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| Megasaiyan | Nov 4 2012, 11:08 AM Post #91 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 73: Forgiveness and Love On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, we found out the true reason why Gogeta couldn't ascend to Super Saiyan 5 when he fought the Megasaiyan. It seemes that both Goku's and Vegeta's body have reached their limit, so no matter how hard they train, they can't get any stronger. And if they should try, they would risk destroying themselves by the overwhelming power. Also, last time, an unexpected visitor from Krillin's past showed up at the Kame House, which will cause some discomfort to him and his family... No one said a word; they just all stood there at the door: Maron outside, Number 18 inside, while Krillin in between. The other Marron, the daughter, was sitting at the table watching the adults worried while sensing that the tension was rising higher and higher. She couldn't hear what they were saying, but she knew it couldn't be anything good. -Ok, this is awkward.-Maron started-May I come in?-she asked, while Krillin looked behind him towards his wife, waiting her to respond instead. -Why not?-18 answered and after going inside and reaching the table where they were previously having dinner, she continued-Meet MY daughter, Marron.-she said, putting an accent on the word "my." -Neat.-Maron said happily towards Number 18's( ! ) daughter-I guess we're like name sisters. -Guess so...-Marron replied, noticing how dull the woman is. -Krillin, may I have a word with you...in private?-Number 18 asked her husband with fierce eyes. -Do I have a choice?-Krillin responded frightened, then they both went upstairs to their room. -What the hell, Krillin?!-18 immediately started to yell, as soon as she closed the door behind her-You never mentioned you had a girlfriend before me... -Well, I never thought she was worth mentioning; we only dated each other for a short while. -Apparently, she meant a lot for you, since you named MY daughter after her! -That has nothing to do with it; I just thought it was a beautiful name for a girl to have. I even removed an "r" to make it more unique. Besides, it's way better than what you suggested to name her. Imagine her being named Number 8! I'm sure all of her friends at school would have made fun of her and nicknamed her Eighter or something. -So, whatever happened between you two anyway?-18 asked, changing the subject rapidly, cause she knew he was right about the naming part. -Nothing! We only dated each other for a few months. Then she dumped me...sort of. -Of course she did. She's nothing but a skank, you deserved better. -Strange, that's what I thought back then too, but the other way around. But you're right, 18. I do deserve someone better than her, and that someone is you. You're the one for me, and our daughter proves it. Otherwise, you would have also dumped me long ago. -Nonetheless, I'm really angry with you, Krillin! I just hope our daughter will be as forgiving as I am.-when Krillin heard the word "our", he knew he was off the hook; at least by his wife. -Thank you, Number 18.-he smiled, while his wife smiled back, then giving him a short kiss on his lips; after that, she added: -Let's just hope she hasn't reconsidered herself after all those years and she's her to take you back...for hers sake.-while Krillin swallowed hard, knowing that that's exactly why she came back. In Satan City, we see Number 17, Master Roshi and Oolong walking on street, searching for some female "preys." Just then, they saw a big crowd of women staring at a 4000:1 wide billboard where there was an image of a naked man and a woman with their intimate body parts hidden mimicking sex underwater filled with exotic fish, corals and plants. There was a small newly invented revolutionary device attached to their nose, which allowed them to breathe in the water. Above the image, it was written in big red words "Amusement Lust", and underneath it, there was a banner, saying: "A place where you don't just have sex; you have fun while doing it. Yo can DO IT underwater, in the air, even on the roller coaster! Do you dare you to test your limits? We guarantee, you will be burning with satisfaction!" Most of the women looking at the billboard were utterly disgusted of how far a human's imagination could go just to try out new ways of "doing it." However, a few thought it was quite a daring idea and could hardly wait to try it out with their boyfriends or husbands. As Master Roshi and the others approached the crowd, he started: -Number 17, let me show you how to properly ask a woman out. It's all about using the right words.-then he approached a red-haired chick standing in the middle of the crowd-Hey there, sweetie pie! How's about you and me test our limits out together? Heck, we can "do it" in space, if you want. Let's show these people how to "rock and roll", baby! Oh, yeah!-unfortunately, for Master Roshi, the woman was part of the crowd that disliked doing such things out of lust and after hearing Roshi's "speech", she slapped his face so hard, that his newly bought modern sunglasses broke into pieces. -I guess you used the wrong words.-Oolong added, making the women behind him to giggle. -Allow me to try it.-Number 17 volunteered, then he picked a brunet from the other end of the crowd, who was also against the idea of the new carnival or amusement park, whatever, which recently opened, but 17 was prepared for that-What propustuos things can a man achieve with his mind! I'd rather go out on a nice dinner rather than do such perverted things. -Me too...-the woman responded, and after seeing with whom she was talking to, her eyes started to twinkle and her heart started beating more rapidly. -So, what do you say? You and me? Tonight, at seven o' clock? You pick the place...-while the woman blushed; then she immediately pulled out a card with her phone number on it and gave it to 17: -Call me!-then she excitedly hurried away, already thinking what to wear at the dinner. -Well, it seems, it was 17 who showed YOU how to really treat the ladies.-Oolong said with a smirk towards Master Roshi. -I guess so...-Master Roshi said sadly and disappointed of himself with a burning red cheeck on his left side. Somewhere at a lake near Mount Paozu, we see Goku fishing alone with a bored look on his face. He wasn't really fishing either. Whenever he caught a fish, he would pull the fishing net out of the water, grab the fish and throw it back in. Then he put some more bait on the net and do it over and over again. If someone would have seen him, he would think that Goku was actually feeding the fish. Before Goku even realised it, Chi-Chi was sitting next to him with a sad smile on her face: -Bulma called...-she started-She told my what was really going on with you and Vegeta lately. -It's not that you didn't know it all along.-Goku replied slowly as if he was sleepy or something. -But the Goku I know would never lay around and do nothing. He would always search for an adventure, a way to have fun, or do something useful, not waste time like this. -In the past everything was so much simpler. Now everyone is grown up, have their own family to take care of or friends to hang out with; they are always busy. And since its useless for me to train anymore, I have nothing to do then to wait to grow old and pass away to the Other World. -That's not true, you've still got me. Why do you always forget about me?! -I'm sorry, Chi-Chi. I know I've been a terrible husband for you. I've been away from you a lot, now haven't I? You should have married someone else a long time ago, I'm sure the kids would have understood it. -No, Goku. I married you for the same reason you married me: because I love you and no matter where you are or how far away you are, I will always do. Besides, it's my fault that you died the second time, so I should be the one apologizing. -What do you mean, Chi-Chi? -Ever since Gohan was born, all I did was to force him to study and nothing more. Even though he admit that he was never into fighting, I wonder if it was because of my influence on him. If I wouldn't have kept him from training, he would have killed Cell immediately and you wouldn't have to die again. It was then I promised myself not to make the same mistake with Goten and let him live his life freely and become whatever he wanted to be. I'm so sorry, Goku...-then tears began flowing from her eyes. -No, Chi-Chi! Don't cry! I also did a bad thing by forcing Gohan into fighting, so I also failed raising him properly. Besides, that day Gohan also made a mistake by being cocky and torturing Cell, instead of finishing him off right away. Huh! We should be named the Son Mistakes family.-at which both of them laughed-I'm sure our sons came out just the way they should have, because their both happy. And after being reunited with my father, I should also be happy and not feeling sorry for myself.-then he stood up-You're right, Chi-Chi! I was completely wasting my time.-then he threw all the bait from the bucket into the lake, while the fish, of course, couldn't be more happier.