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Raditz Droid
Topic Started: Jul 4 2012, 08:48 PM (622 Views)
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Gohan could not help feeling amazed by the huge spaces of Videl's house,despite it wasn't the first time he was visiting it.Videl appeared while she
was coming from the upstairs.She was so beautiful,especially now that she had let her hair grow long again.But Gohan was handsome too.Her
mother had chosen his new clothes.
Videl(smile):Hey!
Gohan(smile):Hey!
Gohan(thinking):Maybe,on this date,i should try kissing her.Oh,what am i thinking?It is way too soon for that.She's probably going to slap me.
Videl(thinking):I wonder why we haven't made it yet.I can't stand it anymore!If he keeps being so hesitant,i think i'm gonna seduce him!
Videl:So...where are we going this time?
Gohan:I've got no problem.Whenever you want.
Videl:Well,i've got no problem either.
Gohan:Then?How are we going to solve that?
Videl:Oh,shut up,let's go.
Videl grabs Gohan's arm and walks pulling him towards the exit.
Mr.Satan:VIDEEEL.
Mr.Satan comes out of the living room.
Gohan:Errr...hello,sir.
Videl:Dad,don't start again...
Mr.Satan:No,no,don't worry.I've finally approved your relationship with Gohan,after we all three hanged out together and i realized he's a great guy.
Videl:You mean after that night you secretly followed us on our date and suddenly appeared in front of us.Don't remind me of that!
Gohan sweatdrops.
Mr.Satan:Anyway,can i ask a favor from your future husband?
Videl starts wildly coughing by shock.Gohan sweatdrops again.Mr.Satan gives a box of candies to Gohan.
Mr.Satan:Can you go and give this to Buu?It's almost his lunch time.
Gohan:Huh?I thought he can turn rocks into candies.
Mr.Satan:That's right.But,when we first met,i gave him a mark of swiss chocolate and he adores it.He prefers it to the ordinary chocolate his mage
produces.
Videl:DAD!Gohan and i are busy now...
Gohan:It's ok Videl.I'll be back in a minute.
Gohan flies away.
Videl(whispering):I hate you dad.
Gohan(thinking while flying):Be patient Gohan!It's almost six months.Soon,people will have forgotten and Buu won't have to hide anymore.
When Gohan arrives out of Buu's cave,he receives a huge shock.Buu is outside,fallen down and badly wounded.
Gohan:BUU!Is everything ok?
Buu:He...did this to me.He bad.He very bad.
Gohan:Huh?
A man comes out of the cave.A device seems to have replaced a hole that he obviously used to have in his stomach.The rest of his body looks
organic,but with a metal color.
Raditz:My,my!You've grown a lot,nephew.
Gohan:YOU!I can't believe this.
Raditz(shrugging):I'm gonna have my revenge,either you believe it or not.Then,maybe i'll have this pink blob for lunch.
Gohan transforms into his ultimate form and rushes to Raditz.Raditz,as simply as that,grabs Gohan from his neck.Gohan cannot react at all.He tries
to yell,but his voice can't be heard.He feels his power dropping.
Raditz:What's wrong nephew?Aren't you going to say that "Don't hurt my blob" again?
(that was a reference to 4 year old Gohan's "Don't hurt my daddy")
Soon,Goku lands.
Goku:SON!
Raditz throws down the half unconscious Gohan.
Goku:What the hell are you doing here,evil brother?
Raditz:You had the courtesy to leave me there,at such a terrible condition.But,soon after you and your friends left,Dr.Gero appeared and took me to
his lab.There,he replaced my belly with a special device that provided me with overflowing energy.That slowly turned me into an android.Unluckily,
there was a problem with this new power of mine.To be activated,i had to absorb an enormous amount of energy,which was impossible to be found.
So,i remained unactivated for a long time,until recently,when Kid Buu destroyed the Earth.I absorbed the energy of the explosion and woke up.Then,
i floated in the space for a while and...voila!Earth came back!
Goku:Wait!When i died by Piccolo's beam,King Yenma told me you died and went to Hell.
Raditz:Come on,brother.There is no good DBZ fanfic or movie without at least one plothole.
Goku:Enough babbling.I'll smash you for what you did to my son.
Goku goes SSJ3.
Gohan:Dad.What are you going to do,when even i was powerless against him?
Goku:Don't worry Gohan.I'll use my secret ultra special move.
Goku:TOEI HAX!
Goku hugely powers up.Raditz gets shocked.
Gohan(whispering):Wow.He's pouring out all this chi.I wonder when he learned that.
Raditz:Sure that technique is powerful.Let's see how much of help it will be.
Goku and Raditz take off.Raditz disappears and reappears behind Goku.He grabs Goku's hair.
Raditz:Long hair is a disadvantage in battle.You should know that.
Raditz pulls Goku's hair and Goku screams in pain.Raditz throws Goku on a mountain,which is shattered.Goku emerges,seemingly injured.He fires a
kamehameha.Raditz simply deflects it.Then,he's surprised to see that Goku is not there.Goku has gone behind Raditz and grabs his hair.
