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Operation Buu
Topic Started: Feb 19 2012, 10:00 AM (1,089 Views)
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Chapter 1: Seven Years Later...
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Chapter 2: Gohan's first day...
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Edited by GrooseStrikesBack, Feb 23 2012, 10:30 AM.
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Get rid of the kids.
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ObsessiveFanGuy
Feb 21 2012, 10:54 AM
Get rid of the kids.
I thought about cutting them off, I wanna end it with...
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As the strongest character.
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Vegeta_Rules
Feb 21 2012, 12:25 PM
ObsessiveFanGuy
Feb 21 2012, 10:54 AM
Get rid of the kids.
I thought about cutting them off, I wanna end it with...
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As the strongest character.
Go for it. I suppose I'd be interested to see if you leave it a cliffhanger as to whether or not he's permanently there or if he splits somehow.
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Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
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Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
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ObsessiveFanGuy
Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:30 PM
ObsessiveFanGuy
Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn!
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Feb 21 2012, 01:35 PM
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Feb 21 2012, 01:30 PM
ObsessiveFanGuy
Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn!
If he thinks he can do better than Toriyama I'd like to see him try :p

I'm not usually the kind of person to say something like that but if you're gonna say the Buu saga sucked and plan to re-write it you better have skill to back yourself up.
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Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:38 PM
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Feb 21 2012, 01:35 PM
Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:30 PM
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Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn!
If he thinks he can do better than Toriyama I'd like to see him try :p

I'm not usually the kind of person to say something like that but if you're gonna say the Buu saga sucked and plan to re-write it you better have skill to back yourself up.
I agree, but I also think it's kind of subjective. Who knows if his version of the Boo Arc would be just as good as Toriyama's in the eyes of the world.
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Good luck with it, I'm going to watch this space, I am in anticipation, it should be good.
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I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed.
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Vegeta_Rules
Feb 21 2012, 08:46 PM
I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed.
See bro, he didn't even hate it. I think you owe me an apology.
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Teen GohanZ
Feb 21 2012, 08:53 PM
Vegeta_Rules
Feb 21 2012, 08:46 PM
I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed.
See bro, he didn't even hate it. I think you owe me an apology.
He logged off :D

I don't want you guys calling eachother Dukes and debating if I like the Buu saga or not :D
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Vegeta_Rules
Feb 19 2012, 10:00 AM
The title might leave you asking questions, well, it's simple, I am going to re-write the Buu saga!
I wrote my own saga before so this should be a piece of cake! I am working by myself unless anyone wants to help. I will get started right away.
When is chapter 1 or part 1 coming out?
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