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Cell's "Beyond Perfect" Form
Topic Started: Jul 29 2012, 08:48 PM (2,242 Views)
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Part 1

Dr.Gero looked at the glass,behind which was the liquid mass hosting his ultimate creation.The baby Cell.
Dr.Gero:My boy.You're everything i have.The Androids mean nothing to me.I'm just using them.But,you're different.You're my only child.And,when
the time is right,you'll absorb those stupid teen jerks and achieve your perfect form.Or,at least,what i call your perfect form.Because,the truth is that
you can transform even further than that.If,when you would reach your perfect form,you could absorb two additional duplicates of Seventeen and
Eighteen,then,you would tranform into your "Beyond Perfect" Form,the stage that unlocks your full potential.Unfortunately,i can't make two more
Androids which will be identical to Seventeen and Eighteen.Therefore,you'll never be able to get the theoritically maximum strength you can acquire.
What a shame.

A few years later,in a desert of the planet,the two greatest powers in the universe clash.Cell and Gohan.Finally,Gohan overpowers Cell in the beam
struggle.
Gohan:HAAA...
Cell:NO...I'M...INVINCIBLE...
A little later,when Cell has vanished and everyone has left,a small piece can be seen on the ground.Cell's core is really tough.Although it is more
damaged than the time Cell selfdestructed,not all its cells are destroyed.However,with the damages it has now,it can only recreate the larva Cell.
Soon,the larva is there,crawling.It is burrowed underground.
Cell's subconscious:I can't believe i survived again,even as larva.Of course,i'll need four more years to fully grow up,but that's not a problem.My body
"remembers" my Perfect Form.Therefore,when the cocoon hatches,i'll come out as perfect.And,due to this unexpected favor of Lady Luck,i'll be able
to show the world my true form.Eighteen is still alive that i know of.So,if the earthlings are stupid enough to revive Seventeen along with my other
victims,then,i'll ascend to my "Beyond Perfect" Form and hit my natural limits.Something that not even my creator has dreamt of.

Four years later,the cocoon emerges and Cell comes out as he was before being destroyed by Gohan.Of course,now he has no sparks.For,he's
clever enough to instantly supress his ki,so that he won't be detected before it's too late.
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Another interesting story is on the way by NO NAME:))
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On Roshi's island,Eighteen is sunbathing in a pink bikini.She wears sunglasses and her eyes are closed.Roshi is tiptoeing towards her,so that he can
watch her amazing body without being noticed.As soon as he has been one metre close to her,she stands up,takes off her glasses and angrily looks
at Roshi.
Eighteen:What do you want old man?
Roshi:Err...i was looking for...Kuririn.
Eighteen:If he's not out,then,he'll be in the house.At about this time,he usually changes the baby's pampers.
Roshi:You know Eighteen,maybe you could do those chores sometimes,instead of always letting Kuririn do them.
Eighteen:No way.I suffered nine months until she was born.Now,it's his turn to suffer until she grows up.
Roshi(thinking):Why all gorgeous girls have to behave like boys?This is making me mad.I wish Cell appeared in front of us right now.Then,we would
see if she would keep behaving like that.
At that moment,using Instant Transmission,Cell appears on the island.Roshi and Eighteen both freeze by terror.
Roshi:No,no,go away.I was just kidding about the wish.
Without losing any time,Cell absorbs Eighteen.A stunning light surrounds the area,until his transformation is complete.Actually,in terms of
appearance,only the colors have changed.His skin is now yellow,instead of green.His face and hands have got the color of the human skin(that of
white people).His chin and shoes have become red.Finally,his boots and wings remain black.Cell jumps high and,with a ki blast,destroys the island,
instantly killing everyone on it.
Cell(thinking):It's not over.This my "Semi Beyond Perfect" Form.One more to go.
At this stage of Cell's evolution,the absorption of Eighteen does not affect just his power.He also gains access to her memories.Now,he perfectly
knows where to find her brother.

In an alley of a city,Seventeen parks his motorcycle.As soon as he takes off,he notices a shadow on the wall.The shadow has a familiar shape.
Seventeen(without turning):Whoever you are,your disguise is ridiculous.You don't intimidate me.
Cell is exactly behind Seventeen! Once more,he doesn't prolong it.He absorbs Seventeen.This time,his appearance doesn't change,but now sparks
surround him.
Cell:THAT'S IT.MY TRUE FORM.HA,HA,HA,HA...
Cell's laughing kiai "swallows" the city and forms an enormous crater,many square kilometres wide.
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Part 3

Bulma notices that Vegeta is full of cold sweat and has an expression of fear.
Bulma:What's wrong,honey?
Vegeta ignores her and talks to himself.
Vegeta:This ki...There is no doubt.It's Cell.I should've known that Kakarot's son would be proven unworthy of finishing him off.
Vegeta gets ready to leave.
Trunks:Dad,won't i come?
Vegeta:NO.
Trunks:But,why?
Vegeta:TRUNKS.I won't discuss it.You stay here.Got it?

