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Couple Sig
Topic Started: Jul 5 2012, 07:01 PM (462 Views)
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I made this request for someone. I thought the render was beautiful and I hope to one day make a large piece with it or something but for now heres the siggy. I could really use some constructive criticism on this one (that doesn't mean be a h8er :p just CnC plz)

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Pretty decent design, but has a few flaws.

The clay texture in the design works quite well and add something cool to it, the pink color you used also fits perfectly. I like how you made it look like the sun was shining on the couple. The only problem is the fact that you did almost nothing with your render to make it look like the sunlight is actually shining on the couple. You could try soft brushing a bit of white in a new layer on the spots where the ''sun'' hits the couple, just lower the opacity afterwards till it looks better. The border doesn't really work with this design IMO, I would've chosen for a 1px pink border, instead of the white on the outside, but I guess that's a matter of taste. You should also work a little bit on the composition of your render, try using the rule of thirds on your focal every time you make a design, it makes it alot easier to place effects in your canvas.

Not bad, but could be better!
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Ok, I got rid of the excessive border and I usually used rule of thirds but then I got comments about the focal point needing to be centered and not so much in the intersections. I'm trying to comprehend the white brush layer you suggested but I gave it a try with what I thought but it still might not be right. Anyway, thank you for commenting. I think it really helped. I need more depth and less finesse. Let me know what you think of the edits

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Wow just wow i think its cute and would give it the sig of the month award

Is there one ?

Sorry nic

But i like this one a lot its soo well done and looks very pretty and cute

Oh and i just remebered i have to add ur sig to my collection i will do it when im not busy

Good job rebel , ur really good at graphics, my 2nd fav on the forum

Keep up the great work buudy
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Yo

This is my favourite signature from you Rebel.

I like pretty much everything about it (you were right about the render being beautiful).
I don't suppose you'd be up for sending me the psd and doing a collab of sorts?
(even the png would be okay if you've deleted the psd).
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Its nice!
I feel as though the effects that are on the guy take away from it though. Makes it seem a little messy.
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