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Vegeta's lost son
Topic Started: Aug 20 2012, 11:49 PM (1,259 Views)
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Part 1

On a peaceful planet of the universe,life goes calmly and happily.Little do the residents know about what's coming to them.Three pods land on a
desert,forming large craters.The three Saiyans working for Frieza come out.
Raditz:This plantet's conquest is going to be a piece of cake.The natives are awfully weak.We won't even have to wait for a full moon to be safe.
Nappa:It's annoying,though,that we can't exterminate the people of this star.I can't understand why Frieza told us not to kill them.
Vegeta:He thinks their special powers can be useful.
Raditz:Huh?What kind of powers?
Vegeta:The most important one is their ability to transfer their thoughts to someone by touching him with the tips of their tails.
Vegeta presses his scouter's button.He reads the indication.
Vegeta:This way.Follow me.

In the planet's village,the peaceful aliens enjoy their happy lives.They look like humans,only they have tails.Their tails have spherical tips on their
edges.The people stop their works to watch three figures coming from the sky.Soon,they have landed on the street.
Raditz(smiling):Here we are.
In a few minutes,the village is in flames.The people run towards all directions screaming.Horror and chaos everywhere.The three persons responsible
for the disaster seem to have fun.A young and beautiful woman runs towards her house.The Saiyans notice her,just a few seconds before she
enters it and jam shuts the door.She has brown hair,blue eyes and an innocent look.
Nappa:Hey,Raditz.Did you see that chick?
Raditz:Are you thinking what i'm thinking?
Vegeta:Let's pay her a visit!
Vegeta kicks the door and the Saiyans enter.The girl runs and sits down on a corner.She now has a terrified look in her eyes.She futilly screams.
Raditz stands above her and starts lowering his pants.He's suddenly pulled back by Nappa.
Nappa:No way.This one is mine.
Raditz:Oh,come on Nap.You always take the best.
The two Saiyans verbally fight for a while.Meanwhile,the girl tries to escape by kicking them in the nuts,but,to her surprise,they don't even become
aware of the hits!
Vegeta:Ah-hem.Gentlemen.I think you forget who your leader is.This babe is mine.Yourselves,go and settle with some other ones.
The other two Saiyans look at Vegeta,in disappointment.But,they would never dare to talk back to him.So,they leave the house.Vegeta smiles.He
looks at the petrified maid and licks his lips.
Vegeta:Now,baby,let's get down to business!

A few months later,

The planet now belongs to Frieza's Empire.The few survivors of the recent events have decided to obey,in order to save their lives.The maid is
sitting on a chair in her house,when the door opens and a man comes in.He's holding a bottle.
Man:Drink it sis.This potion will give you a painless abortion.
Woman:NO WAY(breaks the bottle).How could you think i would ever do such a thing?
Man:Are you insane?You're telling me that you're going to give birth to the baby of the scum that raped you?
The woman holds her belly.
Woman:If i kill this creature,then,i am as much a creep as he is.
Man:Sis,you...
Woman:Please,don't press me.I've made up my mind.
And so,the baby was born.Its mom decided to call it "Junior".She didn't want to give it any name,because,all the names in the world reminded her of
that boy's father.The man she wanted to forget at all costs.
Anyway,"Junior" was proved to be the perfect name for that child.For,he was always very cheerful and good hearted.Everyone in the village loved
him.He didn't seem to have the slightest evil in his heart.Also,everyone was impressed by that kid's amazing abilities.He had superhuman strength
and speed.At the age of five,he discovered that he could also fly and fire beams.Despite his powers,he never used them for something selfish.On
the contrary,he used them to help everyone in the village.For instance,once,he saved the villagers from a rock avalanche coming from a mountain
nearby.That day,the mayor gave him a medal indicating he was a hero.His mother and uncle were proud and glad to raise such a kid.
However,when he became ten years old,fate decided that the time was right for him to learn his father's identity.
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You always come up with such good ideas. Whenever I read your stories, I think: "Man, howcome I didn't thought of that?" Plus, by reading your stories makes me wana work on my own.
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Part 2

In the spaceship of Planet Trade Organization that is settled on the planet,a soldier is pressing various buttons on the control panel,trying to receive
a message.It looks like the signs from Frieza's spaceship are lost and the planet Namek,where it was located,has exploded.Everything shows that
Frieza is dead!
Soon,everyone has learned the news.The soldiers are extremely happy for not having to live as slaves anymore and abandon the planet.With the
PTO's forces gone,the village's population goes wild.They prepare a great fiesta to celebrate their liberty.They celebrate for many days.Junior and
his mother cannot remember happier days than these ones.Junior is now a 10 year old kid.He has brown spiky hair,in Vegeta's style,but shorter
(like Vegeta's hair in GT).He has a tail,but not like Saiyans' tails.It is like the tails people of his planet have.
Mom:Ahhh,everything is perfect.
Junior:Yeah,almost...
Mom:Huh?What's wrong honey?
Junior:If my dad was alive,everything would be trully perfect.
Mom:I'm sure he can see you from where he is.And that he's proud of you.
Junior:Mom,my dad was a good person.Right?
Mom:Huh?Yes...of course!
Junior:Then,how come you and uncle never talk about him?
Mom:...We know that you're sad for never having met him.Better not discuss it.