Gohan's studying is interrupted by the evil,familiar ki he feels.
Gohan:I must...be dreaming...
Gohan phones to Kuririn to ask him if he sensed it too.However,the line is dead.Gohan jumps out of the window.Goten,who plays with a baby dinosaur in the yard,sees him.
Goten:Hey bro.I bet you're going to fight the source of that monstrous ki.Of course,i'm coming too,right?
Gohan:Please Goten,understand.Not everything in this life is a game.Just don't follow me.
Gohan takes off,leaving the disappointed Goten behind.

In the Other World,Goku meets King Kai,who is looking anxious.
Goku:What's wrong King Kai?Did you lose any bet with your colleagues again?Ha,ha,ha...
King Kai:Something way more important than that,Goku.It looks like Cell was alive as a larva all these years.Now,he has woken up as perfect,
reabsorbed the Androids and ascended to a plateau of power,which i can only compare to Death itself.
Goku:GOSH.How can Cell be alive.Didn't i meet him in Hell?
King Kai:Depends.Are we from the Manga or from the Anime version?
Goku:Err,i don't know.It's pretty vague.
King Kai:Well,since you don't know,shut up and let the show go on.
Goku:So,what are we going to do now?
King Kai:I'm afraid we can do nothing,Goku.We're dead.We don't have the right to interfrere with the affairs of the living ones.
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Part 4

Vegeta is flying,when he senses Gohan's ki approaching.
Vegeta(thinking):I should expect that this brat would come too.
Soon,Gohan has reached Vegeta and they're now flying next to each other.
Vegeta:Hmf...so,you're coming.By the way,where is the rest of the carvalry?
Gohan:Piccolo telepathetically contacted me.I told him not to come and to tell the others not to come too.
Vegeta:Har,har.Some warriors they are.
Gohan:They're my friends,Vegeta! I don't want them to go to their deaths.
Cell is still standing on the center of the crater,which lies where a city used to be.Gohan and Vegeta land opposed to him.
Cell:Oh,Santa Claus already brought my toys! I'm so happy.
Vegeta:Shut up,you scum.I'm a lot stronger than the last time we met.
Cell:That's what you claim every time,Vegeta.And,every time,i deliver your butt to you.How about you,Gohan?Haven't you got bored of failing to kill
me?
Gohan:I'm stronger than you think.
Gohan(thinking):Oh,who am i kidding? I haven't trained at all since we last fought.
Cell:Okay,time to bring you back to reality.
Cell gets to his fighting posture and reveals his ki.Vegeta and Gohan are terrified.Despite their fear,they're determined to battle.They both go SSJ2
and rush to Cell.For about one minute,they continuously punch and kick him,without letting loose,while Cell just stands still.Finally,they move back,
panting after all that effort.
Cell:Is that all?
With a ki explosion,Cell sends his two foes flying further.Several mountains around collapse.After the explosion,the two Saiyans emerge from large
rocks,full of injuries.Cell disappears and reappears next to Gohan.He kicks him,sending him on Vegeta.They fall on the ground and lie next to each
other,having reverted to normal.Cell floats.
Cell:I didn't want to waste two blasts for trash like you.I'll finish you off both at the same time.
Cell starts charging a blast,when he hears a voice behind.
Tien:NEO TRI BEAM.
Cell feels a scratch on his back.He turns and sees Tien,sweaty and panting.
Cell:You bald bug.You still haven't learned that this attack doesn't work on me?
Tien smiles.
Tien:Then,how about this one? SOLAR FLARE.
Cell gets blinded.Tien lifts Vegeta and Gohan and flies away as fast as he can.A little later,Cell is angry,not just with Tien,but with himself too.
Cell:I can't believe i fell for that ancient trick.How could i be such a fool?
Cell smiles.
Cell:Anyway.I'll have some fun destroying cities,for now.They won't want to turn their backs to those insects called humans,so they'll come back.
Stupid sensitivity,har,har...
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Part 5

Goku has watched everything,by touching King Kai's back.
Goku:I can't stand it anymore.
King Kai:This is none of our worries anymore,Goku.
Goku:The hell with your theories! I'm going to Earth,right now!
Goku puts touches his forehead and uses Instant Transmission.To his surpise,he reappears at the same point.
Goku:Huh?What the...
King Kai:The rules are rules.Accept it Goku.You're dead and you cannot go back to Earth.But,even if you could,what difference do you think you
would make?Cell would destroy your body and banish you from existence.
Goku:I don't care.I prefer losing my existence than watching all this happening.I'm going to complain to Grand Kai.