-I may have been all around the world before and seen it's beauties, and on some other planets too, but that doesn't mean I can't do it again. Adventure lays everywhere, I just have to look for it. Besides, during my travel I've met many good friends which I haven't seen for ages. Upa, Eighter, Snow, and that weird girl from Penguin Village...I felt their energy given to the Spirit Bomb with which I destroyed Majin Buu. Thus I was remembered of them, yet I still haven't bothered to visit them. I should be ashamed with myself...-then he looked down at his wife and stretched out his right hand towards her-Chi-Chi, will you fly with me on the Nimbus Cloud, to go on a little adventure of our own? Just the two of us, flying as far as our eyes can see, visiting the planet's every corner for the last time. What do you say?-at which Chi-Chi wiped her tears, grabbed her husbands' hand and also stood up happily: -I would love to, Goku.-and after kissing his lips passionately, she continued-I haven't seen my father for quite some time. I hope he's ok. -Let's find out, together!-Goku responded, then he looked up in the sky and shouted-Flying Nimbus!!!-after a very short while, the Nimbus cloud appeared out of nowhere, "landing" near the couple-Flying Nimbus, take us around the world! But slowly, we don't want to miss anything.-he said smiling towards his wife, then they both jumped on the cloud and flew away into the distance, embarking on a journey of their life-time... Join us again, next time on Dragon Ball Finale! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jan 8 2013, 03:09 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 10 2012, 11:38 AM Post #92 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 74: My Grandpa Dating...My Mother?! Previously, on Dragon Ball F, Maron reappeared in Krillin's life for the obvious reason of taking him back, not knowing that he's already taken. When finding out the truth about Maron's small relationship with her husband in the past, Number 18 was more understanding that Krillin thought she would be. But their daughter is yet to find out. Will she also take it so lightly? Find out today only on Dragon Ball F! When Krillin and 18 went downstairs to the living room, they both saw that the Marons were laughing hard. Actually, only the adult one was really enjoying her own joke, while the young one could hardly stand anymore of the her stupidity. Krillin decided to cut to the chase and end this nightmare of his as soon as possible: -So, Maron, what brings you here after all these years? -I know this will sound weird...-Maron started blushfully-But even after all these years I still love you, Krillin, and I can't stop thinking about you. -What?!-Krillin asked surprised. -WHAT?!-Marron asked even more surprised. -That's it, she's dead!-Number 18 said angrily, but before she put her hands on her, Maron continued, which made 18 to stop: -Every man I ever dated, they all wanted me for my looks, actually, for my boobs, and not for what was inside me, my inner beauty, my soul. But you, Krillin, you saw through my well-defined curved figure and treated me as a queen, while I dumped you as soon as I saw a good-looking man with a cool car.-then a tear began flowing down from her right eye-You told me back then that I deserved better, but it was you who deserved better while I deserved less. I mistreated you, Krillin, and I'm terribly sorry!-then she really begin to cry-Why, oh, why, God?! Why have you blessed me with too much beauty?!-at which Number 18 could hardly hold back herself from bursting into laughter, while the young Marron started to freak out. -It's alright, Maron...-Krillin started comforting her-You don't have to apologize to me; I'm also sorry of how things ended between us, but... -So, will you take me back?-Maron asked suddenly cheerful. -I'm sorry, Maron, but that woman behind you...-then he pointed towards his wife-...is actually my life and that over at the table is our daughter...uhm, Marron. -But do you love her as much as you loved me? -Don't push it, missy!-Number 18 said fiercely-You DON'T want to make me angry! Whatever little thing you had with my husband is LOOONG over so I recommend you get over it! -You call that a LITTLE?!-Number 18's daughter yelled-Dad actually named me after her!!! I think that proves the contrary, don't you think?! -Now hold on there, Maron...Wait just a minute, it's not what you think...-Krillin started babbling. -Really? The next thing you tell me this stupid bimbo is my mother.-while she pointed angrily at the 50-year-old Maron. -But Krillin and I never slept with each other; we only got to the third base .-Maron pointed out still in tears. -Does that suppose to make me feel better?!-the young Marron shrieked. -Come now, Maron...-Krillin cut in. -Yes?-the old Maron asked a bit smiling. -Not you, my daughter... -Oh...-then she became sad again. -Come now, Maron! Surely you won't hold a grudge on me for a stupid thing like identical names, now will you? -My name isn't stupid!!!-the old Maron cried out loud. -WATCH ME!-the young Maron shouted, then she went outside and took off in the air and flew away in tears. -I'll go talk to her.-Number 18 volunteered and took off after her, even though she wasn't comfortable leaving Krillin alone with that bimbo Marron, who was crying even harder; luckily, Krillin didn't have to worry about the neighbours, cause he had none, other than the seagulls flying above the Kame House. We see Goku and Chi-Chi flying above an ocean on the Nimbus Cloud enjoying the scenery, when, all of a sudden, they both heard King Kai's voice: -Hey there, Goku! Sorry for interrupting your moment with your wife... -No worries, King Kai! How you've been? -You know, the usual: hanging out in the Other World, making fun of the other Kais... -Any interesting tournaments I missed? -There were some intense ones, but in the end, Pikkon would always come out victorious. -Man, I sort of hardly wait to die to show him how strong I've become by now. -That would be great. Anyway, your son contacted me from Planet Gogeta and asked me to tell you to meet him there urgent. He said that someone very dear to you would like to see you. -Hmmm...I wonder who could that be? Do you know who it is? -Yes, I do, but I don't want to ruin the surprise. You will have to go there to find out yourself. Hi-Hi-Hi! -King Kai, always the jokester. -Actually, I've lost my touch at it. I guess, I must be getting "old". Get it? OLD? -Ha-Ha-Ha!-Goku managed to laugh hard to convince King Kai that he got it-Anyway, thanks for telling us the info. Bye!-then he looked towards his wife-So, Chi-Chi...Wana come with me to another planet similar to Earth. -You bet I do.-Chi-Chi responded firmly-Plus, it would be nice to see Gohan again, even though it has been only two months. -Ok, then, hang on!-and without putting two fingers on his forehead like he used to before becoming Gogeta, both of them vanished, leaving the Nimbus cloud continue to fly alone into the distance. Goku and Chi-Chi appeared in the same town where Kibitoshin's life has been saved. In fact, to their surprise, they also met him there, with a big smile on his face. -Kibitoshin, what are you doing here?-Goku asked him amazed. -You know that lovely doctor, Leana, which saved my life not so long ago? Well, guess what, we're dating each other. -I'm really happy for you, Kibitoshin, but King Kai told me you wanted to see me urgent. I'm sure this wasn't all that urgent, plus, no offense, but you're not that dear to me. -Oh, about that. Let me take you to them. -Them?-Goku wondered to himself, while Kibitoshin took him and his wife to a park. As they approached the park, Goku saw two familiar persons sitting on a bench. The first one was his son, Gohan, however, the other one was also Gohan, none other than his Grandpa Gohan. Goku's eyes got filled with tears of joy as he ran next to him, pulling him up from the bench and giving him a very tight hug, almost squeezing the life out of him. -Grandpa Gohan, you're alive!-Goku shouted happily. -I won't be for much long if you don't let go of me at once...-his grandpa managed to say, coughing. -Oh, I'm sorry.-Goku apologized, while putting him down-I am just so happy to see you again...alive? But how can that be? -Well, dad...-Goku's son started-As you remember, back on New Namek, Xaras asked Porunga to revive everyone who has ever died by the hands of the Saiyans, so... -I was the one who killed you grandpa...-Goku continued instead-So, you're alive again! I am so sorry for killing you all those years!-then tears of sadness replaced the ones of joy. -It's ok.-his grandpa said smiling-We both know it wasn't you who really killed me, it was the beast inside you, which, by the way, you didn't even know of or how to control. So you don't really owe me any apologies. At least now I know why you haven't visited me when you were dead. I heard that you died twice; you should take more care of yourself. -Yeah...HI-HI-HI! And thanks, Grandpa Gohan, for forgiving me! You're the best.-Goku said happily, whipping his tears. -Don't mention it. Anyway, I would like you to meet my new girlfriend. -Whoah, you barely came back to life and you already found a girlfriend? You sneaky devil; Master Roshi would be so jealous. -In fact, here she comes now.-then they all looked behind to see a Saiyan woman coming towards them. The Saiyan woman had a long black hair put in a ponytail, with a white Saiyan armor and pink shorts. Goku felt a familiar connection with her, as if he knew her or something. After giving Grandpa Gohan a kiss on his cheeks, she approached Goku with a fierceful look and slapped him hard on his face: -That was for not visiting me after giving birth to Kakarot.