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Unreleased Dragon Ball Manga Chapter Transcript (by Akira Toriyama); (Really by me though)
Topic Started: Nov 20 2011, 08:58 PM (1,308 Views)
ChodeMaster
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Disclaimer: This is not ACTUALLY a unreleased chapter. I created the details of the chapter from a running series I had made in my head some time ago. Imagine the following transcript as manga or anime, whatever you are more comfortable with.

Updates and changes from the actual DBZ series:

1. This chapter from series takes place around the time of the Majin Buu saga.

2. The characters powers have altered somewhat and they're have been addition to the original cast of Dragon Ball

One: Timotei; a genetic Saiyan experiment with the odd ability that his power in any state is virtually doubled. (ie When he is a Super Saiyan it is basically the power equivocation to Super Saiyan 2 for him.)

Two: Goku, by this time has only achieved Super Saiyan 2, but has not been revealed.

Three: Gohan and Krillin have been killed by Trunks (accidently)

Four: An odd act of time-and-space bull is happening, because, recently, Vegeta was killed and this compromised the Future Trunks' existence in it's entirety. However, being physically attached to the past, he maintained the choice to remain visible to his peers but however, indestructible, almost making him a ghost. Before the start of this episode, because he had killed Goku's best friend and son, he told Future Trunks that he was coming to be more harm then good and if he did not cease to exist Goku would cause that to happen to him anyway, threatening to blow him with a chi blast... Trunks agreed and vanished into nothingness. So, in conclusion, for those who are confused, Future Trunks decided to stay in the past up until Buu's release and then was forced to "destroy" himself under the threats of Goku.

Four: That Timotei character mentioned earlier only has the ability to become a Super Saiyan.

Five: The main antagonist at the moment is Majin Buu with no current absorbtions. Because or pure laziness, the Buu that spawned from his sealed egg was already skinny (But not in Kid form) but not intelligent.

Alright let's get this "show" on the road.

First here a current update of what happened (but was not written or recorded in anyway) so far...

Essentially Vegeta had been killed and Goku and Piccolo the only two survivors of the battle between Buu in Babidi's Spaceship (dead already) wherein Trunks stayed behind to obliterate Buu who unknowingly caught Krillin and Gohan in his explosively powerful chi blast, killing them as well (but not before throwing both PIccolo and Supreme Kai to safety, retreated to Kami's tower. However, Supreme Kai vanished after the explosion. On the tower Trunks followed suit shortly after he assumed he had killed Buu. Much to his dismay Goku was less then happy to see his best friend and son's unintentional murderer. Goku, holding Trunks at hand-point, threatened to destroy Trunks completely if he didn't assume his "non-existent" status (On a sub-story plot it breaks down like this. Because Vegeta was killed in the Cell Saga, I'll expand on that later if you would like, Trunks saw this death and transformed into Super Saiyan 2 at that moment, solidifying his being the strongest warrior on the planet (because on a further sub story plot, Goku and his son had only achieved Super Saiyan ranks by that time and killed Cell luckily by Goku briefly transforming into Super Saiyan 2 and then after killing Cell with his power and then dividing his mighty power to souls located at their death area, recreated all of his fallen friends (Piccolo, Krillin, Tien, Yamcha, Trunks, Gohan (i think), he couldn't bring back Vegeta though because he died shortly after Goku "exploded" so he had to be left dead, at that point though, there was hope, when Goku DID break-up he brought Piccolo back which in turn brought the Dragon Balls back which gave the oppertunity to bring Vegeta back... Which they do at the beginning of my Majin Saga. Sadly he isn't brought back in time as, upon Trunks' rivival he sees his father dies and explodes and turns himself into a Super Saiyan 2 changing the "strongest warrior" title from Goku to Trunks, which is the reason by the end of my Cell Saga he doesn't bother returning to his time and stays until the beginning of my Buu Saga (irony) Anyway with all that aside... Goku traded the revival of all his friends for his own life... So!) Because Vegeta is dead, he never successfully concieved with Bulma, resulting in Trunks never being physically born... But since Trunks was in the past before Vegeta died, by the strength of his own will he decided not become "nothing" and trained in hard in honor of his father to maintain the strongest warrior on the planet.). Trunks reluctantly agrees to disperse and when he does, the massive amount of energy he culminated while existing and sort-of not... The energy launches airborne and then curves back to earth? Returning to supply the earths fading health, because of Buu, *shrugs sarcastically" I don't know? After Trunks vanishes, Goku painfully sense Buu chi and returns to the battlefield to confront him, however not alone... Timotei, the genetic Saiyan joins him. During the battle, Timotei and Goku have the upper-hand until Buu absorbs Goku causing Goku's knowledge, power and motor-skills to be inherited to Buu. Now Super Powered, Buu begins to slowly over-come Timotei who, before finished off, is interrupted by... VEGETA! (Hold up, your probably thinking "wasn'tt Vegeta dead in your series, ChodeMaster?"The answer to that question is an emphatic "yes". But looky-you, you answered your own question prematurely the key word in your question was "wasn't" is way of asking while sort of implying through a sub-cauntious level that you kind-of-knew of something specific, he WAS dead. But if you read back a bit, I wrote that, after Trunks decided to become nothing his energy went into the sky and then landed in the "earth?" I was misleading you, on a probably (if visually stimulated) less obvious note, the energy was transferred to Vegeta's grave where the power reanimated Vegeta and almost immedietly knowing the dangers the world was facing now, hopped into action, there explanation finished, MOVING ON!!) Anyway, Vegeta jumps into he battle and is sadly overcome by Buu wild Goku fueled power. And again is almost killed, this time Timotei helps Vegeta by attempting to release all his power. (Through the many but short seen appearances of my original DBZ character his origins are not explicitly explained, it can be kind-of summed up through the next would-be sequence) at this point he finally unleashes all his power and reveals much to Piccolo and Kami's (who I forgot to mention, Piccolo never bothered to fuse with Kami during the events in Android saga or rather was not able to because he was killed during my Namek Saga) that he is a Super Saiyan... With his power he was able effectively tickle Buu combat fancy but was ultimate defeated. Before the final blast, that would have killed Vegeta and Timotei at the same time... a mysterious wind carried them both to Kami's tower...

