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| Megasaiyan | Jul 3 2012, 05:26 PM Post #76 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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But I don't like quotation marks:P I like using dialog lines like in the books I read:D Thank you for checking into my fanfic and for also liking it. I know that me describing things still needs improvement, so I will try harder to entertain the reader. Wish I could animate it though:) Anywho, the 64th anniversary episode is coming up in a few hours so stay tuned:)) |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 3 2012, 09:15 PM Post #77 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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GohanX DBF 64th Anniversary Episode: A New Hope Planet Earth, at the Briefs family residence...Earlier that day, King Kai explained to all of Goku's close friends and family the situation they were in, as soon as he started sensing Goku's ki again. Videl and Mr. Satan were close-by to the Capsule Corp, so they went to ask the others if they also heard the news. Khitan, Bra, Goten with Kawai on his back, even Marron, whom left her job without notifying her boss, flew quickly as possible to Bulma's house as well. There, Chi-Chi and Bulma were already kissing and hugging both Pan and Xevo for their safety return to home. The kids also explained briefly what happened to them on planet Earth 2.0, while the others arrived shortly. -Pan! You're alive!-Videl shouted happily, while rushing towards her daughter, hugging her in tears. -My dear, Panchi (bird) Pan!-Mr Satan also shouted-Thank goodness that you're alright!-he said, while giving her a BIG hug-I still can't believe your parents allowed you to go into space to a foreign planet like that. -Oh, come now, grandpa!-Pan wined-I'm not a kid anymore, so stop babying me already! Besides, I went there with my father, and who else can protect me better than him? -Pan! You're ok!-Bra yelled, knocking down the door eagerly, running towards her best friend and giving her the biggest hug ever. -It's nice to see you again, niece!-Goten said to Pan-You too, Xevo! King Kai told us what happened to you guys on that planet. So, is that mega guy really that powerful? -He sure is, unfortunately.-Xevo answered-I just wish we knew how are the others doing... -Maybe, I can help you there...-a familiar voice said, while floating in the room through the balcony sitting on a crystal ball. -Fortuneteller Baba!-Bulma shouted recognising her-Long time no see! And you came in the nick of time too. Nice! -Yes, well, I see King Kai already told you the good news...well, somewhat good news anyway. While I'm here, might as well show you guys what's going on that interesting new planet you named Earth 2.0. -Wow, you're a sweet old lady after all.-Bulma replied smiling-By the way, is it just me, or do you have less wrinkles since we last saw you? -I'm glad you noticed that. My magic grew since we last met, and I'm currently working on a spell which restores your youth. It seems that it already made its effect. -Maybe after all this is over, I'll also give it a try. I do have a lot of money, you know, so payment won't be a problem. -We'll get back on that. Now let's take a look on Goku and the others.-then she jumped down from the ball, and started saying some incantations; to everyone's amaze, the crystal ball started getting bigger and bigger, until it reached the ceiling-We don't want anyone hitting it and breaking it from the excitement, now do we?-she said, referring to both Bulma and Chi-Chi-suddenly, images started appearing on the ball, showing a dense forrest with gigantic trees; then they saw a giant crater in the middle of the forrest, and after that, Vegeta, filled with bruises. -Awesome, it's like watching a new type of cinema.-Khitan remarked-Bra, do you have some popcorn around the house? -Khitan, stop being a smart mouth!-Bra yelled at him pissed off. -Sorry, I was trying to lighten the mood.-but after he finished his sentence, the image shifted to the dreadful Megasaiyan with spread tentacles on his back. -How horrible!-Kawai noted, and after that the ball showed Goku armless. -Goku!!!-Chi-Chi yelled, barely preventing herself to faint. -Dad, no!-Goten also yelled-That son of a ***** will pay dearly for what he did to him! -It seems that Goku, and the others are powerless against that thing.-a familiar voice said behind them; it was Piccolo, who was floating in midair outside the house, looking in through the window-Shouldn't you guys start training, instead of wasting time watching them hopelessly?-but none of them could respond to him. Back on planet Gogeta, the Megasaiyan's tentacles were only a few meters away from Goku, while Goku closed his eyes, waiting hopelessly to be killed. But suddenly, the Megasaiyan stopped in midair, as pain surfed through it head, driving It mad. -AAAARGH! What is happening to me?!-It screamed in pain. -Your rain of terror ends here and now, you sick monster!-a blue skinned creature yelled not far from It, who was none other than Xaras; there was a pink glowing on his forehead, indicating that he was attacking the beast through telepathy. -What the hell are you doing to me, you scum bag?!-the thing asked in suffer. -Do you like the pain I'm mentally inflicting in your head? How does it feel to be struck down by a weakling like me with an obscure technique like this one?-as he started increasing the wave of pain towards the Megasaiyan's brain, which screamed even louder. -You will never defeat me! My mission is too important to allow myself to be defeated! I refuse to be DEFEATED!!!-then it powered up insanely, and even though It felt like its head was about to literally explode from the much pain, it flew at Xaras with an incredible speed, grabbing his two horns, and tearing his head in two. After seeing that its opponent was more than dead, It let go of the horns, as the body began falling down, crashing on the ground, filling the green grass with blood. It took the thing a few moments to recover from so much pain, while It stared at its hands filled with blood: -I never thought I would have to kill someone so brutally. All I wanted is to end everyone's life in a split of a second by destroying the planet with one blow. I never intended for anyone to suffer like that. But you guys leave me no choice than to finish you off one by one. So, who's next? Oh, I know...-then the Megasaiyan turned around towards Goku-The fighter without arms; let me put you out of your misery as well. You somewhat deserve it.-then it began flying towards Goku again with its tentacles ready to finish him off. All of a sudden, the Megasaiyan got punched in the face by a glowing warrior, throwing him through a dozen of trees, crashing in a lake, thus Goku's life was saved once more, this time, by an unknown hero, whom appeared out of nowhere. As the glowing stopped, it revealed a man with black and purple spiky hair, with blue eyes, dark-blue shirt, a red belt and two red wristbands, black pants, dark-brown boots and a brown tail. The warrior then flew into the lake, continuing his fight with the Megasaiyan, but not before turning into a Super Saiyan 4, his hair and tail turning red. Even though they were in the water, both fighters were moving so fast as if being in the air, while the water didn't slow down their movements at all. But they weren't the only beings in the water. Tens of sharks the size of the blue whale swam at them, and despite their huge size, their speed was equil to the speed of the piranhas. Two of them immediately swallowed the two warriors, but of course, the Megasaiyan didn't wait long until it charged itself up and blew them all away. But its opponent was nowhere in sight. All of a sudden, It realised that its opponent wasn't in the water anymore, instead he was above it in the air, charging up a big ki blast, throwing a yellow beam with orange flames with his right hand down at It: -BURNING MASENKO!!!-the warrior yelled, as the beam reached the water, hitting the Megasaiyan head on. The beam might have not been big in size, but it was strong enough to completely evaporate all the water from the lake, making a bigger crater. However, the Megasaiyan seems to have "evaporated" too. -Come out and face me, you coward!-the warrior yelled.-Or are you a chicken? -I'm not sure what a chicken is, but I assure you, I'm nothing like that.-It said from behind, knocking down the warrior with its hands, which crashed in the crater he made moments ago. -I knew my attack wasn't enough to destroy you that easily. But I'm also glad, cause then I would have missed the pleasure of beating you up even more. -Cocky, like Gotenks.-Vegeta thought-Although he does have a good reason for being so confident. That things' power level did decrease from that attack. There might be some hope after all.-then he yelled at Kibitoshin-Don't just stand there, you fool! Hurry up and go heal Kakarot! -So that's how you guys keep coming back at me with full power every time I nearly kill you...-It started-You have a healer among you. Well then, now I know whom to kill first.-the the Megasaiyan started flying towards Kibitoshin, only to be blocked by the new-born hero: -Sorry, pal. But you will have to go through me first. For the first time, the Megasaiyan actually started worrying about the outcome of this battle. He now realised that his chances were decreasing by every passing minute. It seems that the new hero is the result of Gohan's and Trunks' fusion. But how powerful is he really anyway? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jul 7 2012, 09:52 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 7 2012, 09:40 PM Post #78 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 65: Unlimited Power? On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Xaras suffered a horrible, but noble death, while a new hero appeared out of nowhere. He appears to be somewhat stronger than a normal SSJ4, but will it be enough against the Megasaiyan's incredible power? Find out today on Dragon Ball F! Mizuna opened her eyes and realized that her head was still hurting from her encounter with the terrible Megasaiyan. She stood up, only to see two ripped off arms in much blood not far from her. Next to her left, she also saw Xaras's dead body, his head torn into half. By now, she was totally freaked out, the view giving her goose bumps. Then she heard the sound of a flurry of fists and kicks somewhere in the air, which meant there were others still alive. She flew upwards, and as she got closer to the battle scene, she saw Kibitoshin healing the one named Goku, and close to them was another man, with short black spiky hair, filled with bruises and some blood. As she flew towards them, she also noticed the Megasaiyan high in the sky fighting with someone. After taking a better look, she found out that the new warrior kind of resembled Trunks; not only his face, but his purple-black hair and his dark-blue eyes. She approached Vegeta, whom hasn't noticed her tail yet: -Hi, there!-she said to him-Tell me! Who is that guy fighting with that thing? -Shouldn't a girl like you be hiding somewhere safe and sound? -Just tell me, damn it!