Later,at night,Junior and his mom are lying on their bed.His mom is sleeping,but Junior can't.Suddenly,by accident,her tail,which is folded around her
waist,unfolds(she always keeps it folded when Junior is around,so that it doesn't touch him,from fear of him learning the truth).The blue spherical tip
of her green tail touches Junior's head.Junior sees his mother's memories.He sees the Saiyans landing on his planet and attacking his people.Then,
he sees Vegeta doing what he did to his mom.He gets terribly shocked.
Junior(whispering):No...this can't be...
Junior:IT CAN'T BE.
His mom awakes.She sees her tail unfolded.She screams to realize that what she's been trying to avoid all those years has finally happened.Junior
can't control his rage and his,untapped till now,power.With an energy explosion,the whole village is destroyed.When he calms down,he realizes that
only he and his mother are left alive.For,he subconsciously created a barrier around them,during the explosion.
Junior:This man...Did to you the worst thing he could have...And,because of him,i accidentally destroyed the village.My life was ruined in a moment.I
hate him.Oh,my god,i hate him.I never believed i could hate anyone.
Mom(crying):Please my boy,let's forget...
Junior:NEVER.I'm going to find him,even if i have to search the whole universe.I'll avenge you,mom.
Mom:No,Junior.Don't become like him.It's not worth it.
Junior looks determined.
Junior:I'm going with or without you.
Mom sighs.
Mom:Fine,i'll come.Follow me.There is an underground basement the villagers were using for emergency purposes.We'll find a spaceship there.
So,Junior,with his mom,leaves the planet and begins his journey to find his father.
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Please more> I hope Vegeta is already with Bulma to make things more interesting. Aslo, adding Trunks too would be cool. Do you post your fanfics on other sites as well?
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Aug 22 2012, 04:50 PM
Please more> I hope Vegeta is already with Bulma to make things more interesting. Aslo, adding Trunks too would be cool. Do you post your fanfics on other sites as well?
Long ago,at another forum,i wrote a fanfic about Trunkses future as i imagined it.I don't know how to put links,but,if you want to read it,type
"pojo dragonball unseen original future".

Part 3

Junior's spaceship lands on the Moon.It's been 15 years since he left his home planet to begin his quest.He's now an adult,fully grown warrior.During
his journeys,all these years,he has trained with many great masters,all over the universe,and has developed his strength astonishingly.He has also
learned various useful techniques,like the ability to sense other kis.And his father's ki is familiar to him,because of the vision he saw when he was
touched by his mother's tail.Therefore,he has located his dad's residence.It's planet Earth!
The spaceship's door opens and the two travelers get out.
*Note-If you wonder how they can breath on the Moon,i remind you that,in DB Era,it was implied that Moon's atmosphere in DB world is the same as
the Earth's one(when Goku sent Rabbit Mob to the Moon).
Junior:I go to that planet alone.You stay on this small star.Got it?
His mother nods.Junior is ready to fly,but,then,moonlight reacts with his tail,which is not a Saiyan's tail though.Instead of transforming into a giant
ape,something odd happens.His hair grows and grows,until it becomes a large,spiky hane,like at SSJ3 tranformation.Only the color is orange,instead
of yellow.Pure orange.Junior feels a new,amazing power flowing through his veins.No one can tell for sure whether it is some sort of Super Saiyan
transformation.Only one thing is sure.His power is now incredible.
Mom:What happened to you,my boy?
Junior:Do as i said.
Junior flies out of the Moon's atmosphere,heading to Earth.
Mom(thinking):What am i going to do with him?