-she sad angrily. -But I AM...Kakarot.-Goku managed to say. -Kakarot?-she asked wondered. -M...mom?-Goku asked surprised, and suddenly, the woman hugged him tightly. -Kakarot! Holy crap, it is you! I can't believe how much you grew up, you look just like your father. Uhm...sorry for slapping you earlier, I really thought you were that no-good father of yours, Bardock. -It's nice to meet you too at last, mom. King Kai told me that someone dear to me wanted to see me, but I never imagined that this meeting would turn out this good. So, what's your name? -Taanipu. -Taanipu, meet my loving wife, Chi-Chi, and my son, Son Gohan. -Nice to meet you, miss Taanipu.-Gohan and Chi-Chi said in unison, both bowing down to her. -That's really not necessary.-Taanipu said a bit blushfully-And skip the "miss" part; you make me sound old. Actually, I'm younger than all three of you, which is kind of weird. -What's really weird is Goku's grandpa dating his own mother.-Chi-Chi remarked. -Well, he's not my real grandpa; he just raised me.-Goku responded-Besides, I think my whole life was one weirdness after another, so I'm pretty much used to it. So, you and grandpa, huh?-Goku asked Taanipu. -Weird, I know. But he makes me laugh so much. But don't worry, we're not doing any kinky stuff; we're just companions. -So, whatever happened between you and dad anyway? -It just simply didn't work out, I guess. There was nothing really special between us. Didn't he tell you anything? -In fact, he hasn't mention you at all. -That coward bastard! This goes to show you how little did I meant for him. Well, It's not like I loved him or anything; there was a strong connection between us, but nothing special. After Raditz was born, he has already been sent to another planet to destroy it after he grows up, and since then, I pretty much haven't seen your brother anymore. Then your father and I fell apart also. We rarely have seen each other, had se...you know, and that's it. I'm sorry that you have to hear it from me, but back then, making children wasn't all that special. It never was, but since we've been revived, things started to finally change, WE started to change. Now I also realize that whatever things I've done in the past, they were mostly wrong. And having you and Raditz without a good reason, without love, was also a really bad thing to do. I hope you can forgive me.-while Goku saw that she really meant all that and she felt really sorry for her past mistakes. -It's alright, mom. I'm still glad I got a chance to meet you and sort things out between us. At least, now I know the truth. The Saiyans indeed were bad news to every living thing, and to themselves, but everyone deserves a second chance, thus they have been revived and I can see great progress from them. You, mother, also deserve forgiveness and I shall give it to you. -Thank you, son.-then they both hugged each other once more-By the way, how's your brother, Raditz, doing? -We have some issues between us, so he decided that it was best for him to leave far away. -I'm sorry to hear that. -I see you're not even curious about father... -I heard that he's helping King Vegeta out. I don't really care. What I care about right now is getting to know you better. -What do you say we all go to a restaurant and catch up?-Grandpa Gohan suggested. -Sure.-Goku immediately answered-I haven't enjoyed a good meal for a while now. Goku has finally met his mother. Even though he found out that he wasn't born out of love, he was still happy to have met her and forgave her. At least someone had a swell day today. Krillin's nightmare is still not over, however his solution will come from a very unexpected person. Find out who that person is next time on Dragon Ball F! |
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| sephcel24 | Nov 10 2012, 01:03 PM Post #93 |
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Art prevails!
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nice nice i only read like 5 of them and iam impressed good job keep it up |
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Nov 10 2012, 08:12 PM Post #94 |
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I don't think it's a good idea to bring back into action more and more dead people from the distant past.Myself,i was planning to continue my Future Buu Saga fanfic by bringing back Future Z Fighters,but,then,i thought that some people are meant to remain dead. Anyway,i'm curious to see how Goku turns evil. |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 10 2012, 09:54 PM Post #95 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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I kind of agree, but bringing them back all at once is fun:) > how they interact with each other and all. Goku turning evil was already forseen in the earlier episodes, but you have to read it more carefully to find it out:) Besides, it won't be that deep or mindblowing in my oppinion, only interesting. Imagine a fight between him and Vegeta while Vegeta being the hero this time |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 11 2012, 10:16 AM Post #96 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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This is how I imagine Goku's and Vegeta's mothers |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 21 2012, 02:18 PM Post #97 |
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Episode 75: Farwell, Ox-King! We see Marron sitting on a giant cliff which was surrounded by the waste ocean. Whenever she wanted to be alone, this was her favourite spot to be, where she could relax and think things trough in her head. She looked really sad; she was so deep in thoughts, she didn't even realize her mother floating next to her: -So, how long you gonna stay mad at him?-Number 18 asked her. -I guess a few weeks should be enough. -Sounds fair enough. Although, you can't blame him for having the right to fall in love. -Yea, but why should I be the one to hold a mark to his past relationship? -Life is full with crazy things. Get used to it! -Speaking of crazy things...What would you say if I liked a black person?-at which 18 remained speechless. Back at the Kame House, Krillin was still trying hard to calm Marron down, who was still crying like a baby; her tears had literally wet the floor. Just then, Oolong and the others arrived home: -Hey, we're back!-Oolong shouted. -Uh, something sure smells good; I'm fanished.-Master Roshi added, when, all of a sudden, he saw the woman of his dreams, reappearing in his life -Is that who I think it is?-he asked not believing his eyes. -It's Maron, she's back.-Ooling answered, at which Master Roshi immediately rushed towards her: -Krillin, what have you done to this beautiful lady to make her cry like this?-at which Maron suddenly swooped into his arms, surprising both Roshi and Krillin. -Oh, Master Roshi!-she cried-It's terrible! It's just terrible! I've wasted my whole life in trying to find the right guy for me, and after realizing that it was Krillin all along, I find out not only that he's married, of which I'm frankly surprised, but he doesn't even love me anymore. Tell me, wise master, what should I ever do with my life now? -Oh, you, poor, poor girl. I wish there was a way I could cheer you up. Why, I would bring down the moon from the sky and give it to you, if we had one. -You're so romantic...-then all of a sudden, something caught her eye; letting Master Roshi go, she walked towards a desk, where she saw an old photo of someone and picked it up-Who is this handsome guy?-and when Roshi approached her and saw of whom she was referring to, he could hardly wait to tell her: -Actually, that handsome guy is me...or at least was me many years ago. -Really? I can't believe how good-looking you were. I wish we would have met in another lifetime, like back then; I think we would be long married by now and already have both kids and grand kids. I believe we would have been really happy together. Too bad...-then she sadly put the photo back on the desk; although Master Roshi wasn't sure he'd be willing to ever have kids, but the idea of having the chance to bang her was beyond tempting. -So, are you saying that if I were that young again, you would go out with me? -Go out with you? Why, I would marry you. But sadly, it's just impossible. And not only that you have to become young again, but also remove your immortality so we could grow old together. But wait, you must be about 20 in that picture if not younger, while I'm already 50. This will never work out.-then she began crying again. -No, wait! Do you remember when I once told you about the Dragon Balls?-when, all of a sudden, Maron cheered up again. -You're right! We can ask the Eternal Dragon to wish us together. That would be wonderful. Do you have them here? -No, but give me four months until I gather them and until they're reactivated, and then we'll have our wish, baby; imagine, you and me, together, I can hardly wait. -Me too. Okay then, four months it is. Wait until my parents hear about this; they'll be so happy that I have finally found my soul mate. See you in four months! Bye!