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| + Kyouks | Sep 18 2012, 05:26 AM Post #1 |
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Thought I'd give this fanfic thing a go. I'm going to sorta do this the way AT said he did DB....so, no grand-scheme, just wingin' it the whole time. Might not turn out so amazing, but meh. I'll try. BTW it takes place 5 years post-EoZ, like GT does. Ahem. "Evil's Origin" By: PrinceVegeta (Kyouka). Chapter 1 Lord Kibitoshin stared at the sky on his home planet. It was quite boring there, he thought. Not much to do except watch over the universe with your ancestor laughing it up with some comic book. Or dirty magazine, of course. It's been about 15 years since Son Goku vanquished the evil Majin Buu from existence. Kibitoshin still couldn't comprehend his own gratitude for the help of Goku and friends - without it, the universe surely would've been doomed. Or is it doomed anyway? Kibitoshin had been having a sneaking suspicion about afterlife activites - Hell, to be exact. But King Enma doesn't allow bodies in Hell...he merely punishes those..."poor" souls for an eternity. Why worry? But Kibitoshin had learned to trust his instincts. He hadn't felt any type of evil chi, hadn't seen anything suspicious down there, hadn't heard any odd reports or rumor, hadn't received the slightest bit of evidence that something, anything at all, was going on....but his instincts said otherwise. Well. No need to worry so much now. Kibitoshin decided to get up and make sure that his ancestor, Old Kaioshin, wasn't staring at his magazines in the garden. The last time that happened..... Kaioshin was knocked down by something from behind him. Kiai? It felt like it. But there was no chi. His instincts, his radar for trouble, began tingling. Something was wrong. This kind of power....it was equivalent to that of the Good Majin Boo. But such great power couldn't possibly..... "Well, well," said a voice. "This is the master of the worlds, the great Kaioshin I've heard of." The voice sounded old, wise, yet menacing, a little raspy....an unpleasant combination. "Hmph. Pathetic. You rely on those in the real world to do your work, eh?" Kibitoshin heard the sound of clucking. "Wh-who...?" He tried to get up, but the kiai-like force pushed him back down. "I wouldn't get up just yet. I know you became stronger than even my own, ah, creation at one point, but believe me, you're nothing now. That 'Majin Buu' creature has proved that. And since that creature has also been quite a bit of indirect help to me....well, it's best I don't ramble on for too long. Now, please stay down. It would be quite annoying if the petty 'overseer of the universe' was in my way. I'll dispose of you once I get what I want." A hand, withered from the feel of it, came down upon Kaioshin's head, moved to his forehead...it was draining his memories. His knowledge. His power. Even his chi.....his vision got blurry..... ----- The shady character who had attacked the Kaioshin stood up once the Kaioshin stopped moving completely. He quickly took a look here, a glance there, and left the planet as discretely as he came. He propped up Kibitoshin on the trunks of a tree first, as though he were sleeping. Not that he cared about getting "caught", of course.... The shady character left the planet quickly. Soon he was out of sight. The Old Kaioshin was watching from afar, clutching his magazine in his hand. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 19 2012, 06:41 AM Post #2 |
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Chapter 2 "God, I just saw the most horrendous movie ever....'Evolution' something or other..." muttered Gohan. "Son, what did I say about slacking off on your training?" mumbled Goku, his face buried in a pillow. "Me....?" muttered Gohan. "But you..." "Gohan, I'll get stronger than you if you don't keep it up," said Goku, rising from bed. "And I've been training non-stop, just so you know." "....right." "Gohan doesn't have time for such things, Goku," said Chi-Chi from the kitchen. "He's a scholar now!" Goku sighed. "He should at least help Pan train..." Old Kaioshin suddenly appeared at Goku's bedside. Goku jumped. "O-old Kai!" "Son Goku, Son Gohan! Thank God you're here. I've terrible news....Kibitoshin was attacked!" --- The Z Senshi were gathered on the lookout: Goku, Gohan, Vegeta, Goten, Trunks, Piccolo, Krillin, Yamcha, and strangely, Chiaotzu and Tien. Dende and Mr. Popo were also present. "...and then Kibitoshin woke up, and didn't remember a thing! I restored some of his chi, but he's in awful shape...he's been talking about having strange suspicions, but I haven't taken him seriously until now..." "Hmph, well," said Vegeta, "If the Kaioshin had been on guard - " "It wouldn't have mattered," said Old Kai. "This man's power was greater than his - I felt no chi from him, but I could tell. I could tell." "No chi?," said Gohan. "Could it be an android?" "Please, you fool," said Vegeta. "What would an android be doing in the afterlife?" "Old Kai," said Goku, "could you describe this...character to us?" "Well, he was old, that much I could tell. But his face had looked like the wrinkles had recently....faded. I don't know, I could just tell. He had shoulder-length black hair with gray streaks. But he had the strangest insignia on his hat - an RR sign and a crescent moon." "RR....Red Ribbon?!" exclaimed Goku. "Dr....who was he?" "Gah!" said Krillin. "Gero, Goku, Dr. Gero!" "That makes no sense," claimed Vegeta. "Gero wouldn't have a body in Hell, nor would he have the ability to steal memories....although, the description does seem 'accurate' in an odd sense." "He's right," said Gohan. "Seems old, some remaining signs....a rejuvenated Gero." "But again, it makes no sense," said Vegeta. "How could