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| Megasaiyan | Jan 25 2013, 12:22 PM Post #106 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 80: Keyword: Friendship On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Pan and Xevo met Pilaf and his gang and Pan even had a hard time beating their robot suits. But just when it seemed that victory was hers, an enormous fortress appeared out of nowhere and an unknown enemy captured our heroes. What horrible secrets lay inside the fortress? Find out today on Dragon Ball F! Xevo woke up with a terrible headache, as he needed a few moments to recover from the dizziness. He found himself locked up in a semi-dark dungeon with steel prison bars, while the whole dungeon was filled with a very irritating smell of rotten corpses. The boy then remembered what had happened to him and Pan and started to wonder why wasn't she locked up with him. All he knew is that he had to find a way to get out of there immediately. But how? He looked around to see if there was something he could use to unlock the prison bar, but he was surrounded with nothing but brick walls, the floor and the ceiling. "I sure wish I'd brought my laser gun with me..."-Xevo thought. As time slowly passed, the smell of rotten corpses was driving him crazy and he even began feeling claustrophobic. Suddenly, he noticed that whoever kidnapped him, forgot to take Xevo's shoes off. "Big mistake."-he thought and immediately took them off, pointed their bottom towards the bars and turned the rockets on. Within only a few moments, the extremely hot flames of the rockets melted the steel bars, so Xevo escaped with ease. He then found himself in a long hallway where all he could see were prison cells on his right and left, filled with corpses of different kinds of species, but mostly human, wearing training outfits. Xevo loved the World Martial Arts Tournament, and even though he only went there only once when he was a kid, he always watched it ever since on TV. He knew everything about every competitor who ever participated on the tournament, so it was a complete shock to him to recognize about 20 of them being locked up in a place like that dead. The youngling wondered who could have hunted down and kill them, and more importantly, why? After getting out of the dungeon, Xevo wandered around on the large corridors of the fortress for about 30 minutes, trying to find Pan and some answers as well. Well, he wasn't actually wandering around, he was really sneaking around, cause he had to hide from the security robots which were all over the place. The robots were all the same: thin, grey humanoid shaped types, around 1 meter high. Xevo presumed that all the robots were probably controlled by a supercomputer, which would also provide him with answers about the place he was in, so all Xevo had to do was to find it and deactivate the robots. Easier said than done. It took him another hour or so to successfully sneak past all the robots in a fortress who knows how enormous? Of course, the room where the computer was, was sealed off with some kind of very thick metal door, which required a security card and a certain password to gain access which, of course, Xevo didn't have and know. Unfortunately, his jet rockets couldn't melt the door for some reason, so he had to rely on other resourcefulness of his. Xevo had a lot of good qualities, like being a very good and supportive friend or always trying to help others in every possible way he could think of or just be plain useful. But, like every human being, he also had bad qualities, qualities revolved around his personal hygiene. First of all, he brushes his teeth very rarely, like once in a week, and secondly, he cuts his fingernails and toenails only once in every one and a half month. He claims that he just simply forgets these kind of things until the very last-minute, like when his teeth start to hurt, or his nails start to break. But who would have thought, that his second bad quality would turn out to be so useful one day? Using his, by now long fingernails as a screwdriver, he started disassembling the security card reader device, and within ten minutes, he succeeded. It took him only two minutes to cross wire it and unlock the door. He immediately rushed into the room and closed the door, and just in time too, cause one of the security robots was passing by. The young boy finally found the supercomputer as he immediately approached it to find some useful information. The computer screen showed many live images filmed by hidden cameras all over the fortress. Xevo considered himself quite lucky that no one was in room while he escaped from the dungeon or was sneaking around, otherwise he would have been long gone caught. Presumably, the person behind all this has other errands to attend to at the moment. The boy looked through all the images on the screen, but he couldn't see anyone else besides the security bots. He made a few clicks with a magnetic wireless mouse attached underneath the keyboard to take a look if the fortress had cameras outside as well. It indeed have, but all Xevo could see was the blue sky and the clouds, which could only mean one thing: the fortress was actually floating in air, which could make his and Pan's escape more difficult cause Xevo's shoes started making BEEP sounds meaning they were running out of fuel. The teenager made another few clicks and surfed around through different programs where he saw many schematics of the security robots, as well those which were controlled by Pilaf and his goons. Just then, he stumbled upon two intriguingly named folders: HARVESTED and CURRENTLY HARVESTING. He first explored the one named HARVESTED where he found a big list of names, as well as video clips. After carefully checking out the names, he realized those names belonged to the deceased martial artists in the dungeon. Xevo decided to open a clip which showed him exactly what he wanted to see: of how the martial artists were killed. The clip was filmed in a dark, eerie laboratory with all kind of high-tech equipment. The lab's design was similar to the room's where Xevo was in, indicating that the lab was also somewhere in the fortress. In the middle of the lab stood an injured male human with thin black cables attached all over his body. The man was a martial artist alright; the outfit on him proved that. All of a sudden, a yellow energy went through the cables towards the man, which began zapping him for five long minutes, then it stopped. The process was so painful, that the man never stopped from screaming. A few moments later, the same thing repeated itself over and over again, so Xevo forwarded the clip until an hour has passed. By that time, the man looked very pale and even though he was still being painfully zapped, he had no more energy to scream. "That's it!"-Xevo thought-"Whoever is behind all this somehow figured out to actually steal a person's ki, draining him to death. Harvested, was it? They're harvesting all the ki from the warriors and put them into the robots; no wonder Pan had such a hard time against Pilaf and the others even as a Super Saiyan. Oh no, that could only mean one thing..."-then he immediately clicked on the CURRENTLY HARVESTING folder and there it was, Pan's name-"I've got to find her fast, but not before... Somewhere outside in the wasteland, three broken robots were laying on the ground, one of them facing the sky. Mai and Shu left their robots immediately, however Pilaf was still inside his, being in deep thoughts while looking at the passing clouds. -Sir, are you sure you're alright?-Shu asked the emperor worried-You've been laying there for more than an hour; if one of your limbs are broken, please don't be shy to admit it! -Mai? Shu?...-Pilaf started which got the others attention-For how many years we've been trying to rule the world? -For over 50 years, sir.-Mai answered-Why? -Don't you think we should have succeeded by now? Haven't we always tried our best to do so? -Uhm...I guess so, sir. But where are you getting with this? -It's rather obvious that maybe...maybe it's not my destiny to be a ruler after all, but to be a simple, ordinary guy just like many others in this world. We tried again and again, but someone or something always foiled our plans; and now, it seems history is repeating himself with the appearance of one of Goku's descendants of all people. This only proves even more that all my life I've tried to achieve the impossible, something that was never meant to be. I've wasted all my life for a selfish desire dragging you two down with me. Mai, Shu, I know it's way too late by now, but I hear by release you from the duty of serving me. I want to give your freedom back and I won't even ask for forgiveness in return, cause I know I don't deserve it. -Oh no, Mai!-Shu shouted-Emperor Pilaf has finally flipped! -No, Shu...-Mai started in tears-He finally opened his eyes and embraced the true truth about his existence. Oh, Emperor Pilaf, I have waited for this all my life! -Did you not hear me?!-Pilaf yelled angrily while stepping out of his robot-I am no longer your emperor, so stop calling me like that! I never really was an emperor to begin with, I was just delusional and afraid to accept what was not.-while a tear appeared on his left eye-But tell me something! Why haven't you two never left me? Sure, you were scared of me, but you could still escape from my wrath whenever you wanted to.-by now, even Shu was in tears. -We could ask you the same thing, sir.-Shu replied-Why haven't you never fired us or killed us, for that matter, after constantly failing you? -And the answer is "friendship", sir.-Mai responded before Pilaf could form a word-It's friendship that always kept us together no matter what we've been through, only that we never had the guts to admit that we were all equals and not emperor and minions. And for the record, I never regretted following you, emperor; even if we kept failing, it was one hell of an adventure. Right, Shu? -I can't even imagine what my life would have been without you as my leader, sir.-Shu continued-But I'm guessing it would have been really boring without any of you two in it. -Thanks, you guys!-Pilaf said eventually restraining himself not to cry-And now that that's settled, move your lazy buts and gather all the pieces you can from the robots that girl shattered all around! There is something I need to do... Back in the fortress, Xevo was flying with top speed across the corridors in the purpose to find the laboratory along with Pan. Of course, before doing so, he deactivated all the security bots and he also searched and found a map to the fortress in one of the computer's folders, located the lab on it, then memorized the location. It took him about five minutes to finally find the lab, which was opened widely, and there she was with the attached cables to her body, which zapped her continuously while draining her life away. Xevo could tell from her fading scream that she didn't have much long. Can Xevo find a way to save Pan in time? And who is really behind all these crimes? Find out on the following episode of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Feb 15 2013, 06:05 PM Post #107 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 81: Who's the True Commander? Previously on Dragon Ball F, Xevo managed to escape from the dungeon where he was held captive and found out the terrible secrets which lain hidden in the fortress. After also discovering Pan's whereabouts, we can only wonder, can Xevo rescue her once more, this time without any weapon? And who's really behind all this gruesome work? Find out the answers today on Dragon Ball F! Xevo looked helplessly at how the cables attached to Pan's body were painlessly zapping her, and draining her power fast. If she hadn't had so much power in her, she would be dead long gone. The boy decided to fly over the cables and try to melt them with his flying shoes, but whatever they were made of, the cables just wouldn't melt. -Pan, please try to resist for a little while more until I can figure out a way to free you!