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Dragonball Z Legacy; 5 years later after EOZ
Topic Started: Mar 24 2012, 02:56 AM (791 Views)
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This is my Dragonball Z story that takes place after the Buu arc. I have been writing this story for quite sometime now. I'll try to keep you posted with chapters as much as possible. Please tell me your honest opinions kindly. I would like to know what you really think and how it could be better. Suggestions ,questions, ideas, etc.







Chapter 1: The New Beginning


It has been 5 years since the 28th World’s Martial Arts Tournament. Goku took Uub under his wing and decided to start training him.
Goku and Uub were training on Dende’s Lookout. Goku was giving Uub one final test before sending him back to his village to rest and spend time with his family.
“Ok Uub, are you ready for one final test?” Goku asked, as he was walking towards Uub. “Yes Goku I’m ready… I won’t hold back. Uub said, while he started to power up.
Goku smirked and charged at Uub while charging a ki blast. As soon as he got close to him he fired it. Uub dodged it and flew up into the air and shot an energy blast at Goku. Goku deflected the blast and charged at Uub again. They were both exchanging punches and kicks.
Uub dodged one of Goku’s punches and returned a punch to Goku’s face, knocking him backwards. Uub then started shooting a volley attack that hit him numerous times. Goku felled on the ground and slid across. He then jumped up onto his feet and looked at Uub with another smirk on his face.
“Good job.. But now it’s round 2.” Goku transformed into a Super Saiyan then charged at Uub. He started throwing punches while Uub was dodging them. Uub then started returning punches back. Goku kicked Ubb into the air. Shortly after he dashed right after him and grabbed Ubb by his leg and threw him down on the Lookout.
Goku jumped down and landed on the Lookout.
“You’re doing really well Uub keep up the good work” said Goku as he was charging up a kamehameha. Ubb jumped up on his feet.
“Thank you Goku, My goal is to become even stronger than you!” Uub yelled
“ Hehe well you’re not going to become stronger than me from just talking about it are you?” Goku said jokingly as he was firing the kamehameha at Uub.
Then I guess we’ll just have to see about that won’t we!? “Ka…Me….Ha….Me….HA!!!!” yelled Uub as he fired his beam right towards Goku as both of their beams collided.
“Push harder Uub! It’s going to take more than that to bring me down. Goku said as he was still holding on to his kamehameha, straining from the beam struggle.

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At Orange Star University

Gohan was at school lecturing his class. He had become a college professor at Orange Star University in Satan City.
“Alright class, that’ll be enough today. Enjoy your break and I’ll have your quizzes graded when you come back.” Gohan said.
The bell rang and the students all stood up and started leaving the class room while putting their quizzes in the basket on Gohan’s desk.
Gohan started taking the papers out of the basket and putting them in his briefcase as he was standing up to leave the classroom as well.
“Whew, last class for the day, now it’s finally time to go home.”
Gohan walked out of the building and was looking everywhere to make sure no one was around before he flew off.
Gohan arrived at his home at Mount Paozu. Chi-Chi was hanging up laundry at her house next door.
“Hey Mom “ Gohan said.
“Oh hey Gohan, how was school today?”
“It was good. I have a lot of quizzes to grade but hey, where is Goten?
“He left awhile ago. I think he went on a date with a new girlfriend of his.”
“Ohh… I see.” Gohan said as he was looking down, smiling, and thinking to himself. “He can be such a slacker sometimes.”
“Well mom I’m gonna go get started.” Gohan said.
“Ok sweetie, see you later.” Chi-Chi said as she turned back to hanging up her laundry. Gohan entered his house. He went into his office, sat his briefcase down on his desk, and sat down himself. He started grading the papers and reading through some of his books to prepare the next lesson.

