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Oct 6 2012, 06:26 AM Post #16 |
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Episode 13:Android Black Black's fist is seperated from his arm and launched towards Gohan.The little Saiyan is surprised by that,so he takes the hit full force and is thrown through the wall,ending up out of the building.Black rushes to Gohan,meanwhile reattaching his fist to his arm,and reaches him,going for another punch.But,this time,Gohan jumps back and dodges.Black continues trying to hit Gohan,but he continues dodging,with successive leaps,until he's lost from sight.Black rushes to chase him. Black:Why are you running,coward?I thought you wanted a fight. Gohan:Your momma's! Black looks back and sees Gohan showing his tongue to him. Black:You can't dodge my flying fist.Once it goes,it is programmed to follow you till the edge of the universe. Once more,the android launches his fist to Gohan.But,he doesn't intend to dodge.With a smile,he prepares to block it. Gohan(thinking):Heh.That's what i was waiting for. Using both his arms,Gohan successfully catches the fist,despite he's pushed back a little.A chi blast starts forming in Gohan's hands,intending to destroy the foe's launching fist.However,to the boy's surprise,the mechanical hand opens on its own and charges a blast,knocking Gohan away.The fist is reattached to its owner,who reaches the fallen foe.To his surprise,the kid jumps up and headbutts him on the chin,sending him high.Gohan flies to meet him and hits him on the chin once more,this time with a kick.Black immediately responds with a punch that connects.Then,he catches him with both his arms and headbutts him on the head.Gohan's forehead becomes bloody and he cries in pain.To finish the combo,Black flies towards the ground and opens a bottomless hole,burying Gohan in there.The robot jumps out of the hole. Black:Let's see if you can get out of there... Gohan climbs out of his "tomb" and immediately runs far from the foe.But,he's very wounded. Gohan:KAMEHAMEHA. The robot takes off his hands and fires an enormous red blast,from both of his arms.Kamehameha is beaten and Gohan is sent flying towards a mountain,which is shattered.Choco,who watches the fight from far away,is terrified.He can't help Gohan,since he has already given him most of his chi.Black walks towards Gohan and sees him on a small hill of stones. Gohan(thinking):That ends it.Now i'm totally helpless. Black:Goodbye,Gohan... He starts forming a chi ball to finish him off. Triccolo:MACANNONSAPPO. A thunder blast penetrates Black's body,making him explode.Gohan sees Triccolo floating.The Namek lands next to him.Gohan tries to get up and hug him,but his body hurts. Gohan:TRICCOLO.How did that miracle happen? Triccolo:I can regenerate my body,even if only microscoping pieces remain.Black left some microscoping pieces,believing that was enough to kill me. I supressed my chi,not to be sensed,and started charging my ultimate attack. Gohan:Wow,you make your father look like a novice. They stay there resting for a while. Gohan:Well,that danger is gone.But,now,i have to face another,even greater,danger. Triccolo:Huh?What do you mean? Gohan:My mother's rage at me,for having dropped my school sack! They both laugh.And this is the end of Black Saga.From the next episode,Universe Saga begins. |
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Oct 6 2012, 02:56 PM Post #17 |
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Episode 14:An unexpected visitor West City was rebuilt in a short time,due to Bulma's genius.Three years passed. Many things have changed in the heroes' lives during the last three years.Since Choco rescued Bulma,they got romantically involved and started dating.Now,they're a couple,but they haven't discussed marriage yet.Chichi is also no longer a single.She has married a wealthy businessman,who adores her and offers her a wonderful life,full of luxury.Chichi feels that her second husband is the exact opposite of her first one,who,as she says, "never earned a penny,didn't help her with the housework and had her always second to his adventures,leaving her alone for such long periods".She moved to his house,but Gohan preferred to stay in the Sky Palace.So,he now lives alone with Mr.Popo.As most teens,he has his school sweetheart. Her name is Cooky.She has long,red hair and green eyes.Despite his young age,Gohan has developped deep feelings for her,which he believes to be love.Maybe that's because he has gone through so many things in his life,resulting in him maturing at a young age.Gohan has told her about his life and revealed his powers to her.Cooky got very excited to hear that he lives in a floating palace. Anyway,to finally begin our story,one day,Cooky tells Gohan that she'd love to come and see the palace where he lives.At first,Gohan doesn't believe it's a good idea,but,she insists,so he accepts.And the afternoon of the arranged hosting finally comes.Gohan has sent Mr.Popo to pick her up, for he wants to make the preparations by himself.He wants everything to be perfect,in order to please his girlfriend.He cooks,tidies all the rooms (the palace has plenty,but,with his superhuman speed,he can make it in time) and,when he's done,waits for her arrival.He's a little nervous.He and Cooky haven't gone further than lip kisses up to now.But,this time,she's coming to his house and he doesn't know how far they might go! Mr.Popo's carpet lands and Cooky gets off.She's amazed at the place. Gohan(thinking):I wouldn't like Mr.Popo to be here at this moment... Gohan:Err,Mr.Popo,have you ever taken a vacation? Mr.Popo:No.Kami never gave Mr.Popo a day off. Gohan:Well,you can go,right now! Mr.Popo:For how long? Gohan:Just go till i call you back! Mr.Popo:As lord Gohan wishes. Mr.Popo leaves,with his carpet. Gohan(thinking):What a guy.I wonder if he has ever "scored"... The scene is cut to a flashback.Mr.Popo locks the door of his room.He vanishes and reappears a little later,with a group of girls. Mr.Popo:...and this is my humble apartment,ladies.Now,let's party! After having their meal,Gohan shows the palace to Cooky. Cooky:And,what is behind this door? Gohan:Oh,nothing interesting.Just my room. Cooky:So,won't you show it to me? Gohan's heart starts beating like drums. Gohan:You wanna see...my room? Cooky:Sure. Trembling,Gohan opens the door. Cooky:Wow,what a king size bed! Without asking,Cooky lies on it. Cooky:It's so comfortable.You're lucky,Gohan. Gohan(thinking):Gosh.Am i going to be...deflowered? Suddenly,Gohan feels a weird chi out of the palace.His face gets serious. Gohan:Cooky,wait here please. Cooky:Huh?Sure. Gohan runs out.Who is he going to meet?Be patient till the next episode of Dragonball A. Edited by no name, Oct 6 2012, 02:57 PM.
