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Dead Space signature
Topic Started: Jul 7 2012, 04:58 AM (700 Views)
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Okay this is my last post for the night, promise :P

So this is another signature I just made, I was going for a desaturated look, and I think I got it pretty good with the color correction and gradient maps.

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Wow much better then the other one u made no offense

I think u did a good job and did what u were trying to do

Yeah keep making more sigs ur pretty good
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Thanks :D
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Jul 7 2012, 04:58 AM
Okay this is my last post for the night, promise :P

So this is another signature I just made, I was going for a desaturated look, and I think I got it pretty good with the color correction and gradient maps.

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I like the style. It's not something you see every day so I like that you tried something different. I like the border which gives a nice appeal to it. However, I don't like how the render is well blended with the background. It's hard to tell what it is or what it is doing. There is also a really white area on the left side. I don't know if you used it as a lighting source or if it was just put their for design. It doesn't really match the rest of the signature. It kinda reminds me of a cave opening if that is what you were going for, but in this case, it is too distracting.

It's not that greatest to look at when you see it for the first time, but when you actually look at it it has a lot of detail that will go unnoticed. Really good job, and I apologize for not commenting I've been kind of busy these days. You are really talented and I hope to learn from you as you make more signatures. Awesome job.
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Well what I did was use the render scaled up for the background and the thing on the left is the blue health bar on his back.

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I have a question, if I make a tutorial do I post it here? Or somewhere else?
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Ahh I see. It's hard to see and kinda hard to imagine since I haven't played the game he is from or movie.

You can post it in this section.

http://dbzf.co.uk/forum/925/

I usually post some renders and stuff there for people to use. A tutorial would be great.
Edited by Pookie, Jul 8 2012, 04:54 AM.
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Awesome, Ill make a few tutorials.
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Anything Dead Space is awesome so good job!
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Haha this is something I love because it reminds me of my own work. :D Love grunge, always have and always will. Nice work. In this situation, I don't think the C4D works well with the grunge part of the signature. Otherwise, I like it. Crisp blending!
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I think you need to work on improving the focus. As of now, it looks quite messy. The C4D near the render doesn't seem to serve any purpose. The border appears to have too much contrast. Also, a little bit of smudging could have made the right side look better. I also see no depth.

As this was made half a year ago, please treat my criticism as a basis to see if you've made improvements in what you lacked back then. Were you able to improve on the smudging? Were you able to incorporate good lighting and depth? If you can't find answers to those questions, then those areas should be your main focus. I'm sorry if I sound too harsh, but I have always believed that criticisms can boost one's drive to improve just as much as praise, if not more.
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mean Senjou is mean

btw, i don't like your grungy tag, becoz it is too messy. you need to improve on the smudging works. create real flow with it. abuse it. love it. not just for the sake of creating grungy look....XD basically what i want to comment already covered by Senjou up there....XD
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