Meanwhile------------
At Capsule Corp

Trunks just arrived from school himself, now a student at a West City college and studying to become a scientist just like Dr. Briefs and Bulma. Trunks was heading to Bulma’s lab to talk to her. When Trunks got there he walked in and saw Bulma sitting at her computer typing. “Hey mother how’s it going?”
“Hey Trunks.” Bulma said looking up from her computer. “How was school?”
“It was great. My professor gave us a long lecture today and of course a quiz at the end. I have a big assignment when I go back, so looks like I have a lot of studying to do.
“That’s good Trunks. If you need any help just come ask me and I’ll try my best to help.”
“Thanks mother.”
“No problem kiddo, and in not too long you’ll be the president of Capsule Corp.”
“Uhh… yes mom, that’d be great. But don’t think that’s a little sudden?”
“No not at all Trunks, I believe you could do it. But I do understand you’re still going to school and I’ll leave the pressure off you. Dad is getting sick and his time may be here soon so I’ve just been thinking about you taking over a lot lately.” Bulma said sadly.
“Yeah, grandpa’s time is near. But I’ll keep that in mind mother.” Trunks said.
“Thanks honey.” Bulma said.
“So what are you working on?” Trunks asked.
“Working on some new training equipment for your father. I already built him a training station in space because I was tired of hearing all the racket in the old gravity room. Ever since he has been spending all his time in there.”
“Well I may go check out it out.”
Trunks left and was heading to his room so he could relax and study. As he was walking down the hallway he saw Bulla walking towards him.”
“What’s up Trunks?” Bulla said as she walked passed him.
“What’s up Bulla? How’s it going?”
“Just got out of school and about to go talk to mom. Is she in her lab?”
“Yes, she’s in there. But I’ll see you later Bulla.”
“Alright, bye Trunks. Bulla said as she continued walking to Bulma’s lab.
Trunks went into his room and started to relax.

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Goten was on a date with his new girlfriend, Valese. They met up at a park in Satan City.

“Hey Valese, what do you say we go get some ice cream?”
“Oh sure Goten why not?”
“Alright, cool. So how ya been?” Goten said as they started walking.
“I’ve been good. Still trying to figure out what my parents really think about me having a boyfriend for the first time. What about you?”
“Well I’ve kinda been thinking about the same Valese.”
“But I’m sure they are ok with it.” Valese said
“Yeah hehe.” Goten said
“So are you still training with your brother?”
“Yeah, a little. I have to work a bunch now so haven’t been able to train as much as I want to. Goten said while putting his hands behind his head.
“Where do you work at?”
“At Capsule Corp.”
“Capsule Corp?! Wow! That’s impressive Goten. How did you manage to work there?”
“Dr. Briefs, the president of Capsule Corp is my best friend Trunks’s grandfather. And his mom gave me a job there so that what I do hehe.”
They stopped by an ice cream stand and got their ice cream cones.
“Movie?” Goten said
“I was thinking the same” Valese said
They started heading to go watch a movie.

Meanwhile-----------
Vegeta was training in his training station

Vegeta was in a newer model gravity room that Bulma created for him. The room’s new upgraded range for the gravity could go from 1-1200x earth’s gravity.
“This upgraded gravity room Bulma made for me will benefit my training beyond measures. When Kakarot was dead I’m sure wherever he was training at the higher increase of gravity there was the key for him to ascend to super saiyan 3. Last time I used one of these I could only train with 450x without hurting my body too much. Kakarot knew his limits and he didn’t put stress on his body, which is probably what, helps him get stronger. So I’ll do the same. I’ve gotten stronger since then of course, so I’ll start off with 800x and I will gradually improve.” Vegeta thought to himself
Vegeta turned on the machine and the gravity gradually increased. Vegeta started flying to get a fill of the gravity. He started shooting ki blast around the room.
“Ok, first I’ll do some pushups and set up to get a better fill of the gravity and so that I can get stronger.”