Gero be down there? What about that moon symbol? And his power? Not even the likes of Kibitoshin would be taken out by such a weakling. For God's sake, our sons could handle him in their normal forms!" "I don't know of this 'Gero', but it sounds ominous," said Old Kai. "Explain, please". Goku explained who Gero was. "If he's a scientist, who's to say he couldn't have found a way to keep his body against King Enma's wishes? You said he was watching you up until your battle with Nappa and Vegeta - this was after you were killed and brought back. Perhaps he knows of our...'system'...." "Listen to yourself!" said Vegeta. "He's a mere mortal. Such a thing should be impossible. How could he bypass the purging of the soul?" "Well, according to Son Goku, this 'mere mortal' created artificial beings stronger than the so-called 'strongest in the universe', the being who rivaled a Super Saiyan back then. This may be a stretch but..." "Very well then," said Vegeta, "but what of the memory-sucking and greater power? For him to have handled Kibitoshin so easily, he must be as strong as the Boo that we know, perhaps even stronger..." "I don't know," said Old Kai. "I just don't. But the fact of the matter is, he's plotting something, and the overseer of the entire universe is out of commission. In fact, the overseer of the universe is lucky to be alive at all. I'd take that as warning, you know. The fate of the entire universe hangs in the balance once more, and this time, saving it is more crucial than ever." "Alright," said Goku. "We should look for...whoever this guy is, and if it's Gero, we'll give him a pounding he'll never forget. All of us are strong enough to face him by now....Yamcha, Chiaotzu, you two should hold down the fort here, though. Let's go, guys!" ----- "Hmph, I didn't count on the geezer being there," muttered someone. "You're one to talk...number 20. Should I call you doctor?" "I'd prefer 'doctor', given that I, in a sense, created myself. Well, this sure changes things up a bit..." "No worries. We know that Kibitoshin was stronger than both of our greatest creations - we're prepared. The, ah, 'Z Senshi' and 'Majin Boo' make Kibitoshin look pathetic - we're prepared. No need to worry. We have all the preparations we need....we won't screw up like you did last time." "Very well, then," said Gero. "I'll await your next verdict....'master'," said Gero, saying "master" as though he couldn't quite accept it...yet. He bowed and left. "Soon....they'll know me," claimed the mysterious figure. "Soon they'll know....the true cause of the threats of the universe....." |
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| + Pyrus | Sep 19 2012, 07:39 AM Post #3 |
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You shouldn't be the only one replying to your topic! ![]() I enjoy your story. It's more enjoyable than GT, the only downside being it's not in animated form. Haha. Otherwise it's really good. You and Syn should collaborate at some point. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 19 2012, 01:21 PM Post #4 |
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Syn: Broly should be stronger than SSJ5 Goku, dude! Me: NO! |
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Sep 20 2012, 02:33 AM Post #5 |
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Herp derp, I wouldn't make him that high, maybe SSj4 Goku ![]() Nah bro, we can. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 20 2012, 03:06 AM Post #6 |
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Yeah, maybe after we finish our individual fics, and maybe after I start getting lighter loads of homework.... |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 20 2012, 03:27 AM Post #7 |
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Chapter 3 Goku and Old Kai transported everyone except Yamcha and Chiaotsu to the Planet of the Kais. They saw Kibitoshin staring up at the sky as though he were in a trance. Goku was about to call him, but Old Kai stopped him. "Trust me, it'll just make things worse," he said. "Oh," said Goku. "So, what exactly are we up to?" "Well, I couldn't find any trace of chi here, but I figured we ought to start here anyway...." "Great," said Vegeta, "so we're already at a dead end." "W-well, we could go down to Hell and...." A voice cut off Old Kai. ----- "Hmm....so they want something to worry about? Best I speed up their process....or slow it down. Go...." ----- A voice cut off Old Kai. "Goku!" "K-king Kai?" asked Goku. "What is it?" "Can you hear me? Good!" said Kaio-sama. "It's terrible....New Namek has been attacked! I can't say for sure who, though, it's like something's blocking my radar...but it's horrible, I'll tell you that much..." "Blast!" said Old Kai. "What if -" "Hold on," said Piccolo, speaking for the first time. "An attack on a planet we know of as soon as we begin to investigate....it's possible that these two events are related in some way. It's most likely a trap, but we've no choice. It's all we've got." "Ooo~~kay," said Goku. "We dunno what we're dealing with - damn, I can't quite get a good read on New Namek either - but we oughta split up. Goten, Gohan, Vegeta, Krillin and I are gonna go to New Namek. Tenshinhan, Piccolo, and Trunks - stay here with Old Kai and look for...stuff". "Sounds, good dad," said Gohan. "Grab hold!" said Goku. ---- "Hmph. Not enough to get them all away. But I figure this is good enough for now....the biggest threats, the Saiyans are gone. I now merely have to worry about the Namek, a half-breed, and the puny human....fufufu, this should give me some time...quite some time indeed.........ah, Gero. You're finished?" ---- Goku, Goten, Gohan, Vegeta, and Krillin appeared on Namek. "Oh, you guys!" said the Namekian elder, Moori (that's his