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Dragon Ball Z: Last Days Ch.1 The Extra Green Mile; My very first DBZ centric fan fic. I hope you like it.
Topic Started: May 29 2012, 09:51 PM (2,147 Views)
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AUTHOR’S NOTE: Before you begin reading, understand first that this is a different mythos of DBZ. Without even going into a full detail, I have changed thingas around so that the movies and anime are canon, and changed some things around so that overall, it makes more sense. I hope you enjoy my newest story, but don’t worry you pretty little head, I haven’t forgotten about a certain little bar. ;)






Dragon Ball Z: Broly, the Last Days of HIFL


It was another day in HFIL. It would be a regular day if not for the hundreds of multicolored ogres gathered in one spot, each and every one with a regulator in hand.


“What is a regulator?”, you might ask.

Simple. A regulator is the newest invention and addition in Other World defensive firearms. Hell, it’s the only firearm in Other World. But, with the addition of so many powerful, evil beings over the years, such as the tyrannical King Kold, and his sons, Frieza, and Cooler. The dark Super Namek, Lord Slug. All these lords of death and destruction backed by most of their minions and subjects.

Then came Cell.

He nearly destroyed all of HFIL, and threatened to obliterate the rest of Other World before Goku, Pikkon and a few other brave and noble heroes managed to defeat him.

For the longest time. Ever since evil beings with more power then the ogres could handle started to congregate in the bowels of the underworld, the ogres of HFIL have done their best with magic, or calling upon heroes to restrain and keep the villains imprisoned but at last, finally, change had come, technology had come. Regulators are guns. Guns that shoot out special devices that latch on, pierce the skin of their target, and drain them of energy. With these new weapons, even the mighty Cell can do nothing but lie in his…..cell. Unable to even pry one single patch of of his body, as he, like all the rest are restrained. An eternity of weakness. Truly, a fate worse than death lies after it. But the one coming to HFIL…..this newest inmate…..this newest monster, he was unlike any other. He was a legend.

A green ogre ran up to another ogre in the center of the group. “I just got off the phone with King Yemma! The Supreme Kai himself is escorting the prisoner, along with the Grand Kai and the other four Kais!” A shocked expression came over the other ogre’s face. “By all creation…..I’d heard tale of this Broly, but for all the Kais…..what power could this saiyan possibly hold? How could such power be defeated?!” Before a another word could be spoken, the ground began to shudder and crackle with lightning. A Kai was coming down to HFIL. In the blink of an eye, where once was empty, barren ground, stood the Supreme Kai. He was small for a god, but not to be underestimated by any means. With him was the Grand Kai, a being of less power, but a Kai none the less. And in-between them were the four Kais that rules over the four corners of the galaxy. But they were not being watched, oggeled, or talked to in the least. All ogre eyes were on the figure in the center of the gods. Wrapped in head to toe with black garbs with burning white markings on them, stood what could only be the Legendary Super Saiyan, the monster named Broly. Finally, a blue ogre spoke. “I…I thought zat he vas a giant?”

The Supreme Kai, like all the other Kais had his eyes closed, deep in concentration as he and the others barely managed to keep Broly in his base form restrained, spoke. “Everyone move. Now. Shoot him with a volley of regulator devices first. Then move.” The ogres nearest unloaded into the saiyan, and within moments, nearly sixty-seven small, circular devices dotted the black cloth, digging into the pale skin underneath, draining his energy. There was a slight sound, nearly inaudible, but it was there, then silence again. The Kais very slowly relaxed, but only a fraction. “More.” the Supreme Kai said. More regulators unloaded onto Broly, adding up to a total of one-hundred, ninety-two devices on Broly. The kais were able to relax much more then. “We must hurry! We’ve got to get Broly to Cell S-11!” King Kai exclaimed. “All of you bozos out of the way!” And so the Kais rushed, levitating Broly off the ground and keeping him calm and sedated. Within no time at all, they arrived. In the deepest canyon in HFIL, were only the sound of wind disturbs the haunting silence. In that canyon in a cave, and in that cave, Broly’s cell. Well, not a cell in the traditional sense, but more like a dome of pure energy. It was a special dome, which gave of nothing but positive emotions, making raging monsters into calmer ones. “Hurry! Hurry!” East Kai shouted. “The weather in HFIL gives my hair split ends!” North Kai, better known as King Kai, scoffed at her. “Ha! Yeah right, lady! Who’re you fooling with that bad wig of yours?!” “Silence!” Supreme Kai exclaimed. “That’s enough from the both of you! Now get this monster inside the barrier now!” With a heave and a ho, Broly was shoved into the barrier. The Kais had a congratulatory moment of high fives all around.
Even though something very great had been accomplished, the Supreme Kai still had a look of worry on his face. “Ogres!” The seven ogres that had followed the Kais stood at attention. “Yes, sir!” The supreme Kai gave his instructions. “I want Broly monitored non stop! Set up shifts if you have to, but don’t, and I repeat, do not under any circumstances leave Broly alone for a moment! “Yes, Supreme Kai, you can count on the ogres of HFIL!”

The Kais, after making sure everything was in order in HFIL, left one by one. The Supreme and Grand Kais were the last to go. “Now listen, dudes! I’ll be sending some heroes down here to help if you need them!” the Grand Kai said to the ogre forces still gathered were the Kais landed. “Gee, thank you, Grand Kai, we could use all the help you might need from now on. Hell, we’ll need it not just for Broly but for…..him.” an ogre said with a smile, then a frown on his face. “Yes….” Supreme Kai mused for a moment. “Until he is found and taken care of, we cannot let up even for a moment. Take care of yourselves….all of Otherworld is in your debt, gentlemen.” The Supreme Kai vanished, transmitting back to his own world. “Damn! Thought he’d never leave, man!” The Grand Kai dug in his coat pocket, taking out some rolled up white sticks. “How ‘bout you boys come and “relax” for a while. All this stress can’t be good for the soul, baby!” Within the hour, the skies of HFIL were clouded by the sticky-icky, with rock and roll blasting towards the heavens. Friday in HIFL, had become High day in HFIL.

Ch. 1 end.
Edited by FollowtheLeader, May 29 2012, 09:53 PM.
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Short and to the point. Like how you inform the reader your basis for reading and understanding your version of the DBZ universe, makes it easy to accept and get on with the tale.

Interesting... who's this 'him' fella, they reference too? Worse than Broly, hey, he seems bad enough to the Ogres and the Kai's.

Lol at the 'High Day in HFIL', funny image.
I liked the idea of all the Kai's meeting together and acting as a single unit, although in the Buu saga, Supreme Kai was unheard of and never seen by the other Kai's.

Got a story to tell here.
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Nicholas D. Wildwood gets the credit for creating and designing the sig.

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May 29 2012, 10:12 PM
Short and to the point. Like how you inform the reader your basis for reading and understanding your version of the DBZ universe, makes it easy to accept and get on with the tale.

Interesting... who's this 'him' fella, they reference too? Worse than Broly, hey, he seems bad enough to the Ogres and the Kai's.

Lol at the 'High Day in HFIL', funny image.
I liked the idea of all the Kai's meeting together and acting as a single unit, although in the Buu saga, Supreme Kai was unheard of and never seen by the other Kai's.

Got a story to tell here.
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Aw yeah. Thanks for the kind words, man. I'm planing on making this really something. Look forward to what I got to say. Ch 2 is already on its way. And you'll see who he is soo enough.
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Yep...Definitely interesting and very well written. You've got my attention and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Although, you DID have me worried there, when I first read the "regulator" word. I thought for sure, it would be a porn story:))
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