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Back on the Lookout

The collision of the beam struggle was coming close to an end.
“Wow Piccolo their power has reached an awesome new peak in just 5 years of training.” Dende said while holding on, not trying to be blown away from the impact of the colliding beams.”
“Your right Dende, they both have definally improved. I can’t believe Uub’s power. He is definally Majin Buu’s reincarnation. His increase is incredible.” Piccolo said.
“HeHe… Well with Goku training him what more do you expect?” Dende said.
Boom!!! There was a loud explosion from the center of the beams colliding. Goku and Uub both flew back from the impact of the explosion. Goku smashed into one of the towers falling down in the debris from the collapsing tower. Uub was knocked into the air and he started falling down and landed on Mr. Popo’s flowers.
“Oh my gosh! Goku! Uub! Are you alright? Dende said running towards Goku.
“Yes Dende, I’ve never been better! Goku said while he was standing up wiping debris off his torn blue gi. “I’ve been waiting for this day for 5 years now. Ever since the last Martial Arts Tournament I’ve seen a lot of potential in Uub. And I knew every moment through those 5 years the day will come where Uub would pass his training. He could one day be the savior of earth.
“I see Goku” Dende said
“Ubb are you ok Mr. Popo said.
“Yes Mr. Popo and I’m sorry about your flowers.”
“It’s ok Uub I can grow more. I should be congratulating you on how much your strength has increased. Well done for a boy of your age.” Mr. Popo said as he put his hand on Uub’s shoulder. “And I sense more potential in you.” Mr. Popo added.
“Hehe you all should be excited after that performance hehe.”
“Ahh King Kai how ya doin”? Goku said
“I’m doing well Goku just enjoying other world. And I’ve been keeping tabs on you and Uub I can tell your training has paid off so far.”
“Yes it has. Uub has gotten so much stronger since the last time we fought at the World Tournament.”
“Well Goku I have some good news for you. Do you remember when Grand Kai granted you a day to go back to earth for the World Tournament.” King Kai said
“Yeah?” Goku said
“Well like I said Goku I’ve been keeping tabs on you and Uub, as well as your training. I asked Grand Kai if it would be ok if you were able to bring Uub here so you both can train and have more opportunities to improve. You could also work on mastering your Super Saiyan 3 Goku so you’ll be able to use it when time need be.” King Kai said.
“That’s a good idea and it sounds exciting. We’ll be able to reach new levels in no time.”
“Hey Uub how would you like to go to Otherworld and train? There is so many new fighters you can meet and your power will increase in no time if you go there with me to train, what do you say?” Goku asked Uub.
“Yes Goku, that’d be great, it does sound exciting!” Uub yelled. “
“Only Goku, earth’s hero will get random opportunities to go train in Otherworld.” Piccolo said.
“Hehe I guess it’s all the credit I have built up there over the years.” Goku said smiling and putting his hands behind his head.
“But Piccolo when we all pass off to the next world I have somebody I still have to introduce you to.” Goku said looking at Piccolo.
“Really? And who might he be?” Piccolo asked.
“His name is Pikkon. He is one of Otherworld’s toughest fighters. I’ve competed and trained with Pikkon for many years, and I tell you, he is one strong fighter. I told him I would have to introduce you to and I will someday.”
“Hehe Goku, I will be looking forward to that day.” Piccolo said.
“Ok King Kai, I’ll head that way shortly.”
“See you soon Goku.” King Kai said before he left.
“Hey Uub, I’ll be back shortly.” Goku said
Goku used Instant Transmission to go to Mount Paozu

