat shouted enraged towards Friezell-You killed my family with your blasted energy disks. You...you sliced them up before my very own eyes, you murderer! -And how pray tell me did YOU managed to survive my super fast disks? -I barely sensed them in time and could only save myself using Instant...never mind.-then the Yardrat looked down and a tear started flowing down his cheek-You killed the dearest persons to me...I will never forgive you! EVER! -Ah, yes, the Instant Transmission...I didn't know it was such a popular technique and even low-life beings knew how to use it. -My "low-life" race invented it, you scumbag! -Hmm...Indeed they have. You're a Yardrat, aren't you? I still have Goku's cells, thus his memories too, and now I know the exact location of your planet. I'll be sure to dispose of it personally after I finish things here. -No you won't!-the Yardrat yelled and shot Friezell with another small white ki blast. -You must know that's absolutely useless against me. -I know...-the Yardrat replied smirking which pissed off Friezell who immediately attacked the pink creature and punched him in the face; or at least, he would have, if the creature was actually there in the first place-What the...? How is that possible?! -HA-HA! You missed me!-the Yardrat shouted from the top of a cliff-I'm over here, you freak filled with dots. I'll call you, dot-freak! HA-HA-HA-HA-HA! -No, I'm over here!-another exact looking Yardrat shouted, this time, from the top of a tree. -No, no, no, over here!-another one shouted above Friezell up in the sky then sticking his tongue out, while Friezell looked at him gaping. -Actually, I'm really right in front of you.-a voice said indeed in front of Friezell, put his hands into Friezell's amazed wide opened mouth and, this time, the Yardrat shot a big ki blast instead, inside Friezell's stomach, blowing up his innards, while the "dot-freak" shrieked in agony; however, within very short moments, Friezell regenerated his insides and instantly vanished out of sight. -The old Afterimage Technique combined with the Instant Transmission...very ingenious.-Friezell's voice could be heard coming from everywhere-But that combo is no match for my own one: Instant Transmission and my super speed.-in the meantime, since the Yardrat could not sense Friezell no more, he had nowhere to teleport himself, so he was left with only the Afterimage Technique; Friezell, however, immediately located the real Yardrat and teleported behind him, snapping his neck with ease.-Now that that's over with...-then he turned around towards Goku and Vegeta, only to be surprised that the later one was completely healed-Just how many freaking Senzu Beans do you guys have, anyway?!-while the two Saiyans looked back at him frightened as they were caught preparing themselves to do the Fusion Dance; the two Saiyans just stood there surprised with their arms stretched opposite to each other and one of their legs moved upwards.-Just what do you think you two are doing? -Uhm...nothing.-Vegeta responded extremely blushful. -Will you look the other way, please, while we say "HA"?-Goku asked blushed as well. -Haven't I made myself clear that I won't allow you two to fuse?-and just when Friezell wanted to attack them, his own fusion wore off and Cell and Frieza separated from each other. -Vegeta, now's our chance, but we'll have to start over the dance!-Goku shouted fastly and they both started to yell-FUUUU... -Cell, quick, give me one of the Potara earrings, hurry!-Frieza shouted impatiently. -After all this is over, WE are going to have a serious talk regarding the Earth Dragon Balls!-while two earrings magically appeared in Cell's right hand, then he threw one towards Frieza. -So what if I took some extra precautions against you?-Frieza asked smirking while he put the earring on his left ear. -...SIOOOON...-the two Saiyans shouted while performing the right poses of the Fusion Dance. -Hmph...-Cell sighed, while putting the earring on his right ear. -...HAAAA!!!-the Saiyans finished their incantation. So, Vegeta fused with Goku while Frieza did with Cell as two bright lights appeared simultaneously. The whole planet began to tremble because of the enormous powers, and because this planet was much bigger than the Earth, it meant a lot for it to tremble just from two power-ups. Goku and Vegeta did the Fusion Dance for the first time, and as a result, a new hero has been born: meet Gogeta. Gogeta had a big yellow aura surrounding him, his golden hair reached his shoulders, while his eyes and tail were also yellow, as he wore a metamoran-like clothing. -I hope in this form I can buy some time until Pan gets the Dragon Balls.-Gogeta thought-I may be a hell of a strong, but still, I have no chance of defeating Friezell, not while he's immortal anyway. Still, I feel that my transformation isn't complete, and somehow, my tail also regrew...strange. But for now it will have to do. -If he thinks he can defeat me just because he's almost as strong as me, then he's out of his mind.-Friezell thought.-I am immortal and there's nothing he can do to about it. At least, I'll defeat both Goku and Vegeta at the same time, plus, it means double the fun for me. Vegeta and Goku fused and became Gogeta. Now Gogeta and Friezell are almost equally strong but still, Friezell has an advantage because he's immortal. Will Gogeta last enough until Pan and the others find the Dragon Balls? Or will Friezell's henchmen find them first? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Mar 1 2013, 04:53 PM.
