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Caterpi finally transformed
Topic Started: Jul 18 2012, 06:37 AM (588 Views)
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Part 1

It looks like a common day at the planet of dead heroes.King Kai's having his walk,when he notices South King Kai,who's looking at Caterpi's
coocoon.
King Kai:Hey,South Kai.Do you know that today one year is completed since the day i died?
South Kai:So what?Do you want to celebrate your deathday,with cake,candles and the like?
King Kai:Mmmf...I don't see you doing anything useful either.Once more,you're looking at that coocoon that won't hatch for 300 years.
South Kai:I feel nostalgy for my beloved disclipine,Caterpi.And i can't help thinking that,had he transformed at that moment,he would have beaten
you own disclipine,Goku.
King Kai:I highly doubt it.
South Kai:Oh,my dear Caterpi.If only you could complete your transformation right now.Then,we would show this stupid colleague of mine...
Suddenly,the coocoon starts cracking.
South Kai:Don't tell me...My wish came true?
King Kai:I thought you said it would take 300 years.
South Kai:We all make mistakes...
The coocoon opens and Caterpi comes out.He has a muscular body and large butterfly wings.A strange chi is emitted.
King Kai:What the...I must be dreaming.This creature may be able to take Goku easily!
South Kai:Yeah.That's my boy.Now,in the next tournament,we'll show them...
Caterpi:SILENCE.With the power i have now,my plans go a lot further than stupid tournament matches.I'm going to become the lord of both Living
and Dead Worlds.
Caterpi starts firing a red dust from all over his body.Everyone around,as soon as they breath it,bow to Caterpi,their new leader.
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Interesting...But can't really remember who Caterpi is? Mind refreshing my mind?:)
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Caterpi is Goku's first opponent at Other World Tournament.But,i'm not done with my story yet.

Part 2

Goku and Pikkon are sparring,while the couple of the Metamors that has befriended Goku is watching them.Metamors are short people that look like
Yardrats.
Metamor woman:Wow.You've been fighting for so long and you don't show any signs of fatigue.
Pikuhan:Go somewhere else weaklings.Us strong men have work to do.
Goku:Hey,Pik.Don't look down on weak people.Sometimes,even weak ones can be useful.Have i told you about Yardrats,who taught me Instant
Transmission?
Metamor man:What is that,over there?
Red dust is seen coming from far.
Goku:I have a bad feeling about this.
Metamor woman:We'd better not breath this thing.
Pikuhan:Don't worry.
Pikuhan floats and does the Tornado Attack.The dust is repelled and vanishes from everywhere in the small planet.The ones who had breathed it
regain their reason.
Goku(to Metamors):Quick.Go to hide in your basement.
Meanwhile,Caterpi is sitting among large plates of food and fruits,with everyone around running for his desires.When the dust vanishes,everyone
starts wondering what had happened.Caterpi yells in madness.
Caterpi:Who dares interfrering with my plan?
He takes off and flies for a while,until he meets Goku and Pikuhan,who were also flying.
Goku:I bet it was you who caused chaos around here.
Pikuhan:His chi is abnormal.
Goku:I know.
Caterpi:YOU'RE GETTING ON MY NERVES.Mark my words.You're not going to prevent me from doing what i want.
Goku:We'll see about that.Come on Pik,let's show him who rules...
Goku goes SSJ and Pikuhan takes off his weights.Pikuhan rushes to Caterpi,while Goku uses IT and kicks him on the head.Caterpi blocks Pikuhan's
punch with his hand and takes Goku's kick.Then,he punches Pikuhan,who falls on the ground,and kicks Goku without turning his face towards him.
Goku is sent higher.Caterpi appears above him and,with his elbow,he sents Goku crashing on the ground too.Caterpi laughs like devil.He starts
spinning and creates a super strong wind,in a range of kilometres.The wind lifts almost everything.Goku and Pikuhan try hard to hold their position on
the ground and they do it.But they're hit by big rocks,which have been lift by the wind.Blood runs from several parts of their bodies.
Goku:KAMEHAMEHA.
Pikuhan:THUNDER FLASH.
Each of the two beams hits one of Caterpi's wings.The wings deflect them like mirrors.Goku's attack is sent to Pikuhan and vice versa.The two
fighters jump to dodge.Caterpi repels them with another wind attack.
Caterpi:Wow.I sent them pretty far.I can't see them anymore.
Goku and Pikuhan return and charge towards the foe once more.With swift movements,Caterpi hits them,almost both at the same moment.They're
sent crashing on the ground again.Caterpi claps.
Caterpi:Congratulations.You were fun.But,i can't play with you all day.Say goodbye to your existence.
Caterpi starts charging a blast.He's ready to finish them off with a big one.Goku uses IT to save himself and Pikuhan.Caterpi gets baffled by seeing
them disappear.
Caterpi:Well,if they come back,i'll beat them again.Har,har...

Part 3

Goku and Pikuhan have teleported to Metamors' underground house.A little later,Goku has reverted to his base and their wounds have been healed
by the healing potion that Metamors are good at producing.
Goku(to Pikuhan):See?I told you weak ones can be useful.
Metamor man:And we can be even more of use to you.We know a technique that can beat that new threat.
Pikuhan:Hey,no way.
Metamor woman:Watch us carefully.
A few hours later,Goku and Pikuhan appear in front of Caterpi once more.
Caterpi:What's wrong?Want another beating?
Goku:This time,it's you who goes down.
Goku and Pikuhan:FUUUSION.
A new fighter appears.He has Pikuhan's clothes and skin color and Goku's face and hair.
Caterpi:Huh?Where are the other two?And who are you?
Fusion:I think i'll be called Piku.Err,no scratch that one.Gokuhan is better.But,let's get down to business.
Gokuhan transforms and his hair change from black to open green.A green aura appears around him.Caterpi is still shocked.
Gokuhan:Well,i wouldn't call that a super saiyan.But,it's a super something anyway...
Gokuhan rushes to Caterpi and headbutts him.He continues to rush,towards a mountain,while pushing Caterpi with his head.Caterpi yells but cannot
react.Finally,they fall on the mountain and it's shattered.Gokuhan flies out of the smoke.When visibility is restored,Caterpi can be seen,unconscious
and having reverted to his first form.Caterpi regains consciousness.
Caterpi:Wh-why am i here?The last thing i can remember is that i was fighting that Goku guy in the tournament.
South Kai appears.He runs to Caterpi.
South Kai:You wimp.You utterly disappointed me!
Caterpi:But,why?
South Kai:Shut up and listen to your punishment.You'll circle this whole planet running 5 times.
Caterpi:Wait,what happened with the tournament?Did i lose?
South Kai:Move your butt.
South Kai starts kicking Caterpi,who starts running.South Kai is chasing and kicking him.Gokuhan is defused.Goku and Pikuhan look at each other
and laugh.

THE END
Edited by no name, Jul 18 2012, 09:43 PM.
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By the way, it's Paikuhan, not Pikuhan, but close enough:) I like your stories, they're quite entertaining. I looked a bit into your previous ones as well, but haven't fully read them. Some other time:)
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NO.1 Miz fan in the world . MIZ IS AWESOME .

I like this story it's fun honestly .
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