Meanwhile----------
Goku arrives at Mount Paozu

He started walking to Gohan’s house.
“Hello? Anybody home?” Goku said pushing the door open and walking in.
“I’m in here dad” Gohan said sitting at a table looking through books and grading papers.
“Hey Gohan how ya doin?”
“Awe the usual. Just grading my students’ papers.“
“Cool. But Gohan will you do me a favor?
“ What is it dad?” Gohan said while he was still looking through his books on the table.
“I’m going to otherworld for some training. I was wondering if you could cover for me this time with Chi-Chi. See, I just got back then another opportunity just came up for me to go train some more. Which I have been waiting for it for a long time now.” Goku said
“Oh really? With Uub?” Gohan said as he looked up.
“Yup” Goku answered. “I can tell you have been training as well.”
“Yeah, I have. I’ve been training Pan too. She’s getting really strong herself. I have been working on making my Mystic form stronger by transforming. Piccolo has been training with me too. Haha reminds me of the old days when I used to train with him when I was a little boy."
“Yeah, I just talked to Piccolo on the Lookout. That’s where me and Uub were training at before I came here. But oh yeah your power would increase drastically from that, I wish you the best of luck and I’m so proud of you Gohan. You have achieved a whole new level of strength and there is no tellin when you will have to use it so be ready, always.” Goku said seriously “then maybe me and you will have to have another sparring session sometime.”
“Thanks dad. And yeah, just like the old times in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. Boy what a year that was haha.” Gohan said.
“Haha yup. Goku said

The door opens. It was Pan and Videl.

“Hey Videl, hey Pan.” Goku said.
“Hey Goku. How are you?” Videl said.
“Ah same o hehe.”
“Grandpa!” Pan yelled as she ran to him and hugged him. “Where have you been?” Pan asked staring at Goku seriously.
“I’ve been training with Uub, Pan. I have to make him stronger so he can one day be the savior of earth. And he is doing quite well.”
“That’s good Grandpa. I have been training with daddy. I am so much stronger than what I was at the last tournament. I can even beat uncle Goten.
“That’s good Pan I am so proud of you. I want you to keep training because the earth will need you one day. Hehe you may even be stronger than your dad one day.” Goku said winking at Gohan. Gohan blushed with embarrassment.
“You have so much potential in you Pan. When you bring it all out I know you can be one of earth’s greatest heroes. You remind me so much of your father from how strong you are at such a young age and I know you can keep improving.”
“Thanks Grandpa I won’t stop training will make you proud one day.”
“That’s my Pan. Well I’m gonna go pick up Uub now I will be back soon to be with you guys after we get done training.” Goku said
“Ok see ya dad.” Gohan said
“See ya Grandpa.” Pan said hugging him one last time.

Goku used Instant Transmission once more to go back to the Lookout to get Uub then head to Otherworld.
Goku arrived at the Lookout.

“Are you ready Uub?” Goku asked
“Ugh… yeah.” Muttered Uub.
“Grab my hand.” Goku said.

Ubb did then they left, heading to Otherworld.
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Chapter Two: The Training Is In Session...


Goku and Uub arrive at Otherworld.
Goku and Uub both appeared right in front of Grand Kai’s mansion. They were greeted by King Kai, Olibu, and Pikon.
“Hey Goku!” King Kai said walking up.
“Oh hey, King Kai, it’s nice to see you again.” Goku said while he and Uub started walking towards them. “Pikkon, Olibu, It’s nice to see you guys too. Goku said
“Hey Goku, didn’t think I would see you here this soon.” Pikkon said.
“Neither did I. But you’re always welcome here anytime to train Goku so that’s all that matters.” Said Olibu.
“Hehe right guys. Well right here is my student, Uub. He is really powerful for a kid his age and my goal is to get him as strong as possible so he can one day be the savior of earth, just like we were at one time right Olibu?” Goku asked
“Exactly Goku.” Olibu said.
“And Uub, this is King Kai. He is my master. He has taught me a lot over the years and if it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t be half as strong”. Goku said.
“Hello… It’s nice to meet you all. I am very thankful to have the privilege to coming here to train.” Uub said.
“You are very welcome Uub. I hope you get the most out of your training. So shall we show Uub around?” King Kai said pointing toward the training ground
“Yeah sure let’s go!” Goku yelled as he, Uub, Pikkon, and Olibu followed King Kai.

