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Aug 4 2012, 05:35 AM Post #1 |
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Part 1 It's night on Frieza's planet.Frieza is sitting in his chamber,studying some sheets.He looks worried.Tomorrow is a special day.Tha day of the annual fighting tournament that Frieza organizes,in order to enjoy himself,by watching the fights.Almost all the soldiers of Planet Trade Organization take part.The winner receives a secret prize,which changes every year and doesn't become known to the competitors before the tournament is over and a champion is decided.Of course,Ginyu wins the trophy almost every time,except a couple of times that Guldo got lucky and knocked him out of bounds with his psychic powers.Now,back to the story.The door opens and a servant enters.It's one of those short,crocodile faced servants.The palace is full of them. Servant:You called,Lord Frieza? Frieza:Yes.I was looking at the matches of the last tournaments.Don't the pair ups look kinda...rigged? Servant:That's what i also think.But,i assure you we take all the precautions to make sure that no one cheats during the lottery. Frieza growls in anger. Frieza:GET YOUR BUTT OUT OF HERE. The servant runs out terrified. The morning arrives.The stadium,which is built on Frieza's planet for this tournament and other festivals,is crowded.Vegeta,Nappa and Raditz are walking to it.Well,they could fly to it,but,right now,they're at a more relaxed mood. Nappa:I can't wait for this. Raditz:I have a feeling that,this year,you'll be the winner,Lord Vegeta. Vegeta:That's what i wish.But,what i want,is the glory of the winner.I don't give a dime about the "Secret Prize",which is usually something stupid. Last year,for instance,it was a box of bottles with Frieza's favourite wine. Raditz:Ahhh,the finest wine.They say it's over 1000 years old. Nappa:Vegeta.You already know it,but i'd like to say it.I may respect you,but,if we meet in the arena,during the fight,you won't be my lord.You'll be just an opponent and i'll fight you with everything i have. Vegeta:That's what i'm expecting you to do,Nappa.If i find out that you're holding back,i'll kill you. Finally,they enter the stadium,which is larger than a city.Apart from the arenas,it has many more facilities.The competitors stand on a platform, specially designed for the ceremony.On a smaller platform above stands a servant,holding a microphone and a sheet. Servant:Gentlemen,allow me to announce the beginning of this spectacular event.The rules are known to all of you,but the protocol demands that i explain them.The fights are one on one,which means fused fighters are strictly prohibited.Every match ends when a competitor is,in any way, rendered unable to continue the fight.Although killing the opponent is not prohibited,the competitors are kindly requested to try not to do so,because, then,Frieza has to search for other soldiers to replace the gaps,and this tires him.But,let's not say more.Time to introduce you to the organizer of the Royal Cup.The creature that is practically a god to all of us.Genlemen,this is LOOORD FRIEEEEZAAA! A hole opens in the floor and a platform comes out of it,with Frieza standing on it.The platform stops above all the others.The crowd goes wild. Vegeta(thinking):What a jerk.Always trying to show off. Frieza:My dear servants.I expect all of you to do your best and offer a good spectacle for my eyes.This year,you have one more motive.The prize will be something really personal.An honor whose receiver everyone would be jealous of. Vegeta:Maybe he means a match against him!That would be great.I can't win against Frieza,of course,but it would be a good test for my skills. Later,the competitors are in the hall where the preliminaries will be decided.Frieza is sitting on a throne.He calls a servant,who immediately comes. Servant:What's the matter,your majesty? Frieza shows a warrior,among the competitors,who wears a mask. Frieza:Who's this guy?Which tribe does he belong to?I don't remember having any being like that at my service. The servant hastily searches in the sheet with the photos and information about the competitors. Servants:He's...he's not in the tournament.I don't understand how he sneaked in here.You have my sincerest apologies,Lord Frieza.We'll immediately