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Question Professor Gohan; or riddle me...
Topic Started: Aug 12 2012, 10:26 PM (100,123 Views)
Goddess Ultimecia
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Don't warn me for double posting but, I have a good question for you.

You usually write alot for a single chapter in your fanfic so what i'm asking you is.

How do I add more meat onto my fanfic sandwich?

Edit: Also I just posted my voice in the Post your voice thread.
Edited by Goddess Ultimecia, Oct 7 2013, 02:23 PM.
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For starters it's needs to be longer, but adding more detail will do that.

I take to heart what KP and my English professors tell me nonstop-- add as much detail as you possibly can because you may think your readers know what you're taking about but they don't always do. That's for writing stories, essays, anything.

So I recommend getting in detail with your dialogue, be specific what the characters are doing while they are saying something- how they're saying it.

Complete detail of the settings and whatnot.

Explain what clothes they are wearing when first introducing them and stuff like that.
Edited by Professor Gohan, Oct 7 2013, 02:25 PM.
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SSJ
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Hey.

I am a Goderator. Above you moderators

That is all.

Edited by SSJ, Oct 8 2013, 01:55 AM.
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Haha, how did you come up with that one? :huh:
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From the newly dubbed Profist (Brofist levelled up).
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Where did you get that at?

And that sounds more of a fusion?

Haha, Profist made me laugh really hard though.
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SSJ
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Lmao I have no clue. In a random pm with Brofist, and I called him Profist instead. We should make it a trend.
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Haha, go for it.
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Goddess Ultimecia
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Everyone changes their name with an upgrading aspect to it.

SuperSaiyan3 to SuperSaiyan4
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Someone already took his name. I doubt he'd change it to that now.
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SuperSaiyanGod?
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That's what SSJ2 should change his name to for sure. Good one, Connor. :p
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How's your day been man?
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It's been good. Class one was canceled and my next two I got to get out early. I had a great day a practice today and started working on my story in study hall after getting my homework done.

Now I'm just chillin and laughing with my roommate while foruming and typing my story still. Did you have a great day playin' hookie?
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Professor Gohan
Oct 8 2013, 03:51 AM
It's been good. Class one was canceled and my next two I got to get out early. I had a great day a practice today and started working on my story in study hall after getting my homework done.

Now I'm just chillin and laughing with my roommate while foruming and typing my story still. Did you have a great day playin' hookie?
Sounds like an awesome day. The next chapter is in the works already? I need to pre plan my chapters, i'm just going with what's decided to be a good idea lol.

I'm tellin ya bro, it wasn't on purpose :D I'm a good kid. lol.
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