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A request I made; shadow
Topic Started: May 31 2012, 07:34 PM (341 Views)
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This is a request I made for kaio-shin. Any comments and critiques are welcome!

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The background is cool, I don't like the low opacity box over the middle though, little distracting, as is the light at the top. The render is put in a cool place, and the colouring is very good, I like this signature but I've seen better work from you though, still very good.
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I'm not in love with this sig, Ana Banana. I feel like the concept itself was pretty cool (to have him look like he was sorta powering up and to have duplicated versions of the layer practically making the background and whatnot) but I feel like all the cool ideas weren't as well executed as they should have been. The background doesn't look very appealing to me and the light source is too vivid instead of gently blending with all the other elements of the sig.

HOWEVAH, and this is a big howevah 'cause I know you normally struggle with this part -- the text here looks pretty damn neat! It's super simple yet it totally fits! So there's progress there!

I'd say of all the amazing work I've seen from you this one doesn't quite match your level of awesomeness, but it's STILL a really decent sig and I'm sure Kaio-Shin would enjoy it a lot.

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One thing I like is that you're making more and more sigs with big width which for some reason I've always preferred, or something very small overall. I think Width really gives a GFXer more versatility in what he or she can do.

This specific sig however isn't one of my favorites. Clearly as everyone has said the Bordering done by the light layer on top the render isn't very pleasing to the eye. I don't know if you have tried or if it'll look any better, but if it inverted the other way around maybe it might be better. The background I like but even then, it's sort of rough. I think blending it more would be appealing. The text is very plain, not saying it bad or not but I think the whole sig looks plain. I know it was a request but it was an open request so it's pretty much a showoff. I dont like it very much but as far as concept but obviously the technical stuff is fairly neat. The render is properly positioned i think. THe light source might either be too intense or the direction might need to change but other wise it's got a light source. The little bit of blue bothers me a little but I'm not sure if that is their on purpose or not.

I know you've done much better, this just wasn't your best imo.

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Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate it!
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