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| Megasaiyan | Mar 26 2012, 09:16 PM Post #46 |
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Episode 40: Continuing from Where Left Off Gogeta and the others were on the new planet which Shepo created, more exactly in a swamp. But everything was huge; the trees, the animals, even some of the insects where the size of a fully grown dog. Not only the planet was thrice bigger than the Earth, but every living thing in it. All the known animals and plants were evolved as if 200 million Earth years have passed. Nothing was the same, and everyone was very amazed. -This place is so perfect for training.-Gogeta said excitedly. -It is truly wonderful and fascinating...-Gohan said-It's a completely new Earth begging to be explored. The research I can do here...this time, I'm the one who wishes to be immortal or at least be 20 years younger. -Well, maybe some other time. First, I have to talk to the locals of this planet. Be back soon!-the Gogeta teleported himself to the Other World where King Kai was. -Gogeta...-King Kai said. -I need your help, King Kai. I need to talk to everyone on that new planet and explain them the situation. They must be really confused. -I'm sorry, but that planet is too big for me to communicate with. But maybe, Grand Kai can help you. -Ok. Thanks.-then he teleported himself to Grand Kai, who was "busy" listening to rock music.-Grand Kai, I.. -I know, I know...-he started-I may look like I'm doing nothing important, but actually, I know everything that has happened to you guys, up until now. I'm really proud of you, sunny. Ah...I mean, both of you. -So, can you help me talk to the planet's new inhabitants? -I'm not a GRAND Kai for nothing, you know. Put your hands on my shoulder!-and so Gogeta did. -"Greetings everyone! My name is Gogeta, and I'm currently half Saiyan and half Earthling. But more importantly, I'm a living being and a friend who's here to explain what has happened to all of you and what lays ahead. At some point, all of you have died, maybe again during this day, but now, all of you have been resurrected. Why have you died, you ask? Because of the existence of pure evil, hatred, revenge, the need to dominate others, the simple joy of killing, to be the ruler of some things you don't even have a right to. Everyone of you died because of these things or at least one of these things. You died innocently and in wain, but now you have been given a chance to continue where you left off; almost, at least. A giant planet has been created for you all to live together and in peace. And that goes double for the Saiyans. I'm warning you guys to stop being yourselves and change for the sake of good, or I will have no other choice than to destroy you. Live in peace and happily with each other. Of course, you may leave the planet if you want. But I beg of you, no more destruction and killing. There won't be a third chance. I wish you the best!" -I must say that was quite a touching speech. -Thanks, Grand Kai. Take care! And I promise I will be here on the next tournament. -I'll be waiting for you!-but Gogeta was already gone. Back on the newly created planet... -So...-Xaras started-Do you think my Gods are here too? -I believe so.-Gohan answered-Have faith, Xaras! -Thank you...friend. Won't you be staying to explore the planet with me? It will take me some time until I find my race. -Sorry, but I made a promise to never again leave my students by. However, I will come as soon as the exams are over. -Ok. Take care!-then Xaras took off. Gogeta appeared out of nowhere along with Yamcha and Krillin. After that, he took everyone home to Earth. Everyone was waiting for them at Bulma's except for Pan and Khitan. It was a moment of joy for everyone. They were all hugging and kissing each other. Well, almost everyone. Gogeta teleported himself and Uub to his village. When Pan saw Gogeta, she ran happily towards him, even though she felt a little awkward when she hugged him, but nevertheless, she was crying with joy. It seems that everything turned out great for our heroes and for millions of other innocent and not so innocent lives. But it is certainly not over yet. Great adventures are ahead for Goku and his friends, and especially for Pan. Don't stop reading cause more episodes are yet to come! See you next time on Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 11:56 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Mar 27 2012, 07:55 AM Post #47 |
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Episode ?: New Info Greetings Dragon Ball fans! I hope that you enjoyed reading my fanfic. I almost generated 1000 views, which is pretty good. Of course, I'm aiming higher:) So, I received a few comments from a few members saying that they liked my fanfic. I would like to hear more oppinions, more elaborate ones, if you may, saying what do you like and of course what you don't like. I'm pretty sure they're will be negative comments too; they always are:D And what do you think of my drawings as well? Of course, the ones made with pencils, not the ones taken from the Net. It's pretty obvious which is which. Tomorrow I shall post the final 6 episodes from my fanfic, well the final 6 written episodes up until now. I will also reveal, sort of, my blog's address, but either way, whenever a new episode appears, I shall post it here as well. Only that, I won't be posting so often anymore, only one or two episode per week. With that said, here's a trailer of the first two sagas of my fanfic. ENJOY:D Edited by Megasaiyan, Mar 27 2012, 08:11 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Mar 28 2012, 05:58 PM Post #48 |
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Episode 41: Earth 2.0 A.K.A Planet Gogeta Four months have passed since the defeat of Friezell and his "friends." When they were sent back to in Hell, Babidi could hardly wait to greet them with a "Told you so." Pan and her teenager friends continued going to high school as if nothing happened, while Goku, after staying home for three months with his loved ones, decided to go to the planet, which Shepo created, to continue training to be able totally master his new Super Saiyan 4 form. He took his father, Bardock, with him. Of course, Vegeta continued training with his super heavy outfit, which Bulma made even heavier. Goten started dating a girl named Kawaii (cute), so he didn't make much time training with Trunks, who was pissed off because of that. However, he befriended with Xevo and started hanging out with him talking about scientific stuff, which this time, Pan wasn't really happy about. But she did like the bond those two made thanks to her. Number 17 decided to move into the Kame house for a while to catch up with her sister and her family. Marron managed to find a job as a waitress at a fast-food, which she quite enjoyed. A surprise wedding took place not long ago between Yajirobe and Miran, where Yamcha presented her new girlfriend, Mia. There, they told everyone that they got engaged and were preparing for a wedding of their own. All 14 Dragon Balls have been gathered by Gogeta a day-after Friezell's and Co. defeat. They also have been split between the Z warriors in order to prevent them falling in the hands of evil again. They took both the Namekian and the Earth Dragon Balls as well like this: Goku and his family = the Four Star Dragon Balls; Bulma and his family = the Seven Star Dragon Balls; Piccolo at Dende's Lookout = the One Star Dragon Balls; Krillin and his family = the Six Star Dragon Balls; Tien and his family = the Three Star Dragon Balls; Puar, Yamcha and his future wife = the two Star Dragon Balls; Uub and his village = the Five Star Dragon Balls. Planet Gogeta...This is how the inhabitants named the planet which Shepo created for them in the honor of the hero's voice they heard. However, some people, like Gohan, Trunks, Xevo and even Bulma, preferred to name it in a more scientific way: Earth 2.0. Everyone, who has been wished back to life, remained on the planet and started a new life there, even the Saiyans, which also saw the possibilities the planet offered them, like prosperous food and a very good training place. Even though, Gogeta told them not to kill innocent beings, still they made sure to occupy a large amount of ground. King Vegeta knew that it will take a lot of time until they are ready to conquere the Universe, especially after the events on New Namek, when many Saiyans started a new peaceful way of life, so the race separated itself between the "good" ones and the "evil" ones. Even Bardock's crew turned over a new leaf. The Tuffles, however, befriended with the Kanassans and started a new colony, as well did many other different races: starting a new colony with other ones. The Arlians celebrated their revival with a huge marriage ceremony between the new king, Atla, and her lover, Lemlia. Even the former king has been invited, thus forgiven for his past crimes. After a few weeks of searching, Xaras also has been reunited with his loved ones. However, he didn't stay much. After two months, he went in another search to find his nine henchmen. Once found, they swore loyalty to Xaras and with that, they separated once more and went to find Frieza's remained henchmen to either destroy them or to make them join the good side. But Xaras still did have a little evil remained in him, and he used that evil to contact Frieza from time to time and torment him with his thoughts. He was literally driving Frieza crazy. Back on Earth...It was finally June and the exams were over. Summer vacation was here, and no one was more delighted than Gohan. He could hardly wait to travel to Planet Earth 2.0 to do a discovery research and document it. He was more than excited to have the chance to see how the Earth would evolve in 200 millions years later. He asked Trunks to join him, who was more than happy to do so. They told Goku a month ago to come after them on 25th June to take them to the planet as well, but Goku didn't come. First, they thought that he simply forgot, which was really not much a surprise: it was like him to forget things. But after waiting a week, they started to somewhat worry about him, so they contacted King Kai to tell Goku to hurry up. However, King Kai couldn't manage to contact Goku, nor Bardock, as if they wouldn't even exist. This time, not even Grand Kai could help out, he too was unable to contact them. Everyone really began to worry. But how could possibly one of the strongest warriors in the Universe just disappear without any trace? Are they really in trouble? Find out in the all-new Saga called: Earth 2.0 Saga! Episode 42: Departure: Bulma's Lab- Destination: Finding Goku No one managed to even imagine how could possibly Goku and Bardock gone missing like that? Another week passed away, and by now it was rather obvious that they were indeed in trouble. Kibitoshin then decided to go to Planet Earth 2.0 and try to find them by himself, but after a week or so, with him too no one could establish contact anymore. Not even Supreme Kai. Luckily, for everyone, Bulma already began building a ship for four persons to travel to Earth 2.0. Gohan and Trunks have already decided to go, but who would the other two persons be? Vegeta was everyone's guess at first, but he declined saying that only a clown like Kakkarott would be foolish enough to disappear like that without a trace, so he wasn't worthy enough to save. Plus, he was already busy trying to perfect his Super Saiyan 4 form with the help of his incredible heavy outfit which Bulma made 250 times heavier. Goten was also occupied with his new girlfriend so it was out of the question for him to join. He just simply refused to believe that his mighty father could get in any trouble. Uub, however, couldn't join them cause some kind of disease struck his village, so he had to stay to help out with the help of Boo and Mr. Satan, who sent his finest doctors there to make an antidote. Finally, they asked Piccolo and Khitan to join them, who accepted. But two other persons wanted to go along with them as well: PAN AND XEVO. -Out of the question!