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Aqua Anime Girl Signature
Topic Started: May 21 2012, 11:15 PM (1,229 Views)
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Version One: Borderless and Textless
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Version Two: Textless
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Version Three: Textless and without the border around the girl
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KidBuu: Makes me sick looking at it. Not that it's bad but the whole thing makes me seasick. I understand you have a dark border around it but the entirety of the focal point has too much light all around it. It NEEDS MORE DEPTH

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I think the white borders around your renders are bothering me because although they're helpful to your style I don't think it's thebest especially in these versions and when you do it without the border I think you need to work on cleaning it up more because you still have some white so give a nice thin but clean smear to really try blending it in. I think this could be better, way better.

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May 22 2012, 11:41 AM
KidBuu: Makes me sick looking at it. Not that it's bad but the whole thing makes me seasick. I understand you have a dark border around it but the entirety of the focal point has too much light all around it. It NEEDS MORE DEPTH

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I don't know if that's intentional or not, but that comes off as cruel and unprofessional. I don't know why you're talking on behalf of Kid Buu, Rebel, but whoever said that is being harsh.

Haine, I think that this is good. I like this style. #3 is the best, I think, because the white border around the girl is quite off-puting and not having it there makes the girl blend that little bit better. I think that the text needs a bit of working on again, in #4 because the font feels quite default and just stuck on. I would move it in line with her eyes on the other side. That way, it's not interfering with your light source, and is align a little better.

I think this is good, and has a lot of potential. Keep it up. I like seeing work from you.

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Byakko
May 22 2012, 11:54 AM
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May 22 2012, 11:41 AM
KidBuu: Makes me sick looking at it. Not that it's bad but the whole thing makes me seasick. I understand you have a dark border around it but the entirety of the focal point has too much light all around it. It NEEDS MORE DEPTH

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I don't know if that's intentional or not, but that comes off as cruel and unprofessional. I don't know why you're talking on behalf of Kid Buu, Rebel, but whoever said that is being harsh.

Haine, I think that this is good. I like this style. #3 is the best, I think, because the white border around the girl is quite off-puting and not having it there makes the girl blend that little bit better. I think that the text needs a bit of working on again, in #4 because the font feels quite default and just stuck on. I would move it in line with her eyes on the other side. That way, it's not interfering with your light source, and is align a little better.

I think this is good, and has a lot of potential. Keep it up. I like seeing work from you.

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I wasn't being harsh on purpose. The colours in the signature genuinely make me feel sick (Don't ask was having a bad night) It was never ment to upset her or anything. Rebel posted it for me because every time I looked at it my head started to spin. Don't take it the wrong way please.
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Byakko
May 22 2012, 11:54 AM
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May 22 2012, 11:41 AM
KidBuu: Makes me sick looking at it. Not that it's bad but the whole thing makes me seasick. I understand you have a dark border around it but the entirety of the focal point has too much light all around it. It NEEDS MORE DEPTH

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I don't know if that's intentional or not, but that comes off as cruel and unprofessional. I don't know why you're talking on behalf of Kid Buu, Rebel, but whoever said that is being harsh.
I know man, I always seem like the bad guy. See what these people make me do :'(

:p Kidding, I did it for KidBuu, but I think it was the BG that possibly made him sick. It's a wavy blurry BG. Maybe he gots mesmerized

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The dark spots take too much away from the focal. You have interesting colours and effects going on here but it's a little low quality and blurry, maybe add some sharpness to the BG?
Good work, 6/10

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The first one is the best out of the bunch. The black border doesn't do it any justice imo. I would try using white. I like the way you used different shades of blue in this one. It is beautiful when you first glance at it. It is a nice signature, but does have some things I don't like Some parts looked a bit over sharpened which is what threw me off from being a fantastic signature. I think if you used some kind of peach from her face that would have added more color to the background. Also, the render has a white border around it. I'm not sure if you added it or if it was already on there. Thick borders on renders usually make a signature look less refined.

Overall, this signature is nice, but some of those things I explained make it not your best work. I give it a 7/10. Keep at it though because I can see that you got skill.
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hmm I might not be as knowledgeable in this sort of stuff but i really liked all of them especially the new one

its just so cool and watery

maybe im too easily impressed or its just that good but nonetheless its awesome
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