name, right?). "We've been attacked!" "Who was it?" asked Goku. "It...h-he's at the next..." Goku and the others immediately took off, Goku yelling over his shoulder, "we're on it!" ---- Goku and co. arrived at the designated village. Houses were burning, kids were shaking, too scared to scream. The flames were very bright, making Namek seem darker than usual. "Hmph, well. Thank goodness someone like you showed up. I have to restrain myself so that I don't end up killing these 'fighters' with a look..." "C-Coola!" stammered Goku. "C-Coola?" stammered Krillin. "He's alive?! Oh man, we're in for it...!" Coola turned towards them. He was in his true form, and he didn't appear to have changed one bit. "How strong is he?" asked Vegeta questioningly. "I doubt this is his full strength....but I can tell he's stronger than he was on Earth. Maybe as strong as he was the second time we fought....?" "Good memory....." said Coola. "....Or not. Open up your senses. Don't be fooled...I've been down there with him for far too long.....but you should be able to get a better reading of my chi if you try harder...." Vegeta raised his eyebrow at the "him" bit, but Goku did as told. "Okay, he's definitely stronger now....I'd say much stronger than #16 was." Coola chuckled. "Well, anyways, who's going to come at me?" "Umm....how about Krillin?" Goku suggested. Krillin almost fell over. "M-me?!" Coola looked at Krillin incredulously him. "Him?! A mere human?" "Krillin's gotten strong," said Goku. "Heck, we were here expecting people at least on Boo-san's level. Krillin oughta handle this one." "Hmph, very well then," said Coola. Krillin stepped up to Coola and assumed a fighting stance. Coola laughed and did the same. The others stepped back to watch. Coola shot forward towards Krillin, and Krillin did the same. Their elbows clashed and their auras flared. 'Man...this guy's much better now,' thought Krillin. 'Definitely "much stronger than #16"....he might be better than Cell was!' Coola jumped back and shot a finger beam at Krillin. Krillin deflected and quickly flew around Coola and ended up behind him. Krillin dealt a blow to Coola's neck, and Coola staggered. He quickly flipped over, though, landed on his hands, and kicked upwards. Krillin was caught by surprise in the gut and went flying. Krillin raised his hand up in midair and started to gather chi. "Kienzan!" Krillin threw the Kienzan at Coola, who was just getting up. Coola turned and narrowly dodged in time. "Do you think such a weak technique could -" Coola was cut off as Krillin appeared right above him. He stumbled back as Krillin brought down both his fists down on Coola's head. Krillin then kicked Coola away from him and landed. Coola rose. "Hmph. Not bad. But I feel the warm-up is over...maybe I ought to use my real power now..." "Yeah, I guess so..." murmured Krillin. Coola began powering up, and his aura became more dense. He slowly progressed into his fifth form. The mask of bones slid over Coola's mouth. Krillin assumed a fighting stance and charged, but Coola wasn't done yet. Krillin was slapped away by the sheer power of Coola's aura. "C-crap! What is he doing...?" Coola raised up his hands and yelled. The armor that had grown on him shattered, as did every other feature of his transformed state. Coola was in his true form...again. "Wh-what is this?" mumbled Krillin. "I've been training to contain my full power - my absolute full power - in my true form. I haven't had a chance to actually do it yet, though. For that, maybe I ought to thank you. Anyways, I'm just as strong as I would've been in my fifth form....but like this, I can control my power much more efficiently. I won't be restricted by that odd feeling of being in a different body that the transformation brings upon me. I've successfully destroyed my fifth form and kept all of its power." Coola flexed his arms. "Feels a little overwhelming, I'll admit, but boy, I feel great." 'Great,' thought Krillin. 'He's as strong as Boo-san...no, maybe a decent amount stronger....i-it could go either way, now...' "Aren't you going to get serious, human?" asked Coola. Krillin clenched his fists and leaned forward. The ground started shaking and Krillin yelled, releasing all the power he'd gotten through his new intense training at once. When he was done, he looked straight at Coola before charging once more. Coola smiled and disappeared. 'Instant Transmission!' thought Krillin. Coola appeared behind Krillin and Krillin just barely had enough time to counter his attack. Krillin caught one fist, then the other. He clenched his teeth as Coola pressed him. Coola then smiled and shot laser out of his eyes. Krillin was struck in the chest. He yelled and lost his grip. Krillin regained his footing quickly, though. He was panting slightly, but looked unharmed, for this most part. "Hmm, I see," said Coola. "You amplified the chi on the surface of your being so that your chest would be more resilient than usual...not bad." "Thanks," said Krillin, rubbing his chest. Coola smiled and shot eye lasers again. Krillin jumped, and was surprised to feel a gust of "wind" from behind him. He turned just to get struck in the face by Coola, and he plummeted. Coola dived down and smashed through Krillin, sending him into the ground. Krillin charged up his chi and blasted Coola off of him before flying out of the ground. Coola seemed unfazed, for the most part. 'Damn it,' thought Krillin. 'He's too fast for me....I can't beat him if I can't exactly catch him. Just great...I figured I'd be no good here.' 