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Dragon Ball Finale; Didn't you like DBGT? Want to know how the story really ends? Then read my story and you won't regret it!
Topic Started: Feb 25 2012, 09:52 PM (11,399 Views)
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Episode 1: Peace and Harmony...But for How Long?


1o years have passed since Goku flew away with Uub to train him. Since then, many things have changed in our heroes' lives.
Although, Goku left his family in a rush, he still visited them once in a while, but in the last five years he hasn't shown up anymore, being occupied with the hard training and all. In the last five years, he went in a search to gather all the Dragon Balls along with Uub. They had some problems in their journey, but nothing that the strongest Saiyan in the Universe couldn't handle. After gathering the Dragon Balls, Goku took Uub to the Other World to train him properly. Finally, they continued training in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
Satan City hasn't changed much. Mr. Satan was still the champion of the world, at least that's what the people thought. Boo was but living with the world's champion and protected him when needed. Unfortunately, their beloved dog, Bee, passed away. Along with Bee, Master Roshi's turtle passed away, along with Mr. Brief, Bulma's father.
Meanwhile, the others continued living their lives. Bulma still ran the Capsule Corporation with the help of her son, Trunks. Trunks, however, didn't like this job much, but he wanted to help his mother out and please her right after his grandfather passed away. He much preferred training to work, often sparring with his father, Vegeta, and sometimes with his best friend, Goten. Gohan, however, didn't have much time for training, since he became a teacher in a university like his mother always wanted to. Even so, he and his wife, Videl, often put on their Saiyaman costumes and fought crime and made justice. Their daughter, Pan, was now 14 years old, and she was preparing to go to high school along with Bra. And because Bra was one year older than Pan, Bra skipped a year and stayed home, so she and Pan could apply together like best friends. They both applied at the Orange Star High School.
Yamcha and Puar went their separate ways from Bulma, and had never been seen or heard from since. Tien, however, has been married with Lunch since the Cell games, and now they have a 24-year-old son called Khitan Shan. Krillin is still living at the Kame house with his wife, Number 18, and their daughter, Marron, who's currently 23 years old, along with Master Roshi and Oolong. Roshi was still a perverted old man, and sometimes he spied Number 18 when she was taking a bath, but he has been caught many times by 18, and of course, clobbered. Yajirobe still lived with Korin, but things got a bit interesting in Korin's Tower since Yajirobe found himself a spoiled, fat girlfriend, and they got married. Her name is Miran and eventually they moved away. And last but not least, the Namekian alien, Piccolo, continued training and meditating alone.
Everything was going well for our heroes, but nothing lasts forever, not even peace, and soon they will have to face new challenges, fight old and new enemies to save the Earth and the Universe...
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 25 2012, 09:06 AM.
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Episode 2: First Day of High School for Pan and Bra


It was 6:45 in the morning. Suddenly, a bird-like clock started to yell:
-Rise and shine, Pan! Rise and shine! Wake up you sleepyhead or you’ll be late for school! Rise and shine, Pan! Rise and shine…BOOM!!!
Suddenly, Pan blast it with a little energy ball.
-Personal note…-she said to herself-Remind myself never keep Bra’s birthday presents; their annoying…
Once she was ready, she took of and flew towards the city. It was a cloudy morning in Satan City. Pan arrived at Orange Star High School where her father once graduated and landed carefully in the back the school, so no one could see her. She then walked in front of the school where Bra was waiting for her impatiently:
-Finally…-Bra started-What took you so long?
-Sorry, but I went to bed late last night, and I…
-Never mind, let’s go or we’ll be late on our first day of high school. Come on!
-Coming…-Pan said still being sleepy.
Their first class passed away very quickly. Until the end of the class Pan managed to wake up somehow. In the break, she and Bra met Marron in the hallway.
-Marron, what are you doing here?-Bra asked.
-Well, I did graduate here as well, you know. My mom decided that it's time for me to look for a job, so I was passing by and thought I should visit for old time's sake. I did many crazy things here...
-Yeah, tell me about it. I still can't believe the rebel you've become over the years. You were so nice back when we were kids.
-Yeah well, high school changes people. You'll see...So girls, what do you think?-Marron asked.
-It’s awesome! I never thought high school could be so exciting.
-And what about you, Pan?
-Yeah, it’s great…
-What’s with her?-Marron asked Bra.
-She’s still a bit sleepy.-Bra replied.
-So, how many handsome boys are in your class?-Marron asked.
-Well…-Bra started-To be exact, only one out of eleven.
-Only one?
-Yeah, the others are all weird looking and nerds.
-Wow, that’s too bad…
-Well, there is another boy whose kind of good-looking.-Pan added-I meant, he’s kind of cute.-then she blushed.
-Yeah right…-Bra said out loud-The boy with the glasses?! Like he’s the nerdiest of them all!
-He is not!-Pan yelled back.
-Whatever!
-So girls...-Marron cut in order to avoid any further tensions-Let me show you around, like where you can smoke without being caught or where you can hide out when you want to skip classes or…
-But Marron, we don’t smoke.-Pan said.
-And skip classes? You’re actually allowed to do that?-Bra asked.
-Well, not really, but that’s the fun of it, and sometimes it’s “healthy” too, if you know what I mean…very often the teachers give you too much homework and stuff to learn, that you feel your head is about to explode. It’s really stressful, and that's why skipping classes becomes so healthy.
-Well, I guess you have a point there.-Bra agreed.
-Now come on! The break won’t last forever, you know!
The break indeed ended rapidly, and second class started. It was physics. An old grumpy looking man entered the classroom. He didn’t say anything, he only started writing some equations, numbers and words on the blackboard. The students just looked at him amazed. After finishing writing on the blackboard, the man turned around and started:
-Hello, everyone! My name is Mr. Tao Kinto. I’ll be your physics teacher. I know that today is your first day of high school but in my opinion, why waste time, so I decided to start teaching you on this very day. And this will happen whether it’s a high school special day, or any holiday what so ever. I don't care even if the school is attacked by terrorists, or it's the end of the world. You'll be seeing me, even if I'm ill. So, starting with today, I’ll divide you in groups. I will choose for each of you, a working partner and your assign will be to prepare an essay or a work for every month together, so if you fail, you'll fail TOGETHER. You’ll be sitting with your partner during my class. So, your partner will be…-and he started to choose a partner for each student. When Pan heard who’s her partner is, she couldn’t believe her ears. It was none other than Xevo, the boy with the glasses whom Bra called the nerdiest boy from the class. Suddenly, Pan noticed that Xevo was already sitting next to her.
-Hi…-Xevo started-My name is Xevo…it seems we’ll be working to…together.-Xevo said shacking and being blushed.
-Hi…my name is Pan.-Pan said, also being blushed.
-Nice to meet you…Pan!
-Nice…to meet you too…
And with that they haven’t talked to each other anymore all day. A brand-new adventure awaits Pan, Bra, Marron and the new boy, Xevo...a teenager adventure. Find out more exactly on the next episode of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, Jun 7 2012, 04:57 PM.
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Episode 3: Help from Papa?