Grand Kai is sitting in his throne room,listening his favourite song on the walkman.The door knocks.
Grand Kai:Not now,i'm busy.
Goku breaks the door and enters.
Grand Kai:What a blashphemy! I know that i'm easy going,but this is too much!
Goku:Don't you know what's happening on Earth at the moment?
Grand Kai:Well,it's an unpleasant situation,but we can do nothing...
Goku:Nonsense.You gods always claim to be superior to every being and demand respect.But,when things get tough,you keep repeating "i'm sorry,
but,we can do nothing".
Grand Kai:Isn't that what all politicians do?
Goku:I don't know what "pociliticans" means.And i don't care either.
Silence falls for a few seconds,while Goku continues looking Grand Kai with determination.
Grand Kai(sighing):Okay,i can do something.But,i can't guarantee it'll work.If it fails,don't bother me again.
Goku:Agreed.
Grand Kai opens his two palms and a small bottle appears on each,out of nowhere.
Grand Kai:This divine water temporarily unlocks a fighter's potential,which would normally require years of training to be brought out.
Goku:How long does it last?
Grand Kai:I don't know.But,this is all the quantity i have.If it wears off,i have no more to give you.Just give the bottles to the two strongest warriors of
your planet and tell them to use them wisely.
Goku grabs the bottles,thanks Grand Kai and leaves.
Goku:Hey,King Kai,i found a solution.Use your telepathy to send these bottles to Dende.

On the Sky Platform,Tien has just given senzus to Vegeta and Gohan.Vegeta has turned his back to the other two.
Vegeta:I don't know what makes me angrier.That i lost to Cell or that i was saved by a piece of trash?
Gohan:Don't listen to him Tien.You have our eternal gratitude.
Tien:So,what are you going to do now,Gohan?
Gohan:I really don't know.And this makes me mad.Cell's power is from another reality.
Tien:How about the Spirit Room?You have one more day to use up.
Gohan:Dad told me,the first time we went in there,that a second day will do me more bad than good.And i don't want to waste one day,while Cell will
be killing innocents.
Dende appears out of the palace.
Dende:Guys,i have some news.King Kai just sent me a message.
Dende shows the bottles of the special water and explains its qualities.
Gohan:GREAT! Now,we have some hope.
Gohan pops it open.
Vegeta:What are you doing fool? Its effect is ephemeral.We cannot take the slightest unnecessary risk.We'll drink it right before the battle.
Gohan(thinking):I have to admit that this jerk has sometimes more brain than all the rest of us...
The two Saiyans put the bottles in their respective pockets and take off.
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It's a bit coincidental that there are two bottles for both Vegeta and Gohan, but none the less, the story is great>9/10
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Aug 1 2012, 07:46 PM
It's a bit coincidental that there are two bottles for both Vegeta and Gohan, but none the less, the story is great>9/10
Have you ever counted all the coincidences in DB/DBZ?Anyway,here's the next part.