-then she hurried outside into a speeder boat and drove away. -Wait! Don't I get a good-bye kiss?-Master Roshi whined but she was long gone-Oh well, I will get much more next time when we meet. I just hope Goku and the others will lend me the balls for my wishes. After all I've done for them, they'd better...Oolong, will you come with me? -Why not? There's nothing better to do here anyway. What about you, 17? -Don't think so. Might as well go call that woman to settle a date with her. It would be more satisfying than hanging out with you losers. See ya!-then he took off and flew away. -Well, I never... -Uhm, thanks Master Roshi for taking care of Maron for me.-Krillin said relieved-Just be nice to her and please treat her well. -Oh, I'll "treat" her well, don't you worry about that.-Roshi responded, while he imagined doing all kinds of perverted stuff with her. -Oh, boy...-Krillin sighed. On Planet Gogeta, Goku had some real catching up to do with his grandpa, especially his mother. But he noticed that his wife started having a worried look on her face, as if something was troubling her: -Chi-Chi, is there something wrong with the food?-Goku asked her. -No, Goku. I just have a very bad feeling about papa.I think something's wrong with him. Sorry for ruining your great reunion, but will you please take me to him? -Of course, Chi-Chi. You guys coming?-Goku asked the others. -You bet.-his grandpa Gohan responded-I haven't seen the great Ox-King for like...forever. Honey, will you come with us?-he asked Taanipu. -Sorry, but I really think I should stay out of this one. I don't quite feel like being a family member yet, so you should just go without me. -Nonsense, mom.-Goku replied-We really don't mind having you around and we would be really happy if you would come with us. -No chance of convincing me otherwise, son. Your father should have told you at least that I'm very hardheaded; whatever I decide, it stays that way no matter what. Take care, everyone, and come back soon.-after that she stood up from the table and flew away. -Ok, you guys, grab hold!-Goku said, and after that he teleported everyone back to Earth. They appeared inside Ox-King's castle and saw him laying in bed; he appeared to be sleeping. However, he was very pale and seemed more skinny than usual. -Papa, are you asleep?-Chi-Chi asked worried, when, all of a sudden, a maiden appeared out of nowhere, and after seeing Chi-Chi, she immediately rushed towards her with a scared look on her face: -Princess Chi-Chi...Thank goodness, you're here. It's your father, the king; he's very ill and I'm afraid he's going to pass away soon. -Oh no!!!-Chi-Chi cried out in tears as she grabbed a hold of her father's left hand, which was cold as ice-No, papa, don't leave me! Please, don't die! Wake up! Do you hear me?! WAKE UP!!! -Chi-Chi...-Ox-King started slowly-My loving daughter...you've come to say goodbye from me. Now I can rest in peace... -No, you can't! I won't let you! -I'm very old and my time has come. You know very well that this has to happen. -But I don't want you to leave just yet... -Soon, we shall see each other again in the Other World. Until then, you'll have your loving family by your side.-then he looked at Goku-Please don't ever leave her side again until your time comes too, Goku. -Don't worry, Ox-King; I promise I will never leave her again until death tear us apart.-Goku responded sadly, then Ox-King looked at his grandson: -Gohan, tell your brother goodbye from me. -I will, grandpa.-Gohan replied with tears. -Oh, my gosh.-Ox-King shouted-It's happening. I'm passing to the Other World. I can already see your Grandpa Gohan standing next to you, Goku. -But I am here, old friend.-Grandpa Gohan said. -I can hear him too... -No, he's really here, papa.-Chi-Chi explained still in tears. -Really? Now this is quite a turn of events. My dear old friend...How is it that you're here? -I've been wished back from mistake, actually. My place isn't quite here, but... -I see...You've come to replace me. How fortunate... -I'm really sorry to already see you pass away like this before having the chance to catch up... -Yes, I see you too, muffin. -Gohan, whom are you talking to? -I can hardly wait to be reunited with you too, my love...-Ox-King said looking towards someone unseen by the others, but only himself. -Papa, what's wrong?-Chi-Chi asked him really scared. -Don't worry, Chi-Chi. You will see her too one day...Then we will all be a happy family...together once more... -Papa, who are you talking about? -I'm coming, honey!Ox-King shouted towards the nothingness-Farwell, everyone!-his last words were, until he closed his eyes forever with a peaceful, happy smile on his face. -NOOOOO!!!-Chi-Chi cried as loud as she could, her voice echoing through the entire castle; all the maidens who heard her voice knew that their beloved king passed away, and they all started to pray for his soul and cry in silence. -Dont cry, Chi-Chi!-Goku comforted her-He's in a better place now. You'll see him again one day; all of us will. -Whom do you think he was talking to right before he d...passed away?-Gohan wondered. -I...I think he was talking with m...my mother.-Chi-Chi managed to respond in tears. As we leave our heroes mourning over their loss, we see a space pod landing on a deserted planet, somewhere in the galaxy, on a large island. A very tall muscular person with two horns steps out of it; the person was none other than King Cold himself. He found out that his son had failed once again to defeat the Saiyans, so King Cold decided to go into exile, rather than face the same faith as his son. But he did have a scheme up his sleeve. Suddenly, he noticed that he wasn't alone on the island, when he heard the bushes next to him moving: -Who goes there?-he asked a bit startled. -Well, well, look who we have here?-a familiar voice said from behind a tall tree, and as he stepped out to the light, he revealed himself to be Bojack-A deserter coward who abandoned New Namek only to save his skin. -Look who's talking? -I knew your son would screw things up again; it's in his blood to be a screw up. And with his demise, Cell would also fall, and the rest of the bunch after them. -Well, that makes two of us. I also had a feeling that my son would fail once again to destroy those blasted Saiyans. He just had to take them head on, instead of blowing them all up along with the planet. That's the second time he failed and he surely won't get a third chance, not from me anyway. -So, why are you here? -Same like you, to hide like a coward until a good opportunity comes along... -Yea right...Well, you should know this planet has very little life forms and the food is barely enough for the five of us, so I recommend you leave now, before I make you to. -Don't be silly. I'm not you enemy, THEY are, those Saiyan monkeys and I am merely here to offer you a proposal. -What could you possibly have to offer me? -A way to have your revenge, of course. -Yea right... -You said that there were five of you here? Then, I'm guessing your henchmen are also here, is that correct? -So what of it? -Babidi needs five strong warriors to help him to resurrect himself from the dead, and... -You have put you faith on a small lizard who can't even defend himself using his puny magic? How low can you get? I'm out of here and you also better get going cause the next time I see you, I will kill you and eat you with the rest of the crew.-then Bojack turned around and started walking away. -Babidi alone may be weak, but after finding his father in Hell, and fusing with him, I believe he will be able to do more things with his magic than we could ever imagine.-while Bojack suddenly stopped. -And then what? -Babidi promised me before being revived, that he would increase his loyal servants' strength and make them more powerful beyond their limits. Then, we will finally get rid of those Super Monkeys and rule the Universe. -I am nobody's servant... -You can kill Babidi afterwards, who cares? Just imagine the power we will possess after he awakens our dormant powers; we will be invincible. -And what is your role in all this? -I just needed to find the right guinea...I mean, the right persons for the job. After finding out that you and your henchmen also fled New Namek, I started searching for you guys. Coincidentally, you also took the same pods in which Xaras' henchmen landed on that planet. So I followed the signal of the pods to this place. Very wise choice indeed; no one would ever think looking us here. So, are you in? -Why not? Things can't get anymore suckier than now. But none the less, you will have to leave this planet and come back AFTER Babidi has found his father. You know, very little food... -Very well then. I shall search for another suitable planet close-by and when the time comes, I will announce you. Until then, try not to die or anything.-then King Cold went back into his space pod and left the planet. -I don't trust that guy, and nor that wizard...-Bojack thought-And after making me stronger, I will dispose of.both of them, or three, whatever. It seems that a new wicked plot is being formed against our heroes. Can Bibidi's and Babidi's magic be strong enough to break free from Hell and defeat the Z-Fighters? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Nov 22 2012, 03:44 PM.