On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, high school started for Pan and Bra, and Pan met a boy named Xevo and both seemed to like each other, but they were to shy to say anything. Plus, they became work partners as well and will have to start making projects and working together, or they'll receive bad marks from physics. Will Pan find a way not to be shy anymore around Xevo and the other way around? Find out today on Dragon Ball F!
School day ended and now Pan was flying home alone. She refused Marron and Bra to hang out with them saying she wasn't feeling well. Chi-Chi and Videl were washing the dishes while talking about Goku and the others as well.
-So, are you mad at Goku for not visiting anymore and being away for so long?-Videl asked.
-No...-Chi-Chi started-I'm not mad at him. I'm used to not having him around. I know he loves us, his family, but we're kind of his second priority. His first priority is keeping the Earth safe from evil forces and bad guys. That's why he went to train that boy, Uub, because he knew that with a proper training that boy would become very strong, and afterwards, he can also become a protector of the Earth like the others, like Vegeta, Piccolo, our sons... First, I didn't understand why he left us AGAIN and back then I was really mad at him, but now I know that he's where he's supposed to be.
-Yeah...But Pan really misses him. I can see that, even though she doesn't want to talk about it. And I'm afraid to let her go to look for her grandfather wherever he is. I mean for all we know he could be on another planet. And she hates me for that...
-Don't worry, Videl. She doesn't hate you. She hates Goku for letting her alone and not visiting her anymore like he promised to. I just hope he has a good reason for not visiting us anymore, or I'll never cook him a meal for the rest of my life. And he likes my cooking more than...even me-they both laughed, as suddenly, Pan came in:
-Hi, mama, grand mama!
-Oh, hi Pan!-Videl greeted her-How was your first day of high school?
-It was pretty awesome, I guess. We have a really mean physics teacher; he lectured us on our first day. Can you believe that?
-Wow, he really does seem mean.-Chi-Chi added.
-So where are the others?
-Well, your father is somewhere in the forrest training with Goten and Trunks.-Videl responded.
-Cool, I'll go watch them. See ya!
-Wait, don't you want to eat first?-Videl asked, but by the time she finished, the door was already shut.
Gotenks was charged up to SSJ3 and attacked Gohan from back. Gohan, however, sensed him just in time to avoid his punch. Gohan teleported himself out of Gotenks's way above him and banged Gotenks in the head with both of his hands, and Gotenks fell on the ground.
-Ouch, that really hurt, you know!-Gotenks shouted.
-And what are you going to do about it?-Gohan asked with a smirk.
-I'll show you!-then Gotenks used his Super Ghost Kamikaze Attack and white ghosts came out of his mouth-Attack!!!-he yelled and all ten ghosts charged at Gohan.
Gohan tried to shoot them down with ki blasts, but he only managed to hit one of them. After that, he flew into the woods and tried to zig-zag them and shot more ki blasts, this time hitting more than one ghost. He kept shooting them until only one remained. The ghost was only several inches away from Gohan and Gohan couldn't shoot him nor teleporting from its way. Suddenly, a pink ki blast appeared out of nowhere, and it hit the ghost, causing the ghost to explode.
-Who was that?-Gohan thought but he had no time to answer that question cause Gotenks attacked him by surprise and punched him in the stomach, then kicked Gohan in the balls and banged him to the ground. He was preparing to shoot Gohan with a big energy wave, but then Pan came to the rescue and kicked Gotenks in the head, throwing him through a tree.
-Hey, that's not fair!-Gotenks said.
-Well, you had my papa out numbered. Do you think that's fair?-Pan asked with a smirk.
-Yeah but...-and then the Fusion wore off, and Goten and Trunks became two different persons once again.
-Nice job, Pan!-Gohan said eventually.
-Yeah but, that's cheating!-Goten said being pissed off.
-We would have beaten you Gohan if it weren't for her, and you know it!-Trunks added.
-Actually, you wouldn't have...-Gohan responded.
-What?!-Goten and Trunks asked altogether-How come?
-Well, first of all, you were holding back, you didn't treat me as your enemy. Secondly, you were fooling around as always, you're never serious.
-Well, that's Gotens fault; he's always fooling around, just like his father!-Trunks yelled being mad at Goten.
-Don't blame me! You wanted to tease him, not me!
-Well, I think Gohan is the non serious here. Plus his cheating!-Trunks said rapidly, being blushed.
-Yeah, you're right.-Goten rapidly agreed-Let's go, Trunks! Let's train with you're dad. I mean his always serious, it'll be great to train with him.-and they flew away as fast as possible, while Gohan and Pan looked at them confused.
-Well, that was weird.-Pan said after a few seconds.
-That sure was.-Gohan added-Anyway, thanks for rescuing me back there. I think that they really had me there. I guess I've gotten soft as well, not training as much as I should. Boy, my dad would be so disappointed if he were here.
-Anyway...-Pan cut in wanting to change the subject-I met a boy today at the high school, and I was wondering...
-Ah...Don't you think you should talk about this with your mother? I mean...
-No dad, I mean sure, she would give me tons of advices but from her point of view, and I want to know how a boy of my age thinks. Maybe you can tell me how was it when you first met mama, what emotions did you have, how did you act when you were near her, weren't you shy and stuff like that. I want to know what are boys made of so I wouldn't blush the next time I meet him.
-Ah...sure, why not?
As we leave Gohan telling her daughter what are boys made of we can only wonder will Pan be ready the following day to meet his new boyfriend, Xevo, again and not blush or will they be so shy that they won't even say a word to each other...again. Find out on the next episode of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:24 PM.
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Greetings Dragon Ball fans! I really hope that you like/ will like my fanfic, along with my drawings. Up until now I have 41 episodes written and two finished sagas, which means, now I'm working on the third saga. I plan to make up to 200 episodes which will be probably finished only next year. I hope I'll have your support. I will be uploading a new episode almost every day, depending how much you guys like it and want it. Here's how you can vote:

1 STAR = LAME

2 STARS = BORING

3 STARS = PRETTY GOOD

4 STARS = FUNNY

5 STARS = AWESOME

Also, starting with today ( 02.03.2012 ) I will be posting my images directly here and not in the FANART zone, so I won't be posting new images there anymore. Some images are not mine, I've found them on the Internet, but decided to use them in my series. Therefore, I will not take credit for them. My drawings are made with crayons and you will easily distinguish them. Most of the images' links posted on this site will be my own work and I will point them out too, which one is mine and which not. Please vote them on the hosted site!


P.S: Please, vote sincerely, even if it means giving me less stars! THANK YOU!
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I give it three out five stars, the grammar could use improvement, its decent though. The flow of it is kind of out of order same with the layout of things, but you're headed in a right direction :)
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Episode 4: Lies and More Lies

On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Pan asked her father some "advices" so she wouldn't blush the next time she meets Xevo but will these advices help? Find out today on Dragon Ball F!
After a long walk with her father, Pan went up in her room to think things clear:
-Why is this happening to me? This never happened to me before. Why do I blush around Xevo? Why? I guess my dad wasn't much of a help. Sure it was nice to hear how he and mama met and fell in love but how can I tell Xevo that I'm a freak with super powers with the ability of flying and shooting ki blasts? Not to mention I'm a lot stronger than any normal human. And why do I feel so weird when I'm with him? It's like my heart is about to explode, and I can't think clear...or say a word to him. Could this be love? Love at first-side? I wonder if he feels the same way...
On that night, Pan couldn't sleep well because of these questions. The morning came rapidly and Pan suddenly realised that someone knocked at her door:
-Pan, are you awake?-Videl asked-Hurry, or you'll be late for school, honey!-while Pan suddenly opened her eyes.
-Oh no!-she thought-I broke that stupid clock. I wonder what's the time?-and she looked at her watch, only to see it was already 7:41-Oh boy! I'd better hurry up or I'll be really late.
It was 7:52 when Pan left the house. She took off and burst through the clouds as fast as she could. When she reached the high school, she landed on its roof, so no one could see her, and reach to her classroom faster.
-Well, this is familiar.-she thought and ran down the stairs to her classroom.
It was 8:04 when she entered and luckily, the teacher wasn't in yet. She sat next to Bra, who asked her why was she late but the teacher came in, and everyone became silent. The day passed away quickly, and Pan hasn't even thought of Xevo because she was busy making new friends. So another day went by, then another and another, until Friday came when they had physics again. Xevo sat next to her:
-Hi!-he said.
-Hello. H...how you've been?
-Fine. Thanks. And you?
-Great.
Then silence. They didn't know what else to talk about, but Pan was determined to get to know him better so even though she was blushing, she continued:
-So, where do you live?
-Ah... Not far from here. Why?-and then he shot his mouth regretting that he ever asked that.
-Why?-Pan thought to herself-What kind of a question is that?
-So...-Xevo started after a few minutes-Where do you live?
-Oh... I live far from here, in fact, I'm not really from this city. I live at Mount Paozu.
-Wow, that is indeed very far. So, you need to get up really early in the morning to get here.
-Actually, I wake up at 7:00 and still have time for breakfast at home.
-So what, you fly here?-then Pan realised she made a huge mistake, but luckily, she had an idea.
-Well, actually I do. I mean, my parents are so rich that they gave me as a birthday present my personal mini flying jet.
-Cool. But, where do you land that thing?
-Ah...Well, on the high school's roof.
-Really? Does the principal allow such a thing? I didn't know that. I actually know a few rich kids, and the principal doesn't allow them to do such a thing, and they have jets too. Well, some of them...
-Well, the principal actually knows my father for a long time now. You see, my father graduated at this very same high school.
-Awesome. So like father, like daughter, eh?
-Yea.
Pan and Xevo didn't have much time to talk because the teacher came into the classroom, but after that, they continued talking in the breaks. Although, Pan wasn't exactly honest towards Xevo, but at least they made enough courage to talk to each other. But how long can she keep lying to him? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:46 PM.
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Bulma still ran the Capsule Corporation with the help of his son, Trunks. Trunks, however, didn't like this job much, but he wanted to help her mother