-Mizuna shouted, her sudden burst of temper surprising Vegeta. -That guy you're referring to is the result of Trunks's and Gohan's fusion. -You mean, they combined themselves and become as one? How cool is that! But I like Trunks alone, as he is. Two men "stalking" me at the same time sounds pretty weird. -You mean, you like my son?-Vegeta asked amazed, and after seeing her Saiyan tail, he became even more surprised. -Holy crap! Are you Trunks' dad?! Nice to meet you, father-in-law! -she said, as she lifted her right arm to shake hands with him.However, Vegeta was unprepared for this and remained speechless. Just then, Kibitoshin approached him and started healing him, while Goku waited and watched the incredible fight between the Megasaiyan and the new warrior. At first, the hero blocked It's every hit, but it didn't take long until the Megasaiyan had the upper hand again. The hero started receiving more and more hits, until the thing blew him away with its ki just by powering up. It was then the hero realised that the monster had a lot more power reserve than he originally thought, and Its strength still outmatched his own greatly. However, the Megasaiyan had another surprise for him; again, about 15 tentacles appeared out of its back and with them, It started throwing small black ki blasts at the warrior simultaneously. While the warrior was busy dodging them, the thing lifted its left hand and pointing a finger towards the rest of our heroes, it shot a black, 1 cm wide energy beam. The beam was so fast, that it completely caught Goku off guard, and pierced through Kibitoshin's heart. -No more healing from him.-It said, while Kibitoshin's body crashed down near Xaras's. -Damn you, you monster!-Goku yelled, while this time, the Megasaiyan pointed its finger at him-Die!-the beam closed in on Goku, whom having his arms back, used the Instant Transmission to teleport out of its way. But Vegeta, whom was almost completely healed, and Mizuna, were still sitting ducks. The Megasaiyan then pointed its finger towards them, thinking which one to shoot down first, when suddenly, the new warrior appeared right in front of it, kicking It in the face: -Your battle is with me, you son of a gun!-he yelled, while his kick caused the thing a nose-bleed, which was black as a skillet-You are one creepy guy, you know that?-but instead of respondind, the Megasaiyan stretched its tentacles even wider, which wrapped themselves around the hero's body, mobilizing him. -Now you're mine!-the thing said, then it started tightening the tentacles around the hero's body, suffocating him. All of a sudden, the thing saw a big bright-red light coming from somewhere underneath it, which suddenly disappeared. A second later, a very big yellow and white energy disk appeared out of nowhere, which cut down the tentacles, releasing the warrior from Its clutches. -Not another one!-the Megasaiyan shouted, looking furiously at the one which cut down its tentacles. -Thanks a lot, Gogeta.-the saved fighter thanked-I owe you one. -Your welcome...-Gogeta replied. -It's GohanX (Gohanks), by the way. -Cool name you've got. -I am sick and tired of you guys just popping up out of nowhere.-the Megasaiyan cut in madly-As soon as I kill someone, another one replaces him. How annoying can you get? Oh, and this one is also redheaded...Haven't you guys learned that this Saiyan form of yours is no match for me? Even if there are two of you, it doesn't matter. I'm way stronger than both of you combined. Just give up already, for goodness sake! -Hey, Gogeta...-GohanX started-Shouldn't you be able to ascend to the next level by now, since both Goku and Vegeta have already learned to master the 4th form? -Indeed, this is strange.-Gogeta responded. I should have become a Super Saiyan 5 by now. I wonder what's the big deal? I do feel a lot stronger since I fought Friezell, though. Maybe I don't need any special transformation to beat this guy.-but without he and GohanX realizing it, the Megasaiyan suddenly disappeared out of sight. -Where did he go?!-GohanX asked loudly, unable to sense It. -Do you guys have any clue how much power do I have?-the Megasaiyan asked, its voice echoing through the entire forrest, as if it was coming from everywhere-Well, do you? I'll tell you: UNLIMITED. The word "unlimited' shocked both GohanX and Gogeta, while the Megasaiyan reappeared in front of them both at the same time, kicking them down to the ground, as if there were two of them things. Can it be true about the Megsaiyan's power being unlimited? Or is it just a bluff? Find out on the next thrilling episode of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 7 2012, 09:43 PM Post #79 |
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Episode 66: Mega Slicing-Attack Previously, on Dragon Ball F, Gogeta and GohanX combined their forces against the deadly Megasaiyan. However, the thing revealed to them to have unlimited power. Is that even possible? Find out only by reading more of Dragon Ball F! Hiding between the trees, Mizuna looked at GohanX and Gogeta helplessly, feeling frightened of the monster's insanely huge power. The two redheaded warriors were also amazed and a bit scared of It, which floated above them, laughing hard: -HA-HA-HA-HA!!! Do you give up or do you want more? -He attacked both of us exactly at the same time as if there were two Mega-creeps, but there's only one.-Gogeta said to GohanX. -Would you prefer to be the other way around and be two Mega-goons, instead of one?-GohanX asked with a smirk. -You mean, Mega-idiot... -Mega-retard! -Mega-looney! -Mega-asshole! -Mega-*****bag! -Mega... As they continued making fun of the Mega-dushbag:) and calling it names, It became furious beyond imagination and burst right at them, while its eyes seemed to be literally in flames from the fury. The Saiyans knew that by making It super pissed off, it would attack them driven by anger, instead of fully concentrating on its ki, making It more vulnerable to any of their attacks. Their plan indeed worked, easily teleporting away of the Mega-fools:) way, and punching its face from both sides. Like in the cartoons, the Megasaiyan's face turned flat, as if it was made from rubber; after a short while, regaining its proper form. The Megasaiyan looked around still madly, unable to locate its opponents. Then, all of a sudden, Gogeta appeared in front of it, yelling SOLAR FLARE, while his attack blinded his opponent; or so he thought. The thing screamed in agony, cursing Gogeta for blinding it, rubbing its eyes for quicker recovery. But Gogeta didn't plan to wait for that long, he unleashing his finishing move on It: "Final Kame-Hame-Ha", which was three times bigger than the one which destroyed Dozar. But suddenly, the Megasaiyan opened its eyes and simply dodged Gogeta's attack, which flew towards the giant mountains, destroying them all, causing a big earthquake. -But how?...-Gogeta managed to ask, only to realize that the Megasaiyan's eyes became completely black, so it might as well have worn black glasses, cause the "Solar Flare" technique would have had the same effect. -Fooled you there...-the Megasaiyan said smiling, when suddenly, GohanX appeared above him, yelling MEGA SLICING ATTACK. He started throwing very thin purpleish, disk-like energy waves at It, which decided to deflect them by rasing a black ki barrier. But as the waves reached the barrier, they suddenly disappeared, while the beast thought it indeed deflected them, so It lowered the barrier. But little did the Megasaiyan know, that the waves DID go through the barrier and through It as well, as they reappeared behind it, which by now was already sliced into pieces. -Hurray! We did it!-GohanX yelled excitedly, only to be shocked a few moments later by the view: the pieces of the Megasaiyan's body started regenerating themselves, reforming its body in a matter of half a minute-Oh great! He can also regenerate just like Majin Buu. I should have seen this coming, since he created tentacles from his back. -Fire more waves like that at him!-Gogeta shouted, while he began charging up another wave himself. -You got it.-GohanX replied, and so he did, and even though the thing raised an even bigger ki barrier, the waves still went through both of them, slicing It into more pieces. -FINAL KAME-HAME-HA!!!-Gogeta yelled, firing the wave at It, however, his attack couldn't breach its barrier like GohanX' technique-GohanX! Got any other similar techniques to this, like a huge energy ball? -Sorry, but no. This one was actually one of Mystic Gohan's techniques. I can't fire an actual energy ball through his barrier either. I never thought someone could even raise a barrier after being sliced like that. That was actually one of my best moves; I'm pretty pissed off it didn't kill him. He just doesn't want to die.-by now, the Megasaiyan's body was fully regenerated. -Don't worry about it. It is still a very cool technique. Anyone else would have perished from it. -Thanks. So, do you have any other plans or should we try driving him mad again? -Nah, I don't think it would work on him the second time. He's not that stupid; we need another plan... -I have a good plan...-the Megasaiyan started-Why don't you allow me to kill both of you, and while I destroy the Universe, you can come up with a plan on the Other World? Heck, you could train a little until I'm finished. What do you say? -Actually, that IS a good plan.-GohanX admitted-I am sure that would work out well. Then we'll face him in the Other World, when we'll be more prepared. I'm sure it will take a good while until he destroys the whole Universe. What do you say, Gogeta? -Are you crazy?!-Gogeta shouted at GohanX-He won't risk that much, and as soon as he figures out how to get to the Other World, he will just simply obliterate it without facing us. -Is that true?-GohanX asked the Megasaiyan. -I give you my word that I won't do such thing; I promise.-the thing responded. -Nice try there, Mega...Saiyan.-Gogeta said-But the fate of the entire existence will be decided here and now.-then he attacked It with all his might, with GohanX following him closely-by. -Foolish, heroes!-It shouted, then it threw a huge black energy ball at them. The wave sped towards Gogeta so fast, he barely managed to dodge it. However, GohanX wasn't lucky enough, the wave cutting down the lower limbs of both of his legs (the part of the lower limb between the knee and ankle, in other words, half of his legs), while the rest of the wave destroyed another big part of the forrest. GohanX transformed back to his base form, screaming in pain, while the Megasaiyan teleported itself above him, banging him to the ground. -Trunks!!!-Mizuna cried not far from the scene, looking at the unconscious warrior, laying defeated on the ground. On the Sacred World of the Kais, Elder Suprem Kai was watching the whole thing worried through his crystal ball, when, all of a sudden, Kibitoshin appeared out of nowhere near him, with a hollow on his head: -Ancestor...-he started-Please forgive me, for I have failed you and the entire Universe. -No you haven't...