-Xevo shouted desperately. -No, Xevo, get out of here! You're in grave danger as well.-Pan shouted back. -I will not leave you behind! I care too much about you to let them kill you!-then Xevo recklessly tried to pull one of the cables off her, which instantly zapped him as well, and the electric shock threw him meters away to the ground. -Xevo!-Pan shouted almost wanting to cry, but when she saw that Xevo woke up and managed to stand on his feet after a few moments being ok, she couldn't be happier. -I'm alright...-Xevo said slowly while his whole body was still trembling from the shock; just then, the cables stopped zapping Pan anymore and the entire room got filled with silence, at least until someone broke it with his speech. -Nice try, boy, but as you can see, it's quite futile.-a voice behind Xevo said and two persons stepped out of from the dark revealing their identities; Xevo did not know them personally, but he heard many awful things about them and saw pictures of them either on TV or the Internet. -You two...-Xevo said while breathing a bit hard from the electric shock suffered earlier. -Surprised? -Not at all. When I heard that the organization's name was changed into the "Black Ribbon Army", I knew who the person could be behind all this: Commander Black, duh. And seeing Mercenary Tao with you is also not surprising; well, I bet you even let him absorb a good amount of ki energy gathered, more like stolen, from those poor souls in the dungeon. -Clever boy, I must admit.-Mercenary Tao added. -So, general, you decided to continue Commander Red's legacy, huh? -That cretin was never worthy to be a commander of this proud organization in the first place!-Black shouted angrily-He cared of no one but only himself; while his soldiers were fighting the enemy sacrificing their lives, all he could think of was to wish the Eternal Dragon to make him taller, thinking that would bring him true power. The fool...But I, on the other hand, know that true power lies within having brute force, and the stronger you are, the better. Then again, achieving it on your own, meaning all that training, requires a lot of hard effort, not to mention time. So, then it hit me: why go through all that when I could just simply steal someone else's power? All their lives' hard work, taken away within only a couple of hours. Ingenious, don't you agree? -Indeed, it is. But of course, you were selfish enough to drain them completely; with so many powerful martial artists in the world, you just couldn't be satisfied with taking only at least half their power. Hurting them wasn't enough for you, you just had to kill them like domestic animals!-meanwhile, Pan was listening to the dialogue between the three persons, while she was also thinking a way to escape, a task which wasn't any easy, cause she was already too drained to gather enough energy to transform into a Super Saiyan 2 to break free; on the other hand, she was quite amazed at Xevo's attitude as she never saw him so enraged before-But tell me something! How did you manage to pull all this off on your own? Surely, you're not that intelligent... -Spending all that time with the true mastermind paid off after all; Dr. Gero taught me many interesting things in Hell over the years. Who would have thought that one day, I would accidentally be revived and use all that knowledge to conquer the world? Your friends may have destroyed Gero's main lab, but he also had one underneath the organization which that girls' grandpa destroyed many years ago.-at which he pointed towards Pan-It was in Hell I learned about the Saiyans as well, and about their unimaginable strength and power. I had to start with small fries to get strong enough before facing those human monkeys. But transferring someone's ki directly into another person's body is very dangerous, not to mention painful, so I decided to build robots and put the harvested ki into them. Real life soldiers are so fragile anyway and having robot bodyguards at your side is a lot more secure. But I wanted a more reliable bodyguard until I could put all my plans into action, and that's when I hired, or better yet, rehired, Tao, the best mercenary martial artist in his time period. I also shared with him some of the gathered ki, making him the strongest cyborg ever. But the real power lies within this fortresses' walls, also powered with ki, making in impenetrable. Afterwards, that scrawny Pilaf and his crew came along and shared their knowledge of how to locate the exact location of the Dragon Balls. And I thought: why not? Great power deserves infinite time to use it, so becoming immortal became my next step in conquering the world. In return, I built Pilaf and Co. three robot suits which would make them stronger, and which they could use, of course, under my surveillance." -Is that how you plan to become strong as well? By making your own suit? -You nailed it again. Isn't this boy a genius, or what? When I saw your girlfriend's true power, I knew she could only be a Saiyan, or part Saiyan in her case. With that much power I will slowly eradicate all the remaining Saiyans and steal their power; and that much power combined with my immortality, will make me the true God of this world, heck, the entire Universe. -One last question?-Pan asked from behind Xevo still immobilized-How come we haven't felt your presence or this ship's before? -Because of the ship's special invisibility shield, which not only masks the ship itself, but any emanating ki from it. So, you can rest assured that no one will come to rescue you two. Why do you think I so easily shared all this information with you? It's because my shared info will remain shared only for a very little while...Mercenary Tao, dispose of this boy "gently", meaning don't spill any of his blood on the floor, unless you want do clean the place up afterwards! Use your tongue! I remember it being one of your favorite finishing moves.-just then, Xevo's mood suddenly changed and he became frightened. -As you wish!-then Tao began slowly walking towards Xevo, who, of course, backed down-Don't worry, boy, I promise you won't feel a thing. -Why do you take orders from a guy like him, anyway?-Xevo asked while still backing down. -And why not? He made me stronger than I was ever before. And ruling the world by his side isn't half as bad as not ruling it at all. -But you're the stronger one! You always were, you should be the one ordering around, not him! What if he'll dispose of you after reaching full power, when he won't need you anymore? -That's none of your concern! -What?! The Mercenary Tao I heard about would never allow anyone to boss him around! -The Tao you heard about no longer exists, boy-Commander Black added-When I made him stronger, I also erased his memory, keeping only his personality. You're quite right, he would have become very troublesome if I hadn't done it, the mind reading machine "told" me so. -We're hopeless...-Xevo added in the end, afterwards he turned around towards Pan and shouted blushfully-PAN! I LOVE YOU! But Pan was already concentrating really hard to summon enough strength so she could briefly transform into a Super Saiyan 2 to break herself free from the attached cables. And just as she heard Xevo's last phrase, a big yellow electric aura surrounded her, which destroyed all the cables around her. Mercenary Tao's tongue was only a few inches away from Xevo's head, when suddenly, Pan whooshed in between them, grabbing Tao's tongue and pulling it out, which caused the cyborg to cough blood out from his mouth. Afterwards, the young Super Saiyan smashed her punch into the cyborg's head so hard, it instantly short circuited Tao's brain and he crashed on the ground dead. Pan immediately reverted back to her base form and kneed down exhausted while Xevo ran next to her, hugging her tightly, not caring of what she might think. Commander Black, of course, became worried to death of his own fate. All seemed to be over, when suddenly, Mercenary Tao's body began to slowly twitch, then his legs and arms started moving, while finally the cyborg stood up to his feet facing the two younglings. -Thanks, little girl, I owe you one!-the mercenary said eventually-But this doesn't necessary means I will spare your life. You ripped my tongue out and that will cost your dearly. -Mercenary Tao, are you alright?-Commander Black asked rather relieved while putting his left hand on Tao's right shoulder; the cyborg, however, instantly turned around, grabbed Black's arm and broke it in two-Aaaargh, my arm!!! Why the hell did you do that, you worm?! -Thanks to that little girl, I somehow regained my memory which YOU have "stolen" from me!-at which Black started to back down scared-I'll deal with you later, after I finish the girl.-afterwards, he turned back towards the two teenagers. With an overpowered cyborg and with her little energy to spare, Pan's chances of survival are equal to zero. Will this be our heroes' last adventure together? Find out on the next explosive episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Mar 1 2013, 12:53 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Mar 21 2013, 02:01 PM Post #108 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 82: A Shocking Revelation (+12) South City, at a carnival...Bra and Khitan were on a search of the three star Namekian Dragon Ball, a task not easy at all, since the Dragon Radar accidentally fell out of Khitan's pocket and broke into pieces, just before their arrival to their destination. So not knowing the ball's exact location left them with no choice, but to search through the entire place. They were searching for 30 minutes, when Khitan started impatiently: -This is just pointless; I say we return to base and get a new radar! We are never going to find it like this!-then he looked at Bra, who had a worried look on her face-Uhm, Bra?...You don't have to worry too much for it, it's just a game in the end.-and hearing her name mentioned broke Bra out from her worried trance. -It's not that...