You need to fix this line. With the big fuss you made about it, not impressed.
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Episode 5: Xevo's Birthday


On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Pan and Xevo finally made guts to talk to each other, but Pan decided not to tell him the truth about herself having super strength and other super abilities, so she told him some "small" lies. What other lies will she tell Xevo and how long will it be until Xevo finds out the truth? Find out only on Dragon Ball F!
It was still Friday, and Pan was flying home from school. She was thinking about that boy, Xevo, whom she had a crush on. After physics, they started to get along and talked as much as they could during breaks. She found out many things about him; Xevo loves science, and he enjoys making experiments. His biggest dream is to become a great inventor just like Mr. Brief was, Xevo's biggest idol. He always wanted to meet Mr. Brief in person, but the guards never let him in because Mr. Brief was already sick and lying in bed, and he needed rest. In the end, he passed away and Xevo was really devastated when he found out because for him, Mr. Brief was like a mentor, a grandfather who he never met. And soon it was his birthday, so Pan had a great idea to surprise him.
One week later, she arranged a meeting with Xevo in a cafeteria. After eating some cake which Pan ordered and paid for, she blindfolded Xevo and took him somewhere. When Xevo took off the blindfold, he was very amazed. They were standing in front of the Brief's compound.
-Wow, Pan! I don't know what to say...
-No sweat! Let's go in so you could meet Bulma.
-But the guards won't let us in just like that; she's probably very busy...
-Don't worry about that! And the guards WILL let us in because I know Bulma personally.
-Really?
-Sure. Her family and my family know each other for a very long time. You have no idea what they've been through all these years. Plus, I can come and visit them whenever I want. Observe!-then she walked towards the guards and greeted them-Hi Mr. Murayaki, Takamoto!
-Hi, Pan!-the guards saluted.
-So, is Bulma home?
-Sure, come on in!-and they opened the gates.
-See?-and she turned towards Xevo.
-Wow, Pan, you're the best!-Xevo said, and Pan turned away blushed.-I can hardly wait to meet Ms. Bulma, the daughter of the greatest inventor ever lived. I bet she's as good as her father was.
But how will this meeting go? Not only, that Xevo is about to enter in one of the world's smartest family's house but one of the world's strongest family's house too. Find out what will happen on the next thrilling episode of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:30 PM.
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Episode 6: Meeting the Briefs


On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, it was Xevo's birthday and Pan wanted to surprise him by bringing him to meet his biggest idol’s daughter, Bulma. Pan doesn’t realize how wrong things could go; if she’s not careful, Xevo might find out the truth about her. Find out today what surprises await her and Xevo on Dragon Ball F!
The two guards let Pan and Xevo in the mansion.
-Wow, this place is huge and awesome!-Xevo said in wonder.
-Wait until you see the lab.-Pan responded, while suddenly, Mrs. Brief came out of nowhere.
-Wooh...Hi, Pan!-she greeted the kids-How are you? And who is this handsome boy?
-Hi, Mrs. Brief! I’m fine, thank you. This is my boy…classmate, Xevo.
-Hi! It’s nice to meet you, Mrs. Brief.-Xevo said.
-It is so nice to meet you too…you must be Pan’s boyfriend. You’re so cute together.-Pan and Xevo both blushed-Would you like some cookies? I backed them this morning…
-Some other time.-Pan cut in-Actually, we’re here to see Bulma. Can you tell us where she is?
-Where else? In her lab…She’s been working on a new invention. Unfortunately, she’s been losing her patience more and more often lately.
-Wow, I wonder what she's inventing this time?-Xevo asked wondering-Come on, Pan, let’s go find her. See you later, Mrs. Brief!-then he grabbed Pan's hands, who blushed, and they ran away.
-I sure hope so!-Mrs Brief yelled back-What nice kids.-she said to herself, then she walked away.
Xevo kept running and pulling Pan with him until suddenly he stopped.
-Mrs. Brief is really nice, but she talks too much, and sometimes she’s really annoying.-Xevo said after catching his breath.
-Yeah...-Pan added-But how do you know?
-I read a lot about her in a magazine called “Cancan.” I once read that they named her a “happy maniac."
They both laughed. Suddenly, they heard a big noise. It sounded like a bomb went off, and it was coming from a room near them. They ran over there to take a look. They wanted to open the door, but the door has been opened from the inside. It was Vegeta, who came out, and he had some bruises on his body, and his clothes were ripped off.
-Oh, hi Vegeta!-Pan said.
-Good day, M…Mr. Vegeta!-Xevo said frightened, while Vegeta looked at him with a serious face.
-And who might you be?-he asked.
-My name is Xevo, I’m…I’m Pan’s classmate. I came to see Mrs. Bulma, sir.
-Well, don’t let me stop you…-then he closed the door behind him and went towards the bathroom.
-Wow.-Pan thought to herself-This is Vegeta’s training room. This doesn’t look good. Come on, Xevo, let’s go!
-But…-Xevo started, but he didn’t have time to continue cause Pan pulled him with her.
They continued heading towards the lab. While walking trough the corridor, Pan was acting like a tour guide:
-So, this is Bra’s room and over there is Trunks’s room. He’s a genius too.-she said.
-I know. Do you think he would mind if we looked around?
-Don’t think so.
They both entered the room. The room didn’t look unusual; it looked like a usual room for a normal boy with a bed for two persons, a TV, a computer, a balcony which was opened, some posters on the wall with singers, rafts on the wall filled with books, a closet door and a DVD player connected to the TV.
-Nice room.-Xevo said.
-Look, here’s a photoalbum. Wanna see?
-Sure.
They both sat down on the bed and started looking at the album, when suddenly, Trunks flew inside through the opened balcony:
-Hey!-he yelled-What are you doing in my room?!
-Where did he come from?-Xevo shouted in wonder and being a bit scared.
"Well, this meeting is sure not going well."-Pan thought and by now she was regretting ever having the idea of bringing Xevo there, but it was already too late. How will this meeting end? Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:32 PM.
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Episode 7: Xevo Meets Bulma