-Supreme Kai responded-You did more than enough, in fact, you did great, so stop beating yourself up! Wish I could have done something myself, but all we can do now is to route for Gogeta to somehow find a way and destroy that Mega-evil. -Gogeta? But what about the other SSJ4, Trunks and Gohan combined? -Unfortunately, he has been defeated. Now, it's just Gogeta and It. -But how will Gogeta be able to defeat him, when he couldn't do it when he had help? -That is for the readers to find out on the next episodes of Dragon Ball F! By the way, it's nice to have you back, Kibitoshin. -Uhm, what?:) |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 10 2012, 10:28 AM Post #80 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 67: Super Saiyan 5? Last time, on Dragon Ball F, Gogeta and GohanX put up a good battle against the Megasaiyan, and they almost even defeated it. However, the Megasaiyan's power indeed has no limit, and it's full of surprises. In the end, It struck down GohanX with a huge energy ball, cutting down half his legs, then banging him to unconsciousness. How will Gogeta ever be able to fight the thing alone? If you want to find out, then hurry and go read the following lines of Dragon Ball F! GohanX was laying on the ground, still unconscious, while the Megasaiyan was laughing hard: -HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!! Another one down, and only one left! Finally, this place got less crowded. Now then, Saiyan, I'll give you one last chance to let me end your life quickly and painless as possible, or I will torment you in a way that Hell will seem to you like Paradise.-but Gogeta wasn't paying attention to it; he was looking down desperately on the defeated GohanX, not knowing what to do next. -Why didn't I get a lot stronger than the last time?-Gogeta asked himself in his mind-Why do I feel like I should have ascended to next level by now? What's holding me back from doing so? Is my body not ready for much more power? Is it telling me that I need more training? But I don't have time for such thing! If I don't transform now, all will be lost and there won't be anyone left to transform for. The entire Universe is depending on me, all living things, even if some are evil, cry out desperately to live on more. Even the dead ones are counting on me, or they will be wiped out from existence as well (and boy was he right; while Gogeta was struggling for more power, Frieza and the others in Hell, were actually cheering for him to win). I cannot allow for this to happen, I cannot allow for that thing to be victorious and destroy everyone's dreams, hopes, and everything they lived and died for. I MUST ascend to the next level, even if I'll die during the process. At least, I will somewhat pass away in peace, knowing that I tried and did my best. -So, how will it be, proud warrior? Just that you should know, even if you give up, you will always be remembered; before I destroy each planet, I shall shout out your name in glory, for standing up to me so bravely, putting up a great fight, and falling proudly by my hands. I know, it's really hard for you to accept my mission to destroy both Evil and Good; I myself wish there was an alternative, but there isn't. Indeed, it's hard, but it must be done. -So, you lied to us when you said you'd face us again on the Other World in a fair combat in order to decide the fate of everyone and everything... -Indeed, I did. It would have taken me quite some time to destroy the whole Universe, though, but right after that, I would have just ripped a hole in the dimension to the Other World and destroyed it in a blink of an eye. Of course, I wouldn't have risked battling with you guys again; I'm sure that world is also full with annoying brave warriors. -But why do you want to destroy the Other World as well? That's the only place where there's real balance between Good and Evil. Surely, you don't think that Evil can find a way to take over the Other World as well? That is just crazy! -I too died once and been to the Other World. I met a great big ogre, who calls himself King Yemma, and I saw that he indeed has some very interesting powers and takes a good care of the place, keeping everything in balance. But I'll give you two reasons for why I shall destroy that place. First of all, if I don't, and after I kill myself, I'll end up at the ogre's mercy, who, without doubt, will send me to hell, not allowing me to live in peace. Secondly, I not only can somewhat see into the future, but also into different timelines, parallel Universes. And in one particular Universe, I did see the Other World being taken over by a monster named Janemba, and it was just an idiotic accident. It wasn't even planned out, for goodness sake. Of course, you and Vegeta were there again to save the day, but you can't get that lucky all the "time." -This guy is just unbelievable.-Gogeta thought-Not only he has insanely high unlimited power, but he can do things unheard of before. He seems like a pure god. -However, I'm not interested in parallel Universes other than this. Once I destroy this one, it will be all over. Even if by chance, Evil comes through to this Universe, it won't do much good, cause Evil is not interested in ruling over none-living things. I'm also sure that my other versions will do their job and take care of your other versions as well. -Yeah...let's just concentrate on this Universe only, and let our other versions fight their own battles. I'm sure all will turn out great in the end, with us winning, of course. -You wish... -Right now, all I care is for me to somehow find a way to destroy you before you destroy me and everyone and everything else in this timeline. And the only way I can do that is to have faith in my body so it would resist the transformation that I'm about to undergo and not kill me. I did that before and it worked, hopefully it won't let me down this time either. I'm sorry, but you must be destroyed at all cost, or you won't stop at nothing with your ridiculous plan. -And I'm sorry too for your unable to accept my way of bringing true peace in everyone's "life."-the It took off and flew towards Gogeta, while making another huge black energy ball. However, Gogeta already started powering up, his red aura growing wider and wider. Even though the sun was up and shining brightly, the sky became of a dark blue, while white electricity appeared everywhere: on the sky, surrounding Gogeta, even reaching to the ground. Luckily, by then, GohanX' body was moved away to a safe place by Mizuna. Gogeta started screaming louder and louder, while it caused massive earthquakes on the entire planet. Even the mighty Megasaiyan stopped in mid-air, still holding the energy ball in its hand, while It starred at Gogeta in amaze. All of a sudden, white shades began appearing in Gogeta's red aura, while some of his hair also started turning into bright white color. His power level continued skyrocketing higher and higher, which made even the thing tremble in fear. Gogeta's muscles grew bigger, while the bright white aura completely surrounded him, allowing no one to see through it. While Gogeta was still screaming and powering up inside the whiteness, the Megasaiyan snapped out of the amazement and threw its huge black energy ball at him, the blast only to be engulfed by the amazing white aura, disappearing into it. The Megasaiyan got so mad, it fired more huge energy blasts at him, they too disappearing into the whiteness, as if the aura absorbed them, or better yet, "ate" them. Once again, the thing just looked amazed at Gogeta's powering up, wondering how much higher could his power level go? Several minutes passed away like this, which seemed more like several hours for both fighters. After much screaming within the white aura, Gogeta's power level started decreasing, while the aura slowly turned back to red, Gogeta being visible again. The many white electricity also disappeared, while the sky returned to its normal bright blue color, the sun shining brightly on the planet. Nothing seemed to have changed with him, he looked the same as before the amazing process. His muscles were somewhat bigger than before, but other than that, he was very much the same. Even the Megasaiyan became calmer, after sensing his opponent failed to ascend to the next level, Its power still surpassing his. -Gogeta's worst fear has come true...-GohanX managed to say, not far from the battleground, laying on the ground next to Mizuna, who was surprised to hear from him. -Yeah, I feel sorry for him...-she started-It was too early for his body to handle so much power all of a sudden. He needs more training to master the fifth Super Saiyan form. I may not be able to sense ki signatures, but after seeing that amazing power display, I can tell he would have defeated the Megasaiyan for sure. Luckily, his body didn't explode from that much effort... -No...I'm afraid it's much worse than you think, Mizuna; at least, by his perspective. His body wasn't ready at all in a different kind of sense... -What do you mean?-Mizuna asked, before GohanX passed out again. Indeed, what did he mean by that? By now, Gogeta was looking down, feeling very disappointed, while the Megasaiyan couldn't be happier. But what did really go wrong with the transformation? Find out only on Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jul 12 2012, 09:20 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 10 2012, 10:30 AM Post #81 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 68: Help Arrives Gogeta looked down devastated because of him unable to ascend to the next level. It could have been his last chance to finally defeat the thing which calls himself a Megasaiyan, yet he failed everyone. However, he felt more miserably because of another thing, because of the reason he was unable to transform into a SSJ5. It was his body; his body was literally exhausted, and couldn't handle anymore. It reached... -No, no, no! It can't be happening!-he thought-Not to me of all people! I can't stop now! All my life I have done nothing but training and more training, knowing that I would forever improve and get stronger than before. But now that this happened to me, what will my life become? Has the time finally come to take a break from all this and live a normal life? Is it time to become a master and teach others? But first, I must destroy that thing, so I would have someone to teach in the first place. But how can I destroy something, which has unlimited power? I will need a hell of a lot energy in order to do that. But wait? This planet has more than enough energy to destroy even him. I wonder, will I be able to use that technique while I'm fused like this? Am I pure hearted enough? It's Vegeta's heart and mind that worry me most. If he still has much evil or dark thoughts, it could very well destroy us both. Then again, I will just have to try and hope for the best, as there isn't any other way. If only I had time to gather the energy, it might just work. But GohanX is down, and I need some kind of distraction for less than five minutes. The "Solar Flare" attack is useless against him, and I can't just throw Mizuna's life away like that. Trunks would kill me, even though he never admitted liking her.