'Well,' thought Coola, 'to think that a human would rival my power as much as this....assuming the Saiyans are stronger than him, which they inevitably are....well, at my best, I'm not a huge deal stronger than the pint-sized Buu was, so I supposed the likes of Son Goku would beat me now anyways....but this is just ridiculous...' ---- "Hmph.....Coola's being pushed too hard. I don't know how much longer this will last. Perhaps I should just get rid of them all now. It may be better this way....maybe....." ---- Coola looked up as though hearing a voice. "Well, alright then." He fired a chi blast at the ground. Krillin stumbled back in surprise as smoke engulfed the area. When it cleared, Coola was in the sky, a Supernova atop his finger. "Sorry, but it's best I get rid of you now!" said Coola. "C-crap!" said Goku. "We have to stop him!" Goku and Vegeta took to the skies. Coola threw down the Supernova just as Goku yelled, "Ka-me-ha-me-ha!" Goku fired a blast at the Supernova. After a few dreadful seconds, the blast pushed the Supernova out of the planet's reach. Vegeta appeared behind Coola and grabbed him by the wrists. "G-gah!" said Coola. "Fine, I'll show you my real power then! I -" Suddenly an earth-shaking roar echoed across the world. It was human-like, but then....inhuman as well. A massive chi washed over them all. "Wh-what is this?!" yelled Goten. Gohan blocked his face. Krillin struggled to stay on his feet. "W-well," said Coola, chuckling. "It seems he is getting impatient...I didn't think he'd want to wipe you out so early, but ah well, plans change....." The roar echoed once more. "RAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" The chi was getting closer at an alarming rate. Coola quickly broke free of Vegeta's grip. "I ought to get going, then!" said Coola, and he flew off. The chi had nearly reached them. "Sh-sh**!" yelled Goku. He and Vegeta quickly turned into Super Saiyans. "Goten, Krillin! Go, make sure the Namekians are okay! Get them to cover! Keep them as safe as you can! Now!" Goten and Krillin nodded and quickly flew off. Gohan was about to fly up to where Goku and Vegeta were, but suddenly the air around him bent and he disappeared, with a startled "Ah!" "Gohan!" yelled Goku. "Wh-what..." "Never mind that now, Kakarott!" yelled Vegeta. "This chi is monstrous, but perhaps Gohan was considered too powerful for it....damn, Coola must've had a way to do this...he must've been ordered to take Gohan away. But it doesn't matter now, it's almost here!" Goku looked in the direction of the chi. "R-right!" He thought to himself, 'Oh man, this is way worse than Coola....this guy's stronger than our Super Saiyan forms...! Wh-what...' The chi had arrived, and so had the owner. Goku and Vegeta stared in shock. "Y-you!" "I've come for you again....Kakarott!!" |
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| dangerousbob | Sep 20 2012, 05:21 AM Post #8 |
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Woah thats a lot of reading. Good work. wish it was animated. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 20 2012, 05:58 AM Post #9 |
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Thanks. And yeah, it'd definitely be better animated, but oh well. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 22 2012, 07:55 PM Post #10 |
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Chapter 4 "Well, Kakarott...sure is nice to see you here..." "Wh-what?" said Vegeta. "B-Broly can speak articulately?!" "Hmph. I've learned to control myself over the years...." said Broly, floating in front of Goku and Vegeta in Super Saiyan form. "I can control my bloodlust so long as I don't get too carried away..." Broly murmured, slowly grinning. "Great," muttered Goku. "Vegeta, let's teach him a lesson." "Hell yeah," said Vegeta. The two of them powered up and charged at Broly. ---- "I'm telling you," said King Enma, "I didn't even get wind of this myself until recently! Even now, I'm having trouble telling what's going on in a certain section of Hell..." "Why didn't you mention that earlier?!" yelled Old Kai. "Which section?!" "That's the problem," said Enma. "The location shifts from time to time, most likely to prevent my tracking it. I didn't notice until recently for some reason, but now that I have noticed, they've taken action...whoever 'they' is...." "Well, at least point us in the current direction of this...place," said Piccolo. "Well....okay, you're going to want to go...." ---- "Hmph. Idiots. Coming into our turf like this." "Oi, shut it Burter, I'm tryna reboot this damn son of -" "Burter, I bet you chocolate Guldo dies first in this shenanigans!" "Wh-what?! No I won't, I -" "Silence!" A commanding voice hushed the Ginyus. They quickly dropped everything and came to attention. "Yes, Lord Cold?" they said in unison. "My son, Coola, has successfully captured Son Gohan and has sent him into another dimension. Anyways, we've got guests coming this way, as you know....specifically the ones known as 'Piccolo', 'Tenshinhan', and 'Old Kaioshin'....I wouldn't worry about the Kai, and maybe the human has some tricks up his sleeve, but the Namek is our greatest threat. You've grown significantly stronger - do not fail me." "Yessir!" said the Ginyus, saluting Cold. "Assuming that you fail this mission, and assuming that you're still alive....consequences won't be pretty. Let's just say you won't be dancing for quite a while." "Bud I loved da danc-" "Shut it, *****er! Uh, yessir!" "I suppose I'll send in Coola if you truly need assistance, but you better hope it doesn't come to that. If you see Coola, then you know that you've failed. Got it?" "Yessir!" "I'll take my leave now." Cold left the area quickly, taking most of their things with him via telekinesis. "Alright then, guys," said Burter. "Huddle up!" "These pikers might actually give us some trouble," said Jeice. "That bloody Namek must be a lot stronger than the human that Lord Coola fought, and that human was actually a match for Coola." "Coola was still holding back a