On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Pan took Xevo to the Capsule Corporation, so Xevo could meet Bulma, but things didn't go that well as Pan hoped. Pan didn't realise that by bringing Xevo there might cause him to find out Pan's secret. Will her secret be revealed? Find out today on Dagon Ball F!
-Hi, Trunks!-Pan started fast-We were just looking at your album. Anyway, I would like you to meet Xevo, my new classmate.
-Hello!-Trunks greeted Xevo-Still, I don't quite like the idea of you coming into my room whenever you want. I do need my privacy, you know.
-Sure, no problem. Sorry, it will never happen again. Come on, Xevo! Let's go find Bulma!-however, Xevo was quite amazed by Trunks's entrance.
-What's with you?-Trunks asked Xevo.
-Dude, how did you fly in like that...without any ship?
-What do you mean? I flew in all by myself.
-What he means to ask...-Pan cut in-Is that with what did you fly in?
-Huh?!-Trunks looked at her with a strange look, then he figured it out-Oh...well...I...with my shoes...yea, flying shoes...
-Wow, can I try?-Xevo asked amazed.
-Ah…Sorry, pal. We’re still testing them, and it could be quite dangerous too, but let me make you a deal: if it passes the tests, I’ll send you the first pair before selling them. Ok?
-Awesome! Thanks!
-Good. Well, it was nice meeting you, but I need to take a shower. So, if you don’t mind…
-Oh…ok Let’s go, Xevo!-Pan said.
-Bye, Trunks. It was nice meeting you.-Xevo shouted.
-Bye.-Trunks yelled, then he closed the door rapidly-I really should put a lock on the door.-he said to himself.
-Wow, this day is so exciting!-Xevo said-And the best is yet to come.
-Yeah.-Pan agreed sarcastically.
They finally arrived at Bulma's laboratory. She was there alright.
-Hi, Bulma!-Pan said.
-Oh, hi Pan!
-Sorry for disturbing you, but I brought a huge fan to meet you.
-Don’t worry. I was thinking to take a break anyway. How’s high school?
-It’s cool, so far. I would like you to meet Xevo.
-Hello.-Xevo started-I’m Pan’s boyfriend.-then she suddenly blushed and so did Xevo too.
-Nice to meet you, Xevo. So, you're interested in science as well?
-Yea, I truly admire your work, and your fathers work too, very much. I’m sincerely sorry for your loss. He really was a good man.
-Yeah, he was… I’m glad that even teenagers like my work. That means I’m not aging.
-No way, I think you look great for your age, very beautiful; it seems you're not aging at all.-Bulma blushed-I just met the rest of your family. They seem great, especially your son, Trunks, who promised me a pair of flying shoes.
-Flying what?-Bulma asked amazed.
-So…-Pan cut in-What are you working on?
-Oh…I’m making an outfit for Vegeta that can weight 1000 times normal gravity, so he could train harder. But unfortunately, I can’t make it work, for some reason. But I’ll figure it out.
-1000 times normal gravity?!-Xevo asked amazed-How can anyone wear such heavy clothes? It would crush him immediately.- but Pan cut in again just in time.
-And that’s why Bulma can’t make it work because if she would, then Vegeta couldn’t wear it anyway.
-Not at first, but…Bulma started.
-Ok, Xevo. Let’s leave Bulma alone so she could work in peace.-and she started pulling Xevo with her.
-But there’s no need for you to leave…
-Bye, Bulma!-Pan yelled-I’ll tell mother you said hi to her!
-Goodbye, Mrs. Bulma!-Xevo yelled too-I hope we meet again and be able to talk more.
-But I’ve got time for that right now!-she yelled back, but before she could finish, the lab door closed-Guess not...-then she continued working like nothing happened.
On the way out, Mrs. Brief invited Xevo and Pan for some cookies again, but they refused her once again telling her they had to study. "On Friday?"-she asked, but they were long gone. Pan and Xevo were walking on the street, and the sun was setting down.
-Hmmm…-Xevo started-I wonder why Mrs. Bulma is making that outfit. I mean no one could possibly wear it. So why go to all the trouble inventing it?
-Well, you know inventors: they’ll invent anything, just so they could become famous and be the first to invent it.
-Yeah, but she’s already famous. Why waste time like that? I guess she is really aging…mentally at least Oh well, at least her son is a great inventor. Just imagine me flying to high school with those shoes.
-Yeah, imagine that!
That was a close one for Pan. She should really be more careful if she wants to keep her secret a secret from Xevo, but how long will she be able to lie to him? Find out on the next episodes of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:36 PM.
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Episode 8: The Incredible Heavy Outfit