-then Gogeta sensed about 50 ki signatures heading his way-Yay! Help is on the way. Now then, to keep that thing busy until they arrive. -Oh, come now!-the Megasaiyan started-I know that you, failing the entire Universe, is hard to take, but cheer up! It's not that you haven't given your best. You should feel proud of yourself for taking on a monster like me. I might not have kept my promise given to your other friend, but I will most definitely keep this one: I will kill you in an instant, so you wouldn't have to suffer at all. See? After giving me one hell of a though time, I still offer you a fast and painless death. Am I a good guy or what? -No, you're not. I don't care what you say, but you're not a good guy at all. Next to Frieza, your goodness pales; in fact, you're 100 times worse than him. -How dare you compare me to that animal? He did nothing but to kill for amusement. How can I be worse than him? -You just are...-Gogeta replied with a smirk, which infuriated the Megasaiyan, making it to attack him. Thus, the two powerful titans collided once again. This time, they seemed to be evenly matched; Gogeta's effort of ascending to the next level managed to somewhat increase his strength. The Megasaiyan WAS a bit amazed, but only a bit. They were both kicking and punching each other at an incredible speed, while Mizuna looked at them hoping for the best. -Man, my head hurts.-a familiar voice said next to her. -Trunks, please don't die on me!-Mizuna replied almost crying. -You do know, that at this point, I'm nor Trunks, nor Gohan? -I don't care. But the Fusion will wear off, right? I mean, you won't remain like this forever? -Yeah, it will wear off in about ten minutes. Up until then, I will have to somehow buy some time for Gogeta to make his last finishing move. If that won't work either, well, then we're screwed. -You mean to tell me, he still has a trick up his sleeve? Oh wow, if he does somehow succeed, then we can go out on that date I've been promised to.-she said happily. -Silly girl...-GohanX managed to say, then he fainted. The two Saiyans, well at least one of them is, were still fighting in mid air, but by now, the Megasaiyan took the lead again. Gogeta was getting pounded so badly, his black shirt was already torn down, his body filled with bruises and blood, some of his pants also ripped off. Then the thing made about 10 tentacles from its back, enlarging them widely, slapping and cutting Gogeta's body repeatedly. Gogeta definitely wouldn't have lasted long, if the help, he was waiting for, hadn't arrived. About 50 Saiyans appeared on the scene, some of them turned into Super Saiyans, with Bardock leading them. However, two more familiar Saiyans stepped out from the crowd, who were none other than KING VEGETA and NAPITZ. -Fathers, you here! Thank goodness.-Gogeta said happily. -Sorry, for making you wait so long.-Bardock responded-But it wasn't easy convincing the King of all Saiyans to join us against that freak of nature. -So, what made you change your mind after all...uhm...father?-Gogeta asked King Vegeta. -Let's just say I grew too fond to this planet to allow an abomination like that to destroy it.-he answered-Then I heard of that thing making fun of our race by calling himself a "Megasaiyan." Now that's just too much to take. -I...*****ING...HAD...ENOUGH...OF YOU...GUYS...JUST APPEARING OUT OF NOWHERE...LIKE THAT!!!-the Megasaiyan yelled-Enough is ENOUGH!!!-then it powered up insanely, its black aura reappearing around it, while more tentacles grew not only from Its back, but from its abdomen as well, filling the sky with over 50 tentacles-Now die already, for crying out loud!-then the tentacles attacked every Saiyan, which came to help. -Now's my chance.-Gogeta thought-While he's busy with the others, I will hopefully have enough time to gather every energy on this planet. That way, I will make the biggest "Spirit Bomb" ever. If that won't destroy It, then nothing will.-after that, Gogeta flew above the Megasaiyan, so he wouldn't get noticed, then raised his hands in the air and started-To every living life form on this planet... I beg of you to lend me a small part of your energy in order to vanquish this evil, which is upon us. I promise to use the gathered energy in the name of Good, and bring peace and order not only to this planet, but to the entire Universe. Everyone, from every different races, creatures, beings, animals, to the many grass, the tallest trees this planet has, the mountains that reach into space, the deep lakes that reach the core of the planet, the two suns that bring daylight, and the two moons that light the way at nights...Planet Earth 2.0...Give me everything you have, and in return, I'll get rid of this dreadful monster, once and for all. By now, most of the Saiyans were already dead; they've been slaughtered by It's tentacles. Only the Super Saiyans were still alive, even they were having a hard time dodging and shooting down the tentacles, which reappeared right after being shot down. -Now you know how do I feel when more of you guys appear as soon as I destroy one of you.-the Megasaiyan shouted laughing. It won't be long until Bardock, King Vegeta, Napitz and the rest of the Saiyans will also fall by the tentacles of the thing. Will Gogeta manage to make a "Spirit Bomb" in time, powerful enough to take down the Megasaiyan? Can he even perform that technique without it destroying him first? Find out the answers to all these questions on the next explosive episode of Dragon Ball F! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 12 2012, 09:21 AM Post #82 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 69: The End of the Megasaiyan Only two minutes passed away, and the Megasaiyan already killed off every Saiyan other than King Vegeta, Napitz and Bardock. Yet there were still the same amount of tentacles than before, if not more. All three of them gathered together side by side and started powering up, while an immense yellow aura surrounded all three of them, which started firing hundreds of small yellow energy blasts at the thing. The sky got filled with explosions, the blasts destroying the tentacles rapidly. However, hundreds more tentacles replaced the destroyed ones, making the Saiyans fire more blasts. Only time could tell, how much longer would the "team" of Saiyans last. Gogeta was still gathering energy from around the planet Earth 2.0, when suddenly, the thing looked up behind it, and saw that he was preparing for an ultimate attack, which could have destroyed it. So, the Megasaiyan started shooting small black ki blasts with its tentacles towards him; Gogeta, however, was incapable of moving, and knowing that he was already half-way through gathering all the energy he needed, he didn't give up and took the energy blasts head on. Of course, the more blasts he took, the weaker he got, until he was unable to hold on to his SSJ4 form, and returned to his base form, his hair and tail turning black. Although, by now he was screaming in agony, he was still not willing to give into the pain and continued forward with his plan. -Some people never learn their lesson and always want things the hard way.-the Megasaiyan said-Your friends won't last long either, but let us discourage them by ending your life first. Farewell, ignorant fool!-then, two of its tentacles sped towards Gogeta, whom by now was barely holding on, so even if he wanted to escape, he couldn't have; just then, GohanX appeared out of nowhere, catching the tentacles with his bare hands, tearing them apart. -I'm not done with you, you freak!-he said with a smirk, then powering up to SSJ4. -You again? Haven't you had enough? Want me to cut down your arms too? You know well, that could be arranged easily. -I don't think so.-then GohanX attacked the thing with all his might, blood still dripping from his half legs, while Gogeta continued happily gathering the energy. GohanX was constantly hitting the Megasaiyan, which couldn't focus on its tentacles anymore, giving Bardock and the others a small break. However, instead of doing that, they took the opportunity and attacked It from behind, which was rather surprised to see them all of a sudden, receiving hits from all four of them. "No more."-It thought, then powered up madly, blowing all four of them away with its ki, this time, even electrocuting them with its amazing black electricity surrounding it. Napitz, Bardock and King Vegeta, whom were all seriously wounded and almost out of energy, landed on the ground, while reverting back to their base forms. GohanX was also barely holding on to his SSJ4 form, but he wasn't about to give up yet. He flew back right at the Megasaiyan, whose black electric aura by now disappeared; but before almost reaching It, he did a front flip in the air, kicking its eyes with his half legs, filling the eyes with blood. He knew that the pain afterwards would be unbearable, and of course, he started screaming from the much pain, however, he did manage to blind his opponent for a very short while, giving Gogeta enough time to finish his ultimate attack. GohanX crashed to the ground unconscious, in his base form, while Mizuna flew next to him, and took him to safety. King Vegeta, Napitz and Bardock, fired more small ki blasts at It, filling its body with smoke, rather than actually harming him. But at least, they distracted It more, until Gogeta was ready to fire away his "Spirit Bomb." The Megasaiyan rubbed its eyes pissed off, and powered up again to clear the smoke away. After that it looked around, and saw its opponents somewhere underneath It, looking back terrified, which made the thing smile. It then took off towards the three Saiyans, whom prepared themselves for battle, or rather for their end, when suddenly, the thing realised that it was way to bright even for daylight. The thing looked up, and to its horror, it saw an immense white energy ball, shining down on the planet. The ball was big as Earth itself, reaching out in space, clearly visible for over 150 million of kilometers away, like a sun. Indeed, it was the biggest "Spirit Bomb" Goku ever made, and by now, even the Megasaiyan realised, that if it got hit by ball, It wouldn't stand a chance, even with its ki barrier raised. So, the thing raised its both hands, and also made an enormous energy blast with a white sphere inside of it and dark-red electricity flowing around it, the one with which it intended to destroy the planet earlier, when Goku caught its tail, however, it was only the quarter of the "Spirit Bomb." None the less, the thing fired it towards Gogeta's blast, hoping their collision would not only destroy both the blasts, but the Saiyan also. Instead, the black ki blast went directly into the "Spirit Bomb, which after engulfing it, got even a bit bigger to the Megasaiyan's surprise. As Gogeta fired the bomb right at the thing, It started firing more enormous black ki blasts, this time hoping that eventually, the white energy ball would explode by overpowering it. However, it just grew bigger and bigger, closing in rapidly on the Megasaiyan, which by now, could only hope, that Gogeta would lose his guts by firing such a gigantic blast at the planet, which would surely explode as well. -Surely, you're not foolish enough to take me down with that thing?!