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Oct 9 2012, 07:39 AM Post #18 |
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Episode 15:A decent proposal Gohan is shocked to see a spaceship landed on the Sky Platform and a short,crocodile faced alien having come out of it. Alien:Greetings,sir Gohan.I'm from Planet Frieza and i used to be a servant at the palace. Gohan:WHAT?You're related to the scum of the universe? Gohan remembers Frieza's deeds on Namek and gets angry. Gohan(whispering):Curse you,Frieza... He extends his arm and opens his palm.By fear,the alien's back is forced on the floor. Alien:P-please,don't hurt me. Gohan remains silent.The alien stands up. Alien:I've been looking for you for a long time.The planets that were enslaved by Frieza are grateful to your father.We know that you also fought Frieza on Namek and helped a lot in his defeat.Now,you can take the leadership of the Planet Trade Organization. Gohan:Can you run that one more time? Alien:Having suffered so much by Frieza's tyranny,the,now liberate,planets want to be ruled by a good,wise leader.Under your command,as the king of all the planets,a new age of happiness shall begin for the galaxy. Gohan:Look,it's bad timing.Right now,i have a guest... Cooky:SO WHAT?I'm coming too. Cooky comes out of the palace. Cooky:He,he.You know how curious nature i am.I couldn't resist following you and hearing everything. Alien:Wonderful.Take her with you.It's best for a king's prestige to have a queen. Gohan:What about your parents,Cooky?They'll be worried. Cooky:Don't worry.They're very absent minded.It will take them at least one week to notice that i'm missing. Alien:Ok.So,let's go. Gohan:Wait,Cooky.He have to think about it... Cooky pulls Gohan's arm,forcing him into the spaceship.A few hours later,they arrive on Planet Frieza.Within the following days,Gohan begins his duties and gives his first orders as king of the galaxy.He and Cooky spend some wonderful days in the palace,having anything they could desire. Unfortunately,all good things come quickly to an end,and there is no exception here.What is going to happen?Keep watching Dragonball A. |
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Oct 11 2012, 08:19 PM Post #19 |
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Episode 16:The way of shadows Gohan wakes up in h the royal chamber.Another wonderful day is about to begin at his kingdom.Or not?He notices that the sunlight coming from the window is weaker than usual.Next moment,he also realizes that noises come from outside.He looks out of the window.A huge dark dome,which barely lets the sunlight pass,has covered the area.Also,the place out of the palace is full of shadows running(or,more precisely,floating)around.They have no specific shape.Also,there are two red eyes and a yellow smile on each of them.Many servants have gone out to watch the phenomenon.The shadows attack them,firing black smoke from their mouths.That smoke makes everyone go berserk.Cooky wakes up. Cooky:What's wrong,honey? Gohan turns to her. Gohan:Cooky,this is serious.Stay here,you hear me?Don't dare exiting this room. The frightened Cooky nods.Gohan goes out of the palace.He sees a shadow attacking a servant. Gohan:LEAVE HIM ALONE. The shadow turns to Gohan. Shadow:Wanna take his place?Then,taste my smoke,which will turn you into a bloodthirsty beast. The shadow fires smoke,which surrounds Gohan and fades,two seconds later.Nothing happens. Shadow:WHAT?Well,it looks like you're too powerful to be affected by that trick.But,you can still be hit by my blasts. The shadow fires a blast from its mouth.This time,Gohan isn't caught off guard and dodges.He counterattacks with a flying kick,but he keeps going, as if his foe wasn't there.He stands on the ground and turns his head surprised. Shadow:Har,har.I'm immaterial.You can't touch me. Gohan tries a chi blast,which also goes through the shadow. Gohan(thinking):This is nightmare.No matter how strong i am,it is useless.I can't hit him with physical nor with energy attacks,whereas his own blasts can hit me with no problem. Shadow:COME HERE,GUYS.I'VE FOUND THE BIG FISH. All the shadows approach Gohan. Shadows:We can chase you till you get worn down.Then,we'll kill you. Gohan leaps back several times,so that they lose him,in order to buy some time.He catches his breath and thinks.But,he can't think of any plan.His fighting spirit starts ebbing. Gohan(thinking):If my friends were here...i'd have more courage.But i can't use telepathy to call them,for Earth is too far. Gohan cries desperately. Gohan:TRICCOLO,MR.POPO,CHOCO.Someone.Help.Please... So,will Gohan somehow escape his doom?You'll find out in the next episode of Dragonball A. |
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Oct 13 2012, 08:26 PM Post #20 |
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Episode 17:Here comes the cavalry Mr.Popo is enjoying his vacation,lying on a tropical beach,surrounded by girls that serve him,when he catches a telepathetic message.It looks like Gohan tried so hard,that his message reached someone at Earth! In an instant,the black guy becomes well aware of what's happening. Mr.Popo:Oh,lord Gohan needs Mr.Popo's help.Girls,i'll be back in a while. Mr.Popo teleports to a desert,where Triccolo meditates.He quickly explains the situation. Triccolo:In other words,Gohan needs us right now.But,how are we going to go to that planet before it's too late? Mr.Popo:That isn't any problem.Mr.Popo has a secret technique.It's called Instant Transmission. Triccolo:Fine.But,first,let's go take that humanling friend of his with us.He might be of some help too. Mr.Popo appears in the cold,rocky desert of Planet Frieza.Triccolo and Choco are next to him. Mr.Popo:Mr.Popo goes now.His puny power level won't offer any help. So,he disappears.The two Z fighters jump on a cliff and see the black dome covering the palace. Choco:So,we're here?But,now what?How do we fight those things?Any ideas? Triccolo doesn't answer,only smiles.He opens his mouth and produces an egg.It hatches and a snake comes out.It's brown,with green eyes. Triccolo:Monster of Wind,do your task. The