Part 6

Cell has just destroyed another city and stands in the deserted surroundings,with his arms crossed.
Cell(thinking):Not that i need it,but i'll rest for now,until the circus comes to amuse me.
A little later,Cell feels two kis being revealed behind a rock.
Cell(thinking):The circus arrived!
Behind the rock...
Vegeta:Time to drink...
Vegeta and Gohan down their respective bottles.Then,they come out of their cover and stand in front of Cell.They just glare at him without saying
anything,while yellow auras surround them and small stones are made to levitate by their increasing kis.Cell reveals his ki too.
Cell:You won't escape this time.Unless,of course,death can be called a kind of escape,har,har...
Gohan and Vegeta go SSJ2.But,something is weird about them.Their eyes are blank.They have both transformed into False Super Saiyan 3!
Not having realized that they have undergone a new transformation,they rush to Cell.The bio android blocks Gohan's punch,but,right after that comes
Vegeta's kick.Cell takes it and,thus,is thrown back.Vegeta and Gohan simultaneously fire,one blast each,but Cell manages to stand and answer with
his own blast.Cell's and his foes' blasts collide,causing an explosion.Out of the smokes,Cell appears jumping and staying floating.He looks down,
but only Vegeta is there.Cell has no time to think,for Vegeta flys towards him.Vegeta tries to knee Cell at stomach,but Cell blocks it.However,as soon
as he has blocked,Gohan appears behind him and punches.Cell takes the punch,thus,being sent a little lower.He grabs Vegeta's leg and flies
towards the ground.He slams Vegeta hard on the ground.Behind him,Gohan is heard coming from above.Cell turns his head and,with an impressive
high kick,pushes Gohan away,before the latter can reach him.Now that his attention is not at Vegeta,the prince delivers a ki ball on Cell's cheek. Thus,the bio android is thrown away.Gohan and Vegeta coordinate their moves and rush to Cell.They simultaneously headbutt his chest,pushing him even further away.Before his back touches the ground,Cell jumps high and floats.He looks angry.
Cell:ENOUGH.TIME TO SETTLE THIS.
Cell charges a kamehameha.So does Gohan.Vegeta charges a final flash.Vegeta's and Gohan's blasts fuse and the single blast collides with Cell's
one.The struggle looks even.But,if one looks carefully,he'll notice that,little by little,Cell's attack is pushed back.Vegeta's and Gohan's fused blasts
have almost totally overpowered Cell's one,when Cell starts gaining ground.It's obvious that the divine water's effect has started wearing off.Cell now
has clearly the upper hand.So,is this the end of Earth?Then,what about Buu Saga?
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Great story by a great member :D!
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It's a bit rushed, and short, but I'm already used to this coming from your stories. Nonetheless, you have great talent in describing the fight scenes. Maybe I shall do a collab with you on my story:)
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Part 7

Goten and Trunks are on the top of a mountain.Goten is sitting,whereas Trunks is lying,with his hands behind his back.
Trunks:It's unfair.Grown ups always want all the fun for themselves.
Goten:Well,that's the grown ups' attitude.
Trunks stands up.
Trunks:The question is,WILL WE ACCEPT IT?
Goten:Errr...
Trunks:And the answer is NOOO(deja vu)
Goten:Are you thinking what i'm thinking that you're thinking?
Trunks:I don't know what you're thinking that i'm thinking.But,what i'm thinking is that i'm going where the fun is taking place!
Goten:Trunks,i don't think it's a good idea.If my mom finds out,she'll kill me.
Trunks:Come on,Goten.Don't be a mommy's boy.
A little later,the kids have arrived at the battlefield.They see Cell and the Saiyans' duo beam struggling.
Trunks:Just as i suspected!They are playing with a friend of theirs.And they didn't want us to come.How selfish.
Goten:How about giving them a little surprise?
Trunks:Wow.Now,you're a real man!
Trunks and Goten both go SSJ and float behind Cell.They simultaneously fire,one ki ball each,to him.Cell turns and is surprised to see two kids as
SSJs.
Cell(thinking):Is that an...illusion?There can't be any Super Saiyans who are children!
Gohan and Vegeta take advantage of Cell's distraction and overpower him.
Cell:NO...NOT...AGAIN...
Cell vanishes.Goten and Trunks look at each other and sweatdrop.
Goten:Errr,Trunks.I think we did something wrong.
Trunks:Let's get out of here.If they see us,they'll get really angry.
They revert to base and fly away.

Later,on Sky Palace,
Dende:Why are you so sad Gohan?You won.
Gohan:Yeah,but Kuririn won't come back.He's already been revived once.
Dende:Ha,ha,don't worry about that.I'll contact the people of my planet and tell them to use their dragonballs,which have no limitations.
Gohan yells in happiness.
Vegeta:But,i still cannot understand what distracted Cell.
Gohan:Whoever it was,he's a true hero.
At that moment,Trunks and Goten land.
Trunks:Hey guys...
Gohan:What the hell are you doing here?
Goten:You know,just dropped by.
Gohan:I don't buy this.It's obvious you followed us.
Vegeta:You disobedient fools.While you were playing around,we were fighting for the fate of the world.
Trunks turns to Goten.
Trunks(whispering):Those grown ups can come up with the maddest excuses to hide the fact that they want to have fun without us.
Trunks and Goten giggle and fly away.

THE END
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Author's note

I just realized that i did a terrible goof.Goten didn't know how to fly,back then.So,consider he was flying on Nimbus.
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