good bit, though, right?" said Burter. "Ya!" said Recoome. "He wuz still restrictin' his powar to have a better fight!" "Lord Coola wasn't holding back a giant amount of power, though," said Guldo. "Aye, mate. The human pushed 'im. Lord Coola was still probably, like, three times stronger or so at his maximum, but I'd say he's two times as strong as me," said Jeice. "Damn, we've gotten strong," said Guldo. "Who's we?" said Burter. They all laughed and Guldo scowled. "Anyways, the Namek has gotta be above us. So what we do is - stomp all over the human quick and fast, and then gang up on the Namek." "Id took us 'this long to tink of 'this?" "Aye, mate, we were never the smartest out there. Oi, what's with that chi? Is that a bloody...oh." Piccolo and Tenshinhan had touched down, Old Kai standing a safe, safe, distance back. "Oh, aren't you the Ginyu Force?" asked Piccolo. "I've heard of you...flamboyant mutants with odd chi signatures..." "Aye, mate. Gonna skip the intros for like, the first time ever. We're gonna kill you right here." "First off," said Tien, "tell us why you're here, what you're going, and who you're following. Or we'll beat it out of you. Well, we'll beat you up anyways, so I suppose this makes little difference." "Not likely, son," said Burter. "We can stop time, y'know?" "Can you?" asked Piccolo. In one blitz, he appeared right behind Guldo and chopped the startled mutant's head off. "Did you really think I didn't know what you all could do? I always made myself acquainted with abilities of former foes, even if they're ones I've never met. I was able to watch your battle on Namek from King Kai's world..." "Well, drat," said Burter, looking unfazed. "No time-stopping. Let's go at it then, shall -" "'EY BURTER, GIMME that CHOCOLATE WE BET ON, I WON!" "What? When did I ever -" "Anyways, you *****ers, let's take care of these arses first..." "Very well," said Piccolo. The three Ginyus charged, as did Piccolo and Tien. --- "Ka-me-ha-me...." "Final...." "HAAA/FLASH!!" "Gah!" A combo attack from Goku and Vegeta that merely left some ugly bruises on Broly - not a good sign. They'd been fighting for a while now, and while the fight seemed even, Goku and Vegeta were getting tired faster than Broly was. "W-we have to take it up to Super Saiyan 2!" said Goku. He crossed his arms in front of him. "HHAAAAAA!!!!!" Vegeta did the same. The ground shook, and lightning flashed in the skies - and the auras of the two Saiyans. Goku and Vegeta stopped powering up and faced Broly once more. "Oh, this again, huh?" said Broly. Goku blitzed right behind Broly and dealt a good blow to the back of his neck. Vegeta followed up with a kick to Broly's chin. They both appeared above Broly and knocked him down to the ground. Broly got up and shot two guided Eraser Cannons up. Goku and Vegeta deflected them easily with their fingertips and shot at Broly themselves. "Fufufu...this isn't even fair anymore! Hey Kakarott, lemme take him alone, alright?" "V-Vegeta...look..." The smoke cleared and Broly was roaring, green light flashing around him. |
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| + Kyouks | Sep 23 2012, 10:44 PM Post #11 |
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Chapter 5 "GAHA-HA-HA! GA-HA-HA-HA! YES!! I AM THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAIYAN GA-HAHA!!!!!" "Yeah, we know, bro." "Vegeta, don't be so blunt." "Huh, what? You shouldn't be smoking, you know...." "I...what?" "GAHAHAHA!!!!!!" Broly exhaled and finally calmed down. "Let's go at it!" ---- "Dodon Pa!" "HAHA!" Tenshinhan cursed as Recoome ran up to him and grabbed him by the neck. "C-crap!" "HAHA!" "Shut up!" Tien blasted Recoome's face, but if Recoome gave a damn about his wounds, he didn't show it. Piccolo was having a tough time dealing with both Burter and Jeice at once. "Oi, take off your weights!" said Jeice. "We wanna smash your arse at yer best!" "Not likely. Not yet," said Piccolo. But he was having trouble keeping up with Burter's superior speed, and Jeice would use these small opportunities to strike. "Tell me," said Piccolo as he fought. "How is it that you have bodies? And you seem alive, too....how?" "Crusher Ball!" Jeice formed a very large ball of red chi in his hand and threw it, ignoring Piccolo's question. Piccolo jumped and dodged with ease. "That won't work!" he said. Then his ears picked up something and he turned, the Crusher Ball heading right back, Burter in an odd position. "C-crap, he deflected it back!" Piccolo was struck as he attempted to dodge the blast. He fell, and his clothes were smoking. "G-great...looks like I doo have to get serious...." ---- Broly grabbed Vegeta and smashed him into the ground. Vegeta yelled and kicked Broly in the gut, freeing himself. Goku came up from behind and struck the back of Broly's head, but Broly turned and grabbed him, sending him into a rock. Goku blasted Broly in the face and flew away. "G-great, are attacks are having little effect!" said Goku. "No, that's not it," said Vegeta. "We're damaging him, but he doesn't care...pain is nothing to him when he's like that. It won't hinder his fighting, either. We'll have to finish him off in one fell swoop. And don't use Form 3 yet...you might end up wasting all your energy before doing anything worthwhile...." "Alright, let's do this!" Goku and Vegeta charged and both attempted to kick Broly. Broly grabbed their ankles and prepared to throw them. Goku and Vegeta both charged up chi balls and threw them into Broly's face as he threw them. Broly coughed and staggered a bit - a good sign. Goku and Vegeta rose into the air and Goku use Instant Transmission. He appeared behind Broly. Broly quickly turned, however, and grabbed Goku by the throat, laughing. As he started choking Goku, Vegeta charged up a