-Videl shouted. -But mama...-Pan started-You always said that if you knew the past years where grandpa Goku has been gone too, that you'd let me find him and join him. And now, I actually know where he is, and I believe he's really in trouble, and he needs me this time. -Then let Piccolo and Khitan handle it along with Gohan and Trunks. And take even Xevo with you, who can hardly defend himself? This mission is not a childish game you know. -I'm not a child anymore. I'm already 15. -Just because you go to high school, doesn't mean you're an adult yet. -But I'm capable of handle more than any kid of my age. I'm more capable than even a normal adult. -This conversation ends now!-and her mother left the room. Xevo was hiding under the bed and heard everything, when he decided to crawl out. -Sorry, Xevo, but I guess we'll miss out all the fun this time.-Pan said sadly. -Do you really think that your grandpa is actually in danger? -I don't know. But I do have a bad feeling though. Nevertheless, I really wanted to go on this trip. I heard my father saying that planet is almost like "heaven." -Let me talk to Trunks! After a while... -Sorry, pal...-Trunks started-But this trip might be too dangerous for you two. -C'mon, Trunks! Have some faith in us...in me! You know that I too would die for an opportunity like this. Please, let us join you guys! -I would have agreed in other circumstances with pleasure, but this is not a trip anymore. This has become a mission to find out whatever happened to Goku, and if it's not too late, to save him, and his dad. -But I'm his granddaughter!-Pan cut in-Don't I have a matter to say? -Come now, Trunks!-Xevo continued-I promise that we'll be extra careful, a give you my word, as a scientist, I will not allow myself to get distracted and focus on the mission. Plus, now I too am able to fly, thanks to your flying shoes we made together. -But flying isn't everything you know.-Trunks replied-Hm...very well. I shall talk to Gohan and see what he has to say about this. But I'm not promising anything. -Thanks, Trunks! You're the best!-Pan said happily. -I have to say...you guys have really changed during your first year of high school. You are already acting like a couple of teenagers: anxious, selfish, adventurous, irrational...Brings back good memories when I was your age.-then he walked away. Both Pan and Xevo were smiling like little devils, who were happy for convincing someone to do as they please. Trunks did convince Gohan, who convinced his wife, to take those two with them instead of Piccolo and Phitan, the last one also being excited about going, before finding out he would not be going anymore: that's when he became super pissed at Pan and Xevo for taking his place. Few more days passed until the ship, and everyone else was ready for the big trip. They gathered at Bulma's lab, where the ship was, and everyone said good-bye to their loved ones. The trip itself to the planet would only take two weeks. But what will our heroes encounter on Earth 2.0 that not even Goku, Bardock nor Kibitoshin could handle? Are they and the planet really in danger? Is this the doing of the Saiyans? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! Episode 43: Sudden Attack On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Xevo and Pan managed to convince everyone, so they could join Trunks and Gohan on the trip to planet Earth 2.0. But how will this so-called "trip" turn out for our heroes? Will they be able to find Goku and the others? What secrets does the planet hide? Find out only by continuing reading the story... Two weeks have passed and now our heroes have finally arrived on Planet Earth 2.0. They landed in a swamp, and they were preparing to head out. -Hey, Xevo!-Trunks started-Did you put enough fuel in your shoes? -You bet!-Xevo answered. -Is everyone ready?-Gohan asked after a few moments and everyone nodded. They went outside the ship, Trunks pressed a button, and the ship became a capsule, which he put in his pocket. Everyone looked amazed at the surroundings, even Gohan, who has already been in a swamp on that planet before and everything looked the same, but for him, it still looked as if he saw it for the first time. -How will we ever going to find Goku and the others on this planet?-Trunks asked-Not only that it would be hard to find them on Earth, but here, everything is thrice as big. It's impossible without a trail or something. -We just have to ask the locals. Someone must have seen them.-Gohan responded. -And how many thousands different races and species does this planet have? -I never said it was going to be easy... -What if we ask the Saiyans?-Pan asked-I'm sure they're the ones behind all this. -Not likely. If they killed them, we ought to have sensed something. And it's not like them to kidnap either. Even if so, I'm sure they would have attacked us by now. -So what could have happened to them? -It's really hard to tell...-but right then, they were attacked by a huge, 60-meter-long, 3-meter-thick anaconda. Thanks to their awesome reflex, they escaped, even Xevo managed to, but even so, the attack was very sudden for even the mighty Saiyans. However, it wasn't over yet. The anaconda not only continued attacking them repeatedly, but it also had another head at the end of its tail, so now, two anacondas were attacking them. -It's almost big as Shenron.-Trunks managed to say-No wonder Goku, and the others have gone missing. They could have been eaten by one of these. -You're kidding me, right?-Gohan responded while avoiding the anacondas' attack-My father never could be killed that easily. Actually, he gets along with animals very well, even the ferocious ones. -Yeah, Trunks.-Pan cut in-Don't say crazy things like that. You're just being ridiculous! -Hey, where's Xevo?-Trunks asked. -Look, guys!-Xevo shouted way above them-Look at those giant dinosaurs!-and they all looked where he pointed, and there they were, enormous long-necked dinosaurs, called Apatosaurus, in groups, migrating and eating the leaves on the trees. -Look how big they've become!-Pan said amazed-They must be over 200 feet tall... -Of course...-Gohan started-They had to evolve and grow bigger as the trees did to be able to reach the leaves. -So it means they're herbivores, right?-Trunks asked. -Yea, they are. But the one behind you isn't. Trunks looked around frightened and he saw a T-Rex looking dinosaur behind him, which was anxious to eat him. Luckily, for Trunks, just then, the two anacondas attacked him, as he barely dodged them both, while the dinosaur grabbed them with his teeth and bit their head off. The dinosaur had plenty of meat to eat, so he left our heroes to escape, not that they couldn't have. -This place is way more dangerous than I expected.-Trunks said. -A perfect place for my father to train properly...-Gohan added. -Yeah well, he's crazy! -Trunks, don't act like a scaredy cat!-Pan said-Even Xevo is more brave than you are. And he doesn't even have powers like we do. -So, Gohan...-Xevo started-Where to? -I guess we could ask King Vegeta if he knows anything. Although, I doubt it will help. We might even get in trouble or cause it. If King Vegeta finds out that father's missing, and Gogeta's no more, he might order an attack. -So, we're playing a risky game here... -Yeah... Our heroes received a "warm" welcoming from the planet. What other perils await them? Will they find some answers or clues where Goku, and the others might be? Find out on the next thrilling episodes on Dragon Ball F! Episode 44: Pan, a Super Saiyan? Gohan, Trunks, Pan and Xevo have met many different races and species, and asked them if they saw any of their friends. Trunks had a holographic image with each one of them, but no one saw them. Meanwhile, Gohan was documenting the planet, but he couldn't focus much on that, cause he was starting to get more and more worried, as well as the others. They were flying through giant mountains, which were so tall, that they were literally reaching the sky. Gohan had a digital camera with him, and he was taking many pictures from different angles. He and the others saw many giant four-winged birds nesting on the top of the mountains, which seemed like it was in space. They were so busy watching the view, that they didn't notice the enormous cobwebs in front of them, so all four of them got stuck. The cobwebs were so strong and sticky, that not even the Saiyans could break free without transforming into SSJ2. Gohan and Trunks were free, however, Pan and Xevo were still stuck, and the giant spiders were already coming at them. Pan got so frightened, that she also transformed into a SSJ2, to Trunks' and Xevos' amaze. But her hair didn't turn golden, only her aura turned yellow with blazing lightning, which cut through the webs. -I didn't know she was that strong...-Trunks said still amazed. -She still hasn't fully learned to control her SSJ1 form, and her SSJ2 form is far from perfection. She's just like I was; she gets very strong when very scared or angry.-Gohan responded. -Yeah, but how come her hair doesn't change? -Maybe, because she's a girl. It's not like we had any female Super Saiyans in our family yet. Meanwhile, Pad freed Xevo, but the spiders' number was increasing rapidly, and they started to overwhelm our heroes. Trunks got so pissed off, that he even killed a few. -Trunks!-Gohan yelled angrily-What are you doing? -Sorry, Gohan, but spiders just BUG me, especially giant ones. Besides, it's either them or we. Luckily, for Trunks and the others, the giant spiders got attacked by some wolf-like creatures from behind. They walked and wore clothes an armor like humans did, but they had the shape, agility, strength and the other characteristics of a wolf. It was like a Fusion between a human and a wolf, which made them 10 times stronger of a normal human. They also seemed intelligent, cause they had a 2,5 meter electrified spear, with which they struck down many spiders. A few of them were courageous enough to attack the spiders with bare hands, and they even managed to finish them off too. In the end, the spiders retrieved and hid among the mountains, thus our heroes have been "saved" by the wolf creatures. -This race could have become a formidable opponent for the Saiyans and even for Frieza.-Gohan thought-Thank you very much for your help!-he said towards the creatures-We would be gunners by now, if it weren't for you guys. -What?!-Trunks asked confused. -Just trust me and play along!-Gohan whispered to him. -Well...-the leader of the pack started-You were just lucky that today we decided to hunt in this area. -You were quite amazing how you defeated them. We owe you our gratitude. -Stop mumbling and help us carry the prey back to our village! Today, we are having a feast, and you are most welcomed. There, you can tell us your story too. -No way I'm touching any of those things!-Trunks said disgusted. -This time, I agree with him.-Pan added. -Do you have a free capsule?-Gohan asked Trunks. -Sure, here.-so Trunks gave him one. -Everyone, listen to me! Please gather around all the dead spiders, and I shall put them in this capsule. The "human" wolves looked at him all amazed, but they obediently did what he told them to do and to their astonishment, their prey vanished in front of them, as if the capsule sucked it all in. -Are you telling me all of our prey is in that small thing?- the pack-leader asked. -Yep.