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31, The Ultimate Android
Topic Started: Dec 18 2011, 03:03 PM (643 Views)
brolyeuphyfusion
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The Legendary Nightmare

Chapter 1: The Beginning of a Nightmare

Chapter 2: The Calm before the Storm

Chapter 3: The Nightmare Begins!

Chapter 4: The Storm Intensifies!

Chapter 5: Super Android 31!

Chapter 6: Beyond Super Saiyan 2!

Edited by brolyeuphyfusion, Feb 22 2012, 04:15 PM.
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GrooseStrikesBack
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Good fanfic, but it was a little fast paced.

BTW: What made you think of this villian?
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Illustrious
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For starters, you're supposed to use quotation marks when people are speaking. Also, those don't seem like chapters, more like prologues or something.
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Copy_Ninja
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Novacane for the pain

Is this just like your ideas for a fanfic? If you expand everything, add some detail etc it could be pretty good.
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brolyeuphyfusion
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The Legendary Nightmare

The fanfic is complete! It's short, but I'm not that good at fanfiction
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My Set of SSJ Multipliers My Power Levels List Planets, Stars, and Power Levels

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Megasaiyan
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Osz Karoly Szilard

Yeah well where was Piccolo anyway? We see him only at the end... Nevertheless, nice try!
Edited by Megasaiyan, Mar 1 2012, 07:49 PM.
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Optimus Banana
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The first 3 chapters seemed good and original. But to me, it seems like ch4 on you just mixed the plot and fight sequence between super 13 and Bojack.
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