monster opens its mouth and fires an enormous,green tornado.The tornado is headed towards the black dome and blows it away.The shadow creatures are also blown into annihilation.The snake re-enters the egg,which is reconstructed and reswallowed by Triccolo! Then,he and Choco go to help the exhausted Gohan. Gohan:Darn.How stupid i was.Such an obvious weakness and i couldn't figure it out myself. Triccolo gives Gohan a stern look. Triccolo:You could have done it,had you not got paniced so easily. Gohan:You're right.Piccolo will be ashamed of me,if he watched that from Other World.So,guys,how did you get here? They tell him about Mr.Popo's Instant Transmission technique. Gohan:WHAT?He knows such a thing?Then,why didn't he use it to teleport my father to the battlefield,when i was fighting Vegeta and Nappa? Choco:That's what i asked him.He answered that it was more dramatic this way! Gohan turns red and feels a strong desire to kill Mr.Popo! Later,Gohan and his friends sit in the throne room,thinking of the situation.A servant has bad news. Servant:Your majesty,we're receiving messages from more and more of our planets,all reporting similar phenomenas. Everyone looks troubled.What can be the cause of those things?Suddenly,a creature pops out of nowhere.He looks like the same species as King Kai.But,instead of short and fat,he's tall and thin.Also,instead of King Kai's hat,he wears a crown. Servant:What insolence.How dare you bursting in the throne room of lord Gohan... Stranger:Silence.I can tell you what causes those mysteries.I also know they're about to become a lot worse.All of you had better listen carefully to what i have to say.The future of the whole existence as you know it depends on that... You readers had also better listen to him carefully...in the next episode of Dragonball A. |
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Oct 14 2012, 12:38 PM Post #21 |
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Episode 18:Order of the universe Gohan:So,talk.We're all listening to you. Stranger:I am the Arch Kai. Triccolo:The Arch Kai?Here? Triccolo bows. Gohan:Err,what is that,again? Triccolo:You insolent.Every galaxy of the universe is under the control of one King Kai.But,the Arch Kai is the leader of them.He's the second in command of the universe. Choco:Err,am i a fool if i ask who is the first one? Gohan:The guy/chick who created the universe,of course.But,no one has ever seen him/her or knows anything about his/her identity.Maybe we meet him/her at the day of Apocalypse. Choco:Assuming there is going to be such a day,of course... Gohan:Yeah,that's right. Arch Kai:Can you stop babbling?The situation is serious.In a different dimension,me and the Dark Kai exist,since the beginning of time,long before any other life form appeared.I have been responsible for the order of the universe,the physical laws,the reality as you know it.Dark Kai,on the other hand,has always been trying to make evil the dominant force.That's what he exists for. Triccolo:Frieza was his best shot,i guess. Arch Kai:That's right.With Frieza,he came very close at achieving his goal.Anyway,until recently,i was more powerful than him,that's why the good always won,one way or another.However,now he has became stronger than me.Reality has started being altered.Soon,an age of terror and darkness will begin.Even in the Other World.The good ones will be tortured at Hell,whereas the evil ones will go to Heaven... Gohan:So,what i must do is go and kick his butt,and everything will be fine.Right? Arch Kai:Exactly.The prophecy says it.The last Saiyan is our only hope.He shall either be our savior or our doom. Gohan:No time for decoding ancient sayings.Let's go. Triccolo:We're also coming,of course. Gohan:No.Triccolo.Choco.I want you to stay here,in case something happens in the palace.I feel it's my destiny to fight this battle on my own. Choco:What are you saying?You're going in the most dangerous mission of your life alone? Triccolo:Let's go,Choco.It's of no use. Gohan's two friends reluctantly exit the room and close the door. Choco:Triccolo,are we really going to leave him alone? Triccolo is silent.He looks troubled.Now,back at throne room... Gohan:So,how are we going there? Arch Kai:With my Instant Transmission technique.I will teach it to you,right now. Gohan:Do we have that much time? Arch Kai touches Gohan's head.Next moment,Gohan is surprised to realize that he knows the technique perfectly. Gohan:Ok,go.I have to do something first. Gohan exits the room.Triccolo and Choco have left.Gohan runs to his chamber. Gohan:Cooky,you have to return to Earth.The whole existence is in a big crisis. Cooky:Oh,Gohan.Do i really have to leave? Gohan:Yeah.Besides,your parents will be worried by now.I will instantly take you at your home,on Earth,with the technique i just learned.When things get better,i'll return to take you back.If i'm still alive... Gohan spoke bluntly to his mate.It's the emergency that made him like that.Action goes on,in the next episode of Dragonball A. |
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Oct 15 2012, 01:36 PM Post #22 |
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Episode 19:Meet Dark Kai The world where Arch Kai lives is an ideal place.Grass,trees,blue sky.Arch Kai returns to his world. Arch Kai:Let's hope Gohan will come soon. Dark Kai appears.He's just a human shaped shadow.The only thing on him that is different from the blackness is his red eyes and yellow mouth. Dark Kai:Gotcha. Dark Kai extends his arms and starts draining Arch Kai's energy,making him feel weak and sick. Dark Kai:You won't interfrere anymore. A hole opens in the sky and Arch Kai is thrown in.The hole closes.Arch Kai is sealed in there and won't be released until Dark Kai is defeated.Gohan appears. Gohan:I suppose you're the bad guy. Dark Kai:Yeah.And who are you?Some wanna be hero? Gohan:No.I'm the one who'll pulverize you.Your plan will fail,just like Frieza. Dark Kai:Har,har.Who told you i was expecting Frieza to succeed?His role was different. Gohan:Huh? Dark Kai:Actually,i surpassed Arch Kai's power decades ago.However,i wasn't ready to act yet,because i was afraid of the Saiyans.They were evil creatures,who,either they realized it or not,served my will,by causing chaos in the universe.Unfortunately,a prophecy written on the stone tablets of this world claims that one of them could be the only creature capable of stopping me.So,i created Frieza.A totally ruthless being,whose power was beyond my expectations.Before sending him in the universe dimension,i tested him in a fight.He was amazing.All i could do was put a speck of dust on his body.