Meanwhile-------------
Back to Mount Paozu
Gohan was halfway finished with the grading of the quizzes and reading the next lesson. Pan was putting on her training gi that Goku gave her. Gohan sat his pen down and stood up.
“Pan are you almost ready?”Gohan yelled
“Yes daddy, I’m coming. Pan yelled back.
Gohan changed into his new training gi that Piccolo made for him. It is similar to the one he fought Majin Buu in but he has a new symbol on it to show his new status of being a master to Pan. Just like Piccolo and Goku were masters to him.
“Well Pan… I guess Goten won’t be training with us today.” Gohan said as he started to fly in the air.
“I guess not.” Pan said as she did the same.
They started flying toward the woods. When they go to their location they dropped down and landed. Gohan took off his glasses, sat them on a rock and started stretching. Pan did the same as she was waiting on Gohan to instruct her on what to do first.
“Ok Pan, are you ready?” Gohan asked.
“Yes daddy I’m ready.” Pan answered.
“Ok, for a warm-up I want you to focus your energy.” Gohan instructed.
Pan went into a meditative state so she can focus her energy. Gohan continued to instruct Pan until she was ready.
“Ok, let’s spar.” Gohan said as he took a fighting stance. Pan did the same, staring seriously at Gohan, waiting on his okay to start sparring. Gohan gave her the okay to start and they did so. After going a few rounds Gohan decided to take a break. Gohan told Pan to finish up the training for the day with shooting 20 good kamehamehas at the mountains.
Gohan watched Pan work on her kamehamehas while he thought about his training… Pan was looking at Gohan puzzled, wondering what was on her father’s mind so much. When she finished her exercise she walked over to Gohan.
“Hey daddy, what’s on your mind?” Pan asked
Gohan looked at Pan. “Oh just giving my training some thought.”
“What about it?” Pan asked.
“Well you see Pan… I used to have the ability to transform into a Super Saiyan just like Goten. But I had all of my potential unlocked which took my ability to transform because I didn’t have the need anymore. But I have been wondering, what if I do have more power that I don’t know about. I’m going to try to find more power and gain my ability to transform again which will make me even stronger.”
“You would be strong then.” Pan said.
“But I’m going to need your help Pan. I know you could push me to my limits.”
Gohan went and got his glasses and they both took off and went back home.

Meanwhile-----------------
Vegeta Intensely Training

Vegeta was doing his pushups and setups trying to get used to the new change in gravity. After he got done he stood around wondering what he could do next.
“Hmm I wonder… What all did Bulma install in here.” Vegeta thought to himself.
He walked over to the main computer that was in the center of the room. He saw a variety of training gadgets that Bulma installed. He looked through all the buttons to see which button activated each of the gadgets.
“Let’s try this one.” Vegeta thought to himself as he pushed one of the buttons.
When he pressed the button a small door opened from the ceiling and some small robotic figures flew out. The computer then told Vegeta that the objects that fell were called Energy Deflector Droids. They are programmed to fly around the room and deflect Vegeta’s energy blast back at him. So he can work on his speed and endurance. They all got into their positions. Vegeta turned up the gravity to a higher level. He then fired off energy blast around the room and the blast started ricocheting. He started jumping around to avoid getting hit and this went on for hours….