-Gohan answered. -Amazing. It could definitely ease our prey transportation back to the village whenever we go hunting. -If you want, I would be more than happy to give this one to you, for...saving our lives back there. -Nah...I don't want my pack to become lazy all of a sudden. We're in constant training you know, and this planet is way better than ours was. Besides, I can see that you are good-hearted beings, so there's no need to repay us any way whatsoever. Come then, to our village! And so, our heroes joined the "human" wolf pack and headed to their village. But what other surprises await Gohan and his friends? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Episode 45: Finally, Some Clues! Trunks and the others were still heading to the village; it was pretty far away. However, Trunks was in deep thoughts. He never imagined Pan would be that strong. If she were a boy, by now he would have outmatched him in strength. Trunks wondered how strong his sister had gotten. And he also had a question towards Gohan: -Hey, Gohan! -Yes? -I was wondering...My father once told me that back when we fought Majin Boo, an old Kai released your full power and made you so strong, that you didn't even need to transform into a Super Saiyan. But a while ago, you did go Super Saiyan, and I heard that back on New Namek, you even transformed into a Super Saiyan 3. Mind giving me an explanation? -Well, it's quite simple, actually. I definitely haven't been training much the last ten years. I started to train less and less after defeating Cell when I was a kid, and after Boo's defeat, I really trained less. I guess, I just lost my potential, so I'm back to my normal self, without the power boost. -So that's why on Namek, you told me to tell your father that you were sorry for letting him down. You thought he expected more from you. -I guess so, although he never said that himself. -We're here.-the pack leader said. The so-called village was more of a town. It had small buildings, electricity, little factories, where the weapons were made, but it didn't have streets or road, nor cars, which meant that the wolves didn't need any vehicles. Instead, they had big campfires all over the place, which meant they spent most of their times outside. Even their leader admitted that the buildings were built more for the wolf cubs to sleep in. Most of the wolves slept outside, unless it was raining. They all sat down around a campfire, while the female wolves started butchering the spiders for roasting. -Do they actually want us to eat those things?-Trunks asked worried. -Unless, you have something else to eat.-the pack leader answered instead of Gohan. -Luckily, I do.-then Trunks took out a capsule, pushed the button and a big picnic basket popped out; he and Pan started serving themselves from the picnic basket, while Gohan and Xevo decided to give the roasted spiders a try. -So, travelers...What brings you to this side of land? -Actually, we're looking for three missing persons.-Gohan answered-Trunks, show them the holographic images!-which Trunks did-Have you by any chance seen them? -I remember those two.-the leader pointed at Goku and Bardock-They ate a whole spider, just the two of them. It takes at least 15 of us to eat one. I never saw someone having a big appetite like that. -When was the last time you saw them? -About a month ago. -And where they headed to?-Pan asked. -South-east -And have you seen this one too?-Gohan asked pointing at Kibitoshin's image. -Unfortunately, I can't remember him. I mean, we often come across many races in our hunting. They just can't seem to find their place on this planet. For untrained persons like you guys (Gohan and the others all made funny faces> -_- ), this planet would be really threatening. It has all sorts of dangerous animals, and they're big too. -Yeah, I guess Shepo really messed things up, when he created this planet.-Trunks added. -Actually, it is my fault.-Gohan responded-I wasn't careful enough when I made the wish. -Well, at least we have some clues. -It seems you guys know more than you are sharing.-the leader cut in-Care to tell us everything? Gohan decided to tell everything to the wolves. The wolves were quite amazed at the story and honored to actually meet the persons which revived them, and even created a planet for them. They were very ashamed for thinking they were weaklings. Our heroes spent the night there and in the morning, they head south-east in the hopes of finding Goku and the others. Gohan and Xevo took some roasted spider legs with them too. Join them next time too on Dragon Ball F! Episode 46: A Little Confusion and a New Evil Our heroes were heading south-east in the hopes of finding more clues to the whereabouts of Goku and the others. They saw a flock of giant Pterosaurs, and their number was great, so our heroes decided to land in the forrest, thinking it was safer. They were very precocious, and being in a dangerous and unfamiliar place, they decided to walk. There they saw many big insects and birds flying by. Luckily, for them, there weren't any 60 m anacondas:) They had to pick up the paste, if they wanted to reach the end of the forrest by sun-down. Suddenly, they felt two strong ki energies. They were nearby, so they walked slowly and silently. They spotted two figures on a tree, eating honey from a big honeycomb, as big as a house. Gohan and Trunks instantly recognized the two persons; they were Xaras's henchmen. Although, Gohan started thinking whether to attack them or not, Trunks, however, immediately transformed into SSJ2 and attacked them without hesitation. The henchmen didn't notice Trunks, so they were taken by surprise, Trunks managing to kick both of the tree. Then they saw the person who kicked them, that he had a familiar golden hair. They too were rather confused about the situation, but they didn't have time to think, cause Trunks was all over them. For a short while, Trunks was giving them more and more hits, until the henchmen decided to fight back. It was a fierce and equal battle, and it was anyone's guess, which would have been victorious, if Xaras hadn't shouted them to stop fighting. Gohan, Pan and Xevo came out from the bushes, and Xaras made eye contact with Gohan and they both smiled at each other. But suddenly, many bees of size of a basketball appeared out of nowhere, and they weren't happy. They attacked everyone, so our heroes had no choice than to fly out of there as fast as possible, because they didn't want to kill the bees; after all, it was they who were stealing their honey... -_- ...the henchmen anyway:D After escaping the bees and getting out of the forrest, they stopped in an open land to "catch their breathe." Xaras was very happy to see Gohan and vice versa. They both explained their situations: of how the henchmen swore loyalty to Xaras, and how Goku, Bardock and Kibitoshin have gone missing. -Sorry, Gohan.-Xaras started-I had no idea they were here; I wish I could have helped you. I shall keep an eye out for them, while we continue our journey around the planet. I wish we would have met in better circumstances, and that you could join us as well. Indeed, this planet in one of a kind and has many surprises. But the good news is, me and my people have begun sensing the presence of our Gods. In fact, one of our shamans/priests, whatever you call it, has been contacted by them, saying that from now on they shall protect the entire planet and everyone in it. However, they also warned us of a presence of a great evil that is on this planet. That's why, me and my henchmen, decided to travel around the planet to find this evil and destroy it. First, I thought it was Frieza's remaining henchmen, but they really pose no threat at all; in fact, most of them gave up serving Frieza and decided to become good. Then I thought it was the Saiyans, but the Gods told us that this evil was more dangerous than them. Plus, I heard that King Vegeta, and his remaining servants had done nothing wrong since Gogeta warned them. So be extra careful, you guys. If you thought that the animals were dangerous, then you haven't seen nothing yet. -This evil probably has to do with my fathers' and the others' disappearance.-Gohan said after a few moments. -Papa, I'm getting scared-Pan added. -You should be!-Trunks cut in-If Goku couldn't handle it, then what chance do we have? -Maybe you should teach Gohan the Fusion technique.-Xaras said. -It might not be a bad idea.-Gohan responded. What possible evil could be stronger than even the mighty Goku? Does Gohan and the others stand a chance against it? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jun 21 2012, 06:51 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Mar 31 2012, 08:14 PM Post #49 |
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Hi there. I would like you to know that tomorrow I shall be uploading a new episode of my fanfic. Also, next week, I shall show you guys my other DBZ related drawings that I made up until now. So, seeya soon and thanks for your support.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 1 2012, 07:39 AM Post #50 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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April Fool's Final Alternate Episode of DBF Pan, Trunks, Xevo and Gohan wandered off on the planet for 25 years and couldn't find a trace of Goku and the others. Nor the evil, which Xaras warned them about. In the end, Pan married Xevo, and they had a child named Goku. Trunks found himself an alien wife and made four alien children. Gohan however, had no choice, then to find himself to a girlfriend and continue his life there. Of course, Pan wasn't happy about her new mom, but she had no choice. In the end, they traveled back to Earth, only to find out it was in slaved by King Vegeta and the Saiyans. They had no choice, then to surrender. They met up with the others...well, what was left of them. All the Z fighters have been killed by the Saiyans, only Bulma, Bra, Chi-Chi, Ox-King, Master Roshi, Puar, Oolong, Yajirobe and his wife remained alive. The Dragon Balls were destroyed, along with Piccolo, Dende and Mr. Popo. It turned out that King Vegeta, along with Napitz, killed Goku and Bardock, and Kibitoshin died, eaten by the 60 m long anaconda. The Earthlings had no choice than to obey the Saiyans, and they lived rather peacefully among them. Of course, from time to time, the Saiyans went on a rampage and killed many of them. However, they let them to reproduce in order to kill their off springs, while the Z fighters watched hopelessly from Heaven. Goten and Trunks had no choice, then to become one of them, and soon Trunks even started to enjoy the killing. Pan and Xevo lived their life as best as they could, but even their kid was killed by the brutal tyrans. Many decades passed by, the Saiyans began reproducing with the Earthlings as well, and so a new race has been born: Kalrisians. They named the planet King Vegeta, and they continued sending little babies to other planets, but this time, they sent them in great numbers, not to destroy the planets, but rather than to conquer them, thus managing in only 1000 years to rule the Universe. Thus ends my story; I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. See ya later! Sayonara! Edited by Megasaiyan, May 16 2012, 01:48 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 5 2012, 05:50 PM Post #51 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 47: Violent Storm A few days have passed since Xaras warned Gohan and the others about a great evil hiding on the planet. Trunks started teaching Gohan the Fusion technique. During their travel towards east, they met several races and species, but this time, most of them recognized the holographic images, and they too pointed our