* *That was a reference on Frieza's quote "you're the first one to actually put a speck of dust on my body,besides my parents",and it was supposed to be funny! Ha,ha,ha(i guess i'm the only who laughed) Dark Kai:I have the ability to partly predict the future.I knew that Frieza would ultimately get defeated,but not before eradicating the annoying monkey race.Even the legendary Super Saiyan was killed in his fight with Frieza.Now,nothing threatens me anymore.Har,har. Gohan(smiling):Heh.Sorry to disappoint you,but your calculations were wrong.The legendary Super Saiyan,the last full blooded of the race,left an offspring behind.I am the actual last Saiyan! Dark Kai:NO.You're lying. Instead of answering,Gohan powers up.His tremendous chi is revealed. Dark Kai(thinking):There is no doubt.This is a Saiyan's chi.The brat was telling the truth! But,it's not over yet.I have another trump card! Gohan:Let's get this fight done.I have a life to live. Dark Kai:Oh,come on.Why do we have to fight?If we combine our forces,we'll control this dimension,the universe and the Other World as well. Gohan:Ha,ha.If you believe i will ever become an ally of yours,you're a retard. Dark Kai:Oh,you will,Gohan.Saiyans have the genes of destruction.Since you're a Saiyan,those genes exist in you,either you like it or not. Gohan:Shut up.My father and i are nothing like the rest Saiyans were. Dark Kai:That's because your father hit his head as a baby.But you didn't.It's just that you were raised under his influence.That has nothing to do with the genes of evil inside you.I can activate them and turn you into a demon. Gohan:So,that's what those shadows were doing. Dark Kai:Right.I sent them to awaken the evil in all the creatures in existence.But,they were too weak to affect you.So,i personally will take care of your own soul. Dark Kai spits a dark wind,which surrounds Gohan.Sealed in the sky,Arch Kai is watching. Arch Kai:"The last Saiyan shall either be our savior or our doom".Now,we'll see what of the two will happen. Stay tuned,while the drama reaches its peak,in the next episodes of Dragonball A. |
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Oct 17 2012, 02:46 PM Post #23 |
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Episode 20:Gohan's rampage Gohan feels his sentiment being blown away,against his will.He feels the desire to kill and destroy.Then,his eyes become empty,as if he has no reason.And then,he transforms into a giant ape,despite he has no tail.A tailless,giant ape.The Saiyan instict of slaughtering in him has been awakened,along with his true Saiyan hidden powers. Dark Kai:Har,har.Better than i expected.Not only he lost his sentiment,but also his chi became 10 times bigger. Suddenly,Choco and Triccolo pop out of nowhere! Dark Kai:What the...Who are you? Choco:Gohan's friends. Dark Kai:And how did you get here?Do you also know Instant Transmission? Triccolo:Not at all.We've been here,the whole time. Dark Kai:I don't get it.How can you have been here the whole time? Triccolo:My magical powers are more evolved than those of my father.He could just make himself bigger,but i can also do the opposite.I can also change the size of people or objects.Thus,me and Choco became tiny and sneaked into Gohan's pocket,without him knowing. Dark Kai:Good job.Now what?As you can see,your friend has become a brainless monkey. Gohan fires a mouth beam towards the two Z fighters,and they leap to dodge.Gohan walks towards them.Choco runs to him. Triccolo:Choco,no. Choco:Gohan,please.You have to snap out of it. Gohan just raises his foot to press Choco.The human fighter leaps to dodge,just in time.Triccolo flies and touches Gohan's head.Using his telepathy, he brings back in Gohan's mind all the good memories Gohan has with him and Choco.Unfortunately,it doesn't work.Still mad,Gohan tries to bite Triccolo,who gets away,with his clothes torn by Gohan's jaws. Triccolo:It's of no use. Dark Kai:Har,har.Don't fear yet.The worst part comes now! Now that Gohan is evil,i can fuse with him,since we're both pure evils. Dark Kai touches Gohan and they merge.The result is a black,giant ape.Dark Kai is the dominant personality,so the ape can talk. Dark Kai:Har,har.You shouldn't have come here,worms.Now,die. Choco:Hey,why don't you use that shrinking power of yours on him? Triccolo:It won't help.I can change his size,but his power will remain the same. Dark Kai approaches them. Choco:NO.It can't end like that.We must do something. He jumps in front of the ape's eyes. Choco:SOLAR FLARE. Dark Kai is temporarily blinded.Choco and Triccolo run a little further away. Choco:This is our chance.Charge your special beam cannon. Triccolo:Wait,are we going to kill Gohan? Choco:What other choice do we have?I'm sure Gohan too would prefer death to living in such state. Triccolo:I guess you're right...But,i don't think that even my ultimate attack is strong enough to beat that thing. Choco:I'll help you with my kamehameha.Hurry. Triccolo charges his attack. Triccolo:MACANNONSAPPO. Choco:KAMEHAMEHA. The two beams fuse to form a wide,super powerful blast.The ape opens his eyes and fires a mouth blast,which collides with the fused ones.The ape's attack wins the beam struggle and the two Z fighters fall down,severely injured.The ape jumps on them,breaking almost all their bones. Choco:Triccolo...can't you heal us? Triccolo:Fool.I can regerate lost body parts,not heal wounds.And,we haven't got any senzus. Dark Kai picks them up,opening his mouth,intending to swallow them.Triccolo and Choco are helpless.Gohan is brainwashed.Is that the triumph of evil?More action in the next episode. Edited by no name, Oct 20 2012, 01:30 PM.