disqualify him and bring him in front of you to give explanations. Frieza:No,no,let him.This may be interesting... Meanwhile,Ginyu has called his men close to him and they're whispering something. Ginyu:Guldo,you know what to do,right? Guldo:Right captain.I'll make sure that all five of us will be in different blocks,so that we can save our stamina for the final matches. A few more minutes pass and the lottery is about to begin.But suddenly, Frieza:NOT YET. Everyone goes silent.Frieza turns to Ginyu. Frieza:Mr.Ginyu.You know that i love you for having served the Planet Trade Organization so well in the past.However,rules are rules.I shall disqualify you and your men for rigging the lottery. Guldo(thinking):How did he know?I'm pretty sure Frieza doesn't have psychic powers like mine. Guldo:Errr,Lord Frieza,i apologize in advance.But,just curious,how did you know i was cheating? Frieza:Har,har.Because you just told me so! Ginyu and his men glare at Guldo.Ginyu Forces exit the hall,with the other four members kicking and abusing Guldo.Finally,the preliminaries begin. After a lot of exciting matches,the eight best warriors advance to the final part of the tournament.Another lottery takes place and the quarter finals are decided as following. Quarter 1- Nappa vs Zarbon Quarter 2-Dodoria vs Masked Fighter Quarter 3-Raditz vs Saib Quarter 4-Kwi vs Vegeta Semi 1-Winner 1 vs Winner 2 Semi 2-Winner 3 vs Winner 4 Final-Winner 1 vs Winner 2 (well,that one was obvious) Note-Saib is a genetically evolved Saibaiman.Unlike the other Saibaimen,he's very intelligent and can talk.Also,his color is orange,instead of green. So,who will the winner of this exciting tournament be? |
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| MonakaSan | Aug 4 2012, 06:18 AM Post #2 |
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Nice! Waiting for the next part! Vegeta will be the winner!
Edited by MonakaSan, Aug 4 2012, 06:21 AM.
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Aug 4 2012, 08:35 PM Post #3 |
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Part 2 Quarter Final 1-Nappa vs Zarbon The two opponents stand on the arena. Nappa:I won't lose to a guy who looks like a woman. Zarbon:Oh,i'm gonna love this. Referee:BEGIN. Zarbon disappears and reappears floating above Nappa.He tries to kick him,but Nappa catches his leg and slams him on the arena floor.Right after that,he jumps,floats and showers the fallen Zarbon with a barrage of ki balls.While waiting for the smoke to go,Nappa smiles,sure that he's won. However,a surprise awaits him.Zarbon stands unharmed,just with a little dust on him. Zarbon:I wanted to hold back,so that we could fight a little.But,you had the insolence to spoil my beauty.And i won't forgive you!Now,i'm getting serious. Once more,Zarbon disappears and reappears floating above Nappa,ready to kick.This time,Zarbon's movements are too fast for Nappa to react. Therefore,he takes the kick and crashes on the ground.Zarbon fires a blast,which Nappa also takes head on.He's now heavily injured and his uniform is a mess.Zarbon lands.Nappa tries to get up. Vegeta:NAPPA.THAT'S ENOUGH.STAY DOWN. However,Nappa does not listen to Vegeta.Blinded by rage,he manages to stand up and runs to Zarbon. Nappa:HAAAA... Zarbon hits him with his bun,knocking him both unconscious and out of bounds. Referee:AND THE WINNER IS ZARBON. Before returning to the hall of the competitors,Zarbon stands next to Vegeta and smiles cockily. Zarbon:Hmf.You Saiyans aren't much of a challenge. Vegeta:Don't associate me with him or Raditz,Zarbon.I'm at a totally different league. Zarbon:Ha,ha.I highly doubt it. Zarbon leaves. Vegeta(whispering):Why you... Quarter Final 2-Dodoria vs Masked Fighter The two competitors stand on the arena,waiting for the referee to give the signal. Referee:BEG... Masked Fighter:FORGET IT. Everyone becomes silent by surprise and turns to the mysterious warrior.He takes off his mask and his face is revealed.He has yellow,spherical head and eyes that look like red balls. Frieza(thinking):Huh?He's from the tribe of the planet we recently invaded. The Masked Fighter turns to Frieza. Masked Fighter:I entered this tournament,so that i could meet you Frieza! Frieza:I didn't know i have such fanatic supporters.If you wanted an autograph,you could just