The story of Gohan

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The story of Gohan; Old story
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~~Super Vegetto~~	May 21 2012, 08:15 PM Post #1
Posts: 3,460 Group: Suspended Member #7,405 Joined: March 6, 2012	Story is what if Raditz left Earth with Gohan after hard battle with Goku and Piccolo. Raditz manages to kill Goku but because of badly damage from special beam cannon he tells Piccolo that 2 stronger saiyans (Nappa and Vegeta) will arrive to finish them, so he leaves Earth with Gohan. Gohan was unconscious because Raditz damaged his head which also lead him into forgeting memories of his father and family and who he realy is. In time Gohan becomes like pure blooded saiyan. Even if his human side is there Radiz made him to care only about his strenght which was Raditzs goal. He was on Friezas planet where he trained before getting into real battle. Gohan and Raditz worked for Frieza in that time yust like Vegeta and Nappa. In some far away planet of darkens they were sent to eliminate wierd species or (Yakkon species). Raditz soon realized they are outmached so they create artificial moon which gives them power to transform into Giant Ape. After the fight Raditz tells Gohan the story that happend and tells him that he kidnapped him from his father (not telling from which planet). Gohan though Raditz was his father, and then Gohans saiyan rage breakes which leads into killing Raditz. Somewhere on that dark planet Babidi was traveling for slavering the Yakkon specias where he finds Yakkon. After getting Yakkon in Majin seal Dabura and Babidi asked Yakoon about thing that made his species complety destroyed. They find out Gohan didnt leave the planet so Babidi used his magic to take control of Gohan. Gohan starts hearing voice in his head but because he was blinded with rage after killing Raditz he decides to follow voice that he never followed when he was a kid. Babidi offers Gohan powers which Gohan accepts and lets himself into spell which unlockes his potential beyond limits and made him Majin Gohan. Babidi first managed to take control of Dabura,Pui-pui and after Yakoon he takes control over Gohan. In that time Goku kills Frieza. Vegeta joined the Earth and some things changed. Trunks arrived and tells story about Androids. Trunks talked only with Goku and he tells him about his master Gohan the long forgoten son of Goku. Goku already tryed to use dragon balls to bring Gohan back but somehow Gohan refused like Goku did on Yardrat. Gohan heard the voice when he was little but he didnt knowed anything about the voice so he though that its yust his mind that creates that voices. Goku tells Trunks about Gohan and how he never heard about him since Raditz arrival. Cell games happend where Goku died fighthing with Cell.Android 16 apologise to everyone for terror Androids done leading him to selfdestruction along with Cell. Cell didnt died but becomed stronger after Near death exp. In big smoke death beam strikes Future Trunks which leads Vegeta to unlocking SSJ2 and destroying Cell in instant. Goku keaps training and so did everyone else. After years Babidis plan of resurecting Majin buu gets him on Earth. Goku and Vegeta along with others manage to destroy Buu before hatching with help of Supreme kai. Babidi uses his spells to summon Majin Gohan who is on another planet. Before they destroyed Babidi and Dabura ,Babidi tells them about Warrior who poses powers beyond natural limits which no ammount of training can prepare them. He tells them that warrior is a Hybrid created from saiyan - and human species. Should i continue xD Majin Gohan
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Megasaiyan	May 21 2012, 09:14 PM Post #2
Osz Karoly Szilard Posts: 977 Group: Member Member #7,360 Joined: February 25, 2012 Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Haven't read any yet	Hmmm...hard to tell. It's a bit tricky but I guess you could try it.



Auld-Dog	May 22 2012, 04:47 PM Post #3
Posts: 375 Group: Member Member #7,334 Joined: February 18, 2012	Doesnt read so much as a story, more a series of notes that outline a basic plot. Makes you kinda realise too how much of an asset Gohan was during the Saiyan and Frieza saga, without him and his 'Rages' a lot of situations would been hopeless. Taking on Napa, arriving on Namek, fooling Vegeta with the Dragon Radar, fighting Guldo and Reaccoom, helping gath Dragonballs, taking on Frieza in his 2nd, 3rd and even final state... How Krillin could have managed on his own makes you wonder... I liked the idea of Vegeta going Super Saiyan 2 and defeating Cell, seems believeable. Gohan being evil from an early age, especially as a Majin could be a dangerous opponent. Has potential in its own right. Do you plan to tell the rest as a story or in the same format as your first post?
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amsmagic	May 23 2012, 04:05 AM Post #4
The Magic Man. Aka Street Magician Posts: 554 Group: Member Member #7,522 Joined: April 8, 2012 Favourite Anime DragonBall Z What Browser do you use? Safari Favourite Manga Naruto	if you don't plan to turn this into an actual story.. and not an outline.. could I do that? It'd take me a couple months, but I would love to take your idea and actually write it into an alternate dbz universe story, of course crediting you with the story premise. I could just up and write it, but I won't without your premission. and that is only if you don't plan to move your outline into a full story. If you do, I can't wait to see it.
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