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Oct 18 2012, 07:11 AM Post #24 |
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Episode 21:What are you? Suddenly,Dark Kai is forced to drop his two victims.Gohan inside him can't bear seeing his friends being tortured.The two fused folks split.Even worse for Dark Kai,Gohan returns to his human form.He looks more angry than ever. Gohan:You hurt people...good people.I WON'T FORGIVE YOU. Gohan turns Super Saiyan,for the first time. Choco:Hey,Gohan is blonde. Triccolo:And his chi...is different from before... Dark Kai:What...are...you? Gohan:I'm Goku's son.I'm the last of Saiyans.I'm the answer to all prayers.I'm the one and only invicible warrior.I'm the true hope.I'm... Dark Kai:Can you make it faster? Gohan:Okay,I'M GOHAN,THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAIYAN. Choco:That guy is finished. Triccolo:You're totally right.He stands no chance against that new Gohan's power. Dark Kai laughs. Dark Kai:You'll soon realize that,if i have to fight for real,i can do it. Dark Kai starts transforming.His muscles get buffed and he becomes about three metres tall.Long horns come out of his head.Also,his chi gets bigger. Dark Kai:This is my true form.I didn't use it against Frieza,because i wasn't interested in winning then. Gohan(smiling):Fine.Let's start. He disappears,going behind Dark Kai and punching him,forcing him on the ground.Dark Kai quickly stands up and turns to Gohan,going for a punch. Gohan catches his fist and throws him high above.The demon stops in the air and fires a black energy wave with both of his arms.Gohan dodges by disappearing and going above Dark Kai.He tries to punch him,but Dark Kai quickly turns and blocks.They invisibly exchange hits in the air for a while, until the Saiyan delivers an amazing kick on Dark Kai's head.The black foe responds with a punch on Gohan's stomach.Gohan cathces Dark Kai's head and flies towards the ground,opening a botomless hole.For a few seconds,none of the two fighters comes out of it.Then,after a shining explosion,Gohan appears out of the shine.Right one moment before visibility is fully restored,Dark Kai also pops out and ambushes Gohan,hitting him on the forehead,with his horns.Thus,Gohan is forced to take several rapid steps backward.Blood runs from two spots between his eyes.The foe launches himself towards him.However,Gohan quickly puts himself together and,with his foot,sweeps Kai's own two ones,forcing him down on the ground.Then,he raises his foot,intending to press the neck of the fallen Kai.Dark Kai dodges by rolling over the ground.With invisible speed,he stands up and punches Gohan,sending him high.While Gohan is still being thrown,Dark Kai charges a powerful black blast.Gohan brakes in the air and charges a kamehameha.The two beams collide.A literal clash between light and darkness,since its a bright blast versus a dark one.A destructive explosion follows.Then,visibility is slowly restored.First,Gohan can be seen standing on the ground.Then,Gohan is surprised to see his foe opposing to him using another trick.The two spectators(Triccolo and Choco) also get surprised when the smoke is fully cleared.Dark Kai has split himself into four duplicates. Dark Kai:That was a fun battle.But,now i want to settle it.You had much trouble against one of me.Against four,you're done for. Gohan(smiling):Nice bluff.I know the weak points of this technique. Dark Kai:I know what you're thinking.That my power is also split into four,right?Well,i can perform this trick without its drawback.Which means each of my bodies has the power of the original.Now,you have to face four times the power you have been fighting up to now. Choco and Triccolo get terrified.So does Gohan.By feeling the chis,they can tell Dark Kai isn't bluffing.It looks like,this time,there is really no escape for the heroes.Don't miss the great conclusion of Dragonball A. Edited by no name, Oct 20 2012, 01:34 PM.