blast from behind and fired. "Ugh!" Broly stumbled and Goku kicked Broly away. As Broly tried to regain his footing, Goku quickly powered up. "Full Power....KAMEHAME-HAA!!!!" "FINAL SHINE ATTACK!" The two giant blasts were hurtling towards Broly at a blinding speed, and engulfed him in a huge, bright explosion. "D-did we get him?" The smoke cleared and Broly was keeling over, panting. His entire body was burned. He clenched his teeth and started screaming. His aura flashed around him. "GRRAAAAAHHHH!!!!" "Oh, great, now the buffoon's totally going to lose it!" muttered Vegeta. "GRAAA-AAAA-AAAHHHH!!!!" "We have to stop him!" Goku warped behind Broly, but Broly's aura blasted him backwards. As Goku was flying back, he shot a chi blast, but Broly's aura repelled it. It was like a barrier. "Great....KAMEHAMEHA!" Goku fired, and this time, he got through. Broly was hit hard, but it only made him angrier. He turned towards Goku, grinning wildly. "Oh, no you didn't...." He exhibited an odd facial tick. "KAKAROTTTT!!!!!!! GRAAHHH!!!" "Oh, great, he's back to his old self," muttered Vegeta. Vegeta swooped in and kicked the back of Broly's neck, nearly breaking it, but Broly didn't care. He charged towards Goku, and Goku started powering up greatly. "K-Kakarott, are you using Super Saiyan 3?!" asked Vegeta. "I have to!!" said Goku. Broly ginned as he flew towards Goku. Goku stayed where he was and kept powering up. And then.... A blinding flash of light blinded them from behind Broly. It wasn't Vegeta, since he seemed surprised as well. Broly screamed and was knocked over. His aura disappeared, and he shrunk down in size. He seemed unconscious. "Well, seems he lost control after all," said a voice. "The master could've let him kill you first - it's what I would've done - but then Broly would simply go berserk over having nothing else to killed. Silly fool." "Wh-who are you?" asked Goku. "Show yourself!" "My, my, Broly, you are a case....hm? Oh, yes....well, you and I are quite acquainted...." The light finally faded completely and Goku saw.....a big green bug. "Cell," he said. "Why are...why are you people alive? You're all people we killed before....you should be dead!" "Well," said Cell. "I assure you, things will become clear...assuming you live long enough, that is. I would kill you now, but it's best I get Broly back, or he may regain consciousness and attempt to ravage the universe." Cell chuckled like it was no big deal. "Can't have that, eh? Ha!" "Fight us now, Cell," said Vegeta. "Whoever this leader of yours is, you're going to tell us after I beat you to the ground...." Cell was grabbing Broly's arm. But then he dropped it, and threw his head back and laughed. "Oh, I wish I could deal with you small fry right now....but I can't. Again, can't risk this fool waking up before we get him under control, or we could potentially lose a valuable weapon." Cell laughed again. "Don't worry....if I get lucky, I'll get to kill one of you, maybe..." Cell took Broly by the arm and started to walk away. "Cell, tell me how you're alive," called Goku. Cell kept walking. "Cell, wait," said Goku. He had stopped trying to power up into Super Saiyan 3. "Fight me, now. I refuse to let you go just because you're under orders to leave us." Cell turned back to Goku and frowned. The air around him shifted and a thin aura appeared around him. The ground shook, and the air pressure rose drastically. Vegeta fell from the air in shock, landing on one knee. Goku stumbled and struggled to regain his footing. Cell's power was overwhelming them, yet he was several feet away..... "There's a taste, okay? Now, I'll see you soon." Cell flew off quickly, leaving a large crater where he'd been standing. Goku stood for a while in shock before falling to his knees. Vegeta struggled to regain his composure. "Th-that guy....he's much stronger than we are..." Goku stammered. "If he f-fought that small Boo that I fought, he'd win with one shot......it's too much...." Vegeta slowly rose to his feet. "D-damn! We'll have to worry about that later, though...let's check up on Goten and Krillin...." ---------------------------------------------- Chapter 6 As the battles waged on in other areas, Coola was taking a stroll somewhere in the deep pits of Hell. "The damn Ginyus and my father!" he thought. "To...to think that I'm back-up for such small fry! The Ginyus themselves are catching up to me...I can't allow such a thing. I don't know where I went wrong in my training, but....I can't allow this. Once our plans succeed, I must plot secretly myself and take over the universe..." Coola looked around quickly to make sure no one - specifically him - was listening. "Darn it....I was the most powerful member of our race at one point...I was the heir to the throne before our planet blew up...I have to regain my reputation somehow..." Coola passed by the area where Gohan was being held. He was in a special bubble which blocks off chi from the inside and out, keeping Gohan inside, and preventing anyone from releasing him unless the master wishes it. "All I got to do was capture him...the biggest threat, sure, but still...child's play...the idiot was off-guard..." Coola continued rambling to himself over why he couldn't accept this when he felt a presence. "Show yourself!" he stated. "Whoa, chill out," came a voice. Coola's eyes narrowed. "Come out, Tullece," he said. Tullece emerged from the shadows. "Rambling on your pathetic power, son?" "You'd better silence yourself, monkey," said Coola. "I was far stronger than you once." "The past is the past," said Tullece, powering up for a brief instant, giving Coola a glimpse of golden hair and power that was much greater than Coola's before powering down again. "What matters is now." "Hmph. Begone," said Coola. "I've no interest