-the Megasaiyan mumbled in fear-It will, without a doubt, destroy this whole planet, along with your friends. Furthermore, when I banged the one, which calls himself GohanX, to the ground, I also read a glimpse of his memory, and I would like to remind you, the Dragon Balls won't be active for another half of year, and now the dragons' power has a limit as well, which means you won't be able to restore all this anytime soon. Does it worth destroying me, for the sake of so MANY lives? -Want to know, how the Universe was born?-Gogeta asked, as the immense white energy ball got closer and closer to the thing, while Bardock and the others, flew as far as possible, taking shelter-It was born with a bang. Want to know how your live will end? It will also end with a bang. BIG BANG SPIRIT BOMB!-he yelled, while the ball almost reached the Megsaiyan, who as a last resort, raised the biggest ki barrier it ever could, before being "eaten" by the whiteness. The Megasaiyan saw that its black ki barrier started disintegrating, and after a short while, It too, atom by atom; and after seeing so much whiteness, everything became forever dark, as It passed to the Other World, where King Yemma was waiting for it prepared, giving It the greater punishment he could think of, exiling the thing forever. The great "Spirit Bomb" started destroying everything in its path: the trees, the mountains, the lakes...But after sensing it was all over for It, Gogeta was able to change the blasts' trajectory and fire it up into space, more exactly, into a sun, destroying it without a trace. For a few moments, no one could open their eyes, as the sky itself got filled with whiteness, but after that, everything turned pitch dark, as there wasn't any sun to shine on the planet. -Luckily, the planet has two suns, although, we will still miss having another sun, cause now, nightfall will last longer.-a familiar voice said behind Mizuna, whom raised her white aura to be able to see; she saw the old Saiyan, Tomo Oshi, who told her and the others not so long ago, about Kibitoshin's whereabouts. -What are you doing here?-Mizuna asked him amazed. -Did you think, I would miss out the greatest battle, this planet and the Universe, has ever seen? No way! Although, I did get hit hard on the head several times, losing my conscience, so I haven't seen most of it.-while Mizuna "fell upside-down." Just then, GohanX' fusion wore off, and Trunks and Gohan separated back to themselves, however, both of their half legs were still missing, while they were still unconscious. Everyone started feeling relieved and happy, that it was finally over, when all of a sudden, they heard a loud thunder. Gogeta was still in mid-air, and clouds started appearing rapidly on the sky filled with stars, while more thunders could be heard getting closer and closer. Shortly after, lightning started appearing too, while the wind started to pick up speed. -It can't be!-Napitz said trembling in fear-Not now! Anything but that!-and he had a good reason to fear, because he and the others barely had any more energy left, and a violent storm like that, would have definitely killed them. -Wait a minute.-Gogeta replied-It's not what you think. This is just a regular storm... And he was right. Indeed, it was just a regular storm, the lightings no longer reaching the ground, while the wind blew at a normal speed. The rain started to pour down, bringing everyone joy, as the cold water relaxed their bruised bodies, washing down the blood. Gogeta landed near Bardock and the others, whom raised their white auras to see each other smiling victoriously. Both Gohan and Trunks woke up, laying on the ground soaking wet, looking at Mizuna and Tomo Oshi smiling as well. The threat has finally been destroyed, and the Universe is saved. The question is, how can Gogeta and the others restore everything without the Dragon Balls? Don't miss the final episode of this action-packed saga! |
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 14 2012, 02:49 PM Post #83 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 70: Restoration Previously, on Dragon Ball F, Gogeta made a colossal "Spirit Bomb," the size of the Earth, and with it, it finally destroyed the terrifying Megasaiyan. But the planet Earth 2.0 suffered quite a lot of damage, not to mention the casualties. How can our heroes ever restore all that without the Dragon Balls? Find out today on the final episode of this saga! The rain started pouring harder, but Goku and the others still remained in the open land, refreshing themselves after the fierce battle. After a few minutes, Gogeta started: -So, King Vegeta...What made you actually change your mind and come and help us? -As I said before, I grew too fond to this planet to allow for it to be destroyed by some beast. -Yea, yea, but mind telling us your true reason?-Gogeta asked with a smirk. -Must you insist, then I guess, there's no point denying it anymore. Very well then...-then he swallowed hard and continued-Should you know, I've decided not to take over this planet, nor the Universe, for that matter. -What made you change your mind? -To be honest, it was mainly you...Plus, there's no point in ruling over something if most of my people are against my desire of domination and turned their backs on me as well. Indeed, our race has been given a second chance, and I won't be the one to ruin it. I even found out, that some of my most loyal servants also started doubting my cause, wanting to turn over a new leaf, but never had the guts to admit it. We, Saiyans, have been known throughout the Universe to be nothing but cold and ruthless monsters, putting fear in everyone's souls just by mentioning our names. Of course, we were a proud race, but we had no dignity; therefor, we paid the ultimate price and have been destroyed for our sins. I always thought, that no matter what, we would forever remain the same, but now I see, as time passes, we also evolve from brainless monkeys to somewhat civilized beings. Even before dying the first time, we already started showing compassion towards one another, from our kind at least, and after spending so much time on the Other World, without aging, I guess we had more time to change for the better. But when you, Gogeta, showed me your past, my sons' past, and seeing that even he could be tainted by good, feeling compassion to someone other than himself, even raising a wonderful family, it was then, when I truly started thinking about all this in the first place. You proved to me, that no matter how strong you become, and how much power you have, without someone to care for you and for you to care back, it means nothing. -Wow, I never saw King Vegeta being so melodramatic before.-Napitz whispered to Bardock-But why am I talking with you? You're not even on our side... -Don't you see, you moron!-Bardock yelled at him-There are no sides anymore. You either stay a Saiyan and start a new life, or you shall be banished from our kind, and if you pose a threat, even killed.-which made Napitz swallow hard; just then, Gogeta's fusion wore off, Goku and Vegeta turning back to themselves, and right after, Napitz' fusion also wore off, Raditz and Nappa separating from each other as well. -So, does that mean, no more destruction, no more killing, no more fun?!-Nappa asked pissed off. -If you want to, we can all shoot a small ki blast at you, killing you for amusement; afterwards, every one of us will rip off one of your body parts, while I'll get to keep your head as a souvenir. How does that sound for fun?-Vegeta asked, laughing hilariously. Just then, two bright lights appeared on the dark sky, blowing the clouds away, as the rain stopped. The almost blindingly glowing silhouettes landed in front of King Vegeta and the others, whom stared at them amazed, with their mouths open. -Greetings, proud heroes!-the taller silhouette on the right started, which had a voice of a man-My name is Xas, and this is my wife, Hiera. -Now, I've seen everything.-Trunks remarked not far from them. -You mean, you actually do exist?!-Goku asked astonished-That is sooo amazing! -Of course, we do.-the other silhouette answered, which had a voice of a woman-Who do you think provided the crystals to the races of this planet, to protect them from the violent storm? Which by now is gone, thanks to the Megasaiyan. -What?!-Tomo Oshi shouted wondered-Did that thing actually got rid of that violent storm and saved our lifes? -Unintentionaly, but yes, he did.-Xas responded. -So, how come, all of a sudden, you decided to appear to us, just as the battle ended, huh?-Mizuna asked angrily. -We apologize for not being able to help you guys out more.-Hiera replied. -More?-Goku asked confused. -Well, of course...-Xas started-Who do you think helped you, er, I mean, Gogeta, to be able to control the "Spirit Bomb" in the first place, not allowing it to destroy him? Vegeta is still far from being pure-hearted and normally, that technique would have destroyed both of you, if it weren't for us. -Gee, I did wonder how on earth, we managed to pull that technique off? To be honest, I really doubted it would work, but when you have no other choice, you also don't have nothing to lose.-then he turned towards Vegeta-Vegeta, what do you say? -Hmph...whatever.-he growled, folding his arms and looking the other way. -Now then, let's get back to the reason why we decided to make our appearance in front of you guys.-Xas cut in-You SHOULD feel privileged, as you are the first persons to ever meet us in person. Not that you can actually see us, but you know what I mean. -Back when the tyrant called Frieza...-Hiera continued-Destroyed your friend, Xaras's home planet, we were so helpless to stop him, that our essence regretfully drifted in space for years. But when this planet has been created, along with the revived race, our souls have also been restored, sort of speak, thanks to your Dragon Balls. -We then vowed to never let such fate occur to this planet and protect, not just Xaras's race, but the entire race and species, which have been moved here, as well, even at the cost of our..."lives." -Among others, the violent storm represented the biggest threat, until the Megasaiyan appeared, anyway. Luckily, brave and noble warriors like you, with unbelievable strength and power, came to this planet, saving it from destruction. For that, we shall also be forever grateful. -Nevertheless, this planet suffered a lot of casualties, along with the planet itself. And after finding out, that such brave, strong, good-hearted heroes exist, and especially seeing that even the mighty Saiyans decided to turn over a new leaf... -...we decided to give up the rest of our life force and with it, restore everyone and every damage this planet suffered since its creation. -But won't that mean, you will die, or pass away?!-Gohan asked worried not far away. -Technically, yes.-Xas responded. -But our essence will forever wonder on this planet, and even though, we won't be able to help it anymore, we will be at peace.-Hiera added; for a few moments, everyone fell to silence, not knowing how to respond to such a noble sacrifice. -Thank you, for everything.