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| Pookie | Nov 21 2012, 04:37 PM Post #98 |
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I read the past few chapters. I gotta say that I enjoyed the last couple of chapters. This new chapter you wrote got me almost crying myself. I couldn't imagine how Chichi would react if her father passed way too. I remember in Dragonball how upset she was. Goku even threw Grandpa Gohan to the floor in order to save Ox King. Either way, I really like the twists you put at the end of the series. DBGT was crap, but this makes up for it. I'll be flipping back to catch up on the stories. One thing I'd say is that you should try separating dialogue because I get confused sometimes on who is talking. I am a sucker for Goku/Chichi romance haha. It was very genuine. The rest of the story I enjoyed too so far. I liked that Goku got to meet his mother. What a shocker! Anyway, I will be starting from the beginning. I like it so far. Good work! |
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| Megasaiyan | Nov 22 2012, 03:41 PM Post #99 |
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Thank you, Pookie. I appreaciate you liking it and taking your time reading it. As you might have noticed, I started remastering my series which is going really slow. I will be making some slight changes to it, mostly only expanding the episodes, but nevertheless, you can still read it from the beginning to have an idea on what's going on. ENJOY!:) |
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 3 2012, 10:55 PM Post #100 |
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Episode 76: The Rematch Three days after Ox-King's death, all of the Z Fighers gathered once again to attend to his funeral. Shortly after, they all went back to their regular lives as if nothing happened. Despite being devastated at first, Chi-Chi managed to get a hold of herself, knowing it was foolish to moan over him. She comforted herself that her father passed away without any regrets and it was also his time to leave the mortal world and go to a better place, where he could rest in peace for eternal life. In order to get her mind off him, Chi-Chi continued her journey around the Earth with her husband, meeting some of their old friends. She was most happy when she met her childhood friends from school. Gohan has once again returned to Planet Earth 2.0, along with his great grandpa Gohan. Ox-King's funeral was also somewhat beneficial for the old Turtle Hermit, cause there he could ask all of the gang if they would lend him the Dragon Balls to have a chance with Maron. Surprisingly, they all agreed, but nonetheless, Master Roshi still had to go and gather them from everyone. Number 17 went out on a date with the brunet he met that day in the park. Even more surprisingly, it went so well, they already moved in together in an apartment in Satan City. Marron and Uub started secretly dating each other of which no one knew, although Number 18 did have a hunch about it. And as for Khitan, he started to take his training more seriously, as his four months given by Vegeta were almost up. And so the BIG day has come; exactly four months have passed since Khitan's and Vegeta's battle. Now the moment of truth has finally come. The fight was held in the exact wasteland where Napa and Vegeta once fought the Z Fighters. It was a dark cloudy autumn afternoon and although it was raining hard, that didn't stop the prince of Saiyans postpone it; he actually enjoyed the rain which made him excited of the upcoming fight. Bra, Trunks, Pan, Xevo and Mizuna, all went to the scene to route for their friend, Khitan. However, they didn't get wet, thanks to Trunks' new mini shield generator, which blocked the rain for them. The other two fighters, however, were soaking wet by now. Khitan was wearing his regular rock clothes, having his cap on, which kept most of his hair and face dry. Vegeta, on the other hand, decided to wear his old Saiyan armor suit again, wich he hasn't worn since the Cell Games. They were both facing each other at a 10 meters distance, getting ready for battle. -This is just ridiculous!-Bra started complaining to her friends-What does he trying to achieve, for Khitan to get a pneumonia? I'm sure dad would like him die of it. -I just hope he wins.-Mizuna said worried. -You haven't taught her how to sense ki energies, now have you Trunks?-Xevo asked sighing. -We're still working on that.-Trunks quickly replied. -What does that supposed to mean?!-Mizuna asked Xevo with an angry face, which scared the crap out of him. -Trunks, will you explain to her, please?-Xevo asked with a tiny voice. -What Xevo is trying to say is that Khitan is nowhere near Super Saiyan 3. He could barely defeat Piccolo at this point, which is not enough. -Just look at him staring at my boyfriend with a devilish smirk on his face.-Bra started, referring to her dad-He's enjoying every bit of it. Well, I'm not going to let his selfish ego ruin my life. He can't possible think that he can force me to break up with Khitan, just because he's not living up to dad's standards. GO KHITAN!-she shouted to her boyfriend. Show dad that you're more than meets the eye! And give him some good punches in the face from me too! -So, are you ready boy?-Vegeta asked Khitan. -Uhm, not really; but I did learn a couple of new tricks.-Khitan answered. -So, you're relying on tricks again, instead of your strength. -You know what they say: mind over muscle. -As a reminder, I would like to point out that the old Turtle Hermit has been allowed to use the Dragon Balls for two wishes, which means if you die now, you won't be revived any time soon. -I did hear a lot of good things of the Other World, I'm sure I'll like it. Plus, I'm not afraid of death. -Death should be your least concern at this point. -Why is that? -What does usually come before death? -Uhm...Pain? Suffering? -Exactly. And you should know that I like to "play" with my opponents before finishing them off. So get ready, for something you never experienced before:endless tremendous pain!-Vegeta shouted, then he transformed into a Super Saiyan 3. -Yea, yea, enough with your threats already!-then Khitan also powered up as a big white transparent aura surrounded him; he attacked Vegeta head-on, only to be punched back to his initial position, while, the punch was so strong, it almost twisted Khitan's neck-I guess he wasn't kidding after all...crap!-this time, Khitan attacked Vegeta with full power, their fists clashing into each others', throwing sparks of electricity all around them, their yellow and white auras melting together, forming a really big mixt coloured one, which lit the place for tens of kilometers. -Not bad...-Vegeta admitted, then he repeatedly punched Khitan, but all of them were blocked-By the way, have you told Bra about your third eye? -What kind of a lousy boyfriend do you think I am? Of course I did! -Then why don't you use it? -I think you made it pretty clear the last time that it's useless against you. -Haven't you "taught" it any new tricks? -Sorry, but no.-then Khitan tried to elbow Vegeta, which caught it with both hands, then threw Khitan far away, afterwards blasting him with a GARLIC GUN. The purple energy ball was coming at Khitan so fast, that he couldn't dodge it, so he tried to deflect it, which cost him quite a bit of energy. After that, he attacked Vegeta once again, but before his fist reached Vegeta's face, he unleashed a small energy wave from it, splashing the rain drops into Vegeta's eyes, temporarily blinding him, making him vulnerable for a few moments for any attacks. And Khitan didn't waste any time at all, as he punched and kicked Vegeta simultaneously everywhere on his body. Vegeta became so mad, that he unleashed a huge energy wave around him, which blew away along with Khitan all the rain drops around him for over then kilometers. Then Vegeta opened his eyes and immediately attacked Khitan fiercely, grabbing him from his front face, dragging him down through a big pile of mud, until Khitan's whole body got filled with it, to the point that you couldn't even recognize him. Afterwards, Vegeta threw him into a giant cliff so hard, that the entire cliff collapsed on Khitan. A few moments later, a huge explosion occurred where the cliff crashed, which evaporated all the rubble, while Khitan's figure could be seen floating upwards. He was still unrecognizable, but the hard rain immediately washed down the dirt from him, cleaning him up. Then Khitan threw his cap down and flew back at the prince, but whenever Vegeta wanted to hit him, Khitan temporarily stunned him with his third eye, afterwards hitting him several times. After that he let Vegeta loose, allowing the prince to strike back, only to stun him again, hitting him more, then letting him free again. This little game continued for a while, which really irritated the prince. Vegeta then powered up to his max and suddenly disappeared to the point that Khitan couldn't even sense him. The prince reappeared out of nowhere just as sudden, giving Khitan a knuckle sandwich, only to disappear a second later. He continued disappearing and reappearing within seconds, every time hitting Khitan all over his body, not allowing him to use his third eye on the prince again. Khitan then realized how much power difference was between him and Vegeta, and that he couldn't possibly win against him. After a while, Vegeta got bored with hitting Khitan all over, and decided to finish him off. Khitan was filled with bruises and he would be filled with blood too, if the rain hadn't washed it down by now. -You really thought I was joking around now didn't you?-Vegeta started-You really thought that I was just bluffing when I said that I would kill you if you wouldn't be able to beat me in my SSJ3 form? Now I will show you what happens to those who don't take me serious...-then Vegeta started powering up again; the entire place started shaking underneath him, cliffs started collapsing, the clouds above started dispersing, while it stopped raining. -Trunks, do something!-Bra yelled in tears-Dad's out of his mind, he's going to kill my boyfriend! Please, stop him! -Don't worry, Bra!-Trunks tried to calm her-Dad knows what he's doing; I assure you he won't kill him!-although, at this point, not even Trunks was sure about his statement. -Get ready to die, boy!-Vegeta yelled-I'm sure Bra will miss you. SUPER FINAL FLASH!!! TO BE CONTINUED>>> |
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| Megasaiyan | Dec 14 2012, 04:51 PM Post #101 |