ask for it. Masked Fighter:Don't mock me,murderer.You killed the people of my planet,scum of the universe.You're an old,homosexual,evil creep. Frieza frowns. Frieza:So,you consider me old?This hurts my feelings.I'm quite sensitive,you know. Masked Fighter:SHUT UP.Universe lives a hell because of you.I have to stop you. Frieza:Oh,really?And,how are you going to do this? Masked Fighter:With this. He takes a bottle out of his coat,puts him down and opens it. Masked Fighter:This is a technique that my father developped to beat you,but died before he could do so.And i'm going to use it,in his place.Get ready.EVIL CONTAINMENT WA... Frieza:ENOUGH OF YOUR JOKES. With speed beyond belief,Frieza shoots the warrior,instantly killing him.No one in the stadium was able to see it.The next thing they see is the Masked Fighter's corpse and Frieza's finger pointed towards there,with smoke coming from it. Frieza:I apologize for the interruption,audience.I think we can now continue. Vegeta:This is a scandal.It is evil.It is cruel.It is sickening. Raditz:That Frieza killed him? Vegeta:No.That Dodoria qualified without even having to fight.Isn't that terribly unfair for us?Now,Dodoria will be at full power,at the semi finals. |
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| MonakaSan | Aug 5 2012, 04:14 AM Post #4 |
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Lol at the masked fyter , good. |
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Aug 5 2012, 08:24 PM Post #5 |
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Part 3 Quarter Final 3-Raditz vs Saib The two competitors are ready to fight. Raditz(thinking):I've got this in the bag.The only thing that could frighten me is his selfdestruct technique.But,he's not going to use it,for he knows he'll get killed if he does. Referee:BEGIN. Raditz disappears and reappears right in front of Saib.Saib jumps to dodge a Raditzes horizontal kick.While still jumping,he hits Raditzes face,with his claw.Raditz delivers a high kick,sending Saib many metres above the floor.Right after that,he jumps and flies to meet his opponent.For a while, they exchange hits while floating.Finally,Raditz hits the foe,with both of his arms,making him slam on the arena.Saib stays down,seemingly unconscious.Raditz smiles.He shows his two fingers,to imply he's won.Suddenly,Saib opens his eyes,lifts his head and shoots a blast from his mouth. Despite his surprise,Raditz is fast enough to react,and deflects it by hitting it with both of his arms.Then,he flies towards the fallen Saib and slams his knee on the foe's stomach.Raditz stands up,whereas Saib is still down. Raditz:Give up,Saib.I'm obviously superior. Saib:I still have my last resort. Raditz:Oh,come on.You're not going to kill yourself! Saib smiles. Saib:Wanna bet? Raditz now looks worried. Raditz:Hey,you're...bluffing.Right? Saib jumps,gets sticked on Raditz and explodes.Everyone in the stadium is dumbfounded.But,an even bigger surprise awaits them.Tiny orange pieces start moving and gathering,until...POOF.Saib is back.Even the damage he received is undone. Saib:Surprise.You didn't expect that i can regenerate,right? The referee is still shocked.Saib angrily turns to him. Saib:Hey,don't you have a job to do? Referee:R-right...SAIB IS THE WINNER. Raditz is found to have survived the explosion,so he's taken to the healing machines. Later,at an isolated place of the stadium,Dodoria and Zarbon are talking. Zarbon:So...it seems we have to fight each other in the semi finals. Dodoria:I know. Zarbon:Dodoria...i know you feel the same,but i want to hear you saying it.Whoever wins,we're still best friends,right? Dodoria:Of course,you goose.We've been through so much together.Destroying civilizations,killing innocents.Such a nice and sweet friendship can't be lost. The two Frieza's henchmen smile and give their respective hands to each other. Zarbon:So,pal,let that be the match of our lives. Dodoria:And may the best win. Zarbon(thinking):I'm sorry pal,but i'm going to win.If things get too tough,i have that transformation of mine,which you can't beat. Dodoria(thinking):Sorry,my friend,but i'm determined to win.I have prepared a super powerful technique to beat you.If i manage to use it before you can transform,this match is mine. Edited by no name, Aug 5 2012, 08:32 PM.