-King Vegeta managed to bring himself to say. -And from this day forward, I hear by declare you not just king of all Saiyans, but king of the entire planet.-Xas added-After the planet has been restored, everyone will know about your might and power, and bow down to you. Lead them, with honor!-his last words were, as he and his wife started rising to the sky, surrounding the entire planet with blinding whiteness, after that, disappearing forever. After a few moments, everyone managed to open their eyes again, and noticed that it was daylight. The sun was once again at the exact spot where it exploded earlier, shining brightly on the planet. The giant craters caused by the ki blasts were no more; instead, the trees, the lakes, the mountains, life itself, has been re-replaced them. The spiky forrest where the "living tree" once was, has also disappeared, filling the place rather with numerous colorful flowers. Goku and the others noticed, not only they were healed again, but their outfit was also restored. To their joy, Trunks and Gohan were able to walk again, while Mizuna rushed into Trunks' arms, hugging him tightly, which made Trunks' face turn red as a cherry, while Gohan laughed at him. All the Saiyans, which died earlier, re-appeared on the sky confused, while Tomo Oshi started filling in Xaras of the occurred events. Even the 60-meter-long anacondas were happy, as their eggs started to hatch. In Tsufurukan City, more and more Tuffles and Kanassans started appearing at the city's entrance, while Tsufurak ordered with joy for the shield generator to be unplugged forever. Nappa and Radditz were the least persons to be happy, but they had no choice than to start making some changes in their lives, or they risked to be killed. On the Sacred World of the Kais, Kibitoshin's hollow also disappeared, while he and Supreme Kai started jumping with happiness around the crystal ball. Back on Earth, Pan and the others, already started organizing a party for Goku and the others' safe return. It didn't take long until they arrived too, while many hugs and kisses were in order, for some at least. Of course, the rest of the Z-Fighters were also invited to the party, while Uub happily announced that everyone in his village has been successfully healed, thanks to Mr. Satan's finest doctors. The party had its funny moments too, like when Goten managed to convince Piccolo to drink beer, with devastating consequences; while Mizuna, who auto-invited herself, dragged Trunks with her everywhere she went, making him blush, while the rest of the teenagers laughed their buts off. However, some people also noticed the seriousness in Goku's and Vegeta's looks, as if they weren't quite themselves; they were both distracted and worried about something. One could only wonder, what other terrifying events await our heroes, especially knowing that Evil is still present on Earth, plotting for revenge and world domination. What really happened to Gogeta's body on planet Earth 2.0? Will the Megasaiyan's and Bardock's vision, of Goku somehow becoming evil, come true? And what other adventures await Pan and her teenager friends as well? Find out, only by continuing reading my fanfic! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jul 17 2012, 04:56 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Jul 21 2012, 01:54 PM Post #84 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Well, guys, THIS IS IT. As in the documentary entitled the same way about Michael Jackson's life. I'm finally going to do it; I'm finally going to go "Into the Wild." I just can't stop myself quoting that movie; just watched it earlier this morning. If you haven't seen it yet, then wait are you waiting for? Go watch it now!:) Now you all may wonder: is this guy actually going into the wild? Is he crazy? Well, the answer is yes and no. I'm not actually going INTO the wild, but I am going to wander the world, to try my luck, to see its wonder ( and terror ) with my own eyes, to go on an adventure from where I may never come back, to find my purpose in life...Although, I will stay close to the cities and to the people, but that does not mean that I will be any safer than, for example, in the woods. So, metaphorically, I am going into the wild, the wilderness of the human kind. And some might say, I am crazy for doing so, on my own, with only 10 euros in my pocket, minimum knowledge of survival and quite skinny, weakling. I may end up like Christopher Johnson McCandless AKA Alexander Supertramp, for those whom saw the movie, or yet, even worse; one can only imagine in horror how many bad things could happen to me ( my things and money stolen away from me, beaten up, violated, KILLED ), but at least I'll know that I did something in my life, or at least, died trying. Why I decided to do this, you ask? Because, I'm already 22, with a lousy job ( my boss owns me over 800 euros ), can't get a decent job, which I would at least partially enjoy and from which could manage to support myself and also give something to my father, who takes care of me and my sister ( my mother left my dad in case you're wondering, but that's not the point ), I never had a girlfriend, I'm still a virgin for goodness sake ( which I am proud of, sort of ). I just want to see if this world has to offer me something, to find out why the hell God created me for, what is the meaning of my life? Call me crazy, but at least I will be at peace for trying, whether I'll succeed or die on the way. Why am I sharing this? Well, some people expect some things from me, like the continuation/ to finish my Dragon Ball Finale series. Unfortunately, I don't know when I will do that, or for that matter, IF I'll ever do that. It all depends on how things will turn out to me, or turn out at all. Whenever I'll have the chance, I shall update my journal entry/ post and let you guys know if I'm still alive and what plans I have. I may not have a Kinto-un ( Flying Nimbus ) to get me to places faster, or a Power Pole to protect me when needed; heck, I'm powerless as a fly, with no special super powers whatsoever. However, I do have SOMEONE more valuable on my side, and that is GOD. I shall put my life into HIS hands, for HIM to decide what to happen to me from now on. It will be some crazy adventure, I'll say, literally, the adventure of my life. Or someone just kills me, as soon as I leave town, or right before:)) Anyway, just wanted to say farewell to everyone and take care! PEACE!! |
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| Megasaiyan | Aug 11 2012, 02:56 PM Post #85 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Hi there, once again. I'm baaack; for now at least:) It has been a while since I posted something, about three weeks. What have I been up to these last weeks? Well, you already know my little 4-day adventure. Other than that, I broke into my boss' yard at night only to get his attention that I need the money which he owes me, and that I'm not afraid of him; furthermore, I start working from Monday at a wood factory. You should know, I am pro nature and the trees too, it's only a necessaty. The salary is very attractive, so hopefully it will work out good. But let's not get into my personal life too much:) cause I'm here to tell you my future plans regarding my work as an amateur artist. Up until now, I had more than plenty enough time to post new stuff very often, because I worked as a dispatcher, but if I'll stay at my new job where I will have to work for real this time, meaning physical work, normally I won't have so much time to concentrate on my other "work" and post so often. I'll see how much time I can make for that afterwards. First things first> Dragon Ball Finale. I plan to continue this, as soon as I have finished a new fanfic I recently thought of, so right after that, I would continue the story where I left off. I also intend to make the episodes longer, between 1500 and 2000 words per episode, while the previous ones had about 700 and 1500. But don't worry, I plan to re-master my previous episodes making them longer as well by adding more descriptions, more dialogues and more fighting description. The new saga will be called "Dragon Ball Hunting Saga," which I think you will all find the best saga of them all cause it will be more about the teenagers and their love life. Of course, the adults will go through some interesting and funny events too, there will be a lot of laughter, recurring characters from both Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z, less fighting, but still there will be some great deal of tensions and of course, it will also have some serious tone. I recently re-installed my Windows and I don't know if I can re-install the WhiteSmoke program as well, which usually corrects my grammar/spelling errors, so if not, then expect more errors then usual. My Bulma/Vegeta fanfic has been currently postponed, because first I need to watch the Garlic Junior Saga and the episodes before the appearance of the androids for a better understanding of some characters, and the situation of how Bulma and Vegeta could have possibly got together within the time gap in the anime. However, as I said before, I'm currently working on a new fanfic called "Piccolo's First Ever Sunburn." Don't worry, this won't be as weird and unusual as my last Piccolo fic:)), but hopefully, it will be funnier. Also, "The Night of the Living Doll 2" will also be postponed. Of course, I shall also continue drawing while I'm writing, and my first drawing will be Gokatesu Suliyatsu as a Super Saiyan. So, these are my plans, in a nutshell, for my amateurish artistic life. Don't get your hopes high though, cause considering all the crazy things I've done lately ( breaking into my ex-boss' yard happened only five days ago ), I'm not sure, how long I will stick around in this world or stay out from prison. So yeah, my days are literally numbered, plus today I also found out that I have a bad health condition, so I really can't promise you guys anything; for all I know, I could die soon, and thus you will never find out how I intended to end the Dragon Ball Series. Of course, I wouldn't like that either, that's why I decided to take a break in the first place; I knew that I had some important decisions to make in my life, and I could very well die because of them, so I tried my best to at least finish the Megasaiyan Saga and not leave everything in a cliffhanger. That's why I'm afraid to start off again in the first place, I wouldn't want to disappear from the face of the Earth and leave the story just when things couldn't get any better. Speaking of...Y'all probably heard of the new coming DBZ movie which will air next year in April. You probably also heard that Akira Toriyama himself will write/direct it, and the story will be very much canon to the anime, it will continue the story exactly from where they left off at the end of DBZ. You know what this means right? It will probably/might interfere with my story, so if you haven't grown fond of my story yet, you should just leave and never come back, or there might be big confusions/contradictions later regarding some important things. With that said, I wish thy farewell and stick around for more infos and updates. Edited by Megasaiyan, Aug 11 2012, 07:35 PM.