On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Xevo finally met Bulma. He found out that she was working on an outfit that can weight 1000 times normal gravity for her husband to actually wear, so Xevo thought she was going nuts because what kind of person could possibly be able to wear that. Well, a normal person couldn't, but will a Saiyan be able to handle it? Find out today on Dragon Ball F!
Bulma was working really hard on that outfit. She hasn’t left the lab for days trying to grant her husband's wish. But after five days of not taking a bath, plus hardly sleeping and eating, she finally succeeded.
-Thank goodness it’s finally done!-she said to herself-I can’t even remember the last time I worked so much on only one thing. Boy, Vegeta will be happy when he hears that I’m finished. I can hardly wait to tell him but first things first: I REALLY need to take a bath. The things I sacrifice for that man. But he is my prince.
After a long bath, Bulma went to find Vegeta where else than in the training room. After she opened the door, Vegeta immediately noticed her and stopped from his training:
-Woman, is that bloody outfit ready yet? This room is so lame that I can’t take it anymore! You’ve spent five days in that lab, and I want results!-then suddenly Bulma’s face turned red.
-I sacrificed everything for you!!! My time, my health, my hygiene…I haven’t taken a bath for five days, and this is how you greet me?! You know what? I’m not talking to you until you apologise.-and Vegeta looked at her puzzled.
-Me, the prince of all Saiyans, apologise?-he thought-This is insane. On the other hand, for saying a stupid simple word I might have an outfit that will help me reach SSJ3 and maybe even become stronger than Kakkarott.-Sorry.-he finally said-So, is the outfit ready?
-That’s more like it and yes, the outfit’s ready.
-Finally. Give it to me!
-What did you say?
-What?!...Darn! PLEASE!
-Much better. Here, catch!-then she threw it towards him, and he caught it; then he threw down his old outfit and put on the new one.
-Cool, so how does it work?
-Well it’s quite simple. There are two names which activate and deactivate it. If you say, “Vegeta,” it activates, and it becomes super heavy, so be careful. And when you say, “Bulma,” it becomes light again.
-Why did you have to put those stupid names as a password?
-Why, what’s wrong with my name?!-Bulma asked becoming mad at Vegeta again.
-Never mind…so let’s test this baby!
-You might want to transform into a Super Saiyan first if you don’t want to be squashed alive.
-Don’t tell me what to do, woman! I know what I’m doing.
-I was only trying to help. Do what you want! I’ll go get some sleep, and I hope that when I get up, you’ll be still alive.
-Well, you don’t have to worry about that. I’m not the prince of all Saiyans for nothing, you know.-then he flew out of the room.
-When will he ever learn to listen to me?-Bulma asked herself.
Vegeta left Satan City and headed towards the waste land, when suddenly he met Goten and Trunks.
-Hey, Vegeta!-Goten yelled-Wanna train?-but as soon as he said the word “Vegeta,” Vegeta fell down from the sky to the ground making a big hole. Vegeta was faced down on the ground and couldn’t move a muscle. Goten and Trunks flew down where Vegeta crushed.
-Dad, are you ok?-Trunks asked.
-Grgrmbgrulgmra…-Vegeta grumbled.
-What did he say?-Trunks asked Goten.
-I think he said something about Bulma…-then suddenly Vegeta stood up.
-Holy *****, this outfit is heavy!-Vegeta yelled.
-What do you mean, Vegeta?-Goten asked, then suddenly Vegeta fell down to the ground again, making the hole deeper.
-Father are you alright? What’s going on?-Trunks asked.
-Grgrmbgrulgmra…-Vegeta grumbled.
-Did he say Bulma again?-Goten asked Trunks-then Vegeta stood up once again.
-You idiot!-Vegeta yelled at Goten-Stop saying my name, or you might kill me next time!
-What?-Goten asked amazed, then Vegeta took off and flew away from them rapidly.
-Please tell me that you know what just happened here!-Goten said to Trunks.
-I’m not sure, but I think it had something to do with the words “Vegeta” and “Bulma.”
-What’s that supposed to mean?
-Beats me.
Vegeta was very amazed at the result of his wife work:
-This outfit is incredible.-he thought-With this outfit, I can’t fail to become the strongest warrior in the Universe. Soon Kakkarott, I will become Super Saiyan 3 and after that I’ll become much stronger than you once again, like when we first met.
So we leave Vegeta dreaming of becoming the strongest of them all. But will his dream come true? Find out only by continuing reading Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:49 PM.
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Episode 9: A New Hero- Meet Bee 2


