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Ichigo and Orihime
Topic Started: May 22 2012, 02:07 AM (436 Views)
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Now this is pretty good. I like this but there are a couple of bad points about this. firstly it's the depth again your light source is all over the place. You should create a light source in the direction of your flow helps certain parts shine & I'm assuming but the face was the focal in this? you really wanted to work around that. always keep your focal out there don't cover it up with to much effects.
Version 3 is the one I like. i'll rate it 7.5/10 :)
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I like version two the best. the blending is great, and not having the darkening around the edges gives it a warmer feel. The first is good too, because the same darkened edges remind me of flashback in movies or something, was that what you were going for?

My only two problems with this piece is the colour scheme and the text. I can understand why you picked orange and pink, and that's fine, but adding yellow and red in there makes it this really odd mix between contrast and complimentation between the colours. I think that this would work better as a black and white piece, where you wouldn't have that. Your text feels like it's sticking out of nowhere and still has that default feel to it. Try downloading some fonts? 1001Fonts is a good website for those.

Your textless pieces are great. Any chance you can put up a B&W version of this so we can see? :D

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Here are the first two in back and white. I am working on the one with text and hopefully i will have that one up soon.

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Haine
May 22 2012, 02:08 PM
Here are the first two in back and white. I am working on the one with text and hopefully i will have that one up soon.

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I think these are both bloody amazing. Especially the first one :D

How do you feel about them?
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May 22 2012, 02:08 PM
Here are the first two in back and white. I am working on the one with text and hopefully i will have that one up soon.

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Those are really good in B&W, you should take the burn or dodge tool in photoshop and darken some areas to help create depth.
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This looks really nice, the B&W version is my favourite, good work.
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Most of what people said on here is right and I don't think I need to add anymore critique. I also might add that if you erased some parts with a soft brush from the black and white one to add some color, it would look much better.

The one part that does throw me off is the black parts in the corners of the signature. I think the signature looks better with full color. It's the part that throws me off the most.

It is a pretty signature so I give it a 7/10. Just try not to add those shady areas.
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