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More of my drawings
Topic Started: Nov 15 2011, 04:39 PM (1,134 Views)
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Here are some more of my DBZ drawings!
Again I welcome any criticism.

Here are a couple FSSJ Goku's.
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Future Trunks
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SSJ3 Vegeta charging the Final Flash (Probably my favorite drawing)
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Majin Tien (This one was fun :) )
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I've still got tons more, and I'll post some more later!
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Sparking!

These are pretty good, I have some targeted criticisms for each:

First Goku
- The eye on the right is too small
- His legs could be spread out a bit more for a more dynamic pose.

Second Goku
- The arm on the right is too big
- The right chest muscle looks more relaxed than the other
- His hair should be pointing backwards more if his head is tilted up

Trunks
- The way he is gripping the sword looks like he is crushing it
- The legs could be longer
- The direction of the foot on the left should be pointing toward the left side of the page if he's standing.

Vegeta
- He's leaning forward, so the upper part of his torso should look wider.
- The armour should be snapping more tightly around his waist, it looks a bit loose and bulky.

Tien
- His legs look too short, that's all.

Like I said, these are pretty good, it would not take much touching up for them to look perfect.



Edited by SirParagon, Nov 15 2011, 10:41 PM.
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poopy those are some good drawings i really wish i could draw half as good as you
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Those look good bro. My only suggestion is to make them a bit darker. Other then that, great work!
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SirParagon
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These are pretty good, I have some targeted criticisms for each:

First Goku
- The eye on the right is too small
- His legs could be spread out a bit more for a more dynamic pose.

Second Goku
- The arm on the right is too big
- The right chest muscle looks more relaxed than the other
- His hair should be pointing backwards more if his head is tilted up

Trunks
- The way he is gripping the sword looks like he is crushing it
- The legs could be longer
- The direction of the foot on the left should be pointing toward the left side of the page if he's standing.

Vegeta
- He's leaning forward, so the upper part of his torso should look wider.
- The armour should be snapping more tightly around his waist, it looks a bit loose and bulky.

Tien
- His legs look too short, that's all.

Like I said, these are pretty good, it would not take much touching up for them to look perfect.


Thanks, and I noticed that I do sometimes make their legs a little too short. I'll have to start fixing that.

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poopy those are some good drawings i really wish i could draw half as good as you
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Thanks. All you need to do is just practice!

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Those look good bro. My only suggestion is to make them a bit darker. Other then that, great work!


Thanks! Yeah I know I sketch a little too lightly lol.
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they are really nice hope to see some more from u
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Here's a couple more:

Salza (First attempt)
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Zarbon
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Gohan
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They're all fantastic to a casual drawer point of view (that's me, I suck at it) so I'm sorry but I have nothing to add in terms of suggestion.

Only that I'll be visiting your drawing posts often. :rofl:
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They're all fantastic to a casual drawer point of view (that's me, I suck at it) so I'm sorry but I have nothing to add in terms of suggestion.

Only that I'll be visiting your drawing posts often. :rofl:
Thanks!!
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These are all incredible man. My favorite is definitly the FSSJ Goku. You without a doubt captured everyone of his features. Geez he almost looks like he's ready to jump out of the paper and attack me. There's no reasoning with Goku when he's a FSSJ.

Furure Trunks: Love the sword in his hand, you really captured the detail in his hair and boots too.

SSJ3 Vegeta Charging Final Flash: WOW! I can see why this one's your favorite. You did a great job drawing this one. I can feel the energy raidiating from this pic. "YOU'RE GOING TO DESTROY THE WHOLE PLANET, FATHER, YOU'VE GOT TO STOP IT!"

Majin Tien: I always thought Tien would've been to pure to of been taken over by Babidi's magic. I guess not when KOAS has a pencil in his hand. This one's awesome! I've always wondered what Tien would've looked like if he had of been taken over by Babidi's magic...now I know, thanks to you buddy.

Salza: YEAH, another arm crossing pic. Nice one bro. For a first atempt at drawing salza...you couldn't of done better my friend. I love the way you have him looking down at someone like he's saying "yeah, that's right, I know I'm good looking, but I'd watch out if I were you because I'm about to blast you into nothingness."

Zarbon: I'm in heaven, another arm cossing pic, sweet dude. This Zarbon one is cool bro...have you ever considered drawing Zarbon's monster form? That way you would have a drawing of each of his forms. If you ever do please let me know. I LOVE THIS ONE THOUGH!!!

Gohan: I reconize this Gohan pic. This is SS2 Gohan when he was battling Kabito at the World Martial Arts Tournament right? It's so cool the way you have him in his Great Saiyanman outfit...this one rules!

All of these are amazing KOAS. A big 100% across the board again. Have you ever considered putting backgrounds on any of these?

By the way, you're smart to sketch these light...that's the way to do it. That way if you make a mistake you can go back and correct it easy instead of having two live with a mistake because you sketched to hard. You're a smart artist bro

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Haha thanks, you really are the nicest person I've ever (virtually) met lol.
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