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Back at Otherworld
When they arrived they saw many fighters training. They continued to walk and show Uub around.
“Oh hey Uub, you didn’t mind coming did you? I know it was time for you to go back to your village and family and I sort of dragged you here.” Goku said.
“Goku, I have been waiting for an opportunity like this my whole life. I’ll return later.” Uub responded.
They approached South, East, and West Kai who were watching their students train.
“Why look who it is.” South Kai said. The other two looked back to see who South Kai was talking about.
“Goku!” they both yelled.
“What are you doing here?” West Kai said.
“And who is that behind you?”
Oh just back to train. And I brought my new student, Uub.
“Hello.” Uub said
“What do you say we have a race Uub?” East Kai said.
Uhh… O-k...NOBODY wants to go against you in a stupid race!” South Kai yelled as he butted in.
“Well why not? He is a living being getting the opportunity to train in Otherworld I should at least be able to give him a test shouldn’t I?” East Kai asked
“You know… She’s not gonna stop until she gets her way you know.” West Kai said.
“I’ll race her. Uub said.
East Kai smiled. She then pulled up beside Uub on her scooter.”We will race to Grand Kai’s mansion and back here. East Kai said.”On your mark...Get set...Go!!
They both took off. They were flying right beside each other. After the race went on for a few moments they both arrived at the mansion. They both then they went to turn around and they saw something jump from the top of the mansion. It was Grand Kai. He landed beside them.
“Who is that?” Uub said to himself.
“Mind if I join the race?” Grand Kai asked.
“Why sure…” East Kai said as she looked puzzled.
They all continued to head to the Training Ground. Uub dashed past them and was on his way to victory. When he arrived back to the others Grand Kai was walking up behind them.
“Hey there.” Grand Kai said
“Grand Kai it’s nice to see you again.” Goku said.
Uub looked puzzled.”I thought I passed him back there!” Uub yelled
“Huh?” Goku confusingly said.
“Hahahahaha looks like them pass few years of training paid off.” Grand Kai said to himself.
By this time East Kai arrives.”Whoa those two are fast.” East Kai said.
“Oh… Grand Kai must have jumped in the race again.” Goku said.
“Goku it’s nice to see you again. And I see you brought a student as well this time.” Grand Kai said.
“Yup.” Goku replied.
“And I do believe I owe Pikkon and yourself some special training and you can bring your student too.” Grand Kai said.
“Wow that’s awesome!” Goku yelled.
“That is terrific news.” Pikkon said as he smiled from excitement.
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Didn't Vegeta already used those gadgets in DBZ? It's a good chapter overall
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Mar 31 2012, 08:07 PM
Didn't Vegeta already used those gadgets in DBZ? It's a good chapter overall
Yeah, but these gadgets are upgraded technology. You know Bulma, she can just about come up with anything for Vegeta. But the gravity machine can go up to higher levels of gravity. So basically all his training equipment is upgraded good enough so he can progress from the training. But thank you.
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Shall I continue? No one seems too enthused. Except you Megasaiyan;)
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Don't worry. Even my fanfic has only about 4 or 5 comments, but it still generates views daily, almost reaching 1000. What can I say? People here don't comment much, only read:)) If you really want to know more oppinions, there's always that fanfiction site you must have heard of. Try your story there too. It really depands how much you want it to be finished. Do you have many ideas in your head how to continue it, or only vaguely? Do you have a lot of time too? You can always do it as a hobby, if not for praises. Think about it and let me know what you decided! Cheers!
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Don't worry. Even my fanfic has only about 4 or 5 comments, but it still generates views daily, almost reaching 1000. What can I say? People here don't comment much, only read:)) If you really want to know more oppinions, there's always that fanfiction site you must have heard of. Try your story there too. It really depands how much you want it to be finished. Do you have many ideas in your head how to continue it, or only vaguely? Do you have a lot of time too? You can always do it as a hobby, if not for praises. Think about it and let me know what you decided! Cheers!
I don't really know if I want to or not. But I would like a link to that website just in case. Could you please send me one? And I take it that this a site with alot fanfic stories?? U would love to read some of them. I envoy fan made stories and what-ifs that could easily fit canon.
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Its nice, im workin on a story as well we should work together
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This is good man, keep up the good work. Is this all you have written so far or just all your posting for now? would love to read some more
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@Famous that sounds like a great idea. I would be more than happy to.
@espo that's all i have right now but i think i have a partner in crime now
@Megasaiyan I'll have more of this story coming your way.
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YAY:)) I thought you forgot about it already:D
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