heroes towards east, which meant they were getting closer to the truth. One day our heroes reached to a big city, filled with tall skyscrapers and modern technology. In this city lived the Tuffles, along with the Kanassans. Trunks and Xevo were very amazed how intelligent the Tuffles were, and in such a short time, only six months, they already built a city much evolved than any city on Earth. These two races combined made an excellent team, and they became so close, that they united themselves and became one race, called the Tsufurukans. The Tsufurukans were probably the most advanced race on the entire planet. The city itself was called Tsufurukan City, and it was filled with modern flying vehicles, bright holographic advertisements all over the city, the race even managed to domesticate many wild animals and made them their pets. Our heroes were immediately greeted by the city's leader, or rather mayor. He was a former Kanassan and in recognition for the race making him the leader/mayor of the city, he named himself Tsufurak. Gohan briefly explained who they were and what their mission was. Tsufurak admitted seeing Goku and Bardock not so long ago, as they visited the city and remained there for a few days. And he even recognized Kibitoshin as well, who was also looking for the two Saiyans. This definitely meant that our heroes were getting closer and closer to solving the mystery. Tsufurak also invited our heroes to stay there for the day, because their satellite picked up a violent storm approaching and only in the city would they be safe. The leader gave them a tour of the city, showing them how modern their technology was; one of the Tsufurukans even gave Xevo a laser gun, as a present, so powerful, it could cut through any metal. However, the city's biggest pride was a shield generator, which protected the whole city, when activated. It was a pure energy barrier, and it was so strong, not even the wind could get trough it. It was built to protect the city not from missiles or enemies, but rather than the violent storm, which occurred about every third month. But soon, Xevo and the others would see for themselves how dangerous and violent could Mother Nature become on that planet. The sky has been filled with dark clouds so fast, as if they were blown by a giant air conditioner. The wind's force began to increase rapidly too, until it got so strong, that even Gohan and Trunks could hardly manage to hold their ground and not being blown away. Luckily, the Tsufurukans, immediately activated the energy shield, before things could aggravate. And indeed, it would have, as it began constantly lightning, and the thunder was so loud, that it even caused small earthquakes. However, the lightning was even more terrifying, as it never stopped its activity. It was constantly reaching the ground and electrocuting every living being outside the shield. And the storm itself was just horrible. Gohan and the others never saw anything like it before. -And are you saying this violent storm occurs about every third month?-Gohan asked. -Yes, it has so far.-the mayor answered- This is our only third time seeing it ourselves. -I can't even imagine what would have happened to us if this shield wasn't protecting us.-Trunks added. -I can... What do you think happened to us the first time, when we didn't have the shield generator built yet. It was so devastating...Luckily, we found just in time a cave big enough to protect whatever was left of us. Unfortunately, many of us died that day, especially from the Tuffle race. -That's why their numbers are so poor. I've noticed that when we arrived here. Many Kanassans, but few Tuffles. -It's true. They were the most vulnerable of us. They truly suffered a great number that day. May Xas and Hiera rest their souls! -I see you've been acquainted with the new gods protecting this planet... -Indeed, we have. One day, a blue creature named Xaras, found us in the cave, still petrified of the events and scared of coming out of there. He gave us a unique crystal, sent by the gods, which is so powerful, that provides unlimited energy to the shield generator. He then asked us to build as many generators as possible for the entire planet's races, while the gods are providing the crystals. Currently, only half of the planet's inhabitants are protected by this dreadful storm, while the other half is still in great danger. The problem is, you can't exactly tell when the storm comes; you saw it for yourselves how fast it came; you hardly have time to seek shelter. We are lucky, cause we have a satellite dish, with which we can monitor it, but not many have this technology, so they're mostly unaware, unless they spot it in time somehow. Many have perished because of it, so I heard...-Pan noticed that her father was in deep thoughts and very sad. -Papa, no! Don't you dare blaming yourself! It's NOT your fault. It' just not! After a few moments, Gohan stared at his daughter, put his hand on her forehead and started smiling: -I know...I mean, things like this happen all the time on Earth too. There's really not much we can do against Mother Nature herself. Although, this shield generator might be the answer to our problems back at home too. Maybe we can build them on our planet too so we can save thousands of lives. I hope your gods will give us some crystals as well. -That's the spirit, papa! By the time they finished talking, the storm was already gone, the sky was clear and the sun was shining brightly. -Look, everyone!-Xevo shouted-It's already over! This storm is really something. It takes you by surprise, does a lot of damage, and only in a few minutes, it's already gone. -Incredible!-Trunks gasped amazed-And yet there isn't a single fire around. The storm is so strong, that it immediately puts it out. -Maybe...-Tsufurak started-After we're done building generators for every race, we can build a generator so big, that it will protect the entire planet. Or maybe we can accomplish making it to follow the storm and appear only where it strikes, but that's a bit far away. -That would be neat.-Pan said happily. -Never give up hope!-Gohan added. Our heroes would be dead by now, if they hadn't found and stayed in Tsufurukan City. You might even think that this storm represents the evil Xaras warned them about, but it's not. It's far worse and more sinister than that. But who or what is this great evil? Find out starting from the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 12:41 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 14 2012, 02:20 PM Post #52 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Hi there, my fellow Dragon Ball fans! Man, lately I have been sooo busy writing specials, that I nearly forgot about my Dragon Ball Finale series. Just kidding:)) I really enjoyed writing these specials, even though the last one may be quite unusual, but nevertheless, I don't regret writing it as well. Hopefully, I won't have any more inspirations like this or any other than regarding my DBF fanfic. I should really start concentrating on that one. Boy, Xevo and the others must be really bored right now:)) Or maybe they're preparing themselves for confronting the great evil that Xaras warned them about. They really should, if they want to make it out alive. Anyway, sorry for making you wait for so long for a new DBF episode. However, I really hope you enjoyed the specials while you were waiting. So, let the story continue..._...Well, tomorrow, cause today I'm tired:)) (everyone fells upside down). See Ya!!! Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 01:03 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 19 2012, 08:27 PM Post #53 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 48: The True Evil Is Here! Beware! On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Gohan and the others discovered a new threat on Planet Gogeta, Mother Nature itself, which by now killed many thousands of souls. However, even a greater threat exists, which our heroes will soon discover. Our heroes arrived in the land of the "good" Saiyans. There, they were greeted with precaution, as the Saiyans immediately recognized that Gohan, Trunks and Pan were one of their kind and feared that they might have been sent by King Vegeta to either persuade them to reconsider and join him or cause trouble. Gohan immediately filled them in, so avoiding any unnecessary fight and calming their spirits. They too, claimed to see Goku and Bardock about a month ago and Kibitoshin soon after, which meant that whatever made them disappear like that was very close by, although none of them sensed anything unusual, no evil ki, no nothing. But just to be on the safer side, Gohan told Pan and Xevo to wait for him and Trunks in the village, until they go to investigate and come back. Pan and Xevo, of course, didn't want to be left behind, but in the end, they had no choice, then to agree. Almost two weeks have passed since they left, while Pan and Xevo started to be really worried. -So...-Pan started towards a young local female Saiyan-Are you saying nothing unusual happened since you moved here? -Well, as you probably might have seen, all sort of unusual things happen on this planet: giant animal attacks, violent storms...this planet is definitely challenging, danger is at your every footstep, and only the strongest survive, but nothing we couldn't handle, up until now. Of course, this shield generator provided by the Gods is most helpful. -So no one ever before has gone missing like that, right? -Well...yea Everyone who decided to start a new life and moved here, they're all here.-then suddenly Pan stood up. -C'mon, Xevo! We need to go and find papa and Trunks! -But if even they are in trouble, what can we do?-then both he and Pan looked at the female Saiyan. -Don't look at me! We might be better than the other Saiyans ruled by King Vegeta, but not that good. Unless they are any concern to us, we MIGHT help you, but since they're not, tough luck getting anyone's help. We have our hands full, even as it is, with all the crazy stuff happening around us. -Fine.-Pan responded nervously-Let's go, Xevo! -I know I'm not gonna like this!-Xevo whined. They both flew away from the village, leaving the local girl in thoughts. After a few days, they reached to a very dense forrest, filled with bushes so thick, that you could hardly see into the forrest, let alone enter it. Pan started sensing something out of the ordinary, so she and Xevo and no choice, then to land into the thick forrest and explore it by foot. They were spikes everywhere, which cut both Xevo and Pan numerous times, causing small bruises, but they barely seemed to notice them, while they were too scared of the upcoming danger. But little did they know, that they were already in danger since they got cut for the first time by the spikes, because they were filled with a very unusual poison, which caused realistic hallucinations and then sudden paralysis. Xevo was the first starting having hallucinations, while seeing the person, whom he always dreamed of meeting: -Doctor Briefs!-he shouted. -What?-Pan asked amazed. -It's Mr. Briefs! He's here...and alive. -Where? -Can't you see? Right in front of us?-but Pan saw an entirely different person in front of them. -Papa!-she shouted happily. -Uhm...Where?-Xevo asked wondered. -Right there.-then she started running up ahead, while Xevo felt that something wrong was happening to them. -Pan, wait!