-she started-I'm not worried about the game, I'm worried about Pan...and Xevo too for that matter. Me and Pan are more than best friends, we are like sisters and share a very strong connection with each other. I just sense that she's in grave danger, and I'm usually right about these stuff. Maybe we should go find them instead... -I'm sure they can take care of themselves, I wouldn't worry about them too much. I saw how Pan fought back when we were fighting together against Frieza's henchmen, and I'm telling you, whoever pisses her off will regret it dearly. She must have told you about her dad's super power-up whenever he became enraged. Well, let's just say, that ability passed down to her and believe me, you don't want to see her dark side in your life, cause it may very well be the last thing you'll ever see. -I know, I know...Still, I have a very bad feeling about her, that's all. Let's just find that blasted ball and get this over with! I'm not enjoying this contest anymore, it's so childish; I can't believe I ever agreed to this in the first place. -Well, it would be easier if we would split up so we could cover more ground and since we are standing on a two-directional path, I say you go left while I'll go right. -Good idea. Call me on the cellphone if you find it!-and so, they split up. It was a perfect day to be at a carnival: the sun was shinning brightly with few clouds on the sky, the air was hot with a cool breeze cooling people down once in a while to perfection...everyone was fully enjoying themselves except for Bra. She remembered how she used to enjoy these stuff too, especially the amusement parks and right after the zoo, the carnival being her third favorite spot. She begged her parents to take her to such places on every weekend when she was a kid during summer vacation. But now, she considered herself too grown up to spend her time in places like these, especially since she would turn 18 years only seven months away from now. She noticed a big crowd in front of her surrounding a stage with a very fat shirtless man sitting in the middle of if. The man was three times fatter that Fat Buu, weighing over 1000 kilograms, making him the fattest man in the world. The viewers were both astonished and disturbed at the sight, while Bra looked at him indifferent, but nonetheless curious of what tricks the man would do so she approached the stage. The fat man started putting many different weird objects in his mouth, and to everyone's amazement, he actually swallowed them and coughed them right out after a few moments, like a cat coughing up a furball. He swallowed stuff like 50 swords at the same time, 10 pairs of boots and even a live adult bunny at which the crowd went wild. The viewers became both astounded and outrageous of the man's act, but they were relieved after the man coughed out the bunny as well and the animal was still alive. Then the crowd started applauding while Bra decided that she'd seen enough and turned around. But just then, something shiny caught her eyes while turning away, so she turned back, only to see the man holding the Namekian Dragon Ball in his hands. But before she could react, the man engulfed the ball as well, leaving the crowd cheering and Bra with her mouth wide opened and a shocked expression. She started cursing the man for putting her in a situation like that, as she felt disgusted of the idea of ever touching that ball again with the man's slime all over it. Afterwards, the fat man coughed the ball out and continued swallowing other objects while his assistant moved the swallowed objects into their personal tent. Seeing that, Bra thought it was a perfect opportunity to "steal" the Dragon Ball as soon as the assistant left the tent, and thanks to her amazing speed, it was a piece of cake to take it without anyone noticing her. But of course, she thoroughly washed it and rubbed it first with some clout found in the tent. After that, she located Khitan's ki and went looking for him, but there was something strange about his ki; it felt similar like when he fought violently with her dad. The young half-Saiyan immediately found him, only that he wasn't at the carnival no more, but far away in the city. When she saw Khitan, he was talking with two young girls in the corner of a street, while the girls were close to Bra's age, but definitely above 18. Bra did not know the girls personally, but she didn't like how Khitan was talking with them, as if he was flirting with them. Bra thought that the girls were dressed rather oddly, as they both wore short jeans, leather boots, short shirts, hoop earrings and dangly jewelry, while their make-up consisted in heavy eyelashes, much red lipstick and messy hair. At first sight, you would say they were hookers, so Bra had a good reason to get mad. But something else caught her attention, and it was Khitan's hair, which was...blue. She still did not know how Khitan was able to change his hair color from black to blue like that and vice versa, since they haven't talked about it yet. But it was a good time as any to find out, and still holding the Dragon Ball under her armpit, she marched right behind the him and nervously poked Khitan's left shoulder. -A-hem...-Bra started-Am I interrupting something?! -Oh...it's you.-Khitan looked behind irritated. -What do you mean, "oh, it's me"? Am I bothering you or something? -As a matter of fact, you are. As you can see, I'm in the middle of something. -I can see that very well. So, might I ask who these girls are? -None of your business! -Listen here, buster! I don't know what's gotten into you, but you'd better explain yourself or we're through. And what's with your hair? How did you turn it into blue? -I think we'd better leave you guys to sort things out...-one of the unknown girls started towards Khitan-You have our number so when you want to hook up, call us!-then they both left. -HOOK UP?! What the hell, Khitan?!-Bra asked furiously. -I was trying to get laid here and you just ruined everything! Thanks a lot! -You...you were actually planning to sleep with those girls?! -You bet I was!-but as soon as he answered her, Bra slapped Khitan on the face. -How could you? Is waiting seven more months until I become 18 too much for you? Are you that eager to "do it?" I thought you were better than that, but you're the same sex-eager boy like everyone else. -Like I care what you think. I can't believe Khitan would wait over a year to get in your pants. What a loser! -Why are you referring yourself in second person? Are you crazy or something? -Oh right...We haven't properly met, now haven't we? My name is Aku Syojo, Khitan's alter ego. -Say what?! -Don't act so surprised; you should have seen this coming! Having a twisted mother like Launch, it's no wonder her "disease" passed down on me. But what is more surprising is that your dad and brother haven't mentioned about me to you yet. Pretty odd, don't you think? -So...you're not Khitan? -Doesn't my hair gave it away yet? Hello, it's freakin' blue and my eyes are bright yellow! -Oh my gosh! So that's why your ki is also different, you're...you're not him. -And here I thought you were brighter than that. But thank you for reminding me to mask my ki before anyone else finds out about me. Not that I care anymore... -I can't believe Trunks and dad knew all along and didn't tell me. But wait, does Khitan know about you? -That boy is nothing but a clueless fool; he never should have existed in the first place. I always had more control over this body than he did anyway; whenever he was controlling it, I was always aware of what he was doing, seeing and feeling whatever he did. But Khitan, however, when he sneezes and transitions into me, he fells into a deep slumber until I sneeze again. Such a weakling, and don't get me started with the parents. Fooling them was even easier; I just told them that I like coloring my hair into blue and wearing yellow contact lens since I'm a fan of rock music and they actually bought it, although I do think that Tien is a bit suspicious. -That's impossible! Surely they would have noticed Khitan's transition when he was a baby. -That's just it. Khitan started transitioning into me when he was about 14 years old, which makes it even weirder, but who cares? -Well, it was NICE knowing you, but I'd like to talk with Khitan now, so, if you don't mind... -Nice try, but you won't get rid of me that easily! First, I plan to drink a nice cold beer while making out with those two hot girls I met earlier. You're welcomed if you want to join us. -Oh no! Are you telling me you're not a virgin anymore? -BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA! Are you kidding me?! I lost it LONG ago; but if it were up to Khitan I would still be one that's for sure. HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!-at which tears began flowing down Bra's face. -You jerk!!! How could you do this to Khitan? He's like your twin brother! -Not for long...I plan to take over Khitan's body for good. In fact, I think you won't see him ever again. -What?! -That's right. I recently developed a mind control technique using my third eye and in time with it I managed to keep him asleep even after I sneezed. What do you think he's been doing these past four months, or should I say, me? If it makes you feel better, he so wanted to talk to you right away about that incident regarding the fight with your father, but I had other plans for him. Last month, however, I somehow lost control over him again when we had a flue, but now, not even that can bring him back, cause I'm strong enough to wipe out all of his conscience for good. And you know what the best part is? I can keep his strength for myself as well. -What do you mean? -Haven't you ever wondered how was I able to injure your father so badly, how did I become so strong all of a sudden? The answer is quite interesting: me and Khitan not only that have our unique personalities, but our unique abilities and strength. Only that when he transitions into me, I can add his strength to mine and use his abilities as well. For example, me and Khitan are both individually almost as strong as a Super Saiyan 2, so when I became him during the fight, I became almost as strong as a Super Saiyan 4. Pretty cool, huh? -So what, dad can still take you down whenever he wants to. Whatever you're planning, you won't succeed, so give MY Khitan back to me! -I'm afraid that's too late by now; I can barely feel him anymore. I can hardly wait for the process to be complete! I hope you said your farewell to him. -Khitan, no! Come back to me! I won't let you kill him!-then Bra transformed into a Super Saiyan and attacked Syojo head-on, but the boy teleported out of her way with ease. -Are you retarded or what? What made you think you could hit me, better yet touch me, when I almost killed your dad? -That was because he already lost too much energy and didn't attack you with his full Super Saiyan 4 form. You have no chance defeating him, and you know it! -I don't need to. Have you forgotten what I said earlier? I learned how to control others' mind. As a matter of fact, you are already under my control even as we speak. -Yeah right, I'll believe that when I see it. -Ok then, I order you to power down to your base form!-and Khitan's middle eye started glowing yellowly but nothing happened. -Nice try there, freak! Now quit wasting time and transition back to Khitan before I really get mad!-however, just as Bra finished her words, she reverted back to her base form-What the...? -It took longer than I thought. I never tried it on someone else before besides Khitan. Let's give it another try, shall we? I order you to drop the ball and float next in front of me!