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| + Pyrus | Aug 5 2012, 09:00 PM Post #6 |
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I'm not very big on script format being used in fictional writings unless it's actually being turned into a TV show or movie. It looks annoying, especially without any spaces in between the lines, or any space after a punctuation mark. I think you should fix that. Aside from that, it's interesting. Continue. |
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Aug 7 2012, 03:17 PM Post #7 |
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Part 4 Quarter Final 4-Kwi vs Vegeta The two competitors wait for the referee to declare the beginning of the fight. Frieza(thinking):Those two are perfectly equal in everything.Power,speed,skill.This'll be the match of the day. Vegeta(thinking):Darn.This might take all day.Of course,i can beat him quickly,with my ace card.But,i don't want to expose yet this technique to Dodoria and Zarbon.I have to find a way to win without using it. Kwi(thinking):Heh.I've got this in the bag.There is no way i can lose to a foolish monkey humanoid. Referee:BEGIN. The two fighters completely disappear from view.To an ordinary person,the only sign of their persence is the footsteps heard on the floor.Later,the footsteps stop.The duel has now been taken to the air.Vegeta and Kwi reappear,after a while,floating.Kwi is on the offense.He recklessly tries to deliver a connecting blow,with no success. Vegeta(thinking):Fool Kwi.He's blinded by his cockiness and carelessly attacks.I'll just keep playing defensively,until he makes some mistake. Finally,Vegeta finds the opening he was waiting for,and punches Kwi's stomach.The purple alien extends all four of his limbs,by pain.However,he immediately reacts and hits both sides of Vegeta's neck,with his respective hands,in karate chop style.Right after that,he hits Vegeta's chin,with his knee.He's about to complete his combo,with a side kick on Vegeta's cheek,but Vegeta catches his leg and throws him away.Right after that,he showers Kwi with a barrage of ki blasts.Kwi flies out of the explosion,with some bruises on him,and responds with his own energy shower.Vegeta flies to dodge them,but they follow him,while Kwi keeps shooting more,until Vegeta gets surrounded.Now,he's in a sphere of floating ki balls and has nowhere to run.Kwi smiles.He gives the signal with his hand,commanding the balls to fall to his foe. Vegeta(whispering):No.I won't accept this. Vegeta yells.With his kiai,he deflects all of them.The ki blasts fall to several places of the stadium.The crocodile servants run to hide.Some of them are hit and killed. Frieza(thinking):Well,that's not any big loss.I have plenty more of them at the palace. Meanwhile,Kwi is still shocked that Vegeta managed to deflect every single ball of his.Vegeta takes advantage of this,and,with super speed,goes behind Kwi and grabs his shoulders.Kwi can't escape. Vegeta:Surrender,or i'll break your bones. Kwi kicks very hard Vegeta's shin,with his heel.Vegeta,who didn't expect that,is forced,by pain,to release Kwi.Immediately,Kwi delivers a heavy punch on Vegeta's face.Vegeta now falls towards the ground,and it looks like he's going out of bounds.His eyes are closed.Kwi floats,waiting for his victory to be declared.Suddenly,Vegeta opens his eyes and fires a blast.Kwi is totally caught off guard,takes it head on and starts falling out of bounds too. The first of the two to touch the ground loses.But,it's almost sure that Vegeta will be the first one,sine he started falling earlier.Or not?Just a few centimetres above the ground,Vegeta stops.Kwi,in contrast,continues falling,until he's officially out of bounds. Referee:VEGETA IS THE WINNER. Dodoria and Zarbon smile. Dodoria:Vegeta won,but Kwi gave him a hell of fight. Zarbon:Vegeta is now too fatigued to have any hopes of winning the tournament. |
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| MonakaSan | Aug 7 2012, 03:23 PM Post #8 |
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Alright so Vegeta vs Saib , it's really interesting. Waiting for the next part. |
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Aug 7 2012, 06:50 PM Post #9 |