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Episode 77: Khitan's Evil Alter Ego> EVIL KHITAN The enormous white beam with yellow margins was coming at Khitan so fast, that he simply couldn't dodge it. He felt the beam's huge power and knew he could not possibly survive it, but he tried anyway to deflect it. So he stretched out his arms and took the beam head-on; he suddenly felt an unbearable pain aching through his hands, burning in pain as if they were on fire, while he struggled to counterwave the beam. Khitan's hands started disintegrating as he was shouting in pain. But in the very last seconds, something snapped inside Khitan, a stubborn determination to survive at all cost, and something inexplicable started happening to his third eye: it started glowing whiter and brighter, while it began absorbing Vegeta's massive energy beam, without Khitan even realizing what he was doing. Vegeta and the others couldn't believe their eyes, as they watched the FINAL FLASH disappearing into the boy. Now Khitan's whole body was glowing white, including all of his eyes, while red and white electricity was sparkling in front of his head. The boy looked at Vegeta with menacing eyes while his long hair was drifting in the hair, his eyes becoming so bright that you couldn't even see his face no more. -I think this belongs to you!-Khitan shouted-REVERSE-INVERSE KI ATTACK!!!-then he blasted Vegeta's FINAL FLASH right back at him with his glowing eyes, only that this time, the beam was yellow with white margins instead; Vegeta was still shocked of the sudden twist and when he came back to his senses, it was too late to get out of the beams' way. -*****!-Vegeta said in the end as he prepared himself to deflect his own technique. But unlike Khitan, Vegeta had more than enough power to deflect the attack into space; nonetheless, it still cost him a great amount of power, so he reverted back to his SSJ2 form, thus making Khitan the victor of the agreement. Not so far from the battle scene, the younglings were still astonished of the twist, while Bra felt her feet getting numb, so she let herself fall down on her knees, being in a sorrow trance: -How could he?-she started silently-He almost killed him...How could he? If it weren't for Khitan's dumb luck, he would be dead by now because of that...ANIMAL! Unforgivable! -Bra, are you alright?-Pan asked her worried, then she turned towards Trunks.-Trunks, do something! She's in a some kind of trance!-however, Trunks was speechless. Back at the battle scene, Khitan and Vegeta were still in the air, however most of Khitans' arms were gone, while he was breathing hard from exhaustion. He was very pissed off for being armless, while Vegeta was smirking at him: -Congratulations, boy!-Vegeta started-You've beaten me in my SSJ3 form, well, not literally, but nonetheless, you made me revert back to my previous form, so you have earned my daughters' hands. -That's just great!-Khitan started madly-How am I supposed to hug her without any frigging' arms?! -Stop whining, you cry baby! Here, I brought some Senzu Beans.-while Vegeta took one out of his armor-Here, catch!-then he threw it directly into Khitan's mouth, who swallowed it immediately; within moments, Khitan's arms grew back, while he recovered all his strength. -Now that's better.-Khitan said relieved, then he turned towards Bra and the others-Hey, Bra! Did you hear the good news? Your dad gave me permission to officially date you!-however, Bra was still in a shock, looking into the distance absent-mindedly-Oookay, someone is less excited than she should be. -Way to go, Khitan!-Mizuna shouted from the group. -You're the man!-Xevo added. -Thank you, thank you!-Khitan said as he bowed down in the air-You're a wonderful audience! -I think I'm going to be sick!-Vegeta added sarcastically. -Boy, is it just me, or is it a bit chilly out here?-Khitan asked rather himself, when all of a sudden, he sneezed loudly; just then, his muscles tightened up, while his hair and eyebrows became blue and his eyes of a yellow color, at which everyone became surprised. -Well, this is something new...-Pan added. -Wow, I never knew he could do that!-Mizuna said totally surprised-He looks so radical. -Something's not right.-Vegeta thought-That boy's power level suddenly doubled itself not long after he swallowed that bean. I thought only Saiyans could increase their power level after near death experience, I never heard of any other race being able to do it, especially Earthlings. And this boy literally became twice as strong than he was before, that's just crazy. What is going on here? He possibly surpassed my SSJ3 form. And there's something else too...something evil about him as well. Very curious... -You...-Khitan said towards Vegeta with a fierce look in his eye-You will pay dearly for disintegrating my arms earlier, not to mention the fact, that you almost killed me. -You surprise me yet again, boy. It seems you have more than enough power in you for round two. That's the spirit! Now you're talking like a true warrior. -I've had enough with you babbling around what I should be like! I'll show you what I'm really capable of! You never should have messed with me!-then Khitan powered up to his maximum, while a blue aura with white electricity surrounded him, then he instantly vanished into thin air, while reappearing in the exact second with his left punch connecting with Vegeta's face, breaking two if his front teeth; however, Vegeta was still smirking: -I always knew you had it in you...just don't get carried away! The last person who knocked my teeth not so long ago has paid the ultimate price for doing so. You may have passed the test, but I will still kill you if you push me too far. -I don't think so...-Khitan said with a serious face, then he teleported himself behind Vegeta's back, and kicked his backbone so hard, that it almost broke;Vegeta was unable to inhale for a whole long minute, as he knelt on the ground. -THAT...DOES...IT!-Vegeta managed to say after a few minutes, transforming back into Super Saiyan 3, then suddenly disappeared, but so did Khitan. The younglings couldn't see, nor sense them anymore; the two warriors were fighting so fast, that not even Trunks could keep up with them. All they could see was many cliffs collapsing, and craters appearing out of nowhere, while sand and dust filled the entire place for hundreds of miles, making it hard to breathe. If it weren't for the energy shield, Xevo and the others would have likely suffocated, and who knows how the other two fighters managed to survive it? Suddenly, a giant blue ki blast appeared up in the sky, obliterating all the sand-dust around it, while the person holding it threw it down towards his opponent. The other person barely managed to deflect it, unwittingly throwing the blast towards the younglings. Trunks, Pan and Bra, all powered up to their maximum SSJ stages and raised a yellow ki shield around Mizuna and Xevo, as well as themselves, while the huge ki blast explodes when connecting with it, enlightening the entire region as if it was bright daylight for several minutes. Instead of dust, there was now smoke everywhere, and as it was slowly dispersing, we see a very deep crater where the explosion occurred, and in the centre of it, the yellow ki shield with the persons inside it unharmed. -This has gone way out of control!-Trunks yelled while he and the two girls lowered the ki shield-What the hell are they thinking?! They're fighting as if they were enemies. Have they gone insane?! -This is not like Khitan at all...-Bra cried in tears-And dad is overdoing it as well, I can't believe those two. I just can't take it anymore... -Uhm, guys...-Xevo started-I can't hear anything. Do you think they moved to another place? -No, they're still here...somewhere.-Mizuna replied with a serious face. -WHAT?!-both Trunks and Xevo asked amazed at the same time. -But how can you sense them when we can't?-Pan asked wondered. -I don't sense them. I just feel the smell of blood...someone's injured, badly, and that can't be good either way. -Darn it!!!-Trunks yelled-I have to stop those two before it's too late!-but before he could do anything, both Khitan and Vegeta appeared up in the sky, one holding the other from the neck. They were too far to see who had the upper hand, but a lot of blood was dripping from the defeated one. Just then, the person let go of his opponent, who crashed badly to the ground, while blood was all over him. The person lying on the ground unconscious was none other than the prince of Saiyans himself, who reverted back to his base form. He was so beaten up, like the last time when Fat Buu defeated him, even worse. Surprisingly, his armor was still intact, while Khitan's shirt was ripped off, and his jeans around his knees as well. -Wow, Khitan really had it in him.-Xevo said sarcastically. -This is not the time to joke around, Xevo!-Pan said angrily. -Well, Bra, I guess your wish came true, after all.-Trunks said ironically. Back at the battle scene: -Saiyan trash!-Khitan said towards Vegeta fiercely-Get up! I'm not done with you yet! You still owe me two arms.-while Vegeta managed somehow to get up to his feet, and just then, Khitan appeared right in front of him, grabbing his right arm, then twisting it slowly, while he smiled evilly. -AAAAAAARGH!!!-Vegeta yelled in pain, while you could hear his bones cracking. -STOP IT! STOP IT! STOP IT!- Bra shouted from the distance while Trunks, still in his SSJ3 form, charged at Khitan madly. -That's enough, Khitan!!!-Trunks yelled, while flying towards him, but just then, a red aura appeared around Vegeta, while his hair also turned red, then he punched Khitan in the stomach so hard, that his fist almost went trough it, knocking out Khitan for good. Khitan fell on the ground unconscious, while Vegeta immediately reverted back to his base form, also falling on the ground, but on his knees, holding his broken arm tight with his other hand, so somewhat ease the pain. Seconds later, Trunks appeared next to him, while the other younglings also started flying next to them, leaving Bra behind , who was putting her thoughts together. -Trunks!-Vegeta started in great pain-Take a Senzu Bean out of my armor and put it in my mouth, hurry!-Trunks didn't react immediately, however, after several short moments, he did as his father told him to; as soon as Vegeta swallowed it, his injuries immediately healed themselves, along with his broken arm, which Vegeta stretched out several times as he felt relieved. -Now mind telling me what the hell happened back there?!-Trunks asked him angrily, however, Vegeta didn't respond to him; instead he looked towards his daughter: -Bra! Come here! I have something important to tell you.