DBZ: The Return of the Saiyans

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DBZ: The Return of the Saiyans; Saiyan Saga
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FamousBueller	May 19 2012, 05:48 PM Post #1
Super Asian Posts: 1,336 Group: Member Member #7,561 Joined: April 20, 2012 Favourite Anime dragonball z/gt	After Raditz defeat, Piccolo reveals Goku will be brought back to life using the dragonballs. As radotz is dying, he mentions his scouter is also a transmitter & states that 3 more saiyans will arive on Earth in a year Piccolo finishes off raditz regrows his missing arm & takes gohan to train with after seeing his hidden power. Bulma rebuilds the scouter & uses it to find Tien, Chaotzu, Yajoribe & Yamcha at Kamis request. Kami has taken Goku to king yemmas to recieve special training from North Kai 1 year later..... 3 space pods land on earth, the saiyans step out, one tall & built, one short with a widows peak & the other makes a similar appearance to one of the z fighters. By raising one finger, a near by city explodes, gohan & piccolo the 2 closes see the exosion. The saiyans scouters go off & pick up 7 power levels over 1,000. They head towars the 2 nearest power levels & run into piccolo & gohan. Soon as they arrive Krillin pops out of no where. It looks to be 3 on 3 but the big saiyan uses his scouter & believes he can defeat him on his own. The short saoyan calls the big guy by his.name "Nappa wait dont we have any Saibamen left?", Nappa checks & replies "Umm let me see, yes Prince Vegeta, we have 6 left", "good lets see how well these 3 handle 6 saibamen" while planting the saibamen seeds Vegeta says "leave the namekian alone, he knows aboutthe dragonballs". After the 6 saibamen hatch, Tien, Chaotzu & Yamcha arrive. Tien fights first & demolishes the saibamen with only a few hits. Yamchas next & proves his training was worth it. After throwing blows with saibaman, he finishes him with a kamehameha....well thats what it seems until the saibaman latches onto yamcha & blows them both up. Enrage Krillin fires of a scatted beam that destroys the remaining saibamen but leaves the saiyans unharmed. One remaining saibaman tries to attack gohan but piccolo destroys it. Nappa steps in & charges towards Krillin but is attacked by Piccolo. After knocking him into a mountain, nappa charges after tien & the 2 begin fighting. Tien is going all out but nothing fazes Nappa as he smashes Tien into the ground then kicks him out of the way. Krillin tries to stop him but nappa fires off a blast. Chaotzu sneaks up behind nappa & latches on. He self destructd but when the smoke clears nappa is unharmed. Krillin & piccolo double team nappa while gohan stares in fear. Tien gets himself back on his feet & charges up the Tri Beam technique while krillin & piccolo fight nappa. Tien fires the beam & connects with nappa but even the power of the tri beam does little damage. Tien falls unconcious & krillin launches a destructo disc, nappa tries to block it but vegeta tells him to dodge it. Barely dodging it the disc slices nappas face. Charging after krillin gohan fires a full power masenko. The blast actually hurts nappa & he attacks gohan. He kicks in the stomach the roundhouse kicks him sending him flying backwards. Nappa charges up his mouthbeam & fires but piccolo jumps in the way to take the blast. Suddenly vegetas scouter goes crazy and picks up a power level that's over 6,000 More coming soon. I think yall will like this story, its my twist on the dbz story Edited by FamousBueller, Jun 25 2012, 03:55 PM.



Megasaiyan	May 19 2012, 09:00 PM Post #2
Osz Karoly Szilard Posts: 977 Group: Member Member #7,360 Joined: February 25, 2012 Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Haven't read any yet	One more Saiyan?! The Z Fighters couldn't handle two, let alone three!!!:)



FamousBueller	May 20 2012, 01:41 AM Post #3
Super Asian Posts: 1,336 Group: Member Member #7,561 Joined: April 20, 2012 Favourite Anime dragonball z/gt	Updated the story



Megasaiyan	May 20 2012, 07:38 AM Post #4
Osz Karoly Szilard Posts: 977 Group: Member Member #7,360 Joined: February 25, 2012 Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Haven't read any yet	I think the third one is Turles:)



+ Pyrus	May 20 2012, 07:46 AM Post #5
Posts: 39,342 Group: Legend Member #5,088 Joined: August 1, 2010 Gender Not Specified Country Chile	Interesting. Who could the third Saiyan be? Turles, Broly, Paragus, Tarble even? Or perhaps an original character? Hmmm.
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Auld-Dog	May 20 2012, 12:22 PM Post #6
Posts: 375 Group: Member Member #7,334 Joined: February 18, 2012	Was your first post the 1st chapter or just a basic note to introduce us to your planned fic? Basic read, another saiyan, hey? Z fighters got creamed by Nappa alone. Wonder what your planning with this... i reckon it will be an original saiyan creation and maybe... ... he will be an evil adversary for the future, maybe join the Z fighters for a bit but then splinter off from them, create his own group then take on the Z warriors later... Maybe its a woman....
	Big thumbs up to member, -Zero- for the means to the sig. Nicholas D. Wildwood gets the credit for creating and designing the sig. GUYVER: World War 2 Link to my Guyver fanfic set in an alternate World War 2. DBZ Legends DBZ Legends, revamp of my old fan fic The Spartan ::: Galaxy 8,291's Schism Troupe ZeroVerse collaboration stories.


FamousBueller	May 21 2012, 12:15 PM Post #7
Super Asian Posts: 1,336 Group: Member Member #7,561 Joined: April 20, 2012 Favourite Anime dragonball z/gt	I actually had it being Tarble then Tarble was turned into Android 16 & the androids looked more like androids but i scrapped that idea Edited by FamousBueller, May 21 2012, 07:51 PM.



Auld-Dog	May 21 2012, 07:40 PM Post #8
Posts: 375 Group: Member Member #7,334 Joined: February 18, 2012	Sounds like it could be interesting. Wait... are you saying your not going to continue this then OR... ? Be a shame matey
	Big thumbs up to member, -Zero- for the means to the sig. Nicholas D. Wildwood gets the credit for creating and designing the sig. GUYVER: World War 2 Link to my Guyver fanfic set in an alternate World War 2. DBZ Legends DBZ Legends, revamp of my old fan fic The Spartan ::: Galaxy 8,291's Schism Troupe ZeroVerse collaboration stories.


FamousBueller	May 21 2012, 07:43 PM Post #9
Super Asian Posts: 1,336 Group: Member Member #7,561 Joined: April 20, 2012 Favourite Anime dragonball z/gt	Writer-Fighter May 21 2012, 07:40 PM Sounds like it could be interesting. Wait... are you saying your not going to continue this then OR... ? Be a shame matey Oh yes im doing the whole dbz over the way i think it shudve been done



FamousBueller	May 30 2012, 02:18 PM Post #10
Super Asian Posts: 1,336 Group: Member Member #7,561 Joined: April 20, 2012 Favourite Anime dragonball z/gt	Added sum more, i will later reveal the 3rd saiyan today



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