-and this time, against her will, Bra dropped the Dragon Ball and her body started floating next to Syojo-Good, now touch the area of my "meat stick" with your left hand. -No, I will not!-Bra cried out loud as she was trying as hard as she could backing her hand away from Khitan's genital area, but it was no use; eventually, she grabbed Syojo's crotch, at which he smiled wickedly, having another sinister idea in his twisted mind-I will never forgive you, you monster! -You know, there's a good intimate hotel not far from here and since you scared my "customers" away, I think you owe me a "nice" time. -You...you wouldn't...You can't do this to me! I'm still a girl for God's sake! -Oh, come now! What do seven more months count anyway? Teenagers today "do it" a lot sooner anyhow! -Please, let me go! I...I promise I won't tell you to my dad! Just, please let me go, don't do this to me! -How idiot do you think I am? Now then, follow me! -NOOOO!!! SOMEONE HELP ME, PLEASE!!! -Shut your mouth!-and with that, Bra stopped shouting anymore, and continued flying after Syojo. Bra is about to be raped by his own boyfriend whose being controlled by his alter ego. How will this terrible nightmare end for her? Find out on the following episode of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 3 2013, 10:55 PM Post #109 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Struggle Between Two Different Minds On the previous episode of Dragon Ball F, Khitan's evil alter ego revealed himself and his wicked intentions to Bra as he plans to violate her in a hotel room. Can Bra find a way to escape the clutches of his possessed boyfriend? Find out on today's episode of Dragon Ball F! Bra and Khitan AKA Syojo arrived at a hotel where thanks to the boy's persuasive technique, they received a free room on the 11th floor. Once they went inside the room, Syojo locked the door and they went straight to the bed, where the boy laid down on it and ordered Bra to slowly take her clothes off. Against her will and both embarrassed and scared, she started doing just that. Since Syojo didn't specifically tell her which of her clothes to take off first, she started slowly taking her shoes off, as she wanted to buy as much time as she could for any possible miracle to happen. Afterwards, she took off her two arm bands, then her waist band along with her pants and shirt, leaving her only with her underwear on. Syojo got very excited seeing her half-naked like that, and he even felt a little pity for her. Syojo may have been evil, but he never raped a girl before; whenever he went out in pubs and clubs, he always found girls that felt attracted to him, so it was a piece of cake to get them into bed. But now the tables have turned and unfortunately for him, Bra didn't feel the same way, not that he could blame her, especially after the shocking news she recently found out. However, Syojo wanted her badly and didn't care what it would take to get into her pants, even if it meant destroying her innocence and ruining her entire life. Whatever little pity he felt earlier was totally gone by now, and all he could think of was enjoying the moment to the max, while he started sweating really hard. No other girl managed to get him this excited until now, so Syojo felt that doing it with Bra would be special to him, one way or another. -I must admit that you're the most beautiful girl I've ever met before.-Syojo started-I will be more that delighted, no, honored, to be your first. Well, technically, either way I would have been, but trust me, you won't regret having me around instead of Khitan. I can imagine how clumsy he would have been, while I have much experience in the domain. I promise you that I'll be as gentle as possible and satisfy you beyond your wildest dreams. -PLEASE, I beg of you!-Bra cried-Please don't make me take off the rest of my clothes! Just let me go! -Sorry, but I can not do that. You literally blew my mind away with your beauty and I must have you at any cost. Now, please, take off your brassiere! I would really like to admire your bosoms.-but as much as the young half-Saiyan struggled hard not to do so, it was all in vain, cause she slowly unhooked her brassiere and took it off, however, she immediately covered her breasts while doing so-Oh, don't be shy! I'm sure they're gorgeous.-then the boy stood up from the bed and started approaching Bra while readying his hands to touch her chest, when suddenly, something made him stop-What the hell?! How is it that you're still alive?-Syojo shouted while putting his hands on his head, pulling his hair like a madman. "I will not allow you to harm my girlfriend, EVER"!-Syojo said, but with a different tone of voice, which belonged to none other than Khitan. -Khitan, is that you?-Bra shouted both amazed and happy. "Bra! Take your clothes and get out of here! I can't hold him back much longer!" -You f***ing idiot!-Syojo yelled madly-You're letting the hottest chick in the world get away!-then he started hitting his own head several time and afterwards, he banged his head against the room's wall, breaking it down, while large bricks fell down out on the street. -Oh no!-Bra shouted scared, and still covering her chest, she ran towards the spot where once there was a wall and looked out down on the street to see if anyone got hurt, however, luckily, no one did. "Bra!"-Khitan shouted once more-"Leave while you still can!"-but Bra just stood there helplessly and still shocked for a few moments; then she rapidly took her clothes and flew out through the new "window". -Come back or I swear I will make you regret dearly you ever left!-Syojo shouted after her but she was far away by now-AARGH! Damn you, Khitan! Damn you for ruining my life! "You're the one who ruined mine, you evil monster! How could I have not be able to find out about you for over ten years? Why did you appear in my life? WHY?! You're the one who never should have existed in the first place, I was here first, so you leave my body this instant! Do you hear me?!" -Believe me, I thought many times of doing so, to go in front of Goku, reveal myself and ask him to take me to New Namek and ask Porunga to split us up somehow, but me getting this body of course. "Why Porunga? Why not Shenron?" -I didn't think he was powerful enough for this kind of wish. "But still, what made you stop to go seek for help? We could have been separated a LONG time ago! Why the hell didn't you do anything about it if I was such a burden to you?!" -Indeed, you were up until now; but you also kept me covered until I was scheming to take over the world. Back then, I thought day and night whether to tell Goku and the others about me or not, but then it hit me. What would I do with my life after we got separated? I have far greater desires than to be a simple citizen, to obey stupid rules made by other people; I want to make my own rules and do whatever, whenever I want to. Of course, I could have easily overtaken a whole city, but the question is, would you or the other goody-goody warriors have let me? So first, I needed to get stronger than any of you guys, but I could have never be able to keep up with those Saiyans and that reincarnated freak, Uub. So I needed another plan...I needed you, your strength. So I thought, what if I could add your strength to mine, since I already started to have more control over your body even after I shortly appeared for the first time. And it worked; but that still wasn't enough. Seeing how fast the others and even their offsprings were becoming stronger and stronger, I needed an additional plan to take them down whenever I wanted to. But how? HOW?! I couldn't come up with nothing! There I was, in the middle of nowhere, sitting on a cliff extremely furious. Just then, some sort of flying dinosaur attacked me from behind, wounding my back with his claws; and if I weren't enough nervous already, I became truly pissed off after that as I shouted madly: "Drop dead, you motherf***er!" Suddenly, my middle eye started glowing yellowly and then the dinosaur had a heart attack or something, cause he literally, dropped dead. It took me a while to figure out the reason why he did that; I found out that I have some sort of hidden mind control power which I could only use while under extreme rage. So I started training myself to master that technique whenever I came out and it took me 10 God damn years to finally master it. "Is it that hard to master?" -Well, no. I, or we, hit puberty shortly after and things got crazy afterwards; with all the crazy things happening to our body, I somewhat lost interest in training and started going out in clubs and meet young girls. Then I started taking drugs, and became sex addictive, so whenever I came out, I focused on those things instead of mastering the technique. "You drugged me as well?..." -Oh, don't be such a wuss. I took them moderately. Anyway, after our last fight with Vegeta, I thought it was finally time to fully develop that technique and that's exactly what I did these last four months. "And how are you planning to use it?" -First, I will get rid of you once and for all, then I'll turn Goku and Vegeta into my personal "bodyguards"; with them at my side, especially fused, no one will be ever be able to stop me doing whatever I want. And the first thing on my list is screwing your girlfriend. "You are truly pure evil, now aren't you? I actually pity you for being that way; I hoped we could still be good brothers in the end, but now I see that's not gonna happen. I guess, it's pointless to ask you if you ever cared about our parents at least." -Please, don't make me laugh! They're nothing but minions to me. Although, I do have to admit that doing it with the blonde Launch did occur to me.-Syojo said with a sinister smile. "YOU SADISTIC BASTARD! Forget what I said earlier, I don't pity you no more, I hate you with all my guts and want nothing but to kill you!" -Too bad you can't! HA-HA-HA! And now, it's the curtains for you! Sayonara...big brother!-and just then, Khitan's eyes, or in fact, Syojo's all three eyes started glowing yellowly while the boy started screaming wildly; two different tones could be distinguished at the same time during the boys' loud screaming, meanwhile, the hotel manager unlocked the door from the outside and came in with many police officers, who pointed their guns towards Khitan. -Police! Hands up!-the police officers shouted but the "two" boys just kept screaming louder and louder and it seemed that one of that was actually screaming in agony; suddenly, a large blue aura with black electricity surrounded the boy, as the cops stared amazed. -I don't think we are dealing with a normal human being.-the chief of police started towards one of the officers-We'd better call for reinforcements...Contact Mr. Buu and Uub at once!-meanwhile, the warrior in front of them stopped screaming anymore and stared wickedly towards the police. -That won't be necessary, gentlemen!-Syojo's tone could be heard-No one can help you now...-then he slowly raised his right arm and shot a big blue ki blast towards the police officers instantly evaporating them all, while destroying the upper part of the hotel, as well as many other buildings in the city which were in the blasts' way.