-which broke Bra out of the trance, then she slowly flew towards her dad and the others-This will be hard for you to hear, but I order you to stay away from this boy!-then he pointed towards Khitan-Do you understand me? I don't want you ever go near him, yet see him! -Father, I really don't think this is...-Trunks started, but was immediately silenced by Vegeta. -Shut it, Trunks!-then he turned back towards Bra-You may have deep feelings for this boy, but I'm doing this for your own sake. STAY AWAY FROM HIM! Do I make myself clear?! -Oh, don't worry about that...-Bra started staring at the ground, then looking at her dad with fierce eyes filled with tears-After the show you two put up today, I don't ever want to see or hear from either of you again!-then she burst off in the air, while Pan, Xevo and Mizuna took off after her. -Bra, wait!-the trio shouted after her, while flying away into the distance. -Great job, dad!-Trunks said pissed off-Now you've done it! -She'll get over it! -What really happened back there, anyway? -As you could see, I tested him, he passed, then he became mad and tried to kill me. -Well, what did you expect?! You tried to kill him first!!! -I warned him in time, that I would do so, if he would fail. It was his own idiocity that almost killed him, not me. But that's not what worries me, what worries me is the fact that his mood, his personality drastically changed right after he sneezed, not to mention his immense power boost. I felt a lot of evil in him... -I also noticed all those...Do you think that...? -Yes, I believe he also suffers with a double personality, just like his mother. However, his alter ego is a lot more dangerous, he could pose a great danger to us, especially to Bra. I will not kill him, although I should, so promise me you will also tell your sister to break up with him! -I don't think you have to worry about that anymore. -Furthermore, you and your friends should also stop seeing him; at this point, he's stronger than even you.-then Vegeta picked Khitan up from the ground and put him on his back. -Where are you taking him? -I need to have a serious word with this ego before the real Khitan shows up. If he won't listen to my threats, than I will have no other choice than to end his life. -Do you think his parents know about this? -Don't think so, and I don't want to get involved into a delicate matter like this either. It's your choice to tell them or not. Although, I will keep an eye on him, just in case. Inform your friends as well! We'll meet back at home later!-then Vegeta took off and flew away carrying Khitan with him, leaving Trunks in deep thoughts. Evil has re-surfaced once again in an unexpected form. While some of the Z Fighters, like Tien, Piccolo, even Vegeta, managed in time to overcome It, it now seems that It's targeting the rest of the gang, especially the younglings. Who will be Its next victim? Find out on the upcoming episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jan 2 2013, 12:58 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 2 2013, 12:21 AM Post #102 |
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Episode 78: The Great Adventure Begins 4 months after the epic battle between Khitan and Vegeta, Khitan's friendship with the other younglings drifted apart all so sudden. Since that day, Bra hasn't talked to him, nor her dad, while Pan and the others supported her all the way, even if it meant not seeing Khitan anymore. Trunks didn't have the guts to get involved all too much into Khitan's personal life, so he decided not to tell anyone about Khitan's evil alter ego, not even Khitan himself. He told Khitan that Bra was having a tough time with her dad and needed some time alone. Khitan mentioned that for some reason he couldn't remember his fight with Vegeta from halfway through, so Trunks also told him about the part where Khitan and Vegeta got carried away with the fight and accidentally almost blew Trunks and the others up. However, Trunks assured Khitan that Bra wasn't angry with him because of that. Nonetheless, Khitan was very confused about all the information he just received, but decided to give Bra all the time she needed. Trunks felt that he told everything Khitan needed to hear for now, and he had a good feeling that Khitan and Bra will sort things out soon and get back together. The good news was that Vegeta also assured Trunks that he managed to have a serious talk with Khitan's evil alter ego and convinced the alter to never ever dare try to hurt the prince's family, otherwise, he would be killed. Marron got pretty left out from all of this, so she was the only person Khitan could really talk to. They became such close friends, that Khitan became the first official person to find out about Marron's secret relationship with Uub. Goku and Chi-Chi were still traveling around the world, while Bulma and Vegeta also kept spending time together, Bulma struggling hard to keep her husband away from boredom. Meanwhile, Nappa arrived at his destination and also found the person he was looking for. Now they were both heading towards Earth, Nappa wanting badly to mess with Vegeta's emotions. Raditz, however, still hasn't found his place in this world, so he kept wandering from planet to planet. The one year was up and the stars on the Dragon Balls turned back into red again, meaning they have been reactivated. Master Roshi gathered both the small and big balls and summoned Shenron and Porunga right after another. He wished for his immortality to be taken away and for his youth to be restored. To everyone's astonishment, he looked once again just like in the old pictures: with many black hair and black eyebrows, becoming younger than his pupils. Maron was ever happy to have finally met a man who truly loved her, or at least that's what she thought about him. She immediately took Roshi to meet her parents, where the once great master of martial arts, behaved as normally he could and showed manners he long forgot of, in order not to embarrass his first ever girlfriend. Maron's parents immediately accepted Roshi as their son-in-law, and the preparations for the wedding were already in motion. Master Roshi could still not believe all the things he had to go through just to get in bed with one of world's sexiest woman, although he did start to feel some affections towards her. It was now late March; the first school semester was over and all the students and teachers received two weeks of vacation. Pan, Bra and Xevo, were all the Briefs home, sitting around in the living room with a bored face. -Man, I can't believe I actually miss going to school for once!-Pan started-Things got so boring around here, especially since Khitan is gone...-suddenly, she swallowed hard, then she slowly looked towards Bra-Sorry, Bra...it...it just came out... -It's ok; no worries.-Bra responded a bit sadly-But you're right. Things really did get boring around here; there's nothing interesting going on anymore. In times like this, I just wish a strong enemy would emerge out of nowhere, however, weak enough for us be able to defeat him. I mean, isn't that why we've been training for, to save the day and become heroes? How are we supposed to do that with no enemies around? -Yeah well, I'm sick and tired to wait for them to pop up for themselves. I say, we go out in the world and personally search for them!-then Pan stood up from the couch-That Megasaiyan creep did say that Evil is still spreading across the Earth, even as we speak. -I'm pretty sure Uub and Buu can take care of whatever is out there and don't need our help.-Xevo added-Besides, your grandpa Goku is also traveling around the world... -Nonetheless, Earth is still a very big planet, and they can't possibly check every corner of it, and that's where we come in. -I have a better proposition.-Xevo said proudly-Let's have a contest! -What do you have in mind, Xevo?-Bra asked wondered. -All 14 Dragon Balls have been scattered across the globe, right? So, the person who gathers most Dragon Balls wins and next year will be allowed to make a wish. Well, the contest is not about the wish itself, it's showing who's the best, and also for the fun of it. -Even though you saved our lives on Planet Gogeta, you're still only human, Xevo.-Pan added-Flying shoes and laser guns aren't everything you know. But nonetheless, I like your idea. But to make things more interesting, lets make this a couples contest. That way, you would have a fair chance of winning, Xevo, being my partner, of course. Trunks could team up with Mizuna, while you Bra, with...-as she turned towards her friend, who made sad eyes again-Oh, for crying-out-loud, just go talk to him! I mean, it was your dad's fault for getting carried away for the first place; really now, he almost killed Khitan. Who knows how messed up he became because of that shock? I say, you go right now and get it over with it! Or these two weeks will be boring as hell. However, Bra was speechless. All three of them stayed silent for a while, until Bra slowly took off into the air and flew out through the opened window. She was heading north, towards the mountains, while thinking through the things she would say to Khitan. Upon her arrival, Khitan immediately felt her presence and went outside. Luckily, Khitan was home alone, which made things easier for both of them. They looked into each others eyes and just stood there facing each other in silence for a few minutes. Afterwards, Bra finally broke the silence: -Khitan...-she started. -Bra...-Khitan cut in-I don't remember what I did wrong, but will you forgive me? -Sure.-then they rushed into each others arms and hugged each other for straight ten minutes. After that, Bra told Khitan about the Dragon Ball Hunting Couples Contest plan, while Khitan happily agreed to become Bra's partner. Even though this was a couples contest, Khitan made sure not to tell anyone about Uub and Marron. By the time Bra returned with Khitan to the Capsule Corp, Pan and Xevo have already convinced Trunks and Mizuna to also participate in the contest. Trunks was already thinking to take a break from work along with Mizuna, so this was the perfect occasion to do so. They wanted to ask Goten to also join in with Mia, however, they broke up not so long ago because of a stupid fight, so Goten was once again single. The three couples took each other a dragon radar and took off in three different directions. And so, the great Dragon Ball hunting begins. What adventures await our couples and which couple will win the contest? Find out on the following exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! |
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Jan 2 2013, 01:01 AM Post #103 |