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Oct 19 2012, 02:55 PM Post #25 |
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Episode 22:A genius fighter Gohan looks like he's frozen by terror.One of the four duplicates runs to him and kicks him,sending him high,where the second duplicate appears right above him and hits his head,with both of his arms.Before the falling Saiyan can reach the ground,a duplicate appears below him and knees his stomach.Then,he delivers a horizontal kick on his head.For about one minute,the four Dark Kais continue hitting Gohan in the air,not letting him touch the ground. Dark Kai:Har,har.Nice soccer. Finally,when they get bored,they let Gohan fall down.The kid gets up,in bloods,and sees the four Dark Kais opposed to him. Dark Kai:Time to put an end to this comedy,don't you agree? Gohan smiles! Gohan:Agreed.I'll reveal a secret to you.I also know this technique. Dark Kai:I'm not worried.Only i,the Dark Kai,have the power to perform the duplicates attack without my power being split as well. Gohan:Wanna test me? Gohan is split into four. Triccolo(thinking):Is he mad? Dark Kai:Fine.Four on four.HAAAA... Dark Kais launch themselves to Gohans.They go through them,realizing the Gohans are just images.The real Gohan floats above.With that trick,he has managed to drop the Dark Kais' defenses for a moment.But,to finish his combo,the synchronizing must be perfect.He has only this one chance to save the universe.Gohan's all four limbs are extended. Gohan:QUADRAPLE MASSENKO. The four massenkos hit their respective targets and all four Dark Kais are annihilated.Gohan lands,reverts to base and takes a deep breath.The sky opens and Arch Kai is released from the seal.He runs and heals all three Z fighters.Choco jumps high screaming. Triccolo:What a brilliant strategy.Gohan,you've trully become the perfect warrior. Gohan smiles modestly. Arch Kai:Lad,having saved everyone,i think you deserve a gift from me.I will give you the power to create dragonballs. Gohan:Forget it.We have suffered much because of them. And this is the end of the story,at least for now.Maybe i think of something to continue it.We'll see. Edited by no name, Oct 19 2012, 03:02 PM.
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Oct 19 2012, 02:59 PM Post #26 |
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Don't forget to vote in the poll i added. |
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Nov 12 2012, 03:03 PM Post #27 |
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After leaving Gohan to enjoy his happy life for a while,it's time to put him into new trouble.Enjoy the Monster Carrot Saga! Episode 23:Danger from the distant past 22 years ago... On the moon,we can see three figures working.It's Monster Carrot and his two underlings,having just been exiled there by Goku. Carrot:Aargh.I'm fed up with digging. The monster throws its tool away. Carrot:I can't believe we ended up like this. Henchman:Sorry,boss.We did what we could. Carrot:Yes,you did.And i don't need you anymore. Carrot smiles.The two human thieves start feeling scared. Henchman:Wh-what do you mean boss? The next moment,they're both turned into carrots.Monster Carrot devours them. Carrot(thinking):Time to use the full extend of my powers,to have my revenge against the brat that sent me here.What he and his friends don't know is that i gain the power and abilities of the ones i turn into carrots and eat.Now,i just have to wait for my window of opportunity. Carrot didn't have to wait long.For a few days,he lived on the moon eating...err...i don't know...lunar things.Then,one day,he saw a spaceship landing. Two small sized aliens come out.They're from a planet of weaklings,which have great scientific and technological development,though. Alien(to his buddy):Hey,look.There is life on this small star.I think it looks friendly. Carrot:Err...welcome to our humble planet,my dear superior extraterrestrial beings.Would you make me the honor of shaking hands with me? Alien:Oh,of course.Nice to m... Before he can finish,he's turned into carrot. Other alien:Hey,what the... The second alien runs trying to reach his spaceship on time and escape.However,with a big rabbit leap,Carrot stands between the alien and the vehicle.He immediately slaps him,turning him into carrot.Then,without any hurry,he eats his two carrots.Thus,apart from a small increase of his power level,he gains all the advanced scientific knowledge of the two poor creatures. Carrot:Har,har.Luck is on my side.Now i have a spaceship and,thanks to those two fools,i also know how to pilot it.I'm gonna travel to the edges of the universe,absorbing all kinds and races of creatures i can find,gaining every unique ability in existence and becoming strong as hell.One day,the universe will be mine! HAR,HAR,HAR. 9 years ago... Carrot's spaceship lands on a weird planet.And it's weird because an unusually high number of unusually high power levels can be sensed here(yes, by this time,Carrot has gained the ability of sensing chi).But,the main reason he lands here is that he can sense the chi of his old,hated enemy. Goku's chi! Carrot comes out of the ship.The sky is green and there is blue grass everywhere. Carrot(thinking):Huh?What does he do here?I thought he lived on Earth.And why are so many battles taking place here?Is this star on a war or something? Carrot starts exploring the place.Later,he stops by a lake to drink.As soon as his thirst is gone,he notices a group of frogs having surrounded him. Carrot:GET AWAY.Disgusting freaks. The frogs run away terrified. Carrot:Hmf.It's not worth even absorbing them.Let them go to h... At that moment,Carrot realizes that the chi of one of the frogs is kinda different from the other ones.Quickly,he grabs that specific frog,which instantly becomes carrot. Carrot:Let's see what hidden powers this one has. After eating it,he realizes he can now exchange his body with another one. Carrot:Wow.That's a cool power.Not that i will ever need it,but,you never know. Carrot taps into the freshly absorbed frog's memories. Carrot:Hmm...interesting. After a short flight,he reaches another part of the planet,where a few dead bodies lie.Carrot stands above a headless shrimp's corpse. Carrot:This one had also a great power. Carrot absorbs him and gains the powers of stopping time and paralyze the foes.He goes on by absorbing the dead bodies nearby,increasing massively his power. Carrot:Oh,this is getting even better. Don't miss the rest of this exciting story. Note-I know it sounds weird that Carrot could also absorb dead people,but,just accept it. |