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Sep 28 2012, 12:06 AM Post #86 |
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TO MEGASAIYAN:I recently started reading this fanfic of yours and i've just finished it.At the beginning,it was boring.I can't understand why you had to spend 10 chapters talking about Pan's flirt with Xevo.Who could be interested in that?But,after that,it was great. However,when i read the last two posts of yours on this thread,i felt bitterness in my heart.Is there really not any hope about that "your days are limited" thing? I'd like you to know that,just like you,i'm a virgin and i've never had any girlfriend.Also,i've never had any friends/social life.I'm a little older than you and my life has been awful from its beginning.During the first years of my life,a relative of mine,who dislikes my parents,tried to make me lose it,in order to make them unhappy.That person(female in gender) used to tell me lies about my parents(that they're immoral,they don't love me etc) and, since i was a little kid back then,i got psychological problems.She also used to say things to my parents about me,so that they would get angry with me.The worst thing is that she was never blamed by anyone for those things and,even today,she hasn't admitted anything. Now that i've grown up,her words can't affect me anymore,but my neurological problems are still on and i don't know if i'll ever recover.It's a lucky thing i have those hobbies(dragonball,yugioh and other fictional things),so i have been kept alive.Honestly,the only reason i haven't gone completely insane or comitted suicide up to now is my hobbies,through which i have a good deal of fun. That's why i feel so close to Future Trunks,of all DB characters.Like him,i'm a very uncheerful person,because of what i've gone through.Many times i've imagined that i have his time machine.I travel to the past and warn my mother about that person of the family.So,when she gives birth to me,she makes sure to keep me away from the influence of that evil(i dare to say) woman.Thus,a new timeline is created.The alternate version of me is a normal person,who has lived a happy life,has friends,a girl etc Just like Present Trunks,who is more jolly than his future counterpart,because he has lived a better life. |
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| Megasaiyan | Sep 28 2012, 02:28 PM Post #87 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Thank you for reading my fic so far. And to answer your question about Xevo and Pan needing 10 chapters? Well, I know DBZ is all about fighting, but I wanted to add something more than that. Akira Toriyama never liked giving side-stories in DBZ, like how Bulma and Vegeta got together, he just made a year gap, and pop, their suddenly together just because Future Trunks told Goku who his parents were. Oh, and actually, some people started liking my fic just because of those introductive episodes, because they're good cliffhangers, it resembles Gohan's first day in highschool. Does that mean you didn't like those episodes either? Regarding my other posts, yeah real life sucks; good thing we can venture into our fantasy dreamworld, otherwise we would go crazy. Now I understand why so many people comit suicide. Too bad they're so weak that makes them do such a bad thing. But really, no friends at all? Not even one? Even I have a few close friends, the rest are good aquintances. Sorry for that relative ruining your life like that. She sounds like the main villain from a spanish soap opera:) I didn't notice from your fics your so much liking Future Trunks. I relate myself to Goku, many times even act like him, like being goofy like him. |
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| Megasaiyan | Oct 8 2012, 08:33 AM Post #88 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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DBF IS BACK!!! Hey there everyone! How you all been? I know I have been posting quite rarely these past weeks, and unfortunately, I won't be able to speed it up much; but you should all know that I won't give up and will give every bit of free time I've got to write more, more and more. Let's not forget the drawing part too, of course:) Anyway, as I promised, after finishing my little Piccolo fanfic ( the second one until now ), and the long-awaited Super Gokatesu Suliyatsu, it's time to get serious again and go back writing YOU-KNOW-WHAT. That's right, DRAGON BALL FINALE is coming back better than ever. Although, new episodes will appear more rarely than before, hopefully one per week, that doesn't mean you'll be bored, cause I started REMASTERING the previous episodes, making them longer and "shinier" with more dialogues, description, fighting scenes and more...feeling to it. I also decided to make some major changes to it, like removing the part where Gohan goes SSJ3 and leaving him in his ultimate form ( we don't want to make the same mistakes DBGT made, now do we? ).Plus, I will change/ add some episodes/ episode titles in between, for example, I will combine the first two episodes of the series and make them as one, adding some additional dialogues and description. As for the new episodes, for now they will numbered from 71 upwards, continuing from where left off, until further notice. None the less, I'm pretty excited of how things will turn out in the end and if I will ever manage to put things together, making at least a good fanfic out of it, if not great. There are many exceptional fanfics out there to say the least, to the competition will be though. But still, this is purely fun-made, and I don't make any money out of it. Most importantly, all credit goes to the famous Akira Toriyama, who invented the legendary series. That is all for now. Keep following for more updates! |
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| Megasaiyan | Oct 19 2012, 02:47 PM Post #89 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 71: Living On Two months have passed since the events on Planet Earth 2.0, which changed everyone's life, both the inhabitants' and the visitors'. Unity prevailed once again thus the threat has been destroyed, bringing peace to the planet once and for all. Everyone was finally happy...well, almost everyone. Nappa and Raditz were still pissed off that they couldn't have their revenge against Goku and Vegeta, and not having King Vegeta's support, they left the planet to find some other way of revenge, or a purpose to their lives. King Vegeta and his followers have reunited with old Tomo Oshi and the rest of the Saiyans, making the race whole again, with King Vegeta still as their ruler. But now the king had a lot more minions to rule over as he was not only the king of the Saiyans, but of the entire planet. Keeping things in order on a planet that big with so many different species and races, was harder than he thought, so he chose Bardock second in command to help him out. Of course, he would have chosen his son instead, but Vegeta, who always named himself a prince, had no more desire to rule others, so he returned to Earth, to his family. King Vegeta also started searching for a new soul mate and told everyone that he wanted to have at least one more offspring, whether it was a boy or a girl. Of course, Vegeta was the first one to oppose to his idea, saying that having a baby brother at his age was plain ridiculous. He was already uncomfortable with the idea of having a younger father than him and now this? He started to truly despise those Dragon Balls, however, he had no choice than to accept these weird circumstances, hoping they couldn't get any weirder. Bardock also started dating someone, none other than Fasha. Goku couldn't be more happy for him, however, whenever he asked his father about Goku's mother, Bardock always avoided the subject, saying he would rather not talk about it. Goku then understood that between his parents was never anything special and that it was only a one-night stand, which Bardock wasn't proud of and embarrassed to admit. Xaras has finally returned to his family for good this time and lived their lives as happily they could. The leader of the Tsufurukans, gave Trunks the blueprints to the shield generator and many crystals as well, to take back to Earth to protect those environments where the weather was more violent. The rest of the Z Fighters also returned to Earth, taking a visitor with them: Mizuna. She, of course, moved in to the Briefs family, having her own room. She became very close friends with Pan and Bra, and they hang out a lot together, but her main interest was Trunks. On the other hand, Trunks also started liking her more and he even started thinking whether she was the one for him. Mizuna spent a lot of time with him at the Caspule Corporation, and Trunks also liked the fact that she was a quick learner, so he named her his assistant. When Trunks asked her about her family, she told him they both died in a mission, when she was little, sent by one of Frieza's henchmen. She had been raised and taken care of my many Saiyan families, especially by Tomo Oshi, as they all loved her. Mizuna decided to also become a Super Saiyan, so she asked Trunks to train her whenever they had some free time from work. High school started once again and our teenager heroes were more than glad for it; after going through such dangerous adventures, studying for a change was a relief. Gohan, however, decided to take a one-year break at the university and went back to Earth 2.0 to study it more. Since his students have graduated, he no more had any guilt of leaving the literature class on someone else's hands. Even though the Great Saiyaman and Saiyagirl were gone for good, two other great heroes replaced them; better yet, three: Uub, Buu and...Bee 2. Mr. Satan also announced that he would retire, but he named those three to take his place in bringing peace not just in Satan City, but in the entire world. By now, Uub was just as powerful as Mystic Gohan and couldn't be more proud of his achievement. But saving the world wasn't all that he's been doing; he secretly had a crush on Marron and often visited her at the fast-food where she still worked. Even though the last time she left her job without saying a word to her boss, he nonetheless forgave her and gave her a second chance. She was very good with the clients; alway cheerful for which they liked her the most, so her boss was rather forced to rehire her. Bra and