-he yelled, but it was too late. She was caught by a big, weird-looking tentacle, while she began screaming. After a few moments, more tentacles appeared out of nowhere, while Xevo just stood there, not knowing whether he was hallucinating again or was is all real. Pan immediately turned into SSJ1, and even managed to break free, but then she felt a sudden numbness on her entire body, while her strength was drifting away quickly. She somehow tried to fly away from the tentacles, but very soon, she returned to her normal Saiyan state, and her entire body paralyzed. She began falling, but the tentacles caught her and took her somewhere away, while Xevo was watching her hopelessly as his body paralyzed as well, and everything went black. Five hours later, Xevo managed to wake up, but he could still hardly move his body. He then remembered, what had happened to him and Pan, as tears began filling his eyes. Many questions were flowing in his head, like: What would he do now? Go back to the village and try to ask for help, even though the Saiyans will probably refuse him? Stay and try finding Pan by himself? But what can he do without any super powers? And why didn't the tentacles attack him as well? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 01:02 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 22 2012, 02:42 PM Post #54 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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The "Living" Tree Pan, Trapped in an Amnion Episode 49: Xevo to the Rescue! On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Trunks and Gohan have gone missing too, while Pan has been caught by some weird tentacles. Now, Xevo has been left alone with no special abilities what so ever. Can he solely save his friends? Find out today on Dragon Ball F! Xevo decided to go and try to find his friends by himself, although he knew that his chances were slim. He walked slowly in the dense forrest, avoiding getting cut by the spikes. However, that was very hard to accomplish, so he cut himself twice. He started seeing things again, things that weren't really there. He even saw his mother, who died when he was little from some kind of disease, but he tried focusing on his mission and not paying attention to them. However, the hallucinations weren't the only things slowing him down; soon he felt his legs becoming numb, but he did not paralyze, as there wasn't enough poison in his system, yet anyway. He saw many dead animal bodies lying on the ground, not knowing whether they were real or not. He walked about 20 miles, until he reached the middle of the forrest. Of course, he cut himself several more times by then, but still he managed not to give in and continued walking. As he reached the middle of the forrest, the spikes ended, so he decided to rest for a while, until his body recovered from the poison. Then he picked up the paste and headed deeper into the forrest, not knowing what he would do if he actually found his friends. But then, something got his attention, and it was BIG. Xevo found the trace to the weird tentacles, and they belonged to a 200 feet tall tree, if it actually was a tree. The branches were widely spread for about 100 meters and on the branches, they were many amnions (a thin, tough, membranous sac) filled with purple-pink liquid and...beings. Red veins were attached to the amnions, leading somewhere up to the top of the tree, but Xevo didn't mind looking there yet, as he was busy carefully looking through the amnions, thinking his friends were probably trapped in them as well. They were hundreds of them, many hideous creatures were inside them in a hunched position, Xevo not knowing whether they were ugly from the begin with, or were their lives sucked out of them. In the end, he finally saw them: Trunks, Gohan, Pan...even BARDOCK and GOKU. They too, were lying in a hunched position, unconscious and naked. Xevo's face turned red, especially seeing Pan naked like that, not that he saw any of her private parts though. Nevertheless, he was happy having been founding them. "Hurray!"-he yelled out loud, although someone was still missing: Kibitoshin. He looked again through the amnions, but still, Kibitoshin was nowhere to be found. "Is that a good thing or a bad thing?"-he asked himself wondered. He then started wondering, where those veins were coming from, so he looked further up on the top of the tree, only to see another bigger amnion, with a human naked body inside of it. He looked like a male human, with strong muscles, long black hair and...a Saiyan tale. 'What's going on here?"-he asked amazed. "Is that a real Saiyan inside it, or just a replica?" He looked closely and saw he had no genital, which meant he was not a real human, and probably not a real Saiyan either. "But what is he doing?" He then started concentrating on sensing his ki, which Pan thought him a few months ago. Although, he may not have the potential to learn to fly yet, but he learned that much, to sense ki energies. Then he felt it...a tremendous power was emanating from that thing, whatever it was. "It must be gathering everyone's ki energy in order to become the ultimate warrior. But for what purpose?"-he asked wondered. "Whatever it is, it can't be anything good. I sense a lot of evil from him too." Then something stroke him...A very bad feeling, so he rushed towards where Goku and Bardock were and started sensing their ki as well. And he was right: they had very little ki left in them, and their lives were fading away rapidly. He had to get them out of amnios fast, before it was too late. He started ripping the amnions with his bare hands, but they were too thick. "Now what?"-he wondered, then he remembered the powerful laser gun, which a Tsufurukan gave him not so long ago. He rapidly pulled it out, aimed at Bardock's amnion but under his body and started cutting trough it, but being careful, not to cut trough Bardock as well. Suddenly, the tentacles appeared out of nowhere, swinging madly from the pain, hitting Xevo in the head, causing him to faint. He fell on the branches, badly injuring himself, while the pain brought him back to his senses. He noticed, that the tentacles weren't after him anymore, which meant, they were only drawn to someone with a strong ki, like Pan for instance. He got so mad, that he started slicing them with his laser gun until none remain. Then he went back to Bardock's amnion, and sliced it up. The gelatine liquid started dripping out of it, while Bardock's body started to fall as well. Xevo flew after him, somehow catching him, but barely holding on. "This guy weights a tone!!!"-he whined, putting him faced down on the ground, not wanting to see his private part anymore. He then flew towards Goku, who was also very heavy. Trunks and Gohan, however, were somewhat lighter. It was Pan's turn next, and Xevo could not believe that he actually had to go trough this. This time, he actually wanted to hallucinate, but "unfortunately" for him, this was the real deal. He rapidly put her on his back, not wanting to see more than he had too. After reaching the ground, he put her faced down too, while he could not take his eyes off her smooth buttocks. "Concentrate, Xevo!"-he told himself. "You still have work to do." He then stood up and continued rescuing the other beings, but after a careful examination, he found out, indeed many of them were already dead. He saved about 20 species, and then he decided to destroy the "thing" on top of the tree, before he woke up. He aimed his gun towards it and fired... TO BE CONTINUED>>> Edited by Megasaiyan, May 24 2012, 10:29 AM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 23 2012, 05:38 PM Post #55 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 50: The It The laser beam struck the amnion with full power, but it did not manage to cut through. Xevo tried it countless times more, but he did not achieve his goal. But he did achieve something: he woke up the thing inside of the amnion, and it sure didn't look happy. It became enraged and burst out with an amazing display of black ki aura, which blew Xevo away. "Now I did it."- he said out loud, regretting he ever tried killing it. The thing was floating in midair, with an immensive black aura surrounding it. He looked rather absent-minded, as if it couldn't figure out who/where it was and what to do next. Xevo saw this an opportunity to get his friends and himself as far as possible from that place. Luckily, for him, the bodies were gathered in one place, so all he had to do is put them in a capsule, for the time being. But would the thing allow him to do that? The thing looked at Xevo very pissed off and attacked him immediately. -Where's a Senzu Bean when you need one?-he asked out loud, closing his eyes for the inevitable to happen; but when he opened his eyes again, he saw a familiar face which was standing between him and the thing-It's the Saiyan girl from the village.-he thought. -Quick!-she yelled-Get out of here while you still can! I'll deal with him.-then she attacked the thing instantly, laying a punch right on its face. -If only she could sense the power difference between them, then she wouldn't be so confident.-Xevo thought, then he went towards the gathered bodies, pulled out a box of DinoCaps, grabbed one and threw it on the ground. A medium-size house appeared, so Xevo started dragging the bodies inside. The girl seemed to be all over the half human/half Saiyan looking thing; she was laying punches after punches, while the thing just backed down. In Hell, Cell and the others were watching the fight between them as well, and they were quite astonished. -What the heck is that thing?-Cell asked-It actually gives me the creeps. -I know what it is...-Frieza started-I encountered it too, many years ago. Back then, of course, it wasn't as strong as now, since it hadn't found very strong victims to absorb. Back then, the Saiyans were already destroyed, and it mostly absorbed desperately anything it could find, meaning weaklings. Though, many of my men have also perished because of that thing. Back when I met it, it had a very animalic form, some sort of bear with an ogre face. It was much hideous than now. Now it seems, to look like more human, but 50 times stronger than then. He may very well be stronger than Gogeta himself. -Hm...Interesting and yet freaky. But what is its purpose? -He was more sinister then me, I'll give him that much credit. His purpose is not to rule the Universe, but to rather destroy it. And he will destroy everything in his path. By know, he must have Goku's Instant Transmission technique, so he will surely come to the Other Word as well, and he will destroy us all. The entire existence as we know it, will seize to exist, while he will recreate it as it desires, and become the supreme god. Even when I first met him, it was all babbling about that he's nor God, nor Satan, he's IT. -But what does that mean? -How should I know? All I know, that whatever he was, he definitely represented a threat to me, so I took the liberty and personally destroyed it. One thing's for sure though, we may not like it, but we'd better root for those blasted Saiyans to somehow destroy it for good, or we're all doomed. The young Saiyan girl was already exhausted from laying so many punches on that thing, but she thought her counterpart was also exhausted, and she was winning. She then looked at Xevo, who by now managed to put all the bodies in the house, then he pushed the button and BOOM; it disappeared into a capsule. Then she gathered all her strength for a final blow on that thing; she powered up, made a big white energy wave and threw it at it. It connected, causing a huge explosion, while Xevo was looking amazed at them: -I can't feel that thing's ki anymore.-he thought-Could she possibly have managed to destroy it? That can't be. But maybe she did, because he looked like he couldn't control nor his body, nor his power. He was like a new-born adult, not knowing a thing, so maybe she managed to destroy it just because of that. -Don't you ever dare to mess with a Saiyan like that, you freak!