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Nov 13 2012, 08:16 PM Post #28 |
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Episode 24:Ultimate Carrot The planet is trembling.Volcanoes explode.Thunders fall.It is obvious that something terrible is about to happen.Carrot can feel two insanely powerful chis.One of them belongs to his enemy,Goku. Carrot:Darn.I have to absorb at least one whole solar system to be a match for those two.But,i'm not a coward.I'm going close to them. After a while,one of the two chis disappears.Only Goku's remains.It looks like he has won the battle.Carrot is finally next to him.He's surprised to how he looks. Carrot:Huh?I could swear he was black haired... Goku hasn't noticed Carrot's presence.He just stands and yells in desperation. Goku:CUUURSE... Carrot smiles. Carrot(thinking):Heh.It looks like this planet is about to blow up,and our friend has no way to escape.Well,he's going to die anyway.But,i want to have my revenge.Time to show up. With a leap,Carrot appears in front of Goku. Carrot:Hey,kid.Long time no see. Goku:Huh?I think i've met you before. Carrot:Yes,you have.HAR,HAR. Carrot touches Goku and eats him. Carrot:What?My power should have increased more than that. What Carrot doesn't know is that only Goku's base power was added to his own.However,now,Carrot has become partly Saiyan,which means he can become Super Saiyan some day. Carrot:Wait,what is that? Carrot gets worried by Goku's memories. Carrot:That guy can cause trouble for me.Better rid of him soon.Okay,i'm going right now.Time to use one of my best techniques.IINSTANT TRAAANSMIISSION(drumroll). Carrot disappears and the planet explodes. On Kai's Planet,King Kai is worried. King Kai:Oh,no.He absorbed Goku.I have to warn Gohan.It's against the rules,but i'll send him a telepathetic message. Carrot:No,you won't. King Kai and his disclipines(Yamcha,Tien,Chaotzu) turn their heads in surprise and see the monster. King Kai:Wait.You can't do that to me.I'm a god.It's sacreligious.It's... Carrot:Shut up.I'm the god! Carrot absorbs King Kai.Then,he turns to the humans. Carrot:Now what?Do you want to do something. Tien gets enraged and attacks,pushing back the monster with a punch. Carrot:What the...Why didn't you turn into carrot? Tien:Cause we're dead,idiot.The dead bodies we've been given cannot be affected by a stupid spell. Carrot:Well,looks like i have to fight.Okay,come at me,all of you. The humans charge their best attacks. Tien:KIKOHO. Yamcha:SOKIDAN. Chaotzu:DODONPA. Carrot takes all three hits at once,and it's like nothing happened. Carrot:Did you just do something? The humans freeze in terror.With a plain kiai,Carrot blows them away. Carrot:Well,no need to waste my time,if i can't absorb you.Bye,idiots. Carrot disappears.For a few moments,nobody has the courage to say anything. King Kai:Are you going to play mute for much longer? All turn and see King Kai,with a halo. Yamcha:Your majesty,you're alive...i mean... King Kai:I know what you mean. Yamcha:Send the message.You have to warn Gohan,now. King Kai:Forget it.If that monster finds out i'm still here,it'll return.I'm not going to risk my existence.Let the living ones solve their problems themselves So,who is going to stop the deadly Monster Carrot?We'll see... |
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Nov 17 2012, 09:34 PM Post #29 |
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Whoa,one vote! Who was it? Episode 25:Gohan flirts with death Today... Carrot sees,from his spaceship's window,the planet where he's about to land.Planet Gohan.That is how Planet Frieza has been called since Gohan became king of the universe. In his palace,King Gohan is enjoying being fed with grapes by Queen Cooky,when he senses an enormous and evil chi.But,wait a minute.His father's chi can be sensed coming from the same source as well.And Ginyu Forces' chis.How is that possible?Gohan's face becomes serious.He stands up. Gohan:Cooky,stay here,you hear me? Understanding that something crucial is going on,Cooky nods. Meanwhile,Carrot is waiting out of the palace.Gohan comes out and stands opposed to him. Gohan(thinking):A rabbit mutant?I think i've heard of something like that before... Carrot:I've been waiting for you. Gohan:Who are you?And why can i feel other people's chis coming from you? Carrot:Oh,they were very tasty,after i'd turned them into carrots. Gohan:Turned them...to carrots?Now i remember.My dad has told me about you.You're that rabbit creep he sent to the moon. Carrot:Oh,what a genius you are.Your old man already paid what he did to me.Now,i'm gonna rid of you as well and take over the galaxy. Gohan(thinking):Wait,how did he turn people to carrots,again?Oh,anyway,if he uses any suspicious/orange blasts,i'm quick enough to dodge them. Gohan smiles. Gohan:I admit you've acquired a ton of power by all those absorptions.But,there is one power you'll never surpass.The power of the unique warrior, THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAIYAN. Gohan turns SSJ. Carrot:It doesn't matter how strong you are... Gohan:I'm not giving you any time to perform your carrot spell. Gohan rushes to him and punches his face.Carrot is pushed back and blood runs from his lips.He smiles. Carrot(thinking):Well,that was quite some damage,but it was worth taking it to defeat and absorb the strongest being in existence. Gohan(thinking):Wait,now i remember.To turn somebody into a carrot,all he has to do is touc... Gohan's body is replaced by a carrot,which now lies on the ground.The monster picks it up. Carrot:HAR,HAR.What an ironic end for the strongest creature.Now all i have to do is... Gohan:I don't think so! To the monster's shock,Carrot Gohan slips from his hand and