in speaking with the like of you, scum." Tullece sighed. "Very well," he said. As Tullece walked away, he turned. "Did you know that I heard of one of our allies dying soon? Well, not really 'heard of'....just a feeling. Y'know, that'd be a nice opportunity to steal some power.....but whatever, chances are that ain't happening..." Tullece walked away. Coola huffed and kept walking. Tullece and his mind games again. What a pain. Coola thought in his head. The Ginyus had been fighting for over three hours now, he thought, assuming the fight wasn't over already. (Note: I will cover the Ginyu fight later, don't worry.) Quite odd that it'd take so long, but he wasn't called upon, so he didn't worry. Someone materialized in front of Coola. "Wh- oh, it's you, master," said Coola, hating how he had to refer to his leader specifically as "master". "Is there anything you require of me?" "There's something you should know," said the master. "The battle with the Ginyus and our trespassers is over." "Ah, I see....so the Ginyus pulled through?" "Ah...not quite," said the master. "Your father Cold was angry at the Ginyus for taking such a long time and stepped in himself, rather than calling you. But....they've been defeated..." A shock came over Coola. The Ginyus and Cold defeated...? Were they dead? His mind thought back to Tullece's previous words. Did Tullece know? Was the death of his comrades really some opportunity for power? But how exactly would he take power? He had no such ability. And how could he think of such a thing when his father could be dead? As cold-hearted as Coola was, he didn't like the idea of someone killing his father. "You should head over there, Coola," said the master, "as I have other matters to attend to..." "V-very well, master," said Coola. The air bent around the master and he disappeared. Coola stood for a while, thinking, before he set off. As he was shooting through air, he heard a voice speaking to him telepathically. 'Odd he'd call upon the likes of you, huh? Or not. Remember what Tullece told you? Are you really so pathetic that you'd need this?' Coola winced at the sound of the voice, but clenched his teeth and transported his thoughts back. 'You had better shut it, if you know what's good for you...brother.' 'Oh? Big talk coming from you. I'll be doing my own thing, then. Send me a postcard when you join our father, alright? Coola clenched his teeth and fists. 'Get out of my head.....Kaze....' --------------------------------------------- Chapter 7 "Huff....ha....w-we've been fighting this bloody bastard fer ovah two hours now!" muttered Jeice. Piccolo was tiring as well. "Look, it's evident that you're wearing down faster than I am....just give it up, will you?" Jeice clenched his teeth. "Listen, ya bloke, we're the Ginyu force! We were once the best fighting squad in all the galaxies, and now...we're back on top! Burter, let's decimate this drongo!" "That what?" "Just - ATTACK!" Recoome was finally beginning to feel the effects of Tien's attacks, who was wearing down fast. Tien kicked Recoome's neck, and the big oaf staggered. He grabbed Tien's foot the second time, though, and flung him away. Tien rose and shot a chi blast at Recoome, who deflected it easily. He flew towards Recoome and elbowed his nose, but Recoome quickly punched him out of the way. "Juss' gib it up, it's too late!" Recoome said. "Yaaarrghhh!!!" Tien jumped and avoiding Recoome's kick just in time, and he rose to the air. "Kikoho!" Recoome looked up and he was hit hard by a kiai attack. He was smashed through the ground, and he broke several limbs. "Uuuunngghh..." "Dodon Pa!" The beam sliced through Recoome's heart, and Recoome didn't move. Tien went to join Piccolo, who was slowly gaining the upper hand against the remaining Ginyus when... "IMBECILES!" yelled a voice. King Cold burst into view, looking enraged. "You're still at it?! Bah, I don't need to call Coola, I'll finish you myself!" Cold started powering up. "Whoa..." said Burter. "I think he's a little stronger than Lord Coola!" "Tien! Take care of them!" said Piccolo. Tien smashed an off-guard Burter in the nose, and Piccolo followed up the a chop of the head. Jeice remained, and he quickly flew into the air. "Grr....I'll -" Jeice was shot through the chest with eye lasers. As he fell, he looked towards King Cold with a look of shock and disgust. Cold had just shot him. "Fool...you'll die now, trespassers!" Cold charged and punched Piccolo in the gut and grabbed his neck, throwing him into Tien. As Cold was raging, Tien got up and fired another Kikoho. Piccolo rose and charged up his Special Beam Cannon. Cold emerged from some rubble, holding his arm, seething. "HUMAN!!" Cold shot towards Tien and started choking him. Tien struggled to break free. Cold was grinning and he pointed his finger in front of Tien. "SPECIAL BEAM CANNON!!" The Special Beam Cannon shot through Cold's side, and he fell down, dropped Tien. Piccolo was sweating. "Let's get Old Kai and leave....it's evident that there's nothing here..." ----- Coola found Cold barely conscious some time later. The Ginyus were dead. He turned Cold over, and he did not look pretty. Coola didn't know what to feel. He was never close to his father, but he had no desire to see Cold die like this. Well, Coola had intended to kill Cold himself one day, but having it happen like this felt...different to him. He couldn't explain it. "Coola....I...won't make it too see the master's plan come through..." Cold murmured. "Yeah, I can see that." "Listen..." Cold coughed. "I'd rather not die in vain so...I'll share my power with you..." Coola remembered what Tullece had said. "Y-you wouldn't have been my first choice," said Cold. "Many years ago, perhaps, but I'd like my power to be useful so..." "Gee, thanks," said