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dragon ball z new generations chapter 2; chapter 2
Topic Started: Aug 5 2012, 01:10 AM (523 Views)
conset1224 Aug 5 2012, 01:10 AM Post #1
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 CHAPTER 2:Ashes to ashes,Dust to dust,Bones to bones


"Ugh.....What happened?"Greece woke up with a painful headache.He could hardly see.But he could see a body of another brotherin beside him.Weirdly enough,they both were in baby cribs."I have such an aching head ache!"yelled the other boy.Greece looked at the boy with suspicion and saw he had long black hair with a yallow hair scrunchy,like it made a difference.He wore a small bib with cute frogs on it.Greece wore the same outfit but he wore a battered pink cap that had "Dont mess with the greece or youl end up slippin!!"on the bill.He wore it backwards.He wore greendhoes with pink laces and the other boy wore shoes with Gabe on them.Grecce turned to look at Gabe"who...who are you!"yelled Gabe."Ithink im Grecce and your Gabe!woh!"They looked to see nothing but ash,ruble,and Dust.Broken buildings everywhere and for some reason....soap?"Look at this place its deserted,where are we!"said Greece."I dunno."*SMACK*A piece of news paper smacked onto gabes face.Reacting like lightning Greece snatched the paper off of Gabes face and stared at the front.It showed a caped figure blasting innocent peeps and airplanes.Year 2025 earth.Gabe snatched the paper out of Greeces hands.Gabe read,horrified and dumbstruck.He passed the paper back to Greeceand he looked at it again."AAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Greece yelled."haha!"weve got the dragonballs!!!wait the kids take them to earth no suspects,AT ALLL!!A ninja like figure stood over the two baby boys.The ninja had a rough voice like he had a sore throat.The handcovered Greeces vision and he woke up."What happened!You were out like a light!"said Gabe."Nothing some nonsense about a ninja and some dragon ball i think,you know the crap."exclaimed Greece."We should look around for any life force."said Greece.The boys double flipped out of there un comfy cribs and landed with a bone crushing crunch.Litterly they stepped on actual bones!Greece stared around lookingat the decaying buildings and the tipped cars.They could see more detail then they could before in there cribs.Gabe on the other hand was digging up his butt. :huh: Greece turned and looked at him with a disgusted look."What!I wore a freaking diaper for 13 years!I for your info have a atomic wedgie!"yelled gabe.Now that he thought about it,Greece had a wedgie also.Simotaniuosly they both pulled on the tightyness nuecense. They both threw up.Even in a coma for 13 years they still pooped!"Man i have to use the john!"exclaimed gabe.(Who says that any more?reply about this please and name 1 person who still says that,you cant its to lame,no offenese)"TMI."said Greece.


1/10 how much do you like it?yall hatin on my signature?
Edited by conset1224, Aug 5 2012, 02:31 AM.
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Auld-Dog Aug 12 2012, 09:25 AM Post #2
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Your new, so thought Id post this so your familiar with the site rules and can keep things together for future chapters you plan to post for this story or any other story.

In regards to the story. Isn't my sort of read, very manic and all over the place, you need to break up the dialogue parts and paragraph things to make it clearer.

So the babes from chapter 1 have been in a coma for 13 years and have awoken to things being destroyed by these ninja guys...

Dont rate things out of ten mate.
Whats the idea on this ' yall hating on my signature' thing? Gohan SS2 and the purple/blue aura effect works real good.
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Big thumbs up to member, -Zero- for the means to the sig. ;)
Nicholas D. Wildwood gets the credit for creating and designing the sig.

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