floats.Monster Carrot quickly puts himself together and tries to catch his victim. Unfortunately for him,Gohan,who hasn't lost any speed or power and is still at SSJ state,dodges everything.Finally,he attacks Monster Carrot. Exploiting his sharp shape as a carrot,he penetrates the rabbit's body.MonsterCarrot falls on the ground,being on the brink of death,whereas Carrot Gohan still floats proudly. Gohan:Listen.If you give me back my human form,i'll take you to the palace's healing machines.I believe we can find some peaceful solution. The fallen Carrot hits his hands and SSJ Gohan is back.The boy smiles. Gohan:Nice.If you're a good guy,life will be more beautiful.Now,i'll use my chi to move you without touching you... Carrot(smiling):SHUT UP.I didn't undergo a change of heart.The reason i changed you back into your body is because that body shall become my new home. Gohan:What? Carrot:BODY SWAP. Next moment,Carrot is in SSJ Gohan's body,laughing madly.Gohan finds himself on the ground,feeling great pain and having a hole in his stomach. He thinks he's dying... Can some miracle happen now? Stay tuned. |
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Nov 17 2012, 11:13 PM Post #30 |
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Episode 26:Carrot's trump card Arch Kai appears.Having seen King Kai in the past,Carrot understands it's one of that kind. Carrot:Hey,Kai.It's ok.I defeated that villain. Arch Kai:Quit lying.I know you're not Gohan.Nothing can be hidden from me. Gohan:Arch Kai,i'm so glad you're here.Although i didn't expect you would ever interfrere with the affairs of the mortals. Arch Kai:Well,i decided to make an exception.I owe it to you,after what you've done for the whole existence. Carrot:Hah.What do you think you can do against me?Now,i possess the greatest power in history. Arch Kai:Fool,arrogant being.You're not the only one who can use magic tricks.I have the power to undo your body swap effect. Carrot:W-what?You can't be serious. Arch Kai:REVERSE BODY SWAP. Carrot and Gohan return to their respective bodies.Gohan smiles. Gohan:Thanks pal. Arch Kai:Now,finish him off with a blast,without touching him. Gohan nods.He and Kai stand above the fallen and defeated Carrot.The monster immediately holds his breath.Everything stops.Carrot smiles! Carrot:Fools.I still have lotsa tricks up my sleeve.For example,i have evolved Guldo's technique by adding some twists of my own.Now REVERSE TIME. Carrot uses his time travel technique to move time backwards for the whole existence,except his consciousness. Carrot(thinking):I think half an hour back is plenty,but let's make it one hour to be safe. So,the monster appears at the same place,but one hour ago.He's alone for the time being.Immediately,he regenerates his body(yes,he can do that too,any problem?).He keeps his chi supressed,so that no one will sense it.He hides behind a bush and waits.One hour later,a spaceship lands and his Present counterpart comes out of it.Soon after,Gohan exits the palace and the events repeat as Future Carrot expects. Future Carrot(thinking):No need to alter it yet...Just wait a little longer... Arch Kai appears...blah,blah...so we reach the point when Present Carrot is fallen down and Gohan is ready to finish it off. Future Carrot(whispering):Now! With a leap,he lands between his wounded self and the two foes. Gohan:WHAT?Another one? Arch Kai:I-i have no idea who's this guy... Present Carrot:Wait.I got it.You're... Future Carrot:Exactly!So,you know what i'll do now! Present Carrot:W-wait.Please.Let's discuss it.Pl...NOOO... Before he can regenerate and react,Present Carrot is touched by his Future counterpart and turned into a carrot.Future Carrot eats it,thus,doubling his strength.Gohan and Arch Kai are still confused. Gohan:What did just happen? Arch Kai:Don't look at me.I have no idea. Carrot:No need to explain,guys.What matters is that now i'm strong enough to overpower both of you. Gohan:Dream on.You've increased your strength considerably,but you're still no match for me. Carrot smiles. Carrot:Sorry to disappoint you,my friend,but,i'm partly Saiyan. Gohan:So wh... Next moment,Gohan freezes in terror. Gohan:You don't mean that... Carrot:That's exactly what i mean.Now,i have enough power to become... Without finishing the sentence,with a kiai burst,Carrot transforms into SSJ.His white fur becomes yellow.Exploiting both his new speed and the momental shock of Gohan and Arch Kai,he turns them both to Carrots. A little later,in front of King Yenma... Gohan:That sucks. Yenma:My dear child,it was just your time to pass away.Now,stop worrying about the living world.It's none of your business anymore. Gohan:Well,sorry for not being insensitive like you,fatso! A few moments of silence.Then... Yenma:Listen,Gohan.There is a guy who is above me,you,above everything else,be it gods or mortals.The guy who's responsible for the existence as we know it.The one who decided that there will be gods,universe,other world,me to judge the dead etc The one who is above what we comprehend as space and time.Not even i know anything about that being.It can be male,female or asexual,it doesn't matter.But,what i'm sure of is that the being which created everything else will put things in the right way.Maybe it looks like that villain has won now,but you're the one who'll enjoy the happiness of the Heaven.As for the evil person who sent you here,he'll actually be alone and feel empty,even if he's powerful and rules the universe. A little more silence... Gohan:I dunno...Now,is that supposed to be a consolation? Yenma:Then,maybe your mood changes if you look behind you. Gohan does so. Gohan:COOKY. Cooky:He,he.It looks like i'm one of that hare's many victims. Yenma:Actually,it's a rabbit... Gohan:Oh,Cooky.Now,we can live together in Heaven,ageless,without any of the problems that physical laws create. Gohan and Cooky hug each other. Back at Living World... Carrot:I'M THE KING OF THE UNIVERSE.HAR,HAR,HAR... THE END Author's note-Actually,i'm an atheist,but i thought it would be cool to give my series such an ending. Edited by no name, Nov 17 2012, 11:21 PM.
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