-the girl shouted, while the dust lifted and there wasn't any trace of it anymore.-That takes care of that.-then she landed where Xevo was-Are you ok? -Yea...thanks. What made you reconsider following us? -I just couldn't let a weak 1/4 Saiyan girl and a boy with no powers go into the unknown alone( -_- > if only she knew that Pan was 10 times stronger than her-Xevo thought). At least, we know, why the locals were disappearing like that. -But you said, no one has gone missing since you moved here... -Not from our race, of course. But we did hear rumors that many species disappeared without a trace, just like that. But with all the crazy things going on this planet, who could have blamed them. But at least now we found the reason of their disappearance, and I managed to kill it. -Yeah, and thanks again for saving me. But how long were you watching me, anyway? -Not long...well, since you pretty much got here and single handedly fought that "tree." I must say, I'm pretty amazed how much you lasted. You Earthlings are definitely more than meets the eye. -Yeah, and I almost paid the ultimate price for demonstrating you that ^_0 -It was worth it ![]() -Now, quick! We have to get back to the village and find a way to cure everyone! Especially, Bardock and Goku. -But what about this place? We can't just leave things like this. That tree looking thing might just make another freak like that. -Do you have enough power to destroy it? -You Betcha.- then she made another big white energy wave and blasted the "tree" to dust. -And after we manage to awake the others, I shall ask Goku to destroy this whole spiky forrest. Now let's go!-and they both flew out of the forrest and headed towards the village. Back in Hell... -So Frieza, do you think it's already over?-Cell asked-Are we safe? -I hardly doubt it. That thing may not have been able to control his power yet, but I'm sure he couldn't be destroyed that easily. I bet he's still out there, somehow recovering, and after he learns to control his strength, he's gonna get us all. SO STAY TUNED AND DON'T MISS THE NEXT EXCITING SAGA OF DRAGON BALL FINALE: MEGASAIYAN SAGA! -Uhm...Frieza, who are you talking to? :)) Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 01:44 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | Apr 29 2012, 09:55 PM Post #56 |
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Episode 51: Love at First Sight? She opened her eyes or did she? She couldn't tell because she was surrounded by total darkness. Was she dead? If so, this is not the way, she imagined Hell would be like...nothingness. But why would she be in Hell in the first place? She never did anything wrong, and she never hurt anyone either. She tried to move her body, but she couldn't as if she had none to begin with. She could not move, see, hear, talk, smell, breathe...only think. It had to be a nightmare, or was it? Xevo and the Saiyan girl hurried back to the village as quickly as possible to somehow find a way to heal the Goku and the others. They landed near the village, and as they landed, Xevo immediately took out the capsule, pushed the button and the house instantly appeared. Suddenly, a bright light appeared out of nowhere, which made her eyes hurt and even tears appear. Slowly, her eyes got used to the sudden light, and she realised that she was ALIVE. She found herself in a house, surrounded by bodies. To her amaze, they were all naked, even her papa and Trunks...and even her grandpa Goku and great grandpa Bardock. She was very confused, but happy too, while the door opened, and she saw another familiar face: -Xevo!-she yelled, rushing towards him, and giving him a big hug. -Pan...-Xevo managed to say-I'm glad to see you, but... -Xevo, what happened? Are we alive? -Yes, we are, but... -What happened to me? I remember being dragged somewhere by some weird tentacles. -Yes, you were, and I somehow saved you, but... -And you even found and rescued my grandpa and his dad. -Yea, but... -But where's Kibitoshin? -Pan, you should REALLY know something first. -What is it, Xevo, my hero? -You're not wearing any...clothes. -WHAT?!-then she looked at her naked body-AAAH!!! GET OUT! GET OUT! GET OUT!-she pushed Xevo out and slammed the door. -Is that your girlfriend or something?-the Saiyan girl asked. -Sort of...-Xevo answered blushed. Pan searched for some clothes in the wardrobes and put them on in a hurry, because she was disgusted of being surrounded by naked bodies. After that, she ran outside: -Xevo!-she started-Will you please go and put some clothes on them too? I just can't stand them lying naked like that. -Why should I be the one dressing them up? I was the one who had to carry them in there in the first place. I too hate seeing naked body parts. -You get your butt in there this instance! -Is this what I get for saving your lives? -NOW!!! -I'll do it.-the Saiyan girl volunteered. -Really?-Xevo asked amazed. -Will you?-Pan also asked. -No sweat.-then the Saiyan girl entered the house, and closed the door behind her. First, she decided to dress up the weird-looking creatures, as they looked rather hideous. Then, she started dressing up Bardock, Gohan, Goku...and Trunks. But as she reached him, her eyes widened, and she just stared at him. She carefully started to examine him, and she found him very cute in every way. Her heart began pounding very fast as she began sweating. It was her first time experiencing such sensations towards someone, and she just couldn't explain why. However, she enjoyed it. He was the handsomest boy she ever saw, and she did see many, because most of the Saiyans had a very attractive feature, even considered so by many other species and races. The girl was literally crazy about Trunks's purple hair. She could not resist anymore, so she kissed him... TO BE CONTINUED>>> Episode 52: Kibitoshin, Alive? This was her first kiss ever, and even though the circumstances were very odd, she had no regrets doing so, while she very much enjoyed it. Meanwhile, she opened her eyes and saw that he had stunning blue eyes, which mesmerized her, as she continued kissing him. "What?! Blue eyes? But that would mean..."-she took another look at him, and realized that his eyes were indeed open, watching her kissing him. That scared the crap out of her, and she immediately stood up. She was watching him in horror, while he was watching her back. But she realized, he wasn't quite himself; his eyes were open, but clearly, his mind was still unconscious. She hit him in the head, just to be sure, then she rapidly put some clothes on him too, and hurried outside, to avoid any suspicions by the others. -Gee, we really appreciate what you just did for us.-Pan started-Thank you very much...Uhm... -Mizuna (japanese mustard).-the Saiyan girl added. -Thank you then, Mizuna. -By the way, how old are you?-Xevo asked. -19.-she responded irritated, cause she did not like when people asked questions about her, so she immediately changed the subject-So, now what? -We need to find either Xaras or Kibitoshin, to heal the others, especially Bardock and Goku, as soon as possible. -Yeah, I noticed their life force is fading away rapidly. And some other creatures are dying too. -I wish we still had some Senzu Beans right now. I couldn't find your clothes either, Pan; any of them. That monster must have digested them or something. -May I be of some assistance to you?-a voice said behind them: it was an old short man standing behind them with a long black beard and a walking stick in his left hand. -Who are you?-Pan asked. -He's the oldest Saiyan alive.-Mizuna responded. -Greetings!-the old man started-My name is Tomo Oshi (derived from "Tomoro Koshi" = "corn" in Japanese). I came to tell you that I remembered something about the purple-skinned man you are looking for. A few weeks ago, I heard a rumour, that there's a village nearby, about 500 miles south-west. One day, the inhabitants found a purple-skinned man lying unconscious in a forrest, so they took him to their home in order to heal him. Unfortunately, his disease requires a special venom, which they alone can't procure, so all they can do is to ease his pain, as he slowly dies. Sorry for not knowing all the details, as I intend to easily forget things. I hope that this information was very useful for you guys. -You have no idea, gramps! Thanks a lot!-Pan responded happily. Come, Xevo! Let's hurry and find Kibitoshin! -Wait, Pan!-Xevo said. -Why, what's the problem? -If Kibitoshin is dying, then he too will require healing. Mizuna, will you please head north and search for Xaras, the blue-skinned creature, who provided your race the special crystal? -Yea, sure. -Great, then. And after you find him, tell him to locate Pan's ki signature and come immediately to the other village. We'll take the bodies with us as well. -Ok, but under one condition... -What's that?-both Xevo and Pan asked wondered. -Tell me the name of that purple-haired friend of yours inside the house! -You mean, Trunks?-Pan asked. -Trunks, huh? After he and everyone else is healed, I want you to convince him to go out on a date with me! Understood?-she asked rather blushful. -Wow, do you actually like him? That's amazing! -See you soon!-Mizuna yelled, then she flew away quickly, thinking the situation was becoming very awkward. -I can't believe that someone actually likes Trunks. -If he accepts her, that is...-Xevo added (-_-) -You're just jealous that she likes him and not you. -But I thought, that...you and me... -Just because you saw me naked, doesn't mean that we're more than friends.-Pan teased him. -But... -Come on, Xevo! Take the DynoCap and let's go! Kibitoshin's life is in danger. -Ok. Thanks again, gramps!-Xevo shouted, while he pushed a button on the house, which turned back into a capsule, which Xevo put in his pocket and flew after Pan. -Good luck, my children!-Tomo Oshi yelled. What other perils await Pan and Xevo? Is Kibitoshin still alive? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F! Mizuna Edited by Megasaiyan, May 13 2012, 02:05 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | May 11 2012, 05:23 PM Post #57 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Very Important Announcment Fellow DBF fans! Before I post a new episode of my fanfic, I would like to add some explanations of some things regarding my fanfic, which you should read before reading any further episodes. Also, I decided to revise all of my previous episodes again to make some improvements and correct any errors I might have done, including grammar and spelling errors. Don't worry, I won't make changes to the story, but I will add some explanations where it's needed in order for future readers to understand my fanfic properly; and for those who by now already read my fanfic, I will add the explanations here as well, so they wouldn't have to re-read it all again. This will take some while, so my new episodes will be delayed until I finish revising. So, here we go... As you may know, there are many differences between the anime and the manga, and there are many fillers as well (for example, in the manga, Hell isn't shown at all, and even Pikkon himself is just a filler character). I could make a big list of examples, not to mention, a bigger list of plot holes, but for that, you will have to do the research for yourself, as I'm here to talk mainly about my fanfic. Most of DBZ fans watched the anime (like myself), instead of reading the manga, which is why I will also include the fillers in my fanfic and follow the story as shown in the anime. Here's a good question: when Cell ended up in Hell, how come he didn't just use the Instant Transmission in the first place to get out of there? Best answer found on the Web: "Because when you're in Hell, you don't retain your physical body, only