-He-He-He! Now it's my time to shine!-he said with an evil smirk, then he suddenly disappeared without a trace leaving the hotel in flames. Way high above the sky at Dende's Lookout, we see Piccolo meditating alone peacefully, when all of a sudden, he felt a disturbance on Earth, as he heard the sudden agonizing cry of hundreds of souls at the same time, then everything became silent again. Shortly after, Dende came out of the palace and walked next to Piccolo with a worried face: -Have you felt it as well?-he asked. -You bet I did.-Piccolo answered upset-Evil is lurking on Earth again, a very powerful one too. And there's something else I'm worried about as well: I can't sense Pan's ki anymore. I'm starting to think that Megasaiyan creep was actually right in destroying the whole Universe. At least, we would all be at peace for all eternity and not having the need to constantly battle Evil. Just when you think it's finally over, another evil entity appears, it never ends. Damn it all to hell! As we leave Piccolo and Dende figuring out how to deal with this new evil entity, we can only wonder what Syojo's next move is? Bra may have escaped him earlier, but she's far from safe, as well as the rest of the Z Fighters. Find out what will happen next only on Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | May 5 2013, 09:16 PM Post #110 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 84: Drugged Trunks and Mizuna were flying at their top speed; well, at least one of them was. Since Mizuna hasn't managed to transform into a Super Saiyan yet, Trunks had to slow down quite a lot in order for her to be able to keep up with him. -Gee, Trunks, I'm really sorry for holding you back.-Mizuna started after a while with a sad look on her face-Because of me, we are risking to lose the contest. I wish I could have ascended to a Super Saiyan by now; at this rate, I will never live up to your expectations. -Whoa, whoa, Mizuna...-Trunks cut in abruptly-Firstly, I don't have any expectations from you whatsoever; in fact it was your idea for me to train you to become a Super Saiyan in the first place... -Because I didn't want you to have such a week member in your family. I understand that your mom is an Earthling and it's normal for her to be a weakling, but I'm a Saiyan for crying out loud, I should be way more stronger than I currently am. I have no excuses for being in this weak condition. -Look, the way I see it, not everyone has it in them to become a Super Saiyan. I mean, there aren't many to begin with; not even a quarter of our race managed to become one and even less managed to ascend further, so it doesn't say anywhere you're obliged to transform into it as well. When the time is right and your heart is in the right place as well, I guarantee you it will happen. Besides, we're already in the lead so there's no need to hurry.-however, Mizuna didn't reply-So...-Trunks continued several moments later-Will you please have another look at the Dragon Radar to see where exactly the Dragon Ball is?-at which the girl took the radar out of her pocket and instead of taking a look herself, she threw it with a pissed of look towards Trunks who barely caught it-Uhm, thanks...-he said startled, afterwards he pressed the button on the top of the radar several times and stared at it attentively, but after a while he made a worried face-Oh no... -What is it, Trunks? -The Dragon Ball is located in the Condemned City. -Why is it called that way? -Because it's full of everlasting filth and misery where only degraded people live with no morals and hope. A place filled with theft, lust and crime, which not even cops can handle; in fact, they're the ones who also commit them, becoming the very criminals they once swore to protect people from. Some even call it the City of the Sinners, cause only sinful people live or move there, who either lost their will to live and want to die fast or just want to have fun in a bad way. There are no victims there, everyone has their own share of sins, even the children are depraved as soon as they're born. -How horrible... -Yeah...Mom thought many times to send a lot of money there and I mean a LOT, thinking they were that way because of the lack of it. But those people don't need money, even thieves don't rob others for money, but for the thrill of being chased down afterwards by the cops, while the cops do the same thing out of enjoyment, not for the good of it. The thrill of the chase, the hunt, the shooting, the killing...everything has become a game for them...a sick game of survival. -Wow. And here I thought the Saiyans were bad. I guess every race has its own dark population. Just how many people live there anyway? -Well, it is a big city, so we're talking about millions of sinners. No old people live there, only the strong ones can survive, mostly young and very fit people, up to 30 the most. There are mostly homeless people living there, while teenagers like it the best, because you can totally get wasted there and stay that way until they want to cause there's no one to tell them otherwise. If you make "good" and powerful friends there, you'll last a while, but if you're a loner, then you're also a gonner. Not that it matters anyway, cause everyone there meets their death eventually, it's not a question of "when" or "why", but "how". If you go to that place, you're automatically doomed, but you can have one hell of a fun before you go down if you're into those things. And rest assured, that's exactly what everyone does there without any remorse or dignity not only for others, but for themselves as well. Why, if I didn't know any better, I would blow up the entire city and put an end to their miserable lives. They're nothing but animals! No, they're worse than animals, they're beasts I tell you, BEASTS! -Calm down, Trunks, it's not your fault for them being that way. -But still, the world would be a better place without them. The city could be renewed, rebuilt for better persons to live there, who actually deserve it and need it. -Well, it could be worse. -How? -At least they're terrorizing each other within the city and not threatening other cities or countries around the world. Don't worry, they will all get what they deserve in the end in the Other World, in Hell. After that, they stopped talking to each other, cause just then, they arrived to their destination and entered the City of the Sinners. The view wasn't pleasant at all, the whole city was in ruins; buildings were collapsed everywhere and even those standing, were in a bad shape, cars were lying wrecked up on the streets and roads, along with garbage everywhere, which made a terrible smell of disgust. The entire city looked as if a war broke loose not so long ago or a devastating tornado swooped by. There weren't that many people on the streets; those passing by were either looking though the garbage for some food or any useful object or were just wondering around with a miserable look on their face while their clothes were torn badly revealing them being very filthy not to mention stinky. The few people who were dressed up nice were passing by very vigilant as if there was danger around every corner. And they were right to be afraid, cause just then, two men approached a woman in a blue dress and wanted to rob her belongings, when all of a sudden, she pulled a gun out of her purse and shot them both in the head. The two Saiyans just floated there with their mouths wide open and stared at the woman who began checking if the two men had any valuable possessions. Then she casually put her gun back in her purse and walked away just like that with an evil satisfactory smile on her face as if she killed them out of enjoyment and not because she had to defend herself. Trunks and Mizuna had a hard time recovering from the shock, while other people nearby ran towards the two bodies and took their clothes off fighting amongst themselves over them. Our heroes could hardly wait to get out of the city as soon as possible, so they hurried to the center, where the ball was located. Once they arrived, the landed on the street in front of an underground club and had no other choice but to enter it. As they went down the stairs, it got darker and darker, when all of a sudden, they were greeted with a multitude of multicolored lights and special light lasers which literally blinded their eyes for a few moments until they got used to it. The place was filled with teenagers and young people, majority of them dancing wildly and half naked to a very loud pop rock style music. While dancing, many of them were making out or swearing and cursing loudly as they made obscene gestures to each other. Two men got into a deadly fight and did not stop until one of them was brutally killed by the other, while no one in the club even cared to notice and continued dancing as nothing had happened. Trunks and Mizuna failed to intervene in time to prevent this from happening, however, they could not believe how evil and indifferent all of these people were. All they cared about was themselves having fun and nothing else. Our heroes decided to fly over the crowd instead of walking through it, but once again, no one bothered to even notice them, as if they were used to seeing such sight. The Saiyans landed in front of a big table with at least 20 young persons sitting around it drinking beer. The group consisted mostly out of boys, having only four girls, who were sitting in four of the boys' lap. All of the boys wore black outfits and most of them had tattoos all around their visible body parts while one of them, even on his face. They all seemed tough and very muscular while they also each had a gun with them. Judging by their appearance, Trunks thought he was dealing with mobsters and boy was he right. While he and Mizuna were standing in front of their table, some of the persons were sniffing some white powder though their noses which grossed Mizuna out. Everyone at the table stared at the two "newbies" in the club, as one of them started: -You definitely must be new around here...-a young bald boy in his twenties wearing big black sunglasses started, who seemed to be the leader of the group-Not everyone can fly around just like that in this city; in fact, no one can. Care to join us? -Uhm...no thanks.-Trunks answered-You don't seem very surprised to see us fly. Why is that? -C'mon, we're all high here so we see weird things all the time. Besides, everyone in the world knows about the World Martial Arts Tournament by now, the Internet is full of video clips showing people doing incredible things while fighting, like flying around and shooting white energy beams out of their hands. Please, all that is old news by now thanks to Mr. Satan who started televising the tournament after becoming the world champion. So, what business do you two have here since it's rather obvious you're not here to have fun? -We're actually looking for something very valuable to us. -And what might that be? -The girl sitting on your lap...uhm, your girfriend, she has something, tied around her neck as a necklace, that small orange ball with three black stars on it. Will you please give it to us, we will pay for it as much as you want? -Do I look like a poor person to you? Please, money has no real value here, you must have heard about this place. It's all about fun, fun, fun...and oh yea, survival.