On the last episode of Dragon Ball F, Vegeta found out how heavy the outfit which Bulma made him really is, the hard and painful way. But now he's happier than ever knowing that with that outfit's help, he'll become stronger than Goku once again. Will his plan work or Goku have already gotten stronger since their last encounter on the tournament? If you want to find out, you know what to do!
Bulma took a long-awaited bath. After that, she went to the kitchen to have a snack. There she found Goten and Trunks, who we're already eating something:
-Hi, you two!-she said-Anything interesting happened to you two lately?
-Well, not really.-Goten answered-But something weird DID happen.
-What do you mean?
-Well, mom...-Trunks started-Father sure was acting weird today.
-How come?
-Well...-Goten continued-We were all flying and when a said his name he just simply fell on the ground really hard and when I said your name, he got up again.
-So, mom, what exactly is going on?-Trunks asked confused.
Bulma took a sandwich which her mom left the table, made a big smile and went to the living room. Meanwhile, elsewhere in Satan City, Mr. Satan was trying on a new outfit himself:
-So, Boo, what do you think? This will be my new outfit which I'll wear on the next World's Martial Arts Championship.-however, Boo's mind was elsewhere; Mr. Satan noticed that Boo was sad-What's the matter, Boo?
-Boo misses Bee.
-Yeah...I miss him too, boy, but this is how life is. Eventually, everyone dies.
-Will Mr. Satan also die?
-Well yea, hopefully not too soon.
-But Boo doesn't want to be alone! Boo doesn't want Mr. Satan to die! Boo doesn't want that! Boo doesn't want that!!!
-Calm down, Boo! Hey, I've got an idea. What do you say we buy a new pet for you so you wouldn't feel alone anymore.
-Yeah. Good idea. Boo buy all sorts of animals and take good care of them.
-Now hold on a minute, Boo! This house isn't a zoo you know, one animal is quite enough. Besides, it takes a lot of responsibility to take care of ONE animal alone. We don't need too many mouths to feed. Besides...-and before he even realised it, Boo was already gone-Darn it!-Mr Satan found Boo later at a famous pet shop-So Boo, did you find a pet which you like the most? Remember, you can only pick one.
-Yea. Boo pick that one.
-Which one?
-That one over there?-Mr Satan looked into the cage, but couldn't see anything-Here, let Boo show you!-then he took something out of the cage, but Mr. Satan still couldn't see anything.
Suddenly, a gas bomb appeared out of nowhere on the ground, then another one, and smoke came out of them. Luckily, Mr. Satan had a backpack with him, which was part of his "Fighting Crime and Saving the Day" equipment, and he pulled out a gas mask and put it on his face. However, Boo and the other customers, sellers and bodyguards, all fainted. Then Mr. Satan realised those were sleepy bombs. Two masked men came into the store.
-Hands up!-the first yelled.
-What the...Who the hell are you?-the second asked; the smoke cleared, and Mr. Satan took off his mask-Well, what do you know...If it isn't Mr. Satan, the worlds biggest champion.
-More like the worlds biggest phoney.-the second added-We both know you didn't kill Cell back in the old days; it was the other warriors. Too bad they're not here to save you again.
-And what are you creeps doing stealing from a pet store? Just how low can you get?-Mr Satan asked.
-For your information...-the first started-This pet store has the finest and rarest animals in the world. We can make good money by selling them on the black market. So any last words?
-Ah...Garu...-the other started.
-You idiot!!!-Garu yelled-You never use our real names while we're in a middle of a robbery. NEVER!!! Now because of you, I will have to kill him because he knows who I am.
-But wasn't that what were you going to do anyway?-the other asked while Garu blushed.
-Don't be a smart *****. What is it?
-Ah, there's something on me...
-What's on you? I can't see a thing.
-On my right shoulder....
-I still can't see anything!-but suddenly, a chameleon appeared on the other man's shoulder which freaked out.
-Ah!!! An iguana! Get it off meeee!!!
-Don't be such a baby!
With all the distraction, Mr. Satan ran towards the masked men and punched Garu in the face who fell on the other guy. The other guy grabbed the chameleon and quickly threw it towards Mr. Satan, who grabbed it.
-You son of a *****!-Garu said, and he tried to get his gun but Mr. Satan pulled out a gun out of nowhere and shot him in the leg.
-And that's what happens when you mess with the world's biggest champion.-Mr Satan said with a smirk.
In the end, the police arrived at the scene, and the two bandits were arrested. The reporters have arrived too, and Mr. Satan has become a hero once again. Boo and the others finally woke up, and Mr. Satan took the chameleon and went to see Boo:
-What happened?-Boo asked.
-Well, to be honest, this little guy saved our lives. This is one heck of a chameleon. So, are we going to keep him?
-Sure. Boo name him Bee Two (2).
-Wow, how original.-Mr Satan said sarcastically.
So, a new hero has been born. Meet Bee 2. See you on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball F!
Edited by Megasaiyan, May 10 2012, 01:42 PM.
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Episode 10: An Evil Plan


Gohan was a great teacher in one of the finest universities in Satan City. He taught literature, and all of his students liked him. In fact, everyone knew that Gohan was also the Great Saiyaman and many times during class, he helped the cops to fight crime, catch bad guys and save the day. One day, however, the principal called Gohan into his office:
-Good day, Mr. Tagimuro!-Gohan said politely.
-Good day to you too, Mr. Gohan. Please have a sit!
-Thank you.
-Mr. Gohan, I’m a man who prizes time very much so I will cut to the chase. I know that you have two jobs, one being a fine, educated teacher whom students like extremely much, which is quite rare these days and two, being a super hero with capabilities which everyone dreams of having. I know that saving people’s life and those in need is a very good thing, and it takes a lot of courage and responsibility. Even I would like to do such things, but I’m just a principal and my duty is to maintain this university and make the best decisions for its students. I understand that people need men like you whenever they're in danger, but that’s the job of the police. Your main job is to teach, and unfortunately that’s not what you’ve been doing lately. I tested your students one day when you were away catching bad guys and found out that they didn’t have any clue solving the questions, and they will have a big exam ahead of them soon, and they’re not prepared as they should be. In conclusion, I’m sorry, but I’ll have to ask you to choose between being a hero and continue teaching.-Gohan looked at the principal amazed, but he knew that he was right.
-I understand, Mr. Tagimuro. I know that I’ve been reckless with my students lately, and I would like to make it up for them. I promise I’ll never again leave during class when there’s an emergency.
-Good. I hope you made the right choice. Now if you'll excuse me, I have some work to do.
-Of course. Thank you, Mr. Tagimuro! Good day to you, sir!
-Good day, Mr. Gohan!
Gohan shut the door behind him, took out his cell phone and called his wife, Videl, to tell her the bad news. Elsewhere, in Satan City at the Orange Star High School, Pan was sitting in the canteen all alone while having lunch. Suddenly, she realised Xevo sit down next to her table:
-Are you alright, Pan?
-Sure. Why do you ask?
-Well, you haven’t said a word since we’ve been at the Brief's family. Plus, I kind of noticed you’ve acted kind of weird there too. Is everything ok?
-Why wouldn’t it be?
-It seems you’ve been avoiding me since then as if you’re hiding something from me.
-Well, you’re wrong! We’ve only known each other for a few weeks. How could you even know how do I usually act or how do I feel?!-then she took her lunch and sit elsewhere.
Meanwhile, in Hell, everyone was training really hard, for some reason.
-What a bunch of idiots!-Babidi said-Their training so hard and for what? We’re never going to get out of here so what’s the point?
-From what I heard...-King Kold started-My son has a plan to get us out of here.
-Really? And how will he do that? Unless those so-called Dragon Balls make their way here so we could gather them and whish us out of here, I don’t really see any other way out of this place.
-Foolish wizard!-Frieza yelled out of nowhere and suddenly appeared near Babidi-For your information, I DO have a plan for getting us out of here and should you know it does involve the Dragon Balls. In fact, you should be begging me to resurrect you as well.
-Nonsense!-Babidi yelled back-What’s the point being resurrected if we can’t defeat those Saiyans and their friends who protect Earth even with their lives? By now, they're a lot stronger even with our combined powers.
-Not that you have much power. And you’re right. We will combine our powers, we shall use the Fusion Tehnique like some of they do. They will be very surprised, I assure you. We all saw them doing it without those earrings so it shouldn’t be hard. So brace yourself Babidi, cause soon Hell will break, literally. Those foolish Saiyans and those weakling Earthlings won’t even know what hit them. Soon, everyone in the Universe will know the wrath of Lord Frieza. HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!
Does Frieza really have a plan to resurrect him and the others who have been defeated by Goku and his friends? Will it actually work? Find out on the next exciting episodes of Dragon Ball F!
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Episode 11: Secrets Revealed