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Feb 24 2013, 11:36 AM Post #28 |
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I like this story. Good job Mega! |
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| Megasaiyan | Feb 24 2013, 11:39 AM Post #29 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 22: Battlefield: New Namek On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Goku and Vegeta have fused once again, but this time, using the Fusion Dance, and so they became Gogeta. Will Gogeta be able to resist Friezell until Pan and the others ask Shenron to make Friezell mortal again? Find out only on Dragon Ball F! Since Friezell's fusion wore off, it could only mean that his henchmen's fusion also wore off. So, Jeis and Guldo de-fused but after that, they re-fused again and continued their flight on a pursuit of the Namekians they were following. So did Baata and Recoome do, and Zarbon and Dodoria. However, when Napitz de-fused, things didn't go as well. -Raditz, are you out of your mind?!-Nappa yelled-Why don't we go help Lord Friezell to destroy Vegeta and the others? -Nappa, don't be an idiot! The minute we kill them, Friezell will kill us too, just like he killed our entire race. -So, we should leave this planet then... -No matter were we go, eventually he will find us and kill us. I may not like this, but we should join forces with Kakarot and the others. -But he and Vegeta betrayed and killed us! -And so did Frieza. At least, Vegeta and my brother didn't kill our whole Saiyan comrades like Frieza did. We don't have much choice, Nappa. It's either this, or we'll die again. -Damn it! But this doesn't mean that I forgive that son of a ***** traitor, Vegeta, for what he did to me, nor your brother! -The feeling is mutual. I also have a score to settle with them. Let's go!-and they both flew towards south-east. Elsewhere, Pui-Pui and Yakkon found a bunch of Namekians and slaughtered them all. Somewhere else on New Namek, King Cold met Arlia's former king: -My word, what hideous creature!-King Cold started-And you are? -I was once the ruler of the planet called Arlia, until my race banished me for corruption. Mind telling me who you are and what planet are we on? -I don't think it's important for you to know who I am. Besides, what good does it do to know the planet's name when soon it will be blown up by my son? -What?! Why would he do that? Did he blow up my planet too? And what about you? Won't you die as well if he blows up this planet? Do you know a way of this planet?... -Oh, shut up!-and just then, King Cold shot him with a small ki blast which obliterated him-He was really starting to annoy me with all his questions.-he said to himself, then he continued heading towards the spaceships. Meanwhile, Uub and Buu arrived where Gogeta and Friezell were... -Oh, my gosh!-Uub started-These two power levels are way off the chart. Hey, Goku...uhm...I mean, Vegeta...ah...need any help? -No, this is my battle. Whoever told you you should come here in the first place? You two go and finish off someone else! Oh, and by the way, it's Gogeta. -Oh, ok. But we'll be close by if you'll need our help.-and so he and Buu took off and headed east, towards Garlic Juniors' henchmen and Number 19. Friezell looked at those two and fired a purple ki blast at them, but before it connected, Gogeta teleported in front of it and took the blast. However, the blast didn't have any effect on him. "This should be interesting."-Friezell said and instantly attacked him, so starting another ferocious battle between Good and Evil. They were both kicking and punching each other, while also catching each other's hits; it seemed they were equally matched. Not far from them, Gohan, Goten and Trunks met Xaras and his troops. -I'm guessing you guys aren't from around here.-Gohan started-Are you? -And what was it that gave it away?-Xaras asked-Was it are skin color? Wasn't it green? -So it was you guys who resurrected Frieza and the others? -I think they were, brother.-Goten cut in with a smirk-Why else would we sense evil ki emanating from them? -Maybe because they're evil.-Trunks answered ironically. -I just had about enough of you clowns!-Xaras yelled-If you want a fight then come and get us! -It will be our pleasure.-Trunks responded and then he and Goten fused and became SSJ3 Gotenks. -Ok, Gohan!-Gotenks started-You take that blue ugly one with the horns, and I'll take the rest of them. -Fine by me.-Gohan responded. -Bring it on!-Xaras yelled-Troops, prepare for battle!!! So, another huge battle started on New Namek. Friezell vs. Gogeta, Xaras vs. Gohan, Xaras's nine henchmen vs. Gotenks... Who will be victorious and who will lose? Find out on the next thrilling episodes of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Feb 24 2013, 11:40 AM Post #30 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Thanks, Goku-Vegeta:D |
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