Coola. "N-no," said Cold. He coughed. "Did you know that...passing down the power of Frost Demons is most efficient when done within one family...? Particularly from parent to child...but it's a forbidden technique. We forbade it because of its dangers. It's similar to the Namekians fusion technique, I guess. I'm going to give you my power...and the meeting of my power and your power will cause a reaction triggered by the similar DNA...again, this seems to work best parent to child....your power should grow immensely." Cold coughed. "I....I would've picked....someone else -" at this, Coola felt a bitter taste in his mouth, "- but you were my first son. Your power comes from me more than it does the others, so this...reaction should work best with you..." "Father, I think that's enough. You're on the verge of death; let's not waste time talking about this." Cold coughed blood. "V-very well. Remember, we forbade this technique do to its dangers. If you can't handle the power, you die....simple as that. But you're adept at control, so...just...don't let the power drive you mad...." "I won't," said Coola. Cold placed his hand on Coola's chest, and transfered what tiny amount of chi he had left, along with his life force. "Do well...." Cold's hand fell to the ground. Coola didn't feel any different. Suddenly, he was on the ground, holding his stomach. His chi was rising at a dramatic rate. His pulse sped up, he started to sweat, he couldn't see straight....for a scary moment, he couldn't breathe....and then his vision cleared, as did the pain. Coola stood up and flexed his fingers. He slowly grinned. "Th-this power. It's incredible! AAAH!!!!!" Coola rose up, extending his arms and legs. He didn't feel the chi of the trespassers anywhere nearby, so he felt it was safe to showcase his power. He powered up, and the ground shook. The air around him blew away, turning him into super-powered fan. Lightning flashed right behind him, searing his back...to no effect. "AHAHA!! Ha-ha-HA-HAHAHA!! This power is so overwhelming....I could accomplish anything! I'm probably stronger than Kaze now!" Coola grinned even wider. "I know what I'll do first....there isn't room for both Kaze and I.....Kaze, once I fully control this power, I'll come for you!" Coola flew off, laughing evilly. Wherever he flew, the temperature dropped by at least twenty degrees. He was to be the strongest, he thought. He would one day become stronger than everyone, ever. He would overthrow their "master" one day and rule the universe himself. A small part of his thanked his deceased father as he flew on back to where the base had been relocated. ------------------------------ Chapter 8 Coola was surprised to see Kaze at base when he returned. "K-Kaze?!" he stammered. "Why you...what are you -" Kaze turned and grinned. He looked similar to Coola's true form: Kaze is the one who looks a bit like True Form Coola and Freeza; only difference is that the red parts on this picture are blue for Kaze: "Can't you see that the master is giving my orders right now?" said Kaze. "Please, wait your turn..." "Ahem," said the master. "As I was saying, Kaze, do try to take out some of the pesky Z Fighters. Start with the weaker ones first, they're the most annoying to deal with...if I ask you to return, do so immediately." Kaze bowed. "As you wish," he said. He turned, and wherever he stepped, the ground froze. When he passed by Coola, he felt like a glacier. Coola looked up at the master once Kaze was gone. "Coola, I see your power has grown," said the master. "Good....you can await orders for later, then." "Very well," said Coola, and he left. As he walked by, he remembered that he still didn't have access to the abilities - the true abilities - of the Frost Demons. The way Kaze froze the ground, made himself colder than ice - Coola could hardly compare ability-wise to him. He remembered Kaze when he was younger; a playful, evil little thing. Then Kaze, like the rest of them, became obsessed with power. He was then the only one to discover the true ways of the Frost Demons shortly after he had left..."the family business". It was then that Kaze had far surpassed even Coola, and he took out his wrath on the creatures on the far edges of the universe. One day, he was finally felled by a warrior, a Super Saiyan from the looks of it. The Saiyan who killed Kaze was the prince, Vegeta. It had happened quite recently, actually - Vegeta himself was in space for some reason, and when he met Kaze, he fought him in rage for being one of Freeza's people. Kaze claimed that Vegeta used a power above that of Super Saiyan to finally defeat him. When Kaze was resurrected by the master, he made sure his power - and abilities - grew so that he may get his revenge. Coola may have possessed Kaze's power now, but he didn't posses his abilities. He was disadvantaged. The basic Frost Demon abilities were easy to learn, so Kaze knew most of Coola's abilities; whatever Coola could do, Kaze could do, and more. The only other one who had unlocked the abilities...he did it after being resurrected. But how? Coola chuckled to himself. "As if he'd ever tell me anyway." "Tell you what?" said a voice. Coola jumped and turned around, and then immediately scowled. "Do you want a death sentence, Freeza?!" he snarled. Freeza crossed his arms. He gave Coola a look of amusement. "Freeza, I could kill you easily the way I am now, so maybe I can force you to tell me...how did you unlock the abilities of the Frost Demons?" Freeza turned to the side, looked up, and frowned. "Hmm....force me, huh? I doubt that. Anyways, I guess I could tell you..." Coola was surprised. "Why's that?" he asked. "Because," said Freeza, as if it were obvious, "I don't like Kaze." 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