-just then, the girl sitting on the boy's lap whispered something in his ears-Know what? My girlfriend here thinks your lady friend over there looks very hot. -Her name is Mizuna, by the way. And where are you going with this?-Trunks asked while starting to boil inside. -Tell you what! If Mizuna accepts a passionate kiss on the lips from my girlfriend, then we will happily give the ball to you. -Sorry, but she's not into such things, now hand over the Dragon Ball until someone gets hurt!-and while Trunks tightened his fists, the boy's bodyguards loaded their guns and aimed them towards our heroes. -You might be a good fighter and be able to fly around, but just that you should know, my men are also highly trained in the martial arts, and the weapons they're carrying are the latest and most deadliest ones in the black market. They're so powerful, they can pulverize your entire body with only one shot, so my advice for you is to play along or drop dead.-by now Trunks was really furious, and was about to knock them all out until Mizuna suddenly cut in. -It's okay, Trunks, I will do it.-she said, which surprised both Trunks and the mob leader. -Mizuna, are you insane?! Why would you do that when we could easily just take the ball from them with force if we have to and fly away?-Trunks asked confused and irritated. -You're the one who offered them money in the first place, so you're the coward one. Let's just play along and get it over with, no harm can come from a small kiss on the lips. Either way, it will mean nothing for me, as I said before, you're the one for me and I still love you with all my heart. As much as I would like to pound to death all of them, it's not worth it so let's not become like them. -But, but, Mizuna... -Wise girlfriend you've got there...-the leader said, while his girlfriend stood up from his lap and slowly approached Mizuna as the bodyguards lowered their weapons. The 19 year old girl was wearing black latex lingerie, leather boots and she had many rings on each of her fingers; she had a long black hair with red coontails, with very heavy black eyelashes and much purple lipstick. As she reached in front of Mizuna, she suddenly grabbed the Saiyan's hair and forced her lips onto hers, as she kissed her passionately. Trunks couldn't believe his eyes and he actually felt somewhat betrayed by Mizuna, but he also regretted more than ever that he never kissed her before, cause her first kiss was stolen from him by another girl. A dozen of odd feelings surrounded Mizuna's mind, body and heart, as mentioned before, this was her actual first kiss with another human being. She never imagined that her first one would be with another girl as it obviously felt very strange for her. But a little part of her also like it, which confused her even more and wanted to end the kissing the sooner the better, before things got out of control. After they finished kissing each other, the other girl felt very satisfied, and regretted that they couldn't do more, but a deal was deal and now it was payment time or was it? -Ok, you got what you wanted, now hand over the ball before I really get mad!-Trunks said angrily towards the mob leader. -To tell you the truth, watching those two girls kissing turned me on very much and now I would also like a piece of her, if you don't mind. Not that you have a choice that is. -You lousy lying a*****!-Trunks yelled madly, and just then the bodyguards pointed their guns at him and Mizuna again. -Allow me, Trunks!-Mizuna said also pissed off and within seconds, all of the mob leader's bodyguards were lying on the ground unconscious. -Huh...your guys are really something else after all.-the leader said with an unusually calm tone-Maybe I should hire you two for my personal bodyguards. -Not interested...-Mizuna replied with an angry look on her face, then she approached the leader, grabbed his shirt and pulled him off of his chair-This is your last warning! Give us the Dragon Ball or else!-at which this time the leader got quite pissed off because he hated loosing; shortly after, he stared at his girlfriend and started. -You heard the lady, give her the damn ball!-at which the other girl obeyed him without any questions asked. -See, now that wasn't that hard, now was it? All this could have been avoided but you just had to fool around like a little pervert bossy kid, now didn't you?! -What can I say? I just love having fun while also being bad. That's how I am, so sue me! -Let's just get out of here, Trunks!-at which Trunks nodded in agreement, while the rest of the people in the club weren't paying attention to them at all; the loud music was going on while everyone was dancing without care. -Fine, but just do me a favor and at least have a drink with me. I would really like to make it up for my rudeness. -That won't be necessary.-Trunks responded. -But I insist. Bartender, bring me three glass of cold beer! After all this hot tension, we could use something to cool down a bit.-while Mizuna and Trunks stared at each other confused; but none of them noticed, that the mob leader made a sign with his eyes towards the bartender, who put some white powder into the drinks, afterwards, he served them to our heroes and the leader-Cheers mates!-at which the leader started drinking his beer, while Trunks and Mizuna did the same.-Now that wasn't too bad now was it! -I hope we will never see each other again! Good-bye!-Mizuna said in an angry tone and just when she and Trunks were about to take off, they both began feeling very strange.-What is going on? Why do I feel so dizzy all of a sudden?-but when she stared towards the mob leader she saw that he was acting really strange as he stared at the ceiling with a weird happy look on his face while talking to himself, however, his girlfriend got bored and left him-What did you put in our drinks, you creep?! -Oh nothing...Just some drungs...I mean, drugs. I asked the bartender to put some into the drinks. How do you feel? I feel like in Heaven or something like that. I guess he put some weird mush-room powder in mine cause I see things which aren't really there, but I also feel very happy. Do you know by any chance if God is green? -You bastard!!! I'm gonna kill you for real this time!-but she realized she couldn't move a muscle as if she was paralyzed while her mouth became dry; she then turned over to see how Trunks was feeling, only to find out, he was feeling better than ever-Trunks! Are you...? -I feel SUUUPER!!!-Trunks shouted amazed and thrilled while red electricity surrounded him-I never felt so good in my life. So much power surging though my body, it's electrifying. As if I ascended into a Super Saiyan 4 without any effort. Who knew a drug could have such an effect on us Saiyans? It's a miracle worker! It's.. it's incredibly amazing! Wait till' my dad hears about this, he'll flip. What is this drug you put in my beer, tell me?!-he asked the mob leader who stared at him not believing his eyes. -Are those sparks of electricity surrounding you? Man, I'm so high right now, I see the most incredible things ever. -Just tell me already, damn you!-at which Trunks grabbed the boy by his neck, suffocating him slowly. -I don't know...-the boy chocked hard-But guessing from your behavior, I would say cola...I mean, cocaine. -Do you have some more? -Sorry ,dude, that was the last one...ahek, ahek. Now will you please let go of me, I can't breathe...ahek.-while the boy's face started to turn red. -Trunks, you are killing him!-Mizuna shouted-Let go of him! -Then you are no use to me anymore.-Trunks replied, and just then, he broke the boys' neck, as he finally let go of him letting the body crash on the ground. -Trunks...what have you done?-Mizuna asked him shocked. -I need more cocaine, NOW! This place has to have more, it just has to. Listen up, everybody!-but the music was still playing very loud while everyone was dancing madly not hearing his shouting-I said listen up!- and just then, he shot multiple ki blast towards the ceiling, blowing up the sound boxes as well the blinding laser effects; this time, he manage to get everyone's attention for sure-Does any one of you have cocaine?-however, no one answered him-I will ask you one last time, does anyone have cocaine at their disposal?! -Get lost, freak, and take you lightning effects around you with you.-some of the people from the crowd shouted altogether. -Yeah, we're not impressed with you cheap special effects, so if you want to make some money, go to the circus and leave us alone.-more pissed off people from the crowd shouted. -Leave us! Leave us! Leave us! Leave us!-now everyone was shouting at Trunks in unison, who lost his patience and blew the entire place up with his BURNING ATTACK, leaving the club in ruins as he went to desperately search for more cocaine; he was already too addicted to it and didn't even care if Mizuna survived the blast or not, however, luckily she did, but she felt more disoriented than ever, mostly because of the drug's effect. -Trunks...Come back! Don't leave me, I need you...you need help...-but then she fainted and crashed on the ground unconscious. TO BE CONTINUED>>> |
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| Megasaiyan | Jun 22 2013, 10:34 AM Post #111 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 85: Full Super Saiyan 2 Unleashed Previously on Dragon Ball F, our young heroes, Pan-Xevo, Khitan-Bra, Trunks-Mizuna organized a Dragon Ball hunting contest and embarked on a little adventure as couples. All seemed to go well when all of a sudden, Pan and Xevo have been captured in an enormous fortress by Commander Black and Mercenary Tao. Xevo found out about Commander Black's plans of world domination and managed to save Pan before he could steal all her energy. Afterwards, Black ordered Mercenary Tao to kill them both, but Pan managed to gather enough strength to put up a good fight and somehow helped Tao to regain his true memory which was erased by Black himself. Although Tao turned against Black as well, he's still out to kill both our heroes too while Pan has barely enough energy left in her to stand on her feet. Can our heroes find a way to escape the cyborg's wrath? Find out today on Dragon Ball F! Mercenary Tao was closing in on our young heroes while all they could do was to wait for him to finish them off as quick and painless as possible; however, the mercenary's intentions were the exact opposite. Xevo didn't want to just die without a fight and despite having no powers, not to mention chances, at all, using his flying shoes which still had a bit of fuel left in them, he flew right at the cyborg attacking him to everyone's amaze. The boy repeatedly punched him as fast as he could, but of course, his efforts didn't even faze Tao. The mercenary only needed to poke Xevo in the face with one finger and the boy immediately bounced back like a ball while Pan caught him. -Xevo, are you nuts?!-the girl asked madly-What the hell were you thinking?-while much blood was dripping from Xevo's forehead-If he hit you any harder, your skull would be broken by now! -So what?