your spirit, so you're a lot weaker." That would explain why did Goku and Pikkon beat the bad guys so easily after the Cell Games Saga. But in my fanfic, they actually train to become stronger, so when they're bought back to life, their power increases a lot. Although neither in the anime, nor in the manga, it is ever explained why Goku and Vegeta never visited their dead fathers, in fact, they might have, but never been shown. Well, in my version of the story, King Yemma placed the Saiyans nor in Heaven, nor in Hell, but rather created them a planet similar to Planet Vegeta on the Other Word, so they could continue their training forever. There, they could also see what was going on in the living world. These explanations will be also added in episodes 19 and 34. Recently, I've been asked by a new fan of my fanfic, that how come the Z Fighters could make another wish on the same day, after they defeated the villains on New Namek? Shouldn't the balls have turned to stones and remained that way (the Namekian balls 130 days, while the Earth's balls a year)? Indeed, I forgot to mention that, after Moori and Dende made both set of the Dragon Balls more powerful, they also made that now they could summon the dragons at anytime, whenever the balls were gathered. I also added this explanation in episode 16. And although I said, I won't modify the story itself, I still made some modifications in the same episode. Here's a quote taken from Shepo: "It will take seven years for the Dragon Balls to fully recover. But still, you will be able to summon Shenron and Porunga separately, but during seven years you will only be able to summon them once a year. Also, their wish granting powers will have limits, until the seven years are up. Although, the Dragon Balls won't turn into stones, the stars on them will turn black, indicating they are inactive." So I changed the years from 77 to 7, and 7 to 1. It is Dragon Ball after all, so the Dragon Balls and the dragons should have more roles, don't you agree? This was also suggested by a fan of mine (he knows who he is:). If you ever wondered, why did Gohan suddenly turned into a Super Saiyan in episode 28, well the answer is quite simple: if you thought that he trained less after the Cell Games, then after Boo's defeat, he hardly trained at all; he was too preoccupied with his students in the university. So, he just simply lost his potential given by Elder Supreme Kai. Now, he can transform into a Super Saiyan again, thus being able to achieve Super Saiyan 3. It will also be explained later in episode 45 by him, when Trunks asks him the same thing. I also forgot to mention (which now I did in episode 28) that after Goku and Vegeta de-fuse again, they get their tails back again. Speaking of tails, I mistakenly made Mizuna's tail black, for some reason (I don't even know why myself:), which I will correct after I re-draw her. Oh, and by the way, Scratch, Dr. Brief's cat is still alive, if you ever wondered. Not that it has/had any importance, but maybe I will write a cameo appearance for him...and not just for him. I will be adding more cameo appearances of characters of whom you might have forgotten from both Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z. I am truly sorry if I have caused you confusion with all these additions, but I really do wish to make this story right. This last week, I've done nothing but thinking carefully about the plots of my story, of how to continue and end it right. I definitely thought it trough it, and now I have an approximate idea of things. I've done a lot of research on the Net, read many opinions, about the differences between the anime and manga, the plot holes that have been made, so I could end the whole Dragon Ball series once and for all a proper way. This also proves, that Akira made a lot of mistakes too, regarding the story and of how many contradictory things happen in the story/the characters say at one point. That's why it's so hard to make it right. But then again, Akira didn't write the series to be taken so seriously; he wrote it just for fun, and that's what I'm doing too, and you, the fans, should also take it more lightly. After all these said, I hope that you won't give up on me yet and continue supporting me. And if you notice anything else wrong with my story, please notify me as fastest you can, so I may be able to explain, or if it's necessary, correct it. It will definitely be a long journey until I finish it. I might even recommend you guys to check in only after two years, after it's completely done, but that's your decision entirely. Now I am ready to continue writing my fanfic, and the episodes will arrive very shortly, within a few days. I have already written episode 53 and even episode 54, mostly. Wish me luck and enjoy! |
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| Megasaiyan | May 13 2012, 03:27 PM Post #58 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 53: The Megasaiyan On Earth, Chi-Chi visited Bulma, who was sitting on the balcony, looking worried up in the sky: -Hello there, Bulma!-Chi-chi greeted her-Why the long face? -I haven't heard from the boys since they left. I'm really starting to worry about them, that they might be in a terrible danger. -Don't worry, Bulma! I'm sure they'll be fine. Trunks and Gohan are definitely the brains in our family. I'm sure they will find a way to take care of whatever Goku failed to. -Aren't you worried at all? -I pretty much have gotten used to not to worry whenever something like this comes up; they always find trouble and leave me alone. They just can't stay away from danger; or danger away from them.-they both laughed. -I never imagined that one day you'd be the one comforting me for a change. -Either way, it's Pan whom I really worry about. She always rushes into things without thinking first, just like Goku. Luckily, Xevo seems to be the opposite of her, so hopefully he'll keep her out of trouble. -Do you think those two will have a future together? -It's hard to tell at their age, especially with teenagers these days. Who knows what things are going on their head? I had enough trouble with Gohan when he was only a kid. Luckily, he matured by the age of 8. Although, that might be due to the fact that he had quite a traumatizing childhood, and after Goku died for good, he just became more serious. -Yeah, Gohan definitely had a though childhood; I mean he was given the task to save the world when he was only five. Trunks and Goten had it rough too, fighting Boo and all, but not that rough. Luckily, Pan, Marron, Khitan, Bra...They had a more peaceful life; up until recently anyway. -Speaking of Khitan and Bra...I heard that they started to hang out together a lot lately. -Yea, that's true. Khitan seems like a nice boy, don't you think? -Yeah, but what did Vegeta say about him? -Nothing, actually. That guy is ALWAYS too busy training. Like Goku, that's the only thing he ever thinks of. I never should have built him that heavy outfit in the first place. Sometimes I wonder, if he ever thinks and cares about us anymore. But little did Bulma know, that Vegeta was not training as she thought he would be. He was actually heading to the city, on a secret "mission." On Planet Gogeta, we see a figure hiding in a dark cave. He slowly walks out of it, revealing his identity: it was none other than It, alive and well. It was looking around, trying to remember everything that has happened to it up until know. It had flashbacks, when in another life time, it had a whole different body and much lesser strength, thus it was killed by a creature who called himself Lord Frieza. It then remembers standing in front of a giant desk, where a pink skinned, black-bearded ogre was sitting. The thing remembers the ogre saying that it will be sentenced to spend all eternity in Hell, but he will also take It's mutated form away and transform it back to its original form, a tree looking thing, sealed away in total darkness for eternity, where it could never hurt anyone again. It seemed that It spent an eternity there, but it has only been about 40 years, as it was also revived along with every victim of Frieza's and Co. Gohan thought that all of Frieza's victims were innocent and deserved a second chance, but Frieza destroyed evil forces as well, other than himself, and this monstrosity was by far the strongest and most dangerous of them all. It also remembered suddenly finding itself on a new planet, noticing it was somehow alive again. The thing immediately chooses its ground and takes root, making spiky poisonous bushes stretching miles away. All It had to do was to wait for its victims to wonder nearby, and at the right opportunity, take them down. It didn't take long, for It's first preys to come along. Hundreds of animals fell victims to It's poisonous bushes, but those were only for its appetite, as It was really searching and lurking for any beings that had ki energies, for it to steal, in the end, forming a great and strong warrior. Months passed by, it trapped over one hundred different species, but their ki energies were very small, so it could only gather a very small fraction of that it desired. And It desired a lot more, in order to become the ultimate warrior. But after five months of being unsuccessful, It finally found two very strong warriors, or rather the warriors found it, who were flying by, unaware of the danger they were in. The two warriors had black spiky hairs and monkey looking tales, but their power level was unbelievably formidable. -Whaaah! After all this time, I still haven't gotten used to have a tail again.-Goku shouted. -I wouldn't recommend cutting it down. You might lose a big amount of strength, if you did.-Bardock responded. -Nah, don't worry. Luckily, I won't have to worry seeing a full moon on Earth anymore, since Piccolo destroyed it many years ago. Suddenly, they noticed that many small flying spikes were heading they're way at an incredible speed, as if someone or something threw them on purpose. They couldn't dodge them, so they raised a ki barrier, but to their amaze, the spikes went trough them like butter. It hadn't been long until they started hallucinating things. Bardock started seeing his home planet, which Frieza destroyed years ago, while Goku saw his grandpa Gohan alive again. They soon paralyzed and fall into It's tentacles, it making an amnion around them and hang them on the branches of the "tree." Unfortunately, for It, the ki absorption process was very slow, and it would take more than a month, but it wasn't in any hurry. However, after a month, another two very strong warriors were headed Its way, none other than Trunks and Gohan. Although, they managed to sense It's big power level and the evil within it, they too have fallen like their predecessors. It was more than happy to find not just one, but four very strong warriors to absorb their energy. And yet, another one appeared shortly after the last ones, as if It hit the jackpot or something. But soon, someone would disturb It's plans, and actually started to ruin them. It never faced someone, which had no power level what so ever and could be such a treat to it. The tentacles alone weren't enough for him, so It had no choice then to wake up, and personally take care of the threat. But It didn't realise that it never had a tremendous power like that before, and it also had a different form than its previous one, so it had a lot to get used to. And it was also overwhelmed by another person, a Saiyan girl, who almost even destroyed it. After remembering all this, It raised its right hand, made a black energy ball and began to smile: -I am now a Megasaiyan.