Khitan, however, have been seeing each other very rarely lately; firstly, because of Bra being occupied with her studies and secondly, because Vegeta made Khitan his pupil and was training him real hard for him to become strong enough to be worthy of the prince's daughter. If it weren't for them being classmates, Pan and Xevo would also see each other rarely. When she wasn't studying, Pan was training hard with her grandpa Goku and Piccolo to master her Super Saiyan 2 stage. And speaking of couples, another big wedding occurred, this time between Mia and Yamcha. Plus, they also announced that they will soon have a baby boy. Because of them being Saiyans, Goku and Vegeta looked still young compared to their wifes, so Bulma and Chi-Chi bought some magical cream for their skin from Fortuneteller Baba and tried it. To their joy, it actually worked, and once again they looked "even" with their husbands. However, something else worried the two of them, regarding their husbands. After returning from Planet Gogeta, Goku and Vegeta weren't themselves anymore, they seemed distressed and bored. They weren't training anymore like they used to, they were either watching TV or sleeping all day long, as if they hated living anymore. Neither Bulma, nor Chi-Chi dared to ask them what the problem was, even though they already knew the answer. Our heroes live on their lives peacefully once again, however, Evil is always around the corner, always hungry for vengeance, destruction and world domination. Secrets are yet to be revealed, many characters from the previous series will recur, many surprises and awkward moments await our heroes in this all new saga of Dragon Ball Finale called "The Dragon Ball Hunting Saga". Edited by Megasaiyan, Nov 10 2012, 09:06 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Oct 24 2012, 08:42 PM Post #90 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 72: The Ex We see two space pods flying somewhere in the galaxy, away from Planet Earth 2.0. In the space pods there were two Saiyans, none other than Nappa and Raditz, however, their destination was unknown by them. Nappa was starting to get bored just flying around in the endless dark space, seeing nothing but millions after millions of stars, so he turned the communicator on and started: -Raditz, where exactly are we going?-Nappa voice could be heard in Raditz' pod, however, there was no response; Raditz was in deep thoughts-Raditz, are you sleeping? Raditz?! -No, Nappa, I'm awake. -So? -So what? -Where the hell are we going?! And how will we get our revenge on you-know-who? -Nappa, you are and always will be so simple-minded... -What does that supposed to mean? -Haven't you learned by now that it is pointless try getting revenge on those two? Even the powerful Frieza joined with Cell have tried and look where they've ended up...AGAIN. Even if we train our whole lives, we will never match their power, not to mention their sons'. I am not going to waste my life again just to get even with them. After spending so much time in Hell, I'd rather enjoy living in the real world for a change, before I end up back there again. Who knows? Maybe I can something good for King Yemma to change his mind and allow me in Heaven. -I can't believe what a pathetic coward you've become. You first showed it to me when we were on Namek, when you chickened out joining Friezell in taking down our foes. If we would have joined him, instead going against him, by now both Kakarot and Vegeta would be dead. Even if Frieza would have killed us afterwards, it would be worth it. -Well, no one is stopping you; you know where Earth is. Go! Die again, if you want to. You're not strong enough to take down even the Namekian Piccolo, yet Kakarot or Vegeta. -Fine! Be it! At least, I will go down in glory.-then suddenly, he redirected his pod in the opposite direction and flew away. -The fool...-Raditz said to himself, continuing his journey alone, in the waste space. -If I can't hurt Vegeta's body, than I will hurt his soul instead. I just hope that ***** is still alive.-Nappa said to himself, as he flew towards Earth, but to another planet. West City, Caspule Corp. After returning from Planet Gogeta, Vegeta's life hasn't been the same. Instead of training a lot like he used to, he sat all day watching TV and drinking beer. It's not that he drank much beer that worried Bulma, it's the drastic change that worried her. But even though, she already knew the answer, she still felt obliged to ask him personally; it was her duty as a wife to do so. But instead of asking him directly, she set next to him on the couch, opened a can of beer herself and just started watching the TV, without saying a word. Vegeta noticed her alright, and started to feel awkward; she didn't like watching the sports and she would always just start talking and babbling of how her day was, what she invent in the lab, the latest gossips about the workers at the corporation or their children...But this time, she was just plain silent, which Vegeta realised that annoyed him even more than her talking itself, so, for the first time ever, it was him who started the conversation: -So, what's up?-he asked a bit shy. -Nothing much...the usual.-she replied firmly, not taking her eyes off the TV, while taking a sip of beer. -Really? And what made you decide to watch sports just like that? -I don't know...What made you to do the same? I mean, you did watch them before, but not all day long. -I knew there was a point to all this act of yours! -Well, then you probably also knew, that this time where I would ak you what's going on with you and Kakarot, would also come, so spill it out! -Fine. Well it's quite simple. Kakarot's body and mine have reached their limit, meaning no matter how much we would train, we wouldn't be able to get any more powerful, without killing ourselves. Happy?! -Not really. I mean, I kind of knew you would say that, and that one day this would come, but I never imagined you taking it like this. -What do you mean? -Well, just look at you! You're nothing but a lazy, spoiled prince, who does nothing but sit and sour. -And what do you want me to do? All my life I have done nothing but training and fighting, to become the number one in the Universe. Now, unable to do so anymore, it seems that I don't have nothing left to do. -Yes you do. You're still alive, aren't you? You breath, you have feelings, emotions; you're not a robot. There are still many things out there in the world, that can bring happiness, even for the likes of you. -Like what? -FUN... -Fun? -Yes, fun. When was the last time you had some fun anyway? -I used to have a lot of fun when killing those weaker than me. -OTHER than that? -Well, I still train to keep fit and I also train Tien Shinhan's son. But he's a teenager; he always has something "better" to do with his teenager friends...He can never sit still for more than three hours of training, not to mention, sometimes he's late or he doesn't shows up at all, even though I told him I would kill him if he won't be able to beat me in my SSJ3 form. And his four months are almost up. Don't you see? I've become so low, that people don't even take me serious anymore and it's all you guys fault. -OUR FAULT?! How is any of this our fault? And who do you mean by us? -You, Trunks, Bra, your parents...Now everyone thinks that since Vegeta has a family, he's not the same guy he used to be. I bet even Ten Shinhan forgot that his first death was indirectly caused by me. -Would you prefer to be nothing but a domestic animal, a killing machine? -Sometimes I still do. Unfortunately, it's something that just never fades away. -Well, that's why all we're here for. To make you forget your awful past and make you happy. And that's where the word "fun" comes in. I also have very little to do at the Capsule Corp. now, since Trunks has a new lovely assistant. It's time for me to retire from work, and we're both enough to become pensioners. -Yeah, look at us. Being over 60, yet looking like in our mid-thirties. -That's the reason now it's time for us to have some fun, alone, just the two of us, together. We have been like reborn and we should enjoy every minute of it. -I think you're right. I think, since I look young again, I should go back killing again like I used to.-Vegeta said sarcastically and with a smirk. -Very funny, Vegeta. -And what fun do you exactly have in mind? -It's been a while since we've been in the carnival. Remember, how much fun we used to have there? -Yea, fun...-Vegeta said with a bored face. -Well, I heard, that they've opened a new type of carnival, one for only ADULTS.-which got Vegeta's attention-What do you say, honey? Will you take me there? -Why not? I guess it could be...interesting. Meanwhile, at the Kame House, Krillin and his family were having dinner while Master Roshi took Number 17 in the city to teach him how to handle himself with the women. Oolong went along, thinking it would be a blast seeing those two in action. Suddenly, someone knocked at the door, and Krillin was the one who volunteered opening it. When he opened the door to see who it was, he literally flipped: -Krillin, is that really you?-a tall woman with long blue hair, blue eyes and big breasts asked enthusiastically; at first, Krillin thought it was Bulma, or maybe Bra got so tall, or at least he wished it was either of those two-Oh my gosh, you look so cool and cute with that hair and moustache of yours. I just wanna kiss you over and over again. MWAH. MWAH. MWAH.-as she kissed him on the cheeks and hugged him tightly, squeezing her breasts all over him. -Krillin!!!-an angry voice behind Krillin's back could be heard-Might I know, who your lady friend is? -Sure.-the other woman answered still enthusiastic instead of him-My name is Maron; I used to date Krillin a long time ago...-while Krillin so wished he could hide under the ground right now, while Number 18 looked both surprised and furious at the same time. TO BE CONTINUED>>> Edited by Megasaiyan, Nov 4 2012, 11:07 AM.
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-she said, as she lifted her right arm to shake hands with him.
with more dialogues, description, fighting scenes and more...feeling to it. I also decided to make some major changes to it, like removing the part where Gohan goes SSJ3 and leaving him in his ultimate form ( we don't want to make the same mistakes DBGT made, now do we? ).
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