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Why do you update so rarely? |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 2 2013, 01:17 AM Post #104 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Have you seen my DBZ FUNNY COMIC SERIES? I'm very hooked up doing them. Sorry. I do feel that I should really concentrate more on this series, but it doesn't get as many attention as those comic panels. Heck, it barely gets any at all. I guess I should keep reminding myself than I started writing this not for the glory, praises, comments and likes, but because as a hobby:( |
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| Megasaiyan | Jan 14 2013, 01:19 AM Post #105 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 79: The Black Ribbon Army Last time on Dragon Ball F, our favorite youngling heroes set out on a small adventure to gather all 14 Dragon Balls. They organized a contest, in whichever couple gathers most balls wins. Little do they know, that this contest will not be about winning or having fun, but facing dangerous treats and even survival. Stay tuned for another exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Before taking off into three different directions, the three youngling couples, Pan-Xevo, Mizuna-Trunks, Bra-Khitan, chose the Caspule Corp. as their home base; to make things more interesting, they decided that when a couple finds a Dragon Ball, they must take it back to the Capsule Corp. before going after the next one. This decision was also made because of the big size of the former Namekian Dragon Balls, which would have been quite annoying to carry around, especially after finding more than one. In order for neither of the couples could cheat, they asked Mrs. Briefs to be their arbiter and to note down the number of the balls each couple brought back. Of course, she happily accepted, so the hunting began. Within only two hours, all three couples managed to gather in total nine of the balls: Mizuna-Trunks four balls, Bra-Khitan three balls, while Pan-Xevo only two. Even though Xevo made considerable improvements to his flying shoes, they still weren't fast enough to catch up with Pan, who had to slow down because of him. In the end, she decided to carry Xevo on her back, so they could catch up with the others in gathering the balls. The Dragon Ball hunting went pretty smoothly, although there were some small difficulties in gathering some of the balls. For instance, the sixth star Earth Dragon Ball got swallowed by a giant dinosaur, and since Khitan didn't want to kill him, he had no other choice than to go inside the dinosaur's stomach to get the ball. Furthermore, the first star Namekian Dragon Ball got in the possession of a rich, spoiled, fat, middle-aged woman, who thought that the ball was too priceless to just give away, even though Trunks offered her a lot of amount of money. However, she immediately reconsidered herself after Mizuna made a small ki ball and threatened to kill the woman with it. Despite falling behind due to Xevo's inability to fly faster, Pan and Xevo were still the luckier ones cause so far, both Dragon Balls they've collected were in a danger free, easy-to-spot places. It seems that the third ball was the same, as it lay there in the grass untouched in the middle of a wasteland. However, soon they would find out that in fact, both their lives was in danger. They landed near the ball and Pan immediately hurried to grab hold of it, when, all of a sudden, she was punched back towards her landing spot by an invisible force, knocking down Xevo as well. Just then, three robots appeared out of nowhere; the two of them were three-meters high while the third one had only one meter, and their colors was different too: red, purple and green. The robots were humanoid shaped types, while each of them was controlled by a person inside the middle of them, with some sort of metal glass protecting them. -Sorry, missy!-the person inside the short red robot said-But this Dragon Ball is ours. Now run along and go home to your mommy and daddy before I really hurt you. I barely lay a figure on you so I wouldn't kill such a pretty little girl like yourself, but don't consider me merciful, cause I will kill even a pretty little girl like you if you stand in my way of world domination.-meanwhile Pan furiously stood up on her feet, whipping the dirt of her clothes, while Xevo did the same. -If you had any idea who my so-called mommy and daddy were, YOU'd be the one begging ME not to kill you!-she yelled angrily-I am the daughter of Videl, who happens to be the daughter of the world's champion, Mr. Satan, while my father's name is Son Gohan, who also happens to be one of the strongest warriors alive. -Hmmm...Videl, nor Mr. Satan doesn't ring a bell to me, but that Son Gohan's name sounds very familiar. Hmmm...Son...Son...Oh, my gosh! Is he somehow related to that brat, Son Goku, who always foiled my world domination plans in the past?! -You betcha'! -Of all people to run into, I end up meeting one of that stupid goody-goody Goku's descendants. Is he even still alive?! What is he, like 60-years old by now? Why, the irony! -Emperor Pilaf...-a woman's voice started inside the purple robot, who happened to be an old aged version of the once young and beautiful Mai-I suggest we should call for help for this matter. -I agree with her, sir.-the person in the green robot said, who was none other than Shu; of course, the person inside the red robot was the "great" Pilaf himself, old and wrinkled. -And why would you suggest such a stupid thing, anyway?-Pilaf asked Mai angrily. -Because, sir, if she's anything like Goku, then I bet she's even stronger than him. Just look at her, even though you barely hit her, she should at least have a little wound on her head, but nothing. -I, the great Emperor Pilaf, have been mocked way too many times in my life, and running away from a pretty little girl would be too much. -Stop calling me that!-Pan shouted madly, while she burst right at Pilaf's robot, punching it head on, however, it didn't even flinch; however, Pan's hand was aching with pain-What the heck it that thing made of? -Pretty hard, isn't it?-Pilaf asked with a smirk on his face-It's the toughest metal ever built with the latest technology by the Red Ribbon Army, now called the Black Ribbon Army. -Black Ribbon Army? Now that's the silliest name I've ever heard. And they actually named an army like that? They sure are dull in picking names ... -Pan...-Xevo started with a frightened voice behind her-Now I'm the one suggesting that we should leave and call for back-up. -What?! -I heard of this army and believe me, even though its name sounds funny, the organization itself is really dangerous. Who do you think built Number 18 and 17? -That was Dr. Gero, the true mastermind behind this army, and as far as I know, he's dead. Without him, this army was, and still is, nothing. They're just a bunch of stupid grown-ups playing with weapons as if they were toys, being full of themselves. I can take care of these guys anytime; I haven't even gone super yet. Observe!-just then, a yellow aura surrounded her, while the ground began shaking, meaning that she transformed into a Super Saiyan-Now let's see how strong this piece of metal REALLY is!-then she swung at Pilaf's robot again with a straight-on punch around its stomach, this time, having an effect on it as the robot crashed into a cliff which was 110 meters away behind him, however, the punch didn't even leave a scratch on it, while Pan's hand still hurt a bit; both Mai and Shu charged right at Pan, who was still faster than them, if not stronger, so she had no trouble kicking them both hard enough for them to crash on the ground. -You two are useless as always!-Pilaf shouted at his henchmen angrily while rebalancing himself-I can't believe I haven't replaced you two after all these years. Just turn on your invisibility shield, darn it!-and so did all three of them do. -This is not good.-Pan thought-They're such weaklings, I can't even sense their ki. And without sensing or seeing them, I'm a sitting duck here.-then she shouted towards Xevo-Xevo, get out of here! -Pan, come with me!-Xevo shouted back, while he flew up in the clouds-You can't beat them! -We'll just have to see about that-Pan said to herself, but as soon as she finished her sentence, she was knocked down by one of the invisible robots. She received several more punches, until she teleported herself 100 meters away from them, closed her eyes, and waited. She was right alright, cause she could clearly hear the robots' footsteps closing in on her, trying to hit her, but she managed to block every one of them, and even hit them back to their surprise. After seeing that it was useless trying, Pilaf and the others backed down and started shooting some sort of yellowish-white blasts at her. To Pan's amaze, those blasts were as strong as if SSJ Bra herself shot them, injuring her pretty badly. She flew up in the air and fired pink ki blasts all over towards the ground, and as the yellow blasts stopped coming at her, she hoped that it meant that she blasted them. After one minute, Pan finally stopped from firing anymore and took a deep breath. Just then, more yellow blasts closed in on her, and this time, they were coming from the air, which meant that the robots could also fly. The blasts were coming at her from three different locations, surrounding her, shooting and hurting her over and over, until she felt she could not resist any longer; out of rage and as a last resort, she transformed into a Super Saiyan 2, her immense electrical aura shocking all three of the robots so badly, that their invisibility shield malfunctioned, they becoming visible again. -Now it's my turn!-Pan said enraged, then she simultaneously broke the robots into pieces, avoiding their middle, in order to not to kill Pilaf and his gang; the robots crashed to the ground, surging with sparks of electricity, while Pilaf and the others quickly got out of them and ran away, but not before taking the Dragon Ball from the ground with them-Those creeps!-Pan yelled after powering down to her base form-And after me sparing their pitiful lives?-but as they were running, they suddenly vanished into thin air-What the...?-moments later, an enormous fortress appeared out of nowhere, taking both Pan and Xevo by surprise-How come I didn't see this coming?-Pan asked ironically, when, all of a sudden, someone, or something, shot her on the head from the back with a yellow ki beam, which left her unconscious. -PAN!!!-Xevo shouted, when, all of a sudden, he got punched in the stomach and fell unconscious as well. TO BE CONTINUED>>> |
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