Anyway, PRE-POST-PUBLISH-EDIT My transcipt got erased after a series of system resets on my compute so I'll give you a brief summer of the episode.... If anyone on this forum has any questions pertaining to anything that had happened before these events in my custom DBZ series, go ahead and ask I would be happy to explain the creative contents of my mind. :)

Here we go.

So as it turns out the "wind" was actually the recently MIA Supreme Kai, he quickly picked both Timotei and Vegeta and teleported them to the tower. He removes his Potora and asks Kami to retreat to the towers confines and heal them both to their fullest, then when they come too place one of these earrings on Vegeta's ear and the other on the polar opposite ear on Timotei. Kami agrees and heads to a small room within the tower. Supreme Kai briefs Piccolo that he will have to face Buu to give Timotei and Vegeta time to recuperate, Piccolo initially declines saying that he wouldn't stand a chance against the new Buu to which Kai agrees but says "...you won't be alone...". Without any prior consent, Kai places his hand on Piccolo chest and infuses his power with him. Piccolo much stronger than before awaits Buu arrival, who back on earth briefly questions the whereabouts of his targets and then using the knowledge of Goku quickly finds out where they are hiding. He speed-flies to the tower and meets Piccolo who feeling confident in his new-found abilities, ultimately too confident, challenges Buu who snaps his neck with one kick, before Kami could finish the healing he vanishes... Buu, now the single strongest man on the planet rejoices cheerfully at his victory he celebrates by expanding energy into the towers structure he stands on causing it to spark violently, but when the chi suddenly retreats and strikes Buu negativly, it is revealed within the room both Vegeta and Timotei woke simultaneously and unbeknownst to them have little time to recoginize the situation or the fact that Kami prematurely placed the earrings on the apropriate ears of both fights and when they woke and their powers with it, triggered the Potaras effect... Intrigued Buu approaches the reason his chi was pressed back only to have the door, ironically, open in his face, reeling back enter: Vegetotei, Buu questions who he is and he responds by asking him not "waste his time" and reveal Goku's true powr. Buu not fully understanding Goku maximum strength only unlocks a portion of the strength which results in Vegetotei to ditestfully power up to his max (Super Saiyan) and literally reach into Buu and rip from him Goku, he then obliterates Buu completely with a gesture. Goku come too and still upset at the loss of all his friends and family (Chi-Chi was killed by 17 and 18 while in search for him) The new fusion warrior asks if it would be possible if he could enact the same thing Goku did to bring back everyone like he did (and I explained) in my Cell Saga. Goku says yes and so Vegtotei with slight tutoring essentially kiling himself, transfers his energy to Krillin, Gohan, Piccolo/Kami, Chi-Chi and many others... When Vegetotei's power is fully expended his individual life source ends which seperates Timotei and Vegeta back into seperate indenties...

The epilogues concludes with Vegeta finally (while not showing all the nitty-gritty-details) concieving with Bulma. Krillin training Yamcha, Tien and Chiotzu the Kaio-Ken (which through the course of my series, Krillin mastered) Goku happily reuiniting with Chi-Chi.

The final scene of my seris in it's completeness, shows Goku at night standing alone in the Cell Games arena... When fammilar shoes touch down behind him, with his back to whoever appeared it is revealed to be Future Trunks who is allowed to return due to techniqualities. Trunks apologizes for killing Krillin and his son to which Goku forgives him and ultimately asks to fight Trunks at his full power.

The ending scene details both Goku and Trunks at my series power-bar (Super Saiyan 2) about to begin the battle... Thus the battle between the strongest fighting thus far will begin...

Alright, that's it, again if you have any questions about events prior to my series finally (this FF) I will be happy to detail it to you

Thanks for reading, reply and lemme know what you think...

ANOTHER PRE-PUBLISH-POST EDIT: I'm to lazy to spell check so I enjoy and I hope you grasp everything even with my terrible spelling/grammar.
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