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Part 5 Semi Final 1-Zarbon vs Dodoria The referee declares the start of the battle.Dodoria tries to punch,but Zarbon catches his arm and slams him on the arena floor,which is damaged a little.Before Dodoria can stand up,Zarbon jumps on his stomach.At this moment,Dodoria catches Zarbon,with both of his hands,ands flies very high. Then,he flies towards the arena floor and slams very hard Zarbon on it,creating a hole.Zarbon's upper part of the body is buried.Dodoria jumps back, waiting for the foe's reaction.Zarbon releases himself form his "tomb", by levitating.He stands up again. Zarbon:I'm sorry,bro.I didn't want to do this,but you leave me no choice. Zarbon braces himself. Dodoria(thinking):He's transforming.That's the opening i was waiting for. Zarbon hesitates for a moment. Zarbon(thinking):Am i sure i want to transform?To expose my ugliness in front of all this crowd? Dodoria opens his mouth and fires an enormous blast.Zarbon takes it head on,thus,being knocked out of bounds. Referee:DODORIA WINS. Later,Dodoria visits Zarbon,who is in a healing machine. Dodoria:I hope you forgive me. Zarbon opens his eyes.From his eyes,Dodoria can understand that he's smiling. Zarbon:Don't you dare losing in the final.If you do so,i'll feel twice more humiliated for this loss. Semi Final 2-Saib vs Vegeta While the two competitors wait for the referee to give the signal,Saib looks a lot more worried than Vegeta. Saib(thinking):My only chance is surprising him right away and do my selfdestruct trick. Referee:BEGIN. Immediately,Saib runs to Vegeta,in order to grasp and selfdestruct.Vegeta fires a slim blast from his finger,thus,instantly killing Saib. Vegeta(thinking):Not that the explosion of that puny creature would have hurt me... |
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Aug 8 2012, 03:14 PM Post #10 |
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Part 6 Final-Dodoria vs Vegeta Frieza(thinking):Vegeta is considerably more fatigued than his opponent.If money had any meaning in my empire,i'd put all my money on Dodoria. Referee:BEGIN. Dodoria justs stands still smiling.This triggers Vegeta's rage and he rushes to his foe,punching him with all his strength on the face.Dodoria smiles again.A drop of blood falls off his lip.Vegeta is surprised.Dodoria punches him,sending him almost out of bounds.Vegeta manages,at the last moment,to stop on the edge of the platform,but he's still down.He sees Dodoria rushing to him.Without standing up,he fires 2-3 blasts,which Dodoria deflects with his arms,while still rushing.When Dodoria reaches Vegeta,the Saiyan surprises him with an Amazing Impact(an attack when he double kicks the foe's stomach,sending him high).Dodoria is now a great distance above the floor and Vegeta goes,with super speed,right above him,in order to hit him with both of his hands,finishing the combo.However,Dodoria turns,catches Vegeta's arms,both with his one arm,and hits him on the stomach with his other one.Then,he takes advantage of Vegeta's momental immobilization,because of pain,and hits him on the head,sending him to crash on the floor.Vegeta stands up,suffering,and Dodoria lands. Dodoria:Time to finish you off. Dodoria widely opens his mouth,ready to fire his ultimate technique.Vegeta jumps angrily and floats.Dodoria looks at him,still aiming with his mouth. Dodoria:It's futile.You can't dodge it. Vegeta(thinking):Time to play my trump card. Vegeta pulls back his arms.He fires his Gallick Gun,while Dodoria fires his mouth blast.The two beams collide.After a long,titanic beam struggle, Vegeta overpowers Dodoria,knocking him out of bounds. Referee:THE MATCH IS OVER.VEGETA IS THE WINNER OF THE FRIEZA'S ROYAL CUP. Vegeta lands.With any strength he has left,he wildly celebrates,something very unlikely of him. Later,Vegeta bows before Frieza,waiting for his prize. Frieza:Time for the personal prize i promised,my dear.You'll have the unbelievable honor to receive a kiss from the Emperor Frieza. Vegeta sees the black disgusting lips of the alien approaching his cheek.A girlie scream escapes his throat.A moment later,a black mark can be seen on the cheek of the Saiyan and the whole crowd has bursted to laughter.All competitors,except the winner,were glad not to have won the tournament. Vegeta(thinking):Some days,it's better staying home. THE END Edited by no name, Aug 8 2012, 03:16 PM.
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| MonakaSan | Aug 8 2012, 03:29 PM Post #11 |
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Vegeta got a beautiful kiss from Freeza. What if you put Goku in the tournament , what will he get? Anyway , that was good! But the ending was a little strange! |
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Aug 8 2012, 08:46 PM Post #12 |
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I didn't understand this thing about Goku. |
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