Goku:Now i see what you mean.
Goku pulls Raditzes hair.Raditz hits Goku with his elbow,forcing him to leave his hair.
Goku(out of breath):What the...
Raditz:You fool.Us androids do not feel any pain.
Raditz punches Goku.Right after that,he shoots Goku with a beam.Goku takes it and falls on the ground.
Raditz:Don't worry.I'm not going to kill you with a single beam,although i can easily do so.You're going to suffer a lot more before you die.
Goku(whispering):Boy,he's so strong.I'm toast.
Raditz fires another blast,but a second blast hits it.Goku and Raditz both turn surprised and see Vegeta.
Raditz:You remind me of...Vegeta.
Vegeta:Having problem recognizing your leader,weakling?
Raditz:You call me a weakling?
Vegeta:Are you deaf too?
Vegeta goes SSJ3.
Goku:Wow.Vegeta,you too?
Vegeta:Why not?Have you signed a contract with SSJ3 form?
Goku and Vegeta attack from both sides.Raditz repels them with a tornado attack,like that of Pikuhan.
Goku:Ok Vegeta.We must coordinate our moves.
Vegeta nods.They both attack head on,with concentrated ki hits(like against Cooler).As a result,all three of them fall on the ground.Goku and Vegeta
get up exhausted.They are shocked to see that the foe's body is seemingly unharmed.
Vegeta:Well,at least he's unconscious.
Raditz jumps up.Goku and Vegeta are terrorized.
Raditz(devil laugh):Me?Unconscious?Yeah,dream on...
Goku fires a kamehameha and Vegeta a final flash.Raditz takes them head on.No effect.
Raditz:Ants!You just don't get it,do you?
Raditz grabs Goku's and Vegeta's heads.Then,in a Broly style attack,he presses them against a mountain,forming two large craters.The two allies fall
on ground.
Goku:Hey,Vegeta.Is there any slight possibility you may think about fusion?
Vegeta:NOT IN A MILLION YEARS!
Raditz:I think i'll remove your eyeballs for starters.Then,i'll cut your tongues,take away your nails...
Vegeta(terrified):Ok,let's do it.
Goku smiles.They start performing the fusion dance.Raditz is watching baffled.SSJ3 Gogeta appears.
Gogeta:Hello former brother/employee.
Raditz:Huh?
Gogeta swiftly punches Raditz,who is buried under lotsa rocks.He angrily repels the rocks and foats again.He hastily looks around.
Raditz:Where are you,worm?
Gogeta appears behind him and grabs his hair.
Gogeta:I don't know about worm,but i'm right here.
Raditz repeatedly hits Gogeta with his elbow.Gogeta is not even fazed.He starts flying at high speed,while holding Raditzes hair.
Gogeta:Weee...
Raditz:YOU'RE GONNA PAAAY...
Gogeta:Ok,send me the bill.
Gogeta throws Raditz,who slams hard on the ground.
Gogeta:You know,i'd like to play more,but my existence is ephemeral.I have to finish you off early.
Gogeta is ready to perform a final attack,when fusion wear off.
Goku:Oh,no.We shouldn't have fought as SSJ3s when fused.
Vegeta:You're stupid.
Raditz floats with an evil smile.
Goku:Vegeta,we have a last chance.The genki dama.
Vegeta:So,all the credits will go to you again Kakarrot.As always.
Raditz:What are you discussing?Oh,i know.One of you is going to keep me occupied,while the other one will be charging a special attack.Do you
think i'll fall for that again Goku?
Goku:SOLAR FLARE.
Raditz(eyes still wide open):Solar what now?
Goku:What?You should be blind.
Raditz:You fool.My robot eyes are much more durable than your organic ones.
Raditz starts shooting at all directions.Goku/Vegeta fall on the ground and revert to their base forms.
Goku:It's over Vegeta.We don't have enough energy left to fuse.In fact,we don't have enough energy left for anything.
Vegeta:I know this,you fool.
Goku:We shouldn't have broken the Potara...
Kibitoshin appears.
Goku:What are you doing here?You won't make the slightest difference.
Kibitoshin:Guess what.Old Kai remembered he had another pair of Potaras.Promise you will never get cocky again?
Goku(grabbing the potara):Promise!
Kibitoshin smiles and disappears.
Raditz:Huh?Who was that?What kind of stunt is th...
Before Raditz can finish his sentence,Base Vegeto appears in front of him.
Raditz:ENOUGH OF THE STUNTS.
Vegeto:ENOUGH OF YOU.
Raditz punches.Vegeto doesn't move an inch.The punch hurts only Raditzes hand,who yells in pain.Vegeto destroys him with a basic blast.Then,he
lands.Gohan runs to him.Dende has come and healed everyone.
Gohan:DAD...err,whatever.You were great.But,aren't you going to stay fused forever now?
Vegeto:Of course not you goose.I'll ask Buu to absorb me,so that we defuse.Then,he'll simpy vomit us.

THE END
Edited by no name, Jul 5 2012, 07:16 AM.
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In case you didn't notice,i finished it.
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