Planet Earth,

It's been a few years since the death of Kid Buu.Trunks attends the final class of primary school.Gohan and Videl are newly weds.Goku and Vegeta
do what they usually do.As for Piccolo and humans...well,who cares what they do?For,they became insignificant to the plot long ago.
The moment Junior lands on a desert,in another desert,Goku and Goten are sparring.They stop when they sense the new ki.
Goten:Dad...is that ki good or bad?
Goku:That's the weird thing.I can't tell for sure whether its owner has good or evil intentions.
While flying to the source to check it out,Trunks,who comes from behind,joins them.
Goten:Hey,Trunks.Did you feel that energy too?
Trunks:Yes,and i have a really bad feeling about this...
Finally,the three Saiyans land in front of Junior.The invader looks at them.His eyes stop on Goku for a while.Then,on Goten.
Junior:You two.You have the same hair as him.
Goku:Him who?Who the hell are you?What do you want on this planet?
Junior:Hmf.I can't bother explaining.
Junior fires a green wave from his tail,which surrounds the three other Saiyans for a moment before fading.After that,all three of them instantly learn
Junior's story.He also fires another thought transfering beam,which is sent miles away,right to the source of Vegeta's ki.Now,the prince of Saiyans
knows everything too.
Trunks:So,we're...we're brothers! It's so nice to meet you.So,emotional...
Junior:Spare me your melo.
Trunks:Huh?Don't you want us to know better each other?
Junior:Forget it.I came here only to teach HIM a lesson.
Trunks:I won't let you harm my dad.
Goten:I'm helping too,Trunks.
They both go SSJ and start charging to the alien.They're suddenly stopped by Goku.
Goku:KIDS STOP.He's too strong for you.Let me handle it.
The two youngsters step back and Goku looks at Junior.
Goku:Junior,i can understand your anger.But,revenge isn't going to solve anything.
Junior:I don't expect anything to be solved.The mental damage my father caused to me and mom can't be healed.I just want revenge for revenge.
Goku:In that case,you have to go over my dead body.
Junior:Agreed.Whoever tries to prevent me from punishing that ash,shall die too.
Goku goes SSJ3.It looks like the two warriors have no other way out of it than fighting to death.

Meanwhile,Vegeta runs out of his house.Bulma is in the garden watering the flowers.
Bulma:Huh?What's wrong honey?
Vegeta stops.He preferred to settle this with Bulma later,but it looks like he has no other choice than doing it now.He takes a deep breath.Not few
times in his life he has felt true fear(for instance when Frieza was about to kill him,or when Cell reached his perfect form).But,at this moment,having
to speak to Bulma about that story causes him the greatest fear he's ever felt.
Finally,since he can't avoid it,he tells her everything.And,of course,that "everything" includes the event of him having raped a woman.Both remain
silent for a few seconds.The silence is broken by Bulma,in tears,delivering a noisy slap on Vegeta's face.A few more seconds of silence.
Vegeta(weak voice):I cannot lose more time.I have to go.
He flies away and Bulma screams in madness.
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Part 4

Goku rushes to Junior and delivers a kick on his face,making him wince.Spinning his body in the air,he goes for another kick,but,this time,Junior
ducks and catches Goku's leg,with his tail.Now,he reveals one of his abilities.Extending his tail! Actually,this can't be done by the other people of his
tribe.It's one of the techniques he learned during his space travels.With his tail,he slams Goku really hard on the ground.Goku fires a blast which hits
Junior.His tail lets go of Goku and he's thrown on a mountain,which is shattered.The full blooded Saiyan targets the mountains ruins.
Goku:KAMEHAMEHA.
A blast comes out of the rocks and collides with Goku's wave,causing an explosion in the middle of the distance between.Goku jumps and floats.He
looks around,trying to find the foe.The two watchers(Trunks and Goten) see Junior appearing behind him.
Goten:DAD,BEHIND YOU.
Too late.Junior hits Goku with both of his hands,sending him to the ground,with his back exposed.The half blooded Saiyan flies to the foe,at super
speed,and hits his back with his knee,making Goku yell in pain.Junior gets up.Goku stands on his arms and knees.He coughs some blood.
Junior:Is it over already?
Trying to catch him off guard,Goku suddenly raises his arm and fires a beam.Junior dodges by bending back.
Junior:Whoopsie!
He kicks Goku,sending him metres away.The Earth's protector stays down and reverts to base.The orange haired Saiyan walks to him.
Junior:I guess that's really all you have.You're disappointing.
Goten:Trunks,we have to help.
Trunks nods.
Goten and Trunks:FUUUSION.
SSJ Gotenks appears.
Gotenks:Come here,sweetie.
Junior loses interest in Goku.He walks to the newly appeared enemy.
Junior:So,you somehow became one person.And what do you expect to gain from such a stunt?
Gotenks spits out three ghosts.
Ghost #1:We'll turn him into toast.Right?
Ghost #2:Right buddy.
Ghosts #1 and #2 hit palms.They instantly explode.Junior is shocked.
Gotenks:Oh,no.Our strategy was exposed.
Junior(thinking):Man,i was lucky.That could be really dangerous...
Gotenks:Okay,number 3.Don't disappoint me,like the other two morons.Get him.
Ghost #3:Roger.
The remaining ghost starts chasing Junior.Juniors flies at super speed,to avoid contact.He's chased through forests,in oceans,between cities
buildings,under bridges,even in artic.Finally,the two of them appear coming from behind Gotenks,having circled the globe.
Junior:Enough of this game.
He turns surprisingly and fires a ball,instantly destroying the ghost.At that moment,he realizes that he's surrounded by many more.
Gotenks:Mhahahaha.While that ghost was chasing you,i took advantage of that time to create an army of them.
Junior is now trapped.He's in the center of a sphere formed by ghosts.There is no way he can escape without making the slightest contact with these
floating mines.Without losing any time,the ghosts rush to him.
Ghosts:Weee.
A huge explosion,formed by many smaller ones,is caused.Gotenks floats celebrating.
Gotenks:And the match gooes tooo GOTENKS!
Junior appears behind him and grabs his shoulders,thus,immobilizing him.
Gotenks:N-no...you can't know how to...
Junior:Are you talking about Instant Transmission?This technique was well known among the people of my planet.
Gotenks unsuccessfully tries to escape.
Gotenks(thinking):Darn.Looks like i already have to use my ultimate ultimate form...
Junior's tail touches Gotenks.The message transferred to Gotenkses mind is the following "now,i'm going to absorb that yummy yellow aura of his".
Gotenks(thinking):Oh,no.He can absorb ki.
Gotenks immediately reverts to base,to avoid having his energy absorbed.Junior surprisingly leaves his shoulders and hits him hard with both of his
arms.Taking the hit in base,Gotenks receives a lot of damage and crashes on the ground.Junior lands.
Junior:You fool.I cannot absorb energy.I sent you a false thought,to make you revert to your base form.
Gotenks:You...creep...
Gotenks defuses.Now,all three Z Fighters lie helpless on the ground.
Junior:Well,no need to kill them.I've got nothing against them.Now,let's concentrate on finding my real target.
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Part 5

