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My dream fanfic
Topic Started: Oct 5 2012, 06:39 AM (570 Views)
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The fanfic below is a product of my subconscious,since i saw it in my sleep.I had this dream a very long time ago,before i even started using the
Internet.Any comments on its quality or continuity are pointless,since,as i said,it's a dream and my intention is to describe it exactly as it was.It was in
first person,which means i saw that story through Trunkses eyes.But,here,i'll be describing in third person.


DREAM FANFIC

At last,Cell has been defeated and peace has been restored.Trunks has completed his mission and all that's been left to do is returning to his
timeline.But,then,something comes at his mind.He can use his time machine to go to any of the existing timelines.In both his and Cell's timeline,there
is a mother of his,waiting for him.So,where to go?Without thinking much,without knowing why,he selects Cell's timeline.

The time capsule appears out of Bulma's house.It's afternoon and the sun is slowly setting,creating an orange light.Trunks goes in the house,entering
from the window.
Trunks(thinking):Why did i come here?This is not my own world.Well,i can,at least,have a look around.Then,i'll think of reconsidering my choice.
Steps are heard from upstairs.Bulma is coming.
Trunks(thinking):Oh,no.She mustn't see me.She'll mistake me for this timeline's version of myself,who has been killed by Cell.
Trunks hides.Without having realized that someone has entered the house,Bulma talks to herself.
Bulma:Ahh,Trunks.It's been so long since you left to tell the others that you've beaten the Androids.Why haven't you come back yet?
Trunks wants to cry,knowing that her son will never come back.Because he's dead!
Bulma:Will you ever come back Trunks?Has something happened to you?
Bulma starts crying.Trunks wants to show up and hug her.He wants it so badly.But,he knows he can't.He can't live here.This is not his "correct" mom.
The other Bulma is waiting for him,back in his timeline.Finally,Bulma's tears stop.
Bulma:I have to face it.I will never see him again.I have to live with it.
Bulma goes upstairs.Trunks thinks and feels many things,in only a few seconds.He can't let her be that depressed.He'll never forgive himself.He decides to stay.But,next second,he changes his mind.If he lives here,his other mother will wait for him forever,and she'll be the one to get depressed.Whatever he chooses,he has to make one of his mothers unhappy.Finally,logic prevails and Trunks decides to leave and return to the world he belongs.Hating himself for leaving his mother like that,he's ready to jump out of the window.Suddenly,he has an idea.How stupid of him not
to have thought of it sooner.He can take Bulma to his timeline with him! However,right after that idea,he remembers what his mother said just a few
moments ago.
Trunks(thinking):No,it's not a good idea.Better let her accept her own reality.Even if i show up to her,it won't change the fact that i'm dead in this
timeline.Her "correct" son will remain dead either way.
Trunks leaves.
Trunks(thinking):Goodbye mom.I hope you live happily from here on.


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There' actually a pretty good site where you can write and post this kind of stuff that I have been frequently visiting for a while now.

http://www.fanfiction.net/

The community's pretty good and they usually give you constructive criticism about how to further further your plot and stuff.

Plus it's fun to read all the fics :D
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