-it started-I will destroy every living and non-living thing in the Universe. I am the Omega, the end of everything. After I'm finished destroying the Universe, I shall kill myself too, thus existence will seize to exist anymore. That is the only way to stop the battle between Good and Evil once and for all. This battle is forever pointless anyway, cause none shall ever really win, and there are only casualties. This will all have to end soon; that will be true freedom. This time, our heroes will have to face something they have never faced before. It is nor Good, nor Evil, but the End itself. Don't you dare miss the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F, when we find out what Vegeta is really up to! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jun 16 2012, 02:19 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | May 13 2012, 09:07 PM Post #59 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 54: Convince Me and You Shall Have Her! Satan City, at the fast-food where Marron was working...We see Marron, Goten, Kawai, Bra and Khitan hanging out and talking about various things. Marron had a 15-minute break, so she decided to spend it with her friends. -I sure wish that Pan and Xevo were here too.-Bra started. -Are you kidding?-Marron asked-While we're sitting here, they're having the adventure of their lives. -Don't remind me.-Khitan added-I should be there right now, instead of them. -Yes, but then I would have to kill you for leaving me alone like that.-Bra added madly. -But we weren't even seeing each other then. -So, are you guys a couple now?-Goten asked. -Well, not really... -What do you mean NOT REALLY?!-Bra asked furious. -Well, we never kissed or anything. -That should be private!!! -How cute, their first fight as a couple.-Kawai added while Goten and Maron were laughing. -Hey, boy!-a familiar voice shouted from behind them, who was none other than Vegeta, who pointed at Khitan. -Who, me?-Khitan asked amazed. -Yes, you. Come with me! I would like to have a word with you. -Dad, what are you up to?-Bra asked wondered. -Don't worry, Bra. We're just gonna have a man-to-man talk, that's all. -That should be interesting.-Goten added with a smirk. -Coming, Khitan?-Vegeta asked. -Yes, sir.-so he and Vegeta flew away. -Just don't hurt him, dad!-Bra yelled, which made Khitan even more worried. Vegeta and Khitan flew away from the city, and landed in a forrest nearby. -So, what was it that you wanted to talk about, Vegeta?-Khitan asked, but as a response, he received a punch in his stomach-AUCH! Now why did you do that for? -It's Mr. Vegeta to you, boy!-Vegeta responded-Now, attack me with all of your strength! -What?! -You heard me! I want you to attack me with all your power. Don't you dare hold back on me, or I WILL kill you. -But...but why? -You like my daughter, don't you? -Yea, so? -So, in order to receive my blessing, you will have to convince me that you are worthy of her, that you are strong enough to protect her if she's ever in danger. -It's not like we're getting married or anything. Besides, she might be even stronger than me, if she learned how to control her strength. -Yes, she might, but unfortunately, she's not interested in training and fighting, so it will be your duty to protect her at all cost. -But we barely started dating each other... -Yea, but something tells me it will last very long. Now, attack me before I do! -Fine, but no going super. -Actually, that is exactly how you'll have to defeat me; defeat me in my second Super Saiyan form and my daughter is all yours. -Are you kidding me?! I'm not that strong! -Tell you what. If you can hit me at least ten times, then I'll give you some more time to train. And in the meantime, you can also continue dating Bra. How does that sound? -I guess that's reasonable. -Shall we start then? -Let's get this over with!-so he powered up and an amazing white aura surrounded him, as his muscles grew ticker, while Vegeta also transformed into a SSJ2. While Pan and Xevo are on an important mission to find Kibitoshin and save his and many others' life, Khitan is also on an "important" mission to convince Vegeta that he deserves his daughter. Will he succeed? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jun 16 2012, 02:22 PM.
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| Megasaiyan | May 19 2012, 09:03 PM Post #60 |
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Osz Karoly Szilard
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Episode 55: Alive, but not Well Pan and Xevo have finally found the "village" the old Saiyan told them about. The village was actually a town, not as highly developed like Tsufurukan City, but it wasn't far behind. The inhabitants looked like humans, but also had animalistic features like pointy ears, yellowish skin, cat-like eyes and a tail. They were like a fusion between a human and a jaguar, both without the spots and without the very sharp senses. They wore regular clothes and seemed very peaceful, despite their animalistic appearance. After hearing Pan's and Xevo's story, they admitted that indeed they were looking after a purple-skinned man who was dying. The townsmen immediately took the kids to the dying person, and after seeing who it was, the kids were not only were happy, but also freaked out. At last, Kibitoshin has been also found, alive, but not well at all; he was literally nothing but skin and bones and at the edge of certain death. -What happened to him?-Xevo asked. -We found him about a month ago lying on the ground, unconscious, in a forrest nearby.-one of the townsman answered-Since then, he hasn't woken up at all, and as you can see, he's slowly dying. -But what's causing his slow death? -We believe he was accidentally bitten by a Korioid, a very dangerous bug, the size of an adult palm. It's poison paralyzed him as the bug laid its eggs inside of his body. Before crawling out, it left enough poison inside of his system for the eggs to have time to hatch. The larvas are also very poisonous and keep him paralyzed until they slowly undergo complete metamorphosis as they little by little devour him from the inside. -How horrible! -Oh, my gosh!-Pan shouted-So those things that are crawling and sticking out from underneath his skin are larvas? -Yes, they are.-the townsman answered. -But why don't you just cut them out?!-Xevo asked rather furious. -It's not that easy. At the slightest sense of danger, the larvas immediately release more poison that would kill him. We even tried laser surgery, but to no prevail. Not on him of course; quite a few of our kind have also perished, thanks to these bugs. They are widely spread in the forests nearby and often venture in the town, that's why we keep the shield up and running, most of the time. Of course, they're rather the least of our worries, as there are even greater treats on this planet. -Papa was wrong about this planet...-Pan started-This planet is not like Heaven, it's very much like Hell.-then a tear began flowing from her eyes. -No!-Xevo shouted-We can't just give up on him! We have to try! Isn't there any other way to save him, to kill the larvas from inside? -I'm afraid there's not enough time for that...-another townsman responded-All we could do is to feed him somehow, in order to prolong his life. It won't be long now until the larvas fully develop, becoming bugs, as they come out and kill him. -Please, tell us! -Not only it's already too late, but it's very dangerous too, almost impossible. And even if you do manage to get a hold of a drop of venom somehow, by now it will surely kill him cause he's to weaken. -Venom? -Yes. In order to kill the poisonous larvas in his system, you need another kind of poison from a very big snake. -How big? -VERY BIG; About 60 meters long. It is the largest snake on this planet, and it also has two heads. -Do you mean the 60-meter-long anaconda?!-Pan shouted amazed. -I see you've seen it by now. -And how do you know it would work?-Xevo asked. -The giant anacondas have been terrorizing us since we got on this planet. In order to protect ourselves and be prepared for any of their attack, we had to study their behaviour, reproducing, how they hunt...Once we even managed to get a sample of venom from one of their dead preys, they haven't eaten, and found out they are not as poisonous as they should be. Even we had snakes on our planet, but they were only a few feet tall, and compared to their venom, these anacondas' venom should be 100 times stronger, but they're not. The only logical explanation would be that they evolved to be so big, that they relied on their venom less, since now they can easily kill any prey they want, so it hasn't become so much effective during the years. -You guys keep saying these animals actually evolved from themselves!-Pan cut in madly-They haven't evolved on their own, they only would have IF 200 million earth years have passed; it was that stupid dragon, Shepo, who made them that way.-Xevo looked amazed at her, especially the townsmen. -Anyway...the townsman continued-One drop of their venom, in normal conditions, meaning if your friend weren't already so weakened, would be enough to kill the parasites and cure him. But as I said, it's too late and too dangerous to procure the venom from the snakes. Don't you think we would have tried by now? -Maybe it's dangerous for you guys, but for us, it will be a lot easier. As you could see, we can fly, and we also have unimaginable super strength that will be more than enough to take down one lousy snake. Well, at least one of us has... -You haven't told us yet, what proof do you have, that one drop of a venom would cure him?-Xevo asked. -Actually, we do have proof that it works. Meet my daughter, Leana!-and a middle-aged, beautiful, female doctor stood out from the crowd-She is the best doctor this town has, and it's she who came up with the "one-drop-venom" idea. Shortly after, she also has been bitten by a bug. It was then, when we thought to try out the venom sample, we procured earlier, on her, and it worked. With that small venom sample, we healed several others as well, but I repeat, they were given shortly after they were bitten and when their health was at maximum. -So, all we really have to do is to find an anaconda in time, get a drop of venom, come back here and hope that Xaras will come soon as well, so we could give Kibitoshin the venom while Xaras cures him.-Xevo said. -You mean that creature can cure others?-the townsman asked amazed-If only we knew, we would have sent someone to find him and bring him here by now. -Don't worry. You had enough worries keeping your race alive. We are grateful that you kept our friend alive this long too. Now, will you tell us where do these anacondas usually hang out? The one we met was very far away from here. From what you said, there are some around this place as well. Can you at least point us to the right direction? -Actually, we can do more than point you there; in fact, we can show you exactly were they are. We may have not been able to bring any of them down, since our weapons aren't efficient enough, as we could only scare them away, we did, however, managed to put tracking devices on them. Here, take my watch! This will help you find one with ease. If there's a slightest chance to save your friend's life, then it will be our pleasure to help out. -Thank you, very much!-Xevo said, while putting the watch on his wrist. -We'll be back as soon as possible.-Pan added-Please keep Kibitoshin alive until then! -We will do our best.-the townsman replied-Good luck, kids! May Xas and Hiera be with you! Will Pan and Xevo somehow manage to procure the poisonous cure for Kibitoshin in time? Or are they headed to their doom? Find out on the next thrilling episodes of Dragon Ball F! Edited by Megasaiyan, Jun 16 2012, 04:42 PM.
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