Junior is about to take off to look for Vegeta,when he senses another enormous ki approaching.
Junior:Darn.Another one.How many allies does that bastard father of mine have?
Gohan lands in front of Junior.He's shocked to see his father and brother defeated.
Gohan:I don't know who you are,but i'm really mad at you.Not only for hurting my family,but also for making me return from my honeymoon travel
earlier.
Junior:Does that mean we're going to fight?
Gohan:Heh.Not at all.I'll beat the crap out of you before you can do any "fighting".
Vegeta:GOHAN STOP.
Vegeta appears and lands next to them.
Vegeta:Gohan,don't interfrere.I'm the one responsible for this problem,and i'll be the one to solve it.
Gohan:But...but...
Goku:Do as he says,son.We know things that you don't.
Gohan:Huh?(turns to Goku)Fine,i'll trust you dad.
Vegeta turns to Junior.
Vegeta:However,i don't want more damages to be caused to this planet.I hope you understand.
Junior:Fine by me.How about going to that small star revolving around this one?
Vegeta:The wha...Oh,you mean the Moon.Ok,let's go there.
The two Saiyans fly out of the Earth's atmosphere.A few minutes later,they land on the Moon.Junior's mom is in the spaceship and is watching from
the window.
Mom(thinking):Oh,god.What's going to happen now?
Vegeta:I know it's pointless to fight you.There is no way i can win this.Just kill me.
Junior:Don't try to make me show mercy.Your acting skills won't save you.
Junior charges a blast and fires.Suddenly,Junior's mom appears between them,looking at her son.
Mom:JUNIOR,THIS HAS TO STOP.
Junior:MOM,GET OUT OF THERE.
But it's too late.Junior doesn't have time to change the blast's direction.His mother takes the hit and is blown to bits.Both Saiyans get shocked by how
things turned out.
Junior:Mom,no.Not you too.You were the last remaining person in the world i cared about...
Junior yells.With a selfdestructing explosion(like the one Vegeta used against Buu),he suicides.Vegeta manages to create a force field,right before
the explosion,and miraculously survives.After that,he undoes the barrier and stands silent for a while.
Vegeta(thinking):So,another tragedy,another weight on my conscience.Well,one more,one less,it's no big deal.For,my sins are already far too many
to be ignored.I know that,no matter how much i change,my fate is,after my life ends,to spend the eternity in Hell.
Vegeta smiles.
Vegeta(thinking):But,till that moment comes,i can at least enjoy my life on Earth.

Vegeta sees,out of his house,a suitcase with all his elastic uniforms.
Vegeta:BULMA.
Bulma comes out.
Bulma:You won't have any problem to make a living.Someone with your powers can get a job almost anywhere.Now,take your things and go.
Bulma slams the door.Trunks comes from behind a bush.
Trunks:Don't worry dad.I'm sure she'll forgive you soon.
Vegeta:Yeah...maybe...

THE END
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