Minutes became hours, hours became weeks, weeks became months. Time flew away quickly, and it seemed high school started years ago. Pan was at Xevo's home working together on a project, but they were both quiet. After a long while, Xevo broke the silence:
-Pan, I know that something's bothering you. I've seen you trying to avoid me these last months, I'm not blind. Why don't you tell me what exactly is bothering you? Is it me? Is it my presence? Am I annoying you? Did I do something wrong? Please, tell me?-but Pan didn't respond; she just continued working until Xevo grabbed her arms, when she finally looked into his eyes and started crying-What is it?
-I'm...I'm not like you...
-What do you mean not like me?
-I...I have some capabilities that you...might not understand.
-How come? What capabilities?-Pan didn't respond; instead, she started lifting up in the air, while Xevo looked amazed-Oh, my gosh! Are you wearing Trunks's shoes? Do they actually work?
-No, Xevo. There's no such thing as flying shoes. That was a lie. Everything I told you about me was mostly a lie...
-How come?
-I'm not really a human. Well, I am, but a little part of me is...alien. There, I said it. Happy?!
-More like fascinated.
-What? Aren't you freaked out of my capabilities?
-You mean you have more?
-Well...yea
-What? Please tell me!
-Well...I can shoot powerful energy balls called ki blasts that can do real damage or hurt people or even...kill them.
-Wow!
-And I'm quite strong too...very strong. I studied the martial arts, once I even won The World Martial Arts Tournament when I was only four years old.
-So it was you?
-What?
-I saw you fighting back when I was a kid too. I love the WMAT, my dad once took me there, and I saw a little girl winning it. She beat the crap out of the adults. It was you, wasn't it?
-Yea...
-So, you're Mr. Satan's actual granddaughter. Wow, this is so amazing! How come you never told anyone?
-Well I don't like the publicity and being so famous. I wanted to have my private life, so when I turned eight, I told my grandfather to stop telling the world about my life. Since then I avoided this city until now. That's why no one recognizes me. For everyone else I'm just another girl named Pan, just like Mr. Satan's granddaughter. I hope you won't tell anyone who I truly am!
-Don't worry. I can keep a secret. More like secrets.-they both laughed-So, you said you're part alien? How come?
-Well, my other grandfather is not really from this planet. He's from a planet called Vegeta.
-Really? Wow. It has the same name like Trunks's dad.
-That's because he was the planet's prince.
-Trunks's dad is an alien too?
-Yes, he and my grandpa are so-called Saiyans.
-What are these Saiyans?
-They are powerful warriors, they're only desire is to fight. They train every day just to become the strongest of the Universe.
-Are your grandpa and Vegeta stronger than Mr. Satan?
-Well, to tell you the truth, my grandpa Satan isn't that strong as everyone thinks he is. He didn't defeat Cell back in the old days; it was my grandpa Goku and the others who did. More exactly, my father was the one who killed him.
-You're dad is that strong too? How many Saiyans are on this planet?
-Well my grandpa Goku and Vegeta are the only Saiyans left. My father is only a Half-Saiyan.
-That means that Trunks is a Half-Saiyan too, right?
-Yea...
-So, Mrs. Bulma was telling the truth all along about that outfit for her husband. That explains a lot. She's really not crazy.-they laughed again-Imagine what would the people from the entire world would do if they found out that Mr. Satan is a fraud?
-That's why it's crucial for you not to tell anyone anything. Please, Xevo! Don't destroy my grandfather's carrier. He is a good man, you know...
-Slow down, Pan, I made a promise, and I won't break it. I'm glad you revealed all this to me. That means a lot to me, and at least you won't have to avoid me anymore.-Pan blushed-So...Tell me everything! How strong is your family? What about Goten? What's he then? What happened to the other Saiyans? Please show me your other capabilities!
So, Pan told everything to Xevo and this time, she was telling the truth. She was so happy and relieved that she revealed herself to Xevo, and that he accepted her. They became best friends again and spent more time together. But one day, someone very familiar ruined her happiness. She was watching TV when suddenly someone rang the doorbell. She was the only one home, so she ran to the door to open it. She was so happy that she was whistling all the way to the door, but when she opened it and saw who it was, all her excitement went away, and angry thoughts started invading her mind.
-Hey, Pan! It's me, grandpa Goku! Missed me?



TO BE CONTINUED>>>
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