-Xevo asked in tears caused by both the pain and fear-We're both going to die anyway, might as well die like a true hero rather than a coward! -Don't say that! This fight ain't over yet until I say so!-then she laid Xevo's head on the ground, stood up on her feet and powered up to her max; unfortunately for her, she wasn't strong enough to become at least a Super Saiyan 1, as only a white transparent aura surrounded her. Pan attacked Tao head-on, punching and kicking him repeatedly only to hit thin air; she was so slow for the cyborg that he barely had to move to avoid her hits. Eventually, Mercenary Tao got bored by her futile efforts, kneed her in the stomach, grabbed her hair and with one strong spin, he threw her away. If the walls weren't so impenetrable, she would likely broken through all of them, until she flew outside of the fortress miles away. But with a loud bump, she hit the wall hard and fell down on a table filled with many different laboratory equipment such as breakers, graduated cylinder or volumetric flask, which broke underneath her, while the shattered glass cut her skin badly. Xevo got on his feet and saw that blood was dripping from underneath Pan down the table, while tears started filling his eyes again. Enraged, he attacked Tao once more, but this time he had a trick up his sleeve. As soon as he reached in front of the mercenary, who stood still knowing that Xevo couldn't do anything to hurt him, the boy suddenly stopped in the air and positioned his feet next to the cyborg's face, and the flames coming out underneath the shoes destroyed both his eyes. Tao was screaming in agony, cursing the boy out loud while Xevo started to hit him all around his body, but the mercenary was more concerned about his eyes, rather than the boy's hits which he didn't feel at all. Meanwhile, Pan stood up on the table and seeing a good opportunity, she didn't mind her injuries and shouted towards Xevo to get out-of-the-way; she then charged up a big Kamehameha wave and fired it towards the cyborg. It connected and the energy ball pushed the cyborg backwards until he reached the wall; with it being impenetrable, the blast put so much pressure on Tao, that it seemed to be pulverizing him until it suddenly exploded, filling the entire room with whiteness for a few moments. After the whiteness faded away, the room became semi dark again; as their eyes got used to it again, the two younglings saw Tao's body laying on the ground faced-down filled with injuries, while most of his clothes were burned. Luckily, the area covering his intimate parts were still hidden. Xevo and Pan felt very relieved as they walked towards one another and hugged each other with joy. But the nightmare wasn't over yet; shortly after Mercenary Tao's body started moving again, as he slowly got on his feet, however, both his eyes were covered with burned reddish-black holes, where you could see his circuits. "You blasted, kids!"-Tao shouted madly-"Look what you've done to me! You completely ruined my face, damn you both! Do you think you have defeated me, just by blinding me? Well, think again! Being a cyborg comes with many great skills which I not had when I was only a human: like extreme acute hearing, meaning I can hear every breath you inhale and exhale, not to mention the fact that I have heat sensors incorporated into my cybernetic body. Heck, I'm a living radar, for crying out loud, so there's no where you can hide where I can't find you? I know exactly where you two are so there is no escaping my wrath. Both of you, perish!"-and just then, he attacked our heroes head-on. Pan knew that Mercenary Tao was way through playing around and this time he was going for the kill. She also knew that Xevo would die instantly Tao touched him and she would do everything it takes to prevent that, even risk her own life. So she put everything at stake and shouted "KAIO-KEN TIMES ONE HUNDRED!!!", while bursting crimson flames surrounded her, as she blocked Tao's left punch using only one hand. With a fierce look in her eyes, she pushed the mercenary back, far away from her boyfriend, then she smashed the cyborg's hand into pieces. -AAAARGH!!!-Mercenary Tao shouted in pain-How is it possible for you to have so much power left in you?! -When it comes to your loved-ones, you always find enough power within you to save and protect them.-Pan replied with a serious look, then she started punching the cyborg head-on repeatedly, but unfortunately for her, the power she was talking about started to fade away fast while Tao sensed her hits getting weaker and weaker. -Oh, now I understand!-Tao started after he managed to block the girl's punches-It seems that it was nothing but a sudden outburst caused by your desperate rage and as the seconds pass, you're becoming more and more worn out. Victory WILL be mine in the end.-then the mercenary punched Pan with his right hand which Pan could barely block it. Tao continued punching and kicking her fast, while Pan couldn't block them anymore and started receiving more and more of his hits. After a few more hits, she was already knocked down on the floor severely injured, as the cyborg stepped on her head with his right leg, squeezing it hard while she cried in pain. Pan hoped that Xevo wouldn't try again to foolishly save her, however, Xevo was already on his way flying towards them with his fists ready, yelling Mercenary Tao' name to draw his attention. Tao looked at him nervously and blasted Xevo with a small pinkish-purple energy ball; with him no chance dodging it, the boy took the blast head-on, which exploded on contact. Xevo's body crashed on the ground shirtless, filled with skin burns and...lifeless. -That takes care of one pest; now it's your turn, girl!-Mercenary Tao said satisfied and started squeezing Pan's head to the floor harder. -XEVOOOOOO!!! NOOOO!!!-Pan shouted desperately and in great pain, feeling that her skull will crack any moment now, but she did not care about that; all she cared about was Xevo whose body lied lifelessly on the ground-"If only I were stronger..."-she thought-"If only I've trained harder to master my second Super Saiyan form, we wouldn't be in this mess in the first place and Xevo would be still alive now. He's dead because of me, because I failed to protect him, to save him in time. But what if he's still alive? What if there's still time to save him? I just can't bare to lose him like this! I won't allow him to die on me like this, especially not because of my incompetence!"-afterwards she screamed out loud-I will not tolerate this ANYMOOOOOOOORE!-then something snapped inside her, a never before felt huge and desperate rage, a desperate cry for more power to stop Mercenary Tao from killing her and to save Xevo's life if possible; every second counted, and as the seconds passed by, she felt something within her was about to explode. Tao was merely moments away from breaking Pan's skull, when all of a sudden, an extraordinary immense electric yellow aura surrounded both Pan and the cyborg, which of course, was originally emanating from the girl, who started lifting her head from underneath Tao's foot, until she threw him backwards. Pan stood on her feet while Mercenary Tao could hear a loud constant stream of lightning in front of him, but if only he could see how much Pan has changed by now. Without doubt, she unleashed the full form of Super Saiyan 2 just moments ago, clearly visible not just by her electric aura but by her appearance as well. Her hair was still black though, but now it was standing up and it became spiky while her eyes became green. But Tao didn't see, nor sense all these, so he was clueless of how strong Pan really got, that's why he attacked her head-on, but he only hit air, as Pan teleported herself next to Xevo and did not care about the cyborg for the time being. She made her aura disappear as she did not want to fry Xevo's body with her electric aura, then she kneed down and lifted the boy's body in her arms, as she hugged him tightly while tears flew down from her eyes. -Please, Xevo...-Pan started-Don't die on me! I really don't want to wait a full year to see you again. Please come back to me!-and while hugging him, she transferred some of her energy into him, miraculously bringing him back to life as Xevo's heart started beating again, but his body was still severely burned and needed immediate medical care or he would risk dying again-Xevo, you're alive!-Pan shouted happily-Thank goodness I wasn't too late to save you!-then she hugged him tighter, at which Xevo yelled in agony: -OUUCCH! Pan, you're hurting me! -So sorry.-then she placed him on the floor carefully-I will take you straight to Dende after I finish things here, which will only take a couple of minutes, I promise.-then Pan stood on her feet and stared at Mercenary Tao angrily-I will never forgive you for hurting my boyfriend and killing so many innocent martial artists. I will make sure you and Black get what you deserve! Speaking of the devil, where is that creep?-while she looked around, but General Black was long gone-He won't go far away, I guarantee you that! Now it's time to pay for your crimes.-as she turned towards Tao and suddenly teleported herself in front of him; then she grabbed the cyborg's both metal ears and tore them off, as Tao screamed in great pain. -AAAAARGHHH!!! DAAAAAMN YOUUUU!!!-as the cyborg backed down, you could see much black liquid dripping out of his ears on the floor.-You...you think you have won now don't you? But I haven't shown you my secret weapons yet. Soon you will feel my wrath as I will tear you from limb to limb just like you did to me. Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!-and just as he finished his sentence, Pan got hit by an invisible object in her forehead so hard, that it caused her to bleed while she also got a little dizzy; but she didn't say a word, she readied herself in a fighting posture and looked around staying alert-Look behind you!-Tao suddenly shouted in a mocking manner, however Pan didn't buy it cause she didn't sense anything out of ordinary; however, she got banged from behind by something nonetheless, which hurt her even more, but when she looked around, she couldn't see anyone or anything. -What trickery is this, you lousy cheater?!-she asked pissed off. -He-he-he-he-he-he! Caught you by surprise now haven't I?-then Tao stretched out his right hand and three metal balls appeared in it out of nowhere; they were the size of the Earth Dragon Balls, but a bit smaller-Like my new gadgets Black built me? They're just prototypes for now, but they seem to do a pretty good job. I activated them to pursue the strongest energy source in this room, which is you, of course, so tell me, girl, don't you feel a little energy-drained?-however, Pan did not respond to him, not that he could hear her or anything; nonetheless, she had to admit to herself, she did feel that way a bit.-Want to know what these are? Hmm?-then suddenly, two yellow eyes appeared on each ball revealing them to be some kind of robots.-They are the future energy harvesters of this fortress. Just imagine these little things turning invisible and absorbing energy from martial artists without them even realizing it and killing them afterwards. Once I get rid of you and then Black, I will build my own cybernetic army; imagine, hundreds of these scattered all around the world. Why, world domination would be a piece of cake! And also with the Dragon Balls by my side, I would be truly unstoppable. Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!-then the three metal balls lifted in the air and disappeared, but Pan also disappeared into thin air. By now the metal roboballs stole enough energy from Pan to actually keep up with her, as she had a hard time dodging them. All she knew she had to find a way to get rid of them fast, because even though they could not touch her, they kept stealing more and more energy as they bypassed her. The thing is, she couldn't actually see, nor sense them, she just repeatedly teleported around the room aleatory and since the roboballs didn't have artificial intelligence built into their system, they chased her down on the same routes multiple times unable to hit her. In the meantime, Mercenary Tao decided that it was time to retreat and fix himself somehow, while the metal balls kept Pan busy. He sort of knew where the exit was based on the last thing he when he still had eyes, so he didn't care what objects were in front of him, he ran south-east as fast as he could, knocking down tables and many other laboratory equipment until he almost reached the exit door. Pan noticed all this and suddenly she had a plan to stop Tao from escaping and maybe deactivate the balls as well. She flew towards the cyborg and made sure all three balls were right behind her. As she reached near Tao's back, she suddenly teleported right in front of him, while the balls stopped at nothing to reach their destination, even if it meant going through Mercenary Tao and destroying him. One of them went right through his head, while the other two made a big hole in his chest, as the cyborg fell on the ground dead. But only half of Pan's plan worked; she thought that the metal balls would deactivate themselves if the host controlling them would be terminated, but she was wrong. They just kept chasing her, and stealing more of her energy. "That does it!"-she thought to herself-"If energy they want, then by all means, they will get it."-she made sure to be far away from Xevo, then she powered up to he max, unleashing a great yellow electric aura around her. The roboballs halted near her and started absorbing her energy immediately as it seemed the electric aura didn't faze them at all. But soon Pan saw another opportunity to destroy them, so she raised a ki barrier not just around her, but around the metal balls as well, sealing and trapping them inside with her. Afterwards, she stretched out her left hand towards one of them balls, which was only a few meters away, made a big pink energy ball and shoot it towards it. The ball barely had time to react, but it did not have much room where it could bypass the energy wave as it was sealed in, so the roboball was destroyed by the blast. If the other two balls had AI's the would have learned something from the destroyed balls' experience and raised a ki barrier around them, but they didn't so Pan easily blasted them away too. It was finally over, as Pan felt relieved and powered down to her base form but she fainted from exhaustion. Xevo was also in great pain and could hardly move a muscle when all of a sudden, a female voice could be heard all around the fortresses' corridors: "SELF DESTRUCTION INITIATED! WARNING! EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY! TEN MINUTES UNTIL SELF DESTRUCTION!" TO BE CONTINUED>>> |
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| + Majin Vegeta | Jun 22 2013, 11:38 AM Post #112 |
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A very awesome story indeed I was reading your stories time to time I like it thanks dude
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| Megasaiyan | Jun 22 2013, 09:30 PM Post #113 |
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Your welcome and thank you too^_^ |
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| AA500 | Jun 22 2013, 10:19 PM Post #114 |
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4.5 stars, most DBZ fanfics are bland as hell. This was a nice change. |
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| Megasaiyan | Jun 23 2013, 04:17 PM Post #115 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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And it was pleasant to read your encouraging comment. Thank you! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 13 2013, 10:07 PM Post #116 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 28 2013, 05:38 PM Post #117 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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A very-very late update Greetings, everyone! Wow, I've been gone for so long, I don't even know where to start. But I shall start explaining why I've been gone for so long and what are my future plans. First of all, I will point out the obvious, that Dragon Ball Finale has been canceled. I am so sorry for letting down my few fans, but that's how life is; it always turns out unexpectedly different, it always catches you by surprise and all you can do is to accept it and "play along". Up until now, I had a pretty decent normal life, I can't say I was rich, but I wasn't poor either, somewhere in the middle, I guess, but more towards poor. Even now, I live a pretty stable life, I work, eat, have a little fun now and then, sleep, then work again, starting the routine all over as if I was programmed that way. The salary is quite minimal, about 200 euros, which to european standards is almost nothing, of course, but here it's enough to survive. You can't do much with it, obviously, you pay your bills and the rest you spend it on food, and other small things you need around the house. But if you want to buy a car, a gadget, furniture etc, all you can do is to ask a bank for a loan, which then you will have a hard time paying back, cause that will add another bill to the house, which means you either eat less or have no fun time at all like going out in pubs with friends to have a drink. And don't even get me started when you get ill or suffer from some kind of disease. It's quite stressful, but that's life here in Romania. And that is why I want to break free from this place, from this monotone boring life; I want to do so much things in my life, go out and have many adventures on my own just like Goku did, to travel around the world like he did, always meeting new people, making new friends and having lots of fun. Of course, I will be working throughout my journey to earn money to survive but that's the interesting part, I will always work in different places, do different things, not the same boring day-by-day work like a robot. I am very aware that my survival chances are minimal, that this is in fact a cruel world, but there are many good and interesting people out there and I want to meet them. I plan to start my journey in May next year and I will begin my journey with two backpacks and a bicycle. Oh, and God's blessing too, of course:) So know you know, why I am cancelling my fanfic and I may never return to this site. However, I do plan to write about my journey and post it here whenever I get near a computer connected to the Internet. Either way, I will always carry a notebook and a pen and write anything interesting happened to me there. However, May is still quite far away and I don't want to let down my fans all the way to the bottom, so up until then, I plan to write a huge disclosure to my Dragon Ball Finale fanfic, writing down my thoughts how I would have continued it from episode 85 and also how I planned to end the series. Furthermore, I will post the last two normal parts to my fanfic "Choosing the Right Man" and also I will make more DBZ funny comic panels ( I came up with many new funny jokes ). Oh, and I also came up with a brilliant new DBZ movie story which I will also share with you guys in the near future. So as you can see, even though I may have not posted anything new DBZ related, I never stopped thinking about that wonderful world and the great characters that Akira Toriyama created. DBZ will always hold a very special place in my heart and mind and so will Goku, my favourite character. What have I been doing since my last update during summer? Sincerely, I've been lazy:P Whenever I wasn't at work, I've been playing all sort of computer games like "Amnesia: A Dark Descent", "Amnesia: A Machine for Pigs", "Esther", "Star Wars" games, "Outlast", "Unreal Tournament 2004" and currently I'm playing "Left 4 Dead". Plus, I've been watching all sort of movies and cartoons. I know, I know, I'm pretty addicted when it comes to computers or any sorts of gadgets:) But next year, I'm willing to give up on all that and "play" in the real life for a change, instead through a 16:3 screen. I may not be killing zombies, destroying stormtroopers with my lightsaber or fighting off supernatural beings from another world using the Kamehameha wave; instead, I will be fighting off crooks who try to rob me on the streets, trying to save myself or/and others whenever I encounter bad guys or terrorists, not to mention fighting against Mother Nature herself, whenever I encounter extreme weathers or natural disasters like earthquakes or twisters. We live in an incredible world where we are challenged day-by-day, instead most of us choose to ignore it and face other more supernatural challenges in the virtual world. I also choose to do so, but from next year things are about to change. Lastly, I would like to share with you a very good and promising DBGT re-write fanfic, which in many terms, is even better than mine and more DBZ likish: http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8423338/1/ I hope that one day I may also return and finish my own fanfic but up until then, anyone can feel free and try to finish it as you see fit, I don't mind at all. I wish you all the best and always stay true fans of the Dragon Ball franchise, no matter how bad some series may turn out ( DBGT ) or how much lame transformations Akira Toriyama may come up with in the future ( hey, nobody can be perfect, and this time I'm referring to the SSJ God transformation ). PEACE!! Edited by Megasaiyan, Dec 28 2013, 05:39 PM.
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Dec 28 2013, 05:43 PM Post #118 |
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Aww... I hate to see you go Megasaiyan. I hope to see you return in the bright future with bunches of fanfic ideas. You sound like you're going to be away for a long time so I wish you the best of luck going out and experiencing life. I hope all goes well for you. |
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| Goddess Ultimecia | Dec 28 2013, 05:48 PM Post #119 |
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It's a shame you're going to be leaving. I had a lot of fun reading this fanfic and gathering some ideas based from you (along with many other fanfic writers on here.) I hope you the best in your